alvisto wrote:

不好意思，我个人觉得你的insane75%会给人讨厌，straight stream is very hard to play and people will complain.

Example : 经典失败的straight stream图 viewtopic.php?t=19297
你的比这个mapper好很多，别担心

你是新mapper,也不能怪你，毕竟经验不够，所以我的个人意见是，我不大喜欢你map的排发和hitsound，请不要介意。。。 (我以前的新图其实还烂过你的。。。)

这张图可以找BAT了（虽然我没有什么仔细mod),加油吧 ！ 下一张图做的好一点。 xD

P.S. : 别kudosu我，我在这边post是因为我也是参与过heart of witch这个map的guest difficulty, crazyjay 的。他们做的collab不错，有空可以看看。

wcx19911123 wrote:

alvisto wrote:

不好意思，我个人觉得你的insane75%会给人讨厌，straight stream is very hard to play and people will complain.

Example : 经典失败的straight stream图 viewtopic.php?t=19297
你的比这个mapper好很多，别担心

你是新mapper,也不能怪你，毕竟经验不够，所以我的个人意见是，我不大喜欢你map的排发和hitsound，请不要介意。。。 (我以前的新图其实还烂过你的。。。)

这张图可以找BAT了（虽然我没有什么仔细mod),加油吧 ！ 下一张图做的好一点。 xD

P.S. : 别kudosu我，我在这边post是因为我也是参与过heart of witch这个map的guest difficulty, crazyjay 的。他们做的collab不错，有空可以看看。

十分感谢您的建议和鼓励，本人对您发自内心地表示崇高的敬意(炸

事实上我个人觉得作图和写文有异曲同工之处，你读的好书非常多，那么写的文章必然不会差到哪里去。因此，我会尽我最大努力多多接触一些经典的好图，然后多多学习其中的排列和音效，给大家带来不至于有负osu圣名的map来(炸

所以还请大家多多指教(炸

另，感谢crazy jay(没改名吧)，他其实帮了我挺多 > <

alvisto wrote:

加油哦!! ^.^

mrtn wrote:

video offset in [normal] is different from the rest.

[normal]
this isn't a normal. this is a hard.

[yanzdnoob's hard]
why are there multiple sections here? The section at 01:22:08 should be inherited with 0,5x bpm
00:26:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this spacing is too confusing after the previous combo.
00:35:492 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - unintuitive spacing
00:41:139 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
00:44:668 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:19:609 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

James wrote:

map is OK.. just want to point out something at hardest diff..

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21958

this sucks

Alace wrote:

Damn you lol
that is my SS XD

Alace wrote:

Damn you lol
that is my SS XD

James wrote:

edit:

insane:
00:31:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about this one? I think they have no problem
00:43:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this one? Eh...It's really too hard...But it's Insane
01:11:139 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 sliders are better i think. Fixed
01:15:021 (1) - change combo color Fixed
01:15:727 (1) - change combo color Fixed
01:17:139 (1,2,3) - what about pattern like this? Fixed

hard:
01:22:432 (1) - i dont see the point on this slider.. haha. Waiting for yangzd88

normal:
i think normal is harder than normal.. OK.I'd change the diff name to Normal+

easy is fine Thx

karenying wrote:

Insane
00:15:815(1)-Shorten to 00:16:433 If do this,the Mr.AUTO can only get 1000 scores...
no kd
哎 沒什么KD了 射一顆 Thaaaaanks for your pink star

wcx19911123 wrote:

karenying wrote:

Insane
00:15:815(1)-Shorten to 00:16:433 If do this,the Mr.AUTO can only get 1000 scores...
no kd
哎 沒什么KD了 射一顆 Thaaaaanks for your pink star

Thx

karenying wrote:

可是節奏不对了._. 改用circle？

00:31:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about this one? I think they have no problem
00:43:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this one? Eh...It's really too hard...But it's Insane

James wrote:

00:31:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about this one? I think they have no problem
00:43:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - and this one? Eh...It's really too hard...But it's Insane

well why did you changed the other things i told you then? all of them are related you know.. you silly you~

1. This needs lead-in badly. Well, at least in Insane it does. Why not make it the same on all difficulties while you're at it? =P
2. Is classic supposed to be misspelled in tags?
3. Offset needs to be around 560. The current one is a bit early to me, not to mention that it's not in the first beat.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. This needs lead-in badly. Well, at least in Insane it does. Why not make it the same on all difficulties while you're at it? =P
2. Is classic supposed to be misspelled in tags?
3. Offset needs to be around 560. The current one is a bit early to me, not to mention that it's not in the first beat.

lol@VEDIO

[Easy]

01:11:139 (1) - This spinner is a bit too fast for my liking.

Yeah. Not very different as a beatmap, though Insane is well done.
Fix that.

yaya wrote:

轻点跳。别闪了腰。

James wrote:

add 2-3 second audio lead-in to all diffs

you can also edit the tags and source to something like this

insane:
0.5 tick to completely remove the slider tick at the long sliders

hard:
00:21:374 (5) - 1 grid to the left lololololol
01:06:903 (1,2) - remove slider whistle?


almost there~

swish wrote:

good

Shinxyn wrote:

Hm~
I don't think every diff needs lead-in if the map doesn't start right at the beginner, oh well, thats what the skip button is for

Easy-
01:02:677 (1) to spinner- could use some hitsounds, change to soft whistle if you think clap doesn't fit here? Sry,but I can't understand your meaning
01:11:148 (1) - ... and... I think you should just remove/replace this spinner, its kinda short for an easy, and... there are notes right after it Fixed

Normal+-
The end was quite... spammy... The end is the "+" on Normal 0.0
Aside from that, good~ Thx~

Insane-
00:05:148 (5,6) - imo, new combo this, I didn't expect an incombo jump here Fixed
00:12:912 (7) - does this reallly have to end on a 1/4? Fixed
00:28:001 - why not just add a note here? or you wanted this to be a 3 stack after those 5 stacks? Fixed
01:10:795 (7) - ...decreased spacing in the combo followed up by a 2x slider, ow
ending was kinda confusing xD Uh...What's it meaning?
the custom whistle doesn't stand out a lot, so it was kinda hard to hear if there were hitsounds while playing... in other words, the hitsounds on those parts could stand out better >_<; Oh,I couldn't find better hitsound...

@_@~