Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Additional correction : I changed the 00:58:346 (4) - to 2 circles. This is superior obviously.Ipas wrote:
Okay, recheck, so don't give me kudos again
I had discuss this map with sheela901, this is our conclusion~ okay. Thank you~
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:21:565 (1,2,3,4) - Are you really don't want to reconsider those pattern? They might be slight difficult to read for beginners . If you agree with this, you need to delete (2) and (4), then add reverse to (1) and (2) instead fixed
- 00:25:319 (3,4) - You can rework on this pattern too . You can try to delete (4) and extend (3) to 00:26:069 - to cover the guitar so that the weird gap will be removed automatically fixed
- 00:30:124 (3) - It can be work too here, by extend this slider until 00:30:874 - to cover the guitar fixed
- 00:31:175 (1,2,3,4) - See first suggestion again fixed
- 00:34:928 (3,4) - See my second suggestion again fixed
- 00:51:439 - How about you add a circle on this tick or 00:51:139 (2) turns into a slider that ends on 00:51:439? I added a circle.
- 01:08:255 (2) - Maybe turn this into a 1/2 slider in order to get the final beat of the measure on 01:08:406 before the chorus commences fixed
- 01:25:071 - With the same reason as above suggestion, this tick could have a filling to it to cover up the vocals and drum I added a circle.
- 01:28:224 (4) - This slider could be extended by 1/2 as well to cover up the guitar and the vocals more clearly (This is also applied to all diffs below) hmm,,What do you mean? Could you clarify your question? I set the end point of the slider in 01:28:675 as a cover of the vocal. If it is a guitar, I will set it in 01:28:825 - . I think that 01:28:675 is proper now.
[Hard]
- 00:20:964 (1) - Currently, the start sounds weird, and the stronger beat holds on 00:21:115 which holds a long note after. It would be good if you start a slider on 00:21:115 to get the long note and you can add a circle 00:20:964 . fixed
- 01:01:949 (4,1) - You can improve the blanket to make looks more neater fixed
[Insane]
- 00:22:766 (4,5) - 00:32:376 (4,5) - Switch the rhythm between them? Currently the slider start on a weak parts and it sounds weird . With switching the rhythm, you can catch both of strong and weak guitar sound here I made modifications in ctrl+G.
- 00:56:244 (3,4) - These two could play better with the same pattern as 00:55:043 (7,1) - , because you mostly follow the vocals and this section vocals are getting prominent as well I switched to the same rhythm. The basis is 00:55:043 (7,1) -
- 01:16:814 - You kind of miss an essential beat. It would be great if you do something with it. I suggest you do add a circle on 01:16:814 and a 1/1 slider on 01:16:964 . That way the circle hits the cymbal sound and still follow the vocals with the slider. fixed
[Concerto]
- 00:16:910 (1,2) - 00:18:112 (1,2) - I see no reason to use this kind of spacing . They could be considered as 3/4 if they placed like this . Also, each of (2) represent the strong beat so why don't you consider to put a jump as well? lol okay. fixed
- 00:46:335 (4) - I found this circle isn't really intuitive to follow from previous object . How about move this circle to somewhere around y:240 to follow the previous object direction as well? You can think about the x coordinate as well as soon you apply this one fixed
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- 00:23:967 (1) - To emphasis the beat, spacing to this slider should be higher than this, since there are few of the strong beat too which have larger emphasis in this sequence, 00:23:667 (5,6) - , so keeping it like this feels unbalanced hmm,,It has resistance that a figure(pentagon) is broken...okay. I let 00:23:967 (1) - jump.
- 00:49:938 (4,5,1) - I don't like how they placed as I state in my last mod . Perhaps do something like this would be more greater and awesome! ...okay. you’re the boss. However, please understand that I liked this point most in this MAP.
- 00:52:190 (3,4,5,6) - I think the big spacing feels out of blue. The vocals and instruments are not that "loud" until 00:52:791 has gone thorough. Currently, I'm not sure what the big distances emphasize with in this part. I suggest you stick the same distance for 00:52:190 (3,4,5) and make a jump to 00:52:641 (5,6) because a stronger beat is held on 00:52:791 . A jump would emphasize better fixed. However, the jump is small because I don't want to change a flow.
- 00:56:244 (5,6,1) - It could be done better in my opinion . I don't really like how the curve near the head is short : it kind of makes a weird movement . Also, the overlap is a little bad fixed
That's all from us, I will rebubble once you get fix all mentioned things above I changed it as much as possible. Thank you for re-check.