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Lundlerol

ManP wrote:

こんにちは :3

[Lundle's Oni]
  1. 00:19:870 - add d? 個人的にここの空白が気になりました ドラムの地帯なのでボーカルもドラムの音も聞こえない部分に置くというのはちょっと・・・no changeで
  2. 00:25:387 - ^ same as above
  3. preview pointからなんですが、こういうのは如何でしょう? こっちの方が引き締まるかなと。非常にいい提案ですがボーカルでわかりやすく区切り、なおかつ個人的にも叩きやすい配置になってると思うんで偶数で構成するのもイマイチと感じました。 no changeで。
あんまり指摘できなくてすいません;; 全体的に良いマップです! Good Luck ;3
お時間ありがとうございます~/
Topic Starter
Labyr
Futsuu HP Drain Rate → 6

Updated.
Nwolf
TNA woof

[General]

Generally volume seems very low. Following suggestions:

00:07:284 - Add a green line here with 80% volume since this part is much louder than the part before spinner
00:18:491 - move this bar to 00:17:801 - this spot because the strophe begins here. Increase to 70%
00:51:594 - Increase to 80%
00:59:870 - Increase to 90%, since 00:59:353 - is 90% as well 0.0
01:21:939 - Also increase to 90%, intensity stays consistent.

[Spread]

Not much to say here, this will be in the individual diffs. There's some spots where the gap from Futsuu to Muzukashii is a bit big, mostly because sometimes Muzukashii is too hard. Overall the Kantan is a bit too easy.

[chaica's Kantan]

As it stands right now the Kantan is a little bit too easy. It's based too much on off-beat notes and repetitive patterns (same rhythm everywhere) so it has a lack of "real" patterns and 1/1 which leads to a wide spread to Futsuu, which uses 1/2 doublets.

I'll suggest a lot of note additions and try to respect the way you mapped it.

(if needed maybe somebody can translate it into Japanese??)

00:07:801 - Add kat
00:10:560 - Add don
00:13:318 - Add kat
00:17:111 (11) - Delete! This note disturbs the map - especially 00:17:801 (12,13) - a lot. It will also get rid of the quite repetitive rhythm that's in the map and should help improve the quality.
00:19:180 (14,17,20) - Why are they not the same? Move 00:19:180 (14) - --> 00:19:697 - here.
00:30:904 - Add don
00:33:663 - Add note
00:36:422 - Add don
01:01:249 (58) - Change to kat and change 01:02:973 (60) - to don because
01:04:008 (62) - Move --> 01:03:663 - here to have a clearer rhythm
01:06:077 - Add don
01:07:456 - Add kat
01:10:042 (68) - This is a good spot for a break, so delete this. It will become less confusing to play due to less confusing rhythm
01:11:594 - Add don
01:12:973 - Add kat
01:13:663 (2) - Move --> 01:14:008 - here
01:15:042 (4) - Move --> 01:14:697 - here
01:13:663 (2,3) - Change to don
01:16:766 - Add don
01:25:387 - Add don

This should close the gap up a bit

[Futsuu]

00:04:008 (4,5) - I understand the purpose of this lonely guy. But I think you should remove it, since it's the only time you mapped vocals and it feels out of place. Adding more notes probably conflicts too much with Muzukashii.
00:08:491 - Together with Kantan, there needs to be more notes here to solve spread issues. Add a don.
00:11:249 - ^
00:14:008 - ^
00:16:077 (20,21,22) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Additionally, Futsuu needs more breaks and this spot would be optimal for having one.

00:17:801 (24,25) - You really should not use 1/2 big don doublets in a Futsuu. Especially later in the map it's just too many.
00:28:835 (48,49,50) - ^
00:31:594 (55,56,57) - ^
00:34:353 (62,63,64) - ^
00:37:111 (69,70,71) - ^

00:23:835 (40) - Hm this doesn't seem to be intentional, you did not do this in other diffs. Should be small kat
00:45:560 (90,91) - Remove so the gap to kantan is a bit smaller and Futsuu has more breaks
00:46:077 (92) - You can then turn this into a big don like higher diffs
00:51:939 - Add a kat for vocals to differ it a bit from Kantan

01:01:594 - Since you primarily follow the vocals it would be better if you had a note (kat) here and removed 01:02:628 (132) - this note.
01:08:491 - Same (remove 01:09:697 (151) - )
01:11:939 - Add note, same as above
01:03:318 (134) - Change to kat since pitch is even higher than 01:03:663 (135) -
01:14:353 (163,165) - Switch these two notes, again for pitch (vocals kat, strings don?). Clearer sound!
01:16:077 (167) - Remove, 01:16:594 - 01:17:628 - add kats? Helps spread a bit and again, vocals.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:904 (2,4) - Very close to Oni and very different from Futsuu and Lundle's Oni, I don't think it would be too bad if you remove these
00:16:077 (48,49,50,51,52) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Also is a good spot for another break which won't hurt at all
01:01:077 - Add a don

Overall: A little bit too close to Oni, difficulty-wise and pattern-wise. Look for spots in Muzukashii that are nearly identical in Oni and remove just a few more notes. Limit yourself a bit more on long 1/2 and 1/4. As said, I will check tomorrow so if you do apply this already, do minor changes only. To give you a more clear idea, this is the spot you should care about most:
00:41:249 - to 00:54:353 - is quite close to Oni and very far away from Futsuu. Additionally it's way more dense than the kiai.

[Oni]

00:08:749 (20,26,40,51) - What system are these 1/4 following? They seem rather random, which can lead to conflicts in spread.
00:15:904 (66,67,68,69,70,71) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Also is a good spot for another break which won't hurt at all, the map is very dense.
00:43:318 (186,187) - Maybe switch these notes to give vocals more emphasis?
00:47:111 (202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - This is too much, the song really hasn't gotten more intense yet and makes this feel out of place. It has too much pace compared to the song, especially the 1/4. 00:51:594 - This is the spot where the song really gets more pace again, before that it's a bit slow and except this part you mapped that well. I would really recommend to reconsider this.
00:48:835 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - Why are you mixing vocals and drums so much here? 00:49:180 (215,222,223,224) - These are vocal notes, while 00:49:353 (216,217,218,219) - these are drums. They cancel emphasis on both especially since don and kat are mixed as well. Mabe move 00:50:042 (219) - to 00:49:697 - here to fix that a little bit. Alternatively remove 00:49:180 (215) -
00:56:163 (253) - Think it sounds and plays nicer as don, gives 00:55:904 (251) - more importance.
00:57:370 (262) - Delete this note. It's the only long 1/4 in this map and hurts spread a huge bit.

00:59:870 - 01:16:422 - Work with Muzukashii here. Compare both diffs, maybe even Futsuu, and remove a bit of 1/4 in Oni to avoid having a too huge difference to Muzukashii. It's pretty fine already so you don't really have to do much, if anything at all. Maybe focus on patterns with two consecutive 1/4 triplets and 1/4 5-plets.

01:16:422 (384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - How come there's no 1/4 in these?
01:19:697 (401) - Big don cause 01:19:180 (399) - 01:20:387 (407) - ^
01:20:215 (406) - 407 would play nicer and have a bigger impact if this is a kat I think
01:24:697 (437) - Same sound as 01:19:180 (399) - so maybe big don as well if it doesn't play too awkward for you

[Lundle's Oni]

00:15:904 (71,72,73,74) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Also is a good spot for another break which won't hurt at all, the map is very dense.
00:19:180 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - 00:24:697 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - Why are these so different why the drums have a quad in BOTH parts while only mapped in the first one. Keep rhythm consistent, especially on unorthodox rhythm like this.
00:46:077 (212) - Change to big note, it's the same sound as 00:40:560 (191) -
00:47:111 (215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - A bit too much? Could be less 1/4 and 1/2 imo since the part isn't really intense yet and it feels just a bit random
00:54:784 - Could add a don here and 00:55:301 - here too, might be nice for the drum roll starting here
00:59:094 (292,293,294) - Remove as well? Gives the strings and the kiai more importance
01:16:422 (410) - Again, why isn't this a big note while 01:05:387 (336) - is?
01:19:180 (431,435,441) - ^ All three have the same sound, but only 441 is a big don. Because of the 1/4 in the middle?
01:25:904 (484) - ddddd D is so evil, I'd suggest big kat but I think I know why you won't change. Consider it anyway.

Good song
Topic Starter
Labyr
many suggestion. lol
Thank you for accept TNA. after suggestion was finished, check / reply and give kudosu.
Renka

Nwolf wrote:

TNA woof

[General]

Generally volume seems very low. Following suggestions:

00:07:284 - Add a green line here with 80% volume since this part is much louder than the part before spinner
00:18:491 - move this bar to 00:17:801 - this spot because the strophe begins here. Increase to 70%
00:51:594 - Increase to 80%
00:59:870 - Increase to 90%, since 00:59:353 - is 90% as well 0.0
01:21:939 - Also increase to 90%, intensity stays consistent.

[Spread]

Not much to say here, this will be in the individual diffs. There's some spots where the gap from Futsuu to Muzukashii is a bit big, mostly because sometimes Muzukashii is too hard. Overall the Kantan is a bit too easy.

[chaica's Kantan]

As it stands right now the Kantan is a little bit too easy. It's based too much on off-beat notes and repetitive patterns (same rhythm everywhere) so it has a lack of "real" patterns and 1/1 which leads to a wide spread to Futsuu, which uses 1/2 doublets.

I'll suggest a lot of note additions and try to respect the way you mapped it.

(if needed maybe somebody can translate it into Japanese??)

00:07:801 - Add kat - ok/
00:10:560 - Add don - ^
00:13:318 - Add kat - ^
00:17:111 (11) - Delete! This note disturbs the map - especially 00:17:801 (12,13) - a lot. It will also get rid of the quite repetitive rhythm that's in the map and should help improve the quality. - i see,ok
00:19:180 (14,17,20) - Why are they not the same? Move 00:19:180 (14) - --> 00:19:697 - here. - ok
00:30:904 - Add don - ^
00:33:663 - Add note - add d.
00:36:422 - Add don - ok
01:01:249 (58) - Change to kat and change 01:02:973 (60) - to don because - ok
01:04:008 (62) - Move --> 01:03:663 - here to have a clearer rhythm - i see,ok
01:06:077 - Add don - ok
01:07:456 - Add kat - ok
01:10:042 (68) - This is a good spot for a break, so delete this. It will become less confusing to play due to less confusing rhythm - okay
01:11:594 - Add don - ok
01:12:973 - Add kat - ^
01:13:663 (2) - Move --> 01:14:008 - here - ok
01:15:042 (4) - Move --> 01:14:697 - here - ^
01:13:663 (2,3) - Change to don - ok
01:16:766 - Add don - ^
01:25:387 - Add don - ^

This should close the gap up a bit

Good song
thanks for mod!

俺自身がレプリカ
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Title:Haru Modoki (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:春擬き (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Labyr
Version:chaica's Kantan
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru. Zoku My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU oregairu chaica Lundlerol
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Topic Starter
Labyr

Nwolf wrote:

TNA woof

[General]

Generally volume seems very low. Following suggestions:

00:07:284 - Add a green line here with 80% volume since this part is much louder than the part before spinner
00:18:491 - move this bar to 00:17:801 - this spot because the strophe begins here. Increase to 70%
00:51:594 - Increase to 80%
00:59:870 - Increase to 90%, since 00:59:353 - is 90% as well 0.0
01:21:939 - Also increase to 90%, intensity stays consistent.

all fixed.

[Spread]

Not much to say here, this will be in the individual diffs. There's some spots where the gap from Futsuu to Muzukashii is a bit big, mostly because sometimes Muzukashii is too hard. Overall the Kantan is a bit too easy.

[Futsuu]

00:04:008 (4,5) - I understand the purpose of this lonely guy. But I think you should remove it, since it's the only time you mapped vocals and it feels out of place. Adding more notes probably conflicts too much with Muzukashii.
okay, fixed.
00:08:491 - Together with Kantan, there needs to be more notes here to solve spread issues. Add a don.
00:11:249 - ^
00:14:008 - ^
fixed them.
00:16:077 (20,21,22) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Additionally, Futsuu needs more breaks and this spot would be optimal for having one.
I see, fixed

00:17:801 (24,25) - You really should not use 1/2 big don doublets in a Futsuu. Especially later in the map it's just too many.
00:28:835 (48,49,50) - ^
00:31:594 (55,56,57) - ^
00:34:353 (62,63,64) - ^
00:37:111 (69,70,71) - ^
so it was very helpful. fixed.

00:23:835 (40) - Hm this doesn't seem to be intentional, you did not do this in other diffs. Should be small kat
oh, thanks :3
00:45:560 (90,91) - Remove so the gap to kantan is a bit smaller and Futsuu has more breaks
fixed.
00:46:077 (92) - You can then turn this into a big don like higher diffs
I see :3
00:51:939 - Add a kat for vocals to differ it a bit from Kantan
add kat.

01:01:594 - Since you primarily follow the vocals it would be better if you had a note (kat) here and removed 01:02:628 (132) - this note.
01:08:491 - Same (remove 01:09:697 (151) - )
01:11:939 - Add note, same as above
add note them.
01:03:318 (134) - Change to kat since pitch is even higher than 01:03:663 (135) -
d k d changed
01:14:353 (163,165) - Switch these two notes, again for pitch (vocals kat, strings don?). Clearer sound!
01:14:008 - change d, and I think that this is the best.
01:16:077 (167) - Remove, 01:16:594 - 01:17:628 - add kats? Helps spread a bit and again, vocals.
01:16:077 - remove note, but no add kat. It thinks that it's difficult for a player.

[Muzukashii]

00:00:904 (2,4) - Very close to Oni and very different from Futsuu and Lundle's Oni, I don't think it would be too bad if you remove these
fixed.
00:16:077 (48,49,50,51,52) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Also is a good spot for another break which won't hurt at all
same as Oni
01:01:077 - Add a don
no add don.

Overall: A little bit too close to Oni, difficulty-wise and pattern-wise. Look for spots in Muzukashii that are nearly identical in Oni and remove just a few more notes. Limit yourself a bit more on long 1/2 and 1/4. As said, I will check tomorrow so if you do apply this already, do minor changes only. To give you a more clear idea, this is the spot you should care about most:
00:41:249 - to 00:54:353 - is quite close to Oni and very far away from Futsuu. Additionally it's way more dense than the kiai.
00:41:249 - to 00:54:353 - change note. I think that the others don't need to change it.

[Oni]

00:08:749 (20,26,40,51) - What system are these 1/4 following? They seem rather random, which can lead to conflicts in spread.
These aren't random. I match it with an pitch of the music.
00:15:904 (66,67,68,69,70,71) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Also is a good spot for another break which won't hurt at all, the map is very dense.
no change. I don't have many meanings generally even if I take a break here. If it's an overmap, I want to reduce 1/4 notes.
00:43:318 (186,187) - Maybe switch these notes to give vocals more emphasis?
I think it to be all right under the present conditions.
00:47:111 (202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214) - This is too much, the song really hasn't gotten more intense yet and makes this feel out of place. It has too much pace compared to the song, especially the 1/4. 00:51:594 - This is the spot where the song really gets more pace again, before that it's a bit slow and except this part you mapped that well. I would really recommend to reconsider this.
I removed 1/4 and made some modifications.
00:48:835 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - Why are you mixing vocals and drums so much here?
00:49:180 (215,222,223,224) - These are vocal notes, while 00:49:353 (216,217,218,219) - these are drums. They cancel emphasis on both especially since don and kat are mixed as well. Mabe move 00:50:042 (219) - to 00:49:697 - here to fix that a little bit. Alternatively remove 00:49:180 (215) -
No, it's drum follow 00:49:180 ~ 00:51:249.
00:56:163 (253) - Think it sounds and plays nicer as don, gives 00:55:904 (251) - more importance.
that's right.
00:57:370 (262) - Delete this note. It's the only long 1/4 in this map and hurts spread a huge bit.
00:57:542 - delete. because I dislike kdk ddk ddddk.

00:59:870 - 01:16:422 - Work with Muzukashii here. Compare both diffs, maybe even Futsuu, and remove a bit of 1/4 in Oni to avoid having a too huge difference to Muzukashii. It's pretty fine already so you don't really have to do much, if anything at all. Maybe focus on patterns with two consecutive 1/4 triplets and 1/4 5-plets.

01:16:422 (384,385,386,387,388,389,390,391,392,393) - How come there's no 1/4 in these?
vocal follow. 01:16:422 - and 01:17:456 - finisher remove. That is my mistake.
01:19:697 (401) - Big don cause 01:19:180 (399) - 01:20:387 (407) - ^
sure, but I don't want to put D here.
01:20:215 (406) - 407 would play nicer and have a bigger impact if this is a kat I think
okay, change is k. fixed.
01:24:697 (437) - Same sound as 01:19:180 (399) - so maybe big don as well if it doesn't play too awkward for you
it's different.

Good song
thanks for mod :3 good song.
Lundlerol

Nwolf wrote:

TNA woof pocchama :3

[Lundle's Oni]

00:15:904 (71,72,73,74) - I think it wouldn't be bad if you remove these notes, that way you give the drums a bigger impact. Also is a good spot for another break which won't hurt at all, the map is very dense. nope. It is early to take a break at this place.
It is possible for the break zone even from 00:18:318 -

00:19:180 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - 00:24:697 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - Why are these so different why the drums have a quad in BOTH parts while only mapped in the first one. Keep rhythm consistent, especially on unorthodox rhythm like this. nope. It is irregular, and I put a note in the same as a drum of the music even if rhythm is difficult.
00:46:077 (212) - Change to big note, it's the same sound as 00:40:560 (191) - why? I think that I should put K with both if 00:40:560 (191) - is the same as 00:46:077 -
00:47:111 (215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240) - A bit too much? Could be less 1/4 and 1/2 imo since the part isn't really intense yet and it feels just a bit random no. I think that it isnt superabundant because it is the style that gradually increase notes.
00:54:784 - Could add a don here and 00:55:301 - here too, might be nice for the drum roll starting here nope.
00:59:094 (292,293,294) - Remove as well? Gives the strings and the kiai more importance hmm? you said "drum roll". therefore i dont need to remove it.
01:16:422 (410) - Again, why isn't this a big note while 01:05:387 (336) - is? no.. so hard.
01:19:180 (431,435,441) - ^ All three have the same sound, but only 441 is a big don. Because of the 1/4 in the middle? no change.
01:25:904 (484) - ddddd D is so evil, I'd suggest big kat but I think I know why you won't change. Consider it anyway. idk. no change.

Good song
sry. no change.
thx mod
Topic Starter
Labyr
all update.
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

[General]


Title and Romanised Title: remove "(TV Size)" and add "TV Size" to tags unless you have relevant source supporting it.

  • [chaica's Kantan]

    You may use the same set of timing points as Labyr's diffs to unify the volume changes.
  1. 00:15:560 (13) - consider changing this note to K for the high-pitched music ?
  2. 00:41:939 (43,44,45,46) - maybe try k d k d ? This could fit both vocal and the snare at 00:44:008 - well.
  3. 00:46:077 (47) - you can add finish here as you did at 00:40:560 (42) -
  4. 00:47:456 (48,49) - similar to 00:41:939 (43,44,45,46) - , you may swap these notes to k d for coherence.
  5. 00:50:560 (50,51) - k k would be better as the vocal pitch is relatively high.
  6. 00:51:594 (52) - consider adding finish here for the stressed sound ?
  7. 01:03:318 (9) - similar to 00:50:560 (50,51) - , k would help reflect the increased pitch of the vocal there.
  8. 01:07:456 (15,16) - swapping these notes to d k would sound better since 01:06:594 (14,16) - has the same pitch.
  9. 01:14:697 (5) - same as 01:03:318 (9) -
  10. 01:25:904 (18) - ^
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:008 and 00:04:353 - try to add k for the sake of a better spread with Muzukashii. Then, you can change 00:03:318 (3) - to d for a better flow.
  2. 00:12:284 (13,14) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could fit the decreasing pitch there nicely.
  3. 00:26:594 (47) - you may add finish here for the stressed sound.
  4. 00:29:353 (50) - maybe K as you did at 00:18:318 (26) - ?
  5. 00:42:973 (85,86) - swapping these notes to d k would fit the pitch increase of the vocal there.
  6. 01:05:732 (139,140) - same as 00:12:284 (13,14) -
  7. 01:11:594 (156,157,158,159,160,161) - consider changing these notes to d k k d k k to follow the increasing vocal pitch ?
  8. 01:24:697 (189,190) - same as 00:12:284 (13,14) -
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:11:939 (30,32) - you may swap these notes to d k as 00:12:284 (32) - is really high-pitched.
  2. 00:26:594 (86) - same as Futsuu
  3. From 00:46:077 to 00:48:835 - consider reforming the pattern like this to make it coherent with the previous part ? (cursor at 00:47:456 - )
  4. 01:10:042 (252) - maybe add finish here for the stressed sound ?
  5. 01:10:904 (257) - D so that it would be consistent with 00:59:870 (210) -
  6. 01:19:697 (296) - same suggestion as 01:10:042 (252) -
  7. 01:20:387 (299) - ^
  8. 01:24:697 (318) - ^
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:09:353 (24) - d would be better as there is no high-pitched sound to map with.
  2. 00:17:456 (71) - maybe d as you did in Muzukashii ?
  3. 00:25:301 (107) - moving this note to 00:25:128 - and change to d would sound better imo. Then you may change 00:25:387 (108) - to k for a smoother flow.
  4. 00:26:594 (113) - same as Futsuu
  5. 00:56:335 (251) - consider moving this note to 00:55:991 - and changing it to k ? This would result in a better flow.
  6. 01:02:887 (289) - maybe delete this note ? It sounds a bit unnecessary imo.
  7. 01:09:697 (335) - d would help reflect the pitch decrease there.
  8. 01:19:697 (396) - same as Muzukashii
  9. 01:20:387 (402) - you may change this note to K as the vocal pitch is relatively high.
  • [Lundle's Oni]

    You may use the same set of timing points as Labyr's diffs to unify the volume changes.
  1. 00:12:284 (48,49) - consider swapping these notes to k d as pitch is decreasing across them ?
  2. 00:19:180 (87,88,89,90) - it would be better to use 1/2 d d rather than 1/4 ddkd because of the lack of instrumental support and the slow song pace.
  3. 00:26:594 (122) - you may add finish here for the stressed sound and representation of the sudden pause of music.
  4. 00:46:077 (212) - add finish so that it would be consistent with 00:40:560 (191) -
  5. 00:46:594 (213) - this note could be deleted to cohere with the break at 00:41:077 -
  6. 00:58:318 (285) - similar to 00:26:594 (122) - , you can add finish here as well.
  7. 00:59:611 (298,299,300) - maybe delete these notes ? There are no background sounds at these points.
  8. 00:59:870 (301) - it is possible to add finish here if you apply ^
You may call me back after that~ :D
Topic Starter
Labyr

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

[General]


Title and Romanised Title: remove "(TV Size)" and add "TV Size" to tags unless you have relevant source supporting it.
okay, remove title: (TV Size) and add TV Size to tags. done.

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:04:008 and 00:04:353 - try to add k for the sake of a better spread with Muzukashii. Then, you can change 00:03:318 (3) - to d for a better flow.
    this suggestion was helpful very much.
  2. 00:12:284 (13,14) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could fit the decreasing pitch there nicely.
    fixed.
  3. 00:26:594 (47) - you may add finish here for the stressed sound.
    fixed.
  4. 00:29:353 (50) - maybe K as you did at 00:18:318 (26) - ?
    okay, add finish.
  5. 00:42:973 (85,86) - swapping these notes to d k would fit the pitch increase of the vocal there.
    fixed.
  6. 01:05:732 (139,140) - same as 00:12:284 (13,14) -
    fixed.
  7. 01:11:594 (156,157,158,159,160,161) - consider changing these notes to d k k d k k to follow the increasing vocal pitch ?
    hmm... I reconsidered it, but think that d k d k k d match vocal pitch. I changed to them.
  8. 01:24:697 (189,190) - same as 00:12:284 (13,14) -
    fixed.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:11:939 (30,32) - you may swap these notes to d k as 00:12:284 (32) - is really high-pitched.
    okay, done.
  2. 00:26:594 (86) - same as Futsuu
    fixed.
  3. From 00:46:077 to 00:48:835 - consider reforming the pattern like this to make it coherent with the previous part ? (cursor at 00:47:456 - )
    nice suggestion ;3
  4. 01:10:042 (252) - maybe add finish here for the stressed sound ?
    fixed.
  5. 01:10:904 (257) - D so that it would be consistent with 00:59:870 (210) -
    done, Is it all right even if I use finish just after 1/4 notes?
  6. 01:19:697 (296) - same suggestion as 01:10:042 (252) -
    same as Oni diff.
  7. 01:20:387 (299) - ^
    fixed.
  8. 01:24:697 (318) - ^
    this notes don't use finish in all my diff.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:09:353 (24) - d would be better as there is no high-pitched sound to map with.
    fixed.
  2. 00:17:456 (71) - maybe d as you did in Muzukashii ?
    lol im baka... fixed.
  3. 00:25:301 (107) - moving this note to 00:25:128 - and change to d would sound better imo. Then you may change 00:25:387 (108) - to k for a smoother flow.
    keep suggestion, because I use ddk just before that, I want to use kkd.
  4. 00:26:594 (113) - same as Futsuu
    fixed.
  5. 00:56:335 (251) - consider moving this note to 00:55:991 - and changing it to k ? This would result in a better flow.
    fixed.
  6. 01:02:887 (289) - maybe delete this note ? It sounds a bit unnecessary imo.
    hmm... sure. however, I don't want to delete this notes imo.
  7. 01:09:697 (335) - d would help reflect the pitch decrease there.
    fixed.
  8. 01:19:697 (396) - same as Muzukashii
    Nwolf said too, but I don't want to add finish to this notes. because, I think that it's difficult.
  9. 01:20:387 (402) - you may change this note to K as the vocal pitch is relatively high.
    I follow it with a drum. no change.
You may call me back after that~ :D
thanks mod :) and Update.
I wait for an reply of Lundle and chaica.

I want to change BackGround... ;_;
Renka

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

[General]


Title and Romanised Title: remove "(TV Size)" and add "TV Size" to tags unless you have relevant source supporting it.

  • [chaica's Kantan]

    You may use the same set of timing points as Labyr's diffs to unify the volume changes. - fixed
  1. 00:15:560 (13) - consider changing this note to K for the high-pitched music ? - ok
  2. 00:41:939 (43,44,45,46) - maybe try k d k d ? This could fit both vocal and the snare at 00:44:008 - well. - ^
  3. 00:46:077 (47) - you can add finish here as you did at 00:40:560 (42) - ^
  4. 00:47:456 (48,49) - similar to 00:41:939 (43,44,45,46) - , you may swap these notes to k d for coherence. - ^
  5. 00:50:560 (50,51) - k k would be better as the vocal pitch is relatively high. - ^
  6. 00:51:594 (52) - consider adding finish here for the stressed sound ? - ^
  7. 01:03:318 (9) - similar to 00:50:560 (50,51) - , k would help reflect the increased pitch of the vocal there. - ^
  8. 01:07:456 (15,16) - swapping these notes to d k would sound better since 01:06:594 (14,16) - has the same pitch. - ^
  9. 01:25:904 (18) - ^ - ^
You may call me back after that~ :D
thank you for modding!

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Lundlerol

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

  • [Lundle's Oni]

    You may use the same set of timing points as Labyr's diffs to unify the volume changes. gimme reason
  1. 00:12:284 (48,49) - consider swapping these notes to k d as pitch is decreasing across them ? nm..nope.
  2. 00:19:180 (87,88,89,90) - it would be better to use 1/2 d d rather than 1/4 ddkd because of the lack of instrumental support and the slow song pace. hm.. It is consultation. How is this notes? 00:18:663 - ~ 00:19:697 - http://puu.sh/mfRiz/b2730b0748.jpg
  3. 00:26:594 (122) - you may add finish here for the stressed sound and representation of the sudden pause of music. nope. i think that i put here finish if the echo is long.
    but, some echo here.
  4. 00:46:077 (212) - add finish so that it would be consistent with 00:40:560 (191) - fixed
  5. 00:46:594 (213) - this note could be deleted to cohere with the break at 00:41:077 - ops.forgot;-; i add to note 00:41:077
  6. 00:58:318 (285) - similar to 00:26:594 (122) - , you can add finish here as well. ok. add Finisher
  7. 00:59:611 (298,299,300) - maybe delete these notes ? There are no background sounds at these points.
  8. 00:59:870 (301) - it is possible to add finish here if you apply ^ umm..nope. It is the same as 01:10:904 -
You may call me back after that~ :D
thx mod~

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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Labyr
Version:Lundle's Oni
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Yahari Ore no Seishun Love Comedy wa Machigatteiru. Zoku My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU TV Size oregairu chaica Lundlerol
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Topic Starter
Labyr
update.
Nardoxyribonucleic
A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [Lundle's Oni]

    The reason of using the same set of timing points as Labyr's diffs is that the current volume setting is relatively soft in some sessions like from 00:07:284 to 00:18:491 - and the kiai.
  1. 00:19:353 (89,90) - I would still recommend you to delete 00:19:439 (90) - and change 00:19:353 (89) - to d to cohere with 00:24:697 (112,113) - . The soft music here cannot support that 1/4 kd imo. In addition, you may also add k at 00:24:525 - for the high-pitched vocal.
  2. 00:26:594 (122) - Don't you think that the strong cymbal here is important enough for a big note ? I think it has the similar stress as 00:29:353 (127) - where you mapped as D.
  3. 00:58:318 (286) - I think you may have forgotten to add finish here ?
  4. I understand the mapping of 01:10:646 (369,370,371) - due to the background drums, but there is really no sound behind 00:59:611 (299,300,301) - to support their existence. Please reconsider deleting 00:59:611 (299,300,301) - and adding finish at 00:59:870 (302) -
Lundlerol

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [Lundle's Oni]

    The reason of using the same set of timing points as Labyr's diffs is that the current volume setting is relatively soft in some sessions like from 00:07:284 to 00:18:491 - and the kiai. fixed.
  1. 00:19:353 (89,90) - I would still recommend you to delete 00:19:439 (90) - and change 00:19:353 (89) - to d to cohere with 00:24:697 (112,113) - . The soft music here cannot support that 1/4 kd imo. In addition, you may also add k at 00:24:525 - for the high-pitched vocal. i fixed to the place that was based on a vocal.
  2. 00:26:594 (122) - Don't you think that the strong cymbal here is important enough for a big note ? I think it has the similar stress as 00:29:353 (127) - where you mapped as D. umm..i see.
  3. 00:58:318 (286) - I think you may have forgotten to add finish here ? done.
  4. I understand the mapping of 01:10:646 (369,370,371) - due to the background drums, but there is really no sound behind 00:59:611 (299,300,301) - to support their existence. Please reconsider deleting 00:59:611 (299,300,301) - and adding finish at 00:59:870 (302) - done~
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Title:Haru Modoki
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Topic Starter
Labyr
okay, update.
Nardoxyribonucleic
Although the spread from Kantan to Oni is slightly wider than typical sets, it is still acceptable as the gap between each difficulty is relatively constant. Patterns are fine in general and lower difficulties have sufficient rest moments.

Bubbled~

Ozzy will follow this up soon.
Topic Starter
Labyr
╭( ・ㅂ・)و
toara_fict
あくしろよ
Renka
イイゾ~これ
OzzyOzrock
[General]
  1. Offset +6 (566) (lolcubes suggestion)
  2. The last timing point is late. Try -32 (86,476) and put 'Omit first bar line' (Timing > Style) (lolcubes suggestion)
[Lundle's Oni]
  1. 00:56:422 (268,272) - change both to d, and 00:57:111 (273,274,275) - to kkk? The reason is because there's a lot of ddk in this section, so making the part with the violin more special fits the song nicely.
  2. 01:05:991 - add k? This is the only part in the kiai without 1/4, maybe it's better to add some.
[Oni]
  1. 00:25:991 - add k? The drums have it, and you have another double at 00:19:611 (81,82) -
  2. 01:09:008 (331,332,333) - Sounds more like ddd, and flows with K better, I think.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:180 (58) - k? Because the 'd d k' is better for parts like 00:17:801 (53,54,55) - , maybe you can use other patterns around it to make it more special.
    :arrow: 00:22:111 (69) - And then this could be k, so it's not repetitive.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:04:353 (135) - Maybe move to 01:04:008 so it fits nicer? And since the next part already has doubles.
[Chaica's Kantan]
  1. 00:21:939 - add a note? You don't need so many 4/1 breaks.
  2. 00:26:077 (23,24) - Maybe swap, like other diffs are?
  3. 00:47:456 (49,50) - k k d d? lol. Don't need such big breaks here. You already have many.
  4. 01:18:491 - You can even add a 1/1 d d d here. Having three notes alone is too much break lol.
Rest is fine. Call me back!
Topic Starter
Labyr

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset +6 (566) (lolcubes suggestion)
  2. The last timing point is late. Try -32 (86,476) and put 'Omit first bar line' (Timing > Style) (lolcubes suggestion)
    fixed them :3
[Oni]
  1. 00:25:991 - add k? The drums have it, and you have another double at 00:19:611 (81,82) -
    I want to let 00:20:560 (85,86,87) - and 00:28:835 (114,115,116) - unify patterns.
  2. 01:09:008 (331,332,333) - Sounds more like ddd, and flows with K better, I think.
    The pitch of the sound thinks that this is the most suitable.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:19:180 (58) - k? Because the 'd d k' is better for parts like 00:17:801 (53,54,55) - , maybe you can use other patterns around it to make it more special.
    :arrow: 00:22:111 (69) - And then this could be k, so it's not repetitive.
    all fixed. The sounds are different, but the opinion to use a different pattern is very good.
[Futsuu]
  1. 01:04:353 (135) - Maybe move to 01:04:008 so it fits nicer? And since the next part already has doubles.
    okay, fixed.
Rest is fine. Call me back!
thanks for mod ;3

update.
Renka

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset +6 (566) (lolcubes suggestion)
  2. The last timing point is late. Try -32 (86,476) and put 'Omit first bar line' (Timing > Style) (lolcubes suggestion)
[Chaica's Kantan]
  1. 00:21:939 - add a note? You don't need so many 4/1 breaks. - ok
  2. 00:26:077 (23,24) - Maybe swap, like other diffs are? - ^
  3. 00:47:456 (49,50) - k k d d? lol. Don't need such big breaks here. You already have many. - ok.
  4. 01:18:491 - You can even add a 1/1 d d d here. Having three notes alone is too much break lol. - okk
Rest is fine. Call me back!
thank you for modding!

本物あくしろ
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Lundlerol

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset +6 (566) (lolcubes suggestion)
  2. The last timing point is late. Try -32 (86,476) and put 'Omit first bar line' (Timing > Style) (lolcubes suggestion)
[Lundle's Oni]
  1. 00:56:422 (268,272) - change both to d, and 00:57:111 (273,274,275) - to kkk? The reason is because there's a lot of ddk in this section, so making the part with the violin more special fits the song nicely.
  2. 01:05:991 - add k? This is the only part in the kiai without 1/4, maybe it's better to add some.
Rest is fine. Call me back!
all change~
thx mod Ozzy^~

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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Labyr
Version:Lundle's Oni
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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OzzyOzrock
After re-snapping Kantan, and adding some touches to Muzukashii for spread, set looks good!

SPOILER
22:47 Labyr: hi, I completed notes snap of Haru Modoki. (Kantan) /
22:49 OzzyOzrock: wahoo!
22:49 Labyr: (¦3[___]
22:49 Labyr: and there's something that I want to ask you.
22:52 OzzyOzrock: ok!
22:54 Labyr: About my Oni diff
22:54 Labyr: oh
22:54 OzzyOzrock: spread? i think i was going to ask for maybe more 1/4 in kiai...
22:54 OzzyOzrock: oh
22:54 OzzyOzrock: fk
22:55 OzzyOzrock: i mean for muzu ^
22:55 Labyr: (:3[___]
22:56 Labyr: nope,
22:57 Labyr: original, here should have been notes 01:23:152 -
22:57 Labyr: www
22:57 Labyr: 01:23:324-
22:57 Labyr: 01:23:324 -
22:58 Labyr: I want to move it here. 01:23:152 -
23:00 OzzyOzrock: a, d d kdkkd d k?
23:01 Labyr: Placement original it
23:02 Labyr: I changed it without permission and just updated it lol
23:02 OzzyOzrock: ye you can do that haha
23:03 Labyr: ddkkd k d  d kdkkd k okay?
23:05 OzzyOzrock: yup!
23:05 Labyr: thx :3
23:09 OzzyOzrock: in muzu 01:08:152 (241,242,243,244) - can you maybe make k ddd d k?
23:09 OzzyOzrock: in Oni, since it is dense, it worries me...
23:09 OzzyOzrock: a liiiitle more 1/4
23:11 OzzyOzrock: maybe 01:21:600 (301,302) - ddd here too...
23:11 Labyr: well//
23:12 OzzyOzrock: oni has a lot of ooooo and 1/4, but muzu doesn't have many
23:12 OzzyOzrock: it's like a hard futsuu
23:12 OzzyOzrock: jk
23:12 OzzyOzrock: it's not hard futsuu
23:12 OzzyOzrock: but in those parts it would help ww
23:14 OzzyOzrock: i would even delete 01:16:600 (278,283) - since it's close to Oni
23:14 Labyr: humm
23:14 OzzyOzrock: all suggestions, if nardo was ok with it i guess QAT will be too lol
23:19 Labyr: okay, 01:16:600 (278,283) - note delete and 01:21:600 - add 1/4 ddd .∙‿∙.
23:19 Labyr: but here 01:08:152 - ._.
23:20 OzzyOzrock: maybe ddd k there works!
23:20 OzzyOzrock: ok maybe no,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
23:20 Labyr: hmm...
23:20 Labyr: I use a similar notes pattern just before that...
23:20 OzzyOzrock: yeah
23:20 OzzyOzrock: its ok
23:21 OzzyOzrock: i think the kkk will save you
23:22 Labyr: 01:08:152 - kkk d d k ?
23:22 OzzyOzrock: ok!
23:22 Labyr: fixed :3
23:23 OzzyOzrock: update and heart time :3__] <---- bad bed...
23:24 Labyr: update (;3[___]
23:26 OzzyOzrock: (¦3ꇤ[▓▓]

Qualified!
Topic Starter
Labyr
congratulations! me~~~~
Raiden
Congrats :33
Underforest
Congrats :)
Charlotte
First ranked おめでとうございます :)
crim
おめでとっ!!!
lolcubes
grats!
toara_fict
Volta
grats!
Renka


おめでとう~
Topic Starter
Labyr
thanks all :3
JUDYDANNY
おめでとうございますヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
Topic Starter
Labyr

JUDYDANNY wrote:

おめでとうございますヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
ありがとうございます(*>ω<*)
DakeDekaane
Hi.

I found a little issue with this mapset that must be fixed
  • :!: You forgot to check the "Omit first bar line" option for the timing point in 01:26:476 -.
[]
Additionally, I'll leave some suggestions for the mapset, it's greatly done, so they're only minor suggestions, unless I state the opposite.

[ Kantan]

  • :!: 00:55:048 (60) - The drumroll should start in 00:54:359 - , when the drums in the music begins too.
[ Futsuu]

  • 00:51:255 (102) - Try changing this note to a don? I think it would fit better the music and the next big don would feel better to play.
    :!: 01:18:669 (173,174) - These notes aren't following something in particular, you should delete them.
[ Oni (Labyr)]

  • 00:22:290 (94) - Remove this note, it doesn't follow anything and the pause is more fitting with the song.
[ Oni (Lundle)]

  • 00:06:514 (9) - Although the stream here is reasonable, I think it's a bit sudden and heavy given how subtle the song begins, try removing this note?
Topic Starter
Labyr

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi.

I found a little issue with this mapset that must be fixed
  • :!: You forgot to check the "Omit first bar line" option for the timing point in 01:26:476 -.
    I fixed this.
[]
Additionally, I'll leave some suggestions for the mapset, it's greatly done, so they're only minor suggestions, unless I state the opposite.

[ Futsuu]

  • 00:51:255 (102) - Try changing this note to a don? I think it would fit better the music and the next big don would feel better to play.
    00:51:255 (102) - It's d here from a beginning.
    :!: 01:18:669 (173,174) - These notes aren't following something in particular, you should delete them.
    remvoe notes.
[ Oni (Labyr)]

  • 00:22:290 (94) - Remove this note, it doesn't follow anything and the pause is more fitting with the song.
    ok, remove this note.
Update.
Renka

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi.

I found a little issue with this mapset that must be fixed
  • :!: You forgot to check the "Omit first bar line" option for the timing point in 01:26:476 -.
[]
Additionally, I'll leave some suggestions for the mapset, it's greatly done, so they're only minor suggestions, unless I state the opposite.

[ Kantan]

  • :!: 00:55:048 (60) - The drumroll should start in 00:54:359 - , when the drums in the music begins too. - okay
本物になる
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thank you for modding
Lundlerol

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi.

[ Oni (Lundle)]

  • 00:06:514 (9) - Although the stream here is reasonable, I think it's a bit sudden and heavy given how subtle the song begins, try removing this note?
    no.i don't think anything will change about that.
thx mod
toara_fict
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DakeDekaane
OzzyOzrock
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Labyr
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やったぜ。
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Yayy~~ Gratz >.</
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Labyr

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Yayy~~ Gratz >.</
Thanks!!
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Grats!!!
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