Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Ipas wrote:
This song is totally GREAT ><
I'm sorry If I was trouble you, but consider my suggestions here~ I accept you. However, bubble has faded away again lol. My HP is 0
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:25:319 (3,4,1) - For me, rhythm pattern like this, really confusing for an Easy . People sometimes hit it faster than it must be and gets 100 on their hits . Maybe try to follow another sound beside than this, how about try this rhythm? 1/1 is more acceptable in my opinion, rather than doing 2/1 with circles fixed.
- 00:34:328 (2,3,4,1) - ^
- 00:29:823 - Don't leave it empty please, it's rather loud and noticeable and really capable for being hit ^^
- 00:55:043 (1) - After saw so many 3/2 gaps, I'd rather to play this slider on 00:55:193 - , because there's more support by the vocals and than strong sound here, which bad for being ignored at all . It goes same with the next slider, try to move them 1/2 afterwards and use this pattern ((00:57:145 (3) - Delete this circle first) hm,,okay.
SPOILERhttp://puu.sh/k8A9N/ca6a1f45b8.jpg- 00:58:796 (2) - It looks more better if you could fix the blanket Because I have a bad eyesight, I cannot carry out a delicate activity lol. I revised it a little.
- 01:23:870 - Map this beat is nice to make up a build-up rhythm over there I changed the 01:23:570 (2) - to 1/1slider.
- 01:27:624 (3) - Rearrange it like this (below), to make 01:28:224 - being clickable and end the diff like the others here
[Hard]
- 00:40:334 (4) - Since it's a Normal, I would like to make a nice build-up here, by mapping out these beat too 00:40:484 - 00:40:784 - I feel it to be difficult personally (Because BPM is fast). In addition, I feel like placement was clogged. I changed it to 2hit.
[Insane]
- 00:17:811 (3) - Better to replace this circle by 1/2 slider, so that this 00:17:961 - will get a little enough emphasis to leave the section less awkward since 00:19:163 (4) - sounded similar, but in fact it's more louder fixed.
- 00:40:634 (8,9) - Fix spacing, I know it must not be supposed to be like this This is faithful to DS. Because BPM changes here, it becomes like this. However, I trust you and make a change.
[Concerto]
- 00:16:835 - It's going better to fill and map this 1/4 beat, it's really clear and sounds nice for being mapped fixed.
- 00:49:262 - I couldn't hear anything here, and here too 00:49:337 - . I recommend you to replace them all 00:49:187 (4,5,1) - with 1/1 slider like image below, because the only thing that really prominent here over the sequence is the long sound that appears on 00:49:187 - If you're planned to follow this suggestion, make sure you put NC on 00:49:638 (5) - later hm,,,okay.
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- 00:02:515 (7) - Because of vocals pronounced clearly at this slider body, rather to emphasis it by rearrange this slider into 1/2 pattern I thought a little. I made 1/2 slider double.
- 00:49:938 (4,5,1) - Placement is weird and make this circle which relies the guitar sound feel bad 00:50:313 (5) - . Deleting this circle would be nice too, but if you don't want it, do the another placement things I hear the sound of the guitar to some extent. and, I'm the most favorite point of this map. I'm sorry but I couldn't change it.
- 00:52:791 (6) - Finish on head, find the same stuff because this beat carry out rather similar to cymbal I feel have a big sound in the cymbals...hmmmmmmmmmmmmm..okay lol
- 00:55:193 (1) - ^ ^
- 01:08:180 - 01:08:331 - Still connected to each others in 01:07:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - , so better to fill them out to make nice pattern across the song I don't feel the need. There is no sound to respond to here. and It's the jump placement that could make up for it.
Woah, the whole diffs are nice!
Good Luck! Thank you