[General]
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- tags : Machigatteiru -> Machigatteiru.
- also add oregairu to tags? preference though~
- 01:02:973 (59,60) - yes i get the idea youre following the vocal, but finding a pair of 1/1 standing here is weird. idk but something like http://puu.sh/kd1d3.jpg can work also for following the vocal on the next part, or you can also move 01:02:973 (59) - to 01:02:628, so breaks can be longer there
- 01:26:852 (17,18) - i also understand the idea here, but why dont change it them to a same color, like dd or kk so people wont be confused with things, because the timing also changes which may cause confusion. but it's up to you though
- im just hoping that the 1/2 isnt too hard and can be accepted .w.
- 00:55:215 (105,109) - why not remove them to give the player a break? and also i think the first one doesnt follow a clear sound .w.
- 01:10:904 (140) - finish here?
- 01:11:939 (143) - remove for the breaks, and balancing with kantan's spread ;v;
- 01:15:042 (150,151) - feels weird since you're following the vocal at first then youre following the instrument that continues until 01:16:077 but you stop it at 01:15:560. my suggestion is to make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3683538 i changed it in some way, so it suits the music too now
- 01:18:663 (159,160) - remove? following the vocal, these are unnecessary
- 01:26:852 add d so it will be same with kantan? preference owo
- 00:08:318 (13,18) - 00:14:870 (42) - etc remove, for break purposes and balancing with futsuu with not following the minor / a really low music. remove some others too which is in a different section but has the same melody
- 00:47:456 (155,156) - swap them? idk but i prefer following the drum here since it's more dominant than the vocal
- 00:51:249 (172) - what is this emphasizing? the strong music occurs at 00:51:594 (173) -
- 00:57:628 (204) - remove this for breaks @_@ this 1/2 + 1/4 stream is too long imo
- 01:10:904 (257) - finish? owo
- 01:12:887 (267) - remove? i mean the balance of the part before and here is diffenrent. the first part is full with 1/2, yet there's a 1/4 here? idk. and it leaves the impression 'hanging' for the map. vocal is 1/2, so why not owo
- 00:11:766 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - try kdk d k d k K for following the music :3
- 00:14:180 (54) - can be removed for break
- 00:20:560 (83,84,85) - not adding finish too? i mean you added them on muzukashii owo if so, apply to the rest?
- 00:39:697 (166) - uh try removing this? the player will need time to prepare themselves.. and remove the finish here 00:40:560 (172) - idk, i think it will be hard to catch it owo
- 00:53:060 (230) - change to d, then move to 00:52:887. i think it flows better like this
- 00:53:663 ~ 00:58:318 too long haha, considering there are some breaks on muzukashii.. try keeping stream simple, and add breaks, example : something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3683598 lol x') this is just a suggestion~
- 01:02:025 (281) - move this to 01:01:853? also i suggest to remove 01:01:077 (274,275) - too for the break, but the second one is up to you
- 01:17:456 (378) - why the finish? eue
- tbh i think it needs more breaks, especially on streams 1/4. like i pointed some above :3
- Shouldnt it be 'Lundle's Inner Oni' lol
- 00:12:284 (48,49) - swap them? i think it can emphasize 00:12:801 (51) -
- 00:19:956 (92) - this is weird i think, since the drum and vocal both sounds loud on 00:20:042 (93) - , i dont think 92 is needed since it wont emphasize 93, and the note will be unclear. same goes for this 00:19:266 (88) -
- 00:40:100 (185) - k? follows the music better owo
- 00:40:560 (189) - same as Oni, i think it will be hard to hit >w>?
- 00:44:697 (203) - d here? for better flow~
- 00:59:008 00:58:491 add a new green line here, so the music wont be 'hidden' by the map, and the map wont 'dominate' the song. like 50% on 00:58:491 and 40% on 00:59:008?
- 01:17:197 (414) - shouldnt the triplet placed here 01:17:370? for the flow? idk. for variation heuheu
- 01:25:560 (479,480,481) - try changing them to k? XD
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