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Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-07-19T17:11:20+00:00

[Easy]:

slider tick rate = 0.5
01:12:550 之后所有的clap都下在了重音的间隔上...个人认为还是要在重音上比较好

[Normal]:

00:52:085 (3) - 这个在之前的红线会好点吧...就是00:51:903
00:53:497 (7) - ^
00:54:908 (3) - ^
00:57:731 (3) - ^
00:59:139 (7) - ^
01:11:143 (5) - new combo
01:22:256 (9) - ^
01:24:025 (1) - 至少延长到01:29:492 静音末尾或者移除这个spinner

[Hard]:

00:02:668 (3) - 加一个back
00:09:021 (1,2,3,4) - 起始的whistle换finish
00:28:433 (8) - 加一个back
01:22:432 (8) - new combo 而且最好移开点

[Insane]:

最后spinner的问题其他诸如clap很违和的问题我也不知如何解决...

star

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2010-07-20T04:49:52+00:00

问下
guest dif如果要调整的话，是让guest调整还是creator
要是让我调整的话我会毁了那个难度的
~~太耀眼了令我无法直视~~

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2010-07-20T05:40:18+00:00

[Easy]

00:09:021(5):New combo
00:14:668(3):^
00:20:315(3):^
00:23:139:加一个Circle
00:31:609(3):New combo
00:37:256(4):^
00:42:374(4):一拍半就好了
00:44:315(5):New combo
00:45:727:加一个Circle
00:54:727(6):New combo
00:59:845(6):^
01:08:315(7):^
01:12:550(1):离转盘太近了
01:13:962(5):New combo
01:19:609(5):^
01:19:962(1):去掉New combo
01:23:139(7):New combo

[Normal]

00:31:614(5):New combo
01:23:143(10):^
01:24:021(1):转盘末尾静音

[yangzdnoob's Hard]

00:58:433(1,2,3,4,5):换成一个Slider
01:21:903(7,8):距离再远点

[Insane]

01:23:933(1):转盘末尾静音

Good map!!

#STAR#

KanbeKotori

315 posts

Joined May 2009

KanbeKotori 2010-07-21T05:49:26+00:00

abcde1234qaz

120 posts

Joined September 2009

abcde1234qaz 2010-07-22T08:50:16+00:00

猩猩._.

K-ON_Ui_Hirasawa

K-ON_Ui_Hirasawa 2010-07-22T11:06:31+00:00

shenpei310

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Joined January 2010

shenpei310 2010-07-23T05:43:29+00:00

好听~

Neethime

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Neethime 2010-07-23T05:45:05+00:00

JauiPlaY

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Joined April 2010

JauiPlaY 2010-07-23T14:00:06+00:00

...不过其实老实说这首歌本身我不是很受得了...

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-07-24T05:01:20+00:00

[staress]

jameskong1

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jameskong1 2010-07-25T20:37:22+00:00

love this song~

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-07-26T08:50:49+00:00

Sorry I'm too late……Hate the fucking summer camp

UpdateDownload: ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu

Selee

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Joined February 2010

Selee 2010-07-26T14:47:18+00:00

等等...怎么文件名不同？

[General]
yangzdnoob's Hard的Source和Tag统一喔还有Lead-in 也统一下
osb删除
或许从00:38:936的后段转成Normal音效比较好?
所有难度的Preview Point...你们都划水了(笑

[Easy]
00:17:492 (1,2,1,2) - 这种跳跃太难了吧..其实是看不到啊喂...至少00:18:903 (2) - 要挪个位置吧...
00:21:727 (2) - New Combo?
00:23:139 (6) - 不建议叠上换个位置？五边形?
01:10:962 (1) - 从01:11:139开始?
....?Spinner哪里去了...

[Normal]
好高OA的NM难度..会死人的喂...
00:17:497 (1) - 缩短1/2?
00:18:908 (3) - ^
00:20:315 (5) - ^
00:40:084 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 发现这些用Normal音效会好一些 00:40:084 (1,1,1,1,1) - 加上Finish 自己听听看
01:04:084 (1,2,3,4) - 01:06:907 (1,2,3,4) - 这两组不一样？后面那组没对称啊
01:12:554 (1) - 改Finish?
01:23:672 (2,3,4) - 改成Slider如何...感觉NM难度出现3连太鬼畜了
01:24:025 (1) - 加多点Timing Section, 淡出效果吧

[yangzdnoob's Hard]
00:28:080 (7,8) - 音效有点违和...干脆2个全加clap?
01:13:962 (2) - New Combo?
01:24:021 (1) - 加多点Timing Section, 淡出效果吧

[Insane]
Clap打这首拍子有点违和..感觉也有点单调
找找Custom音效?
另外HP掉率减一点? 我这种沙包10秒死 = =...
00:52:433 (7) - clap改Finish?
00:53:844 (2) - ^
00:55:256 (1) - ^
00:58:080 (7) - ^
00:59:491 (2) - ^
01:00:903 (1) - ^
01:22:433 (8) - Finish?
01:23:139 (3) - ^
01:23:845 (6) - ^
01:23:933 (1) - 加多点Timing Section, 淡出效果吧

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-07-26T15:10:13+00:00

Preview point!我竟然忘了……
好吧把preview point设成00:51:374

恩……都改了
Download: ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu

Wait~ LZ改完offset之后好像忘记resnap了!

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2010-07-27T02:08:13+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
Preview point!我竟然忘了……
好吧把preview point设成00:51:374

恩……都改了
[attachment=0:2928e]ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu[/attachment:2928e]

Wait~ LZ改完offset之后好像忘记resnap了!

re...resnap是什么...

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-07-27T02:26:34+00:00

改了offset之后要让所有note对齐新的线
所以~
打开Edit界面上方的菜单栏Timing--resnap all notes

(PS:已经22SP了……差不多可以去找BAT了)

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-07-27T13:43:43+00:00

PREVIEW POINTS

Hard;

00:03:374 (4) - New combo.
00:14:668 (2) - ^
00:20:315 (3) - ^

Insane;

This is stupid.

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-07-27T14:09:28+00:00

Fixed!
Download: ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu

@wcx19911123:Look like you should remap the insane……

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2010-07-27T14:11:02+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
改了offset之后要让所有note对齐新的线
所以~
打开Edit界面上方的菜单栏Timing--resnap all notes

(PS:已经22SP了……差不多可以去找BAT了)

Find a BAT is too hard for me lol

DiamondCrash wrote:
PREVIEW POINTS

Hard;

00:03:374 (4) - New combo.
00:14:668 (2) - ^
00:20:315 (3) - ^

Insane;

This is stupid.

Could you tell me why my insane is stupid?I will try my best to modify it,thanks

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-07-28T03:53:10+00:00

DC可能觉得有些地方的节奏下的不好吧……insane可能要remap

preview point 我们两个都忘记设了……要不设在00.51.374……

昨天测试了一下Hard……发现有些地方有一点小问题……
Download: ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu

顺便给颗粉星

~~要不我也来做insane……~~ 这样岂不是变成了collab

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2010-07-28T12:59:06+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
DC可能觉得有些地方的节奏下的不好吧……insane可能要remap
preview point 我们两个都忘记设了……要不设在00.51.374……

昨天测试了一下Hard……发现有些地方有一点小问题……
[attachment=0:305fa]ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu[/attachment:305fa]

顺便给颗粉星

~~要不我也来做insane……~~ 这样岂不是变成了collab

其实我一直不知道collab是啥
insane你可以多多帮我MOD

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-07-28T14:03:21+00:00

这张帖子就不用给kd了……

(免得被人说分散起来mod来赚kd)

collab=合作地图几个人一起作一首歌各负责不同的难度

Normal发现一个小问题
00:56:315 (6) - 挡住了00:57:021 (1,2,3) ,unrank要素

至于Insane……
现在EZ和NM除了有一点音效问题以外已经很好了
重要的是IS
(说实话这IS真的很难做……今天花费了1个小时人参做了半张无聊IS)
有几个问题需要解决

1.slider velocity只有1.0(比Hard还低)可是DS却达到了1.6x 这样打起来有一点蛋疼

2.节奏
①.00:23:139 - 00:34:433
节奏稍微有一点单一……

②.00:51:374 - 00:54:727 -这一段……
00:57:021 - 01:00:903 - ^

③.00:55:609 (2,3,4,5) - 把每一个slider缩短1/4会好听很多
01:01:256 (2,3,4,5) - ^

3.spacing
01:19:962 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段太卧槽了……

可以参考一下鬼畜小司中间的排法

PS:今天去搜beatmap时发现了……OMG

SPOILER

MS只有我们这一个Pending……

wcx19911123

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Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2010-07-29T02:03:57+00:00

yangzd88 wrote:
PS:今天去搜beatmap时发现了……OMG
SPOILER
[attachment=0:b5736]2.png[/attachment:b5736]
MS只有我们这一个Pending……

真相是一个ranked,一个我们的pending,4个坟= =
所以我不会放弃的

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2010-07-30T17:44:32+00:00

路过

最高难度

绿线那个部分完全可以用soft-hitclap来做既简单又解决了延迟导致音效出现不正常的现象

最后的那个圆圈JUMP你能连过去么?缩小点吧

P.S kudosu对我没用无视吧

star给孜孜不倦奋斗在map界的yangzd88

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-07-31T04:11:50+00:00

Thanks LKs……(感动中

)

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-08-02T03:03:35+00:00

[insane] I don't know...maybe spinner-notes too hard ~"~
0:24:903 (6) left 2 grid
0:28:280 (11,12) ^

[hard] nice

star~

OSU_Niceboat_CN

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OSU_Niceboat_CN 2010-08-02T04:39:29+00:00

star

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-08-02T09:27:21+00:00

star first

Kotone

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Joined August 2008

Kotone 2010-08-02T10:29:59+00:00

General
每次upload時記得delete osb O_Q
以下都只是建議

Easy
難了点！？

yangzdnoob's Hard
01:00:727-add a circle?

Insane
00:21:727-為什么要Break time？QAQ
00:23:139-可以試着加finish
00:52:256-add a circle?
00:53:668-^
00:55:080-^
00:57:903-^
00:59:315-^
01:00:727

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-08-02T11:44:27+00:00

Download: ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu

fixed!

vivicat

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vivicat 2010-08-03T12:06:49+00:00

=w= gj~

alvisto

881 posts

Joined April 2009

alvisto 2010-08-06T19:10:07+00:00

不好意思，我个人觉得你的insane75%会给人讨厌，straight stream is very hard to play and people will complain.

Example : 经典失败的straight stream图 viewtopic.php?t=19297
你的比这个mapper好很多，别担心

你是新mapper,也不能怪你，毕竟经验不够，所以我的个人意见是，我不大喜欢你map的排发和hitsound，请不要介意。。。 (我以前的新图其实还烂过你的。。。)

这张图可以找BAT了（虽然我没有什么仔细mod),加油吧！下一张图做的好一点。 xD

P.S. : 别kudosu我，我在这边post是因为我也是参与过heart of witch这个map的guest difficulty, crazyjay 的。他们做的collab不错，有空可以看看。

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2010-08-07T02:17:39+00:00

alvisto wrote:
不好意思，我个人觉得你的insane75%会给人讨厌，straight stream is very hard to play and people will complain.

Example : 经典失败的straight stream图 viewtopic.php?t=19297
你的比这个mapper好很多，别担心

你是新mapper,也不能怪你，毕竟经验不够，所以我的个人意见是，我不大喜欢你map的排发和hitsound，请不要介意。。。 (我以前的新图其实还烂过你的。。。)

这张图可以找BAT了（虽然我没有什么仔细mod),加油吧！下一张图做的好一点。 xD

P.S. : 别kudosu我，我在这边post是因为我也是参与过heart of witch这个map的guest difficulty, crazyjay 的。他们做的collab不错，有空可以看看。

十分感谢您的建议和鼓励，本人对您发自内心地表示崇高的敬意(炸

事实上我个人觉得作图和写文有异曲同工之处，你读的好书非常多，那么写的文章必然不会差到哪里去。因此，我会尽我最大努力多多接触一些经典的好图，然后多多学习其中的排列和音效，给大家带来不至于有负osu圣名的map来(炸

所以还请大家多多指教(炸

另，感谢crazy jay(没改名吧)，他其实帮了我挺多 > <

alvisto

881 posts

Joined April 2009

alvisto 2010-08-07T10:34:59+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
alvisto wrote:
不好意思，我个人觉得你的insane75%会给人讨厌，straight stream is very hard to play and people will complain.

Example : 经典失败的straight stream图 viewtopic.php?t=19297
你的比这个mapper好很多，别担心

你是新mapper,也不能怪你，毕竟经验不够，所以我的个人意见是，我不大喜欢你map的排发和hitsound，请不要介意。。。 (我以前的新图其实还烂过你的。。。)

这张图可以找BAT了（虽然我没有什么仔细mod),加油吧！下一张图做的好一点。 xD

P.S. : 别kudosu我，我在这边post是因为我也是参与过heart of witch这个map的guest difficulty, crazyjay 的。他们做的collab不错，有空可以看看。
十分感谢您的建议和鼓励，本人对您发自内心地表示崇高的敬意(炸

事实上我个人觉得作图和写文有异曲同工之处，你读的好书非常多，那么写的文章必然不会差到哪里去。因此，我会尽我最大努力多多接触一些经典的好图，然后多多学习其中的排列和音效，给大家带来不至于有负osu圣名的map来(炸

所以还请大家多多指教(炸

另，感谢crazy jay(没改名吧)，他其实帮了我挺多 > <

加油哦!! ^.^

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2010-08-07T11:39:28+00:00

alvisto wrote:
加油哦!! ^.^

恩，我会努力的 > <

Furudo_Erika_old

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Joined September 2009

Furudo_Erika_old 2010-08-11T08:37:27+00:00

STAR~

Beuchi

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Joined February 2009

Beuchi 2010-08-11T17:44:21+00:00

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore

~All Diffs~
- Delete the .osb file and make a Full Submit next time you update.

~Easy~
01:11:139 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy.

~Normal~
- No problems here, but there are too many spinners imo x_x

~yangzdnoob's Hard~
- Increase Overall Difficulty by 1 tick? Some overlaps are really hard to read :/

01:06:903 (6) - New Combo. Mantain the same spacing in the same combo (or at least something intuitive enough).
01:21:550 (6) - ^

~Insane~
00:21:727 (x) - Add a break here, the drain is too high and it goes almost to the middle of the bar :/
00:35:492 (8,10,12) - New Combo.
00:36:462 (1,1,1,1,1) - Whyyyyyy... Too many spinners x.x
00:41:845 (12) - New Combo.
01:12:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This is totally unreadable and ugly x_x

Hmmm... Not bad, but it still needs some mods imo. You seem to use so many spinners, try to use them less. About yangzd's diff, those spacing changes at the end are pretty sudden imo o.O

Anyways, good luck!!

ryanenter2

46 posts

Joined January 2010

ryanenter2 2010-08-11T18:19:59+00:00

star~

Curisu

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Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-08-12T04:25:49+00:00

Download: ReX - Heart of Witch (wcx19911123) [yangzdnoob's Hard].osu
Thanks everyone~

Firo Prochainezo

2,140 posts