All fixed, hope that is ready now D:qoot8123 wrote:
[ Kantan]
Notes
- 00:06:569 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is a bit offbeat too me, try this to make consistent with former pattern.
- 00:11:988 (13) - move to 00:11:795 - to follow the accent.
- 00:16:634 (17) - move to 00:18:182 - would be more fit the connection of 00:22:053 (21,22,23) -
- 00:26:698 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - change to this, it would more fit the song
- 00:32:892 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
- 00:39:085 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - ^
- 00:46:053 - add k here , to follow the song's accent
- 00:47:988 (48,49) - reverse them ,the vocal's pitch on 00:47:988 - is almost same with 00:47:601 (47) -
- 00:49:924 (51,52,53,54) - i suggest you use 1/1 on kiai to make better spread with other diff, like this
- 00:53:021 (54,55,56,57) - ^
- 00:56:117 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ^ (next part also needs change)
- 01:18:569 - ~end, try to make consistency with first part
[ Futsuu]
Notes
- 00:16:246 (30) - move to 00:15:472 - or 00:14:698 - for consistent with later part.
- 00:17:795 - add note, as you mapped on 00:23:601 (41,42,43) -
- 00:32:892 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - try this would be better(reverse finish with 00:35:214 (62,64) - )
- 00:37:924 (68) - and 00:41:021 (74) - remove. you put too many notes on unnecessary part.
- 00:45:279 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - change to this, would be more fit the song
- 00:59:601 (113) - move to 00:59:988 - and change to d, would be more fit the beat to me
- 01:09:666 (136) -,01:11:988 (142) - remove , not really needed.
[ Muzukashii]
Notes
- 00:04:634 (17) - remove this note, it can more emphasis the big note.
- 00:15:859 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - this pattern could be more easier like this
- 00:19:537 (63) - move to 00:20:311 - ,remove 00:21:085 (68) - and change 00:20:892 (67) - to d for consistency with former part.
- 00:24:472 (80,81,82) - remove them, too dense
- 00:29:214 (96,97) - remove and add d on 00:29:021 -
- 00:30:763 (104,105) - it could be removed, but it is up to you :3
- 00:36:859 (126) - remove,avoid triple on non-kiai part
- 00:37:537 - ~00:43:730 - too hard, should be make it easier
- 00:47:408 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - try this
- 01:03:666 (238) - change to d
- 01:14:117 (282) - remove, this note is not necessary
- 01:01:343 (229) - add finish.
[ Oni]
Notescall me back, and i will restore the bubble.
- last spinner could be removed.
- 00:15:859 - ~00:18:956 - try to make consistent with former pattern
- 00:21:472 (91,92) - remove, here is calm
- 00:22:053 (95) - change to d to follow vocal's pitch
- 00:29:601 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - try to make consistent with former pattern
- 00:51:569 (267,270) - remove and add k on 00:51:763 - , can emphasize the vocal better and change 00:51:472 - to d
- 00:54:569 (285,286,287,288,289,290) - ^ e.g
- 01:03:859 (343,344,345,346,347,348) - ^
- 01:06:956 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - ^
- 01:17:021 (426,427,428,429,430,431) - ^ only use 5-plet is enough
- 01:00:569 (324) - could be removed.
- 00:56:117 - ~00:58:440 - try to reference 00:49:924 - ~00:52:246 - the current pattern is not reflect the song well
- 01:22:246 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - reduce some note as first part