Strategas wrote:

Hi, from my queue.

HP8 is too much
OD 8 is too low-okay

00:15:374 (1) - maybe you could start this part with a slider, when I played at first I didn't know the rhythm very well, and if you place one or two sliders it will be easier to catch on to it. - yep
00:21:835 (1,3) - imo feels better if these are sliders

00:29:220 (1,3) - ^ - Circles are good imo.

01:08:872 (1,2) - 01:12:564 (1,2) - make these more consistant, now the spacing differs too much - k
01:19:015 (1) - hitsounds feel kinda lound in this part - down the volume little bit
01:34:341 (10) - imo you should extend it aswell, or shorter the slider before, it's a bit missleading now - Fixed
01:37:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit too much, it's not that intense here - I like this part
I notice you're using a lot of 1/2 reverse sliders, I think you should convert some to circles at parts like 01:44:612 (5) - - gonna try it
01:57:900 (6,7,8) - too much - fixed
02:07:438 (5) - move this to the right down a bit somewhere around x:132 y:280 - Fixed
02:24:721 (3) - ctrl g maybe? - That flows looks bad imo
03:44:449 (5,7,9) - these feel like lacking emphasis - Hope now is better
04:22:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - music get more intense here, maybe you should keep increasing spacing here - Yep

Liked the map and the storyboard is cool. - Thanks! XD
Good luck!

iedesu wrote:

별던지고감

모딩필요하면 불러주셈

• 00:55:718 (6,1,2) - flow not good
  01:01:025 (5,1) - better not overlap
  01:01:025 (5,1) - move it a little down, about y:116
  01:39:721 (4,1) - i suggest to put it more far away, or just overlap
  01:42:493 (1,2,3,4) - seems not good pattern here
  02:22:927 (1) - 1/1 slider seems
  02:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think should remake the DS by follow the music intensity , seems reduce DS better , every 2 notes a group
  02:57:085 (5,1) - overlap better?
  03:31:731 (5) - NC?
  03:47:710 (1) - seems that hard to play with ur default color comboo

rs_fadeaway wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

[reunion]
CS 4.8 seems no sense, ppl can play more tiny circle many years ago. 4.5 or 5 mb fine - Maybe it will fine, but I want this map CS4.8 just I like this CS.

• 00:55:718 (6,1,2) - flow not good - I don't think so
  01:01:025 (5,1) - better not overlap - I like this overlap
  01:01:025 (5,1) - move it a little down, about y:116 - keep
  01:39:721 (4,1) - i suggest to put it more far away, or just overlap - fixed
  01:42:493 (1,2,3,4) - seems not good pattern here - Changed pattern
  02:22:927 (1) - 1/1 slider seems - keep
  02:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think should remake the DS by follow the music intensity , seems reduce DS better , every 2 notes a group - i'll consider it.
  02:57:085 (5,1) - overlap better? - fixed
  03:31:731 (5) - NC? - Nope.
  03:47:710 (1) - seems that hard to play with ur default color comboo - Consider it. That combo color again....

well, thats all . GL

Beomsan wrote:

뀨규귯

Reclaimer wrote:

Hello from my queue!

EvoLvE CyBerNaTiON

1. 01:20:319 (5) - NC - k
2. 01:33:362 (6) - NC - k
3. 01:37:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't play well the beginning is super close together and the end is super spaced out, try to space the beginning 01:37:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) out more and the end 01:37:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) closer together. Also that hard of a curve is hard to play when a player doesn't expect it, the song isn't really intense enough for that hard of a curve - Changed stream pattern.
4. 01:49:993 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think moving this to look like this would flow much better and be easier to read - give little change
5. 02:04:340 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe move this like this it would flow better imo - I like now
6. 02:20:319 - This should probably be a circle because it's a big down beat - maybe it does, but this will be fine imo
7. 02:57:085 (5) - Maybe move this note to x:68 y:208 so it's easier to read - k
8. 03:04:340 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too close together I think, makes it hard to read and doesn't really look that good - Changed
9. 03:16:079 (6,7,8,9) - This looks weird - This pattern quite good for me
10. 03:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe use 1/4 sliders instead? - Nope

Done! ^o^

Pretty small mod sorry D:, hopefully it helps you, good luck!

iedesu wrote:

OvErAll:

콤보컬러 1~6중에서 비슷한 색깔은 없애세요. 3개면 충분할거 같은데? 키아이 강조용으로 쓰는거라 냅두겠습니다
뉴콤칠노가다 ㅅㄱ이거 넣는 고통을 아십니까
7~8은 강조하시려 한거같은데 보통 빨강주황을 많이쓰죠? - 아 진짜요? 몰랐...../me run
HD 7.5? - 너무 높은듯 하네요

00:03:463 http://puu.sh/l6GYj/fb69f01a38.jpg중간에 앵커 하나 추가 ㄱ? - ? 사진 잘못나온듯..? 그리고 그냥 이대로가 좋네요
00:41:912 (3) - 전노트랑 좀 가깝단생각이 많이 드네요 - 그닥....?
00:43:066 (1) - 끝에만 꺾어주시죠? 이렇게 꺾여있는 부분 많으면 슬라이더 벽만 가리는꼴 - 슬라좀 바꿔봤습니다
00:45:564 (4) - 00:43:989 (2) - 머리랑 스택 확실히 - 수정
01:32:384 (2) - 너무 수직방향으로 가깝단 느낌이 듭니다 - 그닥 그렇게 문제될건 아니니 패스하겠습니다
01:53:743 (5,6) - 다른 구간에 비해 너무 머네요. 강조돼는 음도 아닌데 왜 굳이? - 그냥 디스턴스적으로만 보자면 그렇긴 하겠는데, 보통 이렇게 짧은 슬라이더는 그냥 한 노트로 봐도 무방해서 그렇게 크지 않다고 생각됩니다.
01:56:351 (5,6) - 전체적으로 이구간에 이런모양 디스턴스좀 줄여주셨으면 - ^
02:14:123 (3) - 02:13:308 (4) - 머리랑 스택 확실히 - 수정
02:48:851 (6) - 이런거 별로 안좋음. 차라리 전에패턴모양이랑 비슷하게 가시죠 - 이미 다른맵에서도 이런패턴은 많았으니 상관은 없다고 생각됩니다.
03:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? 트릴음도 아닌데 왜 이런연타가 - 개인적으로 이부분에서 피아노소리가 2번씩 끊어친다는 느낌이 들어서 이렇게 만들었습니다.
04:24:883 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - 키아이 정리구간이니, 강조하시는색보단 극초반콤보컬러가 나을거같음 - 글쎼요....의견 더 모아봄
04:49:682 (1) - 이거 좀 노트 오는타이밍이 빠른데요 - 빠른게 아니라 느린거 같......

Good Map
ㅅㄱ

chucentry wrote:

Hi

EvoLvE CyBerNaTiON

if u want try with this 00:24:143 (3) - x:271 y:90 and 00:24:835 (4) - x:87 Y:206 - Okay

00:29:681 (3) - x:200 y:236 maybe? - k

01:53:417 (3) - x:478 y:165 make the same distance in this 3 notes 01:53:254 (2,3,4) - - Changed some part here

02:06:215 (3,4) - this maybe is stupid but 02:06:215 (3,4) - this stack with 02:04:993 (2) - - Changed space instead. Hope this will good.

02:08:580 (1) - prefer thsi continue with the flow of the stream em... i mean 02:08:580 (1,2) - = http://puu.sh/lloqi/372b3726fe.jpg - nope. keep this pattern

02:19:503 (2) - hard to read for me if u want x:222 y:167 - This need more opinion.

02:30:427 (7,8) - em the shorts distance for me is not good with the flow of the song when impact the music. mm em maybe 02:30:427 (7) - in (8) place and 02:30:590 (8) - stack with (4) - Changed a lot of space(partly remapped?)

02:37:927 (5) - x:490 y:160 to be jumpi ? - Nah

02:48:851 (6) - this not feels akward to play? Ctrl + G? - more opinion

03:37:275 (1,2,3) - 2 short sliders? - I don't like that.

Hope this help you Good luck!

DreaM117er wrote:

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• 
  00:18:604 (3) - Move to 260|104, looks better - Yep
  00:24:143 (3) - why you don't use this one?? I think it's a better flow - pretty good
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:29:450 (2,3) - too close, maybe move 00:29:450 (2) - to 324|340?? - okay
  00:31:527 (3) - ^, follow DS or this one: http://puu.sh/lm7Bo/6a20cfb9a1.jpg - Fixed
  00:50:410 - remove clap
  01:08:872 - ^ - music has additional sounds, so I emphasize that with clap.
  01:55:210 (5,6,7,8) - I really think use normal way to make this stream enough, no need use this way to map this - Idk why i mapped like this lol
  02:00:672 (4,1) - Increase space, like this one: http://puu.sh/lm7RS/7da7c8d785.jpg
  02:08:580 (1) - ^, and Ctrl+G
  02:16:406 (1) - ^, use 02:16:080 (1,2,3,4) - to blanket slider's head - I like these patterns
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:20:482 (5) - NC - Yep
  02:24:150 (4,1) - Increase space, you know okay
  02:30:101 (5,6) - Ctrl+G - alight
  02:44:857 (5,6,7,1) - Increase space and blanket: http://puu.sh/lm895/bfc1182557.jpg - yep
  02:54:232 (1) - you know - I think you also know(?)
  02:56:840 (4,5,1) - ^, http://puu.sh/lm8dn/7807417022.jpg - ^
  03:26:188 (3) - NC
  03:36:949 (13) - ^
  03:39:231 (9) - ^
  03:44:449 (5) - ^ - Fixed Except first one

1. to end, I think no problem for me, but I think SB should fix, makes me hard to read notes - gonna ask someone to SB

Good luck

1. this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying.
2. some combo color choose is not good for playing, it meeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssed with the bg orz

1. 00:00:721 (1) - although you have already used 15% volume, the sliderslide sound is still too loud imo, you'd better use a slient sliderslide here.
2. 00:32:912 (1,2,3,4) - why not make a square? looks much pretty here
3. 00:46:487 - 00:48:333 - 00:50:179 - similar place of this part, whistle sound is highly recommended, it quite fits, doesnt it? You only add some finishes here, it's a bit boring.
4. 01:14:179 (6) - this sliderslide should also be silenced.
5. 01:19:667 (3) - 01:20:971 (3) - like these claps, it's not suitable here imo, why you dont use your normal-hitnormal2 as clap sound here? also 2-4clap is highly recommended.
6. 01:46:732 (2) - stack with 01:46:243 (6) - ?
7. 01:56:678 (7) - weeeeell let the downbeat at a slider end is just awkkkkward imo, separate it?
8. 02:08:580 (1) - ctrl+g gives better flow, but if you agree this you should change your storyboard lol
9. 03:37:519 - why stop the stream here?
10. 03:41:840 (9) - nc?
    
    Final jumping is so cruel.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

M4M from my queue o/

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

1. this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying. - the map recently ranked short ver has no tag, but I'll consider it
2. some combo color choose is not good for playing, it meeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssed with the bg orz - combo color agaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaain gonna change other thing.

EvoLvE CyBerNaTiON

1. 00:00:721 (1) - although you have already used 15% volume, the sliderslide sound is still too loud imo, you'd better use a slient sliderslide here. - then use silent slidertick instead. I think it's better imo.
2. 00:32:912 (1,2,3,4) - why not make a square? looks much pretty here - why is this not squareeeeeeeee
3. 00:46:487 - 00:48:333 - 00:50:179 - similar place of this part, whistle sound is highly recommended, it quite fits, doesnt it? You only add some finishes here, it's a bit boring. - nice!
4. 01:14:179 (6) - this sliderslide should also be silenced. - but it's already used silent slidertick....
5. 01:19:667 (3) - 01:20:971 (3) - like these claps, it's not suitable here imo, why you dont use your normal-hitnormal2 as clap sound here? also 2-4clap is highly recommended. - In the part I used N:C2, there has other sound suit more than this part. If i use this here, it feels weird to me.
6. 01:46:732 (2) - stack with 01:46:243 (6) - ? - Okay
7. 01:56:678 (7) - weeeeell let the downbeat at a slider end is just awkkkkward imo, separate it? - okay
8. 02:08:580 (1) - ctrl+g gives better flow, but if you agree this you should change your storyboard lol - alight I'll fix this and fix storyboard this one was pointed before mod
9. 03:37:519 - why stop the stream here? - because piano sound is small on 03:37:519 - so I think it's enough to ignore, and looks emphasize back part.
10. 03:41:840 (9) - nc? - I don't think.
    
    Final jumping is so cruel.
    That's what i aim to lol /me run

Minakami Yuki wrote:

this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying.

iedesu wrote:

Minakami Yuki wrote:

this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying.

고로 태그에 beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle 추가요

sangzin wrote:

이레시블이 만든 맵에서 비마니 태그 없어서 지금은 고민중임. 안넣을 수도
그리고 19가 아니라 18버전부터.....