lol
Thank you modEdamaMe411 wrote:
ナノライプなのら!!wwwwwwwwwwwwww
さて、すいません。謝り尽くしたところでモッド行かせてもらいます。Kantan00:52:618 - ここにd推奨。BPM遅いからというものありますが、弾みがほしいと思いました。ここでdでおとすことでつぎのkが映えます。fixed
01:11:614 - Ctrl+G,,,,01:06:618 (66,67,68) - 個のコントラストに合わせるってものそうなんですが「涙するぅ」でボーカルが音をしゃくってるんで最後の音はkが妥当です。low-pitchだと思うのでkeepで。Futsuu00:02:118 (3,4) - のは始まり、00:01:868 - こっからのほうがしっくりくるんですが、、次のリフとかぶりたくないためなのかもしれないけど、個人的には移動することお勧めします。また1/2ノ2連が多いので、統一感出るかと。fixed
あとはすごいいい音なん!!・△・←れんちょん?Muzuみつからなかった!Oni00:55:743 (239) - これを00:55:493 - に移動!00:56:118 (241,242,243) - のdkkが心地いいので、其の前は絶対単発のがいいです。結構お勧めします。うーん dkd kdkdd k dkkに変えてみようかと思ったけど、他にもそういう意見が出てきたら変えるかもしれません。
いじょうです!!
ミスがほぼない良譜面~!一つあげます
14:43 Charlotte: hi niko
14:43 Niko-nyan: hi :)
14:44 Charlotte: that pic LOL stop graping that ;w;
14:44 Charlotte: Waht do you mean...?
14:44 Niko-nyan: if you know what i mean
14:44 Niko-nyan: :< the hand :( is graping that b**bs :(
14:47 Charlotte: btw,NM=not accept now?
14:47 Niko-nyan: yes ;w; not really accept few of NM
14:59 Charlotte: okay.If I maked new map,let's m4m
14:59 Niko-nyan: btw want to do irc for a while?
15:01 Charlotte: I'm not good at Enlish & I'm slow.so Irc is hard to me
15:01 Niko-nyan: ;w; it's ok i just give the mod like a newb :)
15:02 *Niko-nyan is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/756622 nano.RIPE - Kodama Kotodama [Oni]]
15:02 Charlotte: irc?
15:02 Niko-nyan: yes if you want
15:03 Niko-nyan: just few suggestion that i can give to you
15:03 Charlotte: oh,,Thanks!
15:04 Niko-nyan: 00:03:368 (11,12) - change to dk ?
15:04 Niko-nyan: the vocal a bit dk for me
15:04 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/756622 nano.RIPE - Kodama Kotodama [Oni]]
15:08 Charlotte: hmm...dk is follow the vocal.but,dk kd is Plays better to me...so keep now.
15:09 Charlotte: If other modder said this suggestion,I'll change it
15:10 Niko-nyan: 00:55:618 - i hear the guitar sound in here but im not sure with the pattern (prefer dkd)
15:11 Charlotte: dkd kdd dkd dkk?
15:11 Niko-nyan: yes
15:12 Charlotte: okay fixed
15:14 Niko-nyan: i prefer Kantan HP 4 as Raiden said
15:14 Niko-nyan: or 5
15:15 Charlotte: 5 is good?
15:15 Niko-nyan: yes 5 is good for now
15:15 Niko-nyan: because HP 4 sometimes 1/4 or 1/3 can pass
15:16 Charlotte: Kantan5-Futsuu5-Muzu-6-Oni6 is good?
15:16 Charlotte: (HP)
15:16 Niko-nyan: uhm it's fine
15:16 Niko-nyan: 5-5-6-6
15:16 Charlotte: okay
15:16 Niko-nyan: consider of Drain time
Thank you modRaiden wrote:
Hey there Charlotte! M4M as promised
[ General][ Kantan]
- Background has rare resolution...maybe find one 1366x768 or 1280x720 instead? eh? rare? I think good size.
Not much more to add.......................map is perfect
- HP4 is a bit low for a song of this length, check this post for more detailed info about it. All credit goes to OnosakiHito
- Honestly at this BPM 8/1 breaks would be even more exhausting than putting notes at 4/1...but idk. You can delete notes such as 00:21:618 (16) - 00:25:618 (21) - to provide breaks after 1/1 patterns (I'm just being technical here...I wouldn't really delete them because of the bpm xD) nope.because,slow bpm.
- 00:55:618 (55) - this note could be moved to 00:58:618 - so this way you stard and end the rhythm the exact same hmm...I think bit hard so no change
[ Futsuu]
Great job! But I have some things to add, tho...[ Muzukashii]
- 00:05:868 (11) - this could be removed to provide an appropiate break here..... nope.
- I think it fits better if you move 00:23:118 (47) - to 00:22:868 - and delete 00:23:868 (49) - to make the rhythm transition a bit smoother... fixed
- 00:28:868 (62) - should be moved to 00:29:118 - to maintain rhythm consistency fixed
- 00:51:368 (103) - this might sound a bit nazi but i think you should delete to provide a small break after previous pattern fixed
- 01:23:118 (168) - I hear no emphasizable sound here. I'd remove finisher fixed
- 01:26:368 (173) - idk i think this note is unnecessary hmm...nope.but,If other modder said this suggestion,I'll change it?
Only some things.................[ Oni]
- 00:31:618 (89,90,91,92,93) - I suggest staying away from 5-patterns until Oni difficulty hmm...I changed ddk k→kkkkk.so I wait for other suggestion.
- 00:51:743 (154,157) - Maybe remove one of these 2 to provide a break after 1/4 pattern? fixed
- 01:26:368 (264) - Same than in Futsuu. Also I think you should extend shaker from 01:26:368 - instead ^
Map should be ready for bubble ≧ヘ≦
- 00:48:493 - 00:48:618 - can be extended with an extra "kd" since there is a mappable sound nope.because,little break time.
- 01:26:368 (375) - Same than in previous diffs ^
idk
.................
(>^_^)>
yuzu__rinrin wrote:
チャットで依頼されたのでModしに来ました~
ひとつの提案として見てもらえればありがたいです。あまり参考にならない所や、既出があったらすいません。。。
KantanFutsuu
- 01:11:118 (72) - dに変更 fixed
- 01:11:618 (73) - kに変更、前のdkdにあわせてkdkにしたらいいのでは?と思ったので。 kdkもいいと思ったのですが、3つ目のnotesが減速しているように感じたのでdでkddでいこうと思います。
Muzukashii
- 00:21:118 (43) - dに変更 kkも悪くない配置だと思うので、とりあえずno changeで同様の意見がでてきたら、変えるかもしれません。
- 00:27:868 (58) - kに変更 dk ddも主観ですが、悪くない配置だと思います。また単調になるのを避けるためでもあります。
- 00:44:118 (89) - kに変更、その前まで後ろの音に合わせていたので。fixed
Oni
- 00:02:868 (8) - dに変更 no change
- 00:03:118 (9) - kに変更 kkがいいと感じたので、ここはfixed ↑keepです。
- 00:03:493 (10) - dに変更 ボーカルに合わるとこうなると思います。fixed
- 00:02:868 (9) - dに変更 Muzukashiiと同様の理由です。
- 00:03:118 (10) - kに変更^
- 00:35:743 (146) - kに変更dkでいまのところはいこうと思います。
- 00:35:868 (147) - dに変更^
- 00:44:118 (184,185,186) - ddkからkddに変えてみてはどうでしょう? fixed
この曲と譜面すごく好きなのでランクド期待してます :3 :3
頑張ってください!ありがとうございます
Thank you modR_Gray wrote:
こんにちは。
Oniしかモッドしないけど許してつかあさい。Oni00:03:118 - d -> k fixed
00:04:118 - d -> k うーん、ここはdでのほうが良いと感じました。
00:06:118 - d -> k ^
00:10:868 - d -> k fixed
この周辺は高い音で取りたかった、それだけです。
00:04:368 や 00:06:368 にノーツを置かないならk主体(特に 00:04:118 や 00:06:118 は)で取るとスッキリする(個人的な感想)。
00:27:743 - move to 00:27:618
この辺は確かに変化は欲しいですけど2-2ならともかく2-4は無茶感があったので3×3で手を打つのもありかなと。3-3のパターンでいこうと思います。
01:08:618 - この辺ですが、気合入った小節は頭がdの単音でしたがここで3連になっていて違和感なので一先ず3-1から1-3にした方がいいと思いました。
↓具体的には 01:08:743 のkをdにして 01:08:993 に移動など・・・。
確かにそうですね...変更しました。
では、頑張ってください。ありがとうございます
Thank you modbank78952 wrote:
Hi o/
PM request =w=
sorry for my mod is not helpful (and i can't mod kantan,futsuu) okay~
[general]
BG resolution recommend 1336*768 but you use 1120*768 oh...I'm baka.I changed 1280*720
[Oni]
00:10:118 (39) k is better? fixed
00:10:368 (40) d is better? ^
00:34:118 (138) k nope.
01:12:118 (271) k fixed
01:04:618 (278) D
[Muzukashii]
00:43:868 (127) k fixed
00:51:118 (151) k nope.I think don is good.
01:04:618 (195) D fixed
Thank you modgame rock wrote:
Hi Charlotte ^w^, Request online~
d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
[ Kantan]
00:27:118 - Change to k because this part have a sound "Clap". And here 00:27:618 - Change to d. fixed
00:55:118 - Change to k for to follow the rhythm and for the consistency. I changed pattern
01:18:618 - Add a d for the rhythm and for the patterns. I added k
[ Futsuu]
00:51:118 - Ctrl G with 00:51:618 - nope
00:58:118 - Ctrl G with 00:58:618 - ^
[ Muzukashii]
00:44:118 - Change to k is better. I changed bank's suggestion.so here is no change
[ Oni]
00:50:618 - Change to k for the rhythm un this part. nope
Great Beatmap, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
HimeragiKarin wrote:
Hi~Charlotte :3 Mod que from game pm~KantanPerfect√Futsuu00:05:868 (11) - move 00:06:368 - ? nope.follow the drum.
00:07:118 (14) - move 00:07:368 - ? nope.I think 1/1-pattern is good.
00:51:118 (101,102) - ctrl+g ? And 00:51:618 (102) - move 00:51:368 - ? nope.I pick up instrumental
00:55:118 (109,110) - ^ ^Muzukashii00:52:118 (155) - d? nope.I think kat is good.OniGood luck!Try to add 00:24:243 - d00:24:368 - k nope.for break time.
00:55:243 (236) - k? fixed
01:17:618 (344) - ^ nope.I think don is good.
Thank you modPloenar wrote:
呼べば何処にも行きます!チャットでのリクエストで来ました。
[Kantan][Futsuu]
- 00:06:618 - ちょっと空いている気がしますのでnote追加。 fixed
- 00:28:618 (25) - d for consistency. fixed
[Muzukashii]
- 00:23:618 - メロディーに合わせてこうするのはどうですか?
良いと思ったのですが、少し休憩を挟みたいためno changeで- 00:28:618 (60) - d for consistency? fixed
[Oni]
- 00:50:618 (150) - k to follow vocal? fixed
- 01:13:368 (323) - k to follow vocal. fixed
- 01:21:993 (362) - k? it would be not bad in my opinion.
nopefixed
これで全部です。短いModすみません。
climbb65588 wrote:
Taiko mod~
[Oni]
00:37:493 (153) - k? nope
00:47:493 - add a d here? hmm...nice idea.but,little hard...? so keep.
01:22:118 (363) - k? I use plo's suggestion.so no change
[Futsuu]
00:06:118 (12) - k? nope.follow the drum.
00:34:118 (71) - k? nope.I think don is fit.
The others look fine~
Thank you modkoyomi_222 wrote:
チャットより!
[Kantan]
01:21:618 - K を追加 後ろのきーこーえーるーよーのえのところでKをとっていたので ここは4/1の休憩時間で、最初の音だけ拾おうと思うのでno changeで
[Muzukashi]
00:36:118 (105) - change d ? 少し音が下がってるように感じたので 少し下がっているのですが、00:36:616 - ここでがくっと下がってると思いますので、まだkでもいいと思いましたのでno changeで
[Oni]
00:09:368 (36) - change d ? 自分的にまとまってる感じになるかな?と思いました この辺りは高めのボーカル拾おうと思っているので今のところはkでいこうと思います。
00:09:868 (38) - change d ? ^ ^
00:11:368 (43) - change d ? ^ ^
元からいいマップなので参考程度に見てください ランクド頑張って下さい!
Apl wrote:
Hello.Kantan
01:04:118 - add o これはKantanなのであってもなくても良いです。他の難易度も含めてここに何か欲しいと思いました。うーん、この音取ると浮く感じがするのでno changeで
01:11:618 - o donのほうが合うと思います。Futsuu
01:04:118 - add o ^
01:19:368 - move to 01:19:618 - fixedMuzukashii
01:04:118 - add o or ooo ^Oni
01:04:118 - add o or ooo ^
01:08:368 (299,300) - Ctrl+G fixed
(๑°◡°๑)
Thank you modNyan wrote:
[Kantan]
00:16:618 (11) - add Finish fixed
[Futsuu]
00:16:618 (32) - add Finish fixed
00:17:868 (35,36,37,38,39) - k _ d _ d d k instead of k d _ d _ d k hmm...nice idea...but,no change for rhythm of consistency
00:32:618 (68) - add Finish fixed
01:19:618 - add a don fixed
01:20:618 (162) - remove Finish hmm...nope.
01:22:118 - add a big kat ^
01:25:118 (169) - remove FInish ^
[Muzu]
00:16:618 (45) - add Finish fixed
00:31:618 (89,90,91,92,93) - d kkk fixed
01:20:618 (248) - remove Finish ^
01:25:118 (259) - remove Finish ^
[Oni]
00:16:618 (54) - add Finish fixed
00:47:368 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204) - dkk ddkkddd nope
01:20:618 (359) - remove Finish ^
01:25:118 (372) - remove Finish ^
Thank you modxtrem3x wrote:
Request via In-Game (M4M)
_____________________________________________________
General:
don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K
_____________________________________________________
Kantan:
Same indication about Spinner in 01:26:618 fixed.
_____________________________________________________
Futsuu:
00:11:868 - kdkd -> kkdd
00:48:618 - Finish Notenope.fixed
01:26:618 - Reduce spinner until 01:28:118- (focusing BG sound) -- or reduce until 01:27:868- (focusing vocal sound) okay.I changed focusing BG sounds.
_____________________________________________________
Muzukashii:
00:03:493 (10,11) - ctrl+g (same reason in Oni about lyric) fixed
00:11:868 - kdkd -> kkdd fixed
00:44:368 (128,129) - ctrl+g (vocal sound) nope.I think kdkd is good.
00:46:868 - Change to d
00:47:118 - Change to d fixed
00:47:368 - Change to k
00:47:743 - Move to 00:47:493-
00:48:118 - Change to k
00:48:243 - k (all this sequence is better imo)
hmm...no change.but,If other modder said this suggestion,I'll change it?
00:48:618 - Finish Notenope.fixed
01:11:368 - ctrl+g with next note (iki o su~ru~u!!) I think low-pitch.so no change.
01:26:618 - Reduce spinner until 01:28:118- (focusing BG sound) -- or reduce until 01:27:868- (focusing vocal sound) fixed
_____________________________________________________
Oni:
00:03:368 - ctrl+g (shi!! -- high) fixed
00:03:743 - Same (no~ ... low) ^
00:12:118 (46,47) - ctrl+g (ra!! u~ yu~ ... high-low-low) fixed
00:47:493 - k (or is intentional?) nope.for little break time.
00:47:868 - kkdd -> ddkk (follow drums is better)
00:48:618 - Finish Note (come on is really notable this)no change.for little break time.I changed pattern.fixed
01:13:493 - Move to 01:13:993- no change.for consistency 01:08:868 (301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308) -
01:17:618 - Move to 01:17:743- (focusing with next 4 notes in 01:19:243- ) nope.I think little strange.
01:20:118 - Move to 01:19:993- (consistent with all previous sequence since 01:15:868- ) nope.I think 1/2-pattern is good.
01:20:243 - add note ^
01:26:618 - Reduce spinner until 01:28:118- (focusing BG sound) -- or reduce until 01:27:868- (focusing vocal sound) fixed
_____________________________________________________
Flying Pan wrote:
hello, from chat in game. here's the mod as requested~
[Metadata]
add these to tag:
- Jun Sasaki (Composer) added
- Kimiko (Lyrics and Composer) added
- Masayuki Fukutomi (Arranger) probably...no need?
source
[Timing]
delete green line at 01:28:118 - 01:28:618 - and 01:28:868 - well, what's the purpose in changing volume when the song already finished? (because of last mod from xtrem3x i think) fixed
[Kantan]
00:02:618 (2) - change this to k because different chord than 00:00:618 (1) - and for reverse consistency with 00:08:618 (6,7) - I think don is good.
00:04:618 (3) - may as well change this to d kat is good.
00:17:618 (12) - change to k. sounds similar with 00:19:618 (15) - nope.
00:21:618 (17) - ^ ^
00:25:618 (22) - but in this note keep it d because different drumming play yes.~ I think don is good.
00:24:618 (21) - and do you think put finisher in this note is loud? because i think it need to emphasize the change in drum play fixed
00:39:618 (37) - change to d for lower pitch? fixed
00:47:618 (46) - delete for break and let the drum be a shadow notes fixed
01:01:618 - in contrast, add something here because feel really weird if empty nope.I think no need notes.
01:10:618 (72,73,74) - ddk would be better variation because at 01:11:618 (74) - is higher pitch than 01:07:618 (69) - fixed
01:20:618 (84) - remove the finisher. because the loud part is at 01:21:118 - and it is a shadow note there nope.
01:21:618 - and add something here. k would be better nope.for 4/1 break time.
01:19:618 (83) - change to k considering higher pitch than 01:20:618 (84) - (if you apply the mod before (i suggest to apply tho because the finisher is annoying)) nope.
[Futsuu]
01:20:618 (164) - remove finisher, hmm...I think again.
01:25:118 (171) - remove finisher, the loudness is annoying >< ^
01:22:118 - can add K nope.
01:26:368 () - move to 01:26:118 - ^
00:12:368 (25) - delete this so it consistent with 00:04:368 - i know there's a little different in vocal lyric but, for futsuu, 4 notes at 1/2 rhytm here doesn't sounds nice to me. especially because it's still the beginning, the music still calm, and to give difference with muzu. fixed.because,Futsuu & Muzukashii & Oni = same pattern.so removed notes.
00:24:618 (49) - add finisher, same reason as kantan fixed
00:27:868 (58,59) - kk instead of dd? nope.
00:43:868 (88) - change to k considering the pitch is still relatively high ^
00:51:118 (102,103) - can be swapped to follow drum after 00:50:118 (99,100,101) - and i think it's better rather than following background ukulele sound nope.I think d-d-k-k is good.
00:55:118 (109,110) - can be swapped ^
00:53:868 (106) - delete so consistent with 00:49:868 - nope.follow the vocal.
00:54:118 () - change to k nope.
00:59:118 (115,116) - dd instead of kk since the pitch is dropping I think kk is good.
[Muzukashii]
01:20:618 (247) - should i say it again? oh okay. remove finisher. same as Futsuu
01:21:993 (250) - move to 01:22:118 - and change to K eh? nope.
01:25:118 (258) - remove finisher :3 same as Futsuu
01:26:618 - starting muzu, this can be a finisher note and the spinner start at 01:26:868 - nope.
00:24:618 (70) - finisher same reason as kantan fixed
00:51:868 (153) - change to d. 4 kat in a row is many.. okay.changed pattern.
the rest seems fine to me. what's bugging me is only the ending.
[Oni]
00:24:618 (94) - finish fixed
00:24:368 - i think it's fine to add note here. who needs long break in oni yeah
00:27:618 (110) - k fits better with the vocal which is going up probably low-pitch.so no change.
00:41:368 (169) - change this to k considering the pitch is still as high as 00:41:118 (168) - nope
00:43:368 (180) - ^ nope
do something at the ending again. consider again where you should put emphasis with big notes and where is not
that's all from me. Good luck!
Grimbow wrote:
This is a little overdue, my apologies!
d - Small don (red note)
D - Big don (red note with a finish)
k - Small kat (blue note)
K - Big kat (blue note with a finish)
Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion
Blue is a comment
[Kantan]
Really nice difficulty! I like the way it's mapped
00:24:618 (21) - Add a finisher onto this note? There are cymbal crashes in the drum track and it is also a section change where this note lands, so it would make for nice emphasis on that
01:12:618 (75) - Add a finish onto this note also? It is similar to the start of the chorus so I added a finish to it and it felt like it fit well with the map, but it's just a suggestion as the Kiai already has a few finishers in it so I'm not sure if you want to add one more
All fixed
[Futsuu]
00:24:618 (50) - Add a finisher onto this note for the same reason as the kantan suggestion
00:30:368 (64) - Add a finisher onto this note, this part in the music is emphasized by the instruments hitting a higher note and then having a short break after, so I feel the finisher fits nicely onto this note with this in mind. You also have one here on all the other difficulties
00:54:118 (107,108) - Ctrl+g these two notes. The vocals here get higher then lower, and there is also a snare hit at 00:54:118 - so mapping it as kkdd seems to follow the flow in vocals and also the sound of the drums nicely
01:12:618 (145) - Add a finish onto this note? It is similar to the start of the chorus so I added a finish to it and it felt like it fit well with the map, but it's just a suggestion as the Kiai already has a few finishers in it so I'm not sure if you want to add one more
All fixed
[Muzukashii]
00:05:618 (16,17,18,19) - Change these notes to k's, the little roll on the drums here is played on the snare and k's are more suited to map this kind of sound than d's (Like you did at 00:31:868 (90,91,92) - and 00:47:618 (138,139,140) - ) I changed kkk d
00:24:618 (70) - Add a finisher onto this note for the same reason as the previous difficulties fixed
00:44:118 (127,128) - Ctrl+g these two notes. The vocals here get higher then lower, and there is also a snare hit at 00:44:118 - so mapping it as kkdd seems to follow the flow in vocals and also the sound of the drums nicely fixed
01:12:618 (220) - Add a finish onto this note? It is similar to the start of the chorus so I added a finish to it and it felt like it fit well with the map, but it's just a suggestion as the Kiai already has a few finishers in it so I'm not sure if you want to add one more fixed
[Oni]
00:05:493 - Add a k here. In doing so, you'll be mapping the whole drum fill and making this section a little harder, but I feel like it's a nice addition to the flow of the map. Also, there is a 1/1 break shortly afterwards so it isn't too demanding as well
00:24:618 (94) - Add a finisher onto this note for the same reason as the previous difficulties
01:12:618 (319) - Add a finish onto this note? It is similar to the start of the chorus so I added a finish to it and it felt like it fit well with the map, but it's just a suggestion as the Kiai already has a few finishers in it so I'm not sure if you want to add one more
All fixed
This is a really nice and calm mapset and I had a lot of fun playing it and modding it! Good luck on the rank and here's a star to help you on your way (∩`-´)⊃━.*・。゚
Thank you modPatZar wrote:
konichiwa, sorry for late mod konichiwa
[General]
01:28:618 - and 01:28:868 - both are useless greenlines delete them. fixed
and well HPOD spread have changed and i have to disagree with these guide line lol =3=
[Oni]
01:19:243 (352,353,354,355) - dkdd is better, 01:19:493 (354,355,356) - have neutral pitching, so it would be good as it. I changed kkdk
nice oni.
[Muzukashii]
00:18:618 (51) - move this don 1/2 forward and change it as kat, and it would be good at consistency. nope.
nothing major problem for me.
[Futsuu]
00:12:368 (25) - delete this one, the sound seems complicated imo. fixed
00:27:868 (57) - kat, please be consistent is better than random note, also this is futsuu. nope.
00:49:118 (97) - move this kat 1/1 forward, and seems better than previous for me. ^
00:51:618 (102) - move this to 00:51:368 (102) - , following vocal a bit yes.your suggestion is follow the vocal.but,I take backsound.
01:26:368 (172) - delete this, without don is better when i playing. hmm...think again.
[kantan]
nothing serious problem here, but why from 00:16:618 (11) - to 00:30:368 (29) - is too hard. probably you can reduce some notes that can make this easy.
I removed some notes.
good luck charlotte!
Thank you modMidSoul wrote:
Hi, from In-game chat, お待たせしました~m( _ _)m
[Kantan]
00:56:118 (56) - del ?
・このkで繋ぐ一帯に入るまでは休息がほどほどにありそのうえで2/1上のアップダウン周期に沿うものだったのですが、この付近に入ってから休息がないうえに2/1ステップ周期に乗ってます。突然に難易度が上がるので休憩を作っても良いのではないでしょうか。これにより後続の形が少し変わるかもしれませんが‥
確かに、そうですね。少し保留にさせて下さい。
[Futsuu]
great map
特にいうべき点が見つかりませんでした。
配置箇所について一定の規則性があり、かつカラーリングはところどころ音程によらずパターンできているものなのか不規則性があります。そのうえで大きな違和感を生み出さない良い譜面だと思います。 ありがとうございます。
[Muzukashii]
00:59:868 (180,181,182,183) - dkkd > kddk fixed
・周辺の音取りからボーカル取りでkに回帰するパターンが多く、この位置だけ逆になっているな…と感じたためです。
01:26:368 (375) - k ? fixed
・ボーカルの音程に合わせてkとしてもいいかもしれません。
[Oni]
00:50:618 (213,214,215,216) - dd dk > ddd k 確かに2連より3連のがいいですね、fixed
・曲調からあまり2連はふさわしくないように聞こえますがどうでしょうか。
00:54:118 (230,231) - k d fixed
・直前の2連がボーカルによる変調が大きいので続いているこの場所の音程変化もボーカル寄りに合わせてやった方がいいと思います。
00:56:118 (241,242,243) - ddk fixed
・中央のノーツを置くにあたってこの位置から音が変わる要素がなくほとんどの音が長音であるため、前のdを伸ばして取るのが自然だと思います。
00:56:868 (244,245) - k d > d k or k k Muzukashiiはkkで入れてたのですが、dkで統一します。
・どの音をとってもピッチが上昇している音が非常に多いため、dkとするのを推奨します。(ボーカルは並行なのでkkでもよいかと思います。)
01:19:993 - add k ? 入れてみました!
・(付近に)目立つスネアがあるのでとってもいいかもしれません。演奏がズレているのでこういったところでの取り方は私も経験不足なところがあり何とも言えませんが‥
01:26:368 (375) - k ? fixed
・ボーカルの音程に合わせてkとしてもいいかもしれません。
GL☆Ξ
Thank you modNishizumi wrote:
Hi Charlotte o/ as you requested via chat in-game
[Kantan][Futsuu]
- 00:08:618 - change to d ? same you did as 00:00:618 fixed
[Muzukashii]
- 01:25:118 - remove finish ? there is no emphasis, and also unnecessary to give a big note in here because the sound is soft on vocal and music fixed
[Oni]
- 00:21:118 - change to d ? to consistency with 00:19:118 nope.
- 01:21:993 - change to k ? the vocal sound seems goes up fixed
- 01:25:118 - same as futsuu fixed
hopefully it would help you, good luck for ranked XD
- 00:47:743 - there is no anything sound, especially you follow the drum sound in this part. move it to 00:47:493 - to follow the drum ? and i think change to k is sounds nicer okay.fixed
- 01:25:118 - same as futsuu fixed
Thank you modOzzyOzrock wrote:
Hi Charlotte!! :3
[Oni][Muzukashii]
- 00:05:868 (24,25) - k for both? I think drum snare there makes a nice sound to map to.
nope.I think kkddd d is good~I changed kkddd k- 00:35:868 (148) - d? So you can have lowering effect, and some nicer flow. fixed
- 00:41:368 (170) - k? For similar reason :33 just suggestions that don't hurt flow too much but allow following vocals a little nicer? fixed
- 00:47:868 (201,202,203,204,205) - Sounds more like ddkkd no? fixed
- 01:08:368 (300) - Delete this note to make breaks consistent in kiai? This part has no breaks, but in the rest of kiai, 01:12:118 and 01:15:618 have breaks. hmm...I hear vocal...but,fixed for break time.
[Futsuu]
- OD 5 should be fine here too. Save OD 4 for both lower diffs. It doesn't need to go below that since there is a lot of space between notes. I changed OD5
[Kantan]
- OD 4 as mentioned.
- 00:23:618 (47) - I think it's a better break if this is moved to 00:23:368 and then delete 00:24:118 (48) - ? Especially since this is a lot of notes. fixed
01:26:368 (171) - Not needed? fixedGood mapset. Just the little inconsistensies in break stuff and suggestions! Call me back after.
- Also OD 4. Going to 3 is ok too, but 4 is better to teach players accuracy, and is still easy. I changed OD4
Thank you modNardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.
- [Kantan]
- 00:58:618 - maybe add d here to follow the vocal ? okay,added notes.but,little hard...? Is it okay?
- 01:12:618 (73) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized imo. hmm...okay fixed.
- [Futsuu]
- 00:06:118 (12,13) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the drums in a way better. fixed
- 00:16:118 (30) - consider removing finish ? It sounds unnecessary to use a big note here. okay,fixed.
- 00:27:868 (56) - you may change this note to k to make it consistent with 00:25:868 (51) - as the sounds are similar. fixed
- 00:48:118 (94) - maybe k to follow the snare there ? fixed
- 01:12:618 (143) - same as Kantan fixed
- 01:18:618 (157) - k would accompany the high-pitched vocal nicely imo. oh...nice~ fixed.
- [Muzukashii]
- 00:16:118 (44) - same as Futsuu fixed
- 00:50:118 (147,148) - swapping these notes to d k would fit the increasing pitch of vocal well. okay,fixed
- 00:58:618 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkk d d would sound better as the vocal at 00:58:618 - is really high-pitched. fixed
- 01:12:618 (220) - same as Kantan fixed
- [Oni]
You may call me back after that~
- 00:16:118 (54) - same as Futsuu fixed
- 00:51:618 (219,220,221,222,223,224) - I think kdd kkd would match the instrument better. The second triplet sounds higher-pitched than the first. fixed
- 01:12:618 (319) - same as Kantan fixed
- 01:19:368 (353) - consider changing this note to d for the vocal ? It would result in a smoother flow as well imo. okay,fixed