Hello kunkakunkakunkakunka! Sorry for the delay, but I have this time to mod your map!
Hard
- 00:08:846 (1,1) - It's highly recommended you add at least one beat in-between for little recovery when it comes to average and low difficulties, but it also applies to hard difficulties. How about ending the spinner on 00:11:560 ?
Insane
- 00:05:530 to 00:08:695 - The rhythms in this part sounds quite weird, especially the short sliders 00:05:982 (3,3) . They end on half of the syllables instead of fully, and this is what I think sounds weird. Later, bizarrely, 00:07:942 (3,4,5) doesn't also sound nice but for the first time I've heard it, like it sounded empty. Though, this follows the vocals good, in my opinion, it could be arranged.
- Firstly, 00:05:982 (3,3) should be extended by a beat in order to get the vocals fully. I don't really the point to have the sliders half a beat to be honest.
- Secondly, 00:07:942 (3,4) could be changed to only a 1/1 slider. This would also follow that one syllable. In my opinion, the hitcircle doesn't currently touch anything that could be emphasized.
- 00:19:463 (2,5) - Try improving the blanket pattern. Currently it doesn't look neat.
- 00:47:986 - It would be better if you start slider here instead of the downbeat, because the red tick has a strong beat which could be emphasized with a clickable object.
- 00:49:337 to 00:50:238 - You might want to fill this part with more objects since the 1/1 rhythm makes the previous rhythm stop, and doesn't make a consistency and same density if there's other beats you could touch.
- 00:58:046 (2,3) - Switching the objects would sound better in my opinion. That way, the drum beat could be emphasized on 00:58:346 by a clickable object instead of the tail.
- 01:01:949 (3) - A little symmetric could make slider look neater.
- 01:16:814 to 01:18:015 - I mod the last difficulty first, so I sometimes want to say the same reason depending on the "thing" without recopying. In this case, you might want to search the timestamps at the beginning of this sentence in the Concerto mod below.
Concerto
- 00:05:530 to 00:08:695 - Please read what I've typed in Insane.
- 00:25:919 (5) - The flow with 00:25:769 (4) felt unnatural for me. 00:25:319 (1,2,3,4) goes to the left, but 00:25:919 (5) is on the right of (4) with a repeat going left, like the 1/2 hitcircles rhythm. I suggest you make the slider straight, and make it rotating to get a diagonal. Moving the node on the tail to x:91 y:143 should be good.
- 00:30:048 - How about you add a hitcircle on that tick? The sound is noticeable to me.
- 00:30:574 (4) - Move this a little up, like x:205 y:68? This would make a little variation with the movement since 00:30:124 (1,2,3,4) currently go lower.
- 00:47:986 (5,6) - The triplet here doesn't mean anything here in my opinion, as the strong beat stands on 00:47:986 -, and it felt like another measure of the song. I suggest you switch the objects 00:47:986 (5,1) in the timeline, so slider first and circle second. This would also stay on the same path with the rhythm.
- 00:48:962 (4) - There's literally no beat in this tick, so that hitcircle is useless and should be removed.
- 00:58:196 (3) - I suggest you break that slider into objects that follow the drum. I feel that the drums should be emphasized since it gets louder and repetitive there. I also think that it brings a little intensity before the stream. Try a circle and a 1/2 slider on a 1/2 rhythm.
- 01:03:751 (1) - A little symmetric could make slider look neater.
- 01:11:108 (2) - The blanket pattern was noticeable off to me. Move this down to y:219 to get a pretty blanket.
- 01:16:814 to 01:18:015 - Honestly, I wouldn't go follow the vocals. There's a mix of vocals and drums, but the current rhythms sounds bad with the drums, which I recommend you to follow. They don't emphasize at the correct place, like 01:17:414 (3) with the tail on the strong beat. I also think that having a hitcircle on 01:16:814 (5) instead of the slider sounds weird when you have 01:16:964 (1,2,3,4,5) after. Try this instead:
- 01:23:570 (5) - I think only hitcircle on the downbeat is enough. I don't see why you would add a kickslider here, as it doesn't follow anything.