livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [OsuMania] · forum

Deep Sea

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2015-09-08T19:06:27+00:00

Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready

[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3

sherrysina

540 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-09-08T23:33:05+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready

[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3

Thank you Shana! >.<

i hope you do bub ;w;

-BANGKE-

958 posts

Joined July 2015

-BANGKE- 2015-09-09T00:24:00+00:00

sherrysina wrote:
[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready

[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

[NM+]

00:04:226 (4226|2) - move to 1
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + g
00:05:226 (5226|1) - move to 4
00:34:026 (34026|2) - move to 4
00:34:226 (34226|3) - delete
00:34:626 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650470
00:49:226 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650474

[HD]
HP 7

turn off widescreen support

00:08:876 (8876|2,8926|3) - delete and add note to 4 here 00:08:826 -
00:13:826 (13826|2) - move to 4
00:20:226 (20226|2,20226|1) - vocal? end here 00:20:826 - , delete 00:20:226 (20226|1) - and add note to 2 here 00:20:826 -
00:21:226 (21226|1) - delete
00:25:826 (25826|2) - move to 1
00:29:826 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650496
00:31:426 (31426|1) - delete
00:31:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650502
00:35:826 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650512
00:38:226 (38226|1) - move to 3
00:38:826 (38826|2) - move to 1
00:39:026 (39026|0) - move to 2
00:39:426 (39426|3) - move to 1
00:39:626 (39626|0) - move to 4
00:41:426 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650535
00:46:826 (46826|3) - move to 2
00:49:026 (49026|0) - move to 4
00:49:426 (49426|1) - move to 1

[zancers ft. sherry's MX]

turn off widescreen support

00:21:626 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650544
00:43:826 (43826|2) - move to 1
00:44:026 (44026|0) - move to 3

very good MX

Good luck :3
Thank you Shana! >.<

i hope you do bub ;w;

-BANGKE- wrote:
shana quit, isnt it?

Aste-

2,387 posts

Joined September 2014

Aste- 2015-09-09T02:53:43+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hello sherrysina
mod for you ready

[Pharos' NM]

00:10:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3650430 // pitch.. no.. sorry
00:15:226 (15226|2) - move to 4 // pitch arn't too high. keep
00:15:626 (15626|1) - move to 3 // pitch are same with 00:14:826 (14826|1) -
00:17:626 (17626|1) - move to 1 // the pitch are not lower than 00:18:426 (18426|0) - so keep
00:18:426 (18426|0) - move to 4 // re- arrange
00:18:826 (18826|2) - move to 1 // re- arrange
00:26:824 (26824|1) - unsnapped note //Fixed
00:37:426 (37426|2) - move to 1

Good luck :3

Update sent

Ps: kyaaaaa mikuuuuu

Last edited by Aste- 2015-09-09T14:14:23+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Lirai

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Joined December 2013

Lirai 2015-09-09T12:46:47+00:00

do you have clean version of this song ? because im not really sure with this mp3

sherrysina

540 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-09-09T12:48:58+00:00

DE-CADE wrote:
do you have clean version of this song ? because im not really sure with this mp3

nope. if i change it to the clean version, keliatannya jadi agak beda dari videonya...........

puxtu

2,926 posts

Joined August 2013

puxtu 2015-09-09T17:41:11+00:00

[NM+]
00:11:426 - add, piano + vocal + clap emphasis. It deserves more than 1 note
00:13:826 (13826|2,13826|3) - I don't usually use double chords for soft kick sound esp. in NM+ diff. If I were you, I'll use double chords for sound like this 00:15:226 (15226|2) - or long vocal sound like this 00:21:026 (21026|2) -
00:25:826 (25826|0,25826|2,26026|3,26026|1,26226|0,26226|2) - this is HD's pattern. NM players won't happy to play this
00:33:826 (33826|2,34026|2) - esp. this
[HD]
00:01:026 (1026|0) - why there's only one single note? NM+ has double chords here
00:08:826 (8826|0) - do you mind to explain this? http://puu.sh/k5vRJ/7418e369d1.jpg
00:16:026 (16026|1) - add 1/4 after this note, pretty loud hi-hat
00:22:626 (22626|3) - missing 1/2 notes in this area, NM+ has those 1/2s
00:31:426 (31426|0) - ^
00:34:626 (34626|0) - ^
00:37:426 (37426|0) - ^ and 1/4
...maybe its just me but I think some hitsounds are missing

sherrysina

540 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-09-11T13:38:41+00:00

puxtu wrote:
[NM+]
00:11:426 - add, piano + vocal + clap emphasis. It deserves more than 1 note
00:13:826 (13826|2,13826|3) - I don't usually use double chords for soft kick sound esp. in NM+ diff. If I were you, I'll use double chords for sound like this 00:15:226 (15226|2) - or long vocal sound like this 00:21:026 (21026|2) -
00:25:826 (25826|0,25826|2,26026|3,26026|1,26226|0,26226|2) - this is HD's pattern. NM players won't happy to play this
00:33:826 (33826|2,34026|2) - esp. this
[HD]
00:01:026 (1026|0) - why there's only one single note? NM+ has double chords here
00:08:826 (8826|0) - do you mind to explain this? http://puu.sh/k5vRJ/7418e369d1.jpg
00:16:026 (16026|1) - add 1/4 after this note, pretty loud hi-hat
00:22:626 (22626|3) - missing 1/2 notes in this area, NM+ has those 1/2s
00:31:426 (31426|0) - ^
00:34:626 (34626|0) - ^
00:37:426 (37426|0) - ^ and 1/4
...maybe its just me but I think some hitsounds are missing

applied some, thx!

Draftnell

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Joined October 2013

Draftnell 2015-09-18T08:27:23+00:00

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/324294

yoo :3 udah lama gak nge mod...so lngsung aja ye :3

[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - better if you move to 1 (for balance)
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + H
00:22:826 (22826|1) - move 1 for balance
00:40:626 (40626|3,40726|1,40826|2) - umm my suggest >> http://puu.sh/kflOt/0f03631713.jpg
bila sherry nge take yg di atas tadi next nya >> 00:41:026 (41026|1) - move ke 3

[HD]
00:27:826 (27826|1) - move 4
00:34:226 (34226|2) - move 1
00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - ngikut vocal ? klo gak...disama in ma pattern yg ini 00:28:226 (28226|3,28226|0) -
00:40:826 (40826|0) - move 3
00:41:026 (41026|3,41026|1) - geser ke kiri 1x

MX ma punya pharos...kyk nya udah gak di permasalahin lagi deh (udah pass)

oke good luck map nya sherry ~

sherrysina

540 posts

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Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-09-18T10:21:16+00:00

Draftnell wrote:
M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/324294

yoo :3 udah lama gak nge mod...so lngsung aja ye :3

[NM+]
00:04:226 (4226|2) - better if you move to 1 (for balance)
00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|2) - ctrl + H
00:22:826 (22826|1) - move 1 for balance
00:40:626 (40626|3,40726|1,40826|2) - umm my suggest >> http://puu.sh/kflOt/0f03631713.jpg
bila sherry nge take yg di atas tadi next nya >> 00:41:026 (41026|1) - move ke 3

[HD]
00:27:826 (27826|1) - move 4
00:34:226 (34226|2) - move 1
00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - ngikut vocal ? klo gak...disama in ma pattern yg ini 00:28:226 (28226|3,28226|0) -
00:40:826 (40826|0) - move 3 nope
00:41:026 (41026|3,41026|1) - geser ke kiri 1x nope

MX ma punya pharos...kyk nya udah gak di permasalahin lagi deh (udah pass) makasiiih ><)/

oke good luck map nya sherry ~

no reply means okay.

thanks draft-nii!

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2015-09-24T09:08:44+00:00

Hello,short check here.
1 2 3 4
[NM]
00:10:026 (10026|3) - This hold seems uncomfortable,i suugest you delete or start at 00:10:226 -

00:15:026 - 00:15:826 - Here suggest you add 1 note.Becuz the piano sound is clearly,the other sound you catched is unfriendly for NM Player

Haven't some big problems but i see you have too many 12 43 patterns in the kiai time so give you some suggestions:
00:35:826 (35826|1,36026|3) - Ctrl+J

00:42:026 (42026|3,42226|2) - Ctrl+J

00:45:826 (45826|3,46026|0,46226|1) - Move to 1 2 3

[NM+]
00:22:626 (22626|3) - Suggest you change this to note and 00:23:426 (23426|0) - to Hold,more suitable imo.

00:55:226 (55226|2) - Feel little strange.Suggest you end at 00:55:826 - or change to note.

[HD]
00:08:626 (8626|2,8826|0) - here hasn't sound what you catched,i recommend you delete
and 00:08:426 (8426|1) - move this to 1 or 3 and change to hold.

00:16:626 (16626|3,16626|0) - Choose 1 to delete.here only have single sound.
If feel pattern will be crashed i suggest you 00:16:826 (16826|1,17026|3) - Ctrl+J or reverse.

00:20:226 (20226|2) - Since you catch this vocal sound,you need place completely.

00:55:226 (55226|0) - The same likes NM+ Mod.

[MX]
00:23:026 - Suggest you add 1 hold at 1,end at 00:23:426 - .Here seems very empty.

00:41:026 (41026|1) - This vocal sound should be end at 00:43:826 -

00:44:226 (44226|2) - End at 00:45:826 - and make new hold.

That's all.Good Luck

sherrysina

540 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-09-24T09:21:05+00:00

Bruce wrote:
Hello,short check here.
1 2 3 4
[NM] i take over this diff
00:10:026 (10026|3) - This hold seems uncomfortable,i suugest you delete or start at 00:10:226 -

00:15:026 - 00:15:826 - Here suggest you add 1 note.Becuz the piano sound is clearly,the other sound you catched is unfriendly for NM Player hmm...nope

Haven't some big problems but i see you have too many 12 43 patterns in the kiai time so give you some suggestions:
00:35:826 (35826|1,36026|3) - Ctrl+J

00:42:026 (42026|3,42226|2) - Ctrl+J

00:45:826 (45826|3,46026|0,46226|1) - Move to 1 2 3

[NM+]
00:22:626 (22626|3) - Suggest you change this to note and 00:23:426 (23426|0) - to Hold,more suitable imo.

00:55:226 (55226|2) - Feel little strange.Suggest you end at 00:55:826 - or change to note.

[HD]
00:08:626 (8626|2,8826|0) - here hasn't sound what you catched,i recommend you delete
and 00:08:426 (8426|1) - move this to 1 or 3 and change to hold. hmm.. nope

00:16:626 (16626|3,16626|0) - Choose 1 to delete.here only have single sound.
If feel pattern will be crashed i suggest you 00:16:826 (16826|1,17026|3) - Ctrl+J or reverse.

00:20:226 (20226|2) - Since you catch this vocal sound,you need place completely.

00:55:226 (55226|0) - The same likes NM+ Mod.

[MX]
00:23:026 - Suggest you add 1 hold at 1,end at 00:23:426 - .Here seems very empty.

00:41:026 (41026|1) - This vocal sound should be end at 00:43:826 -

00:44:226 (44226|2) - End at 00:45:826 - and make new hold. nope

That's all.Good Luck

no reply meand ok. thanks!!

Bruce

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Joined January 2013

Bruce 2015-09-24T09:23:46+00:00

Bubbled.Congrats

-BANGKE-

958 posts

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-BANGKE- 2015-09-24T09:24:46+00:00

WOHOO GRATZ

[ A v a l o n ]

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Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2015-09-24T09:25:04+00:00

tell your world

Raediaufar

879 posts

Joined November 2014

Raediaufar 2015-09-24T11:18:51+00:00

Finally bubbled owo

Draftnell

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Joined October 2013

Draftnell 2015-09-25T12:05:34+00:00

Hell your world xD

-[ AmiShici ]-

-[ AmiShici ]- 2015-09-28T16:50:33+00:00

Wogh 7K's diff lost

Gudlack on qualifing >w<)b

Aste-

2,387 posts

Joined September 2014

Aste- 2015-09-29T12:46:29+00:00

after re-check my diff again.. no problem Found.

Go for Qualify!!

Deep Sea

1,947 posts

Joined June 2013

Deep Sea 2015-10-02T13:28:08+00:00

Hi sherrysina
BN Check

[Pharos' NM]
turn off N+1 style

00:08:426 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3756654
00:12:826 (12826|2) - move to 2

other diff checked with sherrysina

2015-10-02 15:57 [Shana Lesus]: you want irc check?
2015-10-02 15:58 sherrysina: sure~
2015-10-02 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716937 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [zancers ft. sherry's MX]]
2015-10-02 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: turn off N+1 style
2015-10-02 15:59 sherrysina: ehh where to turn it off?
2015-10-02 15:59 [Shana Lesus]: song setup
2015-10-02 15:59 [Shana Lesus]: advanced
2015-10-02 16:00 sherrysina: done~
2015-10-02 16:00 [Shana Lesus]: 00:08:026 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3756769
2015-10-02 16:01 [Shana Lesus]: 00:09:626 (9626|2,10026|3,10226|2,10426|1) - vocal ?
2015-10-02 16:02 sherrysina: yup
2015-10-02 16:02 sherrysina: 00:09:626 (9626|2) -  this following the pitch
2015-10-02 16:03 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-10-02 16:03 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 - add note to 1
2015-10-02 16:04 sherrysina: okay
2015-10-02 16:04 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 (22426|0) - add hs drum 1 20 %
2015-10-02 16:05 sherrysina: okay~
2015-10-02 16:06 [Shana Lesus]: ok, fine
2015-10-02 16:06 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
2015-10-02 16:06 sherrysina: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716207 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [HD]]
2015-10-02 16:07 [Shana Lesus]: 00:23:026 (23026|1) - change on LN, end here 00:23:426 - 
2015-10-02 16:08 sherrysina: okay
2015-10-02 16:09 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 (22426|2) - add drum1 20 %
2015-10-02 16:11 [Shana Lesus]: again turn off N+1 style
2015-10-02 16:12 sherrysina: okay~
2015-10-02 16:12 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/716208 livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [NM+]]
2015-10-02 16:12 [Shana Lesus]: same
2015-10-02 16:12 [Shana Lesus]: N+1
2015-10-02 16:13 sherrysina: okay~
2015-10-02 16:16 sherrysina: anything else? :3
2015-10-02 16:16 [Shana Lesus]: wait i check
2015-10-02 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:026 (22026|0) - here kick1 20 %
2015-10-02 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: 00:22:426 (22426|1) - delete kick and add drum1
2015-10-02 16:20 sherrysina: should i add one more note?
2015-10-02 16:20 [Shana Lesus]: no owo
2015-10-02 16:21 sherrysina: done x)
2015-10-02 16:25 [Shana Lesus]: oki

call me after update

bilqiscutee

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bilqiscutee 2015-10-02T13:49:22+00:00

Gratz your map has been checked!

*pake gaya alek

sherrysina

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Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-10-02T14:00:08+00:00

bilqiscutee wrote:
Gratz your map has been checked!

*pake gaya alek

hbd bilqis

-BANGKE-

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Joined July 2015

-BANGKE- 2015-10-02T14:29:58+00:00

gogogo for rank!

Aste-

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Joined September 2014

Aste- 2015-10-02T23:52:44+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Hi sherrysina
BN Check

[Pharos' NM]
turn off N+1 style

00:08:426 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3756654 // didn't hear anything here 00:08:626 - except vocal
00:12:826 (12826|2) - move to 2 // same pitch with this 00:13:226 (13226|2) - Keep

Update.. sorry for the wait... Tugas menumpuk

http://puu.sh/kwpaw/455cbaed0e.rar

sherrysina

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Topic Starter

sherrysina 2015-10-03T01:08:54+00:00

updated~!