Hello, from PM. here's the mod as requested~
[General]
don't know it's big problem or not because it's just the last seconds, but it is a bit off, hear it at 01:26:422 until the end at 25%, the tick is a bit earlier than the vocal. that makes the notes sounds off. check with timing expert?
or if it's too much work, my suggestion is don't map the vocal voice (like lundle's oni) or just make the end a spinner :p
[Chaica's Kantan]
00:00:560 (1) - maybe change to d would be better for the start considering relatively low vocal pitch and prevent boredom of kat
00:08:835 (3) - change to k because same pitch with 00:08:146 (2) -
00:20:560 (15) - this can change to k so it's same like 00:26:077 (21) -
00:31:594 (26,27) - swap? the keyboard's pitch sounds going up
00:39:870 - add note here to fill the keyboard and drum sound. i suggest d. oh, and maybe 00:41:939 (38) - this can be deleted
00:41:939 (38) - change to k for high pitch
00:47:456 (42) - ^
00:43:318 (38,39,40) - change to dkd to fit the vocal better. it's also fits the drum sounds.
00:46:077 (41) - give finish to empashize end of drum?
00:49:525 - add note for consistency with 00:44:008 -
00:50:560 (44,45,46,47,48) - hmm...i don't like these. how about this suggestion:
00:51:594 (47) - change to k,
00:52:628 (49) - move to 00:52:973 - and change to k,
00:52:284 (48) - and delete to break the chain
01:01:249 (57) - change to k, i think it's better to just follow the pitch rather than mixing it with drum
01:02:973 (59,60) - swap
01:13:663 (2,3,4) - dkk
01:26:766 (17,18) - see general mod
[Futsuu]
00:00:560 (1) - d, same reason as kantan
00:04:697 (1) - end this spinner at 00:06:766 - and 00:06:077 (1,2,3,4) - delete these, to follow the wind voice, and it's too dense here for futsu
00:07:284 () - can add finish to emphasize the end of drumming
00:07:801 () - for better spacing, i suggest to move this to 00:08:491 - and change to d,
00:10:560 () - for same reason, move to 00:11:249 - but keep it at k,
00:13:318 () - move to 00:14:008 - and make the triplet kdd
if you prefer the current pattern, feel free to reject these
00:26:594 () - in my opinion D will fits more here, because it's different than before, the keyboard sound suddenly stopped
00:52:801 () - delete, usually futsuu not using 1/2 with different colour except there's strong reason and i think there's no reason here. it's better to just follow vocal like before
00:53:318 (99,100) - swap
01:26:422 () - see general
[Muzukashii]
00:00:560 (1) - d
00:06:766 (5,6,7) - sounds like kkd.. kkk is also fine for muzu tho
00:07:283 (8) - change to D, so it has consistency (D, K, D, K) with 00:10:042 (22) - 00:12:801 (36) - and 00:15:560 (50) -
00:07:628 (9,10) - swap
00:26:594 (89) - D, same as futsuu
00:30:904 (97) - it sounds better if moved to 00:30:732 imo
00:33:146 () - delete, then 00:33:663 () - move to 00:33:491 - and change to d, for consistency if mod above applied
00:35:904 () - delete, too long for this part ><
00:39:180 () - move to 00:39:008 -
00:56:508 - you might want to add d here to increase the difficulty a bit. i see some gap with oni
00:57:370 () - move to 00:57:542 -
00:57:800 () - change to k
01:26:422 (336) - see general
[Oni]
00:00:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - d k k d k
00:07:283 (11) - add finisher like muzukashi. and make it D
00:26:594 (116) - D
00:45:732 (202) - change to d to follow the drum better
01:09:008 (339,340,341,342) - kdd D
01:09:697 (343) - d
01:10:904 (351) - d
01:11:077 - delete, hear no sound
01:26:422 () - ya i ta~
[Lundle's Oni]
00:21:422 (99,100,101,102,103) - make this part like at 00:19:180 (87,88,89,90,91,92) - for consistency (or the opposite)
00:46:077 (212) - i think finisher in this note would be nice
good diff!
i think that's all from me. Good luck!
[General]
don't know it's big problem or not because it's just the last seconds, but it is a bit off, hear it at 01:26:422 until the end at 25%, the tick is a bit earlier than the vocal. that makes the notes sounds off. check with timing expert?
or if it's too much work, my suggestion is don't map the vocal voice (like lundle's oni) or just make the end a spinner :p
[Chaica's Kantan]
00:00:560 (1) - maybe change to d would be better for the start considering relatively low vocal pitch and prevent boredom of kat
00:08:835 (3) - change to k because same pitch with 00:08:146 (2) -
00:20:560 (15) - this can change to k so it's same like 00:26:077 (21) -
00:31:594 (26,27) - swap? the keyboard's pitch sounds going up
00:39:870 - add note here to fill the keyboard and drum sound. i suggest d. oh, and maybe 00:41:939 (38) - this can be deleted
00:41:939 (38) - change to k for high pitch
00:47:456 (42) - ^
00:43:318 (38,39,40) - change to dkd to fit the vocal better. it's also fits the drum sounds.
00:46:077 (41) - give finish to empashize end of drum?
00:49:525 - add note for consistency with 00:44:008 -
00:50:560 (44,45,46,47,48) - hmm...i don't like these. how about this suggestion:
00:51:594 (47) - change to k,
00:52:628 (49) - move to 00:52:973 - and change to k,
00:52:284 (48) - and delete to break the chain
01:01:249 (57) - change to k, i think it's better to just follow the pitch rather than mixing it with drum
01:02:973 (59,60) - swap
01:13:663 (2,3,4) - dkk
01:26:766 (17,18) - see general mod
[Futsuu]
00:00:560 (1) - d, same reason as kantan
00:04:697 (1) - end this spinner at 00:06:766 - and 00:06:077 (1,2,3,4) - delete these, to follow the wind voice, and it's too dense here for futsu
00:07:284 () - can add finish to emphasize the end of drumming
00:07:801 () - for better spacing, i suggest to move this to 00:08:491 - and change to d,
00:10:560 () - for same reason, move to 00:11:249 - but keep it at k,
00:13:318 () - move to 00:14:008 - and make the triplet kdd
if you prefer the current pattern, feel free to reject these
00:26:594 () - in my opinion D will fits more here, because it's different than before, the keyboard sound suddenly stopped
00:52:801 () - delete, usually futsuu not using 1/2 with different colour except there's strong reason and i think there's no reason here. it's better to just follow vocal like before
00:53:318 (99,100) - swap
01:26:422 () - see general
[Muzukashii]
00:00:560 (1) - d
00:06:766 (5,6,7) - sounds like kkd.. kkk is also fine for muzu tho
00:07:283 (8) - change to D, so it has consistency (D, K, D, K) with 00:10:042 (22) - 00:12:801 (36) - and 00:15:560 (50) -
00:07:628 (9,10) - swap
00:26:594 (89) - D, same as futsuu
00:30:904 (97) - it sounds better if moved to 00:30:732 imo
00:33:146 () - delete, then 00:33:663 () - move to 00:33:491 - and change to d, for consistency if mod above applied
00:35:904 () - delete, too long for this part ><
00:39:180 () - move to 00:39:008 -
00:56:508 - you might want to add d here to increase the difficulty a bit. i see some gap with oni
00:57:370 () - move to 00:57:542 -
00:57:800 () - change to k
01:26:422 (336) - see general
[Oni]
00:00:560 (1,2,3,4,5) - d k k d k
00:07:283 (11) - add finisher like muzukashi. and make it D
00:26:594 (116) - D
00:45:732 (202) - change to d to follow the drum better
01:09:008 (339,340,341,342) - kdd D
01:09:697 (343) - d
01:10:904 (351) - d
01:11:077 - delete, hear no sound
01:26:422 () - ya i ta~
[Lundle's Oni]
00:21:422 (99,100,101,102,103) - make this part like at 00:19:180 (87,88,89,90,91,92) - for consistency (or the opposite)
00:46:077 (212) - i think finisher in this note would be nice
good diff!
i think that's all from me. Good luck!