MidSoul wrote:

Hi, from In-game chat, お待たせしました~m( _ _)m

[Kantan]
00:56:118 (56) - del ?
・このkで繋ぐ一帯に入るまでは休息がほどほどにありそのうえで2/1上のアップダウン周期に沿うものだったのですが、この付近に入ってから休息がないうえに2/1ステップ周期に乗ってます。突然に難易度が上がるので休憩を作っても良いのではないでしょうか。これにより後続の形が少し変わるかもしれませんが‥

確かに、そうですね。少し保留にさせて下さい。


[Futsuu]
great map
特にいうべき点が見つかりませんでした。
配置箇所について一定の規則性があり、かつカラーリングはところどころ音程によらずパターンできているものなのか不規則性があります。そのうえで大きな違和感を生み出さない良い譜面だと思います。 ありがとうございます。


[Muzukashii]
00:59:868 (180,181,182,183) - dkkd > kddk fixed
・周辺の音取りからボーカル取りでkに回帰するパターンが多く、この位置だけ逆になっているな…と感じたためです。

01:26:368 (375) - k ? fixed
・ボーカルの音程に合わせてkとしてもいいかもしれません。


[Oni]
00:50:618 (213,214,215,216) - dd dk > ddd k 確かに2連より3連のがいいですね、fixed
・曲調からあまり2連はふさわしくないように聞こえますがどうでしょうか。

00:54:118 (230,231) - k d fixed
・直前の2連がボーカルによる変調が大きいので続いているこの場所の音程変化もボーカル寄りに合わせてやった方がいいと思います。

00:56:118 (241,242,243) - ddk fixed
・中央のノーツを置くにあたってこの位置から音が変わる要素がなくほとんどの音が長音であるため、前のdを伸ばして取るのが自然だと思います。

00:56:868 (244,245) - k d > d k or k k Muzukashiiはkkで入れてたのですが、dkで統一します。
・どの音をとってもピッチが上昇している音が非常に多いため、dkとするのを推奨します。(ボーカルは並行なのでkkでもよいかと思います。)

01:19:993 - add k ? 入れてみました!
・(付近に)目立つスネアがあるのでとってもいいかもしれません。演奏がズレているのでこういったところでの取り方は私も経験不足なところがあり何とも言えませんが‥

01:26:368 (375) - k ? fixed
・ボーカルの音程に合わせてkとしてもいいかもしれません。

GL☆Ξ

1. 00:08:618 - change to d ? same you did as 00:00:618

1. 01:25:118 - remove finish ? there is no emphasis, and also unnecessary to give a big note in here because the sound is soft on vocal and music

1. 00:21:118 - change to d ? to consistency with 00:19:118
   
2. 01:21:993 - change to k ? the vocal sound seems goes up
   
3. 01:25:118 - same as futsuu

1. 00:47:743 - there is no anything sound, especially you follow the drum sound in this part. move it to 00:47:493 - to follow the drum ? and i think change to k is sounds nicer
   
2. 01:25:118 - same as futsuu

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi Charlotte o/ as you requested via chat in-game

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:618 - change to d ? same you did as 00:00:618 fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 01:25:118 - remove finish ? there is no emphasis, and also unnecessary to give a big note in here because the sound is soft on vocal and music fixed

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:21:118 - change to d ? to consistency with 00:19:118 nope.
   
2. 01:21:993 - change to k ? the vocal sound seems goes up fixed
   
3. 01:25:118 - same as futsuu fixed

[Oni]

1. 00:47:743 - there is no anything sound, especially you follow the drum sound in this part. move it to 00:47:493 - to follow the drum ? and i think change to k is sounds nicer okay.fixed
   
2. 01:25:118 - same as futsuu fixed

hopefully it would help you, good luck for ranked XD

1. 00:05:868 (24,25) - k for both? I think drum snare there makes a nice sound to map to.
2. 00:35:868 (148) - d? So you can have lowering effect, and some nicer flow.
3. 00:41:368 (170) - k? For similar reason :33 just suggestions that don't hurt flow too much but allow following vocals a little nicer?
4. 00:47:868 (201,202,203,204,205) - Sounds more like ddkkd no?
5. 01:08:368 (300) - Delete this note to make breaks consistent in kiai? This part has no breaks, but in the rest of kiai, 01:12:118 and 01:15:618 have breaks.

1. OD 5 should be fine here too. Save OD 4 for both lower diffs. It doesn't need to go below that since there is a lot of space between notes.

1. OD 4 as mentioned.
2. 00:23:618 (47) - I think it's a better break if this is moved to 00:23:368 and then delete 00:24:118 (48) - ? Especially since this is a lot of notes.
   01:26:368 (171) - Not needed?

1. Also OD 4. Going to 3 is ok too, but 4 is better to teach players accuracy, and is still easy.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hi Charlotte!! :3

[Oni]

1. 00:05:868 (24,25) - k for both? I think drum snare there makes a nice sound to map to. nope.I think kkddd d is good~ I changed kkddd k
2. 00:35:868 (148) - d? So you can have lowering effect, and some nicer flow. fixed
3. 00:41:368 (170) - k? For similar reason :33 just suggestions that don't hurt flow too much but allow following vocals a little nicer? fixed
4. 00:47:868 (201,202,203,204,205) - Sounds more like ddkkd no? fixed
5. 01:08:368 (300) - Delete this note to make breaks consistent in kiai? This part has no breaks, but in the rest of kiai, 01:12:118 and 01:15:618 have breaks. hmm...I hear vocal...but,fixed for break time.

[Muzukashii]

1. OD 5 should be fine here too. Save OD 4 for both lower diffs. It doesn't need to go below that since there is a lot of space between notes. I changed OD5

[Futsuu]

1. OD 4 as mentioned.
2. 00:23:618 (47) - I think it's a better break if this is moved to 00:23:368 and then delete 00:24:118 (48) - ? Especially since this is a lot of notes. fixed
   01:26:368 (171) - Not needed? fixed

[Kantan]

1. Also OD 4. Going to 3 is ok too, but 4 is better to teach players accuracy, and is still easy. I changed OD4

Good mapset. Just the little inconsistensies in break stuff and suggestions! Call me back after.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:58:618 - maybe add d here to follow the vocal ?
2. 01:12:618 (73) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized imo.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:06:118 (12,13) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the drums in a way better.
2. 00:16:118 (30) - consider removing finish ? It sounds unnecessary to use a big note here.
3. 00:27:868 (56) - you may change this note to k to make it consistent with 00:25:868 (51) - as the sounds are similar.
4. 00:48:118 (94) - maybe k to follow the snare there ?
5. 01:12:618 (143) - same as Kantan
6. 01:18:618 (157) - k would accompany the high-pitched vocal nicely imo.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:118 (44) - same as Futsuu
2. 00:50:118 (147,148) - swapping these notes to d k would fit the increasing pitch of vocal well.
3. 00:58:618 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkk d d would sound better as the vocal at 00:58:618 - is really high-pitched.
4. 01:12:618 (220) - same as Kantan

• [Oni]

1. 00:16:118 (54) - same as Futsuu
2. 00:51:618 (219,220,221,222,223,224) - I think kdd kkd would match the instrument better. The second triplet sounds higher-pitched than the first.
3. 01:12:618 (319) - same as Kantan
4. 01:19:368 (353) - consider changing this note to d for the vocal ? It would result in a smoother flow as well imo.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:58:618 - maybe add d here to follow the vocal ? okay,added notes.but,little hard...? Is it okay?
2. 01:12:618 (73) - consider removing finish here ? A bit overemphasized imo. hmm...okay fixed.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:06:118 (12,13) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the drums in a way better. fixed
2. 00:16:118 (30) - consider removing finish ? It sounds unnecessary to use a big note here. okay,fixed.
3. 00:27:868 (56) - you may change this note to k to make it consistent with 00:25:868 (51) - as the sounds are similar. fixed
4. 00:48:118 (94) - maybe k to follow the snare there ? fixed
5. 01:12:618 (143) - same as Kantan fixed
6. 01:18:618 (157) - k would accompany the high-pitched vocal nicely imo. oh...nice~ fixed.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:118 (44) - same as Futsuu fixed
2. 00:50:118 (147,148) - swapping these notes to d k would fit the increasing pitch of vocal well. okay,fixed
3. 00:58:618 (175,176,177,178,179) - kkk d d would sound better as the vocal at 00:58:618 - is really high-pitched. fixed
4. 01:12:618 (220) - same as Kantan fixed

• [Oni]

1. 00:16:118 (54) - same as Futsuu fixed
2. 00:51:618 (219,220,221,222,223,224) - I think kdd kkd would match the instrument better. The second triplet sounds higher-pitched than the first. fixed
3. 01:12:618 (319) - same as Kantan fixed
4. 01:19:368 (353) - consider changing this note to d for the vocal ? It would result in a smoother flow as well imo. okay,fixed

You may call me back after that~