Hello! From my M4M Queue~

By My Side

00:41:473 (3,4) - Fix distance, it looks further apart between the notes compared to the rest
00:52:681 - Missing sound
01:25:580 (1) - Make it so that it is straight together with 01:26:303 (3) - cause now is slanted abit, make it look nicer
01:49:261 (5) - Missing sound
01:54:322 (6) - I would put a slider making the slider end on the white tick and a circle on 01:54:684, cause i want to emphasise on the white tick, try it and see what you think
02:07:879 - Missing sound
03:50:193 (1) - Make it so that the slider follows the stream pattern, the slider is abit to curved from the stream curve
04:02:666 (2) - Make it so that the slider makes a S shape with 04:03:028 (3) - Looks nicer
04:33:577 (1) - Nice slider <3

Very good map,the rhythm and hitsounds were alright,i went through you map so many times to try to spot mistakes,still couldnt find any lol,Hope this helps and Good luck ranking it <3

Hello there! From my queue.

[General]

UNRANKABLE: 10nya's Side should be renamed to 10nya's Insane, since it is not the hardest difficulty in the set.

From the Ranking Criteria section

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

[Easy]

00:29:904 (4,1) - Blanket is slightly off

01:36:426 (3,4) - How about a blanket like this?

01:41:488 (2,3,1) - Triangle looks a little off. Maybe move 01:42:572 (3) - to the left just a little bit

02:02:095 (4) - Maybe flip it like this?

02:04:626 (3,4,5) - Make these connect like a triangle

03:11:148 (4,5) - Blanket is off

03:14:763 (3,4) - Kinda overlaps each other weirdly.

03:16:932 (5,1) - Personally, you could make this into a spinner that lasts this long

03:59:593 (5,6) - Blanket is off

04:25:262 (5) - New combo

04:26:347 (1) - Remove new combo


[Normal]

01:19:073 (1,2) - Blanket is off

02:19:087 (1,2) - ^

03:16:932 (1,1) - Same thing as easy, you could make this into a slider



[Hard]

00:45:812 (1,2,3) - Looks sloppy, try to make it into a triangle

01:36:788 (2) - x352 y244

03:18:378 - Not sure, but maybe a spinner here could work. Up to you


[10nya's Insane]

OD7

00:05:501 (3,4) - Blanket is off

00:42:919 (1) - Remove new combo

00:43:642 (3) - New combo

01:32:630 (4) - Shape feels off

01:45:826 (1,3) - Blanket

02:15:472 (2) - Also shape feels off, maybe it's just me

03:38:443 (5,1) - Blanket is off


[By My Side]

HP7.5
AR8.5

01:29:376 (2,3) - Not parallel

03:31:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This doesn't really look flowing. How about a hexagon shape?

03:50:193 (1) - Curve this less so it flows after the stream

Nice difficulty

Hello. As per your request: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/393945


Good luck~:3

Thanks Gamu ^^
I'll update this soon

From my Queue
I think you should find a BN instead of a modder.
Your custom skin reminds me of sweets and jerry. (Oh my greedy mouth)

[10nya's Side]

1. 00:36:412 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
2. 00:37:135 (3,1) - Better to avoid this overlap
3. 00:47:619 (3,1,2) - Move (2) to (3)'s head to make a blanket.
4. 01:05:334 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
5. 01:27:749 (3,4,1) - Fix blanket.
6. 02:08:964 (1,2) - ^
7. 03:01:025 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 03:36:094 (2,1) - ^
9. 03:38:443 (5,1) - ^
10. 02:23:245 (1,3) - Overlap?
11. 03:43:324 (1,1) - I think it is better to move them apart. Or maybe change SV of 03:43:324 (1) - ?

[Normal]

1. 00:59:550 (1,2) - Blanket

Great "I❤U"

I think it is excellent. Sorry I cannot mod something so I shoot a star for you.

Hello from my m4m queue

General:
00:01:343 - Mapped before red line? you could add a red timing point at 00:01:343 - to not screw your other timings too

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
mod from my queue--
just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. I'm not sure if "10nya's Side" is okay as a diff name. according to Ranking Criteria the only the diff with a custom name is the hardest diff (unless you use a whole set of custom names). Cause "Side" doesn't give a hint about how hard the difficulty actually is it might be better to rename it to '(Light) Insane'? Well.....
2. combo coloour 1 and 2 are very similar, how about changing 2 with something more red? Nope, sorry. I make the difference from those colour by making the pink colour at custom 2 is a lot darker. So, it should be fine :3
3. skin: combo numbers are hard to see sometimes. while it doesn't matter much (imo) maybe a slightly lighter tone would work better? Umm, I dunno. It seems clear enough for me :3
   a colour similar to the sliderfollowcircle would be nice. or plain white or maybe similar to scorenumbers with a coloured border? Sorry, I still prefer mine ^^
4. skin: followpoints are so small, consider increasing their size to make them better visible That's the right size based on the ranking criteria :3, so I guess I won't change it, sorry ;w;

Easy

1. how about AR 2.5~3? the screen seems cluttered with objects at times, increasing AR slightly can help avoiding that
   also shortens the gap between AR2/5 from Easy to Normal, which is quite big, imo Ok, fixed~!
2. 00:13:274 (5) - add NC? O: other NC was after 2 downbeats so.. Fixed~!
3. 00:40:750 (3) - reverse feels weird here, because the rhythm is totally different on the 'way back'.
   also, the vocals stop on the red tick, so they don't match with the sliderend either-- they could be better emphasized..
   the downbeat, too. it's pretty strong just like the others so I don't know why you decided to keep it unclickable :c
   > http://puu.sh/lD5am.jpg ? Fixed~!
4. 00:44:004 (3,5) - blanket is nice, but consider moving 5 further up to smoothen out the movement from (4,5,6). blanket is possible then too :3
   > http://puu.sh/lD5qn.jpg Yes it is ^^. But I wanna try something different, and that's how it turns out
5. 00:49:065 (2) - rotate slightly (~ -20°) for better movement? Nope, sorry. I think it's fine the way it is ^^
6. 00:55:934 (4) - vocals stop in between, which makes the long slider feels off. how about this rhythm instead? > http://puu.sh/lD5ze.jpg Nope, sorry... I prefer 1/1 slider
7. 01:08:588 (5) - similar to ^^, rotate slightly? Nope, sorry ;w;
8. 01:16:903 (1,2) - this could be confusing for beginner players, cause 2's sliderend is closer to 1 than the head. can you move 2 further right to avoid any confusion? 172|55 would work well, imo, you'd just have to adjust the following slider Fixed~!
9. 02:18:364 (1) - how about moving this further left for smoother movement? destroys the triangle but plays a bit better, imo Nope, sorry ;w;
10. 02:29:933 (2,3,1) - aah, with higher AR this shouldn't be any problem to read, but atm 1 becomes visible while 2's still played.. In case you keep AR2 you should move 1 elsewhere to avoid confusion for beginners Don't worry, I increase the AR already ^^
11. 03:00:302 (5,1,2) - nitpicking, but fixing the blankets here looks better, no? Fixed~!
12. 03:14:763 (3,4) - overlap doesn't look that good either, imo. drag 4's end a little further off please? Sure :3
13. 04:06:824 (5) - nitpicking again, move slightly further down, a little more space between 5 and 4 looks better Fixed~!
14. 04:07:547 (1,2) - same about this as for 01:16:903 (1,2) - how about flipping two to the other side? still looks and plays nice. Okay :3

Normal
I was quite surprised by the amount of 1/4 beats in this diff, considering there wasn't a single one mapped in Easy. Overall it might be better to remove some single 1/4 circles and use more sliders? I'm not sure D: That's how I make a gap between the two diffs, so it would be rankable :3

1. 00:06:585 (4,5) - pattern/rhythm is alright but I'd prefer something similar to 04:29:781 (2,3,4,1) - because the strong beats are on the white tick, the red tick and then the downbeat Nope, sorry ;w; I prefer that
2. 01:33:895 (2,3) - considering the song gets softer here a short slider might work better than two circles
   same for 02:49:094 (5,6) - btw Sorry, I prefer two circles instead ;w;
3. 01:47:272 (3) - feels weird, how about two 1/4 sliders instead? matches the vocals quite nicely Yeah, I just realized it XD. Ok, Fixed~!
4. 01:47:995 (4) - consider ending this on the red tick, the downbeat is pretty strong and should be clickable, imo. removing 01:48:899 (5) - and using a 1/4 slider on the downbeat should work well Nope, sorry
5. 02:18:364 (1) - why NC here? remove? O: Ooopsie O:
6. 02:34:271 (1) - break in the vocals. consider ending the slider earlier and start a new one or a circle at 02:34:994 - Oh, right. Fixed~!
7. 03:14:040 (3,4,5) - nitpicking, fix blankets? ;_; Ok, fixed~!

Hard

1. any reason why this has a different background than the other diffs? O: Well, there are 5 diffs in this mapset, and I wanna to make some difference atmosphere in the background like this :
   1. Easy ~ Normal-> They were sitting on the stone watching the scenery in the morning
   2. Hard -> She was staring at the sky and lift up her arm
   3. Light Insane ~ Insane -> They were sitting on the stone watching the scenery when the sun set
   The reason I add a different background in Hard is.... well, it's weird right, if there are 3 diffs that have the same background while the other two are different? I just wanna make some balance to the atmosphere, so....
2. 00:16:166 (1,2,3) - instead of stacking 1+3 try a blanket instead, improves movement slightly > http://puu.sh/lD9vA.jpg Sorry... I prefer stack ^^
3. 00:21:950 (1,1,1,1,1,2) - hmh. I'm wonderin why you've decided to follow the background music here. the sounds you've mapped before are here, too so it feels very unnatural to ignore them completely, imo. I mean it's playable.. still. I'd prefer if you go with the more dominant sounds instead. Up to you ofcourse! Well..... I wanna to give the players some chill before the SV is changing at 00:24:843 (1) :3
   similar at the end here 04:34:120 (1,1,1,1,2) - The reason is the same ^, I wanna to give some chills to the players before the music id ended :3
4. 01:09:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you move them a bit closer? they might be mistaken for 1/8 beats Okay, fixed~!
   same for 02:24:872 (1,2,3,4,1) - and 03:43:324 (5,6,7,1) - Fixed again~!
5. 01:11:842 (2,3) - two 1/4 sliders instead to emphasize the beat on the blue tick better? Sorry, I map the voice in this part
6. 01:29:195 (2) - another blue tick that should be mapped, imo. .o. it's juts too loud to be left out. 1/4 slider + circle maybe? Nope, sorry....
7. 01:30:642 (5) - already mentioned this in lower diffs. break in vocals > end slider earlier, new one/circle on downbeat? Nope, sorry.... Her vocal clearly ends there, and there are no music around 01:30:642 ~ 01:31:365 for me to map
8. 03:55:255 (8) - there's a beat on the blue tick, too, which makes this feel weird to play, imo. consider shortening the slider and adding a circle on the 1/8 beat? 'Cuz their voices are more dominant than the music, so....
   there was a similar pattern like this before with two sliders ending on 1/8 but that matched the vocals better imo Ok :3

Hope I could help a little, Hey, you've helped a lot you know (> w <)/
good luck with the set! :3 Thanks~!
//squee squee\\

Thanks for the mod~!

ColdTooth wrote:

Hello there! From my queue.

[General]

UNRANKABLE: 10nya's Side should be renamed to 10nya's Insane, since it is not the hardest difficulty in the set.

From the Ranking Criteria section

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

[Easy]

00:29:904 (4,1) - Blanket is slightly off That blanket looks fine for me :3

01:36:426 (3,4) - How about a blanket like this? Ok, fixed~!

01:41:488 (2,3,1) - Triangle looks a little off. Maybe move 01:42:572 (3) - to the left just a little bit Nope sorry.... That'll ruin the distance snap

02:02:095 (4) - Maybe flip it like this? Nope, sorry....

02:04:626 (3,4,5) - Make these connect like a triangle I think, it's better to leave it like that ^^

03:11:148 (4,5) - Blanket is off Fixed~!

03:14:763 (3,4) - Kinda overlaps each other weirdly. Fixed~!

03:16:932 (5,1) - Personally, you could make this into a spinner that lasts this long Yeah, but I prefer a long slider instead ^^

03:59:593 (5,6) - Blanket is off That blanket looks fine for me :3

04:25:262 (5) - New combo Okay, fixed~!

04:26:347 (1) - Remove new combo Okay, fixed~!


[Normal]

01:19:073 (1,2) - Blanket is off Ok, fixed~!

02:19:087 (1,2) - ^ Fixed~!

03:16:932 (1,1) - Same thing as easy, you could make this into a slider Yes?



[Hard]

00:45:812 (1,2,3) - Looks sloppy, try to make it into a triangle Nope, sorry ;w;

01:36:788 (2) - x352 y244 Nope, sorry...

03:18:378 - Not sure, but maybe a spinner here could work. Up to you Emm.... Nope, sorry


[By My Side]

HP7.5 Ok
AR8.5 Ok

01:29:376 (2,3) - Not parallel Ok, fixed~!

03:31:574 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This doesn't really look flowing. How about a hexagon shape? Nope, sorry...

03:50:193 (1) - Curve this less so it flows after the stream It looks fine for me :3

Nice difficulty Thanks :3

Thanks for the mod~!

Wishmaker980 wrote:

Hello! From my M4M Queue~

By My Side

00:41:473 (3,4) - Fix distance, it looks further apart between the notes compared to the rest Ok, fixed~!
00:52:681 - Missing sound I'm sure there's no missing sound there, 'cuz I map the music in this part, not the singer's voice :3
01:25:580 (1) - Make it so that it is straight together with 01:26:303 (3) - cause now is slanted abit, make it look nicer It looks fine for me
01:49:261 (5) - Missing sound Nope, sorry... I map the music here :3
01:54:322 (6) - I would put a slider making the slider end on the white tick and a circle on 01:54:684, cause i want to emphasise on the white tick, try it and see what you think It's nice, but I prefer mine sorry ;w;
02:07:879 - Missing sound Sorry.... I map the music here
03:50:193 (1) - Make it so that the slider follows the stream pattern, the slider is abit to curved from the stream curve Fixed~!
04:02:666 (2) - Make it so that the slider makes a S shape with 04:03:028 (3) - Looks nicer Nope, sorry.... I prefer W shape instead
04:33:577 (1) - Nice slider <3 Thanks (>////<)7

Very good map,the rhythm and hitsounds were alright,i went through you map so many times to try to spot mistakes,still couldnt find any lol,Hope this helps and Good luck ranking it <3 Whoa. Thanks ^^

Thanks for the mod~!

XiaofengTiger wrote:

From my Queue
I think you should find a BN instead of a modder. T-thanks (>////<)7
Your custom skin reminds me of sweets and jerry. (Oh my greedy mouth) Haha ^^

[Normal]

1. 00:59:550 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed~!

Great "I❤U" Thanks ^^

I think it is excellent. Sorry I cannot mod something so I shoot a star for you. Whoa. Thank you very much (> w <)/

Thanks for the mod and the star~!

DylanSan wrote:

Hello from my m4m queue

General:
00:01:343 - Mapped before red line? you could add a red timing point at 00:01:343 - to not screw your other timings too Nope, sorry.... I prefer to start it at 00:01:705 since the strong beat started there :3

Hard

00:29:904 (4,6) - I'd make these on oposite sides of eachother Nope, sorry.... I prefer to stack it :3
00:46:535 (3) - I feel like this blankets way too close Fixed~!
01:13:288 (1,4) - These stacks are inconsistent, do one or the other It's playable, so it's fine :3
01:30:461 - I clearly hear "mo" here Yes, but I map the music here
01:31:365 - Here should start a slider not end one No change, sorry ;w;
01:32:449 - "ra" note Okay, fixed~!
01:32:630 - "nai" 3/4th slider Okay, fixed~!
01:53:237 - "to" note Sorry.... But I wanna map ''ku'' instead
01:53:418 - "Kuri" kickslider Nope, sorry.....
I hope you know what i mean, The vocals are either not done at all or just done barely Yeah, 'cuz in this diff I wanna map the music for the most
02:14:026 (5,6) - How about kickslider instead? Nope, sorry.....
02:22:522 - There's a vocal here Yeah, but like what I said, I wanna to map the music in this diff :3
02:50:179 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency while the rest of the map is really consistent Oh right, fixed~!
02:51:625 - There's a vocal starting here, not ending Sorry, no change
03:18:017 - Pretty sure the "Yeahh" Ends here Yeah, but the music end at 03:18:378

By my side

00:01:343 - needs to be mapped imo like 10nya's Side. Nope, sorry.....
00:08:754 (3,4) - Blanket slightly off That blanket looks fine for me :3
00:30:356 (7,9) - feels unfit, 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - feels more like a triplet and a note 1/5th later No change, sorry....
00:41:744 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
01:33:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:45:284 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ ^
03:12:052 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ ^
03:28:501 (5,6) - This blanket's offThat blanket looks fine for me :3

Thanks for the mod~!

Updated~:3

No thank you! Sorry but I can't mod this.
REJECTED!

Dyl-Byl wrote:

No thank you! Sorry but I can't mod this.
REJECTED!

Ouch! (´△｀)

From my queue I'll do my best~


Not many things worth mentioning, good job with the mapset P.S I love the storyboard (Also nice slider art )

from my queue~

[General]

1. the pink and purple combo colors are really similar, can you rearrange the color sequence so they don't appear next to each other?

[By Modem's Side]

• 
  In general, I would suggest that you follow the vocals more in the parts where the drums are absent to eliminate some of the pauses in the beatmap

1. 00:05:862 (1) - since you're already using extended sliders, you might as well end this slider at 00:06:495 - mute it, and place a circle at 00:06:585 - to match the strong piano beat
2. 00:10:201 (6) - 1/8 slider is just strange. why not keep it simple and stack a circle on top of the slider?
3. 00:11:647 (3,4,5) - I barely hear the piano sustain. I think normal circles work better here
4. 00:12:731 (1) - same thing as first comment
5. 00:21:047 (6) - I feel (6) is getting too much emphasis at the expense of (1). maybe move (6) to [205, 113] for a square pattern (might need to move up 00:21:227 (1,2,3,4) a little then)
6. 00:22:130 (2,4,6,8,10) - this can be polished a little bit. I'd recommend making a placeholder slider from (2) to (10) and moving (4,6,8) so they lie on that slider
7. 00:47:800 (6,1) - misleading spacing. maybe use smaller spacing but sharper angle to emphasize (1)
8. 01:08:227 (8) - NC here sinstead of 01:08:950 (1) ?
9. 01:30:461 and 01:31:907 - I think it's better to fill in these gaps with notes. the drum sounds are too weak to justify these pauses imo
10. 01:37:149 (1,1,1,1) - personally I think curvy sliders fit better with the style of the map
11. 01:51:611 (1) - rotate or flatten this slider to flow more smoothly from 01:51:430 (8) -
12. 02:33:368 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhytmically. there's no drums here, so you might as well follow the vocals
13. 02:59:036 - add a note here
14. 03:37:178 (3,4) - ctrl+g for better flow
15. 03:52:362 (8) - eh, you're forcing the player to jump left and immediately slide right. maybe move this on top of 03:51:459 (5) instead and blanket around 03:51:639 (6) for better flow

[By 10Nya's Side]

1. 00:55:211 (4) - NC here?
2. 02:27:764 (1,2) - this jumps feels a little excessive since the flow is already jerky here. something like ~2.2x spacing works better imo
3. 03:14:763 (5) - remove NC, to keep the 2/1 pattern?
4. 03:33:563 (3) - flow doesn't feel very nice. maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/lZF0U/46b60f8ece.jpg
5. 03:54:170 (1,2,3) - perfect blankets around (2) look better
6. 04:32:673 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is a little hard to read. consider changing to something else?
7. Pretty nice diff ^^

Hope that helps and good luck!

Hello from my modding queue

[General]
Add a source if there is one.
Isn't that a 'Speed Up Ver.' or 'Nightcore Ver.' ?

[ 10nya's Side]
00:18:335 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
01:27:930 (4,1) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider.
01:40:041 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:45:826 (1,3) - ^
01:51:430 (6) - Stack this on 01:50:164 (3) (Not needed)
01:57:395 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle of this -> Like this it looks much better.
02:08:964 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
02:26:318 (1,2) - ^
02:35:718 (3,1) - ^
02:40:056 (3,1) - ^
03:38:443 (5,1) - ^
03:40:070 (1,3) - ^ (Nod needed)
03:57:966 (3,4) - Fix blanket at the end of the slider.

[ By My Side]
00:36:412 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:18:349 (6) - I like it like this much more. (Not needed)
02:43:671 (1,3) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider.
02:48:733 (3,1) - I dont know if this should be blanket. If so then correct it.
03:32:117 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make a good star from this. Choose 2 points and then rotarate it to 72 or 144.

I love your maps!
Good luck with ranking
Have a star!

Just 2 diffs because 4:36 is quite long. q-q

[By My Side]
• 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You know that this is overmapping? 00:30:356 (7,9) these two don't have a sound, and I think a normal triplet would be way better. And this appeared quite often, not gonna point them out.
• 00:39:123 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm feels and fits better.
• 00:42:919 (3,5) - This blanket could be way clearer, and it really seems like they're even touching.
• 00:47:258 (4) - Why not a slider here? :c
• 01:06:780 (6,7) - Shouldn't this be the same as 01:04:792 (2,3) rhythm-wise?
• 01:08:227 (8,9,10,1,2) - Before you mapped some little jumps perfectly to the vocals and here you suddenly map to the drums, which I really dislike.
• 01:41:126 (4,5) - Strange custom stack. oo
• 02:20:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why not the same as in the beginning? Some consistency would be cool imo.
• 02:29:029 (7,2) - Barely visible, but still annoying for me.
• 02:34:271 (8,1) - Touching.
• 02:52:348 (1) - Uhm, I guess this spinner BG needs to be way larger.


[Hard]
• 01:08:407 (2,3,5,6) - This is really weird because of the low AR.
• 01:17:626 (3,6) - Visible overlap.
• 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - Mapping to the vocals would be better because the sounds these are mapped to are barely hearable.

Ticket spent.

[Hard]
I think this diff generally SV quite low, such that the 1/4 slider is quite short 00:30:085 (5) -
but anyway, it still works
00:23:035 (1) - why here 1/4 slider? What I heard is like this

00:39:846 - missing vocal sound
01:08:769 - ^, I am not hating missing some of the circle, but at least need to make sense. For this two case, the have the vocal sound in a row, if you suddent del one of the circle, then the rhythm is weird.

01:34:167 - useless green line?
01:34:257 - I think the kiai time should end at here.

(until 01:39:318 - )

[10nya's Side]
(From 01:39:318 - )
01:45:374 - 02:08:151 - 02:43:219 - here is a clear and strong beat sound, why skip it? I think making this to a stream is more fun to play.
01:50:887 - beat here is strong, I think it is better to make the timing clickable, just like

02:26:679 - here is another vocal, I think the slider should end at here.
02:49:456 (4) - nc due to big tick
02:49:637 (1) - you can move 1/8 beat before, it is a common note-before-spinner pattern.

This diff I think it is close to rank.

(until 02:55:240 - )

[By my Side]
(from 02:55:240 - )
02:55:783 - 03:01:567 - 03:03:013 - 03:42:059 - again, why skip vocal sound here
02:59:036 - 02:59:127 - um... triple sound? not going to map it?
03:21:271 (1) - can you draw it more symmetry?
03:25:609 - skip strong beats again.
03:40:251 (5,6,7) - 03:39:347 (2,3,4) - similar rhythm here, why the pattern so different
(to the end)

I think this song is quite hard becasue the vocal sound is on blue while beat sound is on white. Anyway, good luck.

cant confirm xd

[Easy]

1. 01:59:564 (2) - not having this 02:00:287 - as a clickable thing its weird
2. 02:14:749 (1,2,3) - wheres the flow here. a better flow will make it more enjoyable for newbies
3. 02:46:564 (4,1) - ^ same, try http://puu.sh/m6cWE/5e8d89cc18.jpg
4. 03:12:594 (5,1) - swap ncs

[Normal]

1. 00:07:127 (5) - what about using circles instead, the beat on its tail is clearly stronger than the one on its head also it fucks up your comboing. the nc must be on 00:07:489 - not on 00:08:393 (1) -
2. 01:01:719 (5,1) - swap nc then add one here 01:05:334 (3) -
3. 01:31:365 (4,1) - swaaaap nc
4. 01:33:534 (1,4) - ^
5. 01:35:703 (1,4) - ^
6. 01:47:995 (4,1) - swap ncccc
7. 02:34:271 (1,2) - ^
8. 02:40:779 (4,1) -
9. 02:43:671 (1) - add nc
10. 02:50:902 (3,7) - swap nc
11. 03:06:809 (5,1) - ^
12. 03:09:702 (5) - add nc
13. 03:41:517 (4) - ^
14. 03:58:870 (4,1) - swap nc
15. 04:01:762 (4,1) - ^
16. 04:30:685 (1,2,3) - spacing, just move (2) a bit and its fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:22:493 (1,1,1,1) - you dont need all those ncs
2. 00:27:012 (1,2) - swap nc. i guess u already noticed what im trying to say by looking at the ncs i pointed out on normal. your nc pattern is mostly every 2 measures (the large white tick in the timeline) so take a look over the map so i dont need to point out everything xd
3. 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - you know
4. 02:14:026 (5,6) - quite questionable. if u silenced the tails that means that theres no sound on them, its kinda over emphasized. 1/2 sliders do it better
5. 04:34:120 (1,1,1,1) - u know

[nya10's Side]

1. 03:43:324 (1,1) - thats barely visible also ugly
2. 04:03:932 (1) - not ending it on a yellow tick would be good

[By My Side]

• 
  why not "By my side" with lowercase m and s so it fits the song title

1. 00:30:356 (7,9) - these are overmapped
2. 00:41:925 (6,8) - ^
3. 01:16:632 (9,11) -
4. 01:28:201 (11,13) - ^
5. 01:33:986 (5,7) - ^
6. 01:45:555 (9,11) - ^
7. 02:31:831 (10,12) - ^ and well its the same on every stream so check them

gl

10NYA:
00:08:393 (3) - Fix Triangle
00:12:370 (3) - Maybe put below 00:11:285 (3)
00:14:358 (4) - Fix Triangle
00:44:908 (5) - ^
00:50:873 (1) - This looks strange kind of ruins the flow, try something like: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TukLk1O.png
01:18:892 (3) - Fix Triangle
02:27:041 (2) - Fix Blanket
03:01:748 (3) - ^
04:14:415 (4) - Fix Triangle

BYE MY SIDE:
00:22:131 (2) - Triangles doe
02:19:449 (2) - ^

I didn't get to finish looking over and i apologize for that but i recommend you look into your AI Mod i think your size is a bit big, anyway good luck with your mapping~

suggestion, only change if you feel like it
should fix
unrankable

[By My Side]
00:22:493 (3,5,7,9,11) - highly recommend NC for patterns like this. different color look beautiful on overlap notes, and it makes it easier to distinguish 1/2 vs. 1/1 spacing.
00:32:616 (7) - x108 y360 more even imo
00:38:581 (1) - this played odd for me bc you make a jump pattern here, and there's as much emphasis on this as there are previous notes, but distance is low. imo placement more like x96 y320 (don't forget adjust spacing/direction after) feel more natural to play.
00:45:450 (8) - i'd make distance same as distance of 00:44:004 (6,7) , for pattern.
00:46:354 (9) - how about x408 y260? make angle same as 00:44:908 (7,8) make more pattern sense imo.
00:49:065 (3) - i would place it "down" for circle flow... example http://puu.sh/m6PIN/78c707fe1c.jpg
00:56:477 (2,3) - make 1/2 slider instead? imo starting jump at downbeat plays better, now it starts on very soft vocal (n in "do|n|na") which feel unintuitive.
01:08:227 (8,11) - NC really should be switched imo... fit better vocal, and emphasize new rhythm.
01:40:945 (3,4) - this jump felt really big for me, it also makes the spacing at 01:41:849 (6,7) confusing since it's lower spacing with 1/1 rhythm. i'd recommend make some kind of 1.7x pattern here fit with ur usual DS.
01:51:611 (1) - what do you think of 1/1 slider + note instead? seem more natural and also make a better lead in to 01:52:334 (3) to not skip this beat.
02:20:352 - add note?
02:23:787 (4,5) - this feel very odd for me bc spacing is low, right after a jump pattern. add note at 02:23:968 ?
02:34:994 (9,1) - swap NC?
02:42:406 (6) - x312 y196? more even placement
03:35:732 (7) - imo make it go "left" to continue flow from 03:35:370 (5,6) is more intuitive.
03:36:997 (2,3,4,5) - this position was very unexpected for me... for one, making a placement like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195053 would make much more structure sense (current placement seems random, or i didn't get reason for it). but i also thought the direction didn't flow very well. imo, smth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195065 would be more intuitive (don't forget fix spacing after).
04:08:993 (5) - i think you were going for 1.7x DS here but this is noticeably further from 04:08:631 (3,4) .
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - i would remove these. you're making a soft part here, so start with "soft" feeling at 04:19:116 (4,5) feel more natural.

[10nya's Side]
03:09:882 (2,3) - it's not stacked on 03:08:979 (3) if it's what you were going for. but personally i feel make it same distance as 03:09:521 (4,1) is more playable
03:11:509 (2,3,4) - this seems out of place with the sharp jump/playable nature of the map. how do you feel about sth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195110 instead?
04:05:016 (2) - intentionally not equidistant from 04:05:378 (4) ? move up 1 grid would fix it.
04:22:550 (2,1,2,3) - whistle would feel sooo much better on blue tick here imo...
04:29:239 (5) - if i'm understanding your pattern correctly, there should be whistle on head here.
04:31:950 (5,1) - not sure i got reason for switch whistle here but sounds good enough
it's really fun ~

[Hard]
00:24:662 (2,1) - pattern like this look more beautiful imo when each formation has its own color, even if it breaks NC pattern. would recommend swap NC here.
01:32:630 (2,3) - should be stacked? same as 02:47:829 (4,1) - 04:03:932 (7,1) - .
01:48:357 (2,3) - i wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 stack like this when all the other ones were 1/2. it's kind of difficult to see, and imo players shouldn't have to watch closely for a slow relax song like this.
03:31:394 (3) - i would add NC here to indicate rhythm change.
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - same as By My Side. also applies to lower diffs.
04:36:289 (2,1) - same as 00:24:662 (2,1)

lower diffs look fine at a glance.
it's mostly pattern/flow suggestion. map seems mostly fine.
i hope it was useful, good luck >3<

sb done~ http://puu.sh/m7sML.zip

Metaku wrote:

From my queue I'll do my best~

SPOILER

Easy

Why would you use BSD 1/8 here? O_o Well..... Just some habit of mine

03:08:255 (2,4) - - I find these two sliders odd as they reverse on a blue tick and they feel a bit off beat. I find shortening them by one tick (so the reverse point is on a red tick) better sounding and more logical. (I think there were similar sliders elsewhere but... For this section at least they feel off to me, you should check them just in case) I guess it's fine since the vocal stopped at the blue tick

Normal

00:23:396 (1) - Not really an error but I think a spinner could work well here and would make the flow better (just my opinion, you can ignore this) I think the spinner is too short if I started it there, so nope sorry


Hard


01:44:922 (6,1) - Why not start new combo on the next note? Sure, fixed~!

02:19:629 (9) - This note is kinda confusing in my opinion so you could consider removing it There's a beat of the music here, so I couldn't ignore this note, sorry

Not many things worth mentioning, good job with the mapset P.S I love the storyboard (Also nice slider art )

Thanks (>///<)7

Thanks for the mod~!

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~

[General]

1. the pink and purple combo colors are really similar, can you rearrange the color sequence so they don't appear next to each other? I guess it's fine that way

[By Modem's Side]

• 
  In general, I would suggest that you follow the vocals more in the parts where the drums are absent to eliminate some of the pauses in the beatmap

1. 00:05:862 (1) - since you're already using extended sliders, you might as well end this slider at 00:06:495 - mute it, and place a circle at 00:06:585 - to match the strong piano beat Fixed~!
2. 00:10:201 (6) - 1/8 slider is just strange. why not keep it simple and stack a circle on top of the slider? Cuz when I repeat this part -> 00:10:291 in 75% Playback rate, I heard quite low piano sound that was suitable to be mapped
3. 00:11:647 (3,4,5) - I barely hear the piano sustain. I think normal circles work better here Sorry, I think 1/6 sliders are better here
4. 00:12:731 (1) - same thing as first comment Nice, but I think it's better to keep it like that
5. 00:21:047 (6) - I feel (6) is getting too much emphasis at the expense of (1). maybe move (6) to [205, 113] for a square pattern (might need to move up 00:21:227 (1,2,3,4) a little then) Fixed~!
6. 00:22:130 (2,4,6,8,10) - this can be polished a little bit. I'd recommend making a placeholder slider from (2) to (10) and moving (4,6,8) so they lie on that slider Fixed~!
7. 00:47:800 (6,1) - misleading spacing. maybe use smaller spacing but sharper angle to emphasize (1) I guess that kind of jump is fine :3
8. 01:08:227 (8) - NC here sinstead of 01:08:950 (1) ? Fixed~!
9. 01:30:461 and 01:31:907 - I think it's better to fill in these gaps with notes. the drum sounds are too weak to justify these pauses imo Sure, added~!
10. 01:37:149 (1,1,1,1) - personally I think curvy sliders fit better with the style of the map Sorry, I think I'll keep those straight sliders
11. 01:51:611 (1) - rotate or flatten this slider to flow more smoothly from 01:51:430 (8) - Sorry, I'll keep that slider ^^
12. 02:33:368 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhytmically. there's no drums here, so you might as well follow the vocals Nope, sorry, I still want to follow the drum before following the vocal
13. 02:59:036 - add a note here Sure, added~!
14. 03:37:178 (3,4) - ctrl+g for better flow Fixed~!
15. 03:52:362 (8) - eh, you're forcing the player to jump left and immediately slide right. maybe move this on top of 03:51:459 (5) instead and blanket around 03:51:639 (6) for better flow Fixed~!

Hope that helps and good luck! It really help me! Thank you very much!

Thanks for the mod~!

Azulae wrote:

Hello from my modding queue

[General]
Add a source if there is one. ............ Sadly there's none ;w;
Isn't that a 'Speed Up Ver.' or 'Nightcore Ver.' ? Nope, it's the original version ^^


[ By My Side]
00:36:412 (1,2) - Fix blanket. I guess that blanket is fine o3o
01:18:349 (6) - I like it like this much more. (Not needed) Me too >w<. Fixed~!
02:43:671 (1,3) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider. Fixed~!
02:48:733 (3,1) - I dont know if this should be blanket. If so then correct it. Yes, it's a blanket, but I guess it's fine to keep it like that
03:32:117 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make a good star from this. Choose 2 points and then rotarate it to 72 or 144.

I love your maps! Whoa thanks (>////<)7
Good luck with ranking
Have a star! Whoa, thanks again! (>////<)7 (>////<)7

Thanks for the mod~!

Stjpa wrote:

Just 2 diffs because 4:36 is quite long. q-q

[By My Side]
• 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You know that this is overmapping? 00:30:356 (7,9) these two don't have a sound, and I think a normal triplet would be way better. And this appeared quite often, not gonna point them out. Yes it is, but I guess overmapping a bit is fine if it's in order to give the map a nice flow
• 00:39:123 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm feels and fits better. It's nice, but I stil prefer mine, sorry......
• 00:42:919 (3,5) - This blanket could be way clearer, and it really seems like they're even touching. Fixed~! :3
• 00:47:258 (4) - Why not a slider here? :c 'Cuz I map the music's beat here, so it would be better if I use note instead
• 01:06:780 (6,7) - Shouldn't this be the same as 01:04:792 (2,3) rhythm-wise? Nope, I want to make some variations here :3
• 01:08:227 (8,9,10,1,2) - Before you mapped some little jumps perfectly to the vocals and here you suddenly map to the drums, which I really dislike. Fixed~!
• 01:41:126 (4,5) - Strange custom stack. oo I did it on purpose
• 02:20:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why not the same as in the beginning? Some consistency would be cool imo. Yes, but I think some variations is cool too
• 02:29:029 (7,2) - Barely visible, but still annoying for me. Fixed~!
• 02:34:271 (8,1) - Touching. I guess it's fine
• 02:52:348 (1) - Uhm, I guess this spinner BG needs to be way larger. I guess it's fine since I made it based on the rankable skin size


[Hard]
• 01:08:407 (2,3,5,6) - This is really weird because of the low AR. It doesn't seem like that for me o3o
• 01:17:626 (3,6) - Visible overlap. Yeah, I just realized it. Fixed~!
• 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - Mapping to the vocals would be better because the sounds these are mapped to are barely hearable. I guess mapping the music here instead of the vocal is better, sorry

Thanks for the mod~!

Kyle Y wrote:

Ticket spent.

[Hard]
I think this diff generally SV quite low, such that the 1/4 slider is quite short 00:30:085 (5) -
but anyway, it still works Yeah, I guess that's fine :3
00:23:035 (1) - why here 1/4 slider? What I heard is like this
Sorry.... But I map the drum here :3
00:39:846 - missing vocal sound Fixed~!
01:08:769 - ^, I am not hating missing some of the circle, but at least need to make sense. For this two case, the have the vocal sound in a row, if you suddent del one of the circle, then the rhythm is weird. Fixed~!

01:34:167 - useless green line? No it's not. That green line is to stop the kiai time for awhile
01:34:257 - I think the kiai time should end at here.

(until 01:39:318 - ) Nope, sorry I wanna keep mine


[By my Side]
(from 02:55:240 - )
02:55:783 - 03:01:567 - 03:03:013 - 03:42:059 - again, why skip vocal sound here Yeah, fixed~!
02:59:036 - 02:59:127 - um... triple sound? not going to map it? Ok, fixed~!
03:21:271 (1) - can you draw it more symmetry?

SPOILER

That slider refers to the letter 'i' so that, one of the main frame of the slider needs to be straight
03:25:609 - skip strong beats again. I guess it's fine that way
03:40:251 (5,6,7) - 03:39:347 (2,3,4) - similar rhythm here, why the pattern so different For variations :3
(to the end)

I think this song is quite hard becasue the vocal sound is on blue while beat sound is on white. Anyway, good luck. Vocal sound is on the blue tick 'cuz I use low BPM for this song which means the blue tick is the replacement for the red tick if we doubled the BPM

Thanks for the mod~!

pkhg wrote:

cant confirm xd Fixed~!

[Easy]

1. 01:59:564 (2) - not having this 02:00:287 - as a clickable thing its weird It's fine I guess
2. 02:14:749 (1,2,3) - wheres the flow here. a better flow will make it more enjoyable for newbies I think the flow is kinda fine :3. It forms an indirect triangle flow
3. 02:46:564 (4,1) - ^ same, try http://puu.sh/m6cWE/5e8d89cc18.jpg Sure, fixed~!
4. 03:12:594 (5,1) - swap ncs Fixed~!

[Normal]

1. 00:07:127 (5) - what about using circles instead, the beat on its tail is clearly stronger than the one on its head also it fucks up your comboing. the nc must be on 00:07:489 - not on 00:08:393 (1) - Fixed~!
2. 01:01:719 (5,1) - swap nc then add one here 01:05:334 (3) - Fixed~!
3. 01:31:365 (4,1) - swaaaap nc Sorry, I wanna keep it
4. 01:33:534 (1,4) - ^ Nope, sorry, I wanna keep it
5. 01:35:703 (1,4) - ^ ^
6. 01:47:995 (4,1) - swap ncccc ^
7. 02:34:271 (1,2) - ^ Ok, fixed~!
8. 02:40:779 (4,1) - Sorry, I wanna keep it
9. 02:43:671 (1) - add nc ^
10. 02:50:902 (3,7) - swap nc Ummm.... Where to where?
11. 03:06:809 (5,1) - ^ Ok, fixed~!
12. 03:09:702 (5) - add nc Ok, fixed~!
13. 03:41:517 (4) - ^ Ok, fixed~!
14. 03:58:870 (4,1) - swap nc Fixed~!
15. 04:01:762 (4,1) - ^ Fixed~!
16. 04:30:685 (1,2,3) - spacing, just move (2) a bit and its fixed Fixed~!

[Hard]

1. 00:22:493 (1,1,1,1) - you dont need all those ncs The SV is changing, so I should add NC on each sliders
2. 00:27:012 (1,2) - swap nc. i guess u already noticed what im trying to say by looking at the ncs i pointed out on normal. your nc pattern is mostly every 2 measures (the large white tick in the timeline) so take a look over the map so i dont need to point out everything xd Ok XD
3. 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - you know Yes I know xP
4. 02:14:026 (5,6) - quite questionable. if u silenced the tails that means that theres no sound on them, its kinda over emphasized. 1/2 sliders do it better I wanna do something different with the rhytm without overmapping, so yeah
5. 04:34:120 (1,1,1,1) - u know Yes I know xP xP

[By My Side]

• 
  why not "By my side" with lowercase m and s so it fits the song title Fixed~!

1. 00:30:356 (7,9) - these are overmapped It's fine I guess
2. 00:41:925 (6,8) - ^ ^
3. 01:16:632 (9,11) - ^
4. 01:28:201 (11,13) - ^ ^
5. 01:33:986 (5,7) - ^ ^
6. 01:45:555 (9,11) - ^ ^
7. 02:31:831 (10,12) - ^ and well its the same on every stream so check them I guess overmapping a bit is fine if it's in order to give the map a nice flow

gl

Thanks for the mod~!

CaptainMimi wrote:

BYE MY SIDE:
00:22:131 (2) - Triangles doe Fixed~!
02:19:449 (2) - ^ Nope, sorry.... I guess those triangle looks fine :3

I didn't get to finish looking over and i apologize for that but i recommend you look into your AI Mod i think your size is a bit big, anyway good luck with your mapping~ Well, I've done everything I could to compress the size of this mapset, so I guess it's fine now :3

Thanks for the mod~!

pieguyn wrote:

suggestion, only change if you feel like it
should fix
unrankable

[By My Side]
00:22:493 (3,5,7,9,11) - highly recommend NC for patterns like this. different color look beautiful on overlap notes, and it makes it easier to distinguish 1/2 vs. 1/1 spacing. Fixed~!
00:32:616 (7) - x108 y360 more even imo Fixed~!
00:38:581 (1) - this played odd for me bc you make a jump pattern here, and there's as much emphasis on this as there are previous notes, but distance is low. imo placement more like x96 y320 (don't forget adjust spacing/direction after) feel more natural to play. Ok, I'll do something else :3
00:45:450 (8) - i'd make distance same as distance of 00:44:004 (6,7) , for pattern. Fixed~!
00:46:354 (9) - how about x408 y260? make angle same as 00:44:908 (7,8) make more pattern sense imo. Fixed~!
00:49:065 (3) - i would place it "down" for circle flow... example http://puu.sh/m6PIN/78c707fe1c.jpg Nope, sorry ;w;
00:56:477 (2,3) - make 1/2 slider instead? imo starting jump at downbeat plays better, now it starts on very soft vocal (n in "do|n|na") which feel unintuitive. Sorry, I prefer notes better ;w;
01:08:227 (8,11) - NC really should be switched imo... fit better vocal, and emphasize new rhythm. Fixed~!
01:40:945 (3,4) - this jump felt really big for me, it also makes the spacing at 01:41:849 (6,7) confusing since it's lower spacing with 1/1 rhythm. i'd recommend make some kind of 1.7x pattern here fit with ur usual DS. Sorry, no change ;w;
01:51:611 (1) - what do you think of 1/1 slider + note instead? seem more natural and also make a better lead in to 01:52:334 (3) to not skip this beat.
02:20:352 - add note? Nope, sorry ;w;
02:23:787 (4,5) - this feel very odd for me bc spacing is low, right after a jump pattern. add note at 02:23:968 ? Fixed~!
02:34:994 (9,1) - swap NC? Ok, fixed~!
02:42:406 (6) - x312 y196? more even placement Fixed~!
03:35:732 (7) - imo make it go "left" to continue flow from 03:35:370 (5,6) is more intuitive. Fixed~!
03:36:997 (2,3,4,5) - this position was very unexpected for me... for one, making a placement like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195053 would make much more structure sense (current placement seems random, or i didn't get reason for it). but i also thought the direction didn't flow very well. imo, smth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195065 would be more intuitive (don't forget fix spacing after). Did something different :3
04:08:993 (5) - i think you were going for 1.7x DS here but this is noticeably further from 04:08:631 (3,4) . I think I've already use the DS properly o3o
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - i would remove these. you're making a soft part here, so start with "soft" feeling at 04:19:116 (4,5) feel more natural. Sorry, I think I'll keep mine

[Hard]
00:24:662 (2,1) - pattern like this look more beautiful imo when each formation has its own color, even if it breaks NC pattern. would recommend swap NC here. ......... I surely wanna to, but QAT are kinda scary ;w;
01:32:630 (2,3) - should be stacked? same as 02:47:829 (4,1) - 04:03:932 (7,1) - . Nope, sorry. I wanna make something different in this part :3
01:48:357 (2,3) - i wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 stack like this when all the other ones were 1/2. it's kind of difficult to see, and imo players shouldn't have to watch closely for a slow relax song like this. Fixed~!
03:31:394 (3) - i would add NC here to indicate rhythm change. Fixed~!
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - same as By My Side. also applies to lower diffs. Sorry, I wanna keep it
04:36:289 (2,1) - same as 00:24:662 (2,1) ......... QAT are scary ;w;

lower diffs look fine at a glance.
it's mostly pattern/flow suggestion. map seems mostly fine.
i hope it was useful, good luck >3<

Thanks for the mod~!

Updated with SB~!:3

Thanks Kanari <3

Hello, sorry for being late but I was unexpectedly busy these dayzz

[General]

1. The AR of Easy is 2,5 and it increases to 5 in Normal and to 7 in Hard. I suggest you make it AR 3 so the gap between the diffs is more even.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:489 (1,2) - Blanket can improve
2. 01:09:673 (6) - NC?
3. 01:55:949 (6) - ^

[10nya's Light Insane]

1. 00:06:585 (1,2) - Change NCs? I saw this a lot, so I don't know if you actually did it on porpuse
2. 00:37:677 (1) - Wouldn't it be better if you stack it with 00:36:954 (2) and make it blanket 00:37:135 (3)?
3. 01:34:257 (4) - NC?
4. 01:57:033 (4) - The end almost touches 01:56:310 (2). Turn it a little to the right.
5. 02:49:456 (4) - NC?

[By my side]

1. 00:37:496 (4) - Ctrl + g? Better flow
2. 00:42:196 (1) - Curve it a little more to the left.
   Reference

   
3. 01:31:907 - A circle is missing here. I think it's a better idea to follow the vocals.
4. 01:46:368 - Same^
5. 02:34:271 (8,2) - They are nearly overlapping. Move 02:35:356 (2) to the right a little.
6. 03:28:501 (5,6) - Yea, 03:30:309 (6) is not exactly in the center and this one is noticable.

That's it. Great job with this, best of luck!

xDarxen wrote:

Hello, sorry for being late but I was unexpectedly busy these dayzz

[General]

1. The AR of Easy is 2,5 and it increases to 5 in Normal and to 7 in Hard. I suggest you make it AR 3 so the gap between the diffs is more even. Ok, fixed~!

[Easy]

1. 00:07:489 (1,2) - Blanket can improve That blanket seems fine for me :3
2. 01:09:673 (6) - NC? Ok, fixed~!
3. 01:55:949 (6) - ^ Nope, sorry ;w;

[By my side]

1. 00:37:496 (4) - Ctrl + g? Better flow That flow seems fine for me
2. 00:42:196 (1) - Curve it a little more to the left.
   Reference

   
   Ok, fixed~!
   
3. 01:31:907 - A circle is missing here. I think it's a better idea to follow the vocals. I wanna follow the music, sorry.... ;w;
4. 01:46:368 - Same^ Nope, sorry
5. 02:34:271 (8,2) - They are nearly overlapping. Move 02:35:356 (2) to the right a little. Fixed~!
6. 03:28:501 (5,6) - Yea, 03:30:309 (6) is not exactly in the center and this one is noticable. Fixed~!

That's it. Great job with this, best of luck!

Thanks for the mod~!

Updated~!

Whoopsie double posting

thanks for modding! sorry cant mentioned all but i fixed 80% of all mods~!


sorry for late! ;w;

Easy

1. 02:01:372 - make a 1/2 slider here instead of 02:01:733 (3) - ?
2. 04:18:393 (1) - delete this? it belongs to the former part of the song but not folloing

Normal

1. 04:18:393 (1,2) - same mentioned in Easy

Hard

1. 01:30:642 (5) - why end the slider at down beat?
2. 01:45:103 (1,5) - swap nc
3. 03:24:163 (3) - nc?
4. 03:30:309 (6) - ^
5. 04:36:470 (1) - drum finish instead?

By my side

1. 00:46:354 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the distance here is quite confusing, not good to comfirm 1/2 and 1/4
2. 01:08:227 (1,2) - try ctrl+g? a better flow for me
3. 01:41:126 (4,5) - stack? a small distance doesnt make any sense
4. 03:24:163 (3) - nc
5. 03:30:309 (6) - ^

it seems that it's your first time to map an Insane diff, looks like a new mapper lol
it's just ok and i dont want to be too strict, so call me after you check this light mod~

Fixed everything (> w <)/
And updated 10nya's Light Insane as well~
Everything is updated~!

I dont know who makes the lyric sb until I found this above.
Japanese characters is not the same as Chinese characters, simplified Chinese is wrong. "观览车" should be "観覧車".

So I try to find and post the whole lyric here, please fix the mistakes orz.

「By your side feat.西野カナ」
作詞∶WISE & 西野カナ
作曲∶Jeff Miyahara/Yuichi Hayashida
歌∶WISE
I wanna be with you　どこにいたって
気持ちはずっと　離れない
I understand　俺　 　たまに身勝手
困らせた事もあったよね　Baby
それでも夢中　　キミ　会えなくて
携帯で連絡重ねて
すれ違ってもまた戻って　そう絆深まってく
So we'll be alright gonna be alright
そう信じてきた
you make me feel so fine you make me smile
どんな時だって　yeah
ずっとふたり愛を繋ぎ　ここまできたから
もう1人じゃない　夢の中だけじゃない
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない　この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
I'll be there By your side…
あの日　promise　約束したっけ
これからも　君離さない
したくないミス　少し粋がって
買ったネックレスあげたよね　Lady
恋のprocess　デート繰り返して
観覧車　唇重ねて
回る景色を思い出して
もう胸　熱くなってる
so we'll be alright gonna be alright
そう感じてきた
you make me feel so fine you make me smile
どこにいたって　yeah
ずっとふたり　未来信じ　　ここまできたから
もう1人じゃない　夢の中だけじゃない
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない　この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
I'll be there By your side…
何が起きても　いつも君のとなりで
力になるよ　My Baby yeah yeah
もう1人では泣かない　君がいれば怖くない
なんでも乗り越えられるよ
いつも　I'll be by your side
君を守りたい
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない　この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
もう1人じゃない　夢の中だけじゃない
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない　この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
I'll be there By your side…