General
- Add "ドッグデイズ" to the Source and move "DOG DAYS" into tags
- Your normal is pretty dense tho, it'b be good to get an easy on the set
Normal
- AR > 4, HP and OD > 3
- The Distance spacing is pretty huge considering it's the easiest difficulty among the set, i'd use x1,00, it might be long to fix but consider to fix it
- 00:01:054 (1,2) - Try out this rythm, so it follow properly the instru
- 00:03:804 (3) - Avoid 3/4 rythm on normal, change it into a 1/2 slider, also delete finish on end since it doesn't follow anything
- 00:06:054 (1,4) - delete finish
- 00:13:554 (1) - and 00:16:054 (6) - same as before
- 00:16:054 (6) - the is just a personal preference but I always thought it was weird when a slider ends on a heavy beat (big white tick), cuz u generally want to click on it, i'd recommend to use differents rythms for all these sliders ( 00:17:554 (1) - , 00:27:554 (4) - , etc ...)
- 00:18:554 (3) - isn't it supposed to be a clap on head ?
- 00:40:304 (4,5) - i'd change the rythm for this part, to not skip finish sound at 00:40:804 - and 00:41:304 -
- 02:09:054 (4) - avoid 1/4 rythm
- 03:35:054 (7) - ^
- 03:46:554 (3) - suddenly using a long slider, any reason ? if no try this one
- 03:53:304 (2) - 03:53:304 (2) - even if the slider is pretty cool, it doesn't fit the song at all, i recommend u to use a normal rythm
- Mostly copy paste things on the diff, that's pretty sad, but it have good flow overall.
Hard
- AR 6 or 6,5 considering the bpm which is pretty low + it give a better spread.
- 00:01:054 (1,2,3,4,1) - pattern could be way better(star patern), take a look
- then 00:01:054 (1,2) - ctlr g on these two
- 00:03:929 (5,1) - Starting on blue tick is kinda stricky for an hard diffculty, u better change those rythms into triplet as u did 00:09:804 (4,5,1) -
- 00:13:554 (1) - u're missing some important beat, how about this rythm ?
- 00:16:554 - same as before
- 00:30:554 (3) - Curve it on the other side for a better flow
- 00:40:554 (7) - finish on end since it's the same sound as 00:41:304 (9) -
- 00:43:304 (2) - move it a bit to the left to increase the flow.
- 01:04:554 (3,4,5,6) - change this into 1/4 slider reverse and add a note
- 01:05:054 (4,5,6,7,1) - use a consistent spacing here, the current one is awkward.
- 01:18:554 (3) - in order to not skip the finish sound at 01:18:804 - use the following rythm
- 01:19:804 (1) - finish on head
- 01:45:554 (8,1) - once again, skipping those clap
- 02:23:554 (4,5) - finish should be on the end on (4) and not the head of (5)
- 02:31:554 (4,5) - any reason for this high spacing ? use a lower DS
- 03:02:804 (1) - this SV change isn't really necessary imo, u're also missing an instru here 03:03:304 -
- 03:13:304 (4,5,6) - u should use a slider, at first play i thought it was a 1/2 rythm
- 03:16:554 (1,2,3) - ignoring the instru once again the rythm bellow play good, and isn't that hard
- 03:47:804 (4) - stack it with 03:46:054 (1) - ? it give a better flow
- I enjoyed this diff, it just need some imporvements on rythm and structure (flow, aesthetic)
Insane
- AR 7,5
- 00:03:929 (5,1) - unless u already played the map u generally won't know that it's a 1/4 rythm, consider reduce the DS
- 01:11:304 (3) - ctrl g
- 01:18:054 (1) - delete reverse and a 1/2 slider at 01:18:804 - with finish on head
- 02:24:054 (1) - delete this note and move 02:23:304 (4,5) - on 02:24:304 (2) - fit nicely the voice
- 02:25:554 (6) - 2 notes instead would follow better the intru
- 03:02:866 (1) - same reflexion as hard
- 03:13:304 (4) - NC to give a warning for the 1/4 rythm i'd also increase the spacing between 03:13:304 (1,2,1) - so it's easier to get it.
- 03:20:929 (3) - i don't hear anything here, delete it
- 03:26:554 (3) - finish on end
- 03:27:304 (5) - ^
- 03:54:554 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - what are u following here exactly ? '-' is it just for fun ? if it's consider remap this part
- Sweet diff
And that's all, what a lovely song, gl with it