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I really don't like how you've hitsounded this difficulty. Why have the first part of the song use whistles and the second part use claps? Both parts are very similar to each other and you shouldn't segregate the hitsounds like this, use them together. Otherwise it will startle and confuse players. (two claps in a short succession also sound bad when used consecutively in a short period of time.)
00:00:159 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this whole area have no hitsounds? I would add some, because without hitsounds the patterns would sound bland and monotonous. monotonous? no. This part isn't energetic.
00:04:895 (5,1) - Despite them being in different combos, I still think these sliders should be symmetrical; it would look a lot nicer that way. Ok :3
01:15:158 (1) - Unrankable, Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. Why is the hitsound here so quiet? I know you want to reflect on how most of the instruments stop here, but it's ineffective and it would be better just to get rid of the note. So either make the hitsound here normal volume, or just get rid of the slider. I add Finish sound and I change the volume on 40%
And what's with the lack of hitsounds at all towards the end of the diff? Please, this is a solid difficulty in all aspects except for hitsounds, which I personally think needs a redo. Look at the other difficulties in this mapset for an example of good hitsounding.
00:00:159 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this whole area have no hitsounds? I would add some, because without hitsounds the patterns would sound bland and monotonous. monotonous? no. This part isn't energetic.
00:04:895 (5,1) - Despite them being in different combos, I still think these sliders should be symmetrical; it would look a lot nicer that way. Ok :3
01:15:158 (1) - Unrankable, Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. Why is the hitsound here so quiet? I know you want to reflect on how most of the instruments stop here, but it's ineffective and it would be better just to get rid of the note. So either make the hitsound here normal volume, or just get rid of the slider. I add Finish sound and I change the volume on 40%
And what's with the lack of hitsounds at all towards the end of the diff? Please, this is a solid difficulty in all aspects except for hitsounds, which I personally think needs a redo. Look at the other difficulties in this mapset for an example of good hitsounding.
byfar
00:02:527 (3) - do not use a slider tail for emphasizing downbeat. make this part a slider 00:03:316 - Ok
00:04:895 (5) - move this to 00:04:501 - Is okay
00:08:843 (3) - similar Ok
00:11:211 (5) - similar Is okay
im not going to go through all of the parts you did this, but please change it so that the downbeat is clickable.
00:04:895 (5) - move this to 00:04:501 - Is okay
00:08:843 (3) - similar Ok
00:11:211 (5) - similar Is okay
im not going to go through all of the parts you did this, but please change it so that the downbeat is clickable.
bryjow123
00:48:711 (4) - make this a two-beat slider? This brief break match this moment the song
- Castaway -
00:21:080 (3) - turn so it leads on to (4) ok
00:33:711 (2) - less curve on this please why not
00:40:422 (3,4) - fix blanket (slightly) I don't see
Snap Preview Point as well ok
00:49:895 (5,1,2,3) - this rhythm should be the same as this 00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) -. Your a beat ahead but because the sliders are the same shape its confusing D: Nooo, is good
00:57:790 (5,1) - fix the flow from (5) to (1) please ok
01:00:948 (3,1) - same shape better ok
01:06:869 (5) - Make horizontal. Like this: http://puu.sh/mfccb/335b7af349.JPG ok
01:09:632 (1,5) - same shape as well please No
01:12:790 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/mfch1/17a6f7d68d.JPG http://puu.sh/mfcj6/58b9947873.JPG. (5) will blanket (1) Good idea
00:33:711 (2) - less curve on this please why not
00:40:422 (3,4) - fix blanket (slightly) I don't see
Snap Preview Point as well ok
00:49:895 (5,1,2,3) - this rhythm should be the same as this 00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) -. Your a beat ahead but because the sliders are the same shape its confusing D: Nooo, is good
00:57:790 (5,1) - fix the flow from (5) to (1) please ok
01:00:948 (3,1) - same shape better ok
01:06:869 (5) - Make horizontal. Like this: http://puu.sh/mfccb/335b7af349.JPG ok
01:09:632 (1,5) - same shape as well please No
01:12:790 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/mfch1/17a6f7d68d.JPG http://puu.sh/mfcj6/58b9947873.JPG. (5) will blanket (1) Good idea
geodoomcraft
00:03:711 - I feel like u should remove (4) at 00:04:106 (4) - and make a slider from 00:03:711 - to 00:04:106 - and add one circle to 00:04:501 -. That way it sounds a bit more in flow with the rhythm. Nope
00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 - Nope
00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here. This brief break match this moment the song
00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is easy diff. There must be a break between objects
01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal. Why not
01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song. I changed earlier c:
00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 - Nope
00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here. This brief break match this moment the song
00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is easy diff. There must be a break between objects
01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal. Why not
01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song. I changed earlier c:
Aihuro
00:07:658 (2) - Mm. . I think something like this will improve the flow and it also plays nicely: http://puu.sh/mkBNL/91a296bb0a.jpg Just keep turning the slider clockwise until it looks like the picture above. I changed but otherwise
00:21:080 (3,4) - I suggest you switch these two notes maybe? Is okay
00:50:685 (1,2,3) - Why don't you add some hitsounds here? It feels pretty incomplete imo. ok Here: 00:51:474 (2) - you can put a clap. No
00:54:632 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, please add some hitsounds, feels kinda empty. Is okay
Okay, this diff looks also pretty good, you just have to complete the hitsounds, lol. I hate set hitsounds XD
00:21:080 (3,4) - I suggest you switch these two notes maybe? Is okay
00:50:685 (1,2,3) - Why don't you add some hitsounds here? It feels pretty incomplete imo. ok Here: 00:51:474 (2) - you can put a clap. No
00:54:632 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, please add some hitsounds, feels kinda empty. Is okay
Okay, this diff looks also pretty good, you just have to complete the hitsounds, lol. I hate set hitsounds XD
Thanks all!!!
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