-SiN- wrote:

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg yaoi
nvm just do it xD

ic.. still image animation not bad

01:03:765 - (SB51) misplaced transition & movement
01:09:548 - (SB47) be creative, this looks bad somehow.. zoomed in an out with spin animation?
01:42:982 - (SB24,25,26,27) change this image to standard landscape just like the others and rotate them in osu (lag issue) and you could add photo frame like a polaroid [sample, click me]
02:29:066 - zoom in animation is better

-SiN- wrote:

one image bugging me but its ok since re-download is sucks
hope there will be auto DL in background of sb

La Cataline wrote:

[general]
the map is wonderful: great SB, no KIAI. <3

[Final mission]
00:33:404(6) maybe nc? /yeah you're right
02:35:211(3) feels like it should be at 02:35:392 /OK. fixed

favourited.
star~

banvi wrote:

Hello
Begineer's Mission
ok
Pokie's
ok
Hyper
00:05:211 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv3) yes
00:29:066 (4,5,6) 3 grid left?(because of spacing error)yes
00:38:825 (2,3) 1 grid up?(^)yes
Final
02:50:211 (1,2) spacing is far. (1) move 4 grid left. oh i forgot this!
eveless's
no prob. Great~

BL lol
Great thismap!!!
star & gl

hybrid579 wrote:

Yaoi? O_o

Anyway, hi :3

Beginner's mission:

Good.

Pokie's Training Mission:

02:05:211 (5)-Add claps on beginning of slider and on last reverse arrow? OK
02:39:910 (4)-^?

Hyper Mission:

01:08:464 (7)-Add clap on end of slider? OK
02:46:054 (x)-Add note and add clap?OK
03:00:874 (1)-Add finish?OK

Final Mission:

Good.

eveless' Extra Mission:

Good.

Sorry if I didn't have a proper mod.

Good luck getting this ranked.

Star!

Also, 200th post.

Mystearica wrote:

[Beginner]

00:42:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe spacing these out could make it easier for newbies? Suggestion.
01:16:777 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing here

Actually you've got a lot of them stacked and a lot of them not stacked, so that's the reason I'm actually mentioning it. If you just make those stacked sliders repeat and delete the existing ones you can change them without doing much work, although it might be ok just as already.Let me consider this...but not to change atm. Sorry~

[Pokie]

(It's fine)

[Hyper]

I'll let it slide... minor things that can be done either way, not a problem.

[Final]

01:00:693 (2) - Delete this circle OK
01:03:584 (2) - Same with this one OK

[eveless]

This is overmapped. A lot of those doubles and triplets should not be there.

It's ok other than being overmapped though, but that makes it not ok ^_^

AngelHoney wrote:

All

爲什麽stack 才0.1 D: (太低了啦... 好看嘛……那0.2算了（死
comboburst.png 文件太大了 (我記得最大只能500*600 我记得有个卡卡西的 官方 皮肤比我这个还大……嘛，我上一张RANK的也是这大小，所以应该没问题？

eveless' Extra Mission 这个我让E姐来看XD

00:03:223 (1,2) - 間距怎麼突然大了O.O?
00:14:789 (8) - 從這開始 突然讀不懂了._.(如果是騙pc的話 就無視吧
一開始25秒 感覺不錯 但是過了break后 感覺...這是同一個mapper做的么@.@
後面雖然沒啥問題..但是感覺和之前差好多D:


Final Mission

00:13:163 (1) - 加個音效finish? ...我忘记了
01:42:801 (1) - ^……我又忘记了
02:09:729 (3) - 這個不要疊在slider後面?(因為之前02:08:103 (8,9) 這裡的緣故 再按這裡容易搶拍lol 移開點 會更好讀 嘛..本来是想骗一下人的..不过既然你这么说了，好吧
03:00:874 (1) - 音效finish?……我去自重..
03:01:054 - 這根綠線多餘的?……一时顺手=。=
怎麼感覺這個diff 比之前的難多了XD加了十几个NOTE而已……

Hyper Mission

00:13:163 (1) - ^……T_T
00:52:380 (1) - 移除newcombo ?嘛...移除也有移除的好处..
02:25:090 (1) - ^好


Pokie's Training Mission

fine:3

Beginner's Mission

00:34:850 (1) - 移除newcombo ?好吧
00:38:103 (1) - ^好
01:19:669 (1) - 好奇怪lol 好吧换掉了
01:28:343 (1) - 移除newcombo ?好
02:57:982 (1,1) - 互換音效finish

其實tags里還可以寫上BL <3 如果你在你的图上都写GAL我就写XD

brikel wrote:

Hi~ Hi~

[Hyper mission]

00:08:825 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and..
00:09:729 (3) - move 1/2 fast?
sorry but both no since I follow the music

Um.... The others are all fine.
Good song... Star~

lepidopodus wrote:

These are just suggestions so don't need to take this seriously.

Beginner's Mission
00:24:729 (1) - how about moving the middle of the slider one grid up? ok
00:56:536 (5) - move one grid up? or move less than one grid...ok I know what you mean XD
00:59:428 (x) - add a circle with finish?I add one more repeat at 6
01:29:789 (1) - move the end of the slider one grid up?ok
01:59:789 (2) - move about 1/2 grid down?ok
02:02:319 (3) - move the end of the slider one grid up?ok
02:17:500 (x) - add a circle with finish?ok
02:57:982 (1) - maybe just extend this to 03:00:874 and 03:00:874 (1). It might be too hard for this kind of difficulty.
Nice map XD

Pokie's Training Mission
01:10:994 (1) - finish at the start of the slider?ok
02:29:066 (1) - add finish?ok
Not that much to mod. Nice map XD

Hyper Mission
00:05:211 (3) - move one grid right?ok
01:16:054 (6) - move one grid left & one grid down? (though seems not that important XD)
01:17:681 (3) - remove whistle from the end of the slider?ok
01:30:151 (5) - move one grid down?
02:14:247 (4) - move one grid left?ok
02:28:343 (3) - move one grid left?
02:28:705 (4) - move two grid left?1 grid
02:35:753 (1) - remove whistle from the end of the slider?ok
02:45:693 (6) - how about moving this to 02:45:874? (maybe not...)
Nice map XD

Final Mission
00:01:597 (1) - move one grid right?ok
00:24:729 (1) - how about putting finish in the start of the slider?
00:30:874 (3) - reduce return by one, and add a circle in 00:31:416?ok
00:35:572 (3) - move one grid left & one grid up?
00:35:572 (3) or 00:36:295 (1) - add finish?
00:50:030 (3) - move one grid up?
00:59:428 (1) - add finish in the start of the slider?
01:27:621 (8) - remove this or add a circle in 01:27:982? (just suggestion, anyway.)
01:28:343 (1) - maybe finish in the start of the slider?
01:34:127 (1) - move the end of the slider one grid right?
02:03:584 (8,1) - remove whistle?
02:11:356 (4) - remove the note or remove whistle? (well I think you are following vocal... just suggestion XD)
02:12:259 (2) - remove whistle in the start of the slider?ok
02:16:145 (1) or the start of 02:17:500 (1) - add finish?
02:23:825 (4) - maybe remove whistle from both the start & the end of the slider?
02:48:584 (5) - move two grid left?
02:48:946 (6) - move two grid down?
Nice map XD

Overall, it's nice. Star~
(and sorry for too many unnecessary suggestions ._.)

Muya wrote:

[Biginner's Mission]
01:41:356 (2.3) 3grid right OK

[Hyper Mission]
01:34:669 (2.3.4.5.6) 3grid down , 1grid rightOK
02:25:452 (3) 3grid up , 3grid leftOK
02:25:813 (4.5) 6grid leftOK

[Final Mission]
00:35:572 (3) 1grid up , 1.5 grid leftOK
00:56:536 (5) New combo?
01:21:837 (7) 1grid leftOK
01:42:259 (1) Remove New combo?OK
02:57:801 (7) Make this slider end at 02:57:982.

I am noob modder Don 't worry, I'm noob too XD

Krisom wrote:

Mandatory youtube link~
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fZzhUy40ftU

Oh, right, the mod...

...ummm <_<

HiHi!

[General]
Is this difficulty spread necesary?

[Basic]
REALLY intuitive! Nice job!
02:15:874 (2) - Two things about this one. First, the stack looks horrible in-game, try to fix it =_=. Second, Is this note necesary? I mean, it's like the only 1/2 note in the entire diff. Consider removing it. OK
02:55:090 (Spinner) - Why don't you use just one long spinner? It would be better for the easiest diff imo. due to the star rating....

[Pokie's]
00:18:223 (5) - Clap the startOK
02:29:066 (1) - Whoa whoa whoa, what's up with this spacing? I know what you're trying to do here, but there are other ways to create a nice pattern. What about this?OK

[Hyper]
Pay more attention to the music, you missed lots of finifh hitsounds, These are the notes that should get a finish hitsoundOK
00:24:729 (1) -
00:36:295 (1) - (start)
00:47:862 (1) - ^
00:59:428 (1) - ^
01:10:994 (1) - ^
01:22:560 (1) - ^
01:28:343 (1) - ^
01:34:127 (1) - ^
01:37:018 (1) -
01:39:910 (1) -
01:54:368 (1) - (start)
02:05:934 (1) - ^
02:17:500 (1) -
02:29:066 (1) - (start)
02:40:633 (1) - ^
02:46:416 (1) -
02:52:199 (1) - (start)
And that's pretty much it~
Nice diff

[Final]
I'm not a fan of the jumpy mapping style, and I can't play like this, so I just can skip it. But apply here the same finish suggestions that I pointed for HyperI'd like this diff use soft whistle instead of finish, sorry~

The map is fine, but I'm still unsure about Final and eveless', because, well, they are kinda similar imho. Oh well...

Star!

Kecco wrote:

•Overall•
Offset : 1.633 ~ Resnap All Notes I'm considering this

•eveless' Extra Mission• I just let eveless to fix~
00:09:368 (8) - New combo.
00:09:910 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:10:181 (2) - New combo.
00:45:693 (3,4) - 1 grid down?
00:49:307 (6) - New combo.
01:09:548 (1) - This note will be hidden by the 01:08:825 (3)'s score image (300,100,50,X) , replace it?
01:31:596 (5) - New combo.
01:41:356 (9) - ^
02:04:850 (6) - ^
02:13:163 (5) - ^
02:16:054 (5) - ^

•Final Mission•
00:26:356 (4) - New combo? OK
00:56:536 (5) - ^OK
00:58:072 (1) - Add finish?I like whistle here
01:15:331 (5,6) - 1 grid up?OK

•Pokie-•
00:59:428 (1) - Place it closer to the centre of the grid- I think it's OK~
02:17:500 (1) - ^I think it's OK~

•Beginner's Mission•
00:07:380 (1) - This is an easy right? Well, the beginning of this slider should be placed on the centre of the grid, fix it please.OK
02:29:066 (1) - ^OK

Hyper Mission has not problems.

Well, star.
Nice SB.Thanks to your tutorial, kecco!

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) 加上一至兩秒的audio lead-in會否更好?
2) BLSB美

[Basic Mission]
00:04:850 (1,1) 對於easy or normal來說， 這個slider離spinner太近了
00:56:536 (4,5) 對於新手來說，太多reverse然後一個slider, 或會不知道何時鬆手去按下一個slider。
02:27:621 (1,1) 太接近SPINNER

[Pokie's]
我覺得沒問題

[Hyper Mission]
沒問題.

[Final Mission]
沒問題-_-..

[eveless's]
00:24:006 (1,2,3,4) - 因為這4個note的音效太小，而(5)是一個finish，所以顯得(5)很突然， 或把這4個note 加whistle和音量漸大?
00:46:777 (2) 漏了clap?
00:47:500 (5) 加whistle?
01:15:693 (2,3) 總覺得被另一個slider蓋住了不太好看
01:23:645 (3) ^
01:24:729 (3) ^
01:26:356 (4) ^
02:12:078 (2,3,4) ^
02:15:151 (2) ^
在這之後還有幾個.....不盡數了

很完整的map, 只能給一點建議了 囧, star~~

Sallad4ever wrote:

2 things I can't stand : Yuri & Yaoi
Thank goodness this is still within the border
Oh I don't understand chinese so maybe I'll say the same thing as Vikon

[General]
- disable the letter box option (even though it didn't appear during the breaks)


[SB]
- I strongly suggest you to make the creator name of each difficulty using the diff spec (the lowest left box in Design tab), In other word you should make the "Beatmap : (creators name) different for each difficulty


[Basic Mission]
this is easy right?
haha the most biggest and lowest setting for HP and CS but still 2.62 star rating
01:25:452 (3) - little nazi (move down 1 grid, move the later notes accordingly)
01:42:801 (3) - Finish him
Combo mod
Most of your combo pattern is 1 combo set for 2 stanza, so this combo mod will be based on that
00:44:970 (5) - NC
00:46:416 (1) - remove NC
00:49:669 (1) - ^
00:51:115 (7) - NC
00:56:536 (5) - ^
01:24:006 (1) - remove NC
01:25:452 (6) - NC
01:26:898 (1) - remove NC
01:29:789 (1) - ^
01:31:235 (4) - NC then add NC on 01:31:235 (4)
The second half still have some combo pattern, I'm sure by now you're familiar with the pattern and can fix it your self

[Pokie's Training Mission]
00:59:428 (1) ~ 01:08:103 (2) - rise the volume in this section by 2 or 1
02:17:500 (1) ~ 02:26:175 (1) - ^
Combo mod
a bit hard to decide the pattern but try to have some consistency, for example :
02:27:621 (2) - this place is similar with 01:09:910 (1), it should be NC'ed

[Hyper Mission]
I suggest you to use normal hitsound during the chorus' to make it more appealing than other section
Decrease CS by 1
01:42:801 (1) - Finish?
Combo mod
same combo suggestion as Basic Mission

[eveless' Extra Mission]
00:10:181 (1) - doesn't really fit on the blue tick, move it back on the red tick
00:11:627 (1) - ^
02:16:777 (3,4,5,6,7) - the only stream with different spacing, better fix it
01:03:042 (3,4) - cutting slider with small and long slider doesn't look very good IMO
02:14:609 (1,2) - ^
02:20:753 (2,3,5) - ^
02:23:283 (1,2) - ah this is better
02:56:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - interesting pattern

Uhh yeah yaoi is too much for me
Regardless of that good map and SB
Sorry for posting an essay

Garven wrote:

Indeed, a queue now. Though, honestly, if you catch me online, I'll probably be fine to mod then as well.

[General]
So many large images for the SB... you're going to have to lower the file size a bit, most probably. Try to aim for about 10 megabytes (with no video).
Also, don't forget to apply the epilepsy warning on all difficulties.
Interesting seeing such a long map with no kiai. It works fine without. :3

[Basic Mission]
Up that HP drain by 1 or 2 please. 0 is just dumb, to be honest.
00:07:380 (1) - The low OD plus note so soon after the spinner just makes this look ugly. You can see it a little after half-way through the spinner, and it may prove to be confusing (especially on the easiest difficulty). Try something else instead of a spinner.
00:42:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you get these to stack correctly? (and later iterations)
02:27:621 (1) - Beh, too short, and has the same issue as the first spinner. Either map through it, or just delete it.

[Pokie's Training]
Nice. A little repetitive, but it's a long song, hehe.

[Hyper Mission]
Maybe up OD by +1?
01:02:319 (1) - Rotate this one a few degrees clockwise so it's not overlapping the 2 after it.

[Final Mission]
Velocity is too high for me, so I can't mod well. :/
Some of the jumps felt extreme for how the song went
02:57:801 (8) - I'm not sure what rhythm you're going with here...

[eveless' Extra Mission]
02:05:392 (4,5) - Grahh. I missed this every time. :/
Looks fine, though. Still too hard for me, hehe.

There you go, then. A decent set of maps, though Beginner felt kind of blah since it felt like you're hitting every single beat with very little to break it up. Hopefully you can reduce the size of the SB without destroying the quality too much.

Krisom wrote:

wanhyrzh wrote:

[Final]
I'm not a fan of the jumpy mapping style, and I can't play like this, so I just can skip it. But apply here the same finish suggestions that I pointed for HyperI'd like this diff use soft whistle instead of finish, sorry~

Sure, but then the hitsounding would be unconsistent between difficulties, considering that Basic uses Normal hitsounds, and now Final wont have those finishes. If you won't apply them to Final, then I'd suggest removing them from Hyper.

Don't kudosu this reply please.

eee wrote:

here goes a really stinky mod... take what you will
eeemod GO!!!

[Storyboard]
I believe the epilepsy warning should be displayed, you can use the preset or make your own. Parts like 00:13:163 and 02:27:621 are pretty much flashing and can throw players off...

[Hyper Mission]
01:58:886 (3) - one more reverse arrow (?)

[Final Mission]
00:37:560 (7) - consider stacking this under the previous (4) (?) to be honest, it's not even noticeable out of [EDIT]
00:41:717 (x) - add a note here?
01:59:789 (x) - ^

stinky mod, you can forget any of these
I disapprove of yaoi, but...
SB is good for a first one, really, good job...
Also, it doesn't matter if you ask me for mods, I always end up finding nothing D:

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Some SB images contains unnecessary trasparency ("SB00-1.png", "SB00-2.png", "SB00-3.png", "SB43.png" and "warning.png")
  • Add "Yaoi" into Tags
  • Add kiai

Lizbeth wrote:

Hello~

eveless' Extra Mission Oh I will leave this to eveless XD
00:46:416 (1) - too close to prev note
01:05:934 (3) - remove this note
01:06:476 - add one here
01:24:729 (3) - I think you should remove the note after this slider, and move it 1/2 later
01:26:175 - sound better without a note here, just like I said above
01:27:259 (2,3,4,5,6) - same, removing 4
You should add a spinner in this diff... just to make difference in score when this get ranked D:

Final Mission
This diff is Hardest than eveless' Extra Mission imo, just because of the jumps...and get less score.
I think you could reduce jumps a bit in this diff
00:31:235 (4) - remove?? I removed this and added a reverse
00:40:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I found this increase of spacing way too random OK
02:27:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same of the spacing increase >< I think it fits the music?

Hyper Mission
Cool diff
00:28:886 - add note?
00:41:536 (3) - remove and add a repeat to 2
00:49:488 (3) - move 1/2 beat earlier
01:09:006 (8) - shorten this slider by 1/2 beat
01:55:271 (2) - shorten by 1/2 beat the add repeat
01:58:163 (2) - shorten by a beat then add repeat
02:04:307 (3) - shorten by 1/2 beat and move 1/2 later, then add note at 02:04:307
02:05:030 (5) - shorten by 1/2 beat then add note at 02:05:572
02:08:103 (2) - shorten by 1/2 beat
02:09:729 (5) - shorten by 1/2 then add repeat
I wont say more of those, i guess you get the point @.@ Just don't miss the predominant beat of the song inside the slider body =D
Oh I know what you mean XD but I decide to leave them there, sorry~

Pokie's Training Mission
Perfect <3

Basic Mission
No problems with the map, though I find it a lil bit too hard for the easiest diff

Here is you star
I dunno about Sb, so there not too much to say about it. ( just that is really nice )

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. +40SP压力很大

[Basic Mission]:

1. 02:55:090 (1) - 这里02:57:801结束如何? 然后静音下它的末尾[/llist] OK
   
   [Pokie's Training Mission]:
   
   1. 同上
   OK
   
   [Hyper Mission]:
   
   1. ^
   OK
   
   [Final Mission]:
   
   1. 00:02:319 (5) - 右移一格OK
   2. 00:42:982 (4,1) - 很不人道 把1放在4末尾会好读点嘛...就稍微不人道一下啦
   3. 02:44:428 (7) - new comboOK
   4. 03:00:331 (1) - cancel newcomboOK
   5. 03:00:512 (2) - new combo

OK

E姐的好难 > <有人说我那个比较难...嗯（殴

LoweH wrote:

Hi ~

General
Offset : 1.595 not a big problem imo
Epilepsy Storyboard : Use display epilepsy warning default hmm...I decide to use my own
Map size is 16 mb, so too high, change storyboard's images file (without transparent background) in .jpg (!)yeah I do as you say

Basic Mission
01:38:464 (5) - New combo here OK

Pokie's training mission
General : name is a bit long xD (maybe change in Pokie's Train Mission) haha I think it's OK
00:06:657 (1) - Remove new combo OK
00:10:271 (4) - New combo here OK
00:11:717 (1) - Remove new combo OK
02:47:862 (5) - New combo hereno imo
02:53:645 (3) - New combo hereno imo

Hyper Mission
Fine ?

Final Mission
00:27:259 (6) - Hitsound Finish (?)no imo
00:30:151 (4) - Hitsound Finish (?)no imo
00:32:681 (4,5) - Hitsound Finsh (?)no imo
00:36:295 (1) - Hitsound Finsh (?)OK

eveless' Extra Mission
Seems fine ~

very nice StoryBoard, yaoi /o/ ç_ç

*STAR*

Eirene wrote:

[Final Mission]:
you used too many whistle imo

00:30:874 (3) - remove the last whistle
00:36:295 (1) - add finish !!! OK
00:38:283 (2) - remove whistle ?OK
00:45:512 (8) - remove whistle ?
00:47:500 (6) - finishOK
00:51:476 (3) - remove whistle ?OK
01:04:487 (6) - this whistle is strange, move it on (5) or remove it *.*OK
01:05:753 (3,4) - remove these whistle ?OK
01:19:669 (1) - whistle at the end, not at the begining
01:20:211 (2) - remove whistle ?
01:21:115 (5) - ^
01:21:476 (6) - whislte at the end too ?
01:21:837 (7) - only a whistle at the end ?
01:27:621 (8) - try a finish instead of whistle or at least revome this whistle
01:33:765 (7) - finish ?? OK
01:37:380 (9) - remove last whistle
01:54:006 (6) - finish ?OK
02:03:584 (8) - remove whistleOK
02:03:946 (1) - ^OK
02:05:572 (8) - finishOK
02:06:837 (3) - remove whistle ?
02:10:452 (1) - remove the first whistle ?OK
02:11:356 (4) - remove whistle

I should finish to look at that diff this night *.*

some irc help too *.*

star+kudo star *.* hardest difficulties are awesome :3

Astom wrote:

Pretty good map =3 Only yaoi... xD well it's not a problem lol

I suggest finish the skin :3 sb is cool and maybe with a full skin looks better =)

Star + Kudo star >:3

PD: look for a BAT, this is already rankeable, I think, or close to it

Lemons In Your Eyes wrote:

You mod requested~

Nice map!

I'll mod tomorrow cause it's very late.

Star & Kudo star!
yaoi is good

Shulin wrote:

Cute SB

General:

-- Some hitsound consistency would be good, also check the overall volume on each difficulty and try and make them the same.OK
-- You could fade out the mp3 I guess, it cuts off at the end. Minor thing though.OK

Beginner Mission:

-- Too much normal whistle. It became annoying after a while u_u

00:01:597 (1) - Remove whistle, add finish to the start.OK
00:07:380 (1) - ^OK
00:35:572 (4) - Clap > whistle.OK
00:36:295 (1) - Finish.OK
00:36:295 (1) - Finish start.OK
01:10:994 (1) - Finish start, remove whistle.OK
01:54:368 (1) - ^OK
01:54:368 (1) - New combo.You mean remove? I agree since it's no need to NC here
02:05:934 (1) - Finish start.OK
02:29:066 (1) - ^OK
02:40:633 (1) - Finish.OK

I only highlighted where I thought whistle sounded really out of place. Good difficulty ^_^

Pokie's Training Mission:

Nice, I like the custom clap here.

Hyper Mission:

-- Normal whistle is too loud.I consider change them all to custom clap

01:24:910 (1) - Remove custom slider tick here, sounds weird.OK
01:42:259 (6) - Vertical flip then stack it again?OK
02:44:970 (5,6) - Remove whistle.OK

Normal whistle doesn't sound very good, it also sounds too loud. (More clap would be better imo)

Final Mission:

-- Too much soft whistle imo (and no claps =S), some normal sections would have been good to.OK, I'll consider it.

01:42:078 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - The stacking here looks bad, maybe raise the stacking leniency or move it somewhere else.OK
01:42:259 (6) - New combo.OK
01:42:801 (1) - Remove new combo if done ^OK
02:15:874 (1) - New combo seems a bit pointless o_oremoved
02:27:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Huge jump, maybe make this more symmetrical, it's slightly awkward angle right now imo.OK

eveless' Extra Mission:I leave this to eveless XD

01:09:729 (2,3,4) - Space this 1/4 closer together, like 02:16:777 (3,4,5,6,7) -
01:10:090 (5,6) - Imo the angle is a little awkward.

Minor stuff. Star.

Lemons In Your Eyes wrote:

You mod requested~

Nice map!

I'll mod tomorrow cause it's very late.

Star & Kudo star!

EDIT: Okay, here's the mod I promised. ^^
These are just suggestions because I couldn't find anything completely wrong.

General
Maybe add shonen-ai to tags since it means boy love? haha I think shonen is somehow younger than boy XD

Beginner Mission
You should use a larger grid on easy levels next time.

01:24:187 (5) - Just a style suggestion, can you move this 10 grid up and 3 grid left? (lvl 3 grid) it's kind of weird cause the next slider doesn't overlap the previous slider like this one. OK

Pokie's Training Mission
01:22:560 (1) - Add finish here, it think it sounds nice.OK
01:28:343 (1) - ^OK
01:34:127 (1) - ^OK
02:05:934 (1) - ^OK
02:40:633 (1) - ^OK
02:46:416 (1) - ^OK
02:42:801 (3) - Move 2 grid up (lvl 3) no since it's 1.1X at this diff~
02:46:416 (1) - Add finish.OK
02:52:199 (1) - ^OK

Yeah, lots of finish suggestions, but it's no problem if you don't agree with me on these.

Hyper Mission
Some of these claps are coming out of nowhere imo.

00:25:090 (3) - Very small style suggestion, Move 1 grid up. (lvl 3)OK
00:54:006 (2) - Add clap.OK
00:54:729 (4) - ^OK
00:55:452 - At the end of slider add clap.OK
00:56:175 - ^OK
01:42:801 (1) - Can you make this look a little more like this? OK


Final Mission
00:09:910 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and remove the whistle at the end of the slider.OK
01:01:054 (3) - Move one grid up.OK
01:37:018 (8) - Add finish at beginning of slider.OK
01:38:825 (5) - Move one grid right. (lvl 3)
01:39:910 (3) - Add finish.OK
01:56:898 (6) - Move 1 grid up (lvl 3)OK
02:02:681 (4) - Move 1 grid left and 1 grid downOK
02:26:175 (8) - Add finish at end of slider.whistle instead~

eveless' Extra MissionI leave these to eveless~
00:47:139 (3) - This finish sounds funny here, remove it?
00:47:862 (1) - Add finish here.
00:59:428 (1) - ^
01:08:103 (1) - ^
01:09:910 (4) - Move one grid right. (lvl 3)
01:22:560 (6) - Add finish here.
01:28:343 (1) - ^
01:34:127 (6) - ^
01:37:018 (1) - ^
01:39:910 (1) - ^
01:54:368 (1) - ^
02:05:934 (1) - ^
02:17:500 (1) - ^
02:40:633 (1) - ^
02:46:416 (1) - ^
02:52:199 (1) - ^
02:55:090 (1) - ^
02:57:982 (9) - ^
(Ugg me and my finishes, I'm so weird. >.<)

Just some suggestions that might make it look/sound better. ^^

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Really great job on the storyboard. I wonder why you storyboarded an epilepsy warning manually, because there's the option in Song Setup to do that (Maybe you wanted it to fit the SB?), anyway i don't think the epilepsy warning is needed: i don't see any rapidly falshing colours.

- Beginner Mission:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nice

- Pokie's Training Mission:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nice x2

- Hyper Mission:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nice x3

- Final Mission:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nice x4

- eveless' Extra Mission:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Rename to "eveless's Extra Mission". You have to add the 's because it is a name. OK
  Nice x5

Nice combo x5.
Can't find anything wrong in either maps or storyboard, everything works fine and nothing is broken or out of the guidelines.
Nice job.

ignorethis wrote:

Offset feels way too early for me. Try +20ms ? OK it's my fault.... I changed the mp3

<Beginner Mission>
01:10:994 (1) - Add whistle? I delete it XD

<Hyper Mission>
02:44:247 - Remove the hitsound on this slider tick OK

<eveless's Extra Mission>leavethis to eveless XD
00:11:717 (2,3,4,5,6) - too many finishes D:

nice

Sweyax wrote:

Hey you want a mod i have a mod ^^

Beginner Mission :

[02:17:517](3) Place the circle "3" on the last slider is the coolest :> oh I consider not to change since the time is a bit long

Ehh it's a good beatmap, i have not other fault at mod (xD)

search a BAT (osuplayer111 etc...)

STAR~

Teara wrote:

In love with the storyboard!!

Its so cute.

Get a star!

Also.

Nothing major, and the following can be ignored =p

But

[Eveless Extra Mission] I leave these to eveless~

00:58:725 (2) - Spacing~ to close IMO
02:17:339 (8) - new combo
02:17:520 (1) - remove new combo
02:29:086 (1) - SB makes this very hard to read IMHO

all in all~ love this diff!!

[Final Mission]

01:57:279 (1,2) - shape them a little to fit circle approach? OK
01:58:183 (4) - ^OK

Doomsday93 wrote:

Oh hey. Nice little storyboard there

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. I got Offset: 1,627 (A little later than yours) oops....+10 again ;_;
2. There seems to be a lot of White in the Background and the Storyboard, which makes the white hitcircles hard to see. Maybe you should change the white hitcircles to a different color?I don't see very hard when I play....so I decide to leave it there

[BEGINNER MISSION]

Seems fine, A little hard for an easy difficulty, but it isn't too tough.

[POKIE'S TRAINING MISSION]

Awesome. I couldn't find anything wrong

[HYPER MISSION]

Very nice.

[FINAL MISSION]

I didn't like this one as much as Hyper. A bit too quick imo, and some silly jumps, but that is just my opinion

00:54:930 (7,1) - Remove this jump? I can't see where this jump fits in. It seems to come out of nowhere.OK
01:12:460 (1) - ^OK

^ There are a few others like that, but those are the more major ones.

[EVELESS'S EXTRA MISSION]I leave these to eveless~

hmm. Too overmapped for my tastes. I can see where they fit in, but its a bit too much IMO. Nothing specific that I can point out though.

Overall, its a nice little map. Im not too keen on the insane difficulties, but the lower ones were very nice. A nice storyboard too.

Starred

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Lol Yaoi time...Well done on the SB!!

[Pokie's Training Mission]
Check the spacing for this even AIMOD says no problem?

My biggest concern is Kiai Time...It would improve the feel of the map to me...I suggest you insert Kiai time at 01:11:024 until the break at 01:43:012 (or somewhere in between), and then another Kiai Time at 02:29:096 until the end of the song (or somewhere in between) I think KIAI makes the notes very hard to see due to the SB

Great map! Very well done, lol way to make a great Yaoi SB

~STAR

impossiblexu wrote:

[Beginner Mission]

Hitsound有点乱，建议改成Soft音效
或者试试我重新排了一下的 看看行不行：太棒了，很有创意的音效……比我的好多了，果然找你是对的 XP

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[Pokie's Training Mission]

• 00:47:892(1):开头处+Finish OOPS 居然忘了= =
  02:22:590(4):开头处+Whistle OK

[Hyper Mission]

• 02:29:096(1):开头处+Finish OK

[Final Mission]

• 02:15:723:加一个Circle OK

Good map!

#STAR#

xierbaliti wrote:

哇好赞的SB ._. yaranaika?

打了几遍 一些建议:(可能只是本人这么认为 可以无视掉啦)

-Beginner-
Normal的哨子音在这歌真的不好听 >_> 而且你看你在其他的难度里也没有用到嘛 换成soft的吧 :3 换了O.O

Final-
01:42:560 (4) - 去掉这个? 这里3连貌似比5连稍微有感觉 :3 好

*star*x3 for good map&SB 谢谢:3！压力变大了……

快找BAT吧 >_>

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Even though I don't like yaoi, this is amazing sb.

Beginner Mission
Normal mod:
02:43:916 (1) - this will probably look better if the curve was a little sharper yeah!

Combo mod:
01:38:494 (1) - new combo to follow your new combo every 8 whole notes pattern (and to follow the lyrics too) OK
02:49:699 (4,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 4 to follow your new combo every 8 whole note pattern? OK

Pokie's Training Mission
Combo mod:
02:43:554 (4) - new combo to follow the lyrics yeah~

Hyper Mission:
Normal mod:
00:54:578 (3,4,5) - it will look better if these notes were rearranged so that 5 is not overlapped by 2 OK
01:55:301 (2) - it would look better if the end of 2 did not overlap the end of 1 OK
02:53:313 (2) - it would look better if the 2 was not overlapped by 1 OK

Combo mod:
00:29:096 (4) - since you seem to prefer more combos in this diff, add a new combo hereOK
00:34:880 (4) - ^OK
00:36:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 00:47:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - please make the combos here consistentOK
00:39:217 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) and 00:50:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^OK
01:08:133 (6) - new combo for 8 whole notes?OK

Final Mission: fine (I took a few more liberties in combo modding because of your comboing style in this map, but if you want me to, I can always come back for a more strict run through)haha if you have time may you do it?

eveless's Extra Mission: I leave this to eveless~
Normal mod:
02:05:241 (8,9) - probably more intuitve if you swapped the positions of 8 and 9 with each other

Combo mod:
02:01:626 (4) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every 4 whole notes?
02:04:518 (4) - ^
02:10:301 (4) - ^
02:24:759 (5) - ^
02:37:771 (3) - ^

Nice map and a spectacular sb. Mostly just minor things on my side, so star! Good luck on getting this ranked.

Odaril wrote:

Very nice Beginner Mission map, you managed to make it very easy with simple rythms, yet it's not boring, and it can be actually challenging for new players.
Same goes for Pokie's Training Mission, with bonus points for the excellent hitsounds (which I'm stealing for further use, if you allow me to).
I don't like Final Mission however, it feels like you just wanted a very hard diff, so you just set the OD high, with fast HP drain and high accuracy needed, adding notes with distance snapping pretty high, even if notes don't fit the music. Same goes for eveless's Extra Mission.
It's just a personal opinion, though, those are playable and rankable, and some people like this kind of diff, I just don't.

That's another bad point in my opinion : you should have made at least one diff that focused on the lyrics : it would have been interesting to map something on them.

Your map is good and you deserve a star anyway.

OH-SHI- wrote:

Final Mission:
- 00:40:120 - move this slider so it doesn't overlap itself with the previous circle. It comes one beat after it, so it may put people off.
- 02:02:711 - Wow, this...is a massive jump. You could save youself a lot of scrutiny by softening these Nazi-jumps.
Shift them closer until they're at an acceptable flow of play. I'm not telling you to NERF them though. Just lighten them up.
- 02:13:554 ^
- 02:30:633 ^
- 02:33:434 ^
- 02:36:325 ^
- 02:47:530 ^
A suggestion for these is just to simply move them 1 or 2 grids closer to each other. Remember, it's only a suggestion.
- 01:21:867 - Space (3) & (4)
- 02:35:060 - Move (6) away.

eveless's Extra Mission:
In general, spacing is consistent. I've noticed some rarely used patterns, they can be a little hard to read.
- 01:31:807 - Move (2) so that the pattern looks more complete.

Just to add, personally, I wasn't very comfortable with the SB playing. It didn't hinder the modding though.
This should be ranked soon, it's well-made and well-spread. You can have a star to help.

Real1 wrote:

Skin

1. Maybe the guy in slider ball should move. Not just stand still. i WANT TO MAKE IT BUT NOT ABLE TO

Beginner Mission

1. If this is intended to be a map for beginners, I think it's too hard in some places. Examples: The stacks (I often spectate beginners and they always suck on stacks.) Also, the "cnake" here 01:16:807 (1,2,3,4) - is probably too hard for noobs. They often have problems with just single sliders... This snake will make them go nuts. OK reduce some stacks~

Pokie's Training Mission

1. Very good. There is is just one place that sounds weird to me:
   00:03:072 (2,3) - Doesn't sound good like this. I'd remap only this part.OK remade~

Hyper Mission

1. Nothing that hits me as bad. Good!

Final Mission

1. 00:25:482 (3) - How about starting this on the the white tick before it and add en extra repeat? maybe not~I think it sounds better now
2. Some jumps feel a bit unpredictable... But that's okay. I fall in that trap when i make my own maps as well, hehe.

eveless extra missionI leave this to eveless~

1. Yeah yeah, I know you want this map to be crazy... But even so, I'd lower the OD with 1 tick.
2. 00:40:482 Add a note here or extend the repeating slider with one more repeat?

Star!

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Hyper Mission]
02:15:723 (9) - Try to find better place for it.Make vertically flip from 02:14:639 (5) or place it in the center,to make a star-shaped combo. OK

[Final Mission]
01:41:566 (2) - Stack it with 01:40:301 (5)? OK

[eveless's Extra Mission]
02:09:578 (3) - Stack it with 02:08:133 (3)?OK

Others seem fine.

Good luck,star~