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Thanks for your mod~Strategas wrote:
Hi, from my queue.
HP8 is too much
OD 8 is too low-okay
00:15:374 (1) - maybe you could start this part with a slider, when I played at first I didn't know the rhythm very well, and if you place one or two sliders it will be easier to catch on to it. - yep
00:21:835 (1,3) - imo feels better if these are sliders
00:29:220 (1,3) - ^ - Circles are good imo.
01:08:872 (1,2) - 01:12:564 (1,2) - make these more consistant, now the spacing differs too much - k
01:19:015 (1) - hitsounds feel kinda lound in this part - down the volume little bit
01:34:341 (10) - imo you should extend it aswell, or shorter the slider before, it's a bit missleading now - Fixed
01:37:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit too much, it's not that intense here - I like this part
I notice you're using a lot of 1/2 reverse sliders, I think you should convert some to circles at parts like 01:44:612 (5) - - gonna try it
01:57:900 (6,7,8) - too much - fixed
02:07:438 (5) - move this to the right down a bit somewhere around x:132 y:280 - Fixed
02:24:721 (3) - ctrl g maybe? - That flows looks bad imo
03:44:449 (5,7,9) - these feel like lacking emphasis - Hope now is better
04:22:763 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - music get more intense here, maybe you should keep increasing spacing here - Yep
Liked the map and the storyboard is cool. - Thanks! XD
Good luck!
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Thanks for your mod!rs_fadeaway wrote:
Hi, from my queue~
[reunion]
CS 4.8 seems no sense, ppl can play more tiny circle many years ago. 4.5 or 5 mb fine - Maybe it will fine, but I want this map CS4.8 just I like this CS.well, thats all . GL
- 00:55:718 (6,1,2) - flow not good - I don't think so
01:01:025 (5,1) - better not overlap - I like this overlap
01:01:025 (5,1) - move it a little down, about y:116 - keep
01:39:721 (4,1) - i suggest to put it more far away, or just overlap - fixed
01:42:493 (1,2,3,4) - seems not good pattern here - Changed pattern
02:22:927 (1) - 1/1 slider seems - keep
02:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think should remake the DS by follow the music intensity , seems reduce DS better , every 2 notes a group - i'll consider it.
02:57:085 (5,1) - overlap better? - fixed
03:31:731 (5) - NC? - Nope.
03:47:710 (1) - seems that hard to play with ur default color comboo - Consider it.That combo color again....
Thanks for your mod! update will be later.Reclaimer wrote:
Hello from my queue!EvoLvE CyBerNaTiON
- 01:20:319 (5) - NC - k
- 01:33:362 (6) - NC - k
- 01:37:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream doesn't play well the beginning is super close together and the end is super spaced out, try to space the beginning 01:37:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) out more and the end 01:37:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) closer together. Also that hard of a curve is hard to play when a player doesn't expect it, the song isn't really intense enough for that hard of a curve - Changed stream pattern.
- 01:49:993 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think moving this to look like this would flow much better and be easier to read - give little change
- 02:04:340 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe move this like this it would flow better imo - I like now
- 02:20:319 - This should probably be a circle because it's a big down beat - maybe it does, but this will be fine imo
- 02:57:085 (5) - Maybe move this note to x:68 y:208 so it's easier to read - k
- 03:04:340 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too close together I think, makes it hard to read and doesn't really look that good - Changed
- 03:16:079 (6,7,8,9) - This looks weird - This pattern quite good for me
- 03:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe use 1/4 sliders instead? - Nope
Done! ^o^
Pretty small mod sorry D:, hopefully it helps you, good luck!
모딩 감사합니다~iedesu wrote:
OvErAll:
콤보컬러 1~6중에서 비슷한 색깔은 없애세요. 3개면 충분할거 같은데? 키아이 강조용으로 쓰는거라 냅두겠습니다
뉴콤칠노가다 ㅅㄱ이거 넣는 고통을 아십니까
7~8은 강조하시려 한거같은데 보통 빨강주황을 많이쓰죠? - 아 진짜요? 몰랐...../me run
HD 7.5? - 너무 높은듯 하네요
00:03:463 http://puu.sh/l6GYj/fb69f01a38.jpg중간에 앵커 하나 추가 ㄱ? - ? 사진 잘못나온듯..? 그리고 그냥 이대로가 좋네요
00:41:912 (3) - 전노트랑 좀 가깝단생각이 많이 드네요 - 그닥....?
00:43:066 (1) - 끝에만 꺾어주시죠? 이렇게 꺾여있는 부분 많으면 슬라이더 벽만 가리는꼴 - 슬라좀 바꿔봤습니다
00:45:564 (4) - 00:43:989 (2) - 머리랑 스택 확실히 - 수정
01:32:384 (2) - 너무 수직방향으로 가깝단 느낌이 듭니다 - 그닥 그렇게 문제될건 아니니 패스하겠습니다
01:53:743 (5,6) - 다른 구간에 비해 너무 머네요. 강조돼는 음도 아닌데 왜 굳이? - 그냥 디스턴스적으로만 보자면 그렇긴 하겠는데, 보통 이렇게 짧은 슬라이더는 그냥 한 노트로 봐도 무방해서 그렇게 크지 않다고 생각됩니다.
01:56:351 (5,6) - 전체적으로 이구간에 이런모양 디스턴스좀 줄여주셨으면 - ^
02:14:123 (3) - 02:13:308 (4) - 머리랑 스택 확실히 - 수정
02:48:851 (6) - 이런거 별로 안좋음. 차라리 전에패턴모양이랑 비슷하게 가시죠 - 이미 다른맵에서도 이런패턴은 많았으니 상관은 없다고 생각됩니다.
03:29:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? 트릴음도 아닌데 왜 이런연타가 - 개인적으로 이부분에서 피아노소리가 2번씩 끊어친다는 느낌이 들어서 이렇게 만들었습니다.
04:24:883 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - 키아이 정리구간이니, 강조하시는색보단 극초반콤보컬러가 나을거같음 - 글쎼요....의견 더 모아봄
04:49:682 (1) - 이거 좀 노트 오는타이밍이 빠른데요 - 빠른게 아니라 느린거 같......
Good Map
ㅅㄱ
Thanks for your mod!chucentry wrote:
HiEvoLvE CyBerNaTiONif u want try with this 00:24:143 (3) - x:271 y:90 and 00:24:835 (4) - x:87 Y:206 - Okay
00:29:681 (3) - x:200 y:236 maybe? - k
01:53:417 (3) - x:478 y:165 make the same distance in this 3 notes 01:53:254 (2,3,4) - - Changed some part here
02:06:215 (3,4) - this maybe is stupid but 02:06:215 (3,4) - this stack with 02:04:993 (2) - - Changed space instead. Hope this will good.
02:08:580 (1) - prefer thsi continue with the flow of the stream em... i mean 02:08:580 (1,2) - = http://puu.sh/lloqi/372b3726fe.jpg - nope. keep this pattern
02:19:503 (2) - hard to read for me if u want x:222 y:167 - This need more opinion.
02:30:427 (7,8) - em the shorts distance for me is not good with the flow of the song when impact the music. mm em maybe 02:30:427 (7) - in (8) place and 02:30:590 (8) - stack with (4) - Changed a lot of space(partly remapped?)
02:37:927 (5) - x:490 y:160 to be jumpi ? - Nah
02:48:851 (6) - this not feels akward to play? Ctrl + G? - more opinion
03:37:275 (1,2,3) - 2 short sliders? - I don't like that.
Hope this help you Good luck!
Thanks for your mod~DreaM117er wrote:
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00:18:604 (3) - Move to 260|104, looks better - Yep
00:24:143 (3) - why you don't use this one?? I think it's a better flow - pretty good
00:29:450 (2,3) - too close, maybe move 00:29:450 (2) - to 324|340?? - okay
00:31:527 (3) - ^, follow DS or this one: http://puu.sh/lm7Bo/6a20cfb9a1.jpg - Fixed
00:50:410 - remove clap
01:08:872 - ^ - music has additional sounds, so I emphasize that with clap.
01:55:210 (5,6,7,8) - I really think use normal way to make this stream enough, no need use this way to map this - Idk why i mapped like this lol
02:00:672 (4,1) - Increase space, like this one: http://puu.sh/lm7RS/7da7c8d785.jpg
02:08:580 (1) - ^, and Ctrl+G
02:16:406 (1) - ^, use 02:16:080 (1,2,3,4) - to blanket slider's head - I like these patterns
02:20:482 (5) - NC - Yep
02:24:150 (4,1) - Increase space, you know okay
02:30:101 (5,6) - Ctrl+G - alight
02:44:857 (5,6,7,1) - Increase space and blanket: http://puu.sh/lm895/bfc1182557.jpg - yep
02:54:232 (1) - you know - I think you also know(?)
02:56:840 (4,5,1) - ^, http://puu.sh/lm8dn/7807417022.jpg - ^
03:26:188 (3) - NC
03:36:949 (13) - ^
03:39:231 (9) - ^
03:44:449 (5) - ^ - Fixed Except first one
- to end, I think no problem for me, but I think SB should fix, makes me hard to read notes - gonna ask someone to SB
Good luck
Minakami Yuki wrote:
M4M from my queue o/
- Just some complaints.
- My personal suggestions.
- Highly recommended.
- Unrankable, you have to fix it.
GeneralEvoLvE CyBerNaTiON
- this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying. - the map recently ranked short ver has no tag, but I'll consider it
- some combo color choose is not good for playing, it meeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssed with the bg orz - combo color agaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaain gonna change other thing.
- 00:00:721 (1) - although you have already used 15% volume, the sliderslide sound is still too loud imo, you'd better use a slient sliderslide here. - then use silent slidertick instead. I think it's better imo.
- 00:32:912 (1,2,3,4) - why not make a square? looks much pretty here - why is this not squareeeeeeeee
- 00:46:487 - 00:48:333 - 00:50:179 - similar place of this part, whistle sound is highly recommended, it quite fits, doesnt it? You only add some finishes here, it's a bit boring. - nice!
- 01:14:179 (6) - this sliderslide should also be silenced. - but it's already used silent slidertick....
- 01:19:667 (3) - 01:20:971 (3) - like these claps, it's not suitable here imo, why you dont use your normal-hitnormal2 as clap sound here? also 2-4clap is highly recommended. - In the part I used N:C2, there has other sound suit more than this part. If i use this here, it feels weird to me.
- 01:46:732 (2) - stack with 01:46:243 (6) - ? - Okay
- 01:56:678 (7) - weeeeell let the downbeat at a slider end is just awkkkkward imo, separate it? - okay
- 02:08:580 (1) - ctrl+g gives better flow, but if you agree this you should change your storyboard lol - alight I'll fix this and fix storyboard this one was pointed before mod
- 03:37:519 - why stop the stream here? - because piano sound is small on 03:37:519 - so I think it's enough to ignore, and looks emphasize back part.
- 03:41:840 (9) - nc? - I don't think.
Final jumping is so cruel.That's what i aim to lol /me run
고로 태그에 beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle 추가요Minakami Yuki wrote:
this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying.
이레시블이 만든 맵에서 비마니 태그 없어서 지금은 고민중임. 안넣을 수도iedesu wrote:
고로 태그에 beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle 추가요Minakami Yuki wrote:
this song has a short ver in Beatmania IIDX, so should it be added in tags? idk, just saying.
아 잠시만요 잘못쓴듯sangzin wrote:
이레시블이 만든 맵에서 비마니 태그 없어서 지금은 고민중임. 안넣을 수도
그리고 19가 아니라 18버전부터.....