Hi, Here's my mod.
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Time notation [minute]:[second]:[milisecond] ([time in miliseconds]|[key])
---EZ---00:18:724 (18724|3,19052|2) - move 1 column to left, mirror your previous note-slider
00:21:347 (21347|3) - move to 1, mirror your previous pattern
00:22:659 (22659|0) - remove, mirror your 00:23:970 - 00:24:954 pattern
00:22:659 (22659|3,22987|2) - exchange their position, ^
00:27:249 (27249|1,27577|0) - exchange their position, mirror your 00:25:282 - 00:26:265 pattern
00:39:052 (39052|3) - remove for consistency, honestly I like your pattern
00:39:052 (39052|3) - move 1 column to left, mirror your 00:39:052 - 00:40:036 pattern
00:45:610 (45610|2) - remove for consistency I guess
00:45:610 (45610|0,45938|1) - exchange their position, following your 00:47:577 - 00:49:216 pattern
01:00:692 (60692|1,61019|2) - move 1 column to left, repeat your 00:56:101 - 00:58:397 pattern
01:02:987 - add note at 3 for "na-ni-wo" part consistency
01:04:298 - add note at 0, same like above
01:06:265 (66265|1) - extend to 01:06:593
01:12:495 - 01:14:790 -> add notes at every end of sliders
01:27:249 -
http://puu.sh/iEi6D.jpg I guess for ending it's best for make stairs
---NM---01:27:413 (87413|3) - remove for easier play
00:03:642 - 00:14:462 -> maybe for that interval you must remove every notes that lies on red lines.
00:14:462 - 00:34:134 -> I guess you can follow your 00:46:921 - 00:50:528 -, at least for sound you follow.
00:34:462 -
http://puu.sh/iEia2.jpg To continue 00:14:462 - 00:34:134 I guess you can made a stairs
00:51:511 -
http://puu.sh/iEian.jpg I guess your pattern a little bit hard, especially for note on that red line.
00:52:823 -
http://puu.sh/iEib1.jpg ^
01:02:167 (62167|1,63479|2) - remove for easier play
01:02:331 (62331|1,63642|2) - Ctrl + G for easier pattern I guess
01:05:938 (65938|3) - move to 2, mirror your previous pattern
01:06:101 (66101|1) - remove, ^
01:12:495 -
http://puu.sh/iEibZ.jpg same like 00:51:511
01:13:806 -
http://puu.sh/iEict.jpg ^
01:27:414 (87414|0) - Press K twice for more accurately drum I guess
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Sorry I just mod these diffs
Hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF