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livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [OsuMania]

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Frizu
I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.
Fubukicat
Hi there nyan~ I don't know if it will be a really long mod but i'll try
hope it will help :3
How I do mod
My mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappyness
Desu~
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[zancers ft. sherry]
00:22:426 (22426|1) - I think this LN should start here : 00:22:626 -
00:51:226 (51226|2) - Should be 2 LNs since HD have two LNs for this sounds .
same for all the next LNs
00:52:026 (52026|1) -
00:52:826 (52826|0) -
00:54:426 (54426|3) -
00:55:226 (55226|0) -
[HD]
00:41:026 (41026|1) - add another note according to previous pattern : 00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - < I think it should be two notes
[NM+]
00:30:826 (30826|0) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern 00:35:426 (35426|3,35426|1,35626|0,35626|2,35826|0,35826|1) -
[B_Ex's NM]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern : 00:29:026 (29026|1,29026|3) -

hawa , really super short mod ;w; , I can't really help for pattern , so it's mainly concistency thingys feel free to reject anything~
Good Luck~ Tell your world is sugoi song~~
Adinata28
Hi Sherry :3 /
Mod Requested, sorry for the delay :'
|1|2|3|4|


B_Ex's NM
  1. 00:13:826 - add note ? consistency with 00:10:626 -
  2. 00:17:026 - ^ ?
  3. 00:29:226 - delete 1 note ? since u placed 1 note on 00:30:826 - 00:32:426 - etc
  4. 00:52:426 (52426|1,52826|3) - Ctrl + G, for pitch,

NM+
  1. 00:10:626 - add 1 more note ?
  2. 00:27:226 (27226|2) - move to 1 ?
  3. 00:28:026 (28026|0) - delete, 1 note is enough
  4. 00:30:826 - add note, for clap. like 00:29:226 -
  5. 00:48:626 (48626|1) - move to 1 pls

HD
  1. 00:23:426 (23426|0) - should end at 00:23:826 -

FreeezeForward wrote:

I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~ I don't know if it will be a really long mod but i'll try
hope it will help :3
How I do mod
My mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappyness
Desu~
Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[zancers ft. sherry]
00:22:426 (22426|1) - I think this LN should start here : 00:22:626 -
00:51:226 (51226|2) - Should be 2 LNs since HD have two LNs for this sounds .
same for all the next LNs
00:52:026 (52026|1) -
00:52:826 (52826|0) -
00:54:426 (54426|3) -
00:55:226 (55226|0) - i think, 1 note is okay..
[HD]
00:41:026 (41026|1) - add another note according to previous pattern : 00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - < I think it should be two notes okay
[NM+]
00:30:826 (30826|0) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern 00:35:426 (35426|3,35426|1,35626|0,35626|2,35826|0,35826|1) - but i dont hear any drum sound D:
[B_Ex's NM]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern : 00:29:026 (29026|1,29026|3) - okay~

hawa , really super short mod ;w; , I can't really help for pattern , so it's mainly concistency thingys feel free to reject anything~
Good Luck~ Tell your world is sugoi song~~ thank you Etlie! ><
AlisceaSparku

Hi~!
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!!!
Good song, good map. I have few suggestions though...

Here's my Mod:
|1|2|3|4|
[NM]
00:10:626 (10626|2) - move to 2 to put some notes on column 2. feels unbalanced imo, but it looks better
00:13:426 (13426|1,13626|0) - change columns, fits more
00:12:426 (12426|0,12826|1) - better swap these if you apply ^
00:16:226 - try this rough suggestion http://puu.sh/jW7VT/45a421f75f.jpg
00:19:626 (19626|2) - move to 1, change of sound, better make this far from 00:19:426 (19426|3)
00:24:626 (24626|1) - move to 1, putting a space inbetween emphasizes the sound
00:37:826 - these sliders are hard for a normal difficulty imo, there are even notes. I suggest remove those sliders
[NM+]
00:09:026 (9026|3) - strange slider... shouldn't the slider be at 00:08:826? ( ref. NM diff. )
00:10:626 - add a note, different sound with 00:10:826 ( optional, it also follows a bit of the NM difficulty )
00:17:626 - add a note if you're following the bell sounds ( is that even a bell xD )
00:18:426 - from this part to 00:19:626 column 1 feels empty. put some notes in it
00:19:626 - why 2 notes?
00:50:826 - 00:52:426 - column 1 feels empty...
00:55:826 - add note? same with NM diff
00:56:426 - strong sound, add note.
_

I hope these can help you :D
Good luck with your map! :)
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Adinata28 wrote:

Hi Sherry :3 /
Mod Requested, sorry for the delay :'
|1|2|3|4|


B_Ex's NM
  1. 00:13:826 - add note ? consistency with 00:10:626 - okay, i also re-arranged the reff part
  2. 00:17:026 - ^ ? ^
  3. 00:29:226 - delete 1 note ? since u placed 1 note on 00:30:826 - 00:32:426 - etc okay, re-arranged
  4. 00:52:426 (52426|1,52826|3) - Ctrl + G, for pitch,
okay

NM+
  1. 00:10:626 - add 1 more note ? okay
  2. 00:27:226 (27226|2) - move to 1 ? okay
  3. 00:28:026 (28026|0) - delete, 1 note is enough okay
  4. 00:30:826 - add note, for clap. like 00:29:226 - i dont think its a clap sound..
  5. 00:48:626 (48626|1) - move to 1 pls
okay

HD
  1. 00:23:426 (23426|0) - should end at 00:23:826 -
okay

FreeezeForward wrote:

I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.
thank you mastah sefuh :3
Topic Starter
sherrysina

AlisceaSparku wrote:


Hi~!
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!!!
Good song, good map. I have few suggestions though...

Here's my Mod:
|1|2|3|4|
[NM]
00:10:626 (10626|2) - move to 2 to put some notes on column 2. feels unbalanced imo, but it looks better
00:13:426 (13426|1,13626|0) - change columns, fits more
00:12:426 (12426|0,12826|1) - better swap these if you apply ^
00:16:226 - try this rough suggestion http://puu.sh/jW7VT/45a421f75f.jpg
00:19:626 (19626|2) - move to 1, change of sound, better make this far from 00:19:426 (19426|3)
00:24:626 (24626|1) - move to 1, putting a space inbetween emphasizes the sound
00:37:826 - these sliders are hard for a normal difficulty imo, there are even notes. I suggest remove those sliders
[NM+]
00:09:026 (9026|3) - strange slider... shouldn't the slider be at 00:08:826? ( ref. NM diff. )
00:10:626 - add a note, different sound with 00:10:826 ( optional, it also follows a bit of the NM difficulty )
00:17:626 - add a note if you're following the bell sounds ( is that even a bell xD )
00:18:426 - from this part to 00:19:626 column 1 feels empty. put some notes in it
00:19:626 - why 2 notes?
00:50:826 - 00:52:426 - column 1 feels empty...
00:55:826 - add note? same with NM diff
00:56:426 - strong sound, add note.
_

I hope these can help you :D
Good luck with your map! :)
thank you aliscea! applied some of the mods above. sorry i cant reply one by one :c
Rivals_7

Modding Notice



Hello Sherrysina ^^

You were requested to me via in-game request. I do not point out all thing in this mod so there might be more issues that can be found across the mapset. Make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap.

livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [OsuMania]

1|2|3|4

[General]

I felt HS isn't done yet, even HD still no HS..........
zancers ft. sherry MX :arrow: zancers ft. sherry's MX (grammar pls :v )

[NM+]

00:22:026 (22026|1,22426|0) - col 1 and 2 respectively? seems more symmetrical.
00:47:026 (47026|1,47126|2,47226|3) - geser kiri. seems more comfortable to hit

[HD]
00:08:776 (8776|2) -

left= HD
Right= zancers ft. sherry MX

CMIIW tapi ini bisa jadi kemunkinan Unrankable issues karena note ini unsnapped. note ini juga gak ada di MX.

00:13:826 (13826|3,13826|0,14226|0,14226|3,14626|3,14626|0,15026|0,15426|3,15426|0,15826|0,15826|3,16226|0,16226|3) - imo this pattern can be improved tho, recommend to rearrange this somehow

00:35:826 (35826|0,36226|2) - col 3 and 2 respectively. avoid triple jack pattern.

00:51:226 - till the song end.
Please compare with MX diff

why HD have 2 LN while MX has 1 LN? take note that MX should be harder on any term besides just to increase the Star Rating, but also the pattern, should be harder.

so HD should have 1 LN and MX should have 2 LN.

[zancers ft. sherry MX]

00:09:826 (9826|2,10026|2,10026|3,10226|2,10226|1,10426|3) - eh...... I don't think there's any relevant noise that can be used for 2 note presses (1 SN and 1 LN = 2 note presses) suggest to delete the short notes there.

Side Note
As -BANGKE- has stated in multiplayer game chat before, that the rule of Minimum draining time ( t/352472 ) Could be applied anytime. If you really want this to get ranked, you should be fast now. since the rule can be applied anytime.

If you found that this mod isn't helpful to you, don't give kudosu. If there's any Misunderstanding , You can PM me anytime to clarify the issues that i've been pointed out.
The other modder should handle this mapset from now on.

Good Luck sherrysina and friends ^^

#MOD101
Aphrodena
Hi, from queue, col 1234

The NM diffs seem fine to me~

[HD]
00:37:626 - Add note
00:37:726 - ^
00:44:126 - ^

[MX]
How come there's no video for this diff? D:
00:14:426 - Add note, same sound as 00:14:026 (14026|1)
00:16:126 - Add note, I think that it's fine to have a 1/4 pattern in the hardest diff
00:37:626 - Add note for snare
00:37:726 - ^
00:51:826 (51826|2,52026|1,52426|3,52626|2,52826|0) - Just a mild nitpick that these should staircase to the left for pitch relevancy

Good luck with ranked!
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Rivals_7 wrote:

Modding Notice



Hello Sherrysina ^^

You were requested to me via in-game request. I do not point out all thing in this mod so there might be more issues that can be found across the mapset. Make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap.

livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [OsuMania]

1|2|3|4

[General]

I felt HS isn't done yet, even HD still no HS..........
zancers ft. sherry MX :arrow: zancers ft. sherry's MX (grammar pls :v ) okay xDD

[NM+]

00:22:026 (22026|1,22426|0) - col 1 and 2 respectively? seems more symmetrical. okay
00:47:026 (47026|1,47126|2,47226|3) - geser kiri. seems more comfortable to hit okay

[HD]
00:08:776 (8776|2) -

left= HD
Right= zancers ft. sherry MX

CMIIW tapi ini bisa jadi kemunkinan Unrankable issues karena note ini unsnapped. note ini juga gak ada di MX.

00:13:826 (13826|3,13826|0,14226|0,14226|3,14626|3,14626|0,15026|0,15426|3,15426|0,15826|0,15826|3,16226|0,16226|3) - imo this pattern can be improved tho, recommend to rearrange this somehow done~

00:35:826 (35826|0,36226|2) - col 3 and 2 respectively. avoid triple jack pattern. okay

00:51:226 - till the song end.
Please compare with MX diff

why HD have 2 LN while MX has 1 LN? take note that MX should be harder on any term besides just to increase the Star Rating, but also the pattern, should be harder. done~ but, can i keep MX has 1 LN?

so HD should have 1 LN and MX should have 2 LN.

[zancers ft. sherry MX]

00:09:826 (9826|2,10026|2,10026|3,10226|2,10226|1,10426|3) - eh...... I don't think there's any relevant noise that can be used for 2 note presses (1 SN and 1 LN = 2 note presses) suggest to delete the short notes there.

Side Note
As -BANGKE- has stated in multiplayer game chat before, that the rule of Minimum draining time ( t/352472 ) Could be applied anytime. If you really want this to get ranked, you should be fast now. since the rule can be applied anytime. UHHHH YES YES YES THANK YOU!

If you found that this mod isn't helpful to you, don't give kudosu. If there's any Misunderstanding , You can PM me anytime to clarify the issues that i've been pointed out. this is helpfuull!! kudosu gifted =w=)/
The other modder should handle this mapset from now on.

Good Luck sherrysina and friends ^^

#MOD101
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234

The NM diffs seem fine to me~ whoaaa *o*

[HD]
00:37:626 - Add note no
00:37:726 - ^ no
00:44:126 - ^ no

[MX]
How come there's no video for this diff? D: eh....... added the video, hope its already has the video :3
00:14:426 - Add note, same sound as 00:14:026 (14026|1) okay
00:16:126 - Add note, I think that it's fine to have a 1/4 pattern in the hardest diff ....
00:37:626 - Add note for snare i dont hear any snare sound there..
00:37:726 - ^ ^
00:51:826 (51826|2,52026|1,52426|3,52626|2,52826|0) - Just a mild nitpick that these should staircase to the left for pitch relevancy ...

Good luck with ranked! thank you!
Rivals_7
Thx for the 100th Kudos xD

Aste-
Kayy

sesuai Deal nya

aku take NM nya

and here's the MOD

-focus on Consistency and Ghost Scanning-

-NM+-

00:08:626 (8626|0) - idk kau Focus ke instru ato sama Vocal.. but lebih baik ke instru.. jadi ini delete aja

00:09:826 (9826|0) - next Sound start nya di 00:10:226 - bukan di situ

00:14:426 - missing note?? aku denger ada sound di sini

00:15:026 - sama white line atasnya juga.. ngga missing note??

noting more

- HD -

00:16:226 (16226|3,16226|0,16426|1,16426|2,16626|3,16626|0,16826|2,16826|1,17026|3,17026|0) - what is this for?

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here.. coba di didenger lagi.. kek nya pake 1/8

- MX -

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here
00:09:626 - missing Vocal note here.. soalnya aku denger yang 3 LN di atasnya ngikut Vocal

sorry kalo dikit.... soalnya memang itu yang bisa aku temuin

ada sih yang kedengeran nya ghosting.. but pas aku denger lagi.. ada faint sound.. jadi aku ragu itu ghost ato bukan

wait for my NM
-BANGKE-
kyknya blm nyumbang star :v /
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Pharos21 wrote:

Kayy

sesuai Deal nya

aku take NM nya okay~

and here's the MOD

-focus on Consistency and Ghost Scanning-

-NM+-

00:08:626 (8626|0) - idk kau Focus ke instru ato sama Vocal.. but lebih baik ke instru.. jadi ini delete aja tapi ini suara piano...

00:09:826 (9826|0) - next Sound start nya di 00:10:226 - bukan di situ okay

00:14:426 - missing note?? aku denger ada sound di sini um...

00:15:026 - sama white line atasnya juga.. ngga missing note?? hmm... seharusnya cuma ngikut drum, kick, sama piano sih..

noting more

- HD -

00:16:226 (16226|3,16226|0,16426|1,16426|2,16626|3,16626|0,16826|2,16826|1,17026|3,17026|0) - what is this for? itu kick..

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here.. coba di didenger lagi.. kek nya pake 1/8 okay

- MX -

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here okay
00:09:626 - missing Vocal note here.. soalnya aku denger yang 3 LN di atasnya ngikut Vocal okay

sorry kalo dikit.... soalnya memang itu yang bisa aku temuin

ada sih yang kedengeran nya ghosting.. but pas aku denger lagi.. ada faint sound.. jadi aku ragu itu ghost ato bukan

wait for my NM oke >,<)/
makasih kak sep~
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Rivals_7 wrote:

Thx for the 100th Kudos xD

you're welcome xD
Topic Starter
sherrysina

-BANGKE- wrote:

kyknya blm nyumbang star :v /
belum memang =w=
-BANGKE-
some IRC with cherrysina, eh i mean, sherry c:
IRC
18:44 sherrysina: BANGJAAAY!!
18:44 -BANGKE-: CHERRRYY!
18:46 sherrysina: mana mod mod di thread??
18:46 sherrysina: sherry bantuin, lagi free banget nih :3
18:47 -BANGKE-: wokay xD
18:47 -BANGKE-: bentar
18:47 *-BANGKE- is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/361052 dj TAKA meets DJ YOSHITAKA - Elemental Creation [4K EXTREME]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:48 sherrysina: hwee oke xD
18:58 -BANGKE-: eh sherry
18:58 -BANGKE-: udah di apply map mu?
18:58 -BANGKE-: mod nya
19:01 sherrysina: udah..
19:01 -BANGKE-: okay
19:01 sherrysina: dan NM nya di replace sama punya pharos
19:01 -BANGKE-: aku cek lagi
19:01 -BANGKE-: without video kok 10 mb =w=
19:02 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716937 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [zancers ft. sherry's MX]]
19:02 -BANGKE-: ready?
19:03 sherrysina: ngga tau =w=
19:03 sherrysina: IRC kah?
19:03 -BANGKE-: iya
19:03 -BANGKE-: nanti aku post
19:03 sherrysina: ready =w=)b
19:03 -BANGKE-: :3
19:03 sherrysina: sama IRC yang kemaren itu owo
19:03 -BANGKE-: just suggestion : 00:01:626 (1626|2) - move col 4, 00:01:426 (1426|3) - col 1
19:03 -BANGKE-: 00:02:426 (2426|3,3226|3) - jadi biar sejajar sama kedua LN ini
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:05:626 (5626|1) - col 1
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - whoops, missing note xD
19:05 sherrysina: ^ added note
19:05 -BANGKE-: 00:25:026 - triplet much better, kiai part
19:05 -BANGKE-: add 1
19:06 sherrysina: 2 untuk konsistensi..
19:07 -BANGKE-: nothing else, nice
19:07 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:07 sherrysina: YEAY
19:08 sherrysina: sudah ke HS yang HD =w=)b
19:08 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:08 -BANGKE-: suggest : 00:16:226 (16226|1) - col 4, 00:16:026 (16026|3) - col 2
19:09 sherrysina: applied
19:09 -BANGKE-: 00:40:726 (40726|0,40826|2) - untuk lebih nyamanya, ctrl + j
19:10 sherrysina: okay
19:10 -BANGKE-: nothing else again, nice =w=)b
19:10 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:10 sherrysina: YEAY
19:10 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:03:826 (3826|1,4026|0) - geser ke kanan
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - mirror dari ini
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:226 (10226|0) - whoops, kelewatan LN nya xD
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - seharusnya di sini akhirnya
19:12 sherrysina: wait
19:12 sherrysina: mirror?
19:12 -BANGKE-: yang tadi itu, yg ku suruh geser
19:12 -BANGKE-: itu mirror dari yg itu
19:12 -BANGKE-: =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: ohh iya iya =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: okay sudah turunin LN sampe garis putih bawahnya
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:32:626 (32626|0) - col 4?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:33:826 (33826|2) - ^ ?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:37:426 (37426|3,37426|0) - menurutku ini, change jadi LN (?)
19:14 -BANGKE-: suggestion ._.
19:14 -BANGKE-: 00:42:626 (42626|1,42626|3) - ngga ke HS nih xD
19:14 sherrysina: applied yang di paling atas
19:15 sherrysina: ohiya ketinggalan...
19:15 -BANGKE-: 00:52:026 (52026|3) - col 3, 00:52:826 (52826|2) - col 2?
19:16 -BANGKE-: nice again =w=)b
19:16 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [Pharos' NM]]
19:16 sherrysina: hmm nope..
19:16 sherrysina: yeahh =w=)b
19:16 -BANGKE-: yg diff ini blm ke HS yah
19:16 -BANGKE-: ?
19:17 sherrysina: ehh belum ya?
19:17 -BANGKE-: belum..
19:17 -BANGKE-: seems no problem in pheros diff eh pharos
19:17 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World]
19:17 sherrysina: yey =w=)b
Topic Starter
sherrysina

-BANGKE- wrote:

some IRC with cherrysina, eh i mean, sherry c:
IRC
18:44 sherrysina: BANGJAAAY!!
18:44 -BANGKE-: CHERRRYY!
18:46 sherrysina: mana mod mod di thread??
18:46 sherrysina: sherry bantuin, lagi free banget nih :3
18:47 -BANGKE-: wokay xD
18:47 -BANGKE-: bentar
18:47 *-BANGKE- is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/361052 dj TAKA meets DJ YOSHITAKA - Elemental Creation [4K EXTREME]] <osu!mania> |4K|
18:48 sherrysina: hwee oke xD
18:58 -BANGKE-: eh sherry
18:58 -BANGKE-: udah di apply map mu?
18:58 -BANGKE-: mod nya
19:01 sherrysina: udah..
19:01 -BANGKE-: okay
19:01 sherrysina: dan NM nya di replace sama punya pharos
19:01 -BANGKE-: aku cek lagi
19:01 -BANGKE-: without video kok 10 mb =w=
19:02 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716937 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [zancers ft. sherry's MX]]
19:02 -BANGKE-: ready?
19:03 sherrysina: ngga tau =w=
19:03 sherrysina: IRC kah?
19:03 -BANGKE-: iya
19:03 -BANGKE-: nanti aku post
19:03 sherrysina: ready =w=)b
19:03 -BANGKE-: :3
19:03 sherrysina: sama IRC yang kemaren itu owo
19:03 -BANGKE-: just suggestion : 00:01:626 (1626|2) - move col 4, 00:01:426 (1426|3) - col 1
19:03 -BANGKE-: 00:02:426 (2426|3,3226|3) - jadi biar sejajar sama kedua LN ini
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:05:626 (5626|1) - col 1
19:04 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - whoops, missing note xD
19:05 sherrysina: ^ added note
19:05 -BANGKE-: 00:25:026 - triplet much better, kiai part
19:05 -BANGKE-: add 1
19:06 sherrysina: 2 untuk konsistensi..
19:07 -BANGKE-: nothing else, nice
19:07 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:07 sherrysina: YEAY
19:08 sherrysina: sudah ke HS yang HD =w=)b
19:08 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
19:08 -BANGKE-: suggest : 00:16:226 (16226|1) - col 4, 00:16:026 (16026|3) - col 2
19:09 sherrysina: applied
19:09 -BANGKE-: 00:40:726 (40726|0,40826|2) - untuk lebih nyamanya, ctrl + j
19:10 sherrysina: okay
19:10 -BANGKE-: nothing else again, nice =w=)b
19:10 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:10 sherrysina: YEAY
19:10 *sherrysina is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:03:826 (3826|1,4026|0) - geser ke kanan
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - mirror dari ini
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:226 (10226|0) - whoops, kelewatan LN nya xD
19:11 -BANGKE-: 00:10:626 - seharusnya di sini akhirnya
19:12 sherrysina: wait
19:12 sherrysina: mirror?
19:12 -BANGKE-: yang tadi itu, yg ku suruh geser
19:12 -BANGKE-: itu mirror dari yg itu
19:12 -BANGKE-: =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: ohh iya iya =w=)b
19:13 sherrysina: okay sudah turunin LN sampe garis putih bawahnya
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:32:626 (32626|0) - col 4?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:33:826 (33826|2) - ^ ?
19:13 -BANGKE-: 00:37:426 (37426|3,37426|0) - menurutku ini, change jadi LN (?)
19:14 -BANGKE-: suggestion ._.
19:14 -BANGKE-: 00:42:626 (42626|1,42626|3) - ngga ke HS nih xD
19:14 sherrysina: applied yang di paling atas
19:15 sherrysina: ohiya ketinggalan...
19:15 -BANGKE-: 00:52:026 (52026|3) - col 3, 00:52:826 (52826|2) - col 2?
19:16 -BANGKE-: nice again =w=)b
19:16 *-BANGKE- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [Pharos' NM]]
19:16 sherrysina: hmm nope..
19:16 sherrysina: yeahh =w=)b
19:16 -BANGKE-: yg diff ini blm ke HS yah
19:16 -BANGKE-: ?
19:17 sherrysina: ehh belum ya?
19:17 -BANGKE-: belum..
19:17 -BANGKE-: seems no problem in pheros diff eh pharos
19:17 *-BANGKE- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/715419 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World]
19:17 sherrysina: yey =w=)b
makasih kak leo, eh maksudnya bangjay xD
Deep Sea
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
sherrysina

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3
Thank you Shana! >.<

i hope you do bub ;w;
-BANGKE-

sherrysina wrote:

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3
Thank you Shana! >.<

i hope you do bub ;w;

-BANGKE- wrote:

shana quit, isnt it?
Aste-

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready


[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430 // pitch.. no.. sorry
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4 // pitch arn't too high. keep
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3 // pitch are same with 00:14:826 (14826|1) -
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1 // the pitch are not lower than 00:18:426 (18426|0) - so keep
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4 // re- arrange
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1 // re- arrange
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note //Fixed
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1



Good luck :3
Update sent

Ps: kyaaaaa mikuuuuu
Lirai
do you have clean version of this song ? because im not really sure with this mp3
Topic Starter
sherrysina

DE-CADE wrote:

do you have clean version of this song ? because im not really sure with this mp3
nope. if i change it to the clean version, keliatannya jadi agak beda dari videonya...........
puxtu
[NM+]
00:11:426 - add, piano + vocal + clap emphasis. It deserves more than 1 note
00:13:826 (13826|2,13826|3) - I don't usually use double chords for soft kick sound esp. in NM+ diff. If I were you, I'll use double chords for sound like this 00:15:226 (15226|2) - or long vocal sound like this 00:21:026 (21026|2) -
00:25:826 (25826|0,25826|2,26026|3,26026|1,26226|0,26226|2) - this is HD's pattern. NM players won't happy to play this
00:33:826 (33826|2,34026|2) - esp. this
[HD]
00:01:026 (1026|0) - why there's only one single note? NM+ has double chords here
00:08:826 (8826|0) - do you mind to explain this? http://puu.sh/k5vRJ/7418e369d1.jpg
00:16:026 (16026|1) - add 1/4 after this note, pretty loud hi-hat
00:22:626 (22626|3) - missing 1/2 notes in this area, NM+ has those 1/2s
00:31:426 (31426|0) - ^
00:34:626 (34626|0) - ^
00:37:426 (37426|0) - ^ and 1/4
...maybe its just me but I think some hitsounds are missing
Topic Starter
sherrysina

puxtu wrote:

[NM+]
00:11:426 - add, piano + vocal + clap emphasis. It deserves more than 1 note
00:13:826 (13826|2,13826|3) - I don't usually use double chords for soft kick sound esp. in NM+ diff. If I were you, I'll use double chords for sound like this 00:15:226 (15226|2) - or long vocal sound like this 00:21:026 (21026|2) -
00:25:826 (25826|0,25826|2,26026|3,26026|1,26226|0,26226|2) - this is HD's pattern. NM players won't happy to play this
00:33:826 (33826|2,34026|2) - esp. this
[HD]
00:01:026 (1026|0) - why there's only one single note? NM+ has double chords here
00:08:826 (8826|0) - do you mind to explain this? http://puu.sh/k5vRJ/7418e369d1.jpg
00:16:026 (16026|1) - add 1/4 after this note, pretty loud hi-hat
00:22:626 (22626|3) - missing 1/2 notes in this area, NM+ has those 1/2s
00:31:426 (31426|0) - ^
00:34:626 (34626|0) - ^
00:37:426 (37426|0) - ^ and 1/4
...maybe its just me but I think some hitsounds are missing
applied some, thx!
Draftnell
M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/324294

yoo :3 udah lama gak nge mod...so lngsung aja ye :3

[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - better if you move to 1 (for balance)
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + H
00:22:826 (22826|1) - move 1 for balance
00:40:626 (40626|3,40726|1,40826|2) - umm my suggest >> http://puu.sh/kflOt/0f03631713.jpg
bila sherry nge take yg di atas tadi next nya >> 00:41:026 (41026|1) - move ke 3

[HD]
00:27:826 (27826|1) - move 4
00:34:226 (34226|2) - move 1
00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - ngikut vocal ? klo gak...disama in ma pattern yg ini 00:28:226 (28226|3,28226|0) -
00:40:826 (40826|0) - move 3
00:41:026 (41026|3,41026|1) - geser ke kiri 1x

MX ma punya pharos...kyk nya udah gak di permasalahin lagi deh (udah pass)

oke good luck map nya sherry ~
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Draftnell wrote:

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/324294

yoo :3 udah lama gak nge mod...so lngsung aja ye :3

[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - better if you move to 1 (for balance)
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + H
00:22:826 (22826|1) - move 1 for balance
00:40:626 (40626|3,40726|1,40826|2) - umm my suggest >> http://puu.sh/kflOt/0f03631713.jpg
bila sherry nge take yg di atas tadi next nya >> 00:41:026 (41026|1) - move ke 3

[HD]
00:27:826 (27826|1) - move 4
00:34:226 (34226|2) - move 1
00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - ngikut vocal ? klo gak...disama in ma pattern yg ini 00:28:226 (28226|3,28226|0) -
00:40:826 (40826|0) - move 3 nope
00:41:026 (41026|3,41026|1) - geser ke kiri 1x nope

MX ma punya pharos...kyk nya udah gak di permasalahin lagi deh (udah pass) makasiiih ><)/

oke good luck map nya sherry ~
no reply means okay. ;)
thanks draft-nii!
Bruce
Hello,short check here.
1 2 3 4
[NM]
00:10:026 (10026|3) - This hold seems uncomfortable,i suugest you delete or start at 00:10:226 -

00:15:026 - 00:15:826 - Here suggest you add 1 note.Becuz the piano sound is clearly,the other sound you catched is unfriendly for NM Player

Haven't some big problems but i see you have too many 12 43 patterns in the kiai time so give you some suggestions:
00:35:826 (35826|1,36026|3) - Ctrl+J

00:42:026 (42026|3,42226|2) - Ctrl+J

00:45:826 (45826|3,46026|0,46226|1) - Move to 1 2 3

[NM+]
00:22:626 (22626|3) - Suggest you change this to note and 00:23:426 (23426|0) - to Hold,more suitable imo.

00:55:226 (55226|2) - Feel little strange.Suggest you end at 00:55:826 - or change to note.

[HD]
00:08:626 (8626|2,8826|0) - here hasn't sound what you catched,i recommend you delete
and 00:08:426 (8426|1) - move this to 1 or 3 and change to hold.

00:16:626 (16626|3,16626|0) - Choose 1 to delete.here only have single sound.
If feel pattern will be crashed i suggest you 00:16:826 (16826|1,17026|3) - Ctrl+J or reverse.

00:20:226 (20226|2) - Since you catch this vocal sound,you need place completely.

00:55:226 (55226|0) - The same likes NM+ Mod.

[MX]
00:23:026 - Suggest you add 1 hold at 1,end at 00:23:426 - .Here seems very empty.

00:41:026 (41026|1) - This vocal sound should be end at 00:43:826 -

00:44:226 (44226|2) - End at 00:45:826 - and make new hold.

That's all.Good Luck
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Bruce wrote:

Hello,short check here.
1 2 3 4
[NM] i take over this diff
00:10:026 (10026|3) - This hold seems uncomfortable,i suugest you delete or start at 00:10:226 -

00:15:026 - 00:15:826 - Here suggest you add 1 note.Becuz the piano sound is clearly,the other sound you catched is unfriendly for NM Player hmm...nope

Haven't some big problems but i see you have too many 12 43 patterns in the kiai time so give you some suggestions:
00:35:826 (35826|1,36026|3) - Ctrl+J

00:42:026 (42026|3,42226|2) - Ctrl+J

00:45:826 (45826|3,46026|0,46226|1) - Move to 1 2 3

[NM+]
00:22:626 (22626|3) - Suggest you change this to note and 00:23:426 (23426|0) - to Hold,more suitable imo.

00:55:226 (55226|2) - Feel little strange.Suggest you end at 00:55:826 - or change to note.

[HD]
00:08:626 (8626|2,8826|0) - here hasn't sound what you catched,i recommend you delete
and 00:08:426 (8426|1) - move this to 1 or 3 and change to hold. hmm.. nope

00:16:626 (16626|3,16626|0) - Choose 1 to delete.here only have single sound.
If feel pattern will be crashed i suggest you 00:16:826 (16826|1,17026|3) - Ctrl+J or reverse.

00:20:226 (20226|2) - Since you catch this vocal sound,you need place completely.

00:55:226 (55226|0) - The same likes NM+ Mod.

[MX]
00:23:026 - Suggest you add 1 hold at 1,end at 00:23:426 - .Here seems very empty.

00:41:026 (41026|1) - This vocal sound should be end at 00:43:826 -

00:44:226 (44226|2) - End at 00:45:826 - and make new hold. nope

That's all.Good Luck
no reply meand ok. thanks!!
Bruce
Bubbled.Congrats
-BANGKE-
WOHOO GRATZ
[ A v a l o n ]
tell your world
Raediaufar
Finally bubbled owo
Draftnell
Hell your world xD
-[ AmiShici ]-
Wogh 7K's diff lost :o

Gudlack on qualifing >w<)b
Aste-
after re-check my diff again.. no problem Found.

Go for Qualify!!
Deep Sea
Hi sherrysina
BN Check

[Pharos' NM]
turn off N+1 style

00:08:426 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3756654
00:12:826 (12826|2) - move to 2

other diff checked with sherrysina
2015-10-02 15:57 [Shana Lesus]: you want irc check?
2015-10-02 15:58 sherrysina: sure~
2015-10-02 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716937 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [zancers ft. sherry's MX]]
2015-10-02 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: turn off N+1 style
2015-10-02 15:59 sherrysina: ehh where to turn it off?
2015-10-02 15:59 [Shana Lesus]: song setup
2015-10-02 15:59 [Shana Lesus]: advanced
2015-10-02 16:00 sherrysina: done~
2015-10-02 16:00 [Shana Lesus]: 00:08:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3756769
2015-10-02 16:01 [Shana Lesus]: 00:09:626 (9626|2,10026|3,10226|2,10426|1) - vocal ?
2015-10-02 16:02 sherrysina: yup
2015-10-02 16:02 sherrysina: 00:09:626 (9626|2) - this following the pitch
2015-10-02 16:03 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-10-02 16:03 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 - add note to 1
2015-10-02 16:04 sherrysina: okay
2015-10-02 16:04 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 (22426|0) - add hs drum 1 20 %
2015-10-02 16:05 sherrysina: okay~
2015-10-02 16:06 [Shana Lesus]: ok, fine
2015-10-02 16:06 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
2015-10-02 16:06 sherrysina: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
2015-10-02 16:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:23:026 (23026|1) - change on LN, end here 00:23:426 -
2015-10-02 16:08 sherrysina: okay
2015-10-02 16:09 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 (22426|2) - add drum1 20 %
2015-10-02 16:11 [Shana Lesus]: again turn off N+1 style
2015-10-02 16:12 sherrysina: okay~
2015-10-02 16:12 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
2015-10-02 16:12 [Shana Lesus]: same
2015-10-02 16:12 [Shana Lesus]: N+1
2015-10-02 16:13 sherrysina: okay~
2015-10-02 16:16 sherrysina: anything else? :3
2015-10-02 16:16 [Shana Lesus]: wait i check
2015-10-02 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:026 (22026|0) - here kick1 20 %
2015-10-02 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 (22426|1) - delete kick and add drum1
2015-10-02 16:20 sherrysina: should i add one more note?
2015-10-02 16:20 [Shana Lesus]: no owo
2015-10-02 16:21 sherrysina: done x)
2015-10-02 16:25 [Shana Lesus]: oki

call me after update
bilqiscutee
Gratz your map has been checked!

*pake gaya alek
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