Hihi :3
mod requested~
just a suggestion below :p
column 1 2 3 4
Dark's NM
00:02:498 (2498|0,2498|1) - swap column? is diff sound pitch with 00:01:762 (1762|0) - so i think both shouldnt be in the same column
00:06:363 (6363|3,6547|2,6731|1,6915|0,7099|2,7099|3,7283|1,7283|0) - CTRL +H ? seems fit the pitch better
00:24:768 (24768|0,25136|2) - CTRL+G (handbalance)
00:28:265 - add another note? here have the same impact where u put double here 00:27:897 (27897|1,27897|0) -
00:29:921 (29921|1,30105|2) - CTRL+G , jack not really suitable here since they represent different sound here
00:33:871 (33871|2,34239|2) - move the left by 1 , previous pattern u do this too like 00:32:399 (32399|0,32767|0,33135|0) -
00:38:288 (38288|2,38656|3) - shouldnt this 2 note should be the same line? (like u do in previous pattern)
00:48:596 (48596|1,48780|0) - CTRL+ G for better playability
00:48:964 - here u can add another note for louder sound
00:49:332 (49332|0) - vocal LN? i think there is no need to follow vocal here + it doesnt have any long instrumental sound here :3
00:50:804 (50804|0,50988|2) - CTRL+G for hand balance
01:14:731 (74731|3,74731|2) - swap column? like i before at the first part
01:25:406 (85406|3,85774|0) - CTRL+H for pitch
HD
00:12:989 (12989|1,12989|3) - remove a note? not really a loud impact here
00:13:081 - add a note here, there is a sound and NM have note at this timing too ;3
00:13:173 (13173|0,13265|3,13357|2,13449|1) - CTRL+H for pitch
00:56:510 (56510|2,56694|3,56878|2,57062|3,57246|2,57430|3,57614|2,57798|3) - u might wanna rearranged the LN here, seems to be imbalance for the right hand
00:57:982 (57982|2,58166|1,58350|2,58534|1,58718|2,58903|1,59087|2,59271|1,59455|2,59639|1) - here too (well is 4K mode, so there is a limited space :/)
01:25:682 - missing note?
01:23:381 - here u can add another note for louder impact
Good Luck ya Shana-nyan~ >w<