Thanks for the mod~!DylanSan wrote:
Hello from my m4m queue
General:
00:01:343 - Mapped before red line? you could add a red timing point at 00:01:343 - to not screw your other timings too Nope, sorry.... I prefer to start it at 00:01:705 since the strong beat started there :3Hard00:29:904 (4,6) - I'd make these on oposite sides of eachother Nope, sorry.... I prefer to stack it :3
00:46:535 (3) - I feel like this blankets way too close Fixed~!
01:13:288 (1,4) - These stacks are inconsistent, do one or the other It's playable, so it's fine :3
01:30:461 - I clearly hear "mo" here Yes, but I map the music here
01:31:365 - Here should start a slider not end one No change, sorry ;w;
01:32:449 - "ra" note Okay, fixed~!
01:32:630 - "nai" 3/4th slider Okay, fixed~!
01:53:237 - "to" note Sorry.... But I wanna map ''ku'' instead
01:53:418 - "Kuri" kickslider Nope, sorry.....
I hope you know what i mean, The vocals are either not done at all or just done barely Yeah, 'cuz in this diff I wanna map the music for the most
02:14:026 (5,6) - How about kickslider instead? Nope, sorry.....
02:22:522 - There's a vocal here Yeah, but like what I said, I wanna to map the music in this diff :3
02:50:179 (2,3,4) - Spacing inconsistency while the rest of the map is really consistent Oh right, fixed~!
02:51:625 - There's a vocal starting here, not ending Sorry, no change
03:18:017 - Pretty sure the "Yeahh" Ends here Yeah, but the music end at 03:18:378By my side00:01:343 - needs to be mapped imo like 10nya's Side. Nope, sorry.....
00:08:754 (3,4) - Blanket slightly off That blanket looks fine for me :3
00:30:356 (7,9) - feels unfit, 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - feels more like a triplet and a note 1/5th later No change, sorry....
00:41:744 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
01:33:715 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
01:45:284 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ ^
03:12:052 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ ^
03:28:501 (5,6) - This blanket's offThat blanket looks fine for me :3
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Ouch! (´△｀)Dyl-Byl wrote:
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From my queue 
I'll do my best~
Not many things worth mentioning, good job with the mapset P.S I love the storyboard (Also nice slider art 
)
I'll do my best~SPOILEREasy
Why would you use BSD 1/8 here? O_o
03:08:255 (2,4) - - I find these two sliders odd as they reverse on a blue tick and they feel a bit off beat. I find shortening them by one tick (so the reverse point is on a red tick) better sounding and more logical. (I think there were similar sliders elsewhere but... For this section at least they feel off to me, you should check them just in case)
Normal
00:23:396 (1) - Not really an error but I think a spinner could work well here and would make the flow better (just my opinion, you can ignore this)
Hard
01:44:922 (6,1) - Why not start new combo on the next note?
02:19:629 (9) - This note is kinda confusing in my opinion so you could consider removing it
10nya's Side
01:51:430 (6,1) - I find the distance gap a bit too big since the jump comes pretty much out of the blue
02:31:741 (4) - The overlap here isn't that nice at least in visual perspective
03:21:271 (1) - Might as well add a note here
Why would you use BSD 1/8 here? O_o
03:08:255 (2,4) - - I find these two sliders odd as they reverse on a blue tick and they feel a bit off beat. I find shortening them by one tick (so the reverse point is on a red tick) better sounding and more logical. (I think there were similar sliders elsewhere but... For this section at least they feel off to me, you should check them just in case)
00:23:396 (1) - Not really an error but I think a spinner could work well here and would make the flow better (just my opinion, you can ignore this)
01:44:922 (6,1) - Why not start new combo on the next note?
02:19:629 (9) - This note is kinda confusing in my opinion so you could consider removing it
01:51:430 (6,1) - I find the distance gap a bit too big since the jump comes pretty much out of the blue
02:31:741 (4) - The overlap here isn't that nice at least in visual perspective
03:21:271 (1) - Might as well add a note here
Not many things worth mentioning, good job with the mapset
P.S I love the storyboard (Also nice slider art )from my queue~
[General]
[General]
- the pink and purple combo colors are really similar, can you rearrange the color sequence so they don't appear next to each other?
In general, I would suggest that you follow the vocals more in the parts where the drums are absent to eliminate some of the pauses in the beatmap
- 00:05:862 (1) - since you're already using extended sliders, you might as well end this slider at 00:06:495 - mute it, and place a circle at 00:06:585 - to match the strong piano beat
- 00:10:201 (6) - 1/8 slider is just strange. why not keep it simple and stack a circle on top of the slider?
- 00:11:647 (3,4,5) - I barely hear the piano sustain. I think normal circles work better here
- 00:12:731 (1) - same thing as first comment
- 00:21:047 (6) - I feel (6) is getting too much emphasis at the expense of (1). maybe move (6) to [205, 113] for a square pattern (might need to move up 00:21:227 (1,2,3,4) a little then)
- 00:22:130 (2,4,6,8,10) - this can be polished a little bit. I'd recommend making a placeholder slider from (2) to (10) and moving (4,6,8) so they lie on that slider
- 00:47:800 (6,1) - misleading spacing. maybe use smaller spacing but sharper angle to emphasize (1)
- 01:08:227 (8) - NC here sinstead of 01:08:950 (1) ?
- 01:30:461 and 01:31:907 - I think it's better to fill in these gaps with notes. the drum sounds are too weak to justify these pauses imo
- 01:37:149 (1,1,1,1) - personally I think curvy sliders fit better with the style of the map
- 01:51:611 (1) - rotate or flatten this slider to flow more smoothly from 01:51:430 (8) -
- 02:33:368 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhytmically. there's no drums here, so you might as well follow the vocals
- 02:59:036 - add a note here
- 03:37:178 (3,4) - ctrl+g for better flow
- 03:52:362 (8) - eh, you're forcing the player to jump left and immediately slide right. maybe move this on top of 03:51:459 (5) instead and blanket around 03:51:639 (6) for better flow
- 00:55:211 (4) - NC here?
- 02:27:764 (1,2) - this jumps feels a little excessive since the flow is already jerky here. something like ~2.2x spacing works better imo
- 03:14:763 (5) - remove NC, to keep the 2/1 pattern?
- 03:33:563 (3) - flow doesn't feel very nice. maybe try this instead? http://puu.sh/lZF0U/46b60f8ece.jpg
- 03:54:170 (1,2,3) - perfect blankets around (2) look better
- 04:32:673 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is a little hard to read. consider changing to something else?
- Pretty nice diff ^^
Hello from my modding queue
[General]
Add a source if there is one.
Isn't that a 'Speed Up Ver.' or 'Nightcore Ver.' ?
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10nya's Side]
00:18:335 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
01:27:930 (4,1) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider.
01:40:041 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:45:826 (1,3) - ^
01:51:430 (6) - Stack this on 01:50:164 (3) (Not needed)
01:57:395 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle of this -> Like this it looks much better.
02:08:964 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
02:26:318 (1,2) - ^
02:35:718 (3,1) - ^
02:40:056 (3,1) - ^
03:38:443 (5,1) - ^
03:40:070 (1,3) - ^ (Nod needed)
03:57:966 (3,4) - Fix blanket at the end of the slider.
[
By My Side]
00:36:412 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:18:349 (6) - I like it like this much more. (Not needed)
02:43:671 (1,3) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider.
02:48:733 (3,1) - I dont know if this should be blanket. If so then correct it.
03:32:117 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make a good star from this. Choose 2 points and then rotarate it to 72 or 144.
I love your maps!
Good luck with ranking
Have a star!
[General]
Add a source if there is one.
Isn't that a 'Speed Up Ver.' or 'Nightcore Ver.' ?
[
00:18:335 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
01:27:930 (4,1) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider.
01:40:041 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:45:826 (1,3) - ^
01:51:430 (6) - Stack this on 01:50:164 (3) (Not needed)
01:57:395 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle of this -> Like this it looks much better.
02:08:964 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
02:26:318 (1,2) - ^
02:35:718 (3,1) - ^
02:40:056 (3,1) - ^
03:38:443 (5,1) - ^
03:40:070 (1,3) - ^ (Nod needed)
03:57:966 (3,4) - Fix blanket at the end of the slider.
[
00:36:412 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
01:18:349 (6) - I like it like this much more. (Not needed)
02:43:671 (1,3) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider.
02:48:733 (3,1) - I dont know if this should be blanket. If so then correct it.
03:32:117 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make a good star from this. Choose 2 points and then rotarate it to 72 or 144.
I love your maps!
Good luck with ranking
Have a star!
Just 2 diffs because 4:36 is quite long. q-q
[By My Side]
• 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You know that this is overmapping? 00:30:356 (7,9) these two don't have a sound, and I think a normal triplet would be way better. And this appeared quite often, not gonna point them out.
• 00:39:123 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm feels and fits better.
• 00:42:919 (3,5) - This blanket could be way clearer, and it really seems like they're even touching.
• 00:47:258 (4) - Why not a slider here? :c
• 01:06:780 (6,7) - Shouldn't this be the same as 01:04:792 (2,3) rhythm-wise?
• 01:08:227 (8,9,10,1,2) - Before you mapped some little jumps perfectly to the vocals and here you suddenly map to the drums, which I really dislike.
• 01:41:126 (4,5) - Strange custom stack. oo
• 02:20:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why not the same as in the beginning? Some consistency would be cool imo.
• 02:29:029 (7,2) - Barely visible, but still annoying for me.
• 02:34:271 (8,1) - Touching.
• 02:52:348 (1) - Uhm, I guess this spinner BG needs to be way larger.
[Hard]
• 01:08:407 (2,3,5,6) - This is really weird because of the low AR.
• 01:17:626 (3,6) - Visible overlap.
• 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - Mapping to the vocals would be better because the sounds these are mapped to are barely hearable.
• 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You know that this is overmapping? 00:30:356 (7,9) these two don't have a sound, and I think a normal triplet would be way better. And this appeared quite often, not gonna point them out.
• 00:39:123 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm feels and fits better.
• 00:42:919 (3,5) - This blanket could be way clearer, and it really seems like they're even touching.
• 00:47:258 (4) - Why not a slider here? :c
• 01:06:780 (6,7) - Shouldn't this be the same as 01:04:792 (2,3) rhythm-wise?
• 01:08:227 (8,9,10,1,2) - Before you mapped some little jumps perfectly to the vocals and here you suddenly map to the drums, which I really dislike.
• 01:41:126 (4,5) - Strange custom stack. oo
• 02:20:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why not the same as in the beginning? Some consistency would be cool imo.
• 02:29:029 (7,2) - Barely visible, but still annoying for me.
• 02:34:271 (8,1) - Touching.
• 02:52:348 (1) - Uhm, I guess this spinner BG needs to be way larger.
• 01:08:407 (2,3,5,6) - This is really weird because of the low AR.
• 01:17:626 (3,6) - Visible overlap.
• 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - Mapping to the vocals would be better because the sounds these are mapped to are barely hearable.
Ticket spent.
[Hard]
I think this diff generally SV quite low, such that the 1/4 slider is quite short 00:30:085 (5) -
but anyway, it still works
00:23:035 (1) - why here 1/4 slider? What I heard is like this
00:39:846 - missing vocal sound
01:08:769 - ^, I am not hating missing some of the circle, but at least need to make sense. For this two case, the have the vocal sound in a row, if you suddent del one of the circle, then the rhythm is weird.
01:34:167 - useless green line?
01:34:257 - I think the kiai time should end at here.
(until 01:39:318 - )
[10nya's Side]
(From 01:39:318 - )
01:45:374 - 02:08:151 - 02:43:219 - here is a clear and strong beat sound, why skip it? I think making this to a stream is more fun to play.
01:50:887 - beat here is strong, I think it is better to make the timing clickable, just like
02:26:679 - here is another vocal, I think the slider should end at here.
02:49:456 (4) - nc due to big tick
02:49:637 (1) - you can move 1/8 beat before, it is a common note-before-spinner pattern.
This diff I think it is close to rank.
(until 02:55:240 - )
[By my Side]
(from 02:55:240 - )
02:55:783 - 03:01:567 - 03:03:013 - 03:42:059 - again, why skip vocal sound here
02:59:036 - 02:59:127 - um... triple sound? not going to map it?
03:21:271 (1) - can you draw it more symmetry?
03:25:609 - skip strong beats again.
03:40:251 (5,6,7) - 03:39:347 (2,3,4) - similar rhythm here, why the pattern so different
(to the end)
I think this song is quite hard becasue the vocal sound is on blue while beat sound is on white. Anyway, good luck.
cant confirm xd
[Easy]
- 01:59:564 (2) - not having this 02:00:287 - as a clickable thing its weird
- 02:14:749 (1,2,3) - wheres the flow here. a better flow will make it more enjoyable for newbies
- 02:46:564 (4,1) - ^ same, try http://puu.sh/m6cWE/5e8d89cc18.jpg
- 03:12:594 (5,1) - swap ncs
- 00:07:127 (5) - what about using circles instead, the beat on its tail is clearly stronger than the one on its head also it fucks up your comboing. the nc must be on 00:07:489 - not on 00:08:393 (1) -
- 01:01:719 (5,1) - swap nc then add one here 01:05:334 (3) -
- 01:31:365 (4,1) - swaaaap nc
- 01:33:534 (1,4) - ^
- 01:35:703 (1,4) - ^
- 01:47:995 (4,1) - swap ncccc
- 02:34:271 (1,2) - ^
- 02:40:779 (4,1) -
- 02:43:671 (1) - add nc
- 02:50:902 (3,7) - swap nc
- 03:06:809 (5,1) - ^
- 03:09:702 (5) - add nc
- 03:41:517 (4) - ^
- 03:58:870 (4,1) - swap nc
- 04:01:762 (4,1) - ^
- 04:30:685 (1,2,3) - spacing, just move (2) a bit and its fixed
- 00:22:493 (1,1,1,1) - you dont need all those ncs
- 00:27:012 (1,2) - swap nc. i guess u already noticed what im trying to say by looking at the ncs i pointed out on normal. your nc pattern is mostly every 2 measures (the large white tick in the timeline) so take a look over the map so i dont need to point out everything xd
- 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - you know
- 02:14:026 (5,6) - quite questionable. if u silenced the tails that means that theres no sound on them, its kinda over emphasized. 1/2 sliders do it better
- 04:34:120 (1,1,1,1) - u know
- 03:43:324 (1,1) - thats barely visible also ugly
- 04:03:932 (1) - not ending it on a yellow tick would be good
why not "By my side" with lowercase m and s so it fits the song title
- 00:30:356 (7,9) - these are overmapped
- 00:41:925 (6,8) - ^
- 01:16:632 (9,11) -
- 01:28:201 (11,13) - ^
- 01:33:986 (5,7) - ^
- 01:45:555 (9,11) - ^
- 02:31:831 (10,12) - ^ and well its the same on every stream so check them
10NYA:
00:08:393 (3) - Fix Triangle
00:12:370 (3) - Maybe put below 00:11:285 (3)
00:14:358 (4) - Fix Triangle
00:44:908 (5) - ^
00:50:873 (1) - This looks strange kind of ruins the flow, try something like: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TukLk1O.png
01:18:892 (3) - Fix Triangle
02:27:041 (2) - Fix Blanket
03:01:748 (3) - ^
04:14:415 (4) - Fix Triangle
BYE MY SIDE:
00:22:131 (2) - Triangles doe
02:19:449 (2) - ^
I didn't get to finish looking over and i apologize for that but i recommend you look into your AI Mod i think your size is a bit big, anyway good luck with your mapping~
00:08:393 (3) - Fix Triangle
00:12:370 (3) - Maybe put below 00:11:285 (3)
00:14:358 (4) - Fix Triangle
00:44:908 (5) - ^
00:50:873 (1) - This looks strange kind of ruins the flow, try something like: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TukLk1O.png
01:18:892 (3) - Fix Triangle
02:27:041 (2) - Fix Blanket
03:01:748 (3) - ^
04:14:415 (4) - Fix Triangle
BYE MY SIDE:
00:22:131 (2) - Triangles doe
02:19:449 (2) - ^
I didn't get to finish looking over and i apologize for that but i recommend you look into your AI Mod i think your size is a bit big, anyway good luck with your mapping~
suggestion, only change if you feel like it
should fix
unrankable
[By My Side]
00:22:493 (3,5,7,9,11) - highly recommend NC for patterns like this. different color look beautiful on overlap notes, and it makes it easier to distinguish 1/2 vs. 1/1 spacing.
00:32:616 (7) - x108 y360 more even imo
00:38:581 (1) - this played odd for me bc you make a jump pattern here, and there's as much emphasis on this as there are previous notes, but distance is low. imo placement more like x96 y320 (don't forget adjust spacing/direction after) feel more natural to play.
00:45:450 (8) - i'd make distance same as distance of 00:44:004 (6,7) , for pattern.
00:46:354 (9) - how about x408 y260? make angle same as 00:44:908 (7,8) make more pattern sense imo.
00:49:065 (3) - i would place it "down" for circle flow... example http://puu.sh/m6PIN/78c707fe1c.jpg
00:56:477 (2,3) - make 1/2 slider instead? imo starting jump at downbeat plays better, now it starts on very soft vocal (n in "do|n|na") which feel unintuitive.
01:08:227 (8,11) - NC really should be switched imo... fit better vocal, and emphasize new rhythm.
01:40:945 (3,4) - this jump felt really big for me, it also makes the spacing at 01:41:849 (6,7) confusing since it's lower spacing with 1/1 rhythm. i'd recommend make some kind of 1.7x pattern here fit with ur usual DS.
01:51:611 (1) - what do you think of 1/1 slider + note instead? seem more natural and also make a better lead in to 01:52:334 (3) to not skip this beat.
02:20:352 - add note?
02:23:787 (4,5) - this feel very odd for me bc spacing is low, right after a jump pattern. add note at 02:23:968 ?
02:34:994 (9,1) - swap NC?
02:42:406 (6) - x312 y196? more even placement
03:35:732 (7) - imo make it go "left" to continue flow from 03:35:370 (5,6) is more intuitive.
03:36:997 (2,3,4,5) - this position was very unexpected for me... for one, making a placement like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195053 would make much more structure sense (current placement seems random, or i didn't get reason for it). but i also thought the direction didn't flow very well. imo, smth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195065 would be more intuitive (don't forget fix spacing after).
04:08:993 (5) - i think you were going for 1.7x DS here but this is noticeably further from 04:08:631 (3,4) .
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - i would remove these. you're making a soft part here, so start with "soft" feeling at 04:19:116 (4,5) feel more natural.
[10nya's Side]
03:09:882 (2,3) - it's not stacked on 03:08:979 (3) if it's what you were going for. but personally i feel make it same distance as 03:09:521 (4,1) is more playable
03:11:509 (2,3,4) - this seems out of place with the sharp jump/playable nature of the map. how do you feel about sth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195110 instead?
04:05:016 (2) - intentionally not equidistant from 04:05:378 (4) ? move up 1 grid would fix it.
04:22:550 (2,1,2,3) - whistle would feel sooo much better on blue tick here imo...
04:29:239 (5) - if i'm understanding your pattern correctly, there should be whistle on head here.
04:31:950 (5,1) - not sure i got reason for switch whistle here but sounds good enough
it's really fun ~
[Hard]
00:24:662 (2,1) - pattern like this look more beautiful imo when each formation has its own color, even if it breaks NC pattern. would recommend swap NC here.
01:32:630 (2,3) - should be stacked? same as 02:47:829 (4,1) - 04:03:932 (7,1) - .
01:48:357 (2,3) - i wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 stack like this when all the other ones were 1/2. it's kind of difficult to see, and imo players shouldn't have to watch closely for a slow relax song like this.
03:31:394 (3) - i would add NC here to indicate rhythm change.
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - same as By My Side. also applies to lower diffs.
04:36:289 (2,1) - same as 00:24:662 (2,1)
lower diffs look fine at a glance.
it's mostly pattern/flow suggestion. map seems mostly fine.
i hope it was useful, good luck >3<
should fix
unrankable
[By My Side]
00:22:493 (3,5,7,9,11) - highly recommend NC for patterns like this. different color look beautiful on overlap notes, and it makes it easier to distinguish 1/2 vs. 1/1 spacing.
00:32:616 (7) - x108 y360 more even imo
00:38:581 (1) - this played odd for me bc you make a jump pattern here, and there's as much emphasis on this as there are previous notes, but distance is low. imo placement more like x96 y320 (don't forget adjust spacing/direction after) feel more natural to play.
00:45:450 (8) - i'd make distance same as distance of 00:44:004 (6,7) , for pattern.
00:46:354 (9) - how about x408 y260? make angle same as 00:44:908 (7,8) make more pattern sense imo.
00:49:065 (3) - i would place it "down" for circle flow... example http://puu.sh/m6PIN/78c707fe1c.jpg
00:56:477 (2,3) - make 1/2 slider instead? imo starting jump at downbeat plays better, now it starts on very soft vocal (n in "do|n|na") which feel unintuitive.
01:08:227 (8,11) - NC really should be switched imo... fit better vocal, and emphasize new rhythm.
01:40:945 (3,4) - this jump felt really big for me, it also makes the spacing at 01:41:849 (6,7) confusing since it's lower spacing with 1/1 rhythm. i'd recommend make some kind of 1.7x pattern here fit with ur usual DS.
01:51:611 (1) - what do you think of 1/1 slider + note instead? seem more natural and also make a better lead in to 01:52:334 (3) to not skip this beat.
02:20:352 - add note?
02:23:787 (4,5) - this feel very odd for me bc spacing is low, right after a jump pattern. add note at 02:23:968 ?
02:34:994 (9,1) - swap NC?
02:42:406 (6) - x312 y196? more even placement
03:35:732 (7) - imo make it go "left" to continue flow from 03:35:370 (5,6) is more intuitive.
03:36:997 (2,3,4,5) - this position was very unexpected for me... for one, making a placement like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195053 would make much more structure sense (current placement seems random, or i didn't get reason for it). but i also thought the direction didn't flow very well. imo, smth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195065 would be more intuitive (don't forget fix spacing after).
04:08:993 (5) - i think you were going for 1.7x DS here but this is noticeably further from 04:08:631 (3,4) .
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - i would remove these. you're making a soft part here, so start with "soft" feeling at 04:19:116 (4,5) feel more natural.
[10nya's Side]
03:09:882 (2,3) - it's not stacked on 03:08:979 (3) if it's what you were going for. but personally i feel make it same distance as 03:09:521 (4,1) is more playable
03:11:509 (2,3,4) - this seems out of place with the sharp jump/playable nature of the map. how do you feel about sth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195110 instead?
04:05:016 (2) - intentionally not equidistant from 04:05:378 (4) ? move up 1 grid would fix it.
04:22:550 (2,1,2,3) - whistle would feel sooo much better on blue tick here imo...
04:29:239 (5) - if i'm understanding your pattern correctly, there should be whistle on head here.
04:31:950 (5,1) - not sure i got reason for switch whistle here but sounds good enough
it's really fun ~
[Hard]
00:24:662 (2,1) - pattern like this look more beautiful imo when each formation has its own color, even if it breaks NC pattern. would recommend swap NC here.
01:32:630 (2,3) - should be stacked? same as 02:47:829 (4,1) - 04:03:932 (7,1) - .
01:48:357 (2,3) - i wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 stack like this when all the other ones were 1/2. it's kind of difficult to see, and imo players shouldn't have to watch closely for a slow relax song like this.
03:31:394 (3) - i would add NC here to indicate rhythm change.
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - same as By My Side. also applies to lower diffs.
04:36:289 (2,1) - same as 00:24:662 (2,1)
lower diffs look fine at a glance.
it's mostly pattern/flow suggestion. map seems mostly fine.
i hope it was useful, good luck >3<
sb done~ http://puu.sh/m7sML.zip
Topic Starter
Thanks (>///<)7Metaku wrote:
From my queueSPOILEREasy
Why would you use BSD 1/8 here? O_o Well..... Just some habit of mine
03:08:255 (2,4) - - I find these two sliders odd as they reverse on a blue tick and they feel a bit off beat. I find shortening them by one tick (so the reverse point is on a red tick) better sounding and more logical. (I think there were similar sliders elsewhere but... For this section at least they feel off to me, you should check them just in case) I guess it's fine since the vocal stopped at the blue tick
Normal
00:23:396 (1) - Not really an error but I think a spinner could work well here and would make the flow better (just my opinion, you can ignore this) I think the spinner is too short if I started it there, so nope sorryHard
01:44:922 (6,1) - Why not start new combo on the next note? Sure, fixed~!
02:19:629 (9) - This note is kinda confusing in my opinion so you could consider removing it There's a beat of the music here, so I couldn't ignore this note, sorry
Not many things worth mentioning, good job with the mapset
Thanks for the mod~!
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!MokouSmoke wrote:
from my queue~
[General][By Modem's Side]
- the pink and purple combo colors are really similar, can you rearrange the color sequence so they don't appear next to each other? I guess it's fine that way
In general, I would suggest that you follow the vocals more in the parts where the drums are absent to eliminate some of the pauses in the beatmapHope that helps and good luck! It really help me! Thank you very much!
- 00:05:862 (1) - since you're already using extended sliders, you might as well end this slider at 00:06:495 - mute it, and place a circle at 00:06:585 - to match the strong piano beat Fixed~!
- 00:10:201 (6) - 1/8 slider is just strange. why not keep it simple and stack a circle on top of the slider? Cuz when I repeat this part -> 00:10:291 in 75% Playback rate, I heard quite low piano sound that was suitable to be mapped
- 00:11:647 (3,4,5) - I barely hear the piano sustain. I think normal circles work better here Sorry, I think 1/6 sliders are better here
- 00:12:731 (1) - same thing as first comment Nice, but I think it's better to keep it like that
- 00:21:047 (6) - I feel (6) is getting too much emphasis at the expense of (1). maybe move (6) to [205, 113] for a square pattern (might need to move up 00:21:227 (1,2,3,4) a little then) Fixed~!
- 00:22:130 (2,4,6,8,10) - this can be polished a little bit. I'd recommend making a placeholder slider from (2) to (10) and moving (4,6,8) so they lie on that slider Fixed~!
- 00:47:800 (6,1) - misleading spacing. maybe use smaller spacing but sharper angle to emphasize (1) I guess that kind of jump is fine :3
- 01:08:227 (8) - NC here sinstead of 01:08:950 (1) ? Fixed~!
- 01:30:461 and 01:31:907 - I think it's better to fill in these gaps with notes. the drum sounds are too weak to justify these pauses imo Sure, added~!
- 01:37:149 (1,1,1,1) - personally I think curvy sliders fit better with the style of the map Sorry, I think I'll keep those straight sliders
- 01:51:611 (1) - rotate or flatten this slider to flow more smoothly from 01:51:430 (8) - Sorry, I'll keep that slider ^^
- 02:33:368 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhytmically. there's no drums here, so you might as well follow the vocals Nope, sorry, I still want to follow the drum before following the vocal
- 02:59:036 - add a note here Sure, added~!
- 03:37:178 (3,4) - ctrl+g for better flow Fixed~!
- 03:52:362 (8) - eh, you're forcing the player to jump left and immediately slide right. maybe move this on top of 03:51:459 (5) instead and blanket around 03:51:639 (6) for better flow Fixed~!
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!Azulae wrote:
Hello from my modding queue
[General]
Add a source if there is one. ............ Sadly there's none ;w;
Isn't that a 'Speed Up Ver.' or 'Nightcore Ver.' ? Nope, it's the original version ^^
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00:36:412 (1,2) - Fix blanket. I guess that blanket is fine o3o
01:18:349 (6) - I like it like this much more. (Not needed) Me too >w<. Fixed~!
02:43:671 (1,3) - Fix blanket at the end of the second slider. Fixed~!
02:48:733 (3,1) - I dont know if this should be blanket. If so then correct it. Yes, it's a blanket, but I guess it's fine to keep it like that
03:32:117 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make a good star from this. Choose 2 points and then rotarate it to 72 or 144.
I love your maps!
Good luck with ranking
Have a star! Whoa, thanks again! (>////<)7 (>////<)7
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!Stjpa wrote:
Just 2 diffs because 4:36 is quite long. q-q[By My Side]
• 00:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You know that this is overmapping? 00:30:356 (7,9) these two don't have a sound, and I think a normal triplet would be way better. And this appeared quite often, not gonna point them out. Yes it is, but I guess overmapping a bit is fine if it's in order to give the map a nice flow
• 00:39:123 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm feels and fits better. It's nice, but I stil prefer mine, sorry......
• 00:42:919 (3,5) - This blanket could be way clearer, and it really seems like they're even touching. Fixed~! :3
• 00:47:258 (4) - Why not a slider here? :c 'Cuz I map the music's beat here, so it would be better if I use note instead
• 01:06:780 (6,7) - Shouldn't this be the same as 01:04:792 (2,3) rhythm-wise? Nope, I want to make some variations here :3
• 01:08:227 (8,9,10,1,2) - Before you mapped some little jumps perfectly to the vocals and here you suddenly map to the drums, which I really dislike. Fixed~!
• 01:41:126 (4,5) - Strange custom stack. oo I did it on purpose
• 02:20:533 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why not the same as in the beginning? Some consistency would be cool imo. Yes, but I think some variations is cool too
• 02:29:029 (7,2) - Barely visible, but still annoying for me. Fixed~!
• 02:34:271 (8,1) - Touching. I guess it's fine
• 02:52:348 (1) - Uhm, I guess this spinner BG needs to be way larger. I guess it's fine since I made it based on the rankable skin size[Hard]
• 01:08:407 (2,3,5,6) - This is really weird because of the low AR. It doesn't seem like that for me o3o
• 01:17:626 (3,6) - Visible overlap. Yeah, I just realized it. Fixed~!
• 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - Mapping to the vocals would be better because the sounds these are mapped to are barely hearable. I guess mapping the music here instead of the vocal is better, sorry
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!Kyle Y wrote:
Ticket spent.
[Hard]
I think this diff generally SV quite low, such that the 1/4 slider is quite short 00:30:085 (5) -
but anyway, it still works Yeah, I guess that's fine :3
00:23:035 (1) - why here 1/4 slider? What I heard is like thisSorry.... But I map the drum here :3
00:39:846 - missing vocal sound Fixed~!
01:08:769 - ^, I am not hating missing some of the circle, but at least need to make sense. For this two case, the have the vocal sound in a row, if you suddent del one of the circle, then the rhythm is weird. Fixed~!
01:34:167 - useless green line? No it's not. That green line is to stop the kiai time for awhile
01:34:257 - I think the kiai time should end at here.
(until 01:39:318 - ) Nope, sorry I wanna keep mine
[By my Side]
(from 02:55:240 - )
02:55:783 - 03:01:567 - 03:03:013 - 03:42:059 - again, why skip vocal sound here Yeah, fixed~!
02:59:036 - 02:59:127 - um... triple sound? not going to map it? Ok, fixed~!
03:21:271 (1) - can you draw it more symmetry?
That slider refers to the letter 'i' so that, one of the main frame of the slider needs to be straight
03:25:609 - skip strong beats again. I guess it's fine that way
03:40:251 (5,6,7) - 03:39:347 (2,3,4) - similar rhythm here, why the pattern so different For variations :3
(to the end)
I think this song is quite hard becasue the vocal sound is on blue while beat sound is on white. Anyway, good luck. Vocal sound is on the blue tick 'cuz I use low BPM for this song which means the blue tick is the replacement for the red tick if we doubled the BPM
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!pkhg wrote:
cant confirm xd Fixed~!
[Easy][Normal]
- 01:59:564 (2) - not having this 02:00:287 - as a clickable thing its weird It's fine I guess
- 02:14:749 (1,2,3) - wheres the flow here. a better flow will make it more enjoyable for newbies I think the flow is kinda fine :3. It forms an indirect triangle flow
- 02:46:564 (4,1) - ^ same, try http://puu.sh/m6cWE/5e8d89cc18.jpg Sure, fixed~!
- 03:12:594 (5,1) - swap ncs Fixed~!
[Hard]
- 00:07:127 (5) - what about using circles instead, the beat on its tail is clearly stronger than the one on its head also it fucks up your comboing. the nc must be on 00:07:489 - not on 00:08:393 (1) - Fixed~!
- 01:01:719 (5,1) - swap nc then add one here 01:05:334 (3) - Fixed~!
- 01:31:365 (4,1) - swaaaap nc Sorry, I wanna keep it
- 01:33:534 (1,4) - ^ Nope, sorry, I wanna keep it
- 01:35:703 (1,4) - ^ ^
- 01:47:995 (4,1) - swap ncccc ^
- 02:34:271 (1,2) - ^ Ok, fixed~!
- 02:40:779 (4,1) - Sorry, I wanna keep it
- 02:43:671 (1) - add nc ^
- 02:50:902 (3,7) - swap nc Ummm.... Where to where?
- 03:06:809 (5,1) - ^ Ok, fixed~!
- 03:09:702 (5) - add nc Ok, fixed~!
- 03:41:517 (4) - ^ Ok, fixed~!
- 03:58:870 (4,1) - swap nc Fixed~!
- 04:01:762 (4,1) - ^ Fixed~!
- 04:30:685 (1,2,3) - spacing, just move (2) a bit and its fixed Fixed~!
[By My Side]
- 00:22:493 (1,1,1,1) - you dont need all those ncs The SV is changing, so I should add NC on each sliders
- 00:27:012 (1,2) - swap nc. i guess u already noticed what im trying to say by looking at the ncs i pointed out on normal. your nc pattern is mostly every 2 measures (the large white tick in the timeline) so take a look over the map so i dont need to point out everything xd Ok XD
- 01:50:164 (1,1,1,1) - you know Yes I know xP
- 02:14:026 (5,6) - quite questionable. if u silenced the tails that means that theres no sound on them, its kinda over emphasized. 1/2 sliders do it better I wanna do something different with the rhytm without overmapping, so yeah
- 04:34:120 (1,1,1,1) - u know Yes I know xP xP
why not "By my side" with lowercase m and s so it fits the song title Fixed~!gl
- 00:30:356 (7,9) - these are overmapped It's fine I guess
- 00:41:925 (6,8) - ^ ^
- 01:16:632 (9,11) - ^
- 01:28:201 (11,13) - ^ ^
- 01:33:986 (5,7) - ^ ^
- 01:45:555 (9,11) - ^ ^
- 02:31:831 (10,12) - ^ and well its the same on every stream so check them I guess overmapping a bit is fine if it's in order to give the map a nice flow
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!CaptainMimi wrote:
BYE MY SIDE:
00:22:131 (2) - Triangles doe Fixed~!
02:19:449 (2) - ^ Nope, sorry.... I guess those triangle looks fine :3
I didn't get to finish looking over and i apologize for that but i recommend you look into your AI Mod i think your size is a bit big, anyway good luck with your mapping~ Well, I've done everything I could to compress the size of this mapset, so I guess it's fine now :3
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!pieguyn wrote:
suggestion, only change if you feel like it
should fix
unrankable
[By My Side]
00:22:493 (3,5,7,9,11) - highly recommend NC for patterns like this. different color look beautiful on overlap notes, and it makes it easier to distinguish 1/2 vs. 1/1 spacing. Fixed~!
00:32:616 (7) - x108 y360 more even imo Fixed~!
00:38:581 (1) - this played odd for me bc you make a jump pattern here, and there's as much emphasis on this as there are previous notes, but distance is low. imo placement more like x96 y320 (don't forget adjust spacing/direction after) feel more natural to play. Ok, I'll do something else :3
00:45:450 (8) - i'd make distance same as distance of 00:44:004 (6,7) , for pattern. Fixed~!
00:46:354 (9) - how about x408 y260? make angle same as 00:44:908 (7,8) make more pattern sense imo. Fixed~!
00:49:065 (3) - i would place it "down" for circle flow... example http://puu.sh/m6PIN/78c707fe1c.jpg Nope, sorry ;w;
00:56:477 (2,3) - make 1/2 slider instead? imo starting jump at downbeat plays better, now it starts on very soft vocal (n in "do|n|na") which feel unintuitive. Sorry, I prefer notes better ;w;
01:08:227 (8,11) - NC really should be switched imo... fit better vocal, and emphasize new rhythm. Fixed~!
01:40:945 (3,4) - this jump felt really big for me, it also makes the spacing at 01:41:849 (6,7) confusing since it's lower spacing with 1/1 rhythm. i'd recommend make some kind of 1.7x pattern here fit with ur usual DS. Sorry, no change ;w;
01:51:611 (1) - what do you think of 1/1 slider + note instead? seem more natural and also make a better lead in to 01:52:334 (3) to not skip this beat.
02:20:352 - add note? Nope, sorry ;w;
02:23:787 (4,5) - this feel very odd for me bc spacing is low, right after a jump pattern. add note at 02:23:968 ? Fixed~!
02:34:994 (9,1) - swap NC? Ok, fixed~!
02:42:406 (6) - x312 y196? more even placement Fixed~!
03:35:732 (7) - imo make it go "left" to continue flow from 03:35:370 (5,6) is more intuitive. Fixed~!
03:36:997 (2,3,4,5) - this position was very unexpected for me... for one, making a placement like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195053 would make much more structure sense (current placement seems random, or i didn't get reason for it). but i also thought the direction didn't flow very well. imo, smth like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4195065 would be more intuitive (don't forget fix spacing after). Did something different :3
04:08:993 (5) - i think you were going for 1.7x DS here but this is noticeably further from 04:08:631 (3,4) . I think I've already use the DS properly o3o
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - i would remove these. you're making a soft part here, so start with "soft" feeling at 04:19:116 (4,5) feel more natural. Sorry, I think I'll keep mine
[Hard]
00:24:662 (2,1) - pattern like this look more beautiful imo when each formation has its own color, even if it breaks NC pattern. would recommend swap NC here. ......... I surely wanna to, but QAT are kinda scary ;w;
01:32:630 (2,3) - should be stacked? same as 02:47:829 (4,1) - 04:03:932 (7,1) - . Nope, sorry. I wanna make something different in this part :3
01:48:357 (2,3) - i wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 stack like this when all the other ones were 1/2. it's kind of difficult to see, and imo players shouldn't have to watch closely for a slow relax song like this. Fixed~!
03:31:394 (3) - i would add NC here to indicate rhythm change. Fixed~!
04:18:212 (1,2,3) - same as By My Side. also applies to lower diffs. Sorry, I wanna keep it
04:36:289 (2,1) - same as 00:24:662 (2,1) ......... QAT are scary ;w;
lower diffs look fine at a glance.
it's mostly pattern/flow suggestion. map seems mostly fine.
i hope it was useful, good luck >3<
Topic Starter
Updated with SB~!:3
Thanks Kanari <3
Thanks Kanari <3
Hello, sorry for being late but I was unexpectedly busy these dayzz
[General]
[General]
- The AR of Easy is 2,5 and it increases to 5 in Normal and to 7 in Hard. I suggest you make it AR 3 so the gap between the diffs is more even.
- 00:07:489 (1,2) - Blanket can improve
- 01:09:673 (6) - NC?
- 01:55:949 (6) - ^
- 00:06:585 (1,2) - Change NCs? I saw this a lot, so I don't know if you actually did it on porpuse
- 00:37:677 (1) - Wouldn't it be better if you stack it with 00:36:954 (2) and make it blanket 00:37:135 (3)?
- 01:34:257 (4) - NC?
- 01:57:033 (4) - The end almost touches 01:56:310 (2). Turn it a little to the right.
- 02:49:456 (4) - NC?
- 00:37:496 (4) - Ctrl + g? Better flow
- 00:42:196 (1) - Curve it a little more to the left.
- 01:31:907 - A circle is missing here. I think it's a better idea to follow the vocals.
- 01:46:368 - Same^
- 02:34:271 (8,2) - They are nearly overlapping. Move 02:35:356 (2) to the right a little.
- 03:28:501 (5,6) - Yea, 03:30:309 (6) is not exactly in the center and this one is noticable.
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!xDarxen wrote:
Hello, sorry for being late but I was unexpectedly busy these dayzz
[General][Easy]
- The AR of Easy is 2,5 and it increases to 5 in Normal and to 7 in Hard. I suggest you make it AR 3 so the gap between the diffs is more even. Ok, fixed~!
[By my side]
- 00:07:489 (1,2) - Blanket can improve That blanket seems fine for me :3
- 01:09:673 (6) - NC? Ok, fixed~!
- 01:55:949 (6) - ^ Nope, sorry ;w;
That's it. Great job with this, best of luck!
- 00:37:496 (4) - Ctrl + g? Better flow That flow seems fine for me
- 00:42:196 (1) - Curve it a little more to the left. Ok, fixed~!
- 01:31:907 - A circle is missing here. I think it's a better idea to follow the vocals. I wanna follow the music, sorry.... ;w;
- 01:46:368 - Same^ Nope, sorry
- 02:34:271 (8,2) - They are nearly overlapping. Move 02:35:356 (2) to the right a little. Fixed~!
- 03:28:501 (5,6) - Yea, 03:30:309 (6) is not exactly in the center and this one is noticable. Fixed~!
Topic Starter
Updated~!
Topic Starter
Whoopsie double posting 
thanks for modding! sorry cant mentioned all but i fixed 80% of all mods~!
sorry for late! ;w;
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32,192,219709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,344,219890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,264,220070,6,0,P|256:184|248:48,1,220.499993270874
144,136,220793,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,136,220974,2,0,L|60:144,1,73.4999977569581
252,200,221336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,221517,6,0,L|356:312,1,146.999995513916,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,340,222059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,276,222240,2,0,P|128:256|24:276,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,222782,2,0,P|382:208|473:154,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,179,223324,6,0,P|396:216|480:192,1,288.75
443,179,224409,6,0,L|331:167,1,73.4999977569581,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,196,224770,2,0,P|244:128|260:52,1,146.999995513916,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,276,225313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,276,225493,2,0,L|312:368,1,73.4999977569581,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,200,225855,6,0,L|272:188,1,146.999995513916
112,144,226397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,100,226578,2,0,P|244:68|252:24,1,73.4999977569581,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,226939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,227120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,227301,6,0,P|360:228|472:244,2,146.999995513916,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,332,228205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,228386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,284,228566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,228,228747,6,0,L|264:216,1,73.4999977569581
112,132,229109,2,0,L|40:120,1,73.4999977569581
252,72,229470,2,0,L|324:60,1,73.4999977569581,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,229741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,229832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,44,230013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,172,230193,6,0,P|240:268|220:336,1,146.999995513916,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,360,230736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,316,230916,2,0,B|364:300|400:312|400:312|436:324|504:284,1,146.999995513916,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,252,231459,6,0,B|116:236|80:248|80:248|44:260|-24:220,1,146.999995513916
256,184,232001,2,0,P|268:136|268:104,1,73.4999977569581
232,300,232362,2,0,P|253:344|274:368,1,73.4999977569581,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,244,232724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,232905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,200,233086,6,0,P|216:192|184:192,1,73.4999977569581,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,120,233447,2,0,P|412:118|448:111,1,73.4999977569581,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,60,233809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,60,233989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,200,234170,6,0,P|356:288|336:356,1,146.999995513916,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,234712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,339,234893,2,0,P|156:267|184:200,1,146.999995513916,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,235436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,248,235616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,235797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,235978,6,2,L|152:148,1,73.4999977569581,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,137,236339,2,2,L|368:64,1,73.4999977569581,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,236701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,200,236882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,140,237062,2,0,P|168:128|128:132,1,73.4999977569581,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,340,237424,6,0,P|360:340|428:256,1,146.999995513916
204,252,237966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,238147,2,0,P|112:252|44:336,1,146.999995513916,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,344,238689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,204,238870,6,0,P|292:168|292:128,1,73.4999977569581,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,32,239232,2,0,P|360:76|464:44,1,146.999995513916,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,239774,2,0,L|96:108,1,73.4999977569581,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,240135,6,0,P|328:176|428:200,1,146.999995513916
168,348,240678,2,0,P|108:280|116:196,1,146.999995513916,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,336,241220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,336,241310,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,336,241401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,241582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,241762,5,4,0:0:0:0:
196,240,241943,2,0,L|112:236,1,73.4999977569581
328,104,242305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,242485,2,0,P|396:80|480:108,1,146.999995513916,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,243028,2,0,P|260:260|176:232,2,146.999995513916,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,260,243932,6,0,L|436:352,1,73.4999977569581,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,236,244293,2,0,L|332:144,1,73.4999977569581
220,280,244655,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,348,244836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,352,245016,2,0,P|120:304|116:268,1,73.4999977569581,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,204,245378,2,0,P|92:188|32:232,1,146.999995513916,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,245920,2,0,P|300:159|374:151,1,146.999995513916,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,352,246824,6,0,P|388:308|384:272,1,73.4999977569581,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,247095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,247185,2,0,P|428:200|432:164,1,73.4999977569581
248,252,247547,6,0,L|332:244,1,73.4999977569581,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,247908,2,0,L|52:304,1,73.4999977569581
160,208,248270,2,0,P|120:124|136:72,1,146.999995513916,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,228,248812,2,0,P|254:295|191:329,1,146.999995513916,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,180,249716,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,108,249897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,276,250078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,108,250258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,188,250439,6,0,P|208:240|276:360,1,146.999995513916,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,209,251162,6,0,P|173:275|222:321,1,136.499993751526,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,275,251885,6,0,P|161:319|222:321,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,360,252608,6,0,P|180:358|222:321,1,115.50000352478,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,244,253331,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,244,253693,2,0,P|148:208|140:172,1,52.5
60,156,254054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,336,254415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,254777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,284,255319,5,0,0:0:0:0:
284,212,255500,2,0,P|324:224|344:228,1,52.5
360,312,255862,2,0,P|397:293|424:276,1,52.5
456,212,256224,6,0,P|452:152|440:100,1,105
412,24,256765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,24,256946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,257307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,257669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,220,258211,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,160,258393,2,0,P|220:168|204:168,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,252,258754,2,0,P|146:230|133:220,1,52.5
120,136,259115,6,0,P|124:80|120:24,1,105
32,24,259657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,24,259838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,80,260200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,260561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,256,261104,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,216,261285,2,0,P|312:264|312:288,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,261646,2,0,P|257:119|273:100,1,52.5
344,92,262008,6,0,P|412:104|472:112,1,105
252,48,262550,2,0,P|201:56|149:66,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,263454,6,0,L|304:232,1,52.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,312,263816,2,0,L|160:236,1,52.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,264177,2,0,P|168:152|188:152,1,52.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,292,264539,2,0,P|256:283|237:276,1,52.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,228,264900,5,4,0:3:0:0:
448,228,265262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,265443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,216,265624,2,0,P|312:208|252:200,1,105
104,132,266166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,132,266347,2,0,P|156:124|216:116,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,104,266889,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,188,267070,6,0,L|268:256,1,52.5
296,104,267431,2,0,L|292:51,1,52.5
380,192,267793,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,192,268154,2,0,L|448:184,1,52.5
352,276,268516,2,0,P|308:248|292:192,1,105
204,80,269058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,80,269239,2,0,L|200:188,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,269781,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,212,269962,2,0,L|60:200,1,52.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,172,270323,2,0,L|292:160,1,52.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,312,270685,6,0,L|240:304,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,300,271227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,300,271408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,220,271589,2,0,L|200:160,1,52.5
176,80,271950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,172,272131,6,0,L|80:296,1,105
144,336,272673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,188,272854,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,352,273035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,244,273216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,272,273396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,273577,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273758,12,4,276470,0:0:0:0:
sorry for late! ;w;
- Just some complaints.
- My personal suggestions.
- Highly recommended.
- Unrankable, you have to fix it.
Easy
- 02:01:372 - make a 1/2 slider here instead of 02:01:733 (3) - ?
- 04:18:393 (1) - delete this? it belongs to the former part of the song but not folloing
- 04:18:393 (1,2) - same mentioned in Easy
- 01:30:642 (5) - why end the slider at down beat?
- 01:45:103 (1,5) - swap nc
- 03:24:163 (3) - nc?
- 03:30:309 (6) - ^
- 04:36:470 (1) - drum finish instead?
- 00:46:354 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the distance here is quite confusing, not good to comfirm 1/2 and 1/4
- 01:08:227 (1,2) - try ctrl+g? a better flow for me
- 01:41:126 (4,5) - stack? a small distance doesnt make any sense
- 03:24:163 (3) - nc
- 03:30:309 (6) - ^
it's just ok and i dont want to be too strict, so call me after you check this light mod~
Topic Starter
Fixed everything (> w <)/
And updated 10nya's Light Insane as well~
Everything is updated~!
And updated 10nya's Light Insane as well~
Everything is updated~!
I dont know who makes the lyric sb until I found this above.
Japanese characters is not the same as Chinese characters, simplified Chinese is wrong. "观览车" should be "観覧車".
So I try to find and post the whole lyric here, please fix the mistakes orz.
「By your side feat.西野カナ」
作詞∶WISE & 西野カナ
作曲∶Jeff Miyahara/Yuichi Hayashida
歌∶WISE
I wanna be with you どこにいたって
気持ちはずっと 離れない
I understand 俺 たまに身勝手
困らせた事もあったよね Baby
それでも夢中 キミ 会えなくて
携帯で連絡重ねて
すれ違ってもまた戻って そう絆深まってく
So we'll be alright gonna be alright
そう信じてきた
you make me feel so fine you make me smile
どんな時だって yeah
ずっとふたり愛を繋ぎ ここまできたから
もう1人じゃない 夢の中だけじゃない
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
I'll be there By your side…
あの日 promise 約束したっけ
これからも 君離さない
したくないミス 少し粋がって
買ったネックレスあげたよね Lady
恋のprocess デート繰り返して
観覧車 唇重ねて
回る景色を思い出して
もう胸 熱くなってる
so we'll be alright gonna be alright
そう感じてきた
you make me feel so fine you make me smile
どこにいたって yeah
ずっとふたり 未来信じ ここまできたから
もう1人じゃない 夢の中だけじゃない
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
I'll be there By your side…
何が起きても いつも君のとなりで
力になるよ My Baby yeah yeah
もう1人では泣かない 君がいれば怖くない
なんでも乗り越えられるよ
いつも I'll be by your side
君を守りたい
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
もう1人じゃない 夢の中だけじゃない
この手をぎゅっとして離さないで
君しかいない この想いだけは
過去も現在も明日もいつも
きっと変わらない
I'll be there By your side…
fixed!
my apologies, i just took the lyrics off a site and assumed they were correct >~<
just replace the lyric folder http://puu.sh/mpxZP.zip
my apologies, i just took the lyrics off a site and assumed they were correct >~<
just replace the lyric folder http://puu.sh/mpxZP.zip
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00:18:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - You should make the better connecting triangles (triangle), this should be easy to fix.
01:20:157 (2) - I guess it is bit too crooked, try this?
01:23:411 (2) - Bit too curve, try make it bit more straight so that it would look like this
01:37:149 (1,1,1,1) - Why not make a slider art? Just suggesting.
01:46:730 (3,4,5) - Why not triangle? :3
01:50:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to prevent overlap, or maybe try this?
03:24:163 (1) - Wow.
03:31:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - For some reason, they don't look like a perfect star.
03:45:493 (4,5) - Try move it like this?
04:03:932 (5) - Try make it like this?
04:33:577 (1) - Fabulous.
Good luck on getting ranked!
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod Rilene~!
And thanks for the fixed lyrics Kanari >w<
Updated~!
And thanks for the fixed lyrics Kanari >w<
Updated~!
reply of Rilene's mod? at least let me know what you fixed please ;w;
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod~!Rilene wrote:
AESTHETIC MODDING QUEUE
____________________________________________By my side
00:18:154 (2,3,4,5,6) - You should make the better connecting triangles (triangle), this should be easy to fix. It seems fine for me :3
01:20:157 (2) - I guess it is bit too crooked, try this? Uh.... Nope sorry. I guess that shape is fine the way it was ;w;
01:23:411 (2) - Bit too curve, try make it bit more straight so that it would look like this Fixed~!
01:37:149 (1,1,1,1) - Why not make a slider art? Just suggesting. Well, straight sliders just feels.... Right here, (and I've already run out of ideas) so....
01:46:730 (3,4,5) - Why not triangle? :3 'Cuz I prefer square >w<
01:50:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to prevent overlap, or maybe try this? Nope sorry...... That jumps are just a bit.... too sharp ;w;
03:24:163 (1) - Wow. *blush*
03:31:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - For some reason, they don't look like a perfect star. B-but I'm sure that I've already used that 'create polygon circles' thing in compose
03:45:493 (4,5) - Try move it like this? Nope, sorry ;w;
04:03:932 (5) - Try make it like this? Nope, sorry ;w;. I prefer to keep that shape
04:33:577 (1) - Fabulous. T-thanks (>////<)7
Good luck on getting ranked!
comfirmed metadata with kwan, i think it's fine now
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Topic Starter
Thanks Yuki-san~! >w<
sweet c:
Topic Starter
>w<
From forum PM
popped due to some unrankable stuff
fix those general things then call me back.
popped due to some unrankable stuff
[General]
- Missing skin files in [Playfield] set
{play-skip.png} - Storyboard image file dimensions is more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
{sb\images\4.jpg} (860x1058)
{sb\images\5.jpg} (1000x1196)
{sb\images\1.jpg} (1000x1166)
{sb\images\7.jpg} (1030x1500)
{sb\images\6.jpg} (1000x1000)
it's kinda grey about this so this isn't a must-fix thing but better fix it to avoid unnecessary trouble. - Files unused:
{spinner-osu.png}
- 00:01:705 - to 00:07:127 - , the rhythm sounds a bit weird, i suggest to follow more piano here, here is an example or you can make it like 00:07:489 (1,2,3) - this, it's also fine i think, don't be afraid of placing notes on blue ticks. like 00:11:647 - this, i highly suggest to follow it.
- 02:29:933 (2) - ctrl+g for a better flow here, don't forget to ajust the DS
- 02:29:933 (2) - a bit uncomfortable here, move 00:44:004 (4) - a bit left, like
- 02:17:641 (6) - you can ctrl+j this slider it'd be more fun
- 04:09:716 (4,5) - make a slider instead? it's quite hard for new players to catch the rhythm here imo
- 02:31:560 (2,3) - spacing too big x.x
- 00:10:201 (6) - just one circle is enough here, the slider end doesn't make any sense.
- 03:46:939 (6,2) - i don't know it's on purpose or not but i suggest to stack them well <_<
- 03:49:741 (8,9,10,11,12) - why did you use inconsistent spacing on this stream x.x
fix those general things then call me back.