schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
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NM

unrankable, should be less than 2 star.
also the 2nd half of the song is snapped incorrectly, use HD's timing for correct timing. i cannot mod the 2nd half because of this not fixed yet.

00:05:995 - add a note for that emphasised beat.
00:07:651 - begining of new phase, 2 notes more appropriate.
00:09:124 - also beginning of 4 x 4/4 beat. so use 2 notes
00:10:596 -
00:12:069 - ^^^
00:15:013 (15013|1,15382|2) - add short note here keep the pattern consistent justl ike 00:15:750 (15750|3,16118|1) -

00:18:878 - how about mapping that beat as well? fflows better and easier to read imo fixed
00:19:063 - ^^ fixed

00:24:952 - add a note keep it consistent. also emphasised beat here I have done differently
00:28:633 (28633|3,29369|0) - emphasised beat as well, albeit not louder than previous 2 notes, how about making this 2 notes as well
and also the beat is different, no reason to jack actually.

00:29:737 (29737|1,29921|1,30105|2,30289|2,30474|3) - ctrl H for pitch
rearrange note to this. 3 4 2 3 1 fixed

00:40:130 - starting from here, the snapping is very irregular and difficult to read for NM, this is definitely not rankable, please consider.
even if its snapped correctly irregular snapping is not recommended for below HD difficulty
01:01:295 (61295|3,61295|0) - change to 2 3, no reason to jack, diffrent pitch

nice song i really love this one, good luck!!!!
violin sound is very soft and calming >w<

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi Shana! Mod from Voltexers modding queue!
Sorry for long delay. I was busy ;w;

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[General]

BG and Video: All has 16:9 size. No problem.
MP3: 192 kbps. No problem
Spread: You haven't diff low than 2 stars. It can be unrank. Please fix this.
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: All hitsounds are using. No problem.
Timing: Amm... I just have one question about this timings. 00:30:842 - 00:31:035 - Is it need? I guess. It looks don't need. You aren't use note here and ... I'm not sure about this timing can be. XD It looks follow the vocal.
Etc: Please turn on Widescreen support in HD diff. You're using video

[HD]

You can add more hitsound like dark's diff! XD

00:05:995 (5995|2) - Same reason with Dark's NM It should be NM note I guess. Not long sound.

00:13:081 (13081|1) - You can add whistle sound in this note XD

00:39:577 (39577|1,39638|2,39699|3,39761|0,39822|1,39883|2,39945|3,40006|2,40068|1,40130|0,40130|3) - This part. this part should start in here. 00:39:393
How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3404837

01:01:479 (61479|2) - Change to finish point in here? 01:02:215

01:08:105 (68105|3) - It should be finish in 01:08:841 here If follow same sounds with 01:08:841 (68841|0,69209|2) - This guys.

01:24:715 (84715|2) - I'm not sour about this snap. Because... It's different snap with Dark's NM and It looks like....Afterimage sounds..?

I hope It will be rank!
Good luck Shana with dark!!

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

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Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
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Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？hitsound <3 dont forget

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

HD

just a note. this is fine because its HD, but your LN snapping is incorrect for the staccati, its supposed to be 1/4 LN, instead of 1/2 LN, you did not differentiate between the staccati and the 2/4 sustained sound. my recommendation would be to actually turn those violin staccati into short notes instead to differentiate
00:04:523 (4523|3,4707|1,4707|2,4891|0,5075|2,5075|3,5259|1,5443|2,5443|3,5627|0,5811|2,5811|1,5995|3,5995|2) -

00:13:081 - add another note to give emphasis of that 1/4 beat. 00:12:989 (12989|1,12989|3) - can change this into 1 note instead, better representation of the song.
00:18:878 (18878|0) - move to 2, pitch of the beat i think is different, so better not jack it?
00:20:351 (20351|1,20719|1) - change into 2 notes chord? this better represents the song as there are those audible louder beat compared to earlier phase.
00:24:768 (24768|1,24768|0,24952|3,24952|2,25136|2,25136|1,25320|0,25320|2) - you did it here <<<<<<

00:27:897 (27897|2,27897|3,27897|1,28265|2,28265|1) - same beat emphasis, use 3 consistently and rearrange the stream.


00:51:172 (51172|0,52645|3) - violin? if yes this is too long by 2/4 lines, decrease and adjust

00:51:909 - you use 3 notes here on earlier pattern, how about using 3 here as well, its much more consistent.
00:48:596 (48596|3,48596|1,48596|0) - like this here<<<
00:53:381 - 3 notes ^^^^
00:54:117 - ^^^
00:56:142 (56142|3) - violin? if yes this is incorrect, should be 1/4 x 2. so use short notes instead.
00:59:179 - ^^^same as above
00:59:915 - ^^^^
01:07:921 (67921|0) - ^^^

00:56:326 - and use 3 ntoes here if you agree to use SN above.

01:00:927 (60927|2,61111|0,61111|3,61295|1) - surprisingly you use SN here to express that staccati, why not at the beginning as well?

01:04:424 (64424|0) - decrease by 2/4 this is too long.
and the violin 1/4 stream starts at 01:04:792 - so add a note at 01:04:884 -
01:08:105 (68105|3) - should only be 2/4 if you're following the violin. its 2/4 sustained, then 3 x 2/4 SN for staccati
01:09:209 (69209|2) - decrease by 2/4, should be 1/4 stream. try 25%
01:09:945 (69945|0) - 1/4 stream x 3 notes, same reason
01:13:258 - change 1 to LN to express that sliding pitch of the violin?

01:15:651 (75651|2) - staccati, use short notes, or 1/4 LN.
01:16:939 (76939|3,77123|1,77307|2) - ^^^^
01:18:044 (78044|2,78228|1) - more appropriate with 1/4 stream for the violin.
01:18:412 (78412|3) - wrong length, only 2/4. the next one is 2/4 Short note staccati
01:18:780 (78780|1,78964|2) - use SN, staccati
01:19:148 (79148|1) - should only be 2/4 as well
01:19:516 (79516|3,79700|1) - use short notes, staccati

01:21:356 (81356|2,81541|0) - same reason
01:21:909 (81909|3) - wrong length, should be 2/4 longer.
01:22:829 (82829|0,83013|1,83197|2) - short notes, consistent staccati

01:23:381 - 3 notes, very loud emphasis
01:24:669 - wrong snap should be on white lines, or at least use 1/12 snapping. current snap too late.

01:25:682 - forget to add a note, consistent 1/4 stream of violin
01:26:510 - only 1 note here. no beat.

nice song i really love this one, good luck!!!!
violin sound is very soft and calming >w<

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi Shana! Mod from Voltexers modding queue!
Sorry for long delay. I was busy ;w;

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[General]

Spread: You haven't diff low than 2 stars. It can be unrank. Please fix this. Fixed

[Dark's NM]

00:05:995 (5995|2) - It's not long sound. I think. It should be just NM note.

00:07:651 (7651|3,8020|3,8388|3,8756|3,9124|3) - It looks long. Isn't it? amm... If you want keep this pattern. 00:10:596 - Make this part same and Ctrl + H.
If you don't amm... How about this? XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3404783

00:40:498 ~ 00:42:338 - 2 column seems lonely ;w; I suggest rearrange this with 00:40:866 (40866|3,41050|2,41234|3,41602|2,41786|3,41970|2) - This notes.

00:50:804 - You can add one note in here like 01:02:583

01:05:160 - This patterns are using 1.4 column ih powerful sound But... It's not same sounds so some players will be feeling awkward. How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3404810

You can add notes in 01:10:498 - and 01:10:866 - Here.

01:17:860 - add the short LN like this? 01:17:307 (77307|2) - and If you follow this. 01:17:860 (77860|3) - Change start point to 01:18:044

I hope It will be rank!
Good luck Shana with dark!!

• 
  [NM]

1. 00:03:417 - i suggest for this part to following violin sound only . . . so 00:03:602 (3602|1) - move to 00:03:417 - and 00:03:970 (3970|3) - move to 00:03:786 - well, the newbie player will like this, and it's useful for avoid some hard pattern imo . . .
2. 00:05:995 - add note for big impact . . the sound even is more stronger than 00:07:099 -
3. 00:15:013 (15013|1,15197|3) - 'm really sure this time . . . it's not contains any long sound . . . the long sound is only exist on here 00:14:829 (14829|2,15382|2,15566|0) - (you can try it on lower playback rate too for sure)
4. 00:24:952 - add note for big drum . . . it's not enough if just 1 LN only
5. 00:25:136 - add too . . . or you can just replace LN with a single note for express the drum sound
6. 00:28:265 (28265|3,28633|3,29001|0,29369|0) - there's no reason to be same column XD . . actually the BGM sound is not same
7. 00:34:975 (34975|1) - why using LN . . . pls do like 00:32:767 (32767|0,33135|0) - for be consistent . . nah except this 00:39:393 (39393|1) - this is suitable for replace the piano roll on here . . .
8. 00:40:130 - add note for strong impact
9. 00:49:332 (49332|3) - this LN means nothing, if you follow vocal . . this should be add LN too 00:50:068 - or if you follow the istrumental music, this LN 00:49:332 (49332|3) - must be deleted . . . well, choose it XD
10. 00:52:277 - same sound as 00:50:804 - pls be consisten for amount of note that you used for express the kind of that sound for this part
11. 01:01:295 (61295|0,61295|3) - move to 2 and 3 column . . . this is really hard for newbie to press double jack
12. 01:11:050 - & 01:12:522 - you can delete 1 note . . . actually it's not same big impact as 01:11:786 - & 01:13:258 -
    
    [HD]
13. 00:01:210 (1210|0,1302|3) - hmm, i'm not sure this note snap is 1/4 . . . XD (you can try it on lower playback rate)
14. 00:09:032 - add note for hat, like you do in 00:11:977 -
15. 00:12:713 - add note too, for consistency pattern =w=
16. 00:19:983 - add note on 4th column ? . . for express the drum sound like 00:20:351 (20351|3,20351|1,20535|0,20535|3) -
17. 00:39:393 (39393|3,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|0,39822|1,39883|2,39945|3,40006|2,40068|1) - you're sure this is 1/8 ? . . hmmm XD
18. 00:40:130 - add 1 note . . that's really a big impact . . . not like 00:40:498 - it's useful for make a difference
19. 00:44:915 - 00:46:387 - 00:47:860 - add 1 note for cymbal . . . like you do in 00:48:596 - XD
20. 01:17:860 - add a LN ? . . . same in Dark's NM

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Shanyan ~ XD
here's my simple mod . . .

since the map is good enough, and had so many improvement with previous mod
so . . .

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• 
  [HD]

1. 00:01:210 (1210|0,1302|3) - hmm, i'm not sure this note snap is 1/4 . . . XD (you can try it on lower playback rate)
2. 00:09:032 - add note for hat, like you do in 00:11:977 -
3. 00:12:713 - add note too, for consistency pattern =w=
4. 00:19:983 - add note on 4th column ? . . for express the drum sound like 00:20:351 (20351|3,20351|1,20535|0,20535|3) -
5. 00:39:393 (39393|3,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|0,39822|1,39883|2,39945|3,40006|2,40068|1) - you're sure this is 1/8 ? . . hmmm XD mmm, here 1/6 o.o
6. 00:40:130 - add 1 note . . that's really a big impact . . . not like 00:40:498 - it's useful for make a difference
7. 00:44:915 - 00:46:387 - 00:47:860 - add 1 note for cymbal . . . like you do in 00:48:596 - XD
8. 01:17:860 - add a LN ? . . . same in Dark's NM

OK mod end . . . ;_;
i hope this helpful . . good luck Shana ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Shanyan ~ XD
here's my simple mod . . .

since the map is good enough, and had so many improvement with previous mod
so . . .

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• 
  [NM]

1. 00:03:417 - i suggest for this part to following violin sound only . . . so 00:03:602 (3602|1) - move to 00:03:417 - and 00:03:970 (3970|3) - move to 00:03:786 - well, the newbie player will like this, and it's useful for avoid some hard pattern imo . . .
2. 00:05:995 - add note for big impact . . the sound even is more stronger than 00:07:099 - Fixed
3. 00:15:013 (15013|1,15197|3) - 'm really sure this time . . . it's not contains any long sound . . . the long sound is only exist on here 00:14:829 (14829|2,15382|2,15566|0) - (you can try it on lower playback rate too for sure) ||| 00:15:013 (15013|1) - deleted. 00:15:197 (15197|3) - it contains a long sound
4. 00:24:952 - add note for big drum . . . it's not enough if just 1 LN only Fixed
5. 00:25:136 - add too . . . or you can just replace LN with a single note for express the drum sound ^
6. 00:28:265 (28265|3,28633|3,29001|0,29369|0) - there's no reason to be same column XD . . actually the BGM sound is not same Ok
7. 00:34:975 (34975|1) - why using LN . . . pls do like 00:32:767 (32767|0,33135|0) - for be consistent . . nah except this 00:39:393 (39393|1) - this is suitable for replace the piano roll on here . . .
8. 00:40:130 - add note for strong impact Fixed
9. 00:49:332 (49332|3) - this LN means nothing, if you follow vocal . . this should be add LN too 00:50:068 - or if you follow the istrumental music, this LN 00:49:332 (49332|3) - must be deleted . . . well, choose it XD Here quiet long sound
10. 00:52:277 - same sound as 00:50:804 - pls be consisten for amount of note that you used for express the kind of that sound for this part Fixed
11. 01:01:295 (61295|0,61295|3) - move to 2 and 3 column . . . this is really hard for newbie to press double jack Ok
12. 01:11:050 - & 01:12:522 - you can delete 1 note . . . actually it's not same big impact as 01:11:786 - & 01:13:258 -

OK mod end . . . ;_;
i hope this helpful . . good luck Shana ~

AJIekceu wrote:

Привет

Колонки |0|1|2|3|

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Тыц

[HD]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437756 Ты уверен, что вот это вот все нужно? Играбельно и все такое, но музыке нисколько не соответствует. Под музыку выходит вот так вот https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437763 . Впрочем, я поехавший на полном соответствии музыке, так что сам решай ох, сложный момент, но исправил
00:23:756 - ноту не потерял? в 3 колонке ой, потерялась нота
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437773 Вот как-то аналогично первому случаю. Я слышу только такое - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437768. по своему чутка сделал
00:49:700 (49700|0,49792|2,49884|0,49976|2,50068|1,50160|3,50252|1,50344|2) - здесь у меня идей вообще нет, кроме как ЛНов напихать не не не, тут все в порядке
01:02:215 - мне кажется, не хватает ноты, сильный звук хсы сбили с толку?
01:04:056 - либо 2, либо 3 ниет
01:05:528 - в 0 ниет

Такой вот минимод. Надеюсь, хоть чем-то да помогу

Лови кудоску и удачи

AJIekceu wrote:

Привет

Колонки |0|1|2|3|

Поехали

[Dark's NM]
00:09:308 (9308|2,9492|1,9676|0,9860|1,10044|2,10228|3,10412|0) - преобразовать, может? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437846 Хорошая идея, переделал
00:35:344 - может, добавить ноту или ЛН в первую колонку? Как по мне, явно не хватает чего-то Добавил ноту
00:37:552 (37552|2) - почему здесь нота? Звук сильнее не стал, ухади удали Тут барабан или что-то типа того. Послушай внимательней, например тут 00:35:712 (35712|3,35712|2,36816|1,36816|0) - по две ноты как раз по этому звуку
 
 
 
Такой вот минимод. Надеюсь, хоть чем-то да помогу

Лови кудоску и удачи

-Sh1n1- wrote:

O!m mod

About

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Dark's NM

1. 00:08:388 (8388|2) - I think that you should move to |3| because 00:07:651 (7651|3,7836|2) - and 00:08:020 (8020|0,8204|1) - have the same sound and you have a high pitch at 00:08:388 -
2. 00:37:552 - why double note here? there is no reason
3. 00:41:970 (41970|3) - move to |0| and 00:42:154 (42154|0) - move to |2|
4. 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - following your previous patterns you should press Ctrl+G, stairs are ok with 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - but 00:43:626 (43626|3) - is not good with stairs I did a little differently
5. 00:48:964 - high pitch, what about to add a note at |0|
6. 00:50:436 - omg 4 notes at NM? I recommend you to delete one, 00:49:700 (49700|1) - this slider is ok but what are you follwing with 00:49:332 (49332|3) - voice? to avoid 4 notes you should delete 00:49:332 (49332|3) - furthermore a little break is Ok here, (like HD imo) or you can add a note at 00:49:332 - to follow voice Here quiet long sound, but I decided to remove it 00:49:332 (49332|3) -
7. 01:00:927 - you miss a note here? Fixed
8. 01:02:215 - 4 notes again...
9. 00:11:148 (11148|3) - remove clap, clap should be at 00:10:964 (10964|2) - Fixed

Best of Luck Shana-nyan :3 ~~

-Sh1n1- wrote:

O!m mod

About

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General

1. Check Widescreen support on HD

Dark's NM

1. 00:08:388 (8388|2) - I think that you should move to |3| because 00:07:651 (7651|3,7836|2) - and 00:08:020 (8020|0,8204|1) - have the same sound and you have a high pitch at 00:08:388 -
2. 00:37:552 - why double note here? there is no reason
3. 00:41:970 (41970|3) - move to |0| and 00:42:154 (42154|0) - move to |2|
4. 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - following your previous patterns you should press Ctrl+G, stairs are ok with 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - but 00:43:626 (43626|3) - is not good with stairs
5. 00:48:964 - high pitch, what about to add a note at |0|
6. 00:50:436 - omg 4 notes at NM? I recommend you to delete one, 00:49:700 (49700|1) - this slider is ok but what are you follwing with 00:49:332 (49332|3) - voice? to avoid 4 notes you should delete 00:49:332 (49332|3) - furthermore a little break is Ok here, (like HD imo) or you can add a note at 00:49:332 - to follow voice
7. 01:00:927 - you miss a note here?
8. 01:02:215 - 4 notes again...
9. 00:11:148 (11148|3) - remove clap, clap should be at 00:10:964 (10964|2) -

HD

1. 00:19:707 - why you didn't add a note here? same sound as 00:19:247 (19247|1,19339|2,19431|3) -
2. 01:13:718 - you miss a note here
3. 01:23:381 (83381|1) - delete this because 4 notes looks messy and to keep consistency with next pattern 01:24:853 - 01:26:326 - 01:27:062 - ... if you delete don't forget to add clap at 01:23:381 (83381|0) -
4. I think that finish is better than clap at 00:02:130 (2130|2) -
5. 00:02:866 (2866|0) - same as above

Best of Luck Shana-nyan :3 ~~

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

stuff

2015-07-29 18:00 Kuo Kyoka: hi, do you want to irc now?
2015-07-29 18:01 [Shana Lesus]: Hi Kuo
2015-07-29 18:01 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: i don't really sure about the metadata
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: Artist should be: Wakeshima Kanon
2015-07-29 18:02 [Shana Lesus]: http://www.amazon.com/Kanon-Wakeshima-Kurari-Meikyuu-10003-44853/dp/B008S667XC hm
2015-07-29 18:03 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2015-07-29 18:03 [Shana Lesus]: i change artist
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: amazon didn't official
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: let me tries
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: i know Kuo
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: sorry
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: don't worry ;w;
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: http://kanonwakeshima.wikia.com/wiki/Kanon_Wakeshima_Wiki
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: mmmm
2015-07-29 18:06 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/309960 lastest ranked
2015-07-29 18:07 Kuo Kyoka: i have no idea
2015-07-29 18:07 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:07 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:07 Kuo Kyoka: http://whv-amusic.com/wakeshimakanon/
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: maybe just change back to wakeshima kanon
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: i will ask QAT later
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/737815 Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [Dark's NM]]
2015-07-29 18:09 [Shana Lesus]: i set Wakeshima Kanon
2015-07-29 18:10 [Shana Lesus]: it is right
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: are you allowed to fix Dark's diff?
2015-07-29 18:10 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:762 (1762|3,2498|1,3234|1) - remove those
2015-07-29 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: it's not strong cymbol sound as 00:02:130 (2130|2,2130|3,2866|3,2866|2) - 
2015-07-29 18:11 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2015-07-29 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:04:707 (4707|2,4891|1,5075|3,5259|0) - change back to normal notes
2015-07-29 18:12 Kuo Kyoka: it's not fit with long note
2015-07-29 18:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:10:412 - remove this note on here, have a little break is much comfortable
2015-07-29 18:12 [Shana Lesus]: changed
2015-07-29 18:13 [Shana Lesus]: no >< sorry
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:032 - http://puu.sh/jhiuB/e1f6454a0e.jpgsuggestion
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:952 - have a long note on here for the sound as 00:24:584 (24584|3) -  too
2015-07-29 18:15 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:16 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:035 - you could add a note on 1, i do the bpm change on here so it's more accuracy to add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:16 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:16 Kuo Kyoka: for the slow changes from bpm, i suggest to add sv change to minus that slow
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: hmmm
2015-07-29 18:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:30:842 - here is 1.05
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: 00:31:295 - 00:40:129 -
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: ?
2015-07-29 18:18 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:035 - and here is 1,42
2015-07-29 18:18 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: yay
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: fine
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: thanks Kuo <3
2015-07-29 18:19 Kuo Kyoka: np ~ <3
2015-07-29 18:19 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:853 (54853|1) - i guess just remove this one, so hard to play on here
2015-07-29 18:21 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:301 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457650
2015-07-29 18:21 [Shana Lesus]: rearranged
2015-07-29 18:21 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:22 Kuo Kyoka: 01:00:007 - if he follow the sound like as 00:59:271 - so better to have a note on 4 01:00:007 - here too
2015-07-29 18:24 [Shana Lesus]: 00:58:903 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457660
2015-07-29 18:25 Kuo Kyoka: you remove the note?
2015-07-29 18:26 [Shana Lesus]: you mean that you want to add notes?
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: yah
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: if you remove
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: you must remove from here 00:57:062 - 
2015-07-29 18:28 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457669 better
2015-07-29 18:28 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:688 - sound not strong enough for two notes
2015-07-29 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:05:160 - 01:05:896 - 
2015-07-29 18:30 [Shana Lesus]: What do you think about it ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457675
2015-07-29 18:31 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2015-07-29 18:31 Kuo Kyoka: 00:59:271 - maybe just keep the original for the GD-er and add a note on 4 http://puu.sh/jhjl5/a5f90df71c.jpg
2015-07-29 18:31 Kuo Kyoka: 01:13:995 (73995|2,74731|2,75467|1) - same reason as begin
2015-07-29 18:32 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:700 - add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:32 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:884 (79884|1,80620|3,81356|1) - remove
2015-07-29 18:33 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:33 Kuo Kyoka: 01:23:933 (83933|3) - this long note is weird
2015-07-29 18:34 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/jhjtJ/9712830c35.png
2015-07-29 18:35 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:35 [Shana Lesus]: nice
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:29:271 (89271|1) - remove this, follow the 01:29:087 (89087|2) - is enough
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:903 (88903|0) - move to 2 for pattern
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: that's it
2015-07-29 18:36 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:36 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:36 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/737816 Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [HD]]
2015-07-29 18:37 [Shana Lesus]: ready :3
2015-07-29 18:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:148 (1148|1) - support to be on 00:01:087 - 
2015-07-29 18:39 Kuo Kyoka: 1/6
2015-07-29 18:40 [Shana Lesus]: i hate this moment xD
2015-07-29 18:41 [Shana Lesus]: also
2015-07-29 18:41 [Shana Lesus]: 00:30:842 - i set all sv
2015-07-29 18:41 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: 00:04:707 (4707|2,4891|0,5075|3,5259|1) - same reason on normal
2015-07-29 18:45 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457717
2015-07-29 18:45 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:45 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:651 - 00:23:020 - add note?
2015-07-29 18:46 [Shana Lesus]: no :3
2015-07-29 18:46 Kuo Kyoka: why, it's for voice, more comfortable sound for them
2015-07-29 18:48 Kuo Kyoka:  00:31:035 - add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:49 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:39:117 (39117|3,39209|2,39301|1,39393|3,39393|0,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|2,39822|1,39883|0,39945|1,40006|2,40068|1) - i think it's wrong snaps
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: umm
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: change to long notes?
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/jhkpR/d571dcb638.png
2015-07-29 18:55 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457758
2015-07-29 18:56 [Shana Lesus]: and i delete this note
2015-07-29 18:56 Kuo Kyoka:  4 notes sound overchord
2015-07-29 18:56 Kuo Kyoka: maybe remove one note
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: 00:39:025 - i say
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: i delete note :3
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: sorry ;w;
2015-07-29 18:58 Kuo Kyoka: lol you didn't send the time
2015-07-29 18:58 Kuo Kyoka: sorry
2015-07-29 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:17:123 (77123|2,77307|3) - maybe remove this one
2015-07-29 19:01 [Shana Lesus]: no ><
2015-07-29 19:01 Kuo Kyoka: cuz hitsound on here is weird
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: that's it
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: change hitsound volume to 45% everydiffs
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: and upload
2015-07-29 19:04 [Shana Lesus]: updated
2015-07-29 19:04 [Shana Lesus]: thank you <3
2015-07-29 19:05 Kuo Kyoka: np ~ <3
2015-07-29 19:10 Kuo Kyoka: how about end kiai time on here: 01:13:995 - 
2015-07-29 19:13 [Shana Lesus]: fixed and updated
2015-07-29 19:17 Kuo Kyoka: okay

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Wakeshima Kanon - Foul Play ni Kurari [OsuMania]

[Generals]

1. BPMs: Good
   
2. Offset: Good
   
3. Snapping Conflicts: Good
   
4. AiMod: Good
   
5. Preview Time: Good
   
6. Hitsound: Good
   
7. Folder's Problems: Good
   
8. Timing: Great
   
9. Tags: Sound Good
   
10. Metadata: Fine
    
11. Kiai: Great
    
12. BG: Good
    
13. Video: Fine

Since all things are fixed w/ lets go for bubble, no problems appears

Bubbled

Congratulation on the bubble, Shana Lesus and Darksider2442 <3 ~ Great map with good song ~ Good luck on Qualification

Marirose wrote:

lets go

ByBy13 wrote:

Congratulations Shana! o3o

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

Timing

• 
  There doesn't seem to be any BPM Changes within this song, so therefore there should not be any present within this mapset. The current BPM Changes result in an inconsistent offset.

1. Uninherited timing points at 00:30:842- and 00:31:035- should be removed, and the timing point at 00:31:295- should be shifted to the blue tick at 00:31:302. (00:31:026 - the note here may seem early, but this is because it fades in - this is where the vocal sample starts, so it is correct.)

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

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AnatOWJIya wrote:

Re-qualify Hype \0/

For Shana ;3;

Also for Shana

Sorry for misses ;s;