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Aku mod pake English ya, sambil belajar < Okelah :3, sekalian fix grammar yo xD, biar bisa sekalian belajar :3 I'll be grammar nazi just this time xD[Hard][]
- It just me or anything, this diff looks like an Insane to me, huge 1/2 jump pattern and Hard placement imo . Star rating can't explain how Hard the flow that contains in this difficulty, I must be labeled by Insane >.< < Ehh, there's a lot of harder Hards than this .-.
- 00:27:713 (1,1) - Avoid
thesethis (karena cuma satu, kecuali spacingnya mau diubah jadi "spacings") kind of spacing, that using same spacing between 1/1 pattern and 1/2 pattern . Well, this is Hard, maybe some players got confusedfoundwith these kind of spacing . Consider to change this, <--- pake titik, jangan koma. If I were you, I will . I hope you can realize it if there's more of them, such like 00:35:158 (5,1) - . This is a note from me : You can put a 1/2 jump pattern with same or more than 1/1 spacing pattern, as long it has a distance between them, such an interval < That was on purpose because I reduced the SV at first, beside there's no sound at all between them... The ranked version do that as well.... And I think it's pretty easy to read.- 00:58:151 (4,1) - I think I've found a huge 1/2 jump pattern such like this . It's too much for me, since the song is not that hype, and big jump seems
madeto make the rhythm not emphasized precisely imo < It's not that far for me, my limit is until 3x distance. Furthermore, it was new combo and fall on big white tick so I think a jump would be appropriate .-.- 01:16:764 (3,4,5,6) - Rearrange these notes and place them by
Normalnormal (N nya huruf kecil. Huruf besar kalo menunjukkan difficulty Normal) 1/2 spacing < Kinda hard because it would cause severe overlap with next notes... I still have to stack (5) and (6) and make a little jump to (1) http://puu.sh/iD4WD/49c7e59bc8.jpg- 01:20:705 - It's (insert "an" here) important beat imo . It seems you
doesn'tdon't (I, you, we, they, pakenya don't, sisanya (he, she, it) pake doesnt)skippedskip (bukan past tense, pake bentuk pertama) this kind of beats on previous section . If youhashave (sama kayak atas, you pake have. He, she, it yang pake has) seen Kibbleru's Userpage, you'll be more carefully put an extended slider then skip an important beat (Just an opinion from me,Don'tdon't (koma, diikuti huruf kecil dong :3) mind it) < Yeah, I know that. But I want to follow the vocal just this time and I think 1/1 reverse slider would fit nicely.- 01:22:895 (1,2,3) - I'm surprised . First, it looks like 1/2 pattern, then it goes faster and makes me said "Woow.." and I think this is too much imo . Why don't you just put them on a spacing that can be noticeable by players? < I think this kind of pattern is pretty common now .-. furthermore I put them kinda closer to each other so I think it would be fine... (put them even more closer)
- 01:49:173 (1) - Random slider styles? or It's your style? It looks bad imo . Just make a simple slider to replace it, such as: < Why do everyone seems to be against it? ;-; it looks unique for me...
- 02:12:822 (3,4) - It's almost overlapped bad . Move (4) further away may looks better < If I recall it correctly, I tried to make triangle shape with (3) and (1)'s ends... Well, kinda moved it tho.
- 02:48:735 (1) - Curve this to the downside? It may improve your flow a bit < Kinda agree, changed it. But I moved it downward a bit so the flow from (5) would be good as well.
- 04:03:625 (5,1) - It looks bad imo .
Preferkayaknya "consider" lebih cocok disini to change it < Eh, it looks good for me .-. I tried to make identical shape and pattern with 04:02:311 (1,2) - so it look like repeating pattern...
Good luck hanyuu~
Beneran deh ini Insane >.< < Insane ane bisa jauh lebih susah dari ini xD ini standard Hard :3
Semoga belajar Inggrisnya sukses yo :3