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Gakuen Seikabutsu - Friend Shitai

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Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

-Hakurei- wrote:



[General]
hitsounds are totally wrong. please review the song again and check the hitsounds that you need to set (all diffs) yup, I haven't add hitting sound
the NC is really bad imo. use the NC after 4 white ticks For Easy and Normal, I prefer 8 beat one nc

[Ky's Easy]
00:13:680 (3) - the slider end should be at 00:14:289 - fixed
00:39:018 (1,2) - blanket needs to improve a littlefixed
01:01:924 - highly recommend you to add a note hereremain, unrankable if added


please. if you want to rank this map, you must reply to mods and accept something really useful to your map, because we are trying to help you to improve your map

GL! and have fun mapping :D
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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Gakkou Gurashi! OP - Opening (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62369
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Friend Shitai
TitleUnicode:ふ・れ・ん・ど・し・た・い
Artist:Gakuen Seikabutsu
ArtistUnicode:Gakuen Seikabutsu
Creator:XxSeonxX
Version:Ky's Easy
Source:Gakkou Gurashi
Tags:anime op gakkou gurashi
BeatmapID:745825
BeatmapSetID:335730

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Gakkou_Gurashi_OP_Opening_TV_Size.avi"
0,0,"IzIb3WJ.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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62369,-100,4,2,0,57,0,1
86693,-100,4,2,0,57,0,0


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Combo4 : 255,166,166

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lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
and you forgot to give me kudosu
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-
OOPS, sorry > <
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
Hi From My Queue :3

[General]
  1. This Needs Hitsounding
  2. Spacing Issues On Hard And Insane Is Real.. Should Fix
  3. Add Some Combo Colors For Happiness

    [Ky's Easy]
    Kyle Y Just Mod My Map O.o This Turns To M4M For Me

    1. 00:02:369 (2) - This'll Look Better imo If It Was Copy Of 1 With Ctrl+h , Ctrl+j And Ctrl+g
    2. 00:11:693 - Add Note Here And Add Clap?
    3. 00:29:937 (3,4) - i Think This Should Be Same Pattern With 00:23:450 (1,2,3)
    4. 00:56:693 (3) - End At 00:57:302 And Move Spinner's Start To 00:57:504
    5. 01:26:896 (1) - Maybe Delete NC?
    [Normal]
    1. 00:05:612 (3) - Add NC
    2. 00:16:964 (4,5) - This Jump Is Farther Compare To Others.
    3. 00:41:288 - Downbeat Should Map With Something Clickable
    4. 00:46:558 (9) - 1/2 Slider?
    5. 01:00:950 (1) - Ctrl+j + Ctrl+h ?
    6. 01:13:720 (5) - Add NC
    7. 01:25:072 (6) - Add NC
    [Hard]
    1. Raise OD And HP To 6?
    2. 00:08:450 (4) - NC? The ''Hi!'' Is Pretty Strong imo
    3. 00:22:437 (4) - Move Its Head To x428 y275 and adjust the shape
    4. 00:32:775 (1,2,3) - Make The Spacing Even Or More Balancing.
    5. 00:40:072 (3,4,1) - ^
    6. 00:42:707 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    7. 01:09:869 (1,2,3) - ^
    8. 01:16:153 (3,4,1) - ^
    9. 01:16:558 (1) - Delete NC And Add New One At 01:16:964 (2)
    10. 01:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - These Jumps Should Have More Distance.
    [Insane]
    1. 00:08:450 (5) - NC. Same reason As Hard
    2. 00:17:166 (1,2,3,4) - Make Spacing Even Or More Balance
    3. 00:23:450 (1) - ... This Is Not How S Slider Supposed To Be Mapped. Watch Osu! Academy For That
    4. 00:42:504 - White Ticks Shouldn't Skipped Except In Some Cases.
    5. 01:10:883 (3,4,5) - Make Spacing Even Or More Balance
    6. 01:15:342 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    7. 01:19:802 (1,2,1) - ^
    8. 01:26:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Diff Spikes O.o But I Think You Can Keep Them
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Deppyforce wrote:

Hi From My Queue :3

[General]
  1. This Needs Hitsounding working on it
  2. Spacing Issues On Hard And Insane Is Real.. Should Fix
  3. Add Some Combo Colors For Happiness maybe later? :P


    [Normal]
    1. 00:05:612 (3) - Add NC done
    2. 00:16:964 (4,5) - This Jump Is Farther Compare To Others. the beat is between white tiles so I kept it further
    3. 00:41:288 - Downbeat Should Map With Something Clickable done
    4. 00:46:558 (9) - 1/2 Slider? done
    5. 01:00:950 (1) - Ctrl+j + Ctrl+h ? done
    6. 01:13:720 (5) - Add NC done
    7. 01:25:072 (6) - Add NC done
    [Hard]
    1. Raise OD And HP To 6? done
    2. 00:08:450 (4) - NC? The ''Hi!'' Is Pretty Strong imo done
    3. 00:22:437 (4) - Move Its Head To x428 y275 and adjust the shape it would overlap with the previous circle
    4. 00:32:775 (1,2,3) - Make The Spacing Even Or More Balancing. done
    5. 00:40:072 (3,4,1) - ^ done
    6. 00:42:707 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
    7. 01:09:869 (1,2,3) - ^ done
    8. 01:16:153 (3,4,1) - ^ done
    9. 01:16:558 (1) - Delete NC And Add New One At 01:16:964 (2) done
    10. 01:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - These Jumps Should Have More Distance. done
    [Insane]
    1. 00:08:450 (5) - NC. Same reason As Hard done
    2. 00:17:166 (1,2,3,4) - Make Spacing Even Or More Balance done
    3. 00:23:450 (1) - ... This Is Not How S Slider Supposed To Be Mapped. Watch Osu! Academy For That done
    4. 00:42:504 - White Ticks Shouldn't Skipped Except In Some Cases. done
    5. 01:10:883 (3,4,5) - Make Spacing Even Or More Balance done
    6. 01:15:342 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
    7. 01:19:802 (1,2,1) - ^ done
    8. 01:26:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Diff Spikes O.o But I Think You Can Keep Them done
thanks for the mod ^^
-[ Invisible ]-
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Joined July 2015
-[ Invisible ]-
General

First Read The Ranking citeria standard map = https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
Hitobjects must never be off-screen.
All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following.
Your map need Hit Sounding
Your Preview Point in diff easy different from other

Ky's Easy

00:36:423 - i think the slider is so long,
00:16:356 - This Cirlce to exceed the display area, kriteria Ranking map, Hit objects must never be off-screen.

00:27:910 - same ^

00:39:666 - Same ^

01:13:112 - same ^ out to :o

Hard

00:11:187 - add 1 circle i think good
00:17:673 - same ^
00:30:545 - ^
00:33:079 - ^
01:16:457 - ^

Insane

00:34:903 - add 1 circle i think good
01:11:795 - ^
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

-[ Invisible ]- wrote:

General

First Read The Ranking citeria standard map = https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Standard_Ranking_Criteria
Hitobjects must never be off-screen.
All mapsets are played from a fixed-screen viewpoint, so any hitobjects that are even partially off-screen can make it very difficult to read the pattern they are following.
Your map need Hit Sounding
Your Preview Point in diff easy different from other


Hard

00:11:187 - add 1 circle i think good done
00:17:673 - same ^ done
00:30:545 - ^ done
00:33:079 - ^ done
01:16:457 - ^ done

Insane

00:34:903 - add 1 circle i think good done
01:11:795 - ^ added at 01:11:997 (2) - instead


thanks for the mod ^^
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

Deppyforce wrote:

Hi From My Queue :3
[Ky's Easy]
Kyle Y Just Mod My Map O.o This Turns To M4M For Me I haven't request M4M, if I did, why not you mod MY mapset but guest diff

  1. 00:02:369 (2) - This'll Look Better imo If It Was Copy Of 1 With Ctrl+h , Ctrl+j And Ctrl+g remain
  2. 00:11:693 - Add Note Here And Add Clap? sure~
  3. 00:29:937 (3,4) - i Think This Should Be Same Pattern With 00:23:450 (1,2,3)
  4. 00:56:693 (3) - End At 00:57:302 And Move Spinner's Start To 00:57:504 let me think think, I like this modding
  5. 01:26:896 (1) - Maybe Delete NC?remain

-[ Invisible ]- wrote:

Ky's Easy

00:36:423 - i think the slider is so long, fixed
00:16:356 - This Cirlce to exceed the display area, kriteria Ranking map, Hit objects must never be off-screen. not that case

00:27:910 - same ^not that case

00:39:666 - Same ^not that case

01:13:112 - same ^ out to :o not that case
update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Gakkou Gurashi! OP - Opening (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62369
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Friend Shitai
TitleUnicode:ふ・れ・ん・ど・し・た・い
Artist:Gakuen Seikabutsu
ArtistUnicode:Gakuen Seikabutsu
Creator:XxSeonxX
Version:Ky's Easy
Source:Gakkou Gurashi
Tags:anime op gakkou gurashi
BeatmapID:748586
BeatmapSetID:335730

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Gakkou_Gurashi_OP_Opening_TV_Size.avi"
0,0,"IzIb3WJ.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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4802,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
5612,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
6423,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
8856,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
47775,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
62369,-100,4,2,0,55,0,1
86693,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
87403,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


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Combo2 : 194,106,253
Combo3 : 204,117,117
Combo4 : 255,166,166

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Wintermute
49 posts
Joined October 2014
Wintermute
Hihi~ I'm only going to mod insane, but if you have some questions about the other diffs feel free to PM me about 'em and I can take a quick peak.

Insane:
For starters, OD 5 is way, *way* too low for an insane. It should never be anything lower than OD7, and for this map I would highly recommend OD8 given that you're doing both a low AR and a low BPM

In the intro, you have a tendency to start new combos way too often which I don't agree with because it hurts readability, but is ultimately sort of harmless. But after that, it starts to cause timing issues. In general, save new combos for the starts of measures or only if it's really obvious that it should be a new combo. So for insane, I'm going to go ahead and list all of these, I'll leave it up to you to find the ones in the other difficulties. :P

00:11:288 (1) - Should not be a new combo
00:12:505 (1) - ^ (Just start the combo at the start of the measure, currently 00:12:099 (4) )
00:13:922 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:13:720 (6) )
00:14:733 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:16:964 (5) )
00:28:923 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:29:937 (3) )
00:30:747 (1) - ^
00:40:275 (1) - ^
00:40:883 (1) - ^ ( and here, either you make 00:41:085 (2) the NC and remove the NC at 00:41:491 (1), or you just wait for 41:491 for the NC)
00:47:166 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:47:775 (3) )
01:12:707 (1) - ^
01:13:112 (1) - ^
01:17:775 (1) - ^
01:18:991 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 01:18:585 (4) )
01:19:802 (1) - ^
01:21:423 (1) - ^
01:22:639 (1) - ^
01:24:869 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 01:25:072 (3) )
01:25:477 (1) - ^ (I understand what you were doing here sylistically, but if you change the previous section accordingly, you get 1,2,3 1,2,3 and it'll look a bit better, ultimately)

00:08:613 - Match your timing points to beats, don't just leave them floating around like this. (This may apply to other difficulties as well).
00:21:586 - ^
00:34:356 - ^


Now that we have timing dealt with, let's start looking at some actual advice. :3


00:00:748 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - way too fast for the song's intro IMO, and plays really awkwardly. Cut them to 1/1 notes and increase their spacing to keep up intensity

00:08:856 - There's a really bad over lap here with the end of the slider from 00:07:437 (1). Move the circle so it overlaps perfectly with the slider end.

00:09:869 - Move the (2,3) from 00:10:275 up a couple points and move one into their place. This flows nicely and gives the added benefit of putting the slider on the new measure, justifying it as a new combo. But again, watch the overlap with that first slider from earlier.
Included a picture just because that sounds silly
Before:


After:


00:13:315 (5) - again, bad overlap with 00:11:896 (2,3,4).

00:20:410 (1,2) - Listen to the drums in the background. Those are big hits that deserve big jumps! :P

00:23:450 (1) - this is a huge cop out. I want to play all those synth notes, not just follow a slow rolling slider.

00:26:693 (2,3,4,5,1) - On the "follow the synths" thing, just in general for this section try and map sliders to the synth holds, the 1/1 slider at 00:27:302 (5) really feels out of place. (and again, 00:27:910 (1) - should not be the new combo)

00:46:761 (4,5,6) - Having this as a triple doesn't seem terribly justified. There's nothing in the instrumentals to match it, and feels kinda silly.

00:57:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - The same problem I mentioned with the intro, but that's ultimately your decision.

00:59:126 (2,3) - if you want to keep these sliders here, space them. They feel sort of clunky imo.

01:01:356 (3) - bad overlap with the end of the slider at 01:00:545 (4)

01:02:775 (3,4) - Bad overlap

01:13:923 - Listen for the drums here-- there's an awesome slot for a triple and you totally ignored it. :(
A really quick example of how you could use it
http://i.imgur.com/y5HVhKD.jpg

01:16:761 (1,2) - Here we have a special case ;) Here, I highly recommend reversing these two (simply ctrl + g), and then setting the NC back onto the new measure. So we go from this:
image

to this:
image

01:17:775 (1,2 ) - bad blanket. There are probably more of these interspersed throughout the map that I recommend you go back and look for, but in a nutshell you can use the approach circles as guidelines to make your slider fit around the approaching note nicely.
Example
Before:


After:

01:24:869 (1,2,3) - Reverse the slider, then remove the single notes back on the top of the slider.

If you opt to do the above, also consider then reversing 01:25:477 (1,2) to make some nice triangles.
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Wintermute wrote:

Hihi~ I'm only going to mod insane, but if you have some questions about the other diffs feel free to PM me about 'em and I can take a quick peak.

Insane:
For starters, OD 5 is way, *way* too low for an insane. It should never be anything lower than OD7, and for this map I would highly recommend OD8 given that you're doing both a low AR and a low BPM done


In the intro, you have a tendency to start new combos way too often which I don't agree with because it hurts readability, but is ultimately sort of harmless. But after that, it starts to cause timing issues. In general, save new combos for the starts of measures or only if it's really obvious that it should be a new combo. So for insane, I'm going to go ahead and list all of these, I'll leave it up to you to find the ones in the other difficulties. :P

00:11:288 (1) - Should not be a new combo done
00:12:505 (1) - ^ (Just start the combo at the start of the measure, currently 00:12:099 (4) ) done
00:13:922 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:13:720 (6) ) done
00:14:733 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:16:964 (5) ) done
00:28:923 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:29:937 (3) ) done
00:30:747 (1) - ^ done
00:40:275 (1) - ^ done
00:40:883 (1) - ^ ( and here, either you make 00:41:085 (2) the NC and remove the NC at 00:41:491 (1), or you just wait for 41:491 for the NC) done
00:47:166 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 00:47:775 (3) ) done
01:12:707 (1) - ^ done
01:13:112 (1) - ^ done
01:17:775 (1) - ^ done
01:18:991 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 01:18:585 (4) ) done
01:19:802 (1) - ^ done
01:21:423 (1) - ^ done
01:22:639 (1) - ^ done
01:24:869 (1) - ^ ( ^^ 01:25:072 (3) ) done
01:25:477 (1) - ^ (I understand what you were doing here sylistically, but if you change the previous section accordingly, you get 1,2,3 1,2,3 and it'll look a bit better, ultimately) i think i'll keep it :P

00:08:613 - Match your timing points to beats, don't just leave them floating around like this. (This may apply to other difficulties as well). done
00:21:586 - ^ done
00:34:356 - ^ done


Now that we have timing dealt with, let's start looking at some actual advice. :3


00:00:748 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - way too fast for the song's intro IMO, and plays really awkwardly. Cut them to 1/1 notes and increase their spacing to keep up intensity I'll keep it

00:08:856 - There's a really bad over lap here with the end of the slider from 00:07:437 (1). Move the circle so it overlaps perfectly with the slider end. done

00:09:869 - Move the (2,3) from 00:10:275 up a couple points and move one into their place. This flows nicely and gives the added benefit of putting the slider on the new measure, justifying it as a new combo. But again, watch the overlap with that first slider from earlier.
Included a picture just because that sounds silly
Before:


After:
done


00:13:315 (5) - again, bad overlap with 00:11:896 (2,3,4). done

00:20:410 (1,2) - Listen to the drums in the background. Those are big hits that deserve big jumps! :P done

00:23:450 (1) - this is a huge cop out. I want to play all those synth notes, not just follow a slow rolling slider. done

00:26:693 (2,3,4,5,1) - On the "follow the synths" thing, just in general for this section try and map sliders to the synth holds, the 1/1 slider at 00:27:302 (5) really feels out of place. (and again, 00:27:910 (1) - should not be the new combo) I'll keep it

00:46:761 (4,5,6) - Having this as a triple doesn't seem terribly justified. There's nothing in the instrumentals to match it, and feels kinda silly. done

00:57:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - The same problem I mentioned with the intro, but that's ultimately your decision. keeping it

00:59:126 (2,3) - if you want to keep these sliders here, space them. They feel sort of clunky imo. done

01:01:356 (3) - bad overlap with the end of the slider at 01:00:545 (4) done

01:02:775 (3,4) - Bad overlap done

01:13:923 - Listen for the drums here-- there's an awesome slot for a triple and you totally ignored it. :( done
A really quick example of how you could use it
http://i.imgur.com/y5HVhKD.jpg

01:16:761 (1,2) - Here we have a special case ;) Here, I highly recommend reversing these two (simply ctrl + g), and then setting the NC back onto the new measure. So we go from this:
image

to this:
image
done

01:17:775 (1,2 ) - bad blanket. There are probably more of these interspersed throughout the map that I recommend you go back and look for, but in a nutshell you can use the approach circles as guidelines to make your slider fit around the approaching note nicely.
Example
Before:


After:
done

01:24:869 (1,2,3) - Reverse the slider, then remove the single notes back on the top of the slider. done

If you opt to do the above, also consider then reversing 01:25:477 (1,2) to make some nice triangles. triangles? ._.
thanks for the mod^^ even though i didn't asked for it, but thanks anyways :3
Hiyori
151 posts
Joined May 2015
Hiyori


Hello there from my Queue! Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!


Ky's Easy:
  1. 00:07:437 (1) - I don't see this mapped to anything. Remove this.
  2. 00:22:639 (2) - just to emphasize the beat try this
  3. 00:26:085 (2) - not mapped to anything. Try adding circle at 00:26:288 - instead
  4. 01:18:585 (1) - extend to 01:19:396
  5. 01:19:599 (2) - move this to 01:19:802
  6. 01:22:842 (2) - move to 01:23:045
  7. 01:26:085 (2) - change to a reverse slider then remove this 01:26:896 (1) - add circle at 01:27:504 like this

Normal:
  1. 00:07:234 (3) - awkward to play maybe remove this
  2. 00:13:112 (3) - follow DS
  3. 00:17:369 (5,6) - blanket better
  4. 00:45:342 (7,8) - ^^

Hard:
  1. 00:39:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - make flow cleaner
  2. 01:13:518 (3) - make this into a slider instead end at 01:13:720

Cute song. Goodluck!
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Hiyori wrote:



Hello there from my Queue! Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!



Normal:
  1. 00:07:234 (3) - awkward to play maybe remove this done
  2. 00:13:112 (3) - follow DS done
  3. 00:17:369 (5,6) - blanket better done
  4. 00:45:342 (7,8) - ^^ done

Hard:
  1. 00:39:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - make flow cleaner I'll take clean as not overlapping another circle
  2. 01:13:518 (3) - make this into a slider instead end at 01:13:720 done

Cute song. Goodluck!
thanks for the mod ^^
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

Hiyori wrote:



Hello there from my Queue! Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!


Ky's Easy:
  1. 00:07:437 (1) - I don't see this mapped to anything. Remove this. fixed
  2. 00:22:639 (2) - just to emphasize the beat try thisremain
  3. 00:26:085 (2) - not mapped to anything. Try adding circle at 00:26:288 - insteadfixed
  4. 01:18:585 (1) - extend to 01:19:396fixed
  5. 01:19:599 (2) - move this to 01:19:802fixed
  6. 01:22:842 (2) - move to 01:23:045fixed
  7. 01:26:085 (2) - change to a reverse slider then remove this 01:26:896 (1) - add circle at 01:27:504 remainlike this


Cute song. Goodluck!Cute song, agree
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Rilene
2,105 posts
Joined April 2014
Rilene
From my mod queue

Easy and Normal

Looks fine, but normal looks kinda strange though.

Hard

00:12:707 (3) - Not a perfect blanket. [urlhttp://puu.sh/jiqtO/b8a15ca1db.jpg]image[/url]
00:17:369 (3) - I'm not so sure about this, I don't know what to suggest either, but all I know it has a overlapping and too-far issue.
00:25:680 (4) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:36:829 (5,6) - I guess it is too far.
00:40:275 (4,1) - In-consistency with spacings, I know you were making blankets but try move 00:39:666 (1,3) - left-nearer to (2,4)
00:44:734 (2) - Not a perfect blanket.
00:47:775 (1) - Making this a perfect blanket would be nice.
01:02:977 (5) - This blanket really bugs me for some reason, try fix it to a perfect blanket.
01:08:653 (2) - Move this to "X:134 & Y:183" looks better for me.

I'll only point out some of obvious imperfect blankets.

Insane
00:03:180 (1,2,3,4) - The current looks kinda overlapping, scaling them to larger size (x1.2) or rotating them at least 15 degrees looks better. (I would suggest to scale them by 1.2 and rotate them by 15 degrees clockwise) (Make sure to select "Selection Center" for origin or else it would look messy)
00:19:802 (2) - Too far, maybe move them nearer like "X:148 & Y:224"
00:56:491 (6) - Remove them? It would add more emphasis on 00:56:693 (1) -
01:01:153 (2,3) - Ctrl + H? Looks better imo, but if you don't want wide jumps then don't do this.

Good luck on getting ranked. :)

edit: whoops, accidentally mod Hard when you haven't said it on your request
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Sirade wrote:

From my mod queue

Easy and Normal

Looks fine, but normal looks kinda strange though.

Hard

00:12:707 (3) - Not a perfect blanket. [urlhttp://puu.sh/jiqtO/b8a15ca1db.jpg]image[/url] done
00:17:369 (3) - I'm not so sure about this, I don't know what to suggest either, but all I know it has a overlapping and too-far issue. done
00:25:680 (4) - Not a perfect blanket. done
00:36:829 (5,6) - I guess it is too far. done
00:40:275 (4,1) - In-consistency with spacings, I know you were making blankets but try move 00:39:666 (1,3) - left-nearer to (2,4) done
00:44:734 (2) - Not a perfect blanket. done
00:47:775 (1) - Making this a perfect blanket would be nice. done
01:02:977 (5) - This blanket really bugs me for some reason, try fix it to a perfect blanket. done
01:08:653 (2) - Move this to "X:134 & Y:183" looks better for me. done

I'll only point out some of obvious imperfect blankets.

Insane
00:03:180 (1,2,3,4) - The current looks kinda overlapping, scaling them to larger size (x1.2) or rotating them at least 15 degrees looks better. (I would suggest to scale them by 1.2 and rotate them by 15 degrees clockwise) (Make sure to select "Selection Center" for origin or else it would look messy) the overlapping is intentional
00:19:802 (2) - Too far, maybe move them nearer like "X:148 & Y:224" done
00:56:491 (6) - Remove them? It would add more emphasis on 00:56:693 (1) - done
01:01:153 (2,3) - Ctrl + H? Looks better imo, but if you don't want wide jumps then don't do this. done

Good luck on getting ranked. :) thanks :3

edit: whoops, accidentally mod Hard when you haven't said it on your request
thanks for the mods ^^
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
Hello! NM Request on queue
Ky's Easy


  • 00:20:207 (3) - shouldn't this start at 00:20:004 - ? I know it's an easy but it's not fitting this way
    00:28:315 (1) - I would make this one like 00:26:693 (3) - to make the pattern prettier
    00:56:693 (3) - Maybe if you move the red anchor point a bit down, because it's a bit weird. I mean this part: http://puu.sh/jj9Q7/8bfc91d52e.jpg
    Diff is already awesome, can't point anything else..
Normal


  • 00:09:464 (2) - I would move this a bit down and curve a bit less, it's a bit weird this way. Even more because of the CS
    00:10:883 (5,6) - This blanket can be improved
    00:10:883 (5,7) - Fix this overlap
    00:12:099 (1,2) - ^
    00:13:315 (4,5) - ^
    00:13:315 (4,6) - Fix overlap
    00:13:720 (5,6) - Fix blanket :3
    00:15:342 (1,2) - ^
    00:17:369 (5,6) - ^
    00:25:680 (2) - Curve it a bit less?
    00:29:937 (4) - ^
    00:32:166 (2) - ^
    00:35:207 (2,3) - Improve blanket
    00:35:612 (3,6) - Well, overlap
    00:36:829 (6) - Improve blanket
    00:38:450 (2,3) - ^
    00:40:883 (7,8,1) - Fix the overlap and you may want to flip (1) because the flow is really bad
    00:46:558 (9) - Curve it a bit less
    00:51:018 (1,2) - Make them mirrors?
    01:00:950 (1,1) - Fix overlap
    01:02:775 (2,3) - Improve blanket
    01:07:234 (5,6) - ^
    01:09:262 (2,3,4) - Blanket can be improved
    01:12:099 (1,2) - ^
    01:15:748 (2,3) - ^
    01:23:450 (4,1) - Fix overlap
    Fixing all those blankets and all the overlaps this diff should be fine, just need some polishing
Hard


  • To make this job of modding easier, firstly I'll link blankets that should be improved
    00:01:558 (3,4) -
    00:02:369 (1,2) -
    00:03:180 (3,4) -
    00:10:072 (5,1) -
    00:11:896 (1,2) -
    00:12:099 (2,3) -
    00:13:518 (2,3) -
    00:15:342 (1,2) -
    00:16:356 (4,1) -
    00:20:815 (3,4) -
    00:22:437 (4,1) -
    00:26:693 (3,4,5) -
    00:28:315 (1,2) -
    00:30:342 (2,4) -
    00:31:964 (3,4) -
    00:36:220 (3,4) -
    00:37:538 (2,3) -
    00:40:275 (4,1) -
    00:41:896 (3,4) -
    00:42:707 (1,2) -
    00:43:518 (4,1) -
    00:48:585 (3,4) -
    00:53:247 (2,3) -
    01:02:166 (2,3) -
    01:04:396 (4,1) -
    01:05:207 (3,4) -
    01:05:815 (5,1) -
    01:07:031 (4,1) -
    01:10:072 (2,3) -
    01:11:288 (2,3) -
    01:15:342 (1,2) -
    01:16:964 (1,2) -
    01:18:585 (3,4) -
    01:19:802 (2,3) -
    01:19:802 (2,5) -
    01:21:626 (4,1) -
    01:21:829 (1,2,3) -
    01:23:045 (1,2) -
    01:24:261 (5,1) -

    Now the rest:

    00:07:437 (1,1) - You could stack
    00:07:842 (2,2) - ^
    00:25:680 (4,3) - Fix overlap
  1. Hitsounding is a bit random :/
    Same thing of Normal, with some polishing and blanketing improvement it should be fine

Maybe I get the Insane later...

GL!!
Kuki
722 posts
Joined October 2013
Kuki


[Ky's Easy]
00:35:207 (1) - This honestly to me feels a little random, you don't repeat it like you did at 00:36:423 (2) - I would suggest you instead copy 00:36:423 (2) - and have a sort-of symmetrical pattern going on, and just make 00:38:450 (3) - a curve blanketed with 00:39:666 (4).
00:44:531 (1) - Again, random slider imo. I suggest copying 00:42:910 (2) - here and making a symmetrical pattern instead.
01:10:072 (2) - Big difference in spacing from everything else but no difference in the song? fix please.
01:26:085 (2,1) - I'd consider a blanket here like so. it finishes comfortably and nicely and flows really well.

[Insane]
00:16:761 (4,1,2,3,4) - Try something like this.
00:46:964 (5) - Mapped to nothing at all, you really need to remove this as it's a build-up for the kiai. I don't imagine it's rankable to keep either.
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Lumael wrote:

Hello! NM Request on queue

Normal


  • 00:09:464 (2) - I would move this a bit down and curve a bit less, it's a bit weird this way. Even more because of the CS fixed
    00:10:883 (5,6) - This blanket can be improved fixed
    00:10:883 (5,7) - Fix this overlap fixed
    00:12:099 (1,2) - ^ fixed
    00:13:315 (4,5) - ^ fixed
    00:13:315 (4,6) - Fix overlap fixed
    00:13:720 (5,6) - Fix blanket :3 fixed
    00:15:342 (1,2) - ^ fixed
    00:17:369 (5,6) - ^ fixed
    00:25:680 (2) - Curve it a bit less? fixed
    00:29:937 (4) - ^ fixed
    00:32:166 (2) - ^ fixed
    00:35:207 (2,3) - Improve blanket fixed
    00:35:612 (3,6) - Well, overlap fixed
    00:36:829 (6) - Improve blanket fixed
    00:38:450 (2,3) - ^ fixed
    00:40:883 (7,8,1) - Fix the overlap and you may want to flip (1) because the flow is really bad fixed
    00:46:558 (9) - Curve it a bit less fixed
    00:51:018 (1,2) - Make them mirrors? fixed
    01:00:950 (1,1) - Fix overlap fixed
    01:02:775 (2,3) - Improve blanket fixed
    01:07:234 (5,6) - ^ fixed
    01:09:262 (2,3,4) - Blanket can be improved fixed
    01:12:099 (1,2) - ^ fixed
    01:15:748 (2,3) - ^ fixed
    01:23:450 (4,1) - Fix overlap fixed
    Fixing all those blankets and all the overlaps this diff should be fine, just need some polishing
Hard


  • To make this job of modding easier, firstly I'll link blankets that should be improved fixed
    00:01:558 (3,4) -
    00:02:369 (1,2) -
    00:03:180 (3,4) -
    00:10:072 (5,1) -
    00:11:896 (1,2) -
    00:12:099 (2,3) -
    00:13:518 (2,3) -
    00:15:342 (1,2) -
    00:16:356 (4,1) -
    00:20:815 (3,4) -
    00:22:437 (4,1) -
    00:26:693 (3,4,5) -
    00:28:315 (1,2) -
    00:30:342 (2,4) -
    00:31:964 (3,4) -
    00:36:220 (3,4) -
    00:37:538 (2,3) -
    00:40:275 (4,1) -
    00:41:896 (3,4) -
    00:42:707 (1,2) -
    00:43:518 (4,1) -
    00:48:585 (3,4) -
    00:53:247 (2,3) -
    01:02:166 (2,3) -
    01:04:396 (4,1) -
    01:05:207 (3,4) -
    01:05:815 (5,1) -
    01:07:031 (4,1) -
    01:10:072 (2,3) -
    01:11:288 (2,3) -
    01:15:342 (1,2) -
    01:16:964 (1,2) -
    01:18:585 (3,4) -
    01:19:802 (2,3) -
    01:19:802 (2,5) -
    01:21:626 (4,1) -
    01:21:829 (1,2,3) -
    01:23:045 (1,2) -
    01:24:261 (5,1) -

    Now the rest:

    00:07:437 (1,1) - You could stack fixed
    00:07:842 (2,2) - ^ fixed
    00:25:680 (4,3) - Fix overlap fixed
  1. Hitsounding is a bit random :/ not that good in hitsounding ><
    Same thing of Normal, with some polishing and blanketing improvement it should be fine

Maybe I get the Insane later...

GL!! thanks :D
thanks for the mod ^^
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Kuki wrote:




[Insane]
00:16:761 (4,1,2,3,4) - Try something like this. fixed
00:46:964 (5) - Mapped to nothing at all, you really need to remove this as it's a build-up for the kiai. I don't imagine it's rankable to keep either. fixed
thanks for the mod ^^
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

Lumael wrote:

Hello! NM Request on queue
Ky's Easy


  • 00:20:207 (3) - shouldn't this start at 00:20:004 - ? I know it's an easy but it's not fitting this way fixed
    00:28:315 (1) - I would make this one like 00:26:693 (3) - to make the pattern prettier I do not want to use that much slider and circle, then I just switch between them.
    00:56:693 (3) - Maybe if you move the red anchor point a bit down, because it's a bit weird. I mean this part: http://puu.sh/jj9Q7/8bfc91d52e.jpg fixed
    Diff is already awesome, can't point anything else.. it is really hard to point a lot from Easy, becasue Easy diff do not have a lot of notes and slider.
GL!!

Kuki wrote:



[Ky's Easy]
00:35:207 (1) - This honestly to me feels a little random, you don't repeat it like you did at 00:36:423 (2) - I would suggest you instead copy 00:36:423 (2) - and have a sort-of symmetrical pattern going on, and just make 00:38:450 (3) - fixeda curve blanketed with 00:39:666 (4). remain
00:44:531 (1) - Again, random slider imo. I suggest copying 00:42:910 (2) - here and making a symmetrical pattern instead. remain
01:10:072 (2) - Big difference in spacing from everything else but no difference in the song? fix please.fixed, thanks a lot for pointing out this
01:26:085 (2,1) - I'd consider a blanket here like so. it finishes comfortably and nicely and flows really well.remain
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101,110,23450,1,2,2:0:0:0:
188,97,23856,2,0,P|230:86|279:84,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
341,129,24666,1,0,2:0:0:0:
412,77,25072,6,0,P|425:152|364:213,1,160,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
284,219,26288,1,2,2:0:0:0:
212,270,26693,2,0,P|135:279|71:234,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
19,161,27910,1,8,2:0:0:0:
82,100,28315,6,0,B|161:52|238:64,1,160,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
313,103,29531,1,2,2:0:0:0:
395,71,29937,2,0,L|430:158,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
465,223,30747,2,0,L|405:294,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
327,268,31558,6,0,P|269:255|211:267,1,120,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
164,342,32572,2,0,P|126:287|136:222,1,120,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
163,155,33585,1,8,2:0:0:0:
134,71,33991,2,0,B|174:55|222:76|241:112|241:112|279:100,1,160,2|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
348,52,35207,6,0,B|390:91|394:151|394:151|354:183,1,160,8|10,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
268,180,36423,2,0,B|230:210|230:210|234:270|276:309,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
360,332,37639,2,0,L|444:316,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,244,38450,2,0,B|506:187|497:136|497:136|444:116,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
364,96,39666,2,0,B|300:53|227:84|227:84|196:40|140:36,1,240,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
68,76,41288,6,0,B|49:109|41:183|41:183|67:242|140:265,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
220,296,42910,2,0,B|288:272|358:283|358:283|372:259,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
420,196,44126,1,8,2:0:0:0:
356,135,44531,6,0,B|265:136|230:154|230:154|258:181,2,160,2|8|2,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
474,194,46761,1,2,2:0:0:0:
286,310,47775,6,0,P|174:297|111:184,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
116,107,49396,2,0,B|128:66|128:66|190:98|257:96,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
414,65,51018,6,0,B|456:129|422:198|422:198|435:228,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
446,302,52234,1,8,2:0:0:0:
358,301,52639,2,0,B|321:293|321:293|281:212|320:138|320:138|266:124,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
194,109,54261,6,0,B|134:199|134:199|155:255,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
235,212,55477,2,0,B|283:194|283:194|354:239|354:239|387:222,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
421,152,56693,2,0,B|308:76,1,120,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,57504,12,8,60747,2:0:0:0:
120,112,62369,6,0,P|190:77|282:102,1,160,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
354,106,63585,1,2,2:0:0:0:
439,127,63991,2,0,P|426:205|375:266,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
294,300,65207,1,8,2:0:0:0:
236,233,65612,6,0,B|157:212|94:229|94:229|82:198,1,160,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
29,148,66829,1,2,2:0:0:0:
80,77,67234,2,0,P|166:57|239:67,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
299,127,68450,1,8,2:0:0:0:
355,59,68856,6,0,P|385:144|349:200,1,160,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
264,220,70072,1,2,2:0:0:0:
196,164,70477,2,0,B|128:150|66:170|66:170|56:212,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
70,285,71693,1,8,2:0:0:0:
145,328,72099,6,0,P|204:323|264:330,1,120,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
341,371,73112,2,0,B|353:342|358:302|326:271|326:271|365:225,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
421,114,74531,2,0,L|345:87,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
275,36,75342,6,0,B|244:80|267:129|267:129|198:129,1,160,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
117,122,76558,1,2,2:0:0:0:
68,48,76964,2,0,P|30:113|61:191,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
130,237,78180,1,8,2:0:0:0:
151,322,78585,6,0,P|208:275|206:193,1,160,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
171,113,79802,1,2,2:0:0:0:
235,52,80207,2,0,P|302:102|385:93,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
449,49,81423,1,8,2:0:0:0:
455,136,81829,6,0,B|434:193|443:269|443:269|414:296,1,160,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
365,351,83045,1,2,2:0:0:0:
318,276,83450,2,0,P|270:212|196:186,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
108,186,84666,1,8,2:0:0:0:
89,99,85072,6,0,P|41:129|20:189,1,120,8|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
55,267,86085,2,0,P|94:276|139:306,1,79.9999999999999,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
211,325,86896,6,0,B|218:265|255:235|255:235|262:258,1,120,8|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Friend Shitai more like Shit AI, Friend!

Insane:
00:02:369 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overlapping patterns like this are no fun :(
00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - THERE'S NO SOUND HERE WHY ARE YOU CLAPPING
ok general hitsounding thing let's get this settled. When you use finishes a lot, it ruins the effect of the finish. It becomes overbearing. Try putting claps (or i prefer hitnormals, but whatever you want) on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every measure (after the beginning part). It'll sound a lot better, since it's going with the drums in the background.
00:12:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - but why stream??
00:25:680 (4) - all these points yet i don't know what this is.
00:59:126 (2,3) - so like ask yourself, do these repeats go with the music? If the answer is no (Helpful hint: The answer is no), then re-do these so it fits with the natural grouping of the words.
01:00:545 (4) - Love silence. Embrace silence. Don't try to put sound where there is silence.
01:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, don't put sound where it doesn't belong. It's fine to have notes but don't put loud finishes and stuff
01:04:396 (1,2,3) - I haven't been pointing out spacing stuff much since I've become a bit more leniant with this, but why exactly do you decide here that it's a good idea to have a big jump followed by a really short distance? Making a pretty blanket shouldn't be more important than having the map play well.
01:16:356 (5,1,2,3) - Sentences have general structure. You wouldn't just start a sentence in the middle. But you're starting this huge new pattern in the middle of the sentence, and that's no good. Especially when it's on a weird part (ie. The red tick before the next measure.) If I were doing this, I'd have the big pattern start on the big white tick (it's sitll techincally in the middle of the sentence so sue me but like it's on a more accented part that is more natural)

It has lots of potential and lots of solid foundations which makes me a happy camper

As for the hitsounds, I've figured it out. The finishes you have on beats 2 and 4? Those should be your claps. Yay.

Hard:
Whats with these claps they're not following the drums nor are they consistent with the insane. Consistency is good and makes everyone happy, as does following the music.
00:07:437 (1,2,3) - Just assume the same thing through all diffs that you shouldn't have hitsounds where there isn't ANY sound, but also, this anti-jump is no good. nothing a ctrl + H couldn't fix
This verse section is a LITTLE too similar to insane for me to feel like the spread will be passable.
01:10:275 (3,4,1) - Overlaps are no fun :( please never do this again

Normal:
ok your spread is so weird. This beginning is WAY too easy in comparison to Hard, but your actual choruses and stuff are SUPER notey. I'd love to have you bump up this beginning and not follow the lyrics so explicitly in the choruses. Slider-train maps are no fun. They just get confusing.
00:44:531 (6) - NC
00:47:775 - this is the normal diff please do not have SV changees

It's like you wanted to make a hard but were like "well to make it a normal all you have to do is add sliders right", and it's right now a LOT harder than it should be, which is no good :(. I'm sorry for not pointing out specifics, an you can PM if you'd like me to point them out. However, a lot of the issues comes from when there's literally just TOO MUCH on the screen. Normal players aren't as dumb as people think, but having lots of notes on the screen at once in varying lengths and shapes can be overwhelming, even with a low AR

Easy:
There's no video o-o
Don't put claps on 3 just because it's an easy. The drums don't change
Yeah, if this is your easy, you're definitely going to want to make Normal a LOT easier.
Other than hitsounding, this is technically fine

It's a good start which makes me happy, but the lower diffs need probably a complete rework. It's actually really funny because the star rating would imply that the normal is actually pretty easy, but the slow SV and overload of notes make it not easy. Check out some other maps normals and see how they handle complex songs with lots of words.

Yay.
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

Reditum wrote:

Friend Shitai more like Shit AI, Friend!

Insane:
00:02:369 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overlapping patterns like this are no fun :(
00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - THERE'S NO SOUND HERE WHY ARE YOU CLAPPING
ok general hitsounding thing let's get this settled. When you use finishes a lot, it ruins the effect of the finish. It becomes overbearing. Try putting claps (or i prefer hitnormals, but whatever you want) on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every measure (after the beginning part). It'll sound a lot better, since it's going with the drums in the background.
00:12:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - but why stream??
00:25:680 (4) - all these points yet i don't know what this is.
00:59:126 (2,3) - so like ask yourself, do these repeats go with the music? If the answer is no (Helpful hint: The answer is no), then re-do these so it fits with the natural grouping of the words.
01:00:545 (4) - Love silence. Embrace silence. Don't try to put sound where there is silence.
01:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, don't put sound where it doesn't belong. It's fine to have notes but don't put loud finishes and stuff
01:04:396 (1,2,3) - I haven't been pointing out spacing stuff much since I've become a bit more leniant with this, but why exactly do you decide here that it's a good idea to have a big jump followed by a really short distance? Making a pretty blanket shouldn't be more important than having the map play well.
01:16:356 (5,1,2,3) - Sentences have general structure. You wouldn't just start a sentence in the middle. But you're starting this huge new pattern in the middle of the sentence, and that's no good. Especially when it's on a weird part (ie. The red tick before the next measure.) If I were doing this, I'd have the big pattern start on the big white tick (it's sitll techincally in the middle of the sentence so sue me but like it's on a more accented part that is more natural)

It has lots of potential and lots of solid foundations which makes me a happy camper

As for the hitsounds, I've figured it out. The finishes you have on beats 2 and 4? Those should be your claps. Yay.

Hard:
Whats with these claps they're not following the drums nor are they consistent with the insane. Consistency is good and makes everyone happy, as does following the music.
00:07:437 (1,2,3) - Just assume the same thing through all diffs that you shouldn't have hitsounds where there isn't ANY sound, but also, this anti-jump is no good. nothing a ctrl + H couldn't fix
This verse section is a LITTLE too similar to insane for me to feel like the spread will be passable.
01:10:275 (3,4,1) - Overlaps are no fun :( please never do this again

Normal:
ok your spread is so weird. This beginning is WAY too easy in comparison to Hard, but your actual choruses and stuff are SUPER notey. I'd love to have you bump up this beginning and not follow the lyrics so explicitly in the choruses. Slider-train maps are no fun. They just get confusing.
00:44:531 (6) - NC
00:47:775 - this is the normal diff please do not have SV changees

It's like you wanted to make a hard but were like "well to make it a normal all you have to do is add sliders right", and it's right now a LOT harder than it should be, which is no good :(. I'm sorry for not pointing out specifics, an you can PM if you'd like me to point them out. However, a lot of the issues comes from when there's literally just TOO MUCH on the screen. Normal players aren't as dumb as people think, but having lots of notes on the screen at once in varying lengths and shapes can be overwhelming, even with a low AR

Easy:
There's no video o-o
Don't put claps on 3 just because it's an easy. The drums don't change
Yeah, if this is your easy, you're definitely going to want to make Normal a LOT easier.
Other than hitsounding, this is technically fine

It's a good start which makes me happy, but the lower diffs need probably a complete rework. It's actually really funny because the star rating would imply that the normal is actually pretty easy, but the slow SV and overload of notes make it not easy. Check out some other maps normals and see how they handle complex songs with lots of words.

Yay.
I followed all of the mods :P . This mod is so detailed it made me wet myself ._. Thanks xD
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

XxSeonxX wrote:

Reditum wrote:

Friend Shitai more like Shit AI, Friend!

Insane:
00:02:369 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overlapping patterns like this are no fun :(
00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - THERE'S NO SOUND HERE WHY ARE YOU CLAPPING
ok general hitsounding thing let's get this settled. When you use finishes a lot, it ruins the effect of the finish. It becomes overbearing. Try putting claps (or i prefer hitnormals, but whatever you want) on the 1st and 3rd white tick of every measure (after the beginning part). It'll sound a lot better, since it's going with the drums in the background.
00:12:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - but why stream??
00:25:680 (4) - all these points yet i don't know what this is.
00:59:126 (2,3) - so like ask yourself, do these repeats go with the music? If the answer is no (Helpful hint: The answer is no), then re-do these so it fits with the natural grouping of the words.
01:00:545 (4) - Love silence. Embrace silence. Don't try to put sound where there is silence.
01:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - same as before, don't put sound where it doesn't belong. It's fine to have notes but don't put loud finishes and stuff
01:04:396 (1,2,3) - I haven't been pointing out spacing stuff much since I've become a bit more leniant with this, but why exactly do you decide here that it's a good idea to have a big jump followed by a really short distance? Making a pretty blanket shouldn't be more important than having the map play well.
01:16:356 (5,1,2,3) - Sentences have general structure. You wouldn't just start a sentence in the middle. But you're starting this huge new pattern in the middle of the sentence, and that's no good. Especially when it's on a weird part (ie. The red tick before the next measure.) If I were doing this, I'd have the big pattern start on the big white tick (it's sitll techincally in the middle of the sentence so sue me but like it's on a more accented part that is more natural)

It has lots of potential and lots of solid foundations which makes me a happy camper

As for the hitsounds, I've figured it out. The finishes you have on beats 2 and 4? Those should be your claps. Yay.

Hard:
Whats with these claps they're not following the drums nor are they consistent with the insane. Consistency is good and makes everyone happy, as does following the music.
00:07:437 (1,2,3) - Just assume the same thing through all diffs that you shouldn't have hitsounds where there isn't ANY sound, but also, this anti-jump is no good. nothing a ctrl + H couldn't fix
This verse section is a LITTLE too similar to insane for me to feel like the spread will be passable.
01:10:275 (3,4,1) - Overlaps are no fun :( please never do this again

Normal: I might discard the whole thing and start anew
ok your spread is so weird. This beginning is WAY too easy in comparison to Hard, but your actual choruses and stuff are SUPER notey. I'd love to have you bump up this beginning and not follow the lyrics so explicitly in the choruses. Slider-train maps are no fun. They just get confusing.
00:44:531 (6) - NC
00:47:775 - this is the normal diff please do not have SV changees

It's like you wanted to make a hard but were like "well to make it a normal all you have to do is add sliders right", and it's right now a LOT harder than it should be, which is no good :(. I'm sorry for not pointing out specifics, an you can PM if you'd like me to point them out. However, a lot of the issues comes from when there's literally just TOO MUCH on the screen. Normal players aren't as dumb as people think, but having lots of notes on the screen at once in varying lengths and shapes can be overwhelming, even with a low AR

Easy:
There's no video o-o
Don't put claps on 3 just because it's an easy. The drums don't change
Yeah, if this is your easy, you're definitely going to want to make Normal a LOT easier.
Other than hitsounding, this is technically fine

It's a good start which makes me happy, but the lower diffs need probably a complete rework. It's actually really funny because the star rating would imply that the normal is actually pretty easy, but the slow SV and overload of notes make it not easy. Check out some other maps normals and see how they handle complex songs with lots of words.

Yay.
I followed all of the mods :P . This mod is so detailed it made me wet myself ._. Thanks xD
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

XxSeonxX wrote:

Reditum wrote:

Friend Shitai more like Shit AI, Friend!


Easy:
There's no video o-o it is not my fault, it should be the creator responsibility
Don't put claps on 3 just because it's an easy. The drums don't change any example?
Yeah, if this is your easy, you're definitely going to want to make Normal a LOT easier.no relationship between them, 1.2 stars Easy can have about 2.2 stars Normal. Becasue it is low bpm, 2.2 stars is quite high.
Other than hitsounding, this is technically fine thanks, I will find hitting sound mod then.

It's a good start which makes me happy, but the lower diffs need probably a complete rework. It's actually really funny because the star rating would imply that the normal is actually pretty easy, but the slow SV and overload of notes make it not easy. Check out some other maps normals and see how they handle complex songs with lots of words.

Yay.
I followed all of the mods :P . This mod is so detailed it made me wet myself ._. Thanks xD
micchi_chi
764 posts
Joined July 2013
micchi_chi
Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-

[General]
  1. Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder....
  2. You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし！ and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし！ instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either.
  3. Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags.
  4. Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours)
  5. Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break
  6. You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w-

[Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change these position so it would form a rectangular shape... rough example http://puu.sh/jl4PC/c822ce2a32.jpg
  2. 00:07:234 Maybe add a note here to support the silent sound; I mean it feels weird to stop here 00:06:829 while there's still sound after that before it's actually stopping
  3. Why you keep using the same rhythm ;-;
  4. 00:20:004 (2) - Just suggestion but I think it would be good to end this here 00:20:612 and add a circle here 00:21:018 http://puu.sh/jl545/c7493d61f1.jpg Since the sound at 00:21:018 is very big, it would be better to make it clickable so it would be more emphasized, the sound here 00:20:612 is pretty big as well so you better don't ignore it, furthermore, it's better to differentiate the long vocal with the "daisuki"
  5. 00:29:937 (3,4) - Fit more with a 1/1 reverse slider followed by a circle. DS ing btw, if you do so http://puu.sh/jl5og/90c5a7ca08.jpg
  6. 01:01:964 Very sad that you can't support the "hai" here ;-; because of spinner gap
  7. 01:05:612 (1,3) - Maybe you could make these identical, looks nice imo http://puu.sh/jl5wo/9bdd61d919.jpg
  8. 01:09:261 The sound here is pretty big actually .-. maybe you could change 01:08:856 (1) - into 1/1 reverse slider or at least at a red anchor at the clap.
  9. 01:13:112 (2) - Pls end this here 01:13:518 the sound is very big there, you can use circle to support the next sound http://puu.sh/jl5Gm/35ee118dcf.jpg
  10. 01:20:207 (3,4) - Actually rhythm like this http://puu.sh/jl5J4/0f0f99dfee.jpg would fit better since the big sound is here 01:20:815 but meh, DS
  11. 01:22:234 Ignored big sound

[Normal]
  1. AR 5 pls
  2. 00:16:964 Pls don't ignore this very big sound. Swap 00:16:761 (4,5) - place http://puu.sh/jl5UN/f5074c18b2.jpg
  3. 00:43:720 (6,1) - Blanket the tail pls
  4. 01:14:734 The sound here is more worth emphasized with reverse than the one here 01:14:329 swap 01:13:923 (1,2) - pls http://puu.sh/jl633/d9f8a6357c.jpg
  5. Nice rhythm but maybe you can improve your placement a bit. Start by fixing your blankets, most of them are still off. Use approach circle as guide.

[Hard]
  1. AR 7.5, using AR 8 kinda ruin the diff spread, the song is not that fast tho
  2. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you used harder rhythm for Normal...
  3. 00:14:531 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really hear a sound that support stream .-. don't use "filler" stream at Hard, delete this note 00:14:633 (2) - to make a triplet instead. Or you could make it into 1/4 reverse slider http://puu.sh/jl6mb/3acd9f13a5.jpg No need to NC here 00:14:531 BTW
  4. 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, DS please. Since 00:30:545 (3) - is a filler, no need to jump; for this part 00:31:558 (1,2,3,4) - I understand if you want to emphasize it so you make it kinda jumpy.
  5. 00:50:410 (3,4) - The jump is too far, reduce it a bit http://puu.sh/jl6uN/68ed1a73a4.jpg avoid 3.0+ spacing at Hard.
  6. 01:02:166 (2) - delete this note please, it follows nothing. You better make a short pause after the "hai"
  7. 01:13:923 (1) - Remove NC
  8. Fix your blankets

[Insane]
  1. AR 8.5 or 9
  2. 00:05:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g, it'll flow better from the previous note and to the next note
  3. 00:15:341 (1,2) - Why reduce spacing... DS please
  4. 00:27:302 (5) - Change this into a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/jl6XS/761bd2c3d0.jpg there's a sound here 00:27:504 you better don't ignore it
  5. 00:56:491 Add a note, there's a sound there
  6. 01:17:572 (5,1) - Stack pls
  7. 01:20:612 (3,6) - ^
  8. You overused finish hitsound; and please fix your blankets.
  9. Edit : I agree here 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - please no clap, use whistle if you want or just remove the whole hitsound

At Hard and Insane, please reduce the number of slider that start on red tick because usually the sounds at red tick are weak and not worthy enough to be emphasized with starting a slider. And please improve your placement (blanket mostly) and NC-ing.

Good luck~^^
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-

[General]
  1. Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder.... fixed
  2. You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし！ and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし！ instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either. fixed
  3. Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags. fixed
  4. Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours) I'll keep the current colors :O
  5. Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break fixed
  6. You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w- fixed

[Normal]
  1. AR 5 pls fixed
  2. 00:16:964 Pls don't ignore this very big sound. Swap 00:16:761 (4,5) - place http://puu.sh/jl5UN/f5074c18b2.jpg fixed
  3. 00:43:720 (6,1) - Blanket the tail pls fixed
  4. 01:14:734 The sound here is more worth emphasized with reverse than the one here 01:14:329 swap 01:13:923 (1,2) - pls fixedhttp://puu.sh/jl633/d9f8a6357c.jpg fixed
  5. Nice rhythm but maybe you can improve your placement a bit. Start by fixing your blankets, most of them are still off. Use approach circle as guide. will work on it

[Hard]
  1. AR 7.5, using AR 8 kinda ruin the diff spread, the song is not that fast tho fixed
  2. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you used harder rhythm for Normal... ._.
  3. 00:14:531 (1,2,3,4) - I don't really hear a sound that support stream .-. don't use "filler" stream at Hard, delete this note 00:14:633 (2) - to make a triplet instead. Or you could make it into 1/4 reverse slider http://puu.sh/jl6mb/3acd9f13a5.jpg No need to NC here 00:14:531 BTW fixed
  4. 00:30:342 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, DS please. Since 00:30:545 (3) - is a filler, no need to jump; for this part 00:31:558 (1,2,3,4) - I understand if you want to emphasize it so you make it kinda jumpy. fixed
  5. 00:50:410 (3,4) - The jump is too far, reduce it a bit http://puu.sh/jl6uN/68ed1a73a4.jpg avoid 3.0+ spacing at Hard. fixed
  6. 01:02:166 (2) - delete this note please, it follows nothing. You better make a short pause after the "hai" fixed
  7. 01:13:923 (1) - Remove NC fixed
  8. Fix your blankets will work on it

[Insane]
  1. AR 8.5 or 9 fixed
  2. 00:05:612 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+g, it'll flow better from the previous note and to the next note fixed
  3. 00:15:341 (1,2) - Why reduce spacing... DS please fixed
  4. 00:27:302 (5) - Change this into a circle followed by 1/2 slider http://puu.sh/jl6XS/761bd2c3d0.jpg there's a sound here 00:27:504 you better don't ignore it fixed
  5. 00:56:491 Add a note, there's a sound there fixed
  6. 01:17:572 (5,1) - Stack pls fixed
  7. 01:20:612 (3,6) - ^ fixed
  8. You overused finish hitsound; and please fix your blankets. will work on it
  9. Edit : I agree here 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - please no clap, use whistle if you want or just remove the whole hitsound fixed

At Hard and Insane, please reduce the number of slider that start on red tick because usually the sounds at red tick are weak and not worthy enough to be emphasized with starting a slider. And please improve your placement (blanket mostly) and NC-ing. I'll improve ^^

Good luck~^^
thanks for the mod ^^
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Yo mod from my modding Q~
Very moe song -w-

[General]
  1. Why are there two backgrounds image at the song folder....
  2. You don't need to add "Gakkou Gurashi" to the tags since you already mentioned it in source. What you can do : 1. Change the source to がっこうぐらし！ and keep "Gakkou Gurashi" at the tags, 2. Remove "Gakkou Gurashi" from the tags and add がっこうぐらし！ instead (If you do that, don't forget to add exclamation mark (!) at the end of Gakkou Gurashi at source. You can do that at the first option too tho.) You can do either.
  3. Add "School-Live!" (the English translation of Gakkou Gurashi) to the tags.
  4. Why the combo colors so gloomy.... ;-; Try to use pastel colors, it'll fit the bright song more. BTW, I just realized that you used different combo colors... it's alright but it'll better if they are consistent (In case you don't know, song setup -> colours)
  5. Song setup -> Design; disable widescreen support and letterbox during break
  6. You could place the audio preview here 01:01:964 so you could hear the "hai" at the preview; it'll sounds cute -w- or here 01:00:747 to include the "daisuki" as well -w-

[Ky's Easy]
  1. 00:03:991 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could change these position so it would form a rectangular shape... rough example http://puu.sh/jl4PC/c822ce2a32.jpg remain
  2. 00:07:234 Maybe add a note here to support the silent sound; I mean it feels weird to stop here 00:06:829 while there's still sound after that before it's actually stopping fixed
  3. Why you keep using the same rhythm ;-; it is easier for new-player, that's the reason.
  4. 00:20:004 (2) - Just suggestion but I think it would be good to end this here 00:20:612 and add a circle here 00:21:018 http://puu.sh/jl545/c7493d61f1.jpg Since the sound at 00:21:018 is very big, it would be better to make it clickable so it would be more emphasized, the sound here 00:20:612 is pretty big as well so you better don't ignore it, furthermore, it's better to differentiate the long vocal with the "daisuki" fixed, thanks for the explanation. I have think of this problem, but cannot think of I can do this.
  5. 00:29:937 (3,4) - Fit more with a 1/1 reverse slider followed by a circle. DS ing btw, if you do so http://puu.sh/jl5og/90c5a7ca08.jpgremain, I hate reverse, I just avoid to use
  6. 01:01:964 Very sad that you can't support the "hai" here ;-; because of spinner gap you know it... :(
  7. 01:05:612 (1,3) - Maybe you could make these identical, looks nice imo http://puu.sh/jl5wo/9bdd61d919.jpgfixed
  8. 01:09:261 The sound here is pretty big actually .-. maybe you could change 01:08:856 (1) - into 1/1 reverse slider or at least at a red anchor at the clap. fixed
  9. 01:13:112 (2) - Pls end this here 01:13:518 the sound is very big there, you can use circle to support the next sound http://puu.sh/jl5Gm/35ee118dcf.jpg
  10. 01:20:207 (3,4) - Actually rhythm like this http://puu.sh/jl5J4/0f0f99dfee.jpg would fit better since the big sound is here 01:20:815 but meh, DS fixed
  11. 01:22:234 Ignored big soundfixed


Good luck~^^
update
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PreviewTime: 62369
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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BeatDivisor: 4
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ArtistUnicode:Gakuen Seikabutsu
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Version:Ky's Easy
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Zaphkael
289 posts
Joined October 2014
Zaphkael


Yo, from my queue

Combo colours are kind of weak, try using brighter colours.

add audio lead-in

gap between hard and insane is questionnably big. try tweaking the insane.

Ky's Easy

  1. 01:09:666 (2,3) - maybe change things around to blanket 2 in 3?
Solid, no real problems.

Normal

  1. Combo colours.
  2. 00:02:369 (1) - maybe remove every second NC like this one to keep drain at least a bit.
  3. 00:35:004 (2,3) - switch these in time and place, so you have the rhythm note note slider slider, since it plays so much better.
  4. 00:36:423 (1,2) - don't stack these, it might be hard to read.
  5. 01:27:099 (2,3) - pure preference: to reduce difficulty and to emphasise the last note, i would make these a slider.

Hard

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them.
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song.
  3. 00:20:410 (1,2,3) - these aren't completely straight, so either make them like that, or make another shape like a small triangle
  4. nice diff! :)

Insane

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them.
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song.
  3. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - I would make the sliderheads slightly overlap each other, this is really hard right now, and it would tweak the diff a bit, for the diff gap I mentioned.
  4. 00:10:275 (1) - curve for flow
  5. 00:11:288 (5) - ^
  6. 00:21:018 (4) - I would increase spacing between this and the previous, to emphasise the strong 'end' of both vocal and instruments
  7. 01:08:856 (1) - I'd remove NC here
  8. 01:11:896 (1,2,3) - I'd curve this triple :lol:
  9. 01:27:504 (4) - spacing to emphasise 'end' of vocal and instruments

Good luck!
~Scout

Edit 'cause I messed up BBcode :lol:
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

inspectorscout wrote:



Yo, from my queue

Combo colours are kind of weak, try using brighter colours. not sure which colour to add

add audio lead-in what does this mean?? ._.

gap between hard and insane is questionnably big. try tweaking the insane.


Normal

  1. Combo colours. fixed
  2. 00:02:369 (1) - maybe remove every second NC like this one to keep drain at least a bit. fixed
  3. 00:35:004 (2,3) - switch these in time and place, so you have the rhythm note note slider slider, since it plays so much better. fixed
  4. 00:36:423 (1,2) - don't stack these, it might be hard to read. fixed
  5. 01:27:099 (2,3) - pure preference: to reduce difficulty and to emphasise the last note, i would make these a slider. remain

Hard

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them. fixed
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song. fixed
  3. 00:20:410 (1,2,3) - these aren't completely straight, so either make them like that, or make another shape like a small triangle fixed
  4. nice diff! :) thanks ^^

Insane

  1. Like in normal, combo colours, you don't have them. fixed
  2. Again, I would remove every second NC to keep the drain going at the start of the song. fixed
  3. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - I would make the sliderheads slightly overlap each other, this is really hard right now, and it would tweak the diff a bit, for the diff gap I mentioned. fixed
  4. 00:10:275 (1) - curve for flow fixed
  5. 00:11:288 (5) - ^ fixed
  6. 00:21:018 (4) - I would increase spacing between this and the previous, to emphasise the strong 'end' of both vocal and instruments fixed
  7. 01:08:856 (1) - I'd remove NC here fixed
  8. 01:11:896 (1,2,3) - I'd curve this triple :lol: fixed
  9. 01:27:504 (4) - spacing to emphasise 'end' of vocal and instruments

Good luck!
~Scout

Edit 'cause I messed up BBcode :lol:
thanks for the mod :3
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

inspectorscout wrote:



Yo, from my queue

Combo colours are kind of weak, try using brighter colours.

add audio lead-in

gap between hard and insane is questionnably big. try tweaking the insane.

Ky's Easy

  1. 01:09:666 (2,3) - maybe change things around to blanket 2 in 3?
Solid, no real problems.

remain atm, both of them I think okay.



Good luck!
~Scout

Edit 'cause I messed up BBcode :lol:
Therefore no change
TheMefisto
403 posts
Joined August 2014
TheMefisto
Hi! From Modding queue.

  • Normal
  1. Check AiMod
  2. DS in Normal diff less than Easy diff
  3. 00:42:910 (5,6) - Improve blanket
  4. 00:43:720 (6,1) - ^
  • Hard
  1. 00:25:477 (3,4) - Improve blanket
  2. 00:27:302 (4,5) - ^
  3. 00:50:612 (4,1) - Blanket
  • Insane
  1. 00:25:680 (4,1) - Parallel them maybe? (Make 00:25:680 (4) - more straight)
  2. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ^
I hope, it's help you a little :)
Good luck with map!
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

TheMefisto wrote:

Hi! From Modding queue.

  • Normal
  1. Check AiModtheres nothing wrong
  2. DS in Normal diff less than Easy diff easy is a gd
  3. 00:42:910 (5,6) - Improve blanketfixed
  4. 00:43:720 (6,1) - ^ fixed
  • Hard
  1. 00:25:477 (3,4) - Improve blanket fixed
  2. 00:27:302 (4,5) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:50:612 (4,1) - Blanket fixed
  • Insane
  1. 00:25:680 (4,1) - Parallel them maybe? (Make 00:25:680 (4) - more straight)changed it to a curve
  2. 00:28:923 (1,2) - ^ changed it to a curve
I hope, it's help you a little :)
Good luck with map!
thanks for the mod ^^
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
Hello!
1) I thing in Normal 01:26:896 so hard for newbies. You can change stream to slider (for example)
2) I thing from 00:08:856 to 00:21:626 must be Kiai time
3) I thing in Eazy 00:07:234 circle is not important. I offer delete it, and add reverse to slider 00:06:423
4) Add in Eazy circle at 01:01:964
5) In Eazy 01:14:734 I thing this slider don't fit for music. I think you can change it to slider with reverse.
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

shmiklak wrote:

Hello!
1) I thing in Normal 01:26:896 so hard for newbies. You can change stream to slider (for example) remain
2) I thing from 00:08:856 to 00:21:626 must be Kiai time I think that part doesn't have the umph factor :P

the map will remain unchanged, thanks for the mod :3
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

shmiklak wrote:

Hello!
3) I thing in Eazy 00:07:234 circle is not important. I offer delete it, and add reverse to slider 00:06:423 remain atm, I think circle is better at this situation

4) Add in Eazy circle at 01:01:964 if added, it will be unrankable, recovery time of spinner is 1500ms
5) In Eazy 01:14:734 I thing this slider don't fit for music. I think you can change it to slider with reverse. fixed
update
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Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi
Hi, from my modding queue :3
[Easy]
00:09:666 (1,2) - DS is a bit large here, although the AiMod can't see that. Fix it
00:56:693 (3) - slider end at 00:57:099
01:15:342 (1,2) - this patterns could make newbies click in the slider tail of 3. Maybe do this http://imgur.com/4HYPGbk
01:23:450 (3,4) - ^
[Normal]
Have a look around your map, then fix all the DS first. AiMod see 2, I see a lot O 3 O~
00:15:950 (2,4) - shouldn't follow the rhythm too much like this. Delete them
00:20:815 (2,3,1) - bad patterns
00:24:261 (6,1) - ^ . Maybe make 6 cover the top of 5 for better, then Ctrl + G the 6
And there are a lot more of bad patterns. I won't mod this diff for more. ( The patterns is just my opinion, don't change if you don't like )
[Hard & Insane]
Well, the patterns is still not good for me. I can't mod the patterns because that will become my diff.
The DS is a bit weird at 00:30:342 - 00:56:288 - 00:57:504 - and more...
Anyway, good luck on your map :3 sorry for too much personal opinion and bad mod :'(
-[Seon]-
263 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
-[Seon]-

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :3

[Normal]
Have a look around your map, then fix all the DS first. AiMod see 2, I see a lot O 3 O~ fixed
00:15:950 (2,4) - shouldn't follow the rhythm too much like this. Delete them fixed
00:20:815 (2,3,1) - bad patterns fixed
00:24:261 (6,1) - ^ . Maybe make 6 cover the top of 5 for better, then Ctrl + G the 6 i'm gonna remain this
And there are a lot more of bad patterns. I won't mod this diff for more. ( The patterns is just my opinion, don't change if you don't like )

[Hard & Insane]
Well, the patterns is still not good for me. I can't mod the patterns because that will become my diff.
The DS is a bit weird at 00:30:342 - 00:56:288 - 00:57:504 - and more... fixed some
Anyway, good luck on your map :3 sorry for too much personal opinion and bad mod :'( fixed,its okay for personal opinion ^^]
thanks for the mod :3
Last edited by -[Seon]- , edited 1 time in total.
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Kyle Y

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue :3
[Easy]
00:09:666 (1,2) - DS is a bit large here, although the AiMod can't see that. Fix it fixed
00:56:693 (3) - slider end at 00:57:099 remain
01:15:342 (1,2) - this patterns could make newbies click in the slider tail of 3. Maybe do this http://imgur.com/4HYPGbk remain atm
01:23:450 (3,4) - ^remain atm
update
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ArtistUnicode:Gakuen Seikabutsu
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Version:Ky's Easy
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82,100,28315,6,0,B|161:52|238:64,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
313,103,29531,1,8,2:0:0:0:
395,71,29937,2,0,L|430:158,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
465,223,30747,2,0,L|405:294,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
327,268,31558,6,0,P|269:255|211:267,1,120,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
164,342,32572,2,0,P|126:287|136:222,1,120,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
163,155,33585,1,8,2:0:0:0:
134,71,33991,2,0,B|174:55|222:76|241:112|241:112|279:100,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
348,52,35207,6,0,B|390:91|394:151|394:151|354:183,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
268,180,36423,2,0,B|230:210|230:210|234:270|276:309,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
360,332,37639,2,0,L|444:316,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,244,38450,6,0,B|506:187|497:136|497:136|444:116,1,160,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
364,96,39666,2,0,B|300:53|227:84|227:84|196:40|140:36,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
68,76,41288,6,0,B|49:109|41:183|41:183|67:242|140:265,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
220,296,42910,2,0,B|288:272|358:283|358:283|372:259,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
420,196,44126,1,8,2:0:0:0:
356,135,44531,6,0,B|265:136|230:154|230:154|258:181,2,160,2|8|8,2:0|2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
474,194,46761,1,8,2:0:0:0:
286,310,47775,6,0,P|174:297|111:184,1,240,0|4,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
116,107,49396,2,0,B|128:66|128:66|190:98|257:96,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
414,65,51018,6,0,B|456:129|422:198|422:198|435:228,1,160,0|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
446,302,52234,1,0,2:0:0:0:
358,301,52639,2,0,B|321:293|321:293|281:212|320:138|320:138|266:124,1,240,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
196,108,54261,6,0,B|148:192|180:264,1,160,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,300,55477,2,0,P|324:260|404:276,1,160
476,320,56693,2,0,B|512:204,1,120,4|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,57504,12,8,60747,2:0:0:0:
120,112,62369,6,0,P|190:77|282:102,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
354,106,63585,1,8,2:0:0:0:
439,127,63991,2,0,P|426:205|375:266,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
294,300,65207,1,8,2:0:0:0:
236,233,65612,6,0,B|171:216|104:231|104:231|82:198,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
50,129,66829,1,2,2:0:0:0:
84,48,67234,2,0,B|149:65|216:50|216:50|238:83,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
303,122,68450,1,8,2:0:0:0:
391,125,68856,6,0,L|377:216,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,255,69666,2,0,L|225:246,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,164,70477,2,0,B|128:150|66:170|66:170|56:212,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
70,285,71693,1,8,2:0:0:0:
145,328,72099,6,0,P|204:323|264:330,1,120,2|10,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
352,331,73112,2,0,L|403:258,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,232,73923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
421,114,74531,2,0,L|454:73,2,40
356,174,75342,6,0,P|305:142|246:136,1,120,8|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
117,122,76558,1,8,2:0:0:0:
68,48,76964,2,0,P|30:113|61:191,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
130,237,78180,1,8,2:0:0:0:
151,322,78585,6,0,P|208:275|206:193,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
171,113,79802,1,8,2:0:0:0:
223,42,80207,2,0,P|276:74|337:74,1,120,2|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
462,48,81423,1,8,2:0:0:0:
474,135,81829,6,0,L|437:212,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,292,82639,2,0,L|376:334,1,79.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,276,83450,2,0,P|270:212|196:186,1,160,2|2,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
108,186,84666,1,8,2:0:0:0:
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NM from my Queue~
Remember, I'm just expressing my opinion, so please don't take critism as offense, thanks~ c:


General

● I don't really like the combo colours, they're so bright >.< I prefer the combo colours from the easy difficulty~
● Look over your blankets once more, I only pointed out the really bad ones~

Normal

● 00:01:558 (2,3) - Improve that blanket please.
● 00:02:369 (3,4) - ^
● 00:31:558 (1) - X335 Y125 for perfect stack. DS will still be fine~
● 00:33:585 (5,6) - Try to improve that blanket.
● 00:35:612 (4,1) - If this is supposed to be a blanket, improve it.
● 00:44:531 (1) - Move one to the left for better blanket.
● 01:03:991 (5,6) - That blanket could be improved.
● 01:07:234 (4) - ^
● 01:18:585 (1) - X59 Y284 for better blanket.
● 01:21:829 (2,3) - Improve that blanket please~

Hard

● 00:11:896 (1,3) - I don't like these overlapping~
● 00:20:815 (3,4) - Improve that blanket please.
● 00:22:437 (4,1) - ^
● 00:25:477 (3,4) - ^
● 00:27:504 (5) - Copy this slider and paste it instead of this one - 00:26:693 (3)



● 00:42:707 (1,4) - I hate overlapps, how about stacking 4 on 1?
● 01:02:775 (3,4) - Improve this blanket please.
● 01:05:207 (3,5,2) - I still don't like overlapps~
● 01:07:234 (1,2) - The slider pointing downwards and the next circle above it flows bad, 'cuz the slider pointed in another direction.
● 01:15:342 (1,2) - Improve that blanket please~

Insane

● 00:07:437 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems random to me, would you kindly expain it?
● 00:15:950 (2,3) - Improve that blanket.
● 00:16:761 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't get these jumps .-.
● 00:19:599 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
● 00:44:937 (3,5) - The slider end is pretty close to the circles~
● 00:54:261 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are these just random placed circles? I'd love to hear the explaination of these jumps.
● 01:00:139 (2,3) - How about leaving the same distance as these two - 00:59:937 (1,2) - ?
● 01:04:599 (2,3) - Improve this blanket please.
● 01:24:869 (1) - X166 Y111 for perfect stack.
● 01:26:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I still don't get these jumps, but they're at the end of the map, which is okay with me~

That's all. Good luck with ranking it! c:
Mikkuri
823 posts
Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
Hi From my queue
sorry, im late
[General]
  • fine for me
[Ky's Easy]
  1. improve your hitsound a bit, other than that it's ok for me
[Normal]
  1. 00:38:045 - missing a beat, add a note
  2. 01:14:531 (6) - remove nc
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:437 (1) - remove clap?
  2. 00:21:018 (4) - ^
  3. 00:21:829 (1) - ^
  4. 00:22:234 (3) - add clap here
  5. 00:24:261 (5) - remove clap head
  6. 00:25:072 (1) - remove clap and 00:25:477 (3) - add clap here instead
  7. 00:26:693 (3,5) - change clap to finish at both slider head
  8. 00:28:315 (1) - this is too close to 00:27:504 (5) - better move it away
  9. 00:28:315 (1) - swap clap and finish from head to tail. tail to head
  10. 00:29:531 (3,1) - swap clap
  11. 00:30:342 (2) - add clap and 00:30:747 (4) - remove clap head al so add clap tail
  12. 00:31:558 (1) - too close to previos object and change clap to finish
    im done with hitsound, there's too much to mod..
[Insane]I won't mod hitsound because it's not good, at the first part you randomly place and some is missing. just check and work hard at it. you can also look at this guide to make your hitsound better t/306177
  1. 00:06:423 (1,2,3,4) - why don't do stream instead?
  2. 00:21:423 (1) - add nc and move further away from (4)
  3. 00:22:639 (3) - 1/2 slider is better
  4. 00:27:504 (6) - move a bit further away from (5)
  5. 00:28:923 (4) - remove nc
  6. 00:37:437 (5) - ^
  7. 00:47:775 (1,2,3) - why triplet, better don't do 1/4 this part because it's a slow part
  8. 00:49:396 (1,2,3) - ^
  9. 00:52:639 (1,2,3) - ^
  10. 01:00:545 - add another 1/4 kick slider
  11. 01:16:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a jump to make it more fun
  12. 01:24:869 (1,2,3) - useless triplet for me
the problem was hitsound, you can improve it by this guide t/306177
good luck!
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