no reply = fixliangv587 wrote:
[General]
finish太闷了,换个http://puu.sh/jv92M.wav ---我怎么觉得这个finish不怎么适合,那就试试,我乐感不好
timing ---爱你神秘代码54,500,4,1,1,100,1,0
248065,521.739130434783,4,1,1,100,1,0
250151,508.474576271186,4,1,1,100,1,0
252184,500,4,1,1,100,1,0
282184,504.201680672269,4,1,1,100,1,0
283696,545.454545454546,4,1,1,100,1,0
284241,606.060606060606,4,1,1,100,1,0
286362,1304.34782608696,4,1,1,100,1,0
287666,731.707317073171,4,1,1,100,1,0
[Insane]
00:13:304 (6) - 根据flow,这个应该放左边才对 24,296
00:29:054 (5) - 根据flow,ctrl+g
00:39:554 (4) - 这个滑条是欠妥的,1是长白线结尾,2是00:39:804 - 这里有比较强的vocal,而且处于低潮阶段,跟vocal会更好些,最好的办法是00:39:554 - 圈,00:39:804 - 1/1滑条
00:43:554 (3) - 同理
00:44:804 (1) - 1/2滑条,00:45:304 - 1/1折返,这首歌有些地方适合红线起滑条,很多地方都没用到,挺可惜的 ---我跟的白线音,其他地方就不改了
00:51:429 (6) - 删了,手感也不好,也不明显
01:03:054 (3,4) - 顺下flow http://puu.sh/jv7h6.jpg
01:56:054 (1,2) - 换个位置 http://puu.sh/jv7oF.jpg
01:59:554 (6,7,8) - 显然不是最好的节奏
02:19:304 (1,2) - 间距可以大点,不要跟我说要挨到成个三角形http://puu.sh/jv7wU.jpg
02:19:304 (1,4,7) - 这三个滑条可以造个梗,其实这一组我调了下http://puu.sh/jv7Hb.jpg
02:24:304 (2,3,4) - 这样有点丑,排成个顺序或者图形什么的http://puu.sh/jv7Vg.jpg
02:31:554 (4,5,1) - 不要跌在那个尾巴上吧,不好看也不好玩,移到下面就行了
02:40:554 (1) - 这串太长了,02:40:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 这8个做成两个1/4折返滑条
04:06:929 (4) - 这里太挤了
04:11:167 (6) - 根据感觉来,最好改成4个1/4滑条
04:41:934 (6) - finish
[Hard]
00:03:929 (5) - 删了,坑人的---不坑啊,有音的 前面红线音不跟就是--好吧 下面也有人提了,那就删了吧= =
00:05:929 (6) - 00:07:929 (6) - ---^ ^
00:11:929 (6) - 这个可以做成3连,要不就删了 ---^ ^
01:21:054 (5,6) - 合成滑条会好打很多
03:40:054 (1) - 弄弯
04:01:054 (3) - 弄弯
04:41:684 (5) - 尾巴finish
04:43:696 (1,2) - 1/4折返
04:44:241 (1) - 节奏搞错了,应该是04:44:241 (1) - 1/2滑条,04:44:847 (2) - 圈,04:45:150 (3) - 1/1滑条 ---不改,后面心不好放位置
[Normal]
00:03:804 (3) - 用1/2就够了
03:02:804 (1) - 转盘后面要留2拍,删了,03:01:304 (5) - 加折返 ---不加折返 我换滑条 note组合
03:14:054 (1) - 留2拍,可以把转盘换长滑条
04:35:434 (7,8) - 挤到一起了
04:41:934 (4) - finish
04:44:241 (1) - 折返,04:45:150 - 这里起滑条
感谢mod
no reply = fixUmi wrote:
General
- Add "ドッグデイズ" to the Source and move "DOG DAYS" into tags
- Your normal is pretty dense tho, it'b be good to get an easy on the set ---N=1.89 H=2.8 I=3.7 each one +1☆spread no need Easy diff
Normal
- AR > 4, HP and OD > 3
- The Distance spacing is pretty huge considering it's the easiest difficulty among the set, i'd use x1,00, it might be long to fix but consider to fix it ---i think it is ok, for i do not want to overlap the note and slider , so i use 1.3x
- 00:01:054 (1,2) - Try out this rythm, so it follow properly the instru
- 00:03:804 (3) - Avoid 3/4 rythm on normal, change it into a 1/2 slider, also delete finish on end since it doesn't follow anything
- 00:06:054 (1,4) - delete finish
- 00:13:554 (1) - and 00:16:054 (6) - same as before
- 00:16:054 (6) - the is just a personal preference but I always thought it was weird when a slider ends on a heavy beat (big white tick), cuz u generally want to click on it, i'd recommend to use differents rythms for all these sliders ( 00:17:554 (1) - , 00:27:554 (4) - , etc ...)
- 00:18:554 (3) - isn't it supposed to be a clap on head ? ---it bad to add clap i think
- 00:40:304 (4,5) - i'd change the rythm for this part, to not skip finish sound at 00:40:804 - and 00:41:304 -
- 02:09:054 (4) - avoid 1/4 rythm
- 03:35:054 (7) - ^
- 03:46:554 (3) - suddenly using a long slider, any reason ? if no try this one
- 03:53:304 (2) - 03:53:304 (2) - even if the slider is pretty cool, it doesn't fit the song at all, i recommend u to use a normal rythm
- Mostly copy paste things on the diff, that's pretty sad, but it have good flow overall.
Hard
- AR 6 or 6,5 considering the bpm which is pretty low + it give a better spread.
- 00:01:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - pattern could be way better(star patern), take a look
- then 00:01:054 (1,2) - ctlr g on these two
- 00:03:929 (5,1) - Starting on blue tick is kinda stricky for an hard diffculty, u better change those rythms into triplet as u did 00:09:804 (4,5,1) -
- 00:13:554 (1) - u're missing some important beat, how about this rythm ?
- 00:16:554 - same as before ---here keep first
- 00:30:554 (3) - Curve it on the other side for a better flow
- 00:40:554 (7) - finish on end since it's the same sound as 00:41:304 (9) -
- 00:43:304 (2) - move it a bit to the left to increase the flow.
- 01:04:554 (3,4,5,6) - change this into 1/4 slider reverse and add a note
- 01:05:054 (4,5,6,7,1) - use a consistent spacing here, the current one is awkward.
- 01:18:554 (3) - in order to not skip the finish sound at 01:18:804 - use the following rythm
- 01:19:804 (1) - finish on head
- 01:45:554 (8,1) - once again, skipping those clap
- 02:23:554 (4,5) - finish should be on the end on (4) and not the head of (5)
- 02:31:554 (4,5) - any reason for this high spacing ? use a lower DS
- 03:02:804 (1) - this SV change isn't really necessary imo, u're also missing an instru here 03:03:304 -
- 03:13:304 (4,5,6) - u should use a slider, at first play i thought it was a 1/2 rythm ---keep mine
- 03:16:554 (1,2,3) - ignoring the instru once again the rythm bellow play good, and isn't that hard
- 03:47:804 (4) - stack it with 03:46:054 (1) - ? it give a better flow
- I enjoyed this diff, it just need some imporvements on rythm and structure (flow, aesthetic)
Insane
- AR 7,5
- 00:03:929 (5,1) - unless u already played the map u generally won't know that it's a 1/4 rythm, consider reduce the DS
- 01:11:304 (3) - ctrl g
- 01:18:054 (1) - delete reverse and a 1/2 slider at 01:18:804 - with finish on head
- 02:24:054 (1) - delete this note and move 02:23:304 (4,5) - on 02:24:304 (2) - fit nicely the voice
- 02:25:554 (6) - 2 notes instead would follow better the intru
- 03:02:866 (1) - same reflexion as hard
- 03:13:304 (4) - NC to give a warning for the 1/4 rythm i'd also increase the spacing between 03:13:304 (1,2,1) - so it's easier to get it.
- 03:20:929 (3) - i don't hear anything here, delete it
- 03:26:554 (3) - finish on end
- 03:27:304 (5) - ^
- 03:54:554 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - what are u following here exactly ? '-' is it just for fun ? if it's consider remap this part
- Sweet diff
And that's all, what a lovely song, gl with it --yeah yeah ,it is soooo cute
thank you for your mod