Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234

The NM diffs seem fine to me~ whoaaa *o*

[HD]
00:37:626 - Add note no
00:37:726 - ^ no
00:44:126 - ^ no

[MX]
How come there's no video for this diff? D: eh....... added the video, hope its already has the video :3
00:14:426 - Add note, same sound as 00:14:026 (14026|1) okay
00:16:126 - Add note, I think that it's fine to have a 1/4 pattern in the hardest diff ....
00:37:626 - Add note for snare i dont hear any snare sound there..
00:37:726 - ^ ^
00:51:826 (51826|2,52026|1,52426|3,52626|2,52826|0) - Just a mild nitpick that these should staircase to the left for pitch relevancy ...

Good luck with ranked! thank you!

Pharos21 wrote:

Kayy

sesuai Deal nya

aku take NM nya okay~

and here's the MOD

-focus on Consistency and Ghost Scanning-

-NM+-

00:08:626 (8626|0) - idk kau Focus ke instru ato sama Vocal.. but lebih baik ke instru.. jadi ini delete aja tapi ini suara piano...

00:09:826 (9826|0) - next Sound start nya di 00:10:226 - bukan di situ okay

00:14:426 - missing note?? aku denger ada sound di sini um...

00:15:026 - sama white line atasnya juga.. ngga missing note?? hmm... seharusnya cuma ngikut drum, kick, sama piano sih..

noting more

- HD -

00:16:226 (16226|3,16226|0,16426|1,16426|2,16626|3,16626|0,16826|2,16826|1,17026|3,17026|0) - what is this for? itu kick..

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here.. coba di didenger lagi.. kek nya pake 1/8 okay

- MX -

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here okay
00:09:626 - missing Vocal note here.. soalnya aku denger yang 3 LN di atasnya ngikut Vocal okay

sorry kalo dikit.... soalnya memang itu yang bisa aku temuin

ada sih yang kedengeran nya ghosting.. but pas aku denger lagi.. ada faint sound.. jadi aku ragu itu ghost ato bukan

wait for my NM oke >,<)/

Rivals_7 wrote:

Thx for the 100th Kudos xD

-BANGKE- wrote:

kyknya blm nyumbang star :v /

-BANGKE- wrote:

some IRC with cherrysina, eh i mean, sherry c:

IRC

18:44 sherrysina: BANGJAAAY!!
18:44 -BANGKE-: CHERRRYY!
18:46 sherrysina: mana mod mod di thread??
18:46 sherrysina: sherry bantuin, lagi free banget nih :3
18:47 -BANGKE-: wokay xD
18:47 -BANGKE-: bentar
18:47 *-BANGKE- is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/361052 dj TAKA meets DJ YOSHITAKA - Elemental Creation [4K EXTREME]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:48 sherrysina: hwee oke xD
18:58 -BANGKE-: eh sherry
18:58 -BANGKE-: udah di apply map mu?
18:58 -BANGKE-: mod nya
19:01 sherrysina: udah..
19:01 -BANGKE-: okay
19:01 sherrysina: dan NM nya di replace sama punya pharos
19:01 -BANGKE-: aku cek lagi
19:01 -BANGKE-: without video kok 10 mb =w=
19:02 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716937 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [zancers ft. sherry's MX]]
19:02 -BANGKE-: ready?
19:03 sherrysina: ngga tau =w=
19:03 sherrysina: IRC kah?
19:03 -BANGKE-: iya
19:03 -BANGKE-: nanti aku post
19:03 sherrysina: ready =w=)b
19:03 -BANGKE-: :3
19:03 sherrysina: sama IRC yang kemaren itu owo
19:03 -BANGKE-: just suggestion : 00:01:626 (1626|2) - move col 4, 00:01:426 (1426|3) - col 1
19:03 -BANGKE-: 00:02:426 (2426|3,3226|3) - jadi biar sejajar sama kedua LN ini
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:05:626 (5626|1) - col 1
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - whoops, missing note xD
19:05 sherrysina: ^ added note
19:05 -BANGKE-: 00:25:026 - triplet much better, kiai part
19:05 -BANGKE-: add 1
19:06 sherrysina: 2 untuk konsistensi..
19:07 -BANGKE-: nothing else, nice
19:07 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:07 sherrysina: YEAY
19:08 sherrysina: sudah ke HS yang HD =w=)b
19:08 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:08 -BANGKE-: suggest : 00:16:226 (16226|1) - col 4, 00:16:026 (16026|3) - col 2
19:09 sherrysina: applied
19:09 -BANGKE-: 00:40:726 (40726|0,40826|2) - untuk lebih nyamanya, ctrl + j
19:10 sherrysina: okay
19:10 -BANGKE-: nothing else again, nice =w=)b
19:10 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:10 sherrysina: YEAY
19:10 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:03:826 (3826|1,4026|0) - geser ke kanan
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - mirror dari ini
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:226 (10226|0) - whoops, kelewatan LN nya xD
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - seharusnya di sini akhirnya
19:12 sherrysina: wait
19:12 sherrysina: mirror?
19:12 -BANGKE-: yang tadi itu, yg ku suruh geser
19:12 -BANGKE-: itu mirror dari yg itu
19:12 -BANGKE-: =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: ohh iya iya =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: okay sudah turunin LN sampe garis putih bawahnya
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:32:626 (32626|0) - col 4?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:33:826 (33826|2) - ^ ?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:37:426 (37426|3,37426|0) - menurutku ini, change jadi LN (?)
19:14 -BANGKE-: suggestion ._.
19:14 -BANGKE-: 00:42:626 (42626|1,42626|3) - ngga ke HS nih xD
19:14 sherrysina: applied yang di paling atas
19:15 sherrysina: ohiya ketinggalan...
19:15 -BANGKE-: 00:52:026 (52026|3) - col 3, 00:52:826 (52826|2) - col 2?
19:16 -BANGKE-: nice again =w=)b
19:16 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [Pharos' NM]]
19:16 sherrysina: hmm nope..
19:16 sherrysina: yeahh =w=)b
19:16 -BANGKE-: yg diff ini blm ke HS yah
19:16 -BANGKE-: ?
19:17 sherrysina: ehh belum ya?
19:17 -BANGKE-: belum..
19:17 -BANGKE-: seems no problem in pheros diff eh pharos
19:17 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World]
19:17 sherrysina: yey =w=)b

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3

sherrysina wrote:

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3

Thank you Shana! >.<

i hope you do bub ;w;

-BANGKE- wrote:

shana quit, isnt it?

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430 // pitch.. no.. sorry
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4 // pitch arn't too high. keep
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3 // pitch are same with 00:14:826 (14826|1) -
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1 // the pitch are not lower than 00:18:426 (18426|0) - so keep
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4 // re- arrange
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1 // re- arrange
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note //Fixed
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1



Good luck :3

DE-CADE wrote:

do you have clean version of this song ? because im not really sure with this mp3

puxtu wrote:

[NM+]
00:11:426 - add, piano + vocal + clap emphasis. It deserves more than 1 note
00:13:826 (13826|2,13826|3) - I don't usually use double chords for soft kick sound esp. in NM+ diff. If I were you, I'll use double chords for sound like this 00:15:226 (15226|2) - or long vocal sound like this 00:21:026 (21026|2) -
00:25:826 (25826|0,25826|2,26026|3,26026|1,26226|0,26226|2) - this is HD's pattern. NM players won't happy to play this
00:33:826 (33826|2,34026|2) - esp. this
[HD]
00:01:026 (1026|0) - why there's only one single note? NM+ has double chords here
00:08:826 (8826|0) - do you mind to explain this? http://puu.sh/k5vRJ/7418e369d1.jpg
00:16:026 (16026|1) - add 1/4 after this note, pretty loud hi-hat
00:22:626 (22626|3) - missing 1/2 notes in this area, NM+ has those 1/2s
00:31:426 (31426|0) - ^
00:34:626 (34626|0) - ^
00:37:426 (37426|0) - ^ and 1/4
...maybe its just me but I think some hitsounds are missing

Draftnell wrote:

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/324294

yoo :3 udah lama gak nge mod...so lngsung aja ye :3

[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - better if you move to 1 (for balance)
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + H
00:22:826 (22826|1) - move 1 for balance
00:40:626 (40626|3,40726|1,40826|2) - umm my suggest >> http://puu.sh/kflOt/0f03631713.jpg
bila sherry nge take yg di atas tadi next nya >> 00:41:026 (41026|1) - move ke 3

[HD]
00:27:826 (27826|1) - move 4
00:34:226 (34226|2) - move 1
00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - ngikut vocal ? klo gak...disama in ma pattern yg ini 00:28:226 (28226|3,28226|0) -
00:40:826 (40826|0) - move 3 nope
00:41:026 (41026|3,41026|1) - geser ke kiri 1x nope

MX ma punya pharos...kyk nya udah gak di permasalahin lagi deh (udah pass) makasiiih ><)/

oke good luck map nya sherry ~

Bruce wrote:

Hello,short check here.
1 2 3 4
[NM] i take over this diff
00:10:026 (10026|3) - This hold seems uncomfortable,i suugest you delete or start at 00:10:226 -

00:15:026 - 00:15:826 - Here suggest you add 1 note.Becuz the piano sound is clearly,the other sound you catched is unfriendly for NM Player hmm...nope

Haven't some big problems but i see you have too many 12 43 patterns in the kiai time so give you some suggestions:
00:35:826 (35826|1,36026|3) - Ctrl+J

00:42:026 (42026|3,42226|2) - Ctrl+J

00:45:826 (45826|3,46026|0,46226|1) - Move to 1 2 3

[NM+]
00:22:626 (22626|3) - Suggest you change this to note and 00:23:426 (23426|0) - to Hold,more suitable imo.

00:55:226 (55226|2) - Feel little strange.Suggest you end at 00:55:826 - or change to note.

[HD]
00:08:626 (8626|2,8826|0) - here hasn't sound what you catched,i recommend you delete
and 00:08:426 (8426|1) - move this to 1 or 3 and change to hold. hmm.. nope

00:16:626 (16626|3,16626|0) - Choose 1 to delete.here only have single sound.
If feel pattern will be crashed i suggest you 00:16:826 (16826|1,17026|3) - Ctrl+J or reverse.

00:20:226 (20226|2) - Since you catch this vocal sound,you need place completely.

00:55:226 (55226|0) - The same likes NM+ Mod.

[MX]
00:23:026 - Suggest you add 1 hold at 1,end at 00:23:426 - .Here seems very empty.

00:41:026 (41026|1) - This vocal sound should be end at 00:43:826 -

00:44:226 (44226|2) - End at 00:45:826 - and make new hold. nope

That's all.Good Luck

bilqiscutee wrote:

Gratz your map has been checked!

*pake gaya alek

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi sherrysina
BN Check

[Pharos' NM]
turn off N+1 style

00:08:426 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3756654 // didn't hear anything here 00:08:626 - except vocal
00:12:826 (12826|2) - move to 2 // same pitch with this 00:13:226 (13226|2) - Keep

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Qualified

bilqiscutee wrote:

Gratz your map has been checked!

*pake gaya alek