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ETIA. feat.Jenga - Say A Vengeance [OsuMania]

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RuberusuScarlet
congratulations!
Round 3… let's go ranked!

色々とごめんなさいでした
Niks
bbu2 Another
01:19:198 01:19:198 (79198|0,79360|1,79523|0,79685|1,79847|0,80009|1,80171|0,80333|1,80496|0) - Beat illogical
Kyousuke-
Regrats again lein! :)
Rido
why I always seen Kyousuke- in every mania maps' thread -______-
Kyousuke-

Rido wrote:

why I always seen Kyousuke- in every mania maps' thread -______-
lol i'm ninja B)

go regrats instead talking me :V
Nekonyan
congratz for requali :Db
Sandalphon
Akasha-

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Nomination Assessment Team

Disqualification Notice



Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

Yumi's Hyper

General Technical Errors

  • Inconsistent snapping within this difficulty. Conflicted snapping with Black Another too, 1/6 is correct one. For example:
  1. 00:20:820 -
  2. 01:44:820 -
    And you can try to refer bbu2's Another.
Mapping Quality

  1. 00:27:306 (27306|0,28604|0,29901|0,31198|0) - What are these LNs for? No sustained sound here.
  2. 01:19:279 (79279|2) - No sound here, better remove it.
Black Another

Mapping Quality

  • We checked from the BMS file and we found several notes which are not related to the music instrument that you follow(such as (22360|2,22604|1,22847|0,23090|3,23090|0,23333|3,23333|2) - Like these notes and so on.) This caused your map to be overmapped on the stream part. Other than that, the jack notes that you create did not fit the rhythm of the song. Try to follow the lead sound correctly or refer from the BMS itself.
  1. 00:22:117 - to 00:42:874 -
  2. 01:47:739 - to 02:08:496 -

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###AM
lemonguy
DQ hat trick kek
shionelove
GG
Rido
rip 3rd round
Evening
gotta be 100% correct man
DanSparce
how many times had this been DQed? 3 times?
abraker
They say 3rd time's the charm. Guess not.
Kyousuke-

Rido wrote:

rip 3rd round
oh my... rip '-'

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Jepetski
This is a rare chance to make the map better. Black Another could be much more enjoyable.

Good luck LeiN- my buddy!
Kamikaze
bms fuckin detected
can we not be nazi towards bms songs for once
AncuL
no more rank detected
richardfeder
Lein are you still working on it? ;w;
Satoshi Kazuki
welcome to graveyard
puxtu
welcome back
[H]
00:47:901 - the 1/6 is too loud to ignore
01:01:117 (61117|0,61279|1) - pretty sure the stream starts right here 01:01:360 (61360|2) -
01:03:631 (63631|3) - I know what you did there http://puu.sh/qpFQA/c07271e023.jpg

nothing really serious here, just some generic pattern.
riktoi
hype
PiraTom
Request by LeiN- , only hyper diff

[Chicken's Hyper]
00:17:739 (17739|0,17739|1) - Match this place ( 00:16:928 (16928|3,16928|1,17090|1,17090|3) )
i suggest move to 3 and 4 line.

00:18:388 (18388|1,18388|2) - same reason. move 1 and 4 line.
And along with it, 00:18:550 (18550|0,18550|3) - move to 2 and 3 line.

00:45:306 (45306|3) - I think that this LN is not unnecessary.delete or change a normal note.

That's all. Goodluck my bros. :D
Aruel

puxtu wrote:

welcome back
[H]
00:47:901 - the 1/6 is too loud to ignore - for make some gap with other sounds
01:01:117 (61117|0,61279|1) - pretty sure the stream starts right here 01:01:360 (61360|2) -
01:03:631 (63631|3) - I know what you did there http://puu.sh/qpFQA/c07271e023.jpg - Check other diffs too, I have talked with LeiN- and we decided to make same all this part each diffs.

nothing really serious here, just some generic pattern.

PiraTom wrote:

Request by LeiN- , only hyper diff

[Chicken's Hyper]
00:17:739 (17739|0,17739|1) - Match this place ( 00:16:928 (16928|3,16928|1,17090|1,17090|3) )
i suggest move to 3 and 4 line.

00:18:388 (18388|1,18388|2) - same reason. move 1 and 4 line.
And along with it, 00:18:550 (18550|0,18550|3) - move to 2 and 3 line. - Sorry but have to reject. It will be good for consistency but there will be a lot of jacks

00:45:306 (45306|3) - I think that this LN is not unnecessary.delete or change a normal note.

That's all. Goodluck my bros. :D
No reply mean fixed!

Thanks puxtu and Pira~

http://puu.sh/qrExW/bd208ab4b5.zip
Quick Draw
Hi,

Chicken's Hyper

This diff seems fine as it is, but there are a few minor details which seemed a little odd to me.

There's a missing note in every major chorus / melody of the song. You probably did this deliberately for some reason that I haven't realized, but here's a list of all the places it's missing from just in case it isn't omitted on purpose:

SPOILER
00:23:171
00:24:469
00:25:766
00:27:063
00:28:360
00:29:658
00:30:955
00:32:252
00:33:550
00:34:847
00:36:144
00:37:442
00:38:739
00:40:036
00:41:333

01:48:793
01:50:090
01:51:388
01:52:685
01:53:982
01:55:279
01:56:577
01:57:874

01:59:171 -> It is actually mapped in the next 3 places for the first time in the song.
02:00:469 -> "
02:01:766 -> ''

02:04:360 -> Now you stopped mapping it again
02:05:658
It's not essential that you map this note on a Hyper difficulty, but it did feel a little weird to play this map knowing the song (since it was noticeably missing).

Aside from this, the only changes I saw that could be made were to change the following 2 note chords into 3 note chords.

01:03:631 (63631|2,63631|3) -
01:45:144 (105144|2,105144|3) -

Nice map! I am looking forward to it being ranked :)
Shinsekai-
hype
Aruel

Quick Draw wrote:

Hi,

Chicken's Hyper

This diff seems fine as it is, but there are a few minor details which seemed a little odd to me.

There's a missing note in every major chorus / melody of the song. You probably did this deliberately for some reason that I haven't realized, but here's a list of all the places it's missing from just in case it isn't omitted on purpose:

SPOILER
00:23:171
00:24:469
00:25:766
00:27:063
00:28:360
00:29:658
00:30:955
00:32:252
00:33:550
00:34:847
00:36:144
00:37:442
00:38:739
00:40:036
00:41:333

01:48:793
01:50:090
01:51:388
01:52:685
01:53:982
01:55:279
01:56:577
01:57:874

01:59:171 -> It is actually mapped in the next 3 places for the first time in the song.
02:00:469 -> "
02:01:766 -> ''

02:04:360 -> Now you stopped mapping it again
02:05:658
It's not essential that you map this note on a Hyper difficulty, but it did feel a little weird to play this map knowing the song (since it was noticeably missing).

Aside from this, the only changes I saw that could be made were to change the following 2 note chords into 3 note chords.

01:03:631 (63631|2,63631|3) -
01:45:144 (105144|2,105144|3) -

Nice map! I am looking forward to it being ranked :)
Thanks for mod! Somethings are applied!

Let me PM update to Lein seems puush doesn't work
stryver12
Oh God, I hard cleared Inferno today, and suddenly this map got alive again....
This is going to be good!
Kawawa
checked in game.
00:23 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/342370 ETIA. feat.Jenga - Say A Vengeance [Beginner]]
00:24 Kawawa: 00:11:090 (11090|1,11415|0) - 곡 전개상 여기 드럼 베이스만은 동일하니 같은 col로 유지해주면 좋을듯 한데
00:24 Kawawa: 의도인가요
00:26 Kawawa: 00:14:333 (14333|0,14982|0,15631|0,16279|0) - 또한 여기에 "w"히트 사운드가 결여 되어있다고 생각하네요. 타 난이도에서도 이 베이스에 snare를 사용했어서
00:26 LeiN-: 오호
00:27 LeiN-: 전자는
00:27 LeiN-: 의도이긴한데
00:27 Kawawa: 또한
00:27 LeiN-: 수정하겠스빈다
00:27 Kawawa: 00:16:442 (16442|2) -
00:27 Kawawa: 이 사운드가 bass1_2이고,
00:27 LeiN-: 후자도 휘슬사운드 추가했습니다
00:27 Kawawa: 노말에서 사용된건 bass1_002인데
00:27 Kawawa: 사실상 같은 wav파일 아닌가요
00:28 Kawawa: 두 파일 같이 들어봐도 다른점이 없어서
00:28 LeiN-: 그런것도 문제가 되나요?
00:28 Kawawa: 네
00:28 Kawawa: 사실상 불필요한 파일이라
00:28 Kawawa: 그냥 하나는 삭제하고
00:28 Kawawa: 전부 저걸로 통합해서 넣으면
00:29 Kawawa: 지금이면 힛사도
00:29 Kawawa: 많이 엄격해요
00:29 Kawawa: 흠
00:29 Kawawa: 00:20:820 (20820|2) - 이부분도 걸리고ㅓ
00:29 Kawawa: 00:22:117 (22117|1) - 여기도
00:29 Kawawa: 비기너에선 fx가 추가되어있는데
00:29 Kawawa: 그 이후 난이도에서는 보이지 않네요
00:29 LeiN-: 음..
00:30 Kawawa: 이런식으로 누군가 포스트 했을 경우
00:30 LeiN-: fx삭제하고
00:30 LeiN-: 위에 002도
00:30 LeiN-: 하나로 통합하겠습니다
00:30 Kawawa: 거기에 타당하게 말 할 수 있는 근거가 없어서
00:30 Kawawa: 변경하셔야 해요
00:30 Kawawa: 넹
00:30 Kawawa: 00:32:333 (32333|2) - 음 이러한 부분도
00:30 Kawawa: 그
00:30 Kawawa: 힛사쪽만
00:30 Kawawa: 전부 다시 한번 보시면 될듯한데
00:31 Kawawa: 힛사 전부 지우고, 막난이도만 적용한거 힛사카피어로
00:31 Kawawa: 싹 불러오면
00:31 Kawawa: 다 깔끔하게 입혀지긴 하는뎅
00:31 Kawawa: 지금 디퀄 기준이 매우 엄격해져서
00:31 Kawawa: ㅠㅠ
00:32 Kawawa: 만약 같은 웨이브 파일을 사용했는데, 이름을 다르게 해서 여러 파일로 나눈담에 각각 사용했을 경우도 안되요.
00:32 LeiN-: 하.. 그러고보니 이게 조금씩 다르네요
00:32 LeiN-: 사실 이것도 힛사 줄인다고 줄인건데
00:33 Kawawa: 그
00:33 Kawawa: 비기너를 보시면
00:33 Kawawa: F,C이런식으로 두셨잖아요?
00:33 Kawawa: 다른 난이도를 보면 직접 넣으셨구 kick1 이런식으루
00:33 Kawawa: 이거 자체가 일관성에 많이 어긋나긴한데
00:33 Kawawa: 이게 게스터가 자신의 힛사 스타일을
00:33 Kawawa: 낸거면 상관은 없는데
00:34 Kawawa: 제작자 본인이시기 때문에 퀄리티면에서는 "실수"나 저퀄리티로 작용해요
00:35 Kawawa: 모두 힛사가 일관될 수는 없지만, 의도라고 해명할 수 있다면 상관은 없어요.
00:36 Kawawa: 02:03:306 (123306|1,123306|0) - 이런 부분에서도
00:36 Kawawa: 힛사가 결여되어있고
00:37 LeiN-: 이거
00:37 Kawawa: 우선 패턴쪽만 전부 본 후에,
00:37 LeiN-: 안쓰는 힛사 걸러내는 방법은 없나요?
00:37 Kawawa: 음 체크하려면 텍스트파일로 열어서
00:37 Kawawa: 거기서 일일히 wav파일을
00:37 Kawawa: 찾기해가면서
00:38 Kawawa: 없는지 있는지를
00:38 Kawawa: 수작업해야하는데
00:38 LeiN-: ;
00:42 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/342369 ETIA. feat.Jenga - Say A Vengeance [Black Another]]
00:43 Kawawa: 잭 부분에서 00:32:333 (32333|2,32415|2) - 이부분은 풀어주는게 어떨까요
00:44 Kawawa: 패턴 전개가 잭 풀린 부분이, 각 1마디에 2번째 스트림이긴한데 00:22:604 (22604|1,22685|2) - 00:23:901 (23901|1,23982|2) -
00:44 Kawawa: 00:25:198 (25198|1,25279|2) -
00:44 Kawawa: 각 마디에 마지막 쪽에선 00:26:171 (26171|2,26252|2,26415|1,26496|1,26658|0,26739|0,26901|1,26982|1,27144|2,27225|1) -
00:44 Kawawa: 이런식으로 갔는데
00:44 Kawawa: 00:31:360 (31360|3,31442|3,31604|2,31685|2,31847|1,31928|1,32090|0,32171|0,32333|2,32415|2) -
00:44 Kawawa: 그럼 여기서
00:45 Kawawa: 00:32:333 (32333|2,32415|2) - 여것도 풀어주면 좋을듯 해요.
00:45 LeiN-: 설득력있네요
00:45 Kawawa: 00:32:333 (32333|2,32415|2,32658|2,32739|2) - 이거 두개가 같은 col에 있어서 뭔가 좀 느낌이 와닿지 않기도 하고
00:45 Kawawa: 아니네요,
00:45 Kawawa: 00:33:631 (33631|2,33712|2,33955|2,34036|2) - 위에 보면 이런식으로 의도가 있넴
00:46 LeiN-: 네 저도 수정은 좀..
00:46 LeiN-: 일단 두는걸로
00:48 Kawawa: 힛사쪽에서
00:48 Kawawa: 뭐 물어보실거 있나요?
00:49 Kawawa: 패턴은 크게 볼게 없어서 힛사만 좀
00:49 Kawawa: 개선하시면 될 듯 한데
00:54 LeiN-: 부딪히기식으로 랭크도전해보는건 별로 안내키시나요
00:55 Kawawa: 흠
00:55 Kawawa: 그럼 그냥 유지하실래요?
00:55 LeiN-: 유지정도는아니구요
00:55 LeiN-: 카와님이 지적해주신것들정도는
00:55 Kawawa: 아하
00:55 LeiN-: 수정해보고
00:55 Kawawa: 그정도면 충분해요
00:55 LeiN-: 완벽하게
00:55 LeiN-: 수정은 하기도 싫고 할 시간도 별로 없어서
00:55 Kawawa: 패턴쪽에선 솔직히
00:55 Kawawa: 변경 할 필요는 보이지 않고
00:56 LeiN-: 디퀄을 3번이나 받았으니..
00:56 Kawawa: 힛사는 근데
00:56 LeiN-: 사실 퀄파를 3번받은거니 큰 문제는 없는게 어떻게보면 당연하기도 하죠
00:56 Kawawa: 확실히 걸릴거같아요
00:56 LeiN-: 지적해주신거 수정해두오?
00:56 Kawawa: 아녀
00:56 Kawawa: 지적한거 수정만 되면
00:56 Kawawa: 그 적어두 대강
00:56 Kawawa: 노말정도랑 비슷하게끔
00:56 Kawawa: 유지하시면 될듯 해요
00:57 Kawawa: 비기너에서 빠진게
00:57 Kawawa: 다소 있기도 하고
00:57 Kawawa: 대강 저러한 큰 문제점들만 수정되면
00:57 Kawawa: 제작자가 유지하겠다라는걸 명목하에
00:57 Kawawa: 부딪히면 되서
Alright. when you fixed this, call me!
Kawawa
bubbled!
SpectorDG
i miss yumi ;w;
Arzenvald
I give lmao/10 for what happened in the past
go qualified go!
Evening
you guys should be able to reference lein's difficulties if you have problems getting your hitsounds right

bbu's Another

00:08:658 (8658|1) - Might want to lower the volume of this default soft-hitnormal here so it doesn't sound out of place
01:01:117 (61117|2) - snare here is awfully soft, you might want to get the hitsounds from LeiN-'s difficulty

Chicken's Hyper

00:22:117 (22117|1) - I don't think this arbitrary car honky honk is needed, replace with something else
Topic Starter
LeiN-

Evening wrote:

you guys should be able to reference lein's difficulties if you have problems getting your hitsounds right

bbu's Another

00:08:658 (8658|1) - Might want to lower the volume of this default soft-hitnormal here so it doesn't sound out of place
01:01:117 (61117|2) - snare here is awfully soft, you might want to get the hitsounds from LeiN-'s difficulty

Chicken's Hyper

00:22:117 (22117|1) - I don't think this arbitrary car honky honk is needed, replace with something else
fixed all above this, thanks
Evening
seems fine now
Rivals_7
wow its back
paperlens
congrats finally
thank you for you persistence, I like this
erlinadewi-
yeaaaahhh... one of my fav beatmap is back~
Hotaru-
oh dude
my fav beatmaps in 2014 is back
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