1. Dark's NM - 4Key (1,97 stars, 478 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (2,64 stars, 748 notes)

Bubbled by Kuo Kyoka

Ranked by Marirose

Special Thanks

DarkSider2442 for 3 star, GD and mod
Kuo Kyoka for offset, star and BN Check
Akaix3 for mod
Critical_Star for mod
schwarzvgrune for mod
_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ for mod
A v a l o n for mod and star
AJIekceu for mod and star
Janko for 2 star
-Sh1n1- for mod and star
Marirose for BN Check

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Ирк мод.

4K
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[HD]

Mod inside

2015-07-12 16:38 DarkSider2442: 00:13:349 (13349|1,13441|2,13533|3) - 
2015-07-12 16:38 DarkSider2442: 00:13:257 - 
2015-07-12 16:38 DarkSider2442: Тут же должна быть нота, нет?
2015-07-12 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: да
2015-07-12 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: поставил
2015-07-12 16:40 DarkSider2442: 00:31:825 - 
2015-07-12 16:40 DarkSider2442: Ноту забыл
2015-07-12 16:40 DarkSider2442: Звуки на 1/2 начинаются с этого момента
2015-07-12 16:41 DarkSider2442: 00:37:960 (37960|3,38328|1,38696|3) - довольно странно играется, может это из-за того, что я без разминки
2015-07-12 16:42 DarkSider2442: 00:39:003 (39003|2,39095|3,39187|2,39279|1,39371|0) - хитсаунды надо будет поискать, во время игры звуки почти не слышны
2015-07-12 16:44 DarkSider2442: 00:39:739 (39739|3,39800|2,39861|1,39923|0,39984|1,40046|2) - тоже странная лесенка, может холд поставить, как у меня?
2015-07-12 16:44 [Shana Lesus]: ох
2015-07-12 16:44 [Shana Lesus]: Вадь
2015-07-12 16:44 [Shana Lesus]: долго сидел над этим моментом
2015-07-12 16:45 [Shana Lesus]: скореей всего сдела. ЛН
2015-07-12 16:45 [Shana Lesus]: сделю
2015-07-12 16:45 [Shana Lesus]: сделаю
2015-07-12 16:45 DarkSider2442: 00:49:728 (49728|0,49820|2,49912|0,50004|2,50096|1,50188|3,50280|1,50372|2) - 
2015-07-12 16:45 DarkSider2442: Снова хитсаунды понадобятся
2015-07-12 16:46 DarkSider2442: 00:57:090 (57090|1) - 
2015-07-12 16:46 DarkSider2442: Холд раз 00:57:090 - 
2015-07-12 16:46 DarkSider2442: Холд два
2015-07-12 16:46 [Shana Lesus]: да не обязательно хс
2015-07-12 16:46 DarkSider2442: 00:57:826 - 
2015-07-12 16:46 [Shana Lesus]: я там придумаю
2015-07-12 16:46 DarkSider2442: Ту холдовую сосиску выше исправь
2015-07-12 16:47 DarkSider2442: 01:01:507 (61507|2) - тут заканчивается 01:02:243 - 
2015-07-12 16:47 [Shana Lesus]: не а
2015-07-12 16:47 [Shana Lesus]: 01:02:427 -
2015-07-12 16:47 [Shana Lesus]: тут
2015-07-12 16:48 DarkSider2442: Ладно, тогда там
2015-07-12 16:48 DarkSider2442: 01:08:133 (68133|3) - 
2015-07-12 16:48 DarkSider2442: Тоже слишком длинный холд
2015-07-12 16:49 [Shana Lesus]: исправил все
2015-07-12 16:49 DarkSider2442: 01:09:605 (69605|1,69973|0) - 
2015-07-12 16:49 DarkSider2442: Тут четыре мелких холда
2015-07-12 16:49 [Shana Lesus]: тут сделал так 01:02:427 -
2015-07-12 16:49 [Shana Lesus]: ой
2015-07-12 16:49 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3378021
2015-07-12 16:50 DarkSider2442: Вот, уже хорощо
2015-07-12 16:50 DarkSider2442: *хорошо
2015-07-12 16:50 DarkSider2442: 01:19:452 - вот тут можешь попробовать всунуть как-нибудь ноту
2015-07-12 16:52 DarkSider2442: 01:29:115 (89115|2,89176|3,89237|2,89299|1,89360|2,89421|1,89483|3,89483|2,89483|0) - 
2015-07-12 16:52 DarkSider2442: Я тут тоже попался
2015-07-12 16:52 DarkSider2442: Вся эта конструкция отсюда начинается 01:29:069 - 
2015-07-12 16:53 DarkSider2442: Всё, вроде исправил самые страшные моменты

 

[TimingPoints]
290,368.098159509202,4,2,0,30,1,0
30842,387.096774193548,4,2,0,30,1,0
31035,521.739130434783,4,2,0,30,1,0
31295,368.098159509202,3,2,0,30,1,0
40130,368.098159509202,4,2,0,30,1,0

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [OsuMania]

Hi Shana, here come a little offset check

[TimingPoints]
290,368.098159509202,4,2,0,30,1,0
30842,387.096774193548,4,2,0,30,1,0
31035,521.739130434783,4,2,0,30,1,0
31295,368.098159509202,3,2,0,30,1,0
40130,368.098159509202,4,2,0,30,1,0

Notice: File and then Open .osu in Notepad, after then you brag and stop on the [TimingPoints]
After that, just Additional blocks the old code and paste the new code into it



Anymore, the video offset have a little wrong too: Its should be: +150ms

Good luck

Dereku wrote:

Чекните снэппинг на нормале. 1/4 же там.

Akaix3 wrote:

Вот мой мини мод~
1234

HD

00:01:118 (1118|3,1210|0,1302|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3378446
00:59:639 - следуя этому тебе нужно добавить ноту 00:54:485 -
01:00:743 - предлагаю сделать так, ну или что-то подобное https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3378524
01:13:626 (73626|0) - на 2
01:13:810 (73810|1) - - на 1
01:13:903 - добавь ноту на 2

Надеюсь мой мод поможет тебе
Удачи~

Critical_Star wrote:

Hihi :3
mod requested~
just a suggestion below :p
column 1 2 3 4
HD
00:12:989 (12989|1,12989|3) - remove a note? not really a loud impact here
00:13:081 - add a note here, there is a sound and NM have note at this timing too ;3
00:13:173 (13173|0,13265|3,13357|2,13449|1) - CTRL+H for pitch no ><
00:56:510 (56510|2,56694|3,56878|2,57062|3,57246|2,57430|3,57614|2,57798|3) - u might wanna rearranged the LN here, seems to be imbalance for the right hand
00:57:982 (57982|2,58166|1,58350|2,58534|1,58718|2,58903|1,59087|2,59271|1,59455|2,59639|1) - here too (well is 4K mode, so there is a limited space :/)
01:25:682 - missing note?
01:23:381 - here u can add another note for louder impact

Good Luck ya Shana-nyan~ >w<

Critical_Star wrote:

Hihi :3
mod requested~
just a suggestion below :p
column 1 2 3 4
Dark's NM
00:02:498 (2498|0,2498|1) - swap column? is diff sound pitch with 00:01:762 (1762|0) - so i think both shouldnt be in the same column
00:06:363 (6363|3,6547|2,6731|1,6915|0,7099|2,7099|3,7283|1,7283|0) - CTRL +H ? seems fit the pitch better ok
00:24:768 (24768|0,25136|2) - CTRL+G (handbalance) ok
00:28:265 - add another note? here have the same impact where u put double here 00:27:897 (27897|1,27897|0) -
00:29:921 (29921|1,30105|2) - CTRL+G , jack not really suitable here since they represent different sound here ok
00:33:871 (33871|2,34239|2) - move the left by 1 , previous pattern u do this too like 00:32:399 (32399|0,32767|0,33135|0) - ok
00:38:288 (38288|2,38656|3) - shouldnt this 2 note should be the same line? (like u do in previous pattern)
00:48:596 (48596|1,48780|0) - CTRL+ G for better playability I'll think about it
00:48:964 - here u can add another note for louder sound
00:49:332 (49332|0) - vocal LN? i think there is no need to follow vocal here + it doesnt have any long instrumental sound here :3 I'll think about it
00:50:804 (50804|0,50988|2) - CTRL+G for hand balance ok
01:14:731 (74731|3,74731|2) - swap column? like i before at the first part
01:25:406 (85406|3,85774|0) - CTRL+H for pitch ok

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

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(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)？not checked
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？hitsound <3 dont forget

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

NM

unrankable, should be less than 2 star.
also the 2nd half of the song is snapped incorrectly, use HD's timing for correct timing. i cannot mod the 2nd half because of this not fixed yet.

00:05:995 - add a note for that emphasised beat.
00:07:651 - begining of new phase, 2 notes more appropriate.
00:09:124 - also beginning of 4 x 4/4 beat. so use 2 notes
00:10:596 -
00:12:069 - ^^^
00:15:013 (15013|1,15382|2) - add short note here keep the pattern consistent justl ike 00:15:750 (15750|3,16118|1) -

00:18:878 - how about mapping that beat as well? fflows better and easier to read imo fixed
00:19:063 - ^^ fixed

00:24:952 - add a note keep it consistent. also emphasised beat here I have done differently
00:28:633 (28633|3,29369|0) - emphasised beat as well, albeit not louder than previous 2 notes, how about making this 2 notes as well
and also the beat is different, no reason to jack actually.

00:29:737 (29737|1,29921|1,30105|2,30289|2,30474|3) - ctrl H for pitch
rearrange note to this. 3 4 2 3 1 fixed

00:40:130 - starting from here, the snapping is very irregular and difficult to read for NM, this is definitely not rankable, please consider.
even if its snapped correctly irregular snapping is not recommended for below HD difficulty
01:01:295 (61295|3,61295|0) - change to 2 3, no reason to jack, diffrent pitch

nice song i really love this one, good luck!!!!
violin sound is very soft and calming >w<

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi Shana! Mod from Voltexers modding queue!
Sorry for long delay. I was busy ;w;

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[General]

BG and Video: All has 16:9 size. No problem.
MP3: 192 kbps. No problem
Spread: You haven't diff low than 2 stars. It can be unrank. Please fix this.
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: All hitsounds are using. No problem.
Timing: Amm... I just have one question about this timings. 00:30:842 - 00:31:035 - Is it need? I guess. It looks don't need. You aren't use note here and ... I'm not sure about this timing can be. XD It looks follow the vocal.
Etc: Please turn on Widescreen support in HD diff. You're using video

[HD]

You can add more hitsound like dark's diff! XD

00:05:995 (5995|2) - Same reason with Dark's NM It should be NM note I guess. Not long sound.

00:13:081 (13081|1) - You can add whistle sound in this note XD

00:39:577 (39577|1,39638|2,39699|3,39761|0,39822|1,39883|2,39945|3,40006|2,40068|1,40130|0,40130|3) - This part. this part should start in here. 00:39:393
How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3404837

01:01:479 (61479|2) - Change to finish point in here? 01:02:215

01:08:105 (68105|3) - It should be finish in 01:08:841 here If follow same sounds with 01:08:841 (68841|0,69209|2) - This guys.

01:24:715 (84715|2) - I'm not sour about this snap. Because... It's different snap with Dark's NM and It looks like....Afterimage sounds..?

I hope It will be rank!
Good luck Shana with dark!!

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from PM
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset Spread : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)？not checked
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio (192kbps or lower) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Bg (1366x768 or 1024 x 768) : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : (⊙o⊙)？hitsound <3 dont forget

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

HD

just a note. this is fine because its HD, but your LN snapping is incorrect for the staccati, its supposed to be 1/4 LN, instead of 1/2 LN, you did not differentiate between the staccati and the 2/4 sustained sound. my recommendation would be to actually turn those violin staccati into short notes instead to differentiate
00:04:523 (4523|3,4707|1,4707|2,4891|0,5075|2,5075|3,5259|1,5443|2,5443|3,5627|0,5811|2,5811|1,5995|3,5995|2) -

00:13:081 - add another note to give emphasis of that 1/4 beat. 00:12:989 (12989|1,12989|3) - can change this into 1 note instead, better representation of the song.
00:18:878 (18878|0) - move to 2, pitch of the beat i think is different, so better not jack it?
00:20:351 (20351|1,20719|1) - change into 2 notes chord? this better represents the song as there are those audible louder beat compared to earlier phase.
00:24:768 (24768|1,24768|0,24952|3,24952|2,25136|2,25136|1,25320|0,25320|2) - you did it here <<<<<<

00:27:897 (27897|2,27897|3,27897|1,28265|2,28265|1) - same beat emphasis, use 3 consistently and rearrange the stream.


00:51:172 (51172|0,52645|3) - violin? if yes this is too long by 2/4 lines, decrease and adjust

00:51:909 - you use 3 notes here on earlier pattern, how about using 3 here as well, its much more consistent.
00:48:596 (48596|3,48596|1,48596|0) - like this here<<<
00:53:381 - 3 notes ^^^^
00:54:117 - ^^^
00:56:142 (56142|3) - violin? if yes this is incorrect, should be 1/4 x 2. so use short notes instead.
00:59:179 - ^^^same as above
00:59:915 - ^^^^
01:07:921 (67921|0) - ^^^

00:56:326 - and use 3 ntoes here if you agree to use SN above.

01:00:927 (60927|2,61111|0,61111|3,61295|1) - surprisingly you use SN here to express that staccati, why not at the beginning as well?

01:04:424 (64424|0) - decrease by 2/4 this is too long.
and the violin 1/4 stream starts at 01:04:792 - so add a note at 01:04:884 -
01:08:105 (68105|3) - should only be 2/4 if you're following the violin. its 2/4 sustained, then 3 x 2/4 SN for staccati
01:09:209 (69209|2) - decrease by 2/4, should be 1/4 stream. try 25%
01:09:945 (69945|0) - 1/4 stream x 3 notes, same reason
01:13:258 - change 1 to LN to express that sliding pitch of the violin?

01:15:651 (75651|2) - staccati, use short notes, or 1/4 LN.
01:16:939 (76939|3,77123|1,77307|2) - ^^^^
01:18:044 (78044|2,78228|1) - more appropriate with 1/4 stream for the violin.
01:18:412 (78412|3) - wrong length, only 2/4. the next one is 2/4 Short note staccati
01:18:780 (78780|1,78964|2) - use SN, staccati
01:19:148 (79148|1) - should only be 2/4 as well
01:19:516 (79516|3,79700|1) - use short notes, staccati

01:21:356 (81356|2,81541|0) - same reason
01:21:909 (81909|3) - wrong length, should be 2/4 longer.
01:22:829 (82829|0,83013|1,83197|2) - short notes, consistent staccati

01:23:381 - 3 notes, very loud emphasis
01:24:669 - wrong snap should be on white lines, or at least use 1/12 snapping. current snap too late.

01:25:682 - forget to add a note, consistent 1/4 stream of violin
01:26:510 - only 1 note here. no beat.

nice song i really love this one, good luck!!!!
violin sound is very soft and calming >w<

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi Shana! Mod from Voltexers modding queue!
Sorry for long delay. I was busy ;w;

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[General]

Spread: You haven't diff low than 2 stars. It can be unrank. Please fix this. Fixed

[Dark's NM]

00:05:995 (5995|2) - It's not long sound. I think. It should be just NM note.

00:07:651 (7651|3,8020|3,8388|3,8756|3,9124|3) - It looks long. Isn't it? amm... If you want keep this pattern. 00:10:596 - Make this part same and Ctrl + H.
If you don't amm... How about this? XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3404783

00:40:498 ~ 00:42:338 - 2 column seems lonely ;w; I suggest rearrange this with 00:40:866 (40866|3,41050|2,41234|3,41602|2,41786|3,41970|2) - This notes.

00:50:804 - You can add one note in here like 01:02:583

01:05:160 - This patterns are using 1.4 column ih powerful sound But... It's not same sounds so some players will be feeling awkward. How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3404810

You can add notes in 01:10:498 - and 01:10:866 - Here.

01:17:860 - add the short LN like this? 01:17:307 (77307|2) - and If you follow this. 01:17:860 (77860|3) - Change start point to 01:18:044

I hope It will be rank!
Good luck Shana with dark!!

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  [NM]

1. 00:03:417 - i suggest for this part to following violin sound only . . . so 00:03:602 (3602|1) - move to 00:03:417 - and 00:03:970 (3970|3) - move to 00:03:786 - well, the newbie player will like this, and it's useful for avoid some hard pattern imo . . .
2. 00:05:995 - add note for big impact . . the sound even is more stronger than 00:07:099 -
3. 00:15:013 (15013|1,15197|3) - 'm really sure this time . . . it's not contains any long sound . . . the long sound is only exist on here 00:14:829 (14829|2,15382|2,15566|0) - (you can try it on lower playback rate too for sure)
4. 00:24:952 - add note for big drum . . . it's not enough if just 1 LN only
5. 00:25:136 - add too . . . or you can just replace LN with a single note for express the drum sound
6. 00:28:265 (28265|3,28633|3,29001|0,29369|0) - there's no reason to be same column XD . . actually the BGM sound is not same
7. 00:34:975 (34975|1) - why using LN . . . pls do like 00:32:767 (32767|0,33135|0) - for be consistent . . nah except this 00:39:393 (39393|1) - this is suitable for replace the piano roll on here . . .
8. 00:40:130 - add note for strong impact
9. 00:49:332 (49332|3) - this LN means nothing, if you follow vocal . . this should be add LN too 00:50:068 - or if you follow the istrumental music, this LN 00:49:332 (49332|3) - must be deleted . . . well, choose it XD
10. 00:52:277 - same sound as 00:50:804 - pls be consisten for amount of note that you used for express the kind of that sound for this part
11. 01:01:295 (61295|0,61295|3) - move to 2 and 3 column . . . this is really hard for newbie to press double jack
12. 01:11:050 - & 01:12:522 - you can delete 1 note . . . actually it's not same big impact as 01:11:786 - & 01:13:258 -
    
    [HD]
13. 00:01:210 (1210|0,1302|3) - hmm, i'm not sure this note snap is 1/4 . . . XD (you can try it on lower playback rate)
14. 00:09:032 - add note for hat, like you do in 00:11:977 -
15. 00:12:713 - add note too, for consistency pattern =w=
16. 00:19:983 - add note on 4th column ? . . for express the drum sound like 00:20:351 (20351|3,20351|1,20535|0,20535|3) -
17. 00:39:393 (39393|3,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|0,39822|1,39883|2,39945|3,40006|2,40068|1) - you're sure this is 1/8 ? . . hmmm XD
18. 00:40:130 - add 1 note . . that's really a big impact . . . not like 00:40:498 - it's useful for make a difference
19. 00:44:915 - 00:46:387 - 00:47:860 - add 1 note for cymbal . . . like you do in 00:48:596 - XD
20. 01:17:860 - add a LN ? . . . same in Dark's NM

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Shanyan ~ XD
here's my simple mod . . .

since the map is good enough, and had so many improvement with previous mod
so . . .

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  [HD]

1. 00:01:210 (1210|0,1302|3) - hmm, i'm not sure this note snap is 1/4 . . . XD (you can try it on lower playback rate)
2. 00:09:032 - add note for hat, like you do in 00:11:977 -
3. 00:12:713 - add note too, for consistency pattern =w=
4. 00:19:983 - add note on 4th column ? . . for express the drum sound like 00:20:351 (20351|3,20351|1,20535|0,20535|3) -
5. 00:39:393 (39393|3,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|0,39822|1,39883|2,39945|3,40006|2,40068|1) - you're sure this is 1/8 ? . . hmmm XD mmm, here 1/6 o.o
6. 00:40:130 - add 1 note . . that's really a big impact . . . not like 00:40:498 - it's useful for make a difference
7. 00:44:915 - 00:46:387 - 00:47:860 - add 1 note for cymbal . . . like you do in 00:48:596 - XD
8. 01:17:860 - add a LN ? . . . same in Dark's NM

OK mod end . . . ;_;
i hope this helpful . . good luck Shana ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Shanyan ~ XD
here's my simple mod . . .

since the map is good enough, and had so many improvement with previous mod
so . . .

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1. 00:03:417 - i suggest for this part to following violin sound only . . . so 00:03:602 (3602|1) - move to 00:03:417 - and 00:03:970 (3970|3) - move to 00:03:786 - well, the newbie player will like this, and it's useful for avoid some hard pattern imo . . .
2. 00:05:995 - add note for big impact . . the sound even is more stronger than 00:07:099 - Fixed
3. 00:15:013 (15013|1,15197|3) - 'm really sure this time . . . it's not contains any long sound . . . the long sound is only exist on here 00:14:829 (14829|2,15382|2,15566|0) - (you can try it on lower playback rate too for sure) ||| 00:15:013 (15013|1) - deleted. 00:15:197 (15197|3) - it contains a long sound
4. 00:24:952 - add note for big drum . . . it's not enough if just 1 LN only Fixed
5. 00:25:136 - add too . . . or you can just replace LN with a single note for express the drum sound ^
6. 00:28:265 (28265|3,28633|3,29001|0,29369|0) - there's no reason to be same column XD . . actually the BGM sound is not same Ok
7. 00:34:975 (34975|1) - why using LN . . . pls do like 00:32:767 (32767|0,33135|0) - for be consistent . . nah except this 00:39:393 (39393|1) - this is suitable for replace the piano roll on here . . .
8. 00:40:130 - add note for strong impact Fixed
9. 00:49:332 (49332|3) - this LN means nothing, if you follow vocal . . this should be add LN too 00:50:068 - or if you follow the istrumental music, this LN 00:49:332 (49332|3) - must be deleted . . . well, choose it XD Here quiet long sound
10. 00:52:277 - same sound as 00:50:804 - pls be consisten for amount of note that you used for express the kind of that sound for this part Fixed
11. 01:01:295 (61295|0,61295|3) - move to 2 and 3 column . . . this is really hard for newbie to press double jack Ok
12. 01:11:050 - & 01:12:522 - you can delete 1 note . . . actually it's not same big impact as 01:11:786 - & 01:13:258 -

OK mod end . . . ;_;
i hope this helpful . . good luck Shana ~