nvm
thank you~~FreeezeForward wrote:
F4W's Modding Notice
*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue
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*If you reject some of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.
MetadatakeepTitle: Tell Your World (Short Ver.) The original song is about 4 minutes. i dont think to change this. since i already write those and the other modder said to delete it
Difficulty: zancers x sherry's MX ....
Source: Vocaloid It's clearly the song is from a vocaloid. i dont think that vocaloid is the right source
Tags: Remove "vocaloid" since it's on the source. ... @@
HP Drain (HP): NM and NM+ must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8. keep
Overall Difficulty (OD): NM must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8
B_Ex's NM...keep00:01:426 (1426|2,1626|1) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H), for hand balance and pitch pattern. keep
00:04:626 (4626|2,4826|1) - Same as above. same as above
00:07:826 (7826|2,8026|1) - Same as above. same as above
00:12:026 (12026|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance. keep
00:13:826 (13826|2) - Move to 4, for hand balance. okay
00:16:426 (16426|1,16626|0,16826|1,17026|2) - Move to 4, 2, 3 and 2 respectively, for note consistency and hand balance. keep
00:44:626 (44626|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance. keep
00:51:026 (51026|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance. keep
00:54:226 (54226|1,54426|0) - Switch columns, for pitch pattern and hand balance.
NM+00:01:226 (1226|2,1426|1) - Move to 2 and 1 respectively, for hand balance and reverse pitch pattern. no... this is balanced already
00:02:026 (2026|1,2226|0) - Switch columns, for pitch pattern and hand balance. okay
00:05:226 (5226|1) - Move to 4, for reversed pitch pattern. keep
00:07:826 (7826|1) - Move to 1, for hand balance. okay
00:10:826 (10826|2,11026|1) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) for pitch pattern. okay
00:13:026 (13026|3,13226|2,13426|1) - Move to 3, 2 and 1 respectively, for note consistency. okay
00:47:426 (47426|3) - Move to 3, for note density. keep
HD00:01:026 (1026|0) - Move to 4, for pitch pattern and note density. keep
00:14:826 (14826|1) - Move to 3, for note consistency. keep
00:48:626 (48626|3) - Move to 3, to avoid too much jacks. welp okay @@
00:49:426 (49426|2,49426|0) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H), for hand balance and to avoid too much jacks. okay okay
zancers ft. sherry MX00:07:626 (7626|0) - Move to 3, for note density. keep
00:10:226 (10226|1,10226|2,10426|2,10626|1) - Flip Horizontally, for hand balance and pitch pattern. okay
00:11:626 (11626|2) - Move to 4, for hand balance. keep
00:13:826 (13826|2) - Move to 1, for easier hit and note density. keep
00:21:426 (21426|3) - Move to 1, to avoid densed jacks. okay
00:25:826 (25826|1,26026|2) - Move to 4 and 2 respectively, for hand balance. okay
00:34:026 (34026|3) - Move to 2, same as above. okay
00:42:226 (42226|2) - Move to 4, same as above. keep
00:48:226 (48226|1) - Move to 4, same as above. okay
00:50:026 (50026|0,50226|1,50426|0,50626|1,50826|0) - Switch columns, for note density. keep
00:51:026 (51026|1) - Move to 4, to avoid jacks in the mod above. keep
Who told you to delete the "Short Ver."? Just asking.sherrysina wrote:
FreeezeForward wrote:
F4W's Modding Notice
*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue
1|2|3|4
*If you reject some of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.
MetadatakeepTitle: Tell Your World (Short Ver.) The original song is about 4 minutes. i dont think to change this. since i already write those and the other modder said to delete it
Difficulty: zancers x sherry's MX ....
Source: Vocaloid It's clearly the song is from a vocaloid. i dont think that vocaloid is the right source
Tags: Remove "vocaloid" since it's on the source. ... @@
HP Drain (HP): NM and NM+ must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8. keep
Overall Difficulty (OD): NM must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8
thank you~~
FreeezeForward wrote:
Who told you to delete the "Short Ver."? Just asking.
i dont remember, but i'm sure many modders said to delete the "Short Ver."
I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.
FreeezeForward wrote:
I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.
Eternalie wrote:
Hi there nyan~ I don't know if it will be a really long mod but i'll try
hope it will help :3How I do modMy mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappynessDesu~Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[zancers ft. sherry]
00:22:426 (22426|1) - I think this LN should start here : 00:22:626 -
00:51:226 (51226|2) - Should be 2 LNs since HD have two LNs for this sounds .
same for all the next LNs
00:52:026 (52026|1) -
00:52:826 (52826|0) -
00:54:426 (54426|3) -
00:55:226 (55226|0) - i think, 1 note is okay..
[HD]
00:41:026 (41026|1) - add another note according to previous pattern : 00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - < I think it should be two notes okay
[NM+]
00:30:826 (30826|0) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern 00:35:426 (35426|3,35426|1,35626|0,35626|2,35826|0,35826|1) - but i dont hear any drum sound D:
[B_Ex's NM]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern : 00:29:026 (29026|1,29026|3) - okay~
hawa , really super short mod ;w; , I can't really help for pattern , so it's mainly concistency thingys feel free to reject anything~
Good Luck~ Tell your world is sugoi song~~ thank you Etlie! ><
thank you mastah sefuh :3Adinata28 wrote:
Hi Sherry :3 /
Mod Requested, sorry for the delay :'
|1|2|3|4|B_Ex's NMokay
- 00:13:826 - add note ? consistency with 00:10:626 - okay, i also re-arranged the reff part
- 00:17:026 - ^ ? ^
- 00:29:226 - delete 1 note ? since u placed 1 note on 00:30:826 - 00:32:426 - etc okay, re-arranged
- 00:52:426 (52426|1,52826|3) - Ctrl + G, for pitch,
NM+okay
- 00:10:626 - add 1 more note ? okay
- 00:27:226 (27226|2) - move to 1 ? okay
- 00:28:026 (28026|0) - delete, 1 note is enough okay
- 00:30:826 - add note, for clap. like 00:29:226 - i dont think its a clap sound..
- 00:48:626 (48626|1) - move to 1 pls
HDokay
- 00:23:426 (23426|0) - should end at 00:23:826 -
FreeezeForward wrote:
I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.
thank you aliscea! applied some of the mods above. sorry i cant reply one by one :cAlisceaSparku wrote:
Hi~!
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!!!
Good song, good map. I have few suggestions though...
Here's my Mod:
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[NM]
00:10:626 (10626|2) - move to 2 to put some notes on column 2. feels unbalanced imo, but it looks better
00:13:426 (13426|1,13626|0) - change columns, fits more
00:12:426 (12426|0,12826|1) - better swap these if you apply ^
00:16:226 - try this rough suggestion http://puu.sh/jW7VT/45a421f75f.jpg
00:19:626 (19626|2) - move to 1, change of sound, better make this far from 00:19:426 (19426|3)
00:24:626 (24626|1) - move to 1, putting a space inbetween emphasizes the sound
00:37:826 - these sliders are hard for a normal difficulty imo, there are even notes. I suggest remove those sliders
[NM+]
00:09:026 (9026|3) - strange slider... shouldn't the slider be at 00:08:826? ( ref. NM diff. )
00:10:626 - add a note, different sound with 00:10:826 ( optional, it also follows a bit of the NM difficulty )
00:17:626 - add a note if you're following the bell sounds ( is that even a bell xD )
00:18:426 - from this part to 00:19:626 column 1 feels empty. put some notes in it
00:19:626 - why 2 notes?
00:50:826 - 00:52:426 - column 1 feels empty...
00:55:826 - add note? same with NM diff
00:56:426 - strong sound, add note.
_
I hope these can help you
Good luck with your map!
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Rivals_7 wrote:
Modding Notice
Hello Sherrysina ^^
You were requested to me via in-game request. I do not point out all thing in this mod so there might be more issues that can be found across the mapset. Make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap.livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [OsuMania] 1|2|3|4
[General]
I felt HS isn't done yet, even HD still no HS..........
zancers ft. sherry MX zancers ft. sherry's MX (grammar pls :v ) okay xDD
[NM+]
00:22:026 (22026|1,22426|0) - col 1 and 2 respectively? seems more symmetrical. okay
00:47:026 (47026|1,47126|2,47226|3) - geser kiri. seems more comfortable to hit okay
[HD]
00:08:776 (8776|2) -
left= HD
Right= zancers ft. sherry MX
CMIIW tapi ini bisa jadi kemunkinan Unrankable issues karena note ini unsnapped. note ini juga gak ada di MX.
00:13:826 (13826|3,13826|0,14226|0,14226|3,14626|3,14626|0,15026|0,15426|3,15426|0,15826|0,15826|3,16226|0,16226|3) - imo this pattern can be improved tho, recommend to rearrange this somehow done~
00:35:826 (35826|0,36226|2) - col 3 and 2 respectively. avoid triple jack pattern. okay
00:51:226 - till the song end.
Please compare with MX diff
why HD have 2 LN while MX has 1 LN? take note that MX should be harder on any term besides just to increase the Star Rating, but also the pattern, should be harder. done~ but, can i keep MX has 1 LN?
so HD should have 1 LN and MX should have 2 LN.
[zancers ft. sherry MX]
00:09:826 (9826|2,10026|2,10026|3,10226|2,10226|1,10426|3) - eh...... I don't think there's any relevant noise that can be used for 2 note presses (1 SN and 1 LN = 2 note presses) suggest to delete the short notes there.
Side Note
As -BANGKE- has stated in multiplayer game chat before, that the rule of Minimum draining time ( t/352472 ) Could be applied anytime. If you really want this to get ranked, you should be fast now. since the rule can be applied anytime. UHHHH YES YES YES THANK YOU!
If you found that this mod isn't helpful to you, don't give kudosu. If there's any Misunderstanding , You can PM me anytime to clarify the issues that i've been pointed out. this is helpfuull!! kudosu gifted =w=)/
The other modder should handle this mapset from now on.
Good Luck sherrysina and friends ^^
#MOD101
Aphrodena wrote:
Hi, from queue, col 1234
The NM diffs seem fine to me~ whoaaa *o*
[HD]
00:37:626 - Add note no
00:37:726 - ^ no
00:44:126 - ^ no
[MX]
How come there's no video for this diff? D: eh....... added the video, hope its already has the video :3
00:14:426 - Add note, same sound as 00:14:026 (14026|1) okay
00:16:126 - Add note, I think that it's fine to have a 1/4 pattern in the hardest diff ....
00:37:626 - Add note for snare i dont hear any snare sound there..
00:37:726 - ^ ^
00:51:826 (51826|2,52026|1,52426|3,52626|2,52826|0) - Just a mild nitpick that these should staircase to the left for pitch relevancy ...
Good luck with ranked! thank you!
makasih kak sep~Pharos21 wrote:
Kayy
sesuai Deal nya
aku take NM nya okay~
and here's the MOD
-focus on Consistency and Ghost Scanning-
-NM+-
00:08:626 (8626|0) - idk kau Focus ke instru ato sama Vocal.. but lebih baik ke instru.. jadi ini delete aja tapi ini suara piano...
00:09:826 (9826|0) - next Sound start nya di 00:10:226 - bukan di situ okay
00:14:426 - missing note?? aku denger ada sound di sini um...
00:15:026 - sama white line atasnya juga.. ngga missing note?? hmm... seharusnya cuma ngikut drum, kick, sama piano sih..
noting more
- HD -
00:16:226 (16226|3,16226|0,16426|1,16426|2,16626|3,16626|0,16826|2,16826|1,17026|3,17026|0) - what is this for? itu kick..
00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here.. coba di didenger lagi.. kek nya pake 1/8 okay
- MX -
00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here okay
00:09:626 - missing Vocal note here.. soalnya aku denger yang 3 LN di atasnya ngikut Vocal okay
sorry kalo dikit.... soalnya memang itu yang bisa aku temuin
ada sih yang kedengeran nya ghosting.. but pas aku denger lagi.. ada faint sound.. jadi aku ragu itu ghost ato bukan
wait for my NM oke >,<)/
you're welcome xDRivals_7 wrote:
Thx for the 100th Kudos xD
belum memang =w=-BANGKE- wrote:
kyknya blm nyumbang star :v /
makasih kak leo, eh maksudnya bangjay xD-BANGKE- wrote:
some IRC with cherrysina, eh i mean, sherry c:IRC18:44 sherrysina: BANGJAAAY!!
18:44 -BANGKE-: CHERRRYY!
18:46 sherrysina: mana mod mod di thread??
18:46 sherrysina: sherry bantuin, lagi free banget nih :3
18:47 -BANGKE-: wokay xD
18:47 -BANGKE-: bentar
18:47 *-BANGKE- is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/361052 dj TAKA meets DJ YOSHITAKA - Elemental Creation [4K EXTREME]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:48 sherrysina: hwee oke xD
18:58 -BANGKE-: eh sherry
18:58 -BANGKE-: udah di apply map mu?
18:58 -BANGKE-: mod nya
19:01 sherrysina: udah..
19:01 -BANGKE-: okay
19:01 sherrysina: dan NM nya di replace sama punya pharos
19:01 -BANGKE-: aku cek lagi
19:01 -BANGKE-: without video kok 10 mb =w=
19:02 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716937 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [zancers ft. sherry's MX]]
19:02 -BANGKE-: ready?
19:03 sherrysina: ngga tau =w=
19:03 sherrysina: IRC kah?
19:03 -BANGKE-: iya
19:03 -BANGKE-: nanti aku post
19:03 sherrysina: ready =w=)b
19:03 -BANGKE-: :3
19:03 sherrysina: sama IRC yang kemaren itu owo
19:03 -BANGKE-: just suggestion : 00:01:626 (1626|2) - move col 4, 00:01:426 (1426|3) - col 1
19:03 -BANGKE-: 00:02:426 (2426|3,3226|3) - jadi biar sejajar sama kedua LN ini
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:05:626 (5626|1) - col 1
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - whoops, missing note xD
19:05 sherrysina: ^ added note
19:05 -BANGKE-: 00:25:026 - triplet much better, kiai part
19:05 -BANGKE-: add 1
19:06 sherrysina: 2 untuk konsistensi..
19:07 -BANGKE-: nothing else, nice
19:07 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:07 sherrysina: YEAY
19:08 sherrysina: sudah ke HS yang HD =w=)b
19:08 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:08 -BANGKE-: suggest : 00:16:226 (16226|1) - col 4, 00:16:026 (16026|3) - col 2
19:09 sherrysina: applied
19:09 -BANGKE-: 00:40:726 (40726|0,40826|2) - untuk lebih nyamanya, ctrl + j
19:10 sherrysina: okay
19:10 -BANGKE-: nothing else again, nice =w=)b
19:10 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:10 sherrysina: YEAY
19:10 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:03:826 (3826|1,4026|0) - geser ke kanan
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - mirror dari ini
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:226 (10226|0) - whoops, kelewatan LN nya xD
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - seharusnya di sini akhirnya
19:12 sherrysina: wait
19:12 sherrysina: mirror?
19:12 -BANGKE-: yang tadi itu, yg ku suruh geser
19:12 -BANGKE-: itu mirror dari yg itu
19:12 -BANGKE-: =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: ohh iya iya =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: okay sudah turunin LN sampe garis putih bawahnya
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:32:626 (32626|0) - col 4?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:33:826 (33826|2) - ^ ?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:37:426 (37426|3,37426|0) - menurutku ini, change jadi LN (?)
19:14 -BANGKE-: suggestion ._.
19:14 -BANGKE-: 00:42:626 (42626|1,42626|3) - ngga ke HS nih xD
19:14 sherrysina: applied yang di paling atas
19:15 sherrysina: ohiya ketinggalan...
19:15 -BANGKE-: 00:52:026 (52026|3) - col 3, 00:52:826 (52826|2) - col 2?
19:16 -BANGKE-: nice again =w=)b
19:16 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [Pharos' NM]]
19:16 sherrysina: hmm nope..
19:16 sherrysina: yeahh =w=)b
19:16 -BANGKE-: yg diff ini blm ke HS yah
19:16 -BANGKE-: ?
19:17 sherrysina: ehh belum ya?
19:17 -BANGKE-: belum..
19:17 -BANGKE-: seems no problem in pheros diff eh pharos
19:17 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World]
19:17 sherrysina: yey =w=)b
Thank you Shana! >.<[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready
[Pharos' NM]
00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1
[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474
[HD]
HP 7
turn off widescreen support
00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1
[zancers ft. sherry's MX]
turn off widescreen support
00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3
very good MX
Good luck :3
sherrysina wrote:
Thank you Shana! >.<[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready
[Pharos' NM]
00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1
[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474
[HD]
HP 7
turn off widescreen support
00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1
[zancers ft. sherry's MX]
turn off widescreen support
00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3
very good MX
Good luck :3
i hope you do bub ;w;
-BANGKE- wrote:
shana quit, isnt it?
Update sent[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready
[Pharos' NM]
00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430 // pitch.. no.. sorry
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4 // pitch arn't too high. keep
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3 // pitch are same with 00:14:826 (14826|1) -
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1 // the pitch are not lower than 00:18:426 (18426|0) - so keep
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4 // re- arrange
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1 // re- arrange
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note //Fixed
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1
Good luck :3
nope. if i change it to the clean version, keliatannya jadi agak beda dari videonya...........DE-CADE wrote:
do you have clean version of this song ? because im not really sure with this mp3
applied some, thx!puxtu wrote:
[NM+]
00:11:426 - add, piano + vocal + clap emphasis. It deserves more than 1 note
00:13:826 (13826|2,13826|3) - I don't usually use double chords for soft kick sound esp. in NM+ diff. If I were you, I'll use double chords for sound like this 00:15:226 (15226|2) - or long vocal sound like this 00:21:026 (21026|2) -
00:25:826 (25826|0,25826|2,26026|3,26026|1,26226|0,26226|2) - this is HD's pattern. NM players won't happy to play this
00:33:826 (33826|2,34026|2) - esp. this
[HD]
00:01:026 (1026|0) - why there's only one single note? NM+ has double chords here
00:08:826 (8826|0) - do you mind to explain this? http://puu.sh/k5vRJ/7418e369d1.jpg
00:16:026 (16026|1) - add 1/4 after this note, pretty loud hi-hat
00:22:626 (22626|3) - missing 1/2 notes in this area, NM+ has those 1/2s
00:31:426 (31426|0) - ^
00:34:626 (34626|0) - ^
00:37:426 (37426|0) - ^ and 1/4
...maybe its just me but I think some hitsounds are missing
no reply means okay.Draftnell wrote:
M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/324294
yoo :3 udah lama gak nge mod...so lngsung aja ye :3
[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - better if you move to 1 (for balance)
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + H
00:22:826 (22826|1) - move 1 for balance
00:40:626 (40626|3,40726|1,40826|2) - umm my suggest >> http://puu.sh/kflOt/0f03631713.jpg
bila sherry nge take yg di atas tadi next nya >> 00:41:026 (41026|1) - move ke 3
[HD]
00:27:826 (27826|1) - move 4
00:34:226 (34226|2) - move 1
00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - ngikut vocal ? klo gak...disama in ma pattern yg ini 00:28:226 (28226|3,28226|0) -
00:40:826 (40826|0) - move 3 nope
00:41:026 (41026|3,41026|1) - geser ke kiri 1x nope
MX ma punya pharos...kyk nya udah gak di permasalahin lagi deh (udah pass) makasiiih ><)/
oke good luck map nya sherry ~
no reply meand ok. thanks!!Bruce wrote:
Hello,short check here.
1 2 3 4
[NM] i take over this diff
00:10:026 (10026|3) - This hold seems uncomfortable,i suugest you delete or start at 00:10:226 -
00:15:026 - 00:15:826 - Here suggest you add 1 note.Becuz the piano sound is clearly,the other sound you catched is unfriendly for NM Player hmm...nope
Haven't some big problems but i see you have too many 12 43 patterns in the kiai time so give you some suggestions:
00:35:826 (35826|1,36026|3) - Ctrl+J
00:42:026 (42026|3,42226|2) - Ctrl+J
00:45:826 (45826|3,46026|0,46226|1) - Move to 1 2 3
[NM+]
00:22:626 (22626|3) - Suggest you change this to note and 00:23:426 (23426|0) - to Hold,more suitable imo.
00:55:226 (55226|2) - Feel little strange.Suggest you end at 00:55:826 - or change to note.
[HD]
00:08:626 (8626|2,8826|0) - here hasn't sound what you catched,i recommend you delete
and 00:08:426 (8426|1) - move this to 1 or 3 and change to hold. hmm.. nope
00:16:626 (16626|3,16626|0) - Choose 1 to delete.here only have single sound.
If feel pattern will be crashed i suggest you 00:16:826 (16826|1,17026|3) - Ctrl+J or reverse.
00:20:226 (20226|2) - Since you catch this vocal sound,you need place completely.
00:55:226 (55226|0) - The same likes NM+ Mod.
[MX]
00:23:026 - Suggest you add 1 hold at 1,end at 00:23:426 - .Here seems very empty.
00:41:026 (41026|1) - This vocal sound should be end at 00:43:826 -
00:44:226 (44226|2) - End at 00:45:826 - and make new hold. nope
That's all.Good Luck