Hi, from my queue.
HP8 is too much
OD 8 is too low
00:15:374 (1) - maybe you could start this part with a slider, when I played at first I didn't know the rhythm very well, and if you place one or two sliders it will be easier to catch on to it.
00:21:835 (1,3) - imo feels better if these are sliders
00:29:220 (1,3) - ^
01:08:872 (1,2) - 01:12:564 (1,2) - make these more consistant, now the spacing differs too much
01:19:015 (1) - hitsounds feel kinda lound in this part
01:34:341 (10) - imo you should extend it aswell, or shorter the slider before, it's a bit missleading now
01:37:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit too much, it's not that intense here
I notice you're using a lot of 1/2 reverse sliders, I think you should convert some to circles at parts like 01:44:612 (5) -
01:57:900 (6,7,8) - too much
02:07:438 (5) - move this to the right down a bit somewhere around x:132 y:280
02:24:721 (3) - ctrl g maybe?
03:44:449 (5,7,9) - these feel like lacking emphasis
04:22:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - music get more intense here, maybe you should keep increasing spacing here
Liked the map and the storyboard is cool.
Good luck!
HP8 is too much
OD 8 is too low
00:15:374 (1) - maybe you could start this part with a slider, when I played at first I didn't know the rhythm very well, and if you place one or two sliders it will be easier to catch on to it.
00:21:835 (1,3) - imo feels better if these are sliders
00:29:220 (1,3) - ^
01:08:872 (1,2) - 01:12:564 (1,2) - make these more consistant, now the spacing differs too much
01:19:015 (1) - hitsounds feel kinda lound in this part
01:34:341 (10) - imo you should extend it aswell, or shorter the slider before, it's a bit missleading now
01:37:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit too much, it's not that intense here
I notice you're using a lot of 1/2 reverse sliders, I think you should convert some to circles at parts like 01:44:612 (5) -
01:57:900 (6,7,8) - too much
02:07:438 (5) - move this to the right down a bit somewhere around x:132 y:280
02:24:721 (3) - ctrl g maybe?
03:44:449 (5,7,9) - these feel like lacking emphasis
04:22:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - music get more intense here, maybe you should keep increasing spacing here
Liked the map and the storyboard is cool.
Good luck!