Hey, fast check; no need to KD
It's been a while since I modded anything so apologies for any sloppiness.
Storyboard
- Not super important, but if you go through your .osb file and change all the scalings to be 0.625, then that can help with consistency through the SB.
eg: (look at the last number)
- 00:07:245 - The transition from the brightness to normal isn't really smooth. Since the music also picks up at this point, I would also recommend using a flash here by having a white image fill the screen and fade out to about 00:07:653. This is the white.png that I use (right-click save).
- 00:46:429 - Your bg_in_red.png starts out smaller than the background. Go through your .osb file and change the last number of the scaling so that it matches the one you use for your background (should be 0.625) for a smoother pulse.
- 00:59:490 - Same thing here.
- 01:45:204 - And again.
- 01:58:266 - Yep.
- 02:17:858 - Perhaps a flash here similar to what I suggested before for a smoother transition.
- 03:16:633 - As before.
- 03:21:531 - As well as it being too small initially, I feel like the expansion rate is a bit too high, which gives it a bit more 'intense' feeling compared to how you did this pulse before, where the music wouldn't really suggest this at all. I would change it so there's more time before it fades out, preferably the same time as your previous pulses. That applies to the next three pulses too I suppose.
- 03:22:755 - I think it would be better if your bright.png starts at 03:23:164 instead, and have it continue fading in until 03:26:021 to match the cresendo in the music.
- 03:26:021 - I can't say I like how this switches back from bright into contrast and back into bright again really quickly; it feels pretty unnatural and doesn't really flow very well. I would rethink how you would do this part (perhaps make it fade into black and then pulse?). You can change my above suggestion too if that conflicts with this one.
- 03:39:490 - Pulse... you probably know what I'm going to say
Normal
- 00:46:021 (2) - Perhaps change this so you have a hard note at 00:46:429 since this is the start of kiai time.
- 01:44:796 (4) - As above.
- 03:16:633 (1) - Perhaps add a finish here?
Hard
- 00:51:327 (1) - Perhaps a Ctrl+G here so that it flows better? - 01:37:041 (1) - Minor: This blanket could be improved [01:36:786].
- 01:37:653 - Instead of having it blank here, maybe go with a rhythm like this? - 01:43:572 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing increases here, but I don't believe there's anything in the music to justify this. It even decreases again once you go into Kiai.
- 01:49:898 (6) - Ctrl+G this if you want. Personally I would. - 02:26:021 - Personally I prefer finishes to be on hard notes where possible, but it's up to you.
- 03:16:837 - I would put a note here to follow the vocals/piano.
- 03:19:490 (5,6) - Not sure about having a stack, but it's up to you.
Catharsis
- 00:40:102 (2,6) - Put these claps on the white ticks instead of the red ticks.
- 01:10:919 (1) - Not a suggsetion, but I think this stream is great
- 01:15:000 (3,1) - Looks like these became catmull sliders (drag the slider point around to see what I mean). I would replace them and make them the same shape.
- 01:20:715 (1,2) - Minor: These don't appear to be perfectly symmetrical with eachother.
- 02:33:368 (4) - I don't like the slider itself in my opinion (too much wiggling), and I would use this sort of rhythm personally: - 02:38:266 (1,2,3,4) - I would keep the spacing consistent with the rest of the stream, since I don't believe the music calls for an increase like this.
- 03:25:102 (4,1) - I would keep the spacing consistent here.
- 03:25:511 (4,1) - As above.
- 03:26:021 (1,2) - I would remove the hitsounds from these two personally since the music drops completely save for the vocals.
Call me back to check on the storyboard again.
Good luck
It's been a while since I modded anything so apologies for any sloppiness.
Storyboard
- Not super important, but if you go through your .osb file and change all the scalings to be 0.625, then that can help with consistency through the SB.
eg: (look at the last number)
S,0,5613,,0.625
- 00:07:245 - The transition from the brightness to normal isn't really smooth. Since the music also picks up at this point, I would also recommend using a flash here by having a white image fill the screen and fade out to about 00:07:653. This is the white.png that I use (right-click save).
- 00:46:429 - Your bg_in_red.png starts out smaller than the background. Go through your .osb file and change the last number of the scaling so that it matches the one you use for your background (should be 0.625) for a smoother pulse.
- 00:59:490 - Same thing here.
- 01:45:204 - And again.
- 01:58:266 - Yep.
- 02:17:858 - Perhaps a flash here similar to what I suggested before for a smoother transition.
- 03:16:633 - As before.
- 03:21:531 - As well as it being too small initially, I feel like the expansion rate is a bit too high, which gives it a bit more 'intense' feeling compared to how you did this pulse before, where the music wouldn't really suggest this at all. I would change it so there's more time before it fades out, preferably the same time as your previous pulses. That applies to the next three pulses too I suppose.
- 03:22:755 - I think it would be better if your bright.png starts at 03:23:164 instead, and have it continue fading in until 03:26:021 to match the cresendo in the music.
- 03:26:021 - I can't say I like how this switches back from bright into contrast and back into bright again really quickly; it feels pretty unnatural and doesn't really flow very well. I would rethink how you would do this part (perhaps make it fade into black and then pulse?). You can change my above suggestion too if that conflicts with this one.
- 03:39:490 - Pulse... you probably know what I'm going to say
Normal
- 00:46:021 (2) - Perhaps change this so you have a hard note at 00:46:429 since this is the start of kiai time.
- 01:44:796 (4) - As above.
- 03:16:633 (1) - Perhaps add a finish here?
Hard
- 00:51:327 (1) - Perhaps a Ctrl+G here so that it flows better? - 01:37:041 (1) - Minor: This blanket could be improved [01:36:786].
- 01:37:653 - Instead of having it blank here, maybe go with a rhythm like this? - 01:43:572 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing increases here, but I don't believe there's anything in the music to justify this. It even decreases again once you go into Kiai.
- 01:49:898 (6) - Ctrl+G this if you want. Personally I would. - 02:26:021 - Personally I prefer finishes to be on hard notes where possible, but it's up to you.
- 03:16:837 - I would put a note here to follow the vocals/piano.
- 03:19:490 (5,6) - Not sure about having a stack, but it's up to you.
Catharsis
- 00:40:102 (2,6) - Put these claps on the white ticks instead of the red ticks.
- 01:10:919 (1) - Not a suggsetion, but I think this stream is great
- 01:15:000 (3,1) - Looks like these became catmull sliders (drag the slider point around to see what I mean). I would replace them and make them the same shape.
- 01:20:715 (1,2) - Minor: These don't appear to be perfectly symmetrical with eachother.
- 02:33:368 (4) - I don't like the slider itself in my opinion (too much wiggling), and I would use this sort of rhythm personally: - 02:38:266 (1,2,3,4) - I would keep the spacing consistent with the rest of the stream, since I don't believe the music calls for an increase like this.
- 03:25:102 (4,1) - I would keep the spacing consistent here.
- 03:25:511 (4,1) - As above.
- 03:26:021 (1,2) - I would remove the hitsounds from these two personally since the music drops completely save for the vocals.
Call me back to check on the storyboard again.
Good luck