Hey there Charlotte! M4M as promised
[ General]
[ Futsuu]
Great job! But I have some things to add, tho...
Only some things.................
idk
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[ General]
- Background has rare resolution...maybe find one 1366x768 or 1280x720 instead?
- HP4 is a bit low for a song of this length, check this post for more detailed info about it. All credit goes to OnosakiHito
- Honestly at this BPM 8/1 breaks would be even more exhausting than putting notes at 4/1...but idk. You can delete notes such as 00:21:618 (16) - 00:25:618 (21) - to provide breaks after 1/1 patterns (I'm just being technical here...I wouldn't really delete them because of the bpm xD)
- 00:55:618 (55) - this note could be moved to 00:58:618 - so this way you stard and end the rhythm the exact same
[ Futsuu]
Great job! But I have some things to add, tho...
- 00:05:868 (11) - this could be removed to provide an appropiate break here.....
- I think it fits better if you move 00:23:118 (47) - to 00:22:868 - and delete 00:23:868 (49) - to make the rhythm transition a bit smoother...
- 00:28:868 (62) - should be moved to 00:29:118 - to maintain rhythm consistency
- 00:51:368 (103) - this might sound a bit nazi but i think you should delete to provide a small break after previous pattern
- 01:23:118 (168) - I hear no emphasizable sound here. I'd remove finisher
- 01:26:368 (173) - idk i think this note is unnecessary
Only some things.................
- 00:31:618 (89,90,91,92,93) - I suggest staying away from 5-patterns until Oni difficulty
- 00:51:743 (154,157) - Maybe remove one of these 2 to provide a break after 1/4 pattern?
- 01:26:368 (264) - Same than in Futsuu. Also I think you should extend shaker from 01:26:368 - instead
- 00:48:493 - 00:48:618 - can be extended with an extra "kd" since there is a mappable sound
- 01:26:368 (375) - Same than in previous diffs
idk
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