Pikachi- wrote:

tambahan :3
kasih nama GDers nya di tag sherry

sekian dan terima kasih :3 ea ea
I Love You Too >,<

Niji wrote:

Hello, mod as requested from my Queue . .

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l

Black --> My Suggestion/opinion
Red --> Unrankable issue
Blue --> Comment
Green --> Positive Support

Mod Inside

[7K NM]

00:01:026 - try to make consistency pattern I suggest u intro pattern: . . 00:01:026 (1026|5) - move to 6

00:01:226 (1226|3,1426|1,1626|2) - move to 2,4,6

00:02:026 (2026|0,2226|2,2426|4) - block, and move 1 coloumn to right

00:02:826 (2826|6,3026|4,3226|0) - move to 0,2,4

- - - - - - - - -

00:27:826 (27826|6) - move to 1, for comfortable at playing

00:45:226 (45226|2,45426|3) - move 1 coloumn to left .


[BANGJAY's 7K NM+]

00:07:226 (7226|2) - move to 5, then 00:07:426 (7426|5) - move to 3

00:08:426 (8426|4) - move to 1

00:36:857 - delete, kick sound end here 00:36:626

00:40:426 (40426|1) - move to 5, this make minijack from 00:40:226 00:40:226 (40226|1) for comfortablility

00:46:026 (46026|5) - move to 3


[Tray's 7K HD]

HP 5 change to --> 7
OD 5 change to --> 8

00:07:426 (7426|1) - add one more note here, follow the piano's intro sound .

00:23:426 - add LN until 00:23:826 - following bells sound

00:39:226 - 2 note is enough, try to make conssistance pattern, use triple note for kick or bass sound, acctually cymbal got extra note

00:49:026 (49026|2) - delete

00:56:026 - triple note for? no sound here . . delete or this'll make unrankable issue or 1 note is enough if u have hitsound or for pattern transtition . .

Goodluck for this beatmap! keep ur hardwork xD

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Language : English

Hi Sherry, Brian, Bangke, Tray, Pika & Zancer

Mod Via PM in Game

: Seem Nothing Issue
: Still Questionable
: Unrankable Issue General

■ Mapset

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars

7K NM = 2,01* please reduce star difficulties until below 2*

■ Metadata

Wrong Tittle, i've link source this song but somehow each link diffirent tittle, lel.. here :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqJNc9KVIZE : livetune feat. 初音ミク - Tell Your World

http://vocadb.net/Al/1008 : kz, livetune feat. 初音ミク - Tell Your World

http://www.oricon.co.jp/prof/458470/products/954060/1/ : livetune feat.初音ミク - Tell Your World without space

■ Timing

your kiai too short XD
better increase kiai timing is more interesting or add 2nd kiai here 00:37:826

■ Audio

1. Preview Point unsnaped, must here 00:24:026 - please check each diff
2. You must use Hitsounds
3. I'am not sure about mp3, because original song don't have any effect sounds like your mp3.. but somehow this mp3, you took from a ranked map XD

■ Background


■ Other

sorry, i still not check yet your video

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variety/Consistency Pattern)
B_Ex's 4K NM

HP : 7
OD : 7

00:10:626 - add note, loud sound here

00:25:826 - are you sure kick sound have 2 note? but IMO it will be nice if kick only 1 note XD since 00:27:626 - only have 1 note

00:40:726 - add note? check 00:47:126 -

00:44:026 - remove? since it same rhytim like 00:42:426

00:45:226 - add note, since snare 2 note, sound like 00:44:626

00:50:626 - remove, i don't hear any sound here except piano sound like 00:50:826 (50826|3,51026|2,51226|1) -

4K NM+

HP : 7,5
OD : 7,5

00:08:826 (8826|2) - still awkward play here, i think long sound like 00:09:026 (9026|3) - should start here

00:12:426 - can you explain why 2 note here?

00:16:426 - i not sure 2 note here & here 00:16:826 - because rhytim 00:16:226 - 00:16:826 - same pitch

00:24:626 (24626|2) - move to 4, row balance

00:30:226 (30226|2,30426|0) - Ctrl + G

00:30:826 (30826|1,31026|0) - Ctrl + G

00:31:226 (31226|0) - move to 4

00:31:426 (31426|1,31626|0) - Ctrl + G

00:32:426 (32426|0,32626|2) - Ctrl + G

00:33:426 (33426|2) - move to 4

00:36:226 - try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3443465

00:38:226 - i think here snare sound

00:43:826 (43826|3,43926|2,44026|1,44126|0) - i don't hear stream sounds here except long sound XD

00:53:426 (53426|2) - move to 1, avoid shield pattern

some note is incosistent, somehow kick have 2 note & 1 note, please check again

4K HD

HP : 7,5 or 8
OD : 7,5 or 8

00:07:626 (7626|1,7826|2,8026|3) - should 2 note, consistency

00:10:626 (10626|2) - move to 4

00:13:026 - add note, clap sound check 00:13:026

00:13:626 - ^

00:16:226 (16226|1,16426|1,16626|1) - better avoid 3 jack

00:18:426 - clap

00:20:026 - ^

00:21:026 - ^

00:22:026 - missing note here

00:23:926 (23926|3,24026|2,24126|1,24226|0,24326|1,24426|2,24526|1) - ghost note, i don't hear any sounds here except effect sounds XD

00:28:826 - 00:30:826 - i think wrong pattern here, please check sounds & tick

00:37:426 - add note? because loud sound here

00:43:026 (43026|2) - move to 1

00:45:226 - add note

same reason like previous diff

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

Secret

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only

Thanks for requesting
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Language : English

Hi Sherry, Brian, Bangke, Tray, Pika & Zancer

Mod Via PM in Game

: Seem Nothing Issue
: Still Questionable
: Unrankable Issue General

■ Mapset

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars

7K NM = 2,01* please reduce star difficulties until below 2*

■ Metadata

Wrong Tittle, i've link source this song but somehow each link diffirent tittle, lel.. here :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqJNc9KVIZE : livetune feat. 初音ミク - Tell Your World

http://vocadb.net/Al/1008 : kz, livetune feat. 初音ミク - Tell Your World

http://www.oricon.co.jp/prof/458470/products/954060/1/ : livetune feat.初音ミク - Tell Your World without space

■ Timing

your kiai too short XD
better increase kiai timing is more interesting or add 2nd kiai here 00:37:826

■ Audio

1. Preview Point unsnaped, must here 00:24:026 - please check each diff
2. You must use Hitsounds
3. I'am not sure about mp3, because original song don't have any effect sounds like your mp3.. but somehow this mp3, you took from a ranked map XD

■ Background


■ Other

sorry, i still not check yet your video

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variety/Consistency Pattern)
B_Ex's 4K NM

HP : 7
OD : 7

00:10:626 - add note, loud sound here

00:25:826 - are you sure kick sound have 2 note? but IMO it will be nice if kick only 1 note XD since 00:27:626 - only have 1 note

00:40:726 - add note? check 00:47:126 -

00:44:026 - remove? since it same rhytim like 00:42:426

00:45:226 - add note, since snare 2 note, sound like 00:44:626

00:50:626 - remove, i don't hear any sound here except piano sound like 00:50:826 (50826|3,51026|2,51226|1) -

4K NM+

HP : 7,5
OD : 7,5

00:08:826 (8826|2) - still awkward play here, i think long sound like 00:09:026 (9026|3) - should start here

00:12:426 - can you explain why 2 note here?

00:16:426 - i not sure 2 note here & here 00:16:826 - because rhytim 00:16:226 - 00:16:826 - same pitch

00:24:626 (24626|2) - move to 4, row balance

00:30:226 (30226|2,30426|0) - Ctrl + G

00:30:826 (30826|1,31026|0) - Ctrl + G

00:31:226 (31226|0) - move to 4

00:31:426 (31426|1,31626|0) - Ctrl + G

00:32:426 (32426|0,32626|2) - Ctrl + G

00:33:426 (33426|2) - move to 4

00:36:226 - try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3443465

00:38:226 - i think here snare sound

00:43:826 (43826|3,43926|2,44026|1,44126|0) - i don't hear stream sounds here except long sound XD

00:53:426 (53426|2) - move to 1, avoid shield pattern

some note is incosistent, somehow kick have 2 note & 1 note, please check again

4K HD

HP : 7,5 or 8
OD : 7,5 or 8

00:07:626 (7626|1,7826|2,8026|3) - should 2 note, consistency

00:10:626 (10626|2) - move to 4

00:13:026 - add note, clap sound check 00:13:026

00:13:626 - ^

00:16:226 (16226|1,16426|1,16626|1) - better avoid 3 jack

00:18:426 - clap

00:20:026 - ^

00:21:026 - ^

00:22:026 - missing note here

00:23:926 (23926|3,24026|2,24126|1,24226|0,24326|1,24426|2,24526|1) - ghost note, i don't hear any sounds here except effect sounds XD

00:28:826 - 00:30:826 - i think wrong pattern here, please check sounds & tick

00:37:426 - add note? because loud sound here

00:43:026 (43026|2) - move to 1

00:45:226 - add note

same reason like previous diff

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

Secret

(1-100)

please ignore it, just for fun only

Thanks for requesting
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

-BANGKE- wrote:

hi verniy :3 *run

-BANGKE- wrote:

fast mod buat videonya, video nya keputer cuma di diff Pika's 7K MX doang, yg lainya engga

-BANGKE- wrote:

-BANGKE- wrote:

fast mod buat videonya, video nya keputer cuma di diff Pika's 7K MX doang, yg lainya engga

Layout:

7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From M4M.

Layout:

7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Pika's 7k MX

1. 00:09:026 (9026|6,9126|5,9226|4,9326|3) - 00:46:626 (46626|0,46726|1,46826|2,46926|3) - There's no sound here, suggest remove.
2. 00:11:326 - 00:13:326 - 00:15:926 - 00:18:126 - 00:20:726 - 00:23:926 - 00:33:726 - You can add a note here
3. 00:30:726 - I suggest this.

Tray's 7k HD

1. 00:06:826 (6826|0,6826|6,7026|2,7026|4,7226|6,7226|3,7426|5,7426|1) - Why those notes are doublechords? Only 00:07:426 (7426|1,7426|5) - HAve more sound than other piano notes. I suggest to use single notes here.
2. 00:15:826 (15826|3,16026|3) - Why jacking here? Try to not jack in this way in easy diffs like HDs.
   00:15:826 (15826|3,15826|5) - Ctrl + Right arrow
   00:16:026 (16026|1,16026|3) - Ctrl + Left arrow
3. 00:16:826 (16826|0,17026|0) - Same as above. I suggest:
   00:16:626 (16626|5,16626|6) - Ctrl + Left arrow
   00:16:826 (16826|1,16826|0) - Ctrl + Right arrow
4. 00:20:026 (20026|1,20226|1,20826|6,21026|6) - Same reason, why jacking?
   00:20:226 (20226|1) - Move to 2
   00:21:026 (21026|5) - Move to 4
   00:20:626 (20626|5,20826|6) - Ctrl + J. Then if you apply it you can Ctrl + J also 00:21:426 (21426|1,21626|0) - and reaggange 00:21:826 (21826|1,21826|2,22026|5,22026|4,22226|2,22226|1) - In order to not jack.
5. 00:22:426 (22426|3,22626|3) - Same. Jacking not necessary.
6. 00:28:226 (28226|1) - Always for jacking, move to 2
7. 00:29:026 (29026|5) - Move to 2/3 for the same reason above.
8. 00:31:426 (31426|2,31426|4) - Jacking with 00:31:226 (31226|4,31426|4) - my suggestion:
   00:31:426 (31426|4) - to 5
   00:31:426 (31426|2) - to 2
9. 00:31:826 (31826|3,32026|3) - This jack have sense for example. So you can keep it.
10. 00:51:026 (51026|5,51226|5) - I suggest this in order to not jack.
11. 00:55:026 (55026|6,55226|6) - Move 00:55:026 (55026|6) - to 5

I've skipped the 4ks because I'm not so good in modding 4ks, and other 7ks diffs seems ok for me. So this is my mod! I hope you'll get this ranked, it's so relaxing.

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi!~

mod here :3
1|2|3|4

[NM]
- 00:11:626 (11626|1) - move to 1
- 00:19:026 (19026|1,19226|2) - move to left for balance
- 00:28:426 (28426|3) - 00:31:626 (31626|1) - 00:34:826 (34826|0) - delete this notes, so it can be consistent with this 00:25:226 - , for me it has better flow for a normal diff but it's up to you :3
- 00:27:026 (27026|3) - move to 1; 00:27:226 (27226|2) - move to 4 to avoid jack since in the other parts there are no jacks
- 00:29:426 (29426|3) - move to 2 if you want to make a jack like here 00:26:026 (26026|1,26226|1) -
- 00:30:826 - add, because you double here 00:33:826 - 00:27:626 -
- 00:37:026 - i think this is same sound with 00:36:826 - ? so add note, you can swap columns for this 00:37:126 (37126|2,37226|1) - to prevent jack
- 00:55:226 (55226|2) - you can end it here 00:55:826 - since it has a fading sound
[HD]
- 00:01:026 (1026|0,1226|1,1426|2) - move to the right, jack doesnt suit for this kind of sound or 00:01:626 (1626|2) - move this to 4
- 00:03:826 (3826|2) - move to 2 for balance and better flow of patterns
- 00:10:826 (10826|1) - it's more comfortable if you move this to 3
- 00:11:826 (11826|2) - move to 1 for balance and better flow
- 00:15:026 (15026|0) - move to 4 for balance
- 00:16:626 (16626|2) - move to 4 (there's a 3 consecutive jacks)
- 00:18:426 (18426|2,18626|3) - ctrl + g
- 00:22:826 (22826|2) - move to 2 (3 jacks again)
- 00:26:226 (26226|2) - move to 4 for better flow
- 00:48:426 (48426|3) - move to 1
- 00:49:226 (49226|2) - move to 4
- 00:50:026 (50026|0) - move to 2
- 00:51:026 (51026|3) - move to 2 for a one directional flow
- 00:58:426 - the LNs ended here
[MX]
- 00:04:426 (4426|1,4626|3) - crtl + g
- 00:13:626 (13626|3) - move to 3 for balance
- 00:14:226 (14226|2) - move to 2 same reason
- 00:37:026 - add note
- 00:39:426 (39426|0) - move to 2; 00:39:826 (39826|1) - move to 3
- 00:52:426 (52426|2,52626|1) - move to right?

Good Luck!~

AnatOWJIya wrote:

Hello 0/
Mod requested by Sovyonok Camp Queue
Sorry if my mod is useless,i'm newbie.
Let's go
4K=1|2|3|4

B_Ex' NM

00:02:026 (2026|2,2226|1,2426|0) - Ctrl+j okay
00:02:826 (2826|3,3026|2,3226|1) - Ctrl+j no
00:05:226 (5226|2,5426|1,5626|0) - Ctrl+j okay
00:06:026 (6026|3,6226|2,6426|1) - Ctrl+j no
00:14:226 (14226|0) - Move to 2 okay
00:14:626 (14626|2) - Move to 4 hmm no... it will be jack with 00:15:226 (15226|3) -
00:20:026 (20026|2) - Move to 1 no
00:52:426 (52426|3,52626|2,52826|1) - Ctrl+j okay
00:53:226 (53226|2,53426|1,53626|0) - ctrl+j hmm.. no...

That's all.Sorry for poor mod.
Good luck with map

erlinadewi- wrote:

MOD Request via PM

B_Ex's NM

00:14:826 - add note okay

NM+

00:15:826 - tambah 1 note no
00:42:826 (42826|2) - delete no
00:46:026 (46026|2) - ^ no
00:49:226 (49226|1) - ^ no
00:56:426 (56426|3) - pindah ke kolom 4 okay

maaf kalo gak full mod.. dan maaf kalo jelek XD.. GOOD LUCK sher

FreeezeForward wrote:

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue

1|2|3|4

*If you reject some of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

Metadata

Title: Tell Your World (Short Ver.) The original song is about 4 minutes. i dont think to change this. since i already write those and the other modder said to delete it
Difficulty: zancers x sherry's MX ....
Source: Vocaloid It's clearly the song is from a vocaloid. i dont think that vocaloid is the right source
Tags: Remove "vocaloid" since it's on the source. ... @@
HP Drain (HP): NM and NM+ must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8. keep
Overall Difficulty (OD): NM must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8

keep

B_Ex's NM

00:01:426 (1426|2,1626|1) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H), for hand balance and pitch pattern. keep
00:04:626 (4626|2,4826|1) - Same as above. same as above
00:07:826 (7826|2,8026|1) - Same as above. same as above
00:12:026 (12026|3) - Move to 2, for hand balance. keep
00:13:826 (13826|2) - Move to 4, for hand balance. okay
00:16:426 (16426|1,16626|0,16826|1,17026|2) - Move to 4, 2, 3 and 2 respectively, for note consistency and hand balance. keep
00:44:626 (44626|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance. keep
00:51:026 (51026|2) - Move to 1, for hand balance. keep
00:54:226 (54226|1,54426|0) - Switch columns, for pitch pattern and hand balance.

...keep

NM+

00:01:226 (1226|2,1426|1) - Move to 2 and 1 respectively, for hand balance and reverse pitch pattern. no... this is balanced already
00:02:026 (2026|1,2226|0) - Switch columns, for pitch pattern and hand balance. okay
00:05:226 (5226|1) - Move to 4, for reversed pitch pattern. keep
00:07:826 (7826|1) - Move to 1, for hand balance. okay
00:10:826 (10826|2,11026|1) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) for pitch pattern. okay
00:13:026 (13026|3,13226|2,13426|1) - Move to 3, 2 and 1 respectively, for note consistency. okay
00:47:426 (47426|3) - Move to 3, for note density. keep

HD

00:01:026 (1026|0) - Move to 4, for pitch pattern and note density. keep
00:14:826 (14826|1) - Move to 3, for note consistency. keep
00:48:626 (48626|3) - Move to 3, to avoid too much jacks. welp okay @@
00:49:426 (49426|2,49426|0) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H), for hand balance and to avoid too much jacks. okay okay

zancers ft. sherry MX

00:07:626 (7626|0) - Move to 3, for note density. keep
00:10:226 (10226|1,10226|2,10426|2,10626|1) - Flip Horizontally, for hand balance and pitch pattern. okay
00:11:626 (11626|2) - Move to 4, for hand balance. keep
00:13:826 (13826|2) - Move to 1, for easier hit and note density. keep
00:21:426 (21426|3) - Move to 1, to avoid densed jacks. okay
00:25:826 (25826|1,26026|2) - Move to 4 and 2 respectively, for hand balance. okay
00:34:026 (34026|3) - Move to 2, same as above. okay
00:42:226 (42226|2) - Move to 4, same as above. keep
00:48:226 (48226|1) - Move to 4, same as above. okay
00:50:026 (50026|0,50226|1,50426|0,50626|1,50826|0) - Switch columns, for note density. keep
00:51:026 (51026|1) - Move to 4, to avoid jacks in the mod above. keep

sherrysina wrote:

FreeezeForward wrote:

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue

1|2|3|4

*If you reject some of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

Metadata

Title: Tell Your World (Short Ver.) The original song is about 4 minutes. i dont think to change this. since i already write those and the other modder said to delete it
Difficulty: zancers x sherry's MX ....
Source: Vocaloid It's clearly the song is from a vocaloid. i dont think that vocaloid is the right source
Tags: Remove "vocaloid" since it's on the source. ... @@
HP Drain (HP): NM and NM+ must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8. keep
Overall Difficulty (OD): NM must be 6 not 7; HD must be 7 not 8

keep

thank you~~

FreeezeForward wrote:

Who told you to delete the "Short Ver."? Just asking.

i dont remember, but i'm sure many modders said to delete the "Short Ver."

I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.

FreeezeForward wrote:

I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~ I don't know if it will be a really long mod but i'll try
hope it will help :3

How I do mod

My mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappyness

Desu~

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[zancers ft. sherry]
00:22:426 (22426|1) - I think this LN should start here : 00:22:626 -
00:51:226 (51226|2) - Should be 2 LNs since HD have two LNs for this sounds .
same for all the next LNs
00:52:026 (52026|1) -
00:52:826 (52826|0) -
00:54:426 (54426|3) -
00:55:226 (55226|0) - i think, 1 note is okay..
[HD]
00:41:026 (41026|1) - add another note according to previous pattern : 00:34:626 (34626|2,34626|0) - < I think it should be two notes okay
[NM+]
00:30:826 (30826|0) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern 00:35:426 (35426|3,35426|1,35626|0,35626|2,35826|0,35826|1) - but i dont hear any drum sound D:
[B_Ex's NM]
00:25:826 (25826|1) - this should be Two notes according to this pattern : 00:29:026 (29026|1,29026|3) - okay~

hawa , really super short mod ;w; , I can't really help for pattern , so it's mainly concistency thingys feel free to reject anything~
Good Luck~ Tell your world is sugoi song~~ thank you Etlie! ><

Adinata28 wrote:

Hi Sherry :3 /
Mod Requested, sorry for the delay :'
|1|2|3|4|

B_Ex's NM

1. 00:13:826 - add note ? consistency with 00:10:626 - okay, i also re-arranged the reff part
2. 00:17:026 - ^ ? ^
3. 00:29:226 - delete 1 note ? since u placed 1 note on 00:30:826 - 00:32:426 - etc okay, re-arranged
4. 00:52:426 (52426|1,52826|3) - Ctrl + G, for pitch,

okay

NM+

1. 00:10:626 - add 1 more note ? okay
2. 00:27:226 (27226|2) - move to 1 ? okay
3. 00:28:026 (28026|0) - delete, 1 note is enough okay
4. 00:30:826 - add note, for clap. like 00:29:226 - i dont think its a clap sound..
5. 00:48:626 (48626|1) - move to 1 pls

okay

HD

1. 00:23:426 (23426|0) - should end at 00:23:826 -

okay

FreeezeForward wrote:

I don't think the Short Ver. must be removed. For QAT's, the title "Tell Your World" itself means it is the full version of the song. Anything else shorter than that may be TV Size or Short Ver. ; unless the long version of the song is the extended version of the original. I think you should check this metadata to a BN or a QAT.

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi~!
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!!!
Good song, good map. I have few suggestions though...

Here's my Mod:
|1|2|3|4|
[NM]
00:10:626 (10626|2) - move to 2 to put some notes on column 2. feels unbalanced imo, but it looks better
00:13:426 (13426|1,13626|0) - change columns, fits more
00:12:426 (12426|0,12826|1) - better swap these if you apply ^
00:16:226 - try this rough suggestion http://puu.sh/jW7VT/45a421f75f.jpg
00:19:626 (19626|2) - move to 1, change of sound, better make this far from 00:19:426 (19426|3)
00:24:626 (24626|1) - move to 1, putting a space inbetween emphasizes the sound
00:37:826 - these sliders are hard for a normal difficulty imo, there are even notes. I suggest remove those sliders
[NM+]
00:09:026 (9026|3) - strange slider... shouldn't the slider be at 00:08:826? ( ref. NM diff. )
00:10:626 - add a note, different sound with 00:10:826 ( optional, it also follows a bit of the NM difficulty )
00:17:626 - add a note if you're following the bell sounds ( is that even a bell xD )
00:18:426 - from this part to 00:19:626 column 1 feels empty. put some notes in it
00:19:626 - why 2 notes?
00:50:826 - 00:52:426 - column 1 feels empty...
00:55:826 - add note? same with NM diff
00:56:426 - strong sound, add note.
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I hope these can help you
Good luck with your map!

Rivals_7 wrote:

Modding Notice

Hello Sherrysina ^^

You were requested to me via in-game request. I do not point out all thing in this mod so there might be more issues that can be found across the mapset. Make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap.

livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World [OsuMania]

1|2|3|4

[General]

I felt HS isn't done yet, even HD still no HS..........
zancers ft. sherry MX zancers ft. sherry's MX (grammar pls :v ) okay xDD

[NM+]

00:22:026 (22026|1,22426|0) - col 1 and 2 respectively? seems more symmetrical. okay
00:47:026 (47026|1,47126|2,47226|3) - geser kiri. seems more comfortable to hit okay

[HD]
00:08:776 (8776|2) -

left= HD
Right= zancers ft. sherry MX

CMIIW tapi ini bisa jadi kemunkinan Unrankable issues karena note ini unsnapped. note ini juga gak ada di MX.

00:13:826 (13826|3,13826|0,14226|0,14226|3,14626|3,14626|0,15026|0,15426|3,15426|0,15826|0,15826|3,16226|0,16226|3) - imo this pattern can be improved tho, recommend to rearrange this somehow done~

00:35:826 (35826|0,36226|2) - col 3 and 2 respectively. avoid triple jack pattern. okay

00:51:226 - till the song end.
Please compare with MX diff

why HD have 2 LN while MX has 1 LN? take note that MX should be harder on any term besides just to increase the Star Rating, but also the pattern, should be harder. done~ but, can i keep MX has 1 LN?

so HD should have 1 LN and MX should have 2 LN.

[zancers ft. sherry MX]

00:09:826 (9826|2,10026|2,10026|3,10226|2,10226|1,10426|3) - eh...... I don't think there's any relevant noise that can be used for 2 note presses (1 SN and 1 LN = 2 note presses) suggest to delete the short notes there.

Side Note
As -BANGKE- has stated in multiplayer game chat before, that the rule of Minimum draining time ( t/352472 ) Could be applied anytime. If you really want this to get ranked, you should be fast now. since the rule can be applied anytime. UHHHH YES YES YES THANK YOU!

If you found that this mod isn't helpful to you, don't give kudosu. If there's any Misunderstanding , You can PM me anytime to clarify the issues that i've been pointed out. this is helpfuull!! kudosu gifted =w=)/
The other modder should handle this mapset from now on.

Good Luck sherrysina and friends ^^

#MOD101

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234

The NM diffs seem fine to me~ whoaaa *o*

[HD]
00:37:626 - Add note no
00:37:726 - ^ no
00:44:126 - ^ no

[MX]
How come there's no video for this diff? D: eh....... added the video, hope its already has the video :3
00:14:426 - Add note, same sound as 00:14:026 (14026|1) okay
00:16:126 - Add note, I think that it's fine to have a 1/4 pattern in the hardest diff ....
00:37:626 - Add note for snare i dont hear any snare sound there..
00:37:726 - ^ ^
00:51:826 (51826|2,52026|1,52426|3,52626|2,52826|0) - Just a mild nitpick that these should staircase to the left for pitch relevancy ...

Good luck with ranked! thank you!

Pharos21 wrote:

Kayy

sesuai Deal nya

aku take NM nya okay~

and here's the MOD

-focus on Consistency and Ghost Scanning-

-NM+-

00:08:626 (8626|0) - idk kau Focus ke instru ato sama Vocal.. but lebih baik ke instru.. jadi ini delete aja tapi ini suara piano...

00:09:826 (9826|0) - next Sound start nya di 00:10:226 - bukan di situ okay

00:14:426 - missing note?? aku denger ada sound di sini um...

00:15:026 - sama white line atasnya juga.. ngga missing note?? hmm... seharusnya cuma ngikut drum, kick, sama piano sih..

noting more

- HD -

00:16:226 (16226|3,16226|0,16426|1,16426|2,16626|3,16626|0,16826|2,16826|1,17026|3,17026|0) - what is this for? itu kick..

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here.. coba di didenger lagi.. kek nya pake 1/8 okay

- MX -

00:08:826 (8826|0) - missing mini stream here okay
00:09:626 - missing Vocal note here.. soalnya aku denger yang 3 LN di atasnya ngikut Vocal okay

sorry kalo dikit.... soalnya memang itu yang bisa aku temuin

ada sih yang kedengeran nya ghosting.. but pas aku denger lagi.. ada faint sound.. jadi aku ragu itu ghost ato bukan

wait for my NM oke >,<)/

Rivals_7 wrote:

Thx for the 100th Kudos xD

-BANGKE- wrote:

kyknya blm nyumbang star :v /