Hi, from queue, col 1234
general > I think you should find a higher quality bg with less artifacts
> can you S your own cavort diff (880k+?)
> should lower sample volume across whole song by 10% imo
[Insane]
You really don't need 4 notes on like half the bass kicks in the middle section. It's boring to play and isn't intuitive to mash all 4 keys consistently. I'd recommend mapping them to 3 keys instead. (Example at 01:00:047 (60047|3), 00:56:180 (56180|1), 00:56:531 (56531|2))
00:00:867 - Add note, you did it at 00:01:687 (1687|2)
00:02:742 - ^
00:18:504 - Add note
00:24:422 (24422|1,24422|2) - Move notes elsewhere, make them feel different from the bass kicks (don't use the same pattern for different instruments)
00:27:820 (27820|2,27879|1,27937|2) - ctrl+H to mirror earlier pattern
00:29:695 (29695|3) - Move to 00:29:812
00:29:930 (29930|3) - Move to 00:30:281
00:32:273 - Add 2 notes col 1 and col 3
00:36:961 (36961|0,36961|3) - Remove, no drum sound here, so these notes shouldn't have same intensity as the drums at 00:36:726 (36726|2) -
00:37:781 (37781|0,37781|1) - 4 LN really unecessary because it's not a really strong sound, change to LN at col 3 and 4 and add 2 notes to col 1 and 2 at 00:38:016
00:40:711 (40711|2) - Remove, there are no other notes mapped to the 1/2 beat (red line) in this entire section
00:41:648 (41648|2) - Add note for consistency, you used 2 at 00:39:773 (39773|1)
00:43:523 - Add 2 notes col 1 and 4
00:48:328 (48328|2) - Delete, not a strong sound
00:49:148 (49148|2) - ^
00:50:086 - Add note
00:50:203 - Remove 1
00:50:437 - Add note
00:50:437 - ^
00:51:961 - ^
00:57:527 (57527|0,57586|3,57644|0) - - These notes should be 1/3 snaps, on the purple line, and there are only 2 bass kicks, not 3
00:58:465 (58465|1,58523|2,58582|3) - - ^
01:02:273 - Add note
01:03:680 - ^
01:09:656 - ^ no reason to suddenly not have 2 notes on the bass kick
01:09:891 - ^
01:11:180 - ^
01:21:961 (81961|3) - Remove 2 LN, 4 is really unecessary
01:30:047 (90047|0) - Remove
01:30:633 (90633|2,90633|3) - No reason for this to suddenly have 2 notes. There's no bass kick and there's no melody, meaning there's no reason for it to have the same intensity and note count as 01:30:516 (90516|0) and 01:30:750 (90750|0)
01:31:805 (91805|2,91805|3) - Remove 1
01:36:726 - Add note, you used to in 01:34:851 (94851|2), so keep it consistent
01:41:180 (101180|0) - Add note col 4, same reason as earlier
01:43:523 - Add note
01:45:047 (105047|3) - Remove
01:47:508 (107508|2,107508|0,107625|3,107625|1,107742|3,107742|1,107859|3,107859|1,107976|2,107976|0,108094|1,108094|2,108211|3,108211|1,108328|0,108328|2,108445|1,108445|2,108562|1,108562|3,108680|1,108680|2) - Isn't consistent. As in, it doesn't match pitch, and there's no visible distribution of notes for bass kicks / melody. For example, 01:47:273 (107273|2,107273|0) has no bass kick, but 01:47:391 (107391|2,107391|0) does. But there's also a difference in pitch, so why do both notes get the same pattern?
01:47:625 (107625|1,107625|3) - has a different pitch compared to 01:47:742 (107742|3,107742|1)
01:48:094 (108094|1,108094|2,108211|1,108211|3) - These two have the same pitch, but now all of a sudden they have a different pattern
01:48:445 (108445|1,108445|2,108562|1,108562|3) - ^
01:49:207 - Add note
01:49:617 (109617|1,109617|3,109734|1,109734|2) - Same issue as earlier
01:49:969 (109969|1,109969|3,110086|2,110086|0) - ^
01:50:320 (110320|0,110320|2,110437|3,110437|1) - ^
01:51:961 (111961|3,112078|3,112195|3,112312|3) - Unecessary jack here, there's a change in pitch so a use of jack makes no sense
01:55:359 (115359|0) - I think this whole section of 4 note jacks on col 1, 4, 3, 2, 1 aren't fun to play, nor are they comfortable, and they don't match the melody. Consider remapping
01:59:578 (119578|1,119578|0) - Remove, 4 LN too many
You can pm me for more details if you want, good luck with ranked.
(btw, not being rude, just being honest )
general > I think you should find a higher quality bg with less artifacts
> can you S your own cavort diff (880k+?)
> should lower sample volume across whole song by 10% imo
[Insane]
You really don't need 4 notes on like half the bass kicks in the middle section. It's boring to play and isn't intuitive to mash all 4 keys consistently. I'd recommend mapping them to 3 keys instead. (Example at 01:00:047 (60047|3), 00:56:180 (56180|1), 00:56:531 (56531|2))
00:00:867 - Add note, you did it at 00:01:687 (1687|2)
00:02:742 - ^
00:18:504 - Add note
00:24:422 (24422|1,24422|2) - Move notes elsewhere, make them feel different from the bass kicks (don't use the same pattern for different instruments)
00:27:820 (27820|2,27879|1,27937|2) - ctrl+H to mirror earlier pattern
00:29:695 (29695|3) - Move to 00:29:812
00:29:930 (29930|3) - Move to 00:30:281
00:32:273 - Add 2 notes col 1 and col 3
00:36:961 (36961|0,36961|3) - Remove, no drum sound here, so these notes shouldn't have same intensity as the drums at 00:36:726 (36726|2) -
00:37:781 (37781|0,37781|1) - 4 LN really unecessary because it's not a really strong sound, change to LN at col 3 and 4 and add 2 notes to col 1 and 2 at 00:38:016
00:40:711 (40711|2) - Remove, there are no other notes mapped to the 1/2 beat (red line) in this entire section
00:41:648 (41648|2) - Add note for consistency, you used 2 at 00:39:773 (39773|1)
00:43:523 - Add 2 notes col 1 and 4
00:48:328 (48328|2) - Delete, not a strong sound
00:49:148 (49148|2) - ^
00:50:086 - Add note
00:50:203 - Remove 1
00:50:437 - Add note
00:50:437 - ^
00:51:961 - ^
00:57:527 (57527|0,57586|3,57644|0) - - These notes should be 1/3 snaps, on the purple line, and there are only 2 bass kicks, not 3
00:58:465 (58465|1,58523|2,58582|3) - - ^
01:02:273 - Add note
01:03:680 - ^
01:09:656 - ^ no reason to suddenly not have 2 notes on the bass kick
01:09:891 - ^
01:11:180 - ^
01:21:961 (81961|3) - Remove 2 LN, 4 is really unecessary
01:30:047 (90047|0) - Remove
01:30:633 (90633|2,90633|3) - No reason for this to suddenly have 2 notes. There's no bass kick and there's no melody, meaning there's no reason for it to have the same intensity and note count as 01:30:516 (90516|0) and 01:30:750 (90750|0)
01:31:805 (91805|2,91805|3) - Remove 1
01:36:726 - Add note, you used to in 01:34:851 (94851|2), so keep it consistent
01:41:180 (101180|0) - Add note col 4, same reason as earlier
01:43:523 - Add note
01:45:047 (105047|3) - Remove
01:47:508 (107508|2,107508|0,107625|3,107625|1,107742|3,107742|1,107859|3,107859|1,107976|2,107976|0,108094|1,108094|2,108211|3,108211|1,108328|0,108328|2,108445|1,108445|2,108562|1,108562|3,108680|1,108680|2) - Isn't consistent. As in, it doesn't match pitch, and there's no visible distribution of notes for bass kicks / melody. For example, 01:47:273 (107273|2,107273|0) has no bass kick, but 01:47:391 (107391|2,107391|0) does. But there's also a difference in pitch, so why do both notes get the same pattern?
01:47:625 (107625|1,107625|3) - has a different pitch compared to 01:47:742 (107742|3,107742|1)
01:48:094 (108094|1,108094|2,108211|1,108211|3) - These two have the same pitch, but now all of a sudden they have a different pattern
01:48:445 (108445|1,108445|2,108562|1,108562|3) - ^
01:49:207 - Add note
01:49:617 (109617|1,109617|3,109734|1,109734|2) - Same issue as earlier
01:49:969 (109969|1,109969|3,110086|2,110086|0) - ^
01:50:320 (110320|0,110320|2,110437|3,110437|1) - ^
01:51:961 (111961|3,112078|3,112195|3,112312|3) - Unecessary jack here, there's a change in pitch so a use of jack makes no sense
01:55:359 (115359|0) - I think this whole section of 4 note jacks on col 1, 4, 3, 2, 1 aren't fun to play, nor are they comfortable, and they don't match the melody. Consider remapping
01:59:578 (119578|1,119578|0) - Remove, 4 LN too many
You can pm me for more details if you want, good luck with ranked.
(btw, not being rude, just being honest )