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Normal
- 00:13:804 (8) - should probably add a not here to catch the high pitched sound you've been following for the entire previous part
- 00:16:804 (2,3) - space these out properly? almost overlapping is not very pretty :c
- 00:24:554 (5,6,7) - would try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3527491 for the rythm, catching the peak in the guitar/vocals on 00:25:054 (7) - feels more intuitive to follow
- 00:30:554 (2) - I don't think the tail here needs a finish, there is noting in the song to back this up
- 00:32:304 (4,5) - spacing again ;w; eh I guess this might be a little picky but yeah stuff like that just makes the whole thing look cleaner if stuff like this is not happening. Not sure if you want to bother with stuff like this though so I'll stop pointing it out, you'll be able to find this kinda thing yourself anyways haha
- 00:32:554 (5) - missing finish on the tail? very audible cymbical in the song
- 00:38:554 (2) - don't really like how this just completely ignores the vocals here, especially since 00:39:804 (3,4,5) - suddenly follows vocals again
- 00:41:304 (6) - very audible cymbical in the song
- 00:48:054 (5,6) - ??
- 00:51:554 (3,4) - I'd personally look to get my blankets to look as perfect as possible with each not being so close to each other, it becomes really apparant if stuff looks off
- 01:03:804 (3) - finish on the head
- 01:04:804 (4) - circle here would be really intuitive to follow with the build-ups in the drums in the background
- 01:07:554 (4) - again, I don't think that just completely ignoring both peaks in vocals here is a good idea when they stand out more than the surrounding white ticks
- 01:44:804 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this entire part is 1/2 without any breaks, which might be a little dense even for a low bpm song like this.
- 01:51:304 (3) - missing finish on the tail
- 01:52:554 (5) - ^ should be a finish on this one too
- 02:00:804 (5) - ^ if 00:40:804 (5) - has one
- 03:26:804 (4) - are you sure about skipping this? feels alot stronger than the following white ticks hmm..could honestly just move both 1/2 sliders forward to start on this instead
- 03:44:054 (1) - missing finish
- 04:04:804 (3) - really really doubt that skipping this is a good idea. feels alot stronger than both surrounding white ticks, really doesn't feel like this properly follows what is strong in the song.
- 04:35:684 (8) - should be a finish+clap on the head I think
Might be personal preference only but I really don't like skipping peaks in vocals for a song like this :c Would probably check the spacing on some stuff again, I've seen multiple overlaps due to things not being spaced out fully. Not going to point out the hitsounds again in the Hard+Insane c:
Hard - 00:26:054 (1,2) - would personally rather have 2 above 1 instead of below, does a better job at catching the momentum when coming from the previous 1/4s
- 00:43:554 (3) - no need for the finish here.....There is a very audible piano sound on 00:43:804 (3) - though which I think would be more intuitive to follow than the drums here, probably because the vocals happen to land on this too. Downbeat doesn't really stand out here
- 00:59:554 (4,1,2) - just following drums in the background here really feels kinda underwhelming, there is alot of strong and more interesting stuff to follow here like 00:59:804 (4) - piano on this or the high pitched sound on 01:00:804 (1) - .
- 01:09:554 (7) - 154/292 for symmetry? (not really symmetry, but having it between 01:08:054 (1,4) -
- 01:13:304 (2,4,5,1) - ugly overlap due to auto-stacking, should be an easy fix
- 01:15:554 (5,1,2) - feels like you've been skipping everything that is strong in the song here for the background music http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3527959 for example feels waaay better
- 01:42:554 (3,4,1) - even out the spacing here?
- 01:55:804 (4) - having this red tick clickable would be nice, it really stands out against the surrounding white ticks
- 02:24:554 (2) - why just ignore all the 1/4 available here when you didn't in the previous kiai?
- 02:38:804 (2) - missing finish (just cause dis one I didn't point out in the Normal I think)
- 03:10:054 (1,2,3) - I don't really think the finish spam here is neccessary, especially during such a calm part
- 03:56:554 (3,4) - would switch the rythm here, feels way more intuitive
- 04:08:065 (1) - aaaAaand missing finish
I just can't help but feel like ignoring a peak in vocals to map the very generic drums in the background is kind of wasting the songs potential a bit :c doesn't really happen alot but it does occassionaly and it bugs me a bit
Insane - 00:29:554 (1,2) - would switch the rythm for these two, a clickable downbeat feels nicer here
- 00:59:554 (3) - feels a little weird to put the vocals on the tail here since they're what feels strong in the song here
- 01:15:554 (5,6,1) - pointed out something similar in the Hard Diff, but it feels like these are just ignoring what is strong in the song
- 02:38:804 (3) - missing finsh
- 03:49:554 (5) - missing finish on the tail
- 04:04:804 (2) - would really rather have this cymbical mapped here, nothing important lands on the following white tick so I'd just do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3527936
- 04:08:586 (3) - missing finish on the tail
- 04:39:809 (6) - why not have this mapped too? very audible 1/4, no need to skip this I think
sweet, not much to say aside from a few missing hitsounds (probably didn't catch all of them, should double-check yourself) c:
only thing that is kinda bothering me (applies to all Diffs to a certain extend, Normal and Hard mostly though I think) is how you occassionally skip some very strong peaks in the vocals do map the drum track in the background, which I think does not do the song justice. I guess this is high subjective though so ehhhh
Good luck!