Chocox wrote:

hai steal first post ty

Timing*Paste this in note file under Timing Points

Open for Pizza

[TimingPoints]
516,234.375,4,1,0,60,1,0
8016,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
90516,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
105047,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
105516,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
119578,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0

File Conflict*Mappers are different probably because you changed username halfway, I think it's safer if you change.
*Note not sure if it's due to you not starting mapping yet.

Folder View

Game View 1

Game View 2

Gameplay

let's start with cavort difficulty :3

jk i don't play mania ;_;

you're welcome :^)

Rivals_7 wrote:

Modding Notice

Hello Abraxos ^^

You requested in my queue and are on my Modding Criteria. I do not point out all thing in this mod so there might be more issues that can be found across the mapset. Make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap.

t+pazolite - Garakuta Doll Play [OsuMania]

Column
1|2|3|4

[General]

https://remywiki.com/Garakuta_Doll_Play

Artist: t+pazolite 「maimai」より (より = yori)
Source: jubeat saucer fulfill
Tags: maimai SEGA Sounds Vol.5 -GreeNはじめました～!パック- (2013)

Thanks for the metadata check <3

BG should be 1366x768 or 1024x768. find another BG I've been thinking of searching for another BG, but I did resize the image so that it's 1366x768.
No Hitsound applied yet. Yeah, sadly ;-;

[Easy]

00:11:180 - That LN End here Fixed!
00:18:562 - end that LN here and move that single note to here as well Fixed! But I thought that by placing the note right after the LN it's a bit too fast, so I moved the LN to column 4. Is that OK?
01:03:328 - Make it like this

Right lane = before change
Left lane = after change
Fixed! Thanks for pointing this out, I didn't notice this. Maybe I was drunk or something.

01:05:437 - the pitch is changing here so end that LN here and make a new LN starting from here in column 2
Same as the case above I presume? Fixed!

01:12:469 (72469|1) - end here - 01:12:820 -
01:12:703 (72703|2) - start here - 01:12:820 - and ended it here - 01:12:948 -
Make a new LN in col 4 start here - 01:12:948 - and ended here - 01:13:172 - All fixed!

01:13:055 (73055|0,73289|1,73523|2,73758|2) - these notes feel unsynced to the music, pls rearrange it again and hear it at 50% playback Fixed! I hope this is fine?

01:32:859 (92859|3) - to col 2. more symmetrical Fixed!
01:38:953 (98953|0,99187|1) - to col 3 and 1 respectively. ^ Fixed!
01:43:523 - cut that LN here and move that Single note here as well. also, start this LN - 01:43:641 (103641|3) - here - 01:43:523 - Fixed! But as I mentioned above, I feel as if having the note straight after the LN is a bit too fast, so I decided to delete the note entirely.

01:51:375 (111375|2) - to col 2 Fixed!

01:52:312 (112312|3) - ^2 Fixed!
01:53:719 (113719|1,114187|1) - to col 1 and 3 respectively Fixed!
01:54:422 (114422|0) - ^4 Fixed!

[Normal]

some part are overmapped despite this is being a normal diff... ;-; really? I can't map lower diffs well. I'm sure it isn't that bad.... right? I'll have a look through later

00:17:859 (17859|1,18094|2) - ctrl+G Fixed!
00:19:031 (19031|1,19031|2) - move to right to avoid jack notes - 00:18:797 (18797|1,19031|1,19266|1) - Fixed!

00:37:547 (37547|3,37664|1) - col 2|3 respectively Fixed!
00:38:719 (38719|0) - to col 2 Fixed!
00:44:461 (44461|2,44461|1) - delete. no need to make it 4 notes, cause this is normal diff Fixed! Huh, I didn't know that such chords weren't allowed.
00:48:094 (48094|3) - to col 2 Fixed!

01:21:961 (81961|2,81961|1) - again no need 4 notes. delete this Fixed!
01:23:484 (83484|2) - to col 1 Fixed!
01:26:180 (86180|3) - ^1 Fixed!
01:27:937 (87937|2) - ^1 Fixed!
01:30:047 (90047|0) - delete Fixed!
01:45:047 (105047|3,105047|1) - delete one of this Fixed!

[Hard]

00:00:984 (984|2,984|0,1101|0,1101|1) - why is this double while - 00:02:859 (2859|1,2976|3) - is single? they're the same sound, pls rearrange Fixed! Thanks for pointing that out; completely flew past me.

00:09:891 (9891|1) - delete. no need for 3 presses(2 SN and 1 LN) here. But there's the strong thump accompanied by the weird "trumpet" sound in the background that I wish to follow. I'm not changing this one, but if you do think that this is slightly too much for a hard diff, please feel free to let me know!
00:26:180 (26180|0) - to col 3 Fixed! With a slight change to the chord above too:

00:26:297 (26297|1,26297|2) - move left Fixed! As with above ^^
00:37:781 (37781|0,37781|2) - delete one of this.Fixed! Chose to delete both and also remove a note below as seen:

00:44:461 (44461|2) - delete Fixed!
00:48:445 (48445|2) - to col 1 Fixed!
00:59:109 (59109|2) - delete Fixed!
01:00:047 (60047|3) - ^ Fixed!
01:03:445 (63445|2,63504|1,63562|0) - move right Fixed!
01:09:773 (69773|3) - move to the white tick below Fixed!
01:09:891 - add one more note Fixed!
01:21:961 (81961|1) - delete Fixed!
01:25:476 (85476|2) - to col 1 to fill the emptiness in col 1 Fixed! With a slight iteration; I wanted to keep the repeating LNs as it follows the music. Image:

01:26:766 (86766|1) - ^1 Fixed! With a slight iteration as stated above ^^^ Image:

01:27:469 (87469|1,87586|2) - move left Fixed!
01:30:047 (90047|0) - delete Fixed!
01:39:187 (99187|1,99305|0,99422|1) - make it 3|2|1 Fixed!

[Insane]

00:02:859 (2859|1,2976|3) - same issues as hard diff Fixed! This time, since it's hard, I decided to make two chords instead of a mickey mouse.
00:04:500 (4500|2,4851|1) - to col 1|4 Respectively Fixed!
00:05:437 (5437|1) - ^4 Fixed!
00:25:945 (25945|0,26004|1,26062|2) - make it 2|3|2 Fixed!
00:41:297 (41297|2,41531|2) - move to left one step Fixed!
01:08:133 (68133|2) - to col 2 Fixed! Decided to delete the LN below it after moving.
01:39:187 (99187|2,99187|1) - move left Fixed!

If you found that this mod isn't helpful to you, don't give kudosu. If there's any Misunderstanding , You can PM me anytime to clarify the issues that i've been pointed out. Naw man, it really help me learn some stuff that I didn't know initially. Thanks for the mod!
The other modder should handle this mapset from now on. Oh? There's another modder coming? Ok then.

Good Luck Abraxos ^^ Thanks! :3 Good luck in your modding career!

#MOD101

-BANGKE- wrote:

hi abraxos hai bb :^)
mod req from queue

MOD

Cavort

1. 00:07:195 (7195|0,7195|3,7195|2,7195|1) - why 4? no loud sound here ._. i guess use 3 / 2 Fixed! Didn't notice this lol
2. 00:04:266 (4266|2,5086|1) - delete pls, no loud sound again Fixed!
3. 00:09:891 - add 1 Fixed!
4. 00:11:766 - add 1 Fixed!
5. 00:30:750 (30750|1) - delete Fixed!
6. 00:32:391 (32391|2,32625|1) - delete i guess Fixed!
7. 00:34:266 (34266|1) - delete Fixed!
8. 00:43:523 - add 1, i hear sound here Fixed!

Insane

1. 00:04:500 (4500|0) - if you add note in here, so also you add here too 00:06:375 - consistency True. Fixed!
2. 00:36:492 - add 1 Fixed!
3. 00:37:312 - ^ Fixed!
4. 01:09:070 (69070|1) - col 3, jack avoid 01:08:953 (68953|1,69070|1) - Fixed!
5. 01:49:148 - jack should be start in here Fixed! Decided to place just one note as the word "my" is still being said.
6. 01:53:016 - add note Fixed!

Hard

1. 00:06:375 - add 1 Fixed!
2. 00:36:492 - add 1? Fixed! Cleaned it up a little here too.
3. 00:37:312 - ^ ? Fixed!
4. 00:38:016 - add note Fixed!
5. 01:12:820 (72820|0) - col 2, jack avoid 01:12:703 (72703|0,72820|0) - Fixed!
6. 01:41:648 - missing stream note here Fixed, but I have a little doubt with this given that it's the Hard diff. I'll see if anyone else points this out and maybe I'll take it out.
7. 01:53:028 - missing note Fixed!
8. 01:54:891 - ^ Fixed!

okay mod end, you can PM me if you dont understand or you have any question, good luck Thanks for the mod! It was really helpful :3

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234

general
> I think you should find a higher quality bg with less artifacts I will, don't worry about it <3
> can you S your own cavort diff (880k+?) Is 820k close enough? :3
> should lower sample volume across whole song by 10% imo Lowered by 5%. Will consider lowering it further

[Insane]
You really don't need 4 notes on like half the bass kicks in the middle section. It's boring to play and isn't intuitive to mash all 4 keys consistently. I'd recommend mapping them to 3 keys instead. (Example at 01:00:047 (60047|3), 00:56:180 (56180|1), 00:56:531 (56531|2)) Boring to play ;-; JK, I fixed all of them! One of the timing points you gave broke though.
00:00:867 - Add note, you did it at 00:01:687 (1687|2) Deleted the one you highlighted after
00:02:742 - ^ ^Deleted the one you highlighted after^
00:18:504 - Add note Fixed! Rearranged them too~
00:24:422 (24422|1,24422|2) - Move notes elsewhere, make them feel different from the bass kicks (don't use the same pattern for different instruments) Fixed!
00:27:820 (27820|2,27879|1,27937|2) - ctrl+H to mirror earlier pattern Fixed!
00:29:695 (29695|3) - Move to 00:29:812 Fixed? Arranged them differently here.
00:29:930 (29930|3) - Move to 00:30:281 As above ^^
00:32:273 - Add 2 notes col 1 and col 3 Fixed!
00:36:961 (36961|0,36961|3) - Remove, no drum sound here, so these notes shouldn't have same intensity as the drums at 00:36:726 (36726|2) Fixed!
00:37:781 (37781|0,37781|1) - 4 LN really unnecessary because it's not a really strong sound, change to LN at col 3 and 4 and add 2 notes to col 1 and 2 at 00:38:016 Hm? I'm not too sure about this one. The vocals do suggest a strong tone with this part. Just my opinion though. Although I am pretty sure no one really cares ;-; I'll change it, and consult one of mah frens.
00:40:711 (40711|2) - Remove, there are no other notes mapped to the 1/2 beat (red line) in this entire section I'm gonna get called out for this, but I'm putting this note here to follow the vocal at the back. If that is in anyway inherently wrong, please explain it to me. No change as of yet.
00:41:648 (41648|2) - Add note for consistency, you used 2 at 00:39:773 (39773|1) Fixed!
00:43:523 - Add 2 notes col 1 and 4 Fixed!
00:48:328 (48328|2) - Delete, not a strong sound Fixed!
00:49:148 (49148|2) - ^ Fixed!
00:50:086 - Add note
00:50:203 - Remove 1
00:50:437 - Add note EDIT! I'm not changing the three above here because at this part, I do not intend to follow the subtle sound in the background. Rather, I'm following the sound that the LNs below this part is following. So no change for this one :3
00:50:437 - ^ Lol same as above :^)
00:51:961 - ^ Fixed!
00:57:527 (57527|0,57586|3,57644|0) - - These notes should be 1/3 snaps, on the purple line, and there are only 2 bass kicks, not 3 Fixed! It kinda has 3, but yeah the last one doesn't count because the LN has it.
00:58:465 (58465|1,58523|2,58582|3) - - ^ Fixed!
01:02:273 - Add note Fixed! Made this part over again.
01:03:680 - ^ Fixed!
01:09:656 - ^ no reason to suddenly not have 2 notes on the bass kick Fixed! Holy shit am I drunk enough to miss this
01:09:891 - ^ Fixed!
01:11:180 - ^ Fixed!
01:21:961 (81961|3) - Remove 2 LN, 4 is really unnecessary This part is before a huge drop so I want to emphasize the "impeding drop" so to speak. I'll consult someone for this. No change this time
01:30:047 (90047|0) - Remove The two LNs before this follow the words OH and MY, and this part has the word GOD staggered by a "wobble"? so the word comes out as if someone is shaking their vocal chords. That's why there's two LNs for this case, one to follow the word GOD and the other to follow the shkaing vocal chords thing.
01:30:633 (90633|2,90633|3) - No reason for this to suddenly have 2 notes. There's no bass kick and there's no melody, meaning there's no reason for it to have the same intensity and note count as 01:30:516 (90516|0) and 01:30:750 (90750|0) Fixed!
01:31:805 (91805|2,91805|3) - Remove 1 Shucks, I wanted to know the reason to this one. 01:30:984 (90984|3,90984|2,91101|1,91101|0,91219|2,91219|3,91336|1,91336|0,91453|3,91453|1) - These notes follow the same sound that 01:31:687 (91687|1,91687|0,91805|2,91805|3,91922|3,91922|1) - follows so I wished to keep it as chords. If you think there's something wrong with this thinking please tell me.
01:36:726 - Add note, you used to in 01:34:851 (94851|2), so keep it consistent Fixed!
01:41:180 (101180|0) - Add note col 4, same reason as earlier Fixed!
01:43:523 - Add note This LNs follow the vocals at the background music. Again, I have no idea whether this is "correct" or not, so I'll consult someone about it.
01:45:047 (105047|3) - Remove Same reason as: The two LNs before this follow the words OH and MY, and this part has the word GOD staggered by a "wobble"? so the word comes out as if someone is shaking their vocal chords. That's why there's two LNs for this case, one to follow the word GOD and the other to follow the shkaing vocal chords thing.
01:47:508

(107508|2,107508|0,107625|3,107625|1,107742|3,107742|1,107859|3,107859|1,107976|2,107976|0,108094|1,108094|2,108211|3,108211|1,108328|0,108328|2,108445|1,108445|2,108562|1,108562|3,108680|1,108680|2) -

Isn't consistent. As in, it doesn't match pitch, and there's no visible distribution of notes for bass kicks / melody. For example, 01:47:273 (107273|2,107273|0) has no bass kick, but 01:47:391 (107391|2,107391|0) does. But there's also a difference in pitch, so why do both notes get the same pattern? aaaaaaaa I'm retarded I was supposed to fix this part by shifting the LN up but I missed it. Thanks for pointing it out!
01:47:625 (107625|1,107625|3) - has a different pitch compared to 01:47:742 (107742|3,107742|1) Fixed! You didn't include a suggestion for this one ;-;
01:48:094 (108094|1,108094|2,108211|1,108211|3) - These two have the same pitch, but now all of a sudden they have a different pattern Fixed!
01:48:445 (108445|1,108445|2,108562|1,108562|3) - ^ Fixed!
01:49:207 - Add note Fixed!
01:49:617 (109617|1,109617|3,109734|1,109734|2) - Same issue as earlier Fixed!
01:49:969 (109969|1,109969|3,110086|2,110086|0) - ^ Fixed!
01:50:320 (110320|0,110320|2,110437|3,110437|1) - ^ Fixed!
01:51:961 (111961|3,112078|3,112195|3,112312|3) - Unnecessary jack here, there's a change in pitch so a use of jack makes no sense Huh, I didn't see this. I didn't mean it to be jacks please forgive me ;-;
01:55:359 (115359|0) - I think this whole section of 4 note jacks on col 1, 4, 3, 2, 1 aren't fun to play, nor are they comfortable, and they don't match the melody. Consider remapping Ow, ow and ow. My heart ;-; I changed everything so that it follows the drum beat in the song, is it good enough?
01:59:578 (119578|1,119578|0) - Remove, 4 LN too many Fixed!

You can pm me for more details if you want, good luck with ranked. Thanks! It seems like a longshot after you went through just one of my diffs. Kinda rethinking whether or not should I go for anything now.

(btw, not being rude, just being honest ) They do say the truth hurts, but if you had to say this phrase I would infer that I still have a long, long, longgggggggggg way to go for anything to be actually decent. I'm not doubting your intentions in this mod, it was amazing! I'm doubting whether or not my style is actually anything close to decent or not. Any case, thanks for the mod Aph! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Lenfried- wrote:

Free testplay (although i could do better im not modding with my laptop atm) It's OK, when you come back with the full mod I'll insert here <3

Cavort:
Pretty lackluster early part (more like lacking in difficulty since it plays good). Ending went from good to really thick, that being said, you might want to produce a more consistent difficulty throughout the map. Honestly doesn't feel like a 5.32. Also, please lower the volume of the HS. Ears nearly bled throughout the testplay as much as i like the song choice. Some parts were really fun. GG I knew there was something off about the hitsounds. Sorry As for the aforementioned diff. increase, I understand your concern. I know that the difficulty increase, esp. at the end, does not corroborate with the rest of the map. I was thinking of a diff. spike in this case, as this song does get really really hard at the end. Check out the arcade games for this song: RhythmVaders2, MaiMai and Jubeat. All have that increase in diff at the end that I kinda wished to incorporate into this map. Yeah, this map is a 4 star without the end 1/8 stream and the triples.

Result

666 confirmed

Insane:
Has some solid patterns some of which could be expressed better. Thanks for the encouragement

Result

Mod time

Cavort

00:05:672 rough suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648109 I get what you mean here. Fixed!
00:13:641 another screenshot. Made a way to further emphasize the strong beats http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648118 Fixed!
00:17:156 10/10 would prefer triplets I don't wish to sacrifice the vocals, so I deleted one of the LNs and made a little doubles chord section. Fixed partially!
00:18:328 suggesting this because of similar sounds do something like this for the next ones https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648124 like in 00:20:320 and 00:25:945 Fixed! I didn't think of this, thanks for the suggestion!
00:23:016 if you know how to SV, do one here instead of using LNs I have a bias against SV changes. But seeing how the vocal does allow such a change, I will allow it for once. Fixed! (btw I kept the LNs but simplified the chords in between them.
00:24:656 although i like this, future mods will tell you to change this because of it not being the same as similar sounds Fite me IRL. I can explain this part. The vocals indicate a very strong tone in this part, and I felt that 4 LNs is sufficient in showing that strength in tone. I'm following the vocals here, not any other sound. I'll see if other mods do point this out harshly, maybe then I'll change it out. In the meantime fite me IRL
00:36:492 not sure what these LNs represent so ill throw in some suggestion. Tried to keep some LN usage. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648138 It's following the indiscernible vocals. The LNs follow vocal, the chords follow the beats. Anyway, I did change this part up a bit, so Fixed! partially.
00:48:328 not sure if genius or a flop Why not Zoidberg? I did wanna follow the DJ style beat in the song, so I thought short LNs would do the trick. Maybe genius, maybe flop. Kinda depends on you guys, not me.
00:49:148 move to 2 Fixed!
00:55:125 move to 3 Fixed!
00:55:359 move to 2 move any affected notes Fixed!
01:08:250 now you can choose to be morbid and make sounds like this triplets since there was an "easy" section earlier with the same sounds but with LNs Ay lmao Fixed!
01:13:641 triplets pls Fixed!
01:26:062 map the electro sound more accurately here Fixed!
01:36:609 hard section, must be triplets. Also that section can look better Fixed! And applied makeup to this area too.
01:53:016 a little too evil, might want to make the triplets appear in a certain interval and change the others to doubles. OK, so I had a little rapid discussion with a fellow friend of mine, and he said that although it is difficult to read consistently, it can be overlooked because it's fun. I'm not too sure whether some players can and will categorize it as fun, but as mentioned above, the arcade games all show a significant increase in difficulty, especially at this section. I'll see whether other people do accept this or not, but for the time being I won't change it.

Ill post mod for insane soon. Just so happens i have a bad stomach sorry It's OK, no hurry. Get well soon! Also, thanks for the mod! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Lenfried- wrote:

No kudosus Why no kudos? It's a mod after all, and it does qualify as one. I'll respect your wishes though <3 Oh what the heck you helped me redo that whole section and even bothered to screenshot it this deserves the kudosu
Tested cavort, finally got an S (95.67%) despite having really lazy hands (they don't respond properly ;;)
Also the difficulty distribution feels better now Success!

cavort part 2

00:23:016 although i suggested an SV, sadly, the SV is really hard to sightread maybe revert it otherwise do a single LN then make 00:23:367 and 00:23:719 doubles and add a single at 00:23:484
Maybe remove the SV No no, I like the idea of SV, so I deleted the offending articles and made 2 LNs. Fixed!
00:42:703 add at 4 Fixed!
Screenshot time!!! (Did some testing, lost track of the notes i altered, too lazy to reset progress and remember note placements)
01:00:516 http://puu.sh/k7uMU/cc1898e317.png
01:01:922 http://puu.sh/k7uQU/b776e23fcf.png
01:03:328 http://puu.sh/k7uSl/254906d20b.png
01:04:969 http://puu.sh/k7uVQ/b4d6358b9e.png
01:06:375 http://puu.sh/k7uXj/ce5140363e.png
End of screenshot spam OMG what this is so dope all fixed!
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01:08:953 brackets like these are a no-no redo this
01:10:125 ^ Fixed as same as ^
01:10:594 this however is ok (because it is not a bracket )
Oh btw, im suggesting to just do jacks that have notes repeat twice. Better not do 3 consecutive ones. Might produce a cleaner section.
01:09:656 this is ok btw Hm I've taken out all the 3 jacks now.
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01:13:289 stuff like this should be triples
01:13:641 although this needs to be doubles despite having significant sounds. Do a [12][23] or something like that. I made if so its [123][234] if that's correct.
01:13:875 .<3 Wheeeeeeeee thanks~
01:20:672 shouldn't repeat in the same column imo. maybe do a 3421 Fixed!
01:26:766 add 4 Fixed!
01:28:406 huehueheuheueh HUE HUE HUE HUE HUE
01:30:516 clean section but avoid doing triple consecutives for a better finish although 01:32:156 is reasonable. Examples to fix are 01:33:562 and 01:34:500 Went through the whole thing and I'm pretty sure(?) that I've removed all 3 note jacks.
01:41:297 while editing this section, make sure that only column 3 will jack. Works better with the sound. I hope I didn't destroy it ;-; Fixed!
01:45:516 this is good but it could be better. However this is too hard for me to check properly For the jacks with 2 notes I eliminated all 3 note jacks. As for the 3 note jacks there isn't much I could do rather than having the empty spaces follow a sequence.
Supposed to do Insane but i guess i did enough

Lenfried- wrote:

Well the reason behind the only 1 kudos was because my mod was incomplete. Could've posted a merge of the two provided that I didn't have a bad stomach
Final check will appear here.

Also here's a star for trying to get t+pazolite ranked. Song choice is really something i take notice when accepting mod reqs.

Cavort testplay again

96.03% and 23 misses. This will needs some more mods from more experienced 4k mappers/modders and this will be good to go. Although a mini complaint is that SV is not noticeable Kinda fixed I think.

Some stuff:
01:32:156 .4 consecutive at column 3 fix pls Rip didn't see it Fixed!
01:33:445 Need your say on this. remove the note here to change the chord in the next snap to some other combination. Removed the note in question and re-arranged the chords here.
01:45:516 cool improvements here Ay thanks

Another thing:
OD 8, HP 8 pls Fixed!

CuticleThong wrote:

Mekadothong da-meka~! Cuticle Thong's Moddage

I'll NOT mod your map because I'm not used to mod mania maps. So.... I'll check your "weakest point" of your map

Metadata

SPOILER

Source = maimai GreeN. Since when that song comes from Bemani's jubeat? Lol I was conflicted about this esp. when someone told me that the source was jubeat. Thanks for the info :3

RemyWiki wrote:

Garakuta Doll Play originates from SEGA's maimai GreeN. It was the first song in the maimai series to have a chart rated level 12, the highest level in that series, and thus is considered its first boss song.
Garakuta Doll Play was crossed over to GROOVE COASTER EX, jubeat saucer fulfill and 太鼓の達人 キミドリVer. on October 29th, 2014 as part of the Tenkaichi otogesai Zenkoku issei nintei taikai (天下一音ゲ祭 全国一斉認定大会) event.

Suggested Tags = maimai SEGA crossover

Good luck then

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

form my queue

open it

ill only give very small mod

[Normal]

00:26:297 - add a note
00:26:531 - ^
00:30:516 - add cymbal
00:31:922 - add a note
00:45:516 - add cymbal
00:54:656 (54656|3) - remove?
00:55:828 - add?
01:00:516 - add cymbal
01:36:023 - ^

[Hard]

00:11:766 - add a note
00:12:703 - ^
00:43:523 - add kick
01:05:555 - ^
01:43:523 - add cymbal
01:58:523 - ^

[Insane]

00:13:641 - add
01:53:016 - ^

[Cavort]

00:32:273 - add note

thank you for requesting me :v

Hestia- wrote:

Hi Abraxos~ Hi :3

[General]
For rank I think you need a difficulty under 2 stars. Ugu time to get normal down under 2 then

[Normal]
01:44:578 (104578|0,104812|2,105047|3) - End on 01:45:516 Fixed!
01:41:648 - Add 2 OR 01:41:414 (101414|3) - End on 01:41:648 Fixed!

[Hard]
01:26:414 - Add LN on 4 to 01:26:648 Fixed!
01:45:516 (105516|0) - Move to 4 Fixed!
01:44:578 (104578|0,104812|2,105047|1) - End on 01:45:516 Fixed!
01:59:578 (119578|2,119578|1) - End on 02:00:516 Fixed!

[Insane]
01:44:812 (104812|2,105047|3) - End on 01:45:516
01:58:172 - Make 16th notes like this?
Maybe save those for cavort actually.
the end is much harder than the rest of the chart... hm it's okay I guess.
Actually take off some of the notes on the jumptrill at the end Those 1/16 notes are extremely hard to hit esp. after all those chords. I'd nerf down the jumpthrill a bit doe.

[Cavort]
01:57:703 - This jumptrill actually has less notes than the one in insane lol Ay rip
01:58:406 - 01:58:465 - Add notes here
01:58:172 - Make 16th notes like this?
Kinda made it 1/8 at the end so I kinda fixed it I guess :3

good luck :3 Thanks for the mod~

Hydria wrote:

Hydria's 4K Modding Queue

Requested: No real bias to any diff, just mod any amount, and any diff you wish to mod.
Columns: |1|2|3|4|

General Concerns:
- No diff under 2 stars. As far as I'm aware, this is still a rule.
- The gap between Insane and Covert might be too large and therefore require another, ~4.6 star diff to even out the spread. I buffed up insane to 4.58, and placed easy back into the pool.
- The tags in the Hard diff need updating as well as the preview point in covert or normal/hard/insane (check AiMod). Apparently I was drunk on that day when the mod told me to change the source. Don't worry, I fixed everything now (I hope)

Cavort

00:13:641 - this pattern doesn't feel nice to hit IMO, something like http://puu.sh/knu8N/619f1c7d67.jpg might work better. Fixed! Thanks for the suggestion~
00:17:156 (17156|2,17156|1,17391|1,17391|2) - move to [34] due to the same drum hit. Fixed!
add 2 notes at 00:23:719 - since there's still technically a drum beat there even if you're ignoring the 2 previous. Fixed this part and added the drum beats that I ignored.
00:30:516 (30516|2,30516|3,30516|0,30750|1,30750|0,30984|1,30984|2,31219|0,31219|1,31453|1,31453|2) - no suggestions, I just really like this part. Thanks
00:42:469 (42469|2,42586|3) - ctrl-G, just feels a lot nicer to hit. Fixed!
00:48:328 (48328|2,48328|3,48445|1,48445|2,48562|0,48562|1,48680|0,48797|1,48797|2,48914|2,48914|3,49031|3) - feels really awkward to play but IDK if that's just me or not so I wouldn't say to change it atm but if anyone else has a suggestion to make it a cleaner pattern I'd take them up on it, alternatively, something like http://puu.sh/knuEr/9c39ac9752.jpg might work better. I took into account parts of your suggestion and I made it a bit more similar to a simple stair. I want to keep the recurring pattern that goes backwards as the music kinda suggests such a thing. Thanks for the suggestion anyways
01:09:773 (69773|2) - move to 4 for a more recognisable and easier to hit pattern. Fixed!
01:28:641 (88641|0,88641|2,88641|1,88641|3,89109|1,89109|3,89109|2,89109|0) - there's no reason for these to be quads. change them into 3-note chords and then remap where necessary to make a better overall pattern. Something like http://puu.sh/knvcF/c5910062f7.png can work. Removed all possible 3 note jacks and fixed the patterns here. Thanks for the suggestion~
01:32:273 - add a note at 2 and move 01:32:391 (92391|0) - to 2 for the same pattern you had at 00:17:156 - Fixed!
01:32:508 (92508|1) - move to 1 to avoid 4 jacks, the 2 jack in column 1 should be fine imo. Fixed!
01:39:773 - add note at 1 for same reason as above. Fixed!
01:45:516 (105516|1) - move to 4 and 01:45:867 (105867|1) - move to 1 as that makes this whole section of jumps a lot easier to hit imo. Fixed!
01:50:086 (110086|1) - move to 3 for same reason. Fixe!

01:53:016 - Now this. Oh boy. If there's anything that's ruined the end of a good map, it's this. I'm not going to say get rid of the triples, other people might, but maybe go through and layer them a bit better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3724373 or even have them 4 at a time, just to make it a lot more readable and quite a bit more playable. I agree with you on the part about readability, but you have to remember that this song is absolutely destructive and insane in all the arcade games that feature it, and especially at the end where everything goes bonkers off the roof. I went with this to make it more readable whilst keeping the insanity.

Insane

General advice for this would be check the layering throughout, at some points you have 2 notes equaling a drum beat and then having it equal to 4 later on in a section that doesn't make sense, one of the biggest examples being 01:21:961 (81961|1,81961|0,81961|2,81961|3) - where there's no need to have that as 4 LNs. There is some leniency in how many notes you can have for an instrument, definitely if the music is intense or you're layering more than one instrument at a time, but make sure it actually fits. If a drum beat is worth 4, that's normally a really strong drum at the start/end of a section. I hope I went through everything, and probably now it should be better.

00:23:719 - add 2 notes for drum beat. Fixed!
01:49:383 (109383|2,109500|2,109734|2,109851|2,109969|2) - what is this? please change some of the jumps to avoid that from happening. Ahhh drunk me strikes again and I thought I removed all 3 note jacks. Fixed!
01:57:762 (117762|0,117879|0,117996|0) - move to column 2 as it's easier to start trill -> jumptrill that way. I kinda buffed up this map so now this part is also part of the jumpthrill :3

Hard

00:13:641 (13641|2,13641|0,13699|1,13758|2,13816|3,13875|2,13933|1,13992|0,14051|1,14109|2,14168|3,14226|2,14285|1,14344|0,14402|1,14461|2,14519|3) - why? This is actually easier to hit in the 4 star diff than this, if anything this pattern should be the one in the 4 star diff whilst the rolls should be in the 3 star diff. Ples no hit me I bad ;-; I thought that rolls were harder but yeah I'm just weird. Fixed!
00:29:930 (29930|3,30047|2) - Ctrl-G for a better pattern imo Fixed!
00:36:609 (36609|3,36609|0,36726|2,36726|1,36844|0,36844|2,36961|1,36961|3) - probably better off just continuing the [14][23] pattern instead of switching, that's up to you though. I changed it anyways, thanks for the suggestion~

I'll leave Normal out for now for if you want to bring that below 2 stars. Once you do that or add an easy diff that's below 2 stars, PM me and I'll come and mod those straight away. Great map either way, and a nice tune overall, don't let this graveyard! I will not let this rest until it's ranked, no worries there. Thank you so much for the mod and the encouragement, it really helped a lot :3

puxtu wrote:

wheeee m4m

[General Stuff]
- EZ diff is not hitsounded oops didn't turn on the N:C1 for it
- I'm a lil bit worried about the gap between hard and insane
- Unbalanced difficulty curves, the hardest diff is not using any sv but ENHI diffs used some 1.5 and 0.5 sv in 00:23:016 - or maybe you forgot to add the sv there? lol (references: t/204738/start=90 | t/233477/start=120). oh about that sv too, it's kinda unexpected. suggesting to add ease effect on that I think I'm just gonna remove the SV altogether.
- 00:08:016 - I know this timing point is for controling the sample volume, but make it from 30% to 40% isn't make a significant effect to sample sound. suggesting to remove this point or change the value from 20% to 50% Also removed the 10% difference altogether too.
- That bg is creepy as fuck lol wat the doll in the doll play is that jester on the BG. It's creepy but meh it's part of the song soooooo
[Cavort]
00:04:500 - for the hardest diff, you can layer the hi-hat sounds here, it will make a good flow for your pattern too. Esp on this underwhelming part 00:08:016 - there are a lot of hi-hat sounds that you missed, idk if this was intended but I think it'll better to layer that sound I hope I covered everything, I'll check with some other people later for this.
00:09:891 (9891|0) - ctrl+right, really not recommended to double hammer such sounds Fixed!
00:21:961 (21961|1,21961|2) - out off beat I don't get this part. If I am following the vocals, this would fall on 1/3 beats, but in this case I was following the drum tsss sound on the 1/4 beat.
00:23:016 (23016|3) - err remove this ln and hammer chords these? 00:23:367 (23367|1,23484|2) - Fixed!
00:28:641 - do you really have to use those double lns? they're some drum sounds on that part too. suggesting to use single lns stream and add some chords like this http://puu.sh/kowTO/7c15d4ffbd.png Fixed! Thank you so much for the suggestion~
00:45:516 (45516|3) - overused lns. there is no long sound that really stronk so you don't have to use double lns Fixed!
01:03:562 (63562|0) - 01:05:437 (65437|3) - can you explain why don't you replace this note with ln? I didn't notice this little mistake until you pointed it out. Fixed!
01:21:961 (81961|1,81961|0,81961|2,81961|3) - oh my god my ears... Rip pux ears 2k15 Fixed!
the rest is ok for me. nice js Thanks :3

[Insane]
00:08:836 (8836|3) - extend this ln by 1/1 beat Fixed!
00:04:031 (4031|3) - use double here to emphasize the drum roll Fixed!
00:23:016 (23016|1) - lol wow why did you let this empty lmao I scared note density + SV but since I removed the SV and the LN in this case I'll add in the drum beat. Fixed!
00:45:516 (45516|3) - why is this part so similar with cavort's pattern lol. better to buff up the pattern on cavort then I'll see what I can do later~ Softened down this part a little.
00:57:469 (57469|3) - http://puu.sh/koyBE/1aeec1f99d.jpg ??????? ?????????????
00:58:406 (58406|0) - http://puu.sh/koyE0/ad6263c999.jpg ???????? ?????????????
00:59:578 (59578|0) - http://puu.sh/koyGD/2ee19a2fe7.jpg ????????? lol ok i'll stop I saw some stuff and I changed some of it.
01:14:812 (74812|1,74812|0,74812|2) - why the hell there is a triplet here? lmao Why not? Fixed!

[Hard]
dude, the gap. uguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
00:07:312 (7312|0,7351|1,7391|2,7430|3) - isn't this too short for that burst Well it was just 1 note short, soo. Fixed!
00:23:016 (23016|3) - it felt really wrong when you don't have something to press here Fixed!
00:36:199 (36199|3) - oh look another snapping conflict http://puu.sh/kozbT/5b46691f08.jpg Snapping conflicts are my thing, ya know? Fixed!
00:51:961 (51961|1) - shorten 1/2 Fixed!
00:57:469 (57469|0,57527|1,57586|2,57644|3) - snap to 1/3, won't pointing this anymore. check out the other diffs too Fixed! Checked other diffs too.
01:00:516 (60516|1) - a missing chord and move this to somewhere else please Fixed!
01:30:516 (90516|0) - pls add chorddddddddddddddddd and you can buff up this kiai part for the sake of star rating too Fixed!
01:49:266 - inconsistent pattern bcs the previous pattern has some chords in it I managed to get it up to 3.65 stars with a difference of 0.91. I think that's OK, but I'm not too sure about it.

[Normal]
00:21:961 (21961|1) - offbeat Same thing as above, I was following the drum beat rather than the vocals.
01:43:523 (103523|3) - I heard something loud here IT WAS MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE jk Fixed!
01:59:461 (119461|2,119461|1) - you don't have to chord this part Fixed!

[Easy]
00:10:711 (10711|3) - should be ended at 1/1 because all diffs does that Fixed!
00:14:461 (14461|3) - I feel like holding something here Fixed! Placed LN
01:30:516 (90516|1) - add double for the crash Fixed!
01:44:578 (104578|2,105047|3) - uh, these should be 2/1 lns here Fixed!
ye nothing much on easier diffs
gl on rank! Thanks for the mod pux~

Abraxos wrote:

puxtu wrote:

00:57:469 (57469|3) - http://puu.sh/koyBE/1aeec1f99d.jpg ??????? ?????????????
00:58:406 (58406|0) - http://puu.sh/koyE0/ad6263c999.jpg ???????? ?????????????

FreeezeForward wrote:

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue

Your request was accepted prior to my queue. These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

1|2|3|4

Metadata

1. Artist: Change "t+pazolite" to "t+pazolite 「maimai」より", I think maimai is the leading artist here; kindly refer to this website. Mai mai is an arcade game, which is where this song was featured on (The hard level 11 for this is so hard to get a 90% on). I think the original composer is t+Pazolite. Niconicojp (dic.nicovideo.jp/a/garakuta doll play) can't be wrong I hope.
2. Tags: Add "jubeat saucer fulfill" since it's the first music game apperance. Also add "Tenkaichi otogesai Zenkoku issei nintei taikai" since the song is a part of this event, also include it's kanji "天下一音ゲ祭 全国一斉認定大会" It originally came from maimai GreeN, and it was crossed over with that event to Groove Coaster EX and jubeat, all of which I did add into the tags.
3. Design: Uncheck Widescreen Support on diffs "Normal" "Hard" and "Insane" unless the will be a video provided. Fixed!
4. HP Drain (HP): Insane must be 8 not 7, Insane maps and the like always have and HP Drain of 8. Fixed! Thanks for the heads up.
5. Overall Difficulty (OD): Insane must be 8 not 7, same reason as above. Fixed!

Hard

1. 00:15:516 Add to 2 here, the note density of this must be triple-noted. Fixed!
2. 00:28:055 (28055|3,28055|0,28172|1,28172|2) - Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) notice the other patterns 00:20:320 and 00:25:945 the mini staircase part has two notes on one hand and the other has only one so you consider avoiding to put double notes on the hand that is complete. Fixed!
3. 00:30:164 (30164|1) - Move to 3, the pitch here is alternating in one hand like 00:29:578 (29578|0,29695|1,29812|0,29930|1) and it' can be done to another. One more reason is that the note density will be balanced. That makes so much sense I can't even. Fixed!
4. 00:36:492 (36492|1) - Move to 4, it is much easier to hit in this column. Fixed!
5. 00:55:828 Add to 1, same as the other triple-note chords have the same beat dynamics. I had a feeling that the LN end couldn't cover up the three chords above. Fixed!
6. 00:58:875 (58875|3) - Delete, unlike the other notes, this beat has a different dynamic (softer than other notes). Fixed!
7. 01:14:344 (74344|0,74402|1,74461|2,74519|3) - Repattern these to LN's, this pattern is irregular to the synth-voice and it is only compatible to double note LN. Refer to this example. Overhauled the whole thing at this part alongside all the diffs. Fixed!
8. 01:25:594 (85594|1,85711|0) - Move to 1 and 4 respectively, columns 2 and 3 are too dense than the pitch tune. Fixed!
9. 01:25:828 (85828|1) - This LN end should be 01:26:062 and the pitch is very clear to this. It's things like this that convince me that I'm drunk all the time. Fixed!
10. 01:53:367 (113367|3,113484|0) - Switch Columns, since the pattern is a continous minijack not double note alternations. Fixed!
11. 01:58:172 - 01:58:445 Change it to Double note LN's. Refer to this example. Fixed! Luckily it didn't affect the star rating too much.

Insane

1. 00:03:797 (3797|0) - Move to 2, the preceding pattern has the same beat and minijack is the best option. The minijack wasn't intentional but since the music did follow why not. Fixed!
2. 00:04:266 (4266|2) - Delete, triple-note chord is too dense in this beat. I'd like to take my point about me being drunk and use this point to reiterate that I am freaking drunk at this shit I even went through everything to check for this chords at the start and I missed this. Fixed!
3. 00:13:933 (13933|1,14051|1,14168|1,14285|1) - Four notes in same column with 1/2 timing in a staircase are too hard to hit for Insane players. Maybe change into this pattern, atleast only three notes in the same column. Overhauled the whole thing here. Thanks for the heads up, fixed!
4. 00:15:516 Add to 2, for note density. Fixed!
5. 00:32:391 (32391|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance. Fixed!
6. 01:14:344 Same as the last diff. Same as above^^^
7. 01:25:594 (85594|1,85711|2) - Move to 1 and 2 respectively, too dense in columns 2 and 3; same reason as the last diff. Fixed!
8. 01:45:633 (105633|3,105750|0) - Switch columns, since the pattern is continous jacks.
   To be Continoued

Cavort

To be Continoued[list:1337]

Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b Thank you so much for the mod Freeeze~ :3

NlHIL wrote:

[Easy]00:14:461 (14461|3) - end at 00:14:930 - ?
00:28:406 (28406|0) - change to a note, 00:28:641 (28641|3) - remove and 00:28:523 - to 00:29:109 - add a LN?
00:35:906 (35906|3) - remove?
00:38:016 - add
00:43:172 (43172|3) - end at 00:43:641 - ?
01:10:242 - add
01:10:594 (70594|3) - end at 01:10:945 -
01:24:422 (84422|1) - change to a LN?
01:54:656 (114656|1) - remove?
[NM]
00:19:969 - add?
00:45:516 - add?
01:29:578 (89578|3,89812|2,90047|1,90516|0) - hmm 01:44:519 (104519|0,104812|2,105047|3,105516|1) - ...hmm?

On your style, the ends of LNs are ... hmm... I can't understand it.
How did you decide whether put notes with the ends of LNs or not?

Sorry,bye

genkicho wrote:

Hello >.< Need Kudosu :3

Here you go~

Cavort
00:39:891 i think u should delete 1 note Fixed!
00:42:234 add note (column 3) Fixed!
00:51:844 and 00:51:961 use double notes Fixed!
01:02:391 make it longer until 01:02:801
01:02:625 delete the long note (column 3)
01:02:859 start the long note (column 1) from 01:02:801
[url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770841[/url] <for 01:02:-- Top down till here: All fixed, looked through this part again just to make sure.
01:13:172 , 01:13:406 use triple notes
01:13:461 and 01:13:758 use double notes Scratch that I remade this part, I get what you are talkin about.
01:27:937 and 01:28:055 use double notes Well this one I changed.
01:31:687 delete 1 note
01:33:211 add 1 note Above^^^; The sound here is captured by the 3,2,3 formation such as 01:31:687 (91687|2,91687|0,91687|1,91805|3,91805|2,91922|3,91922|1,91922|0) - and 01:33:094 (93094|2,93094|3,93094|1,93211|0,93211|1,93328|0,93328|2,93328|3). The ones below are 2 notes are cuz they're repeated sounds, and it only seemed OK that repeated sounds are insinuated by repeated chords.
01:33:680 add 1 note Fixed!
01:34:266 add 1 note I'll avoid minijacks by changing this part.
01:39:422 add 1 note
01:40:711 add 1 noteAll fixed!

Hopefully helpful Thanks for the mod~

genkicho wrote:

Need Kudosu >.< Holy shit dude pls I can't give any more kudos after this. Any case I really appreciate the mods you give~
Insane
00:47:859 maybe delete this (?) Shifted one note upwards
00:51:726 add 1 (?) Fixed!
01:13:758 column 3 & 4 move to 1 & 2 Fixed!
01:23:016 4 notes, then 01:24：891 should 4 notes I get it, but the LN takes 2 columns. I fixed it accordingly though.
01:26:648 add 1 (?) Also fixed by placing LN
01:27:703 add 1 (?) Fixed!
01:46:922 delete 1
01:50:672 delete 1 Above and here fixed by placing note at 01:48:797 (108797|2) -
Hard
00:36:141 start from 00:36:023 Following vocals, so start at 00:36:141 (36141|1) -
00:36:844 maybe delete 1 (?) Fixed but with a little variation
00:51:726 add 1 (?) Fixed!
00:52:430 and 00:52:644 what's this (?) maybe move up 2 rows (?) Vocals in the background that stutter is what these notes are following
00:53:016 add 1 (?) Fixed!
00:53:953 delete 1 (?) because u use 2 notes style for this sound The drums in the music also fall here, so it's 2 notes. The last drum beat was made 2 notes aft. I removed one of the LNs
00:56:766 maybe delete 1 (?) Drumbeat as above ^^^
01:13:758 move to column 1 Fixed! Didn't want to have a note before the stairs so I changed it a little. But I get what you mean.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3775003 <-- maybe use this (?) for 01:14:578 I fixed it, but with a little change. I didn't want to have such a short LN as it looks disparate.
01:24:891 add 1, because 01:23:016 is triple note Fixed the whole part here.
01:28:641 add 1 or delete, or move the column. it;s hard to explain why
01:29:578 add 1 And above: I changed the whole part here, so I hope it's fixed.
01:47:156 add long notes until 01:47:391 ugu I don't really like long notes. Don't forget that this is a hard difficulty, and these handstreams + LN hold does not fit well with me.
01:47:273 delete the note
01:45:516 the diff is to far compared to 01:53:016 (my opinion) And above: I reviewed this part keeping in mind the diff increase. Hopefully fixed!
01:54:891 add 1 because double note style Above fixes should change this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3775015 <-- for 01:56:590 Fixed! Thanks for the suggestion, I get the point you are trying to put forth.
Normal
00:12:703 add 1 (?) other diff too I have to keep the diff under 2.2, and it's really close to it. I think that it's OK to have one note, as the LNs for the past few drumbeats follow the this sound 00:10:711 (10711|3,11297|2,11531|1,11766|0) - and that the drumbeat is there as a note.
00:29:461 add 1 Fixed!
00:34:266 add 1 because 00:32:391 double note Fixed!
00:36:141 long note start from 00:36:023 (other diff too) Understood what you meant, the LNs follow the vocals though.
00:36:492 add 1 Fixed!
01:36:023 add 1 because 01:33:797 is double, and there's an extra sound Fixed!

for all diffs
from 01:56:766 until 01:57:703 make it bit harder, because i hear extra sound every white line Thanks for the suggestion, but remember that the BPM is 256, and to have the notes appear every 1/4 is really taxing.
hopefully help Definitely did. I didn't bother to redo patterns esp. in Hard, but after your mod I did change a few things. Thanks for that :3

Lenfried- wrote:

Been stalking this thread
Here's 2 stars

Also only give 1 kds per modder. A second kds only makes sense if a major remap happened. Call a BN to deny if you feel like it should be done. Same goes for my double kds

genkicho wrote:

Hello >.< Need Kudosu
Easy
00:12:703 add 1 (?) This part here is basically ignoring the drum beats. It's an easy after all
00:30:516 add 1, because 00:32:391 use double note Fixed this part
00:47:742 move up 2 row
00:48:094 move up 2 row and above^^^ If you listen closely there's a twang sound in the music that these notes are following
00:48:445 delete note Same reason as above^
01:38:016 and 01:38:250 use double (?) because 01:30:516 use double I see it, but I did fix this part up a little differently. For one, the reason why the first drum beat has double it's cuz its the strongest/leads into the rest of the drums. The 1/2 notes just follow the basic flow of the music after this point.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3775116 <-- for 01:41:414 until 01:41:776 maybe this is better It is. Fixed!
01:54:656 why long notes (?) then 01:56:297 should be the same Yeah I noticed so. Fixed!
hopefully helpful THANKS FOR THE MOD

Shoegazer wrote:

SPOILER

[Cavort]
00:03:797 - You could create an anchor (basically a hidden long jack, like [23][24][23][24]) here, I think it would be underwhelming otherwise. You can make 00:03:914 - a [24], while keeping sounds like 00:03:797 - the same. Fixed! I was thinking of buffing the start up more too.
00:04:148 - Should be the same as 00:03:914 - , since they're the same sound. Fixed!
00:05:789 - Maybe change this to [14]. This is more for consistency, since the jumpjack section in 00:01:922 - has 2 minijacks (1st/2nd and 3rd/4th doubles respectively). Fixed!
00:09:422 - Same applies to this. You could do something like [14][24][13][12], though the notes before it would require some rearrangement. Fixed!
00:10:711 - to 00:13:641 - Kinda curious as to why you decided to chart the cymbals instead of the snare, I think the snare is a lot more prominent and you could definitely vary up the chart with some 1/4 bursts here. Would personally recommend charting the snares (00:10:828 - ) instead of the cymbal crashes (00:10:945 - and the like). It would make the chart more direct, you could also put 1/4s in places like 00:11:414 - as well. Ohhhh I didn't realise this, thanks for the heads up. Fixed!
00:13:172 - to 00:13:523 - These notes should be doubles. Fixed!
00:15:516 - You can probably place some 1/2s here to create minijacks, alternating minijacks at this speed is generally pretty nice to play through. Alternating minijacks being something like this - the minijack would be on a hand and will be on the other hand every 2 notes (in this pic, left-right-left). You can do this for recurring melodies like those, they're present up to 00:41:766 - .
00:33:680 - Can be a double. Fixed!
00:36:023 - Missing note, I think a single is preferred here. A note on either 3 or 4 would be better, since it's reminiscent of the sound before it. Fixed!
00:39:656 - Should be triples, think it would be better if this triple and the consequent one to be the same, since they're the same kick+other percussion combo. Fixed!
00:41:180 - Can be a double. Fixed!
00:49:383 - You can probably create some two-handed minitrills for these (they're a lot more noticeable than one hand minitrills, since you're using your wrist instead of your fingers), rolls are generally a little bit too smooth considering the sound that you're mapping (which is a little rough). Patterns like these are patterns with some two hand trills. This applies for all 1/4s you've mapped to record scratches. Fixed! I never knew there were difference in roughness and smoothness in sound for such things.
00:50:086 - Should be a double.Fixed!
00:50:437 - ^ Fixed!
00:51:141 - Should be a triple. Fixed!
00:51:844 - Think you should create a minijack with the chord after and not the chord before, since the note after it is quite similar to this note but the note before it isn't. Fixed! I didn't notice this @.@
00:51:961 - should be the same chord as 00:52:195 - since they have the same notes. You can probably do something like this, first chord is at 00:51:609 - . Fixed! Thanks for the suggestion~
00:58:406 - You can be a little mean and create a 1/3 jumpjack here (something like [24][34][12][24]) Fixed!
01:09:305 - The entire section is almost completely alternating minijacks, so I don't see why this shouldn't be a minijack with 01:09:187 - . You'd have to rearrange the next few notes, but something like this should be okay. Of course you can break from alternating if you're a bit too lazy when it comes to rearranging, but it's moreso for fluency. Fixed! I kept the alternating jacks, didn't want to break the flow here.
01:10:945 - These 1/4s should be doubles, along with 01:11:180 - . [12][34][12] / [12] seems ideal. Fixed!
01:12:820 - ^, but [34][12][34] / [34]. Fixed!
01:16:922 - Should be doubles, generally the same arrangement as sections like 00:05:672 - and other things. This point goes for the rest of the section, until these sounds are layered as LNs. Fixed!
01:29:226 - Preferably something like [34][24][12]? It would be odd to not have minijacks at all considering that the 3-4 chords before it created minijacks. That's true. Fixed!
01:30:984 - Same suggestion as the very first one, you can create an anchor here. Something like [34][13][34][13][234] would be cute, though you would have to shift the note after to 2 to prevent too much bias (and maybe some other rearrangements..). You can do this for the entire section. Think this would be ideal, since this is the one of the last few parts of the track anyway. That's a really cool idea. Fixed!
01:45:516 - Think you can emphasise some chords here by making them the same, consecutive sounds like 01:45:516 - , 01:46:219 - , 01:45:867 - , you get the idea. You already did this with the section with triples, so it wouldn't hurt to do the same here. All fixed!
01:55:125 - Move to [34] to avoid too much left hand bias. Fixed!
01:57:469 - Should be triples. Fixed!

You can place more 1/2s, but it would make the chart way too cluttered because of the LNs going on, so I think this should be fine.

Chart's generally fine, quite jack-oriented as a whole. Just some inconsistencies that should be fixed. Thank you so much for the mod Shoegazer

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Abra-san

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. You only use Normal-hit.wav hitsounds file, how about other hitsounds file?
   
   make sure you delete this file from your folder :
   drum-hitclap, drum-hitfinish, drum-hitwhistle
   soft-hitclap, soft-hitfinish, soft-hitwhistle
2. Delete maimai green from tags, because overlap in source

All fixed~

Easy

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:11:766 (11766|0) - change C to F, consistency following rytim like 00:09:891 (9891|2) -
2. 00:13:641 (13641|0) - remove C, same reason like above + HS will be overlap
3. 00:14:461 (14461|3) - this LN, conflict with Normal diff, make sure you check it
4. 00:15:516 - 00:16:219 - i can't uderstand what HS you followed, you mixed C & F like 00:16:453 - 00:16:922 - .make sure you focus 1 pitch, since that part has same pitch. IMO F more better than C. Also check here (problem for all diff) :
   00:18:562 - 00:19:266 -
   00:21:492 - 00:22:078 -
5. 00:31:922 - add note here for consistency beat sound. Also here :
   00:39:422 -
   00:43:406 -
6. 00:36:141 (36141|2) - missing Whistle here, like other diff
7. 00:52:195 (52195|0) - remove this LN, i can't hear another long sound here,
8. 01:04:266 (64266|0) - move to 2, then 01:04:617 (64617|1) - move to 4 for pattern balance
9. 01:07:781 - remove 1 note, consistency 1 sound like 01:07:547 - same reason like 01:17:391 -
10. 01:52:547 (112547|1,112781|0) - move to right, 01:53:250 (113250|1,113484|3) - move to left, 01:53:719 (113719|0) - move to 2, 01:54:187 (114187|2,114422|3) - move to left 2x, for pattern balance
11. 01:54:656 - no need 2 LN, it more like overmapped and Normal diff only have 1 note here. same reason like :
    01:56:531 -
    01:57:703 -

Thank you so much for the mod Verniy :3 I just found out something went horribly wrong with the hitsounds, and now I'm planning to redo the entire thing. I'll take your mod into account, and all other non hitsound stuff are fixed btw

Normal

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5

1. 00:00:516 (516|0) - shorten this LN until 00:00:984 - more fit on rytim, also you can here 00:04:734 - :3
2. 00:07:312 (7312|2) - move to 2, for pitch
3. 00:13:641 (13641|0,14461|0) - avoid same collum, diffirent rytim
4. 00:21:961 - remove if you followed beat from 00:21:492 - until 00:21:844 -
5. 00:24:656 (24656|3,24656|0) - extend this LN until 00:24:891 - like Hard diff
6. 00:25:828 - remove 1 note here, no need 2 note like 00:27:703 -
7. 00:26:531 (26531|3) - move to 3, pattern balance
8. 00:35:437 (35437|3) - move to 3, pattern balance
9. 00:35:906 (35906|3,36141|2) - what sounds you followed? if long synth, 00:35:906 (35906|3) - shorten LN until 00:36:023 - and 00:36:141 (36141|2) - extend from 00:36:023 - I followed the vocals in this case
10. 00:37:078 (37078|1) - remove LN, consistency pattern like 00:37:781 (37781|3) -
11. 00:44:812 (44812|3,44812|1) - move to left for pattern balance
12. 01:54:422 (114422|2,114539|3) - move to left for pattern balance

All no reply means fixed~

Hard

OD : 7,5
HP : 8

1. 00:00:516 (516|3) - shorten LN until 00:00:984 - like Insane diff
2. 00:07:312 - for variety pattern + hand play, try like this more fit on Hard diff. since insane diff have same pattern
   
3. 00:09:891 - remove 1 note, check consistency here 00:08:016 - and also here
   00:11:766 -
4. 00:19:266 (19266|2,19500|2,19734|2,19969|2) - avoid same collum, try arranged pattern for balance
5. 00:28:406 - 00:29:578 - sama pattern like Insane diff. but for this diff it maybe too hard
6. 00:30:750 (30750|2) - if you put note here, you must put too here 00:30:984 - & here 00:31:219 - because same pitch. same reason like :
   00:32:859 -
   00:33:094 -
   00:34:734 -
   00:34:969 -
7. 00:47:742 (47742|3) - wrong place, must here 00:47:859 - for snare sound
8. 01:44:871 (104871|2) - extend LN from 01:44:812 - since synth start here & check insane diff

All no reply means fixed~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

83

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only

Хорошо~Good Luck..

Thanks for the mod Verniy_Chan :3