Free testplay (although i could do better im not modding with my laptop atm)
Cavort:
Pretty lackluster early part (more like lacking in difficulty since it plays good). Ending went from good to really thick, that being said, you might want to produce a more consistent difficulty throughout the map. Honestly doesn't feel like a 5.32. Also, please lower the volume of the HS. Ears nearly bled throughout the testplay as much as i like the song choice. Some parts were really fun.
Insane:
Has some solid patterns some of which could be expressed better.
Mod time
Ill post mod for insane soon. Just so happens i have a bad stomach sorry
Cavort:
Pretty lackluster early part (more like lacking in difficulty since it plays good). Ending went from good to really thick, that being said, you might want to produce a more consistent difficulty throughout the map. Honestly doesn't feel like a 5.32. Also, please lower the volume of the HS. Ears nearly bled throughout the testplay as much as i like the song choice. Some parts were really fun.
Insane:
Has some solid patterns some of which could be expressed better.
Mod time
Cavort
00:05:672 rough suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648109
00:13:641 another screenshot. Made a way to further emphasize the strong beats http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648118
00:17:156 10/10 would prefer triplets
00:18:328 suggesting this because of similar sounds do something like this for the next ones https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648124 like in 00:20:320 and 00:25:945
00:23:016 if you know how to SV, do one here instead of using LNs
00:24:656 although i like this, future mods will tell you to change this because of it not being the same as similar sounds
00:36:492 not sure what these LNs represent so ill throw in some suggestion. Tried to keep some LN usage. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648138
00:48:328 not sure if genius or a flop
00:49:148 move to 2
00:55:125 move to 3
00:55:359 move to 2 move any affected notes
01:08:250 now you can choose to be morbid and make sounds like this triplets since there was an "easy" section earlier with the same sounds but with LNs
01:13:641 triplets pls
01:26:062 map the electro sound more accurately here
01:36:609 hard section, must be triplets. Also that section can look better
01:53:016 a little too evil, might want to make the triplets appear in a certain interval and change the others to doubles.
00:13:641 another screenshot. Made a way to further emphasize the strong beats http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648118
00:17:156 10/10 would prefer triplets
00:18:328 suggesting this because of similar sounds do something like this for the next ones https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648124 like in 00:20:320 and 00:25:945
00:23:016 if you know how to SV, do one here instead of using LNs
00:24:656 although i like this, future mods will tell you to change this because of it not being the same as similar sounds
00:36:492 not sure what these LNs represent so ill throw in some suggestion. Tried to keep some LN usage. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3648138
00:48:328 not sure if genius or a flop
00:49:148 move to 2
00:55:125 move to 3
00:55:359 move to 2 move any affected notes
01:08:250 now you can choose to be morbid and make sounds like this triplets since there was an "easy" section earlier with the same sounds but with LNs
01:13:641 triplets pls
01:26:062 map the electro sound more accurately here
01:36:609 hard section, must be triplets. Also that section can look better
01:53:016 a little too evil, might want to make the triplets appear in a certain interval and change the others to doubles.
Ill post mod for insane soon. Just so happens i have a bad stomach sorry