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I'll be a good factory slave from now on. 
Also, I'll probably have to skip that star-shaped hole in the top. :/
Also, I'll probably have to skip that star-shaped hole in the top. :/
It's not actually a hole anymore - it's just a textured star. It was a hole for the 17 year old slut model, but she's been converted into a 15 year old sweetheart.
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Oh, good. Also, slight progress.
Edit: Make that a lot of progress.
Edit2: Almost done with the fixing. Just have to add the nose. Too bad that's so hard. D:
Edit: Make that a lot of progress.
Edit2: Almost done with the fixing. Just have to add the nose. Too bad that's so hard. D:
Are there no existing 3D anime girl models you can rip parts from use for reference?
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Tons, but I can't find any files. The problem is this: To add a nose, I'll have to add more edges to the face. However, this makes everything veeeery high-poly when I use Mesh Smooth. But if I remove all the unnecessary edges, the shading gets messed up, and the face will have lots of gray triangles on it. The only way to get around this is by making the nose a separate object, but this would make it look weird, as if it wasn't a part of the body.
Why are you using mesh smooth?
I thought this was going to be cell-shaded?
We're going for "better than DS," here, so I don't think you need to do too much AA...
Download: Marianas Trench - Cross My Heart (Natowa) [Irato's Normal].osu
I thought this was going to be cell-shaded?
We're going for "better than DS," here, so I don't think you need to do too much AA...
Download: Marianas Trench - Cross My Heart (Natowa) [Irato's Normal].osu
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...wut
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LuigiHann wrote:
Why are you using mesh smooth?
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If peppy could set that up, that would be great. :3LuigiHann wrote:
I thought this was going to be cell-shaded?
...You do know what AA is, right?LuigiHann wrote:
We're going for "better than DS," here, so I don't think you need to do too much AA...
Hey that low-poly model makes the flaws more apparent - that should be handy.
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It does, but the model's appearance changes drastically when Mesh Smooth is applied, so I thought it was a better idea to post the smoothed one.awp wrote:
Hey that low-poly model makes the flaws more apparent - that should be handy.
Oh, and since I've posted a new picture, how's the length on the arms/legs?
Arms appear to be a bit too long, but legs seem a good size. They're still way too thin (particularly above the knees). Also on the topic of limbs, the hands are huuuuge but I'm sure you'll get to that.
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Like I said, Mesh Smooth changes the model drastically. :/
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Of course, and it will also be ported for the PS3 and 360. Oh, and if you have an Ouendan 2 ROM on your PC, it will unlock a bonus game, where YOU are the mascot (Webcam not included).qwertyuiop wrote:
Our mascot will be making use of PhysX, right?
Also, I looked at the first video, and I'm not quite sure you know what PhysX does, nor how much CPU/GPU power it would drain.
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complain nao plz
http://www.twinkfish.com/al/Tips04.jpg
courtesy of Alvin Hew <3
Al says (6:19 PM):
I realized I made her arms too long...
just a quick note
Now with more http://www.twinkfish.com/al/Tips05.jpg
courtesy of Alvin Hew <3
Al says (6:19 PM):
I realized I made her arms too long...
just a quick note
Now with more http://www.twinkfish.com/al/Tips05.jpg
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That was really useful. While it's very hard to add detail to a Mesh Smoothed model, it helped me fix the horrible pelvis. And I tried to add some detail, but it's barely visible.
Anyway, here's the latest pic. I've finished and scaled the hair, added kneecaps/elbows (Not visible from this angle), and done some other, smaller tweaks. Oh, and the face is slightly rounder.
Rank please?
Anyway, here's the latest pic. I've finished and scaled the hair, added kneecaps/elbows (Not visible from this angle), and done some other, smaller tweaks. Oh, and the face is slightly rounder.
Rank please?
Nice Boots.
Hair is looking better already. Still a bit thin/spaghetti-like though, as if it were made with playdough. Nose is looking better, maybe give the bridge more definition (or at least some, it seems nonexistent) there's no difference between forehead and eyesockets (not sure if texturing will cover that) and the head is still too small. Other proportions still need to be tweaked as well.
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I'll work on the hair and eventually the bridge. Textures will cover the eye thing, and I'll need a list of things to tweak. ._.awp wrote:
Hair is looking better already. Still a bit thin/spaghetti-like though, as if it were made with playdough. Nose is looking better, maybe give the bridge more definition (or at least some, it seems nonexistent) there's no difference between forehead and eyesockets (not sure if texturing will cover that) and the head is still too small. Other proportions still need to be tweaked as well.
I think hands are still too big D:
^Echo49 wrote:
I think hands are still too big D:
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OK, I'll shrink the hands. Anything else?
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Here's the 531980th rendering so far. I've fixed the problems you've pointed out (I hope) and fixed/reduced some shading glitches, mainly the one under the nose. Anything else?
Edit: Oh, and I just fixed the missing insides on the boots, so that's another one off the list.
Edit: Oh, and I just fixed the missing insides on the boots, so that's another one off the list.
Head is still a tad small, hair not meaty enough, calves reach their maximum diameter much too close to the kneecaps, arms lack muscle definition, *generic face complaints you're still aware of*.
wow my list is getting shorter though.
wow my list is getting shorter though.
It's certainly much better than it was before
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So I made it a little bigger. Anyway, render of the day:
Download: ZUN - Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle (Fight69) [LRJ's Hard].osu
Download: ZUN - Maiden's Cappricio ~ Dream Battle (Fight69) [LRJ's Hard].osu
I don't see anything wrong with the head, although the breasts can go up 2 or 3 cup sizes.
Not if peppy has anything to say about itRolled wrote:
I don't see anything wrong with the head, although the breasts can go up 2 or 3 cup sizes.
I hope you dieRolled wrote:
I don't see anything wrong with the head, although the breasts can go up 2 or 3 cup sizes.
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Wow, that's harsh. <_<Xiaounlimited wrote:
I hope you dieRolled wrote:
I don't see anything wrong with the head, although the breasts can go up 2 or 3 cup sizes.
I think it looks great and very on-model at the moment. No complaints about the head size any more.
please excuse me, but i got bored...
GO GO CRAP TRAP! SHAZAM!
Based on Sarumaru's artwork, probably 8 hours of work on her so far, and I think she's coming along nicely.
the head needs the most work. it'll probably be redone several times. Also the coloring is just to show approximate color placement, I won't actually texture her till I get her head done.
the proportions of things are slightly off, and the hands were oursourced from another model I`m working on. I didn't feel like making ANOTHER set of hands when I had a perfectly good set laying around in another model.
also missing small details like neckbow, light gray strap-thingy on the boots, belt buckle and belly button.
I didn't bother with a clay or cel rendering of the low-poly mesh. the clay would look crappy, and the cel...I just don't like using ink'n'paint. maybe i`ll get around to setting it up in mental ray. it looks soooo much prettier that way.
I`m gonna see if I can't draw some side/front close ups for the head later, maybe then she won't look like she was beaten with an ugly stick.
GO GO CRAP TRAP! SHAZAM!Based on Sarumaru's artwork, probably 8 hours of work on her so far, and I think she's coming along nicely.
the head needs the most work. it'll probably be redone several times. Also the coloring is just to show approximate color placement, I won't actually texture her till I get her head done.
the proportions of things are slightly off, and the hands were oursourced from another model I`m working on. I didn't feel like making ANOTHER set of hands when I had a perfectly good set laying around in another model.
also missing small details like neckbow, light gray strap-thingy on the boots, belt buckle and belly button.
I didn't bother with a clay or cel rendering of the low-poly mesh. the clay would look crappy, and the cel...I just don't like using ink'n'paint. maybe i`ll get around to setting it up in mental ray. it looks soooo much prettier that way.
I`m gonna see if I can't draw some side/front close ups for the head later, maybe then she won't look like she was beaten with an ugly stick.
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Don't worry about it, you've really made me realize something (To F*CKING HURRY UP or risk getting replaced). <___<"NCDyson wrote:
please excuse me, but i got bored...
Shit, he caught on.Loginer wrote:
Don't worry about it, you've really made me realize something (To F*CKING HURRY UP or risk getting replaced). <___<"
i wouldn't worry about it. I`ve been 3d modeling on and off for like 6 years now, and the total number of models I`ve completed is like 0. well, 1 if you count the one that every time I just have to tweak the vertex weights so that they're PERFECT, i end up starting from scratch again...
please excuse me, I just remembered, I have an Agent J somewhere on my hard drive that just needs his pompadour tweaked and he'll be ready for a skeleton.
*runs off laughing maniacally*
please excuse me, I just remembered, I have an Agent J somewhere on my hard drive that just needs his pompadour tweaked and he'll be ready for a skeleton.
*runs off laughing maniacally*
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Well, I worry about it. I've finished everything but some smaller details on the top to shape it better.
Also, if you want to create Agent J or anyone else, that's great, but stay the hell away from the mascot. Mm? *balances pencil on table*
Also, if you want to create Agent J or anyone else, that's great, but stay the hell away from the mascot. Mm? *balances pencil on table*
I say keep the options open. If you want me to, I can pick apart and critique both models.
It is a learning experience either way and I just want the best looking end result possible :<
It is a learning experience either way and I just want the best looking end result possible :<
I have to say though, Dyson's clay render is looking pretty sweet from the get-go.
Large breasts are UNACCEPTABLELoginer wrote:
Wow, that's harsh. <_<Xiaounlimited wrote:
I hope you dieRolled wrote:
I don't see anything wrong with the head, although the breasts can go up 2 or 3 cup sizes.
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I wasn't going to follow his advice, don't worry. >.>Xiaounlimited wrote:
I have to say though, Dyson's clay render is looking pretty sweet from the get-go.Large breasts are UNACCEPTABLELoginer wrote:
Wow, that's harsh. <_<Xiaounlimited wrote:
I hope you die
Also, I've been slacking off. ._.
Oh well, I've done progress. The skirt will be done using a Cloth modifier, but my laptop is gay, so I can't render it properly until I get my new desktop (Any day now...). And I tried it with the top, but it just won't morph good enough, so that one is just be an edited copy of the torso, with polys removed underneath for a lower poly-count. All I have to do now is add more details, so expect a pic within at least 30 minutes.
What do you mean, "won't morph good enough"? Add a wire skeleton to shape it if you need to =xLoginer wrote:
And I tried it with the top, but it just won't morph good enough, so that one is just be an edited copy of the torso, with polys removed underneath for a lower poly-count.
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It's starting to look quite good. I like the gloves. Front most bangs and the curly bit on her face could do to be a bit thicker still bitchbitchbitch and face needs depth bitchbitchbitch. Skirt currently looks a little way too smooth to me though =x It closely matches the chibi design, but it might need to be adapted to a more realistic look in-game.
Keep it up loginer - this is really starting to come along .
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dang, you beat me to the neck thing. i haven't messed with my model of her since i posted the picture. my agent J model was alot crappier than I remember it being. I spent all day redoing him, and now I`ve only gotta do the hair and sunglasses before the modeling is complete.
you weren't kidding about coloring.
you weren't kidding about coloring.
Gettin' closer and closer
seriously though I'm not gonna shut up about the flatness of the face until it's fixed - how does it look from a side view?
seriously though I'm not gonna shut up about the flatness of the face until it's fixed - how does it look from a side view?
The arms look kind of tiny, at least from that perspective. Do they reach all the way down to the hips when lowered?
any chance of seeing a wireframe render? I`m curious to see how you handled the areas for the joints and things.
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Like this.awp wrote:
Gettin' closer and closer
seriously though I'm not gonna shut up about the flatness of the face until it's fixed - how does it look from a side view?
Yes.Behonkiss wrote:
The arms look kind of tiny, at least from that perspective. Do they reach all the way down to the hips when lowered?
Sure.NCDyson wrote:
any chance of seeing a wireframe render? I`m curious to see how you handled the areas for the joints and things.
Latest pictures. Fixed some shading problems, improved the coloring slightly (The top still needs improvements) and made the face rounder. Again. :<
Normal render
Cartoon render
The top has some really short sleeves at the moment. Should I remove them?
not too shabby.
I look forward to seeing it's completion.
now I`ve gone from wanting to go to bed, to wanting to work on my Agent J. the new one's only really needing the hair, and well, a complete collar section revampment, and he's ready for the real work to begin. skinning (for bones) and UV mapping.
lions and tigers and bears, oh my. weighting and wiring and IK, oh my. planar and cylinder and sphere mapping, oh my.
'scuse me. I`ve been up for way too long.
I look forward to seeing it's completion.
now I`ve gone from wanting to go to bed, to wanting to work on my Agent J. the new one's only really needing the hair, and well, a complete collar section revampment, and he's ready for the real work to begin. skinning (for bones) and UV mapping.
lions and tigers and bears, oh my. weighting and wiring and IK, oh my. planar and cylinder and sphere mapping, oh my.
'scuse me. I`ve been up for way too long.
A Peppy Skin! Brilliant Idea! Now I just need more pictues...RemmyX25 wrote:
I still elect my idea of Peppy's avatar popping out at the 30x/50x/100x combo markschan wrote:
Why don't you model peppy
Update on the voice acting
You guys are gonna kill me.
Ok, so since the first batch of voice files i sent in, Tina and I have gotten into plenty of catfights, but we've made up too late, and she never had a chance squall meet up with me again.
Now I'm in college. 215 planets away. actually it's probably less than a planet away. maybe 1/65536 of a planet away
Sooooo yea. Either I find someone here with a perfect voice for Pippi, I wait until my breaks when I attempt to hang out with Tina again (mind you, she never found time to say FUCK YOU to me before I left for college), or someone else take up the project. leaving me feeling like a poop.
Just thought I'd let you all know, sorry for the high heels...
--Rem
EDIT: Thanks for having fun with my post.
You guys are gonna kill me.
Ok, so since the first batch of voice files i sent in, Tina and I have gotten into plenty of catfights, but we've made up too late, and she never had a chance squall meet up with me again.
Now I'm in college. 215 planets away. actually it's probably less than a planet away. maybe 1/65536 of a planet away
Sooooo yea. Either I find someone here with a perfect voice for Pippi, I wait until my breaks when I attempt to hang out with Tina again (mind you, she never found time to say FUCK YOU to me before I left for college), or someone else take up the project. leaving me feeling like a poop.
Just thought I'd let you all know, sorry for the high heels...
--Rem
EDIT: Thanks for having fun with my post.
We could always use my girlfriend's voice for Pippi. I hope this won't curse our relationship.
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Hey, here's an idea: What about a synthetic voice?
I posted that amateur voice acting board a while back, so we could always try that. I'd like to see if Chan's girlfriend is up for it first, though.
I think a synthetic voice might sound kinda creepy. even as advanced as they've gotten, still, creepy.
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Epic announcement: The project is still alive.
During the last three days I slowly improved the skirt a bit, worked on the colors, made the model more low-poly (12000 triangles, 3000 tris less than last time), did some tweaks on the boots, removed the sleeves on the top, removed a lot of gliches and created some placeholder textures. I'm sorry I didn't post a picture so awp could bitch about the flat face with someone else popping in every now and then to add a pointless message that won't help me improve the model at all. Now, let's finish this up, rig it, animate it, and it'll instantly be ready for the game through the magic of the already existing dancer support which peppy added in 5 minutes. YAY!
OK, finished ranting. Picture in a second.
Edit: There's the picture. I'll work on the face today/tomorrow, and if no one else adds any criticism, I'll add textures. Oh, and one more thing about the small chin: The head is pointing upwards by about 30 degrees.
Edit2: I'm too tired to work on it today, but here's a bonus pic with a cloth modifier on the skirt (No mental ray render, though).
http://up.ppy.sh/files/pippiskirt.png
During the last three days I slowly improved the skirt a bit, worked on the colors, made the model more low-poly (12000 triangles, 3000 tris less than last time), did some tweaks on the boots, removed the sleeves on the top, removed a lot of gliches and created some placeholder textures. I'm sorry I didn't post a picture so awp could bitch about the flat face with someone else popping in every now and then to add a pointless message that won't help me improve the model at all. Now, let's finish this up, rig it, animate it, and it'll instantly be ready for the game through the magic of the already existing dancer support which peppy added in 5 minutes. YAY!
OK, finished ranting. Picture in a second.
Edit: There's the picture. I'll work on the face today/tomorrow, and if no one else adds any criticism, I'll add textures. Oh, and one more thing about the small chin: The head is pointing upwards by about 30 degrees.
Edit2: I'm too tired to work on it today, but here's a bonus pic with a cloth modifier on the skirt (No mental ray render, though).
http://up.ppy.sh/files/pippiskirt.png
The belt is an actual poly object and not just a texture, right?
Download: ZUN - Mannen Oki Kasa Nigo Chuui Wo (KanbeKotori) [Hard].osu
Download: ZUN - Mannen Oki Kasa Nigo Chuui Wo (KanbeKotori) [Hard].osu
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Yes, it's a small extrusion in the skirt.
Also, this message is to EVERYONE who thinks this is oh so over 9000 Crysis 2 hi-poly.
1. Let's download and install 3DMark 2003. This is (obviously) a 5 years old benchmark.
http://www.futuremark.com/download/3dmark03/
When it asks you for a key, just click on "Register Later" or whatever the button is called.
2. Run it. The first test renders about 30-40 planes at the same time, and each and every one of these are fully textured (the mascot is currently using simple diffuse colors). The mascot consists of 11904 triangles. A single plane in this scene, minus the top (I think the 3D dumper missed it. D:), consists of 6801 triangles. If you can get 60 frames per second with only two stinking aeroplanes on screen at the same time, you can, without a doubt, run osu! with dancers on.
Also, for a more comparable example, the girl with the sword in the third test consists of 14503 triangles.
Also, this message is to EVERYONE who thinks this is oh so over 9000 Crysis 2 hi-poly.
1. Let's download and install 3DMark 2003. This is (obviously) a 5 years old benchmark.
http://www.futuremark.com/download/3dmark03/
When it asks you for a key, just click on "Register Later" or whatever the button is called.
2. Run it. The first test renders about 30-40 planes at the same time, and each and every one of these are fully textured (the mascot is currently using simple diffuse colors). The mascot consists of 11904 triangles. A single plane in this scene, minus the top (I think the 3D dumper missed it. D:), consists of 6801 triangles. If you can get 60 frames per second with only two stinking aeroplanes on screen at the same time, you can, without a doubt, run osu! with dancers on.
Also, for a more comparable example, the girl with the sword in the third test consists of 14503 triangles.
This is just my opinion, but anyone doesn't think about making Cel-Shaded model?
While Osu! is full of Cool Cartoon Looking...
and the character rather like Manga art to me...
Cel-Shaded will be cool...
i'm working on it...
just wait if you to see my sucks 3D
While Osu! is full of Cool Cartoon Looking...
and the character rather like Manga art to me...
Cel-Shaded will be cool...
i'm working on it...
just wait if you to see my sucks 3D
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Round enough? <_<
Also, I'm currently just perfecting the shading and coloring (I see the "skinhair", will be fixed). I'm more or less satisfied with how the model looks at the moment, and will move on to textures, rigging and optimizing if no one else complains about anything (I can and probably will improve the hair in the future, so don't mention that ATM), which means the model will be ready for osu! within 2 weeks unless something unexpected happens. But is osu! ready fo- *shot*
*fears the animation part ;_;*
Also, I'm currently just perfecting the shading and coloring (I see the "skinhair", will be fixed). I'm more or less satisfied with how the model looks at the moment, and will move on to textures, rigging and optimizing if no one else complains about anything (I can and probably will improve the hair in the future, so don't mention that ATM), which means the model will be ready for osu! within 2 weeks unless something unexpected happens. But is osu! ready fo- *shot*
*fears the animation part ;_;*
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Now that I have your attention, should I apply a cloth modifier to the skirt to make it look more realistic (It'll still be static), or should I leave it alone?
I think you may have done something wrong. It appears she had a little trouble dancing.
Yes if she isn't cell-shaded; maybe if cell-shaded.Loginer wrote:
Now that I have your attention, should I apply a cloth modifier to the skirt to make it look more realistic?
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For the top pic, what's the white space to the top right of the nose? Empty space?
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It's a white hole. It expands when you miss notes, and kills you dead if you fail the song.YoshiKart wrote:
For the top pic, what's the white space to the top right of the nose? Empty space?
Or a "bug" I already fixed. D:
Edit: A 10 cm long Pippi model without the skirt would apparently have a volume of circa 17 cubic cm. That means an IRL model would cost about $30 on Shapeways. Is this win?
Edit2: Last time I tried using Mesh Smooth on top of Unwrap UVW (Texture aligner), it screwed up the textures. Looks like I did something wrong, so forget about all that can't-fix-this-later crap.
Edit3: Very little progress done lately (16 October ATM), so to make up for it, here's a screenshot of Pippi's secret, not-so-unlockable steel form. >:3
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I've taken a bunch of placeholder textures and applied them to the model. Here's the result (Warning: Face will give you nightmares): http://up.ppy.sh/files/pippicreepy.png
Now, I'll need two things: Suggestions, and help.
Suggestions: I was thinking about making the little buttons on the shoes into actual buttons rather than a texture, since they look way too flat like this. The circle on the belt will also be a mesh. I'm also going to improve the zipper texture. Also, don't worry about the face being kind of fucked up, I'll fix that. Any suggestions beyond this?
Help: Good 2D artists. The face. Help me. Now. D:
Basically, I need an eye and a mouth. They have to be colored and in the format PNG. Transparent background would be preferable, but if that's not possible, a background with the RGB value #FCD8B4 (252 216 180) would work, too.
Download: Bernstein & Ruegger - Freakazoid! (Nicogeta) [Footix's Normal].osu
Now, I'll need two things: Suggestions, and help.
Suggestions: I was thinking about making the little buttons on the shoes into actual buttons rather than a texture, since they look way too flat like this. The circle on the belt will also be a mesh. I'm also going to improve the zipper texture. Also, don't worry about the face being kind of fucked up, I'll fix that. Any suggestions beyond this?
Help: Good 2D artists. The face. Help me. Now. D:
Basically, I need an eye and a mouth. They have to be colored and in the format PNG. Transparent background would be preferable, but if that's not possible, a background with the RGB value #FCD8B4 (252 216 180) would work, too.
Download: Bernstein & Ruegger - Freakazoid! (Nicogeta) [Footix's Normal].osu
I could probably do the face for you, give me a while and I'll most the results...
Heres a preview of the texture I made, this is obviously resized emensly, so I'll give you high res ones with ransparent backgrounds if you like em
Heres a preview of the texture I made, this is obviously resized emensly, so I'll give you high res ones with ransparent backgrounds if you like em
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They look a bit too "serious business", make them look more like in Sarumaru's picture/the chibi version. The eyelashes also seem a bit overdone.Loofah wrote:
I could probably do the face for you, give me a while and I'll most the results...
Heres a preview of the texture I made, this is obviously resized emensly, so I'll give you high res ones with ransparent backgrounds if you like em
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OK, I finished the new eyes for you, if you like these ones I can give a hi res transparent versions.
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Much better, but they're a bit too round. Try moving the upper part a bit to make them longer, anime-styled eyes are more rectangular.
Also, think you could add some eyebrows while you're at it?
Also, think you could add some eyebrows while you're at it?
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Going by what Loginer said in his previous post, I think he is after eyes that look similar to the character in awp's avatar.Loofah wrote:
OK, update on the eyes-
I'll send a hi res version when you want
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Yeah, although they're getting there.adamskii_uk wrote:
Going by what Loginer said in his previous post, I think he is after eyes that look similar to the character in awp's avatar.Loofah wrote:
OK, update on the eyes-
I'll send a hi res version when you want
soo..... you want lines on the inner side?
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Ok then, taht's the lines done.
any other little things that you want tweaked?
How about ideas on how to make the mouth?
any other little things that you want tweaked?
How about ideas on how to make the mouth?
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Yeah, that's what I'm after. Attached a pic; The left shape is what the eye is like ATM. The shape's supposed to be a mix between both of them.adamskii_uk wrote:
Just for the record, I'm NOT speaking on behalf of Loginer, this is just my own personal view on what he wants, going by the description he gave in his post, and by the fact that awp's avatar is pointing to the right eye (maybe a hint?).Loofah wrote:
soo..... you want lines on the inner side?
IMO, I think Loginer wants the eyes to be more a rectangular shape overall, your eyes still look a bit too rounded compared to the eyes in awp's avatar. If you just copy the shape of the eyes in awp's avatar, but create the eyes in your own style, then I think he will like it.
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adamskii_uk wrote:
LOL... that's more round than the previous version.Loofah wrote:
Ok then, taht's the lines done.
any other little things that you want tweaked?
How about ideas on how to make the mouth?
No need to cry. You're soooo close, you just need to fix the shape of the eyes.Loofah wrote:
:(
Look at the eye shape that's in the character below, and then look at the shape of the eyes that you have created. Your eyes look far too rounded in comparison. Just copy the EXACT shape of the eyes that's in the image below, but do all the eye shading, etc, in your style.
Alright then, THat means I need to completely remodle the eye, so expect an update in about 20 minutes.
Edit: OK, so it took a little longer than expected..... and looks on the most part the same...... but, I did make it a lot more squared off.
but personally I think the old one looked better
Edit: OK, so it took a little longer than expected..... and looks on the most part the same...... but, I did make it a lot more squared off.
but personally I think the old one looked better
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Much better. Do you have a higher-res version?Loofah wrote:
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Not to mention the eyes are not snapped to the grid correctly, and the overall spacing is a little tight. I can't rank this.
(Off-center a tad and could be placed a bit farther apart)
I suppose this is something for Loginer to deal with anyway, though. Posting mainly to show that I'm still watching this. ;x
(Off-center a tad and could be placed a bit farther apart)
I suppose this is something for Loginer to deal with anyway, though. Posting mainly to show that I'm still watching this. ;x
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Anyway, give me high-res versions of both attempts, and we'll vote for the version as soon as I provide some new renders.
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Wow, that's huge. <_<
Anyway, I'll modify them a bit first.
Well when I said hi res I wasn't kidding
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OK, here they are. The eyebrows on the first set and the small part at the top of the second one is messed up, but ignore that.
The new eyes look a bit weird and tired, so I'll have to vote for the old ones. :/
The new eyes look a bit weird and tired, so I'll have to vote for the old ones. :/
I've been discussing it a bit with peppy, and like I mentioned earlier, the eyes look too weathered/aged/mature. Remember, she's only 15. Her eyes should look a bit more curious/excited...there isn't quite enough energy.
@Loginer: could you tweak the tuft of hair at the front to make it a bit wider? Just a bit~
@Loginer: could you tweak the tuft of hair at the front to make it a bit wider? Just a bit~
I'm not too sure but I think the eyes could be a bit thinner, and also closer to the middle of her face.
what's with the dip in the middel of the texture? and I think that like echo said, they should be a bit closer to the middle of her face. Maybe if I add some blush she'll look younger