thx mod Nofool ;_;/~~~Nofool wrote:
Hi' sry for the delay
nice choice, i don't really like the song but awesome anime
[Futsuu]
- 00:06:766 (3,4) - what about dd ? sounds better imo. no change.
- 00:08:491 (8) - remove ? logic with - 00:11:249 - etc. fixed!
- 00:38:491 (70,71,72) - dd k instead of d kk ? fits more the vocal, also change - 00:39:870 (74) - to d and remove next d ? to emphasize a bit this part. d kk fixed them.
- 00:54:697 - 00:56:766 - what about a slider here ? this part really is too dense imo, also - 00:57:111 - try kk k instead of k kkk ? sorry, slider is no change. but 00:57:111 - kk k is fixed.
- 01:05:732 - dd d k instead of d k kk ? fits more the vocal but i understand your choice so as you pref. d k kk is fixed. :3/
- 01:25:042 - kk d k instead of d kk d ? kk d k is fixed. :3/~~
[Muzukashii]
- 00:07:628 - try dkkddk or dkkd k ? could be more enjoyable to play and still fits the song.
- 00:10:387 - ^. fixed them.
- move - 00:42:456 (142) - to - 00:42:801 - as k ? might plays better. fixed.
- 00:46:594 - d ? consistency with - 00:41:766 (139) -. oh...:0 fixed. overlooked that.
- 00:49:180 - 00:50:904 - try this ? :
fits more the vocal/melody. fixed.
- 01:01:249 - try d kkddk d instead of ddkd dkkd ? fits more the vocal like the reste of the kiai, break at - 01:01:939 - is a bit weird atm. d kkddk d fixed!
- 01:21:939 - huu i would've tried to follow the melody here but it really wouldn't fit the main rhythm x_x maybe at least move - 01:25:387 (333) - to - 01:25:215 - ? no change. 01:25:387 - Because there is a sound drum and 01:21:939 ~ back sound is k d k d k so I make this placement.
[Oni]
- 00:07:284 (11) - no finisher ?_? there is not finisher anymore.
- 00:15:560 (69) - this as D could be better, alternating K-D-K-D with other spots like - 00:12:801 - etc. sorry, no change. i think this better.
- 00:18:318 - 00:26:594 - this part is way too similar to the muzu, try to add some more patterns, like - 00:19:008 - ddd 1/4, - 00:21:766 - ddk 1/4 ? fixed them. but 00:19:353 - d is incongruity... change k
- 01:09:353 (338) - add finisher and remove next d ? logic with - 01:10:042 -, k d k k D is kinda weird atm. fixed them.
- maybe move - 01:23:318 (428) - to - 01:23:146 - as d ? this break is a bit weird too. u~~;_;/~~~ this suggestion... keep. I think about whether I should change it.
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Good luck'
mine diff and Lundle's Oni Update.