XinCrin wrote:

Don't give up . Go! Go!

game rock wrote:

Hola , soy un Noob Modder pero doy todo lo que puedo para ayudar *-*/ Gracias bro

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

Bueno, mi opinión es:

[Kantan]


La Velocidad Slid. debe ser, en kantan, 1,20. Lo usual esque asi sea pero en mi caso si le pongo 1.20 va a ser muy lento, fue lo que me dijo un BAT u.u


00:30:956 - Cambialo a k Si escuchas bien es como si el volumen aumentara en esta parte
00:46:827 - Cambialo a d para que siga el patrón. Si, muy buena observacion
01:00:763 - Cambiar a d para que siga el patrón con las demás notas. No, porque los kats quedan bien con la voz
01:01:537 - Cambiar a k? Ok
01:03:085 - Cambiar a k? En esta parte sigo la voz de la cantante
01:05:408 - Cambialo a k para que siga el patrón. Lo mismo que lo anterior ^
01:13:150 - Cambiar a d? Nope, sigo la voz
01:13:924 - Cambialo a k por el patrón. Si, combina bien con la voz
01:15:472 - Cambiar a k? Nope, sigo la voz


[Futsuu]


La Velocidad Slid. debe ser 1,20. Lo mismo que te dije en kantan


00:05:214 - Cambiar a K? lo veo mas conveniente. A mi tambien me parece mas conveniente pero es dificil para Fustuu
00:28:246 - Cambiar a k? lo veo mas conveniente. Nope, porque sigue con mis patrones anteriores
00:30:569 - Cambialo a k, para mí sigue el patrón y el ritmo. FIxed :3
00:17:408 - Cambialo a k y aquí 00:18:182 - Cambialo a d, quedará algo como esto: http://puu.sh/dxaoE/b741ec546f.jpg
00:18:956 - Cambialo a d y aquí 00:19:730 - Cambialo a k, esto te quedará igual que antes: http://puu.sh/dxaOS/efb1353a98.jpg mas o menos arreglado ^
00:30:569 - Cambiar a k?, creo que es mejor. Oki
00:41:795 - Cambiar a k? Oks
01:01:150 - Cambiar a k?, sigue el ritmo y el patrón. Nop, cambio en el volumen


[Muzukashii]


00:15:859 - Cambiar a k?, creo que es más conveniente. No porque aqui no hay cambios de sonidos y los puse juntos como descanso
00:17:795 - Creo que aquí iria mejor una d. Puede ser pero por el momento lo mantendre asi
00:31:730 - Lo mejor es que lo cambies a k. No porque el patron dkdkdk es aburrido
01:23:601 - Cambialo a D, para mí sigue el patrón. No porque mantiene una consistencia con 00:12:375 (40) -
00:59:795 - Cambiar a d y aquí 00:59:988 - Cambialo a k, esto te quedará kd k dk: http://puu.sh/dxbTw/21f34e56e9.jpg Ok
01:00:375 - Cambialo a d. No porque para mi va bien con la voz y si cambio este tendria que cambiar los dos que siguen porque tiene el mismo sonido y asi sucesivamente
01:00:763 - Cambialo a k. ^
01:01:537 - Puedes cambiarlo a D pero puedes dejarlo como está ya que también está bien. Consistencia
01:12:182 - Cambiar a d y aquí 01:12:375 - Cambialo a k, ya que esto te quedará como antes: kd k dk. Yay listo


[Oni]


00:47:698 - Cambialo a k, creo que es lo mejor. No es mala idea pero como esta ahora es mas jugable y ami particularmente no me gusta el patron dkkkd porque no me sale muy bien xD
00:50:117 - Cambialo a k. Nope, es el comienzo del kiai y tiene el mismo sonido
01:09:375 - Cambiar a k? Por lo ritmico creo que lo mantendre asi pero no es mala idea
01:03:666 - Creo que es mejor que lo cambies a d. Tienes toda la razon
01:03:859 - Quedaría mejor una k. Al momento de jugarlo es un poco confuso pero no es mala idea


[Akemi's Oni]


00:25:150 - Cambiar a K?, creo que lo veo más conveniente. En este caso Akemi usa los D para marcar el comienzo de otro ritmo y los K los usa en estas partes mira ( 00:34:440 (176,180,184) - )


[Inner Oni]


00:03:666 - Cambiar a k? Listo :3
00:04:827 - Es mejor que lo cambies a K. No porque este con 00:05:214 (23) - son un poco mas agudos que el que sigue
00:36:569 - Cambialo a d, creo que tiene más ritmo. No, aca marca el inicio de un incremento de volumen
01:05:601 - Cambialo a d, sigue el patrón y la combinación. No estaria mal voy a esperar haber que me dice algun BAT
01:05:795 - Lo mejor sería que lo cambies a k. Nah, seria como un patron muy repetitivo y seria aburrido
01:06:375 - Cambialo a d, sigue el patrón y la combinación. Lo mismo que el anterior


Me gusta mucho tu Beatmap, espero que pronto sea Rankeable y espero que mi mod te haya ayudado

lolcubes wrote:

I have to say that I feel SV above 1.4 isn't really working well at all. It's at a point where playing with mods feels weird and it's still way too easy nomod... ;_;

Just a comment.

Niko-nyan wrote:

hue geno's request as baka

only until Baka World Baka's world domination? :3

Inner Oni

00:56:505 - kdkkd looks better for me (kdddk a bit weird) I decided to follow Geno's advice because will be boring to have similar pattern as 00:58:053 (378,379,380,381,382) - is near

Muzukashii
00:23:214 - d k k d k d d k k (Geno's mod in here a bit harder but this one a bit easier) harder <3
01:16:246 - remove this slider and add k d d [url=pic]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2940805[/url] Idk because I like this slider D:

Futsuu
01:16:246 - remove this slider and add k d d [url=pic]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2940805[/url] same as Muzukashii
01:20:505 - d sure and I changed at 00:09:279 (19) - too for consistency

Kantan
01:16:053 - remove spinner and add k
01:17:795 - add d

No reply = fixed

note : that kantan need more improvement and more rest 4/1 because new player need more rest Ok u.u

Genocide wrote:

well yeah,

[Kantan]
00:04:827 (4,5,6) - remove finish, or delete (5), the sound is kinda overemphasis. I decided to delete 5
00:10:440 - delete and , 00:11:214 (12) - move this 1/2 backward. >.< I remenber the first time, mintong told me that 1/2 is confusing at Kantan but anyway, deleted
00:18:182 - delete this, give more break. I'm agree with more breaks but if I delete 00:18:182 - sounds weird
00:23:988 (27) - delete, 00:21:279 (22,23,24) - and this kinda hard for newbies and delete (27) would be more easier than previous. Fixed
00:41:408 (45) - delete? for consistency with 00:46:053 - imo. Fixed
00:53:021 (58) - unnecessary finish imo, remove finish would be nice. Fixed
00:56:117 (61) - ^ Fixed
01:03:085 (69) - delete. No, Consistency with 00:50:698 (57) -

[Futsuu]
let's delete some for better spread with kantan.
00:08:311 (16) - delete
00:11:408 (23) - delete , if you delete above for consistency.
00:23:214 (45) - delete, for 2/1 break.
00:35:214 (67) - remove finish, the higher pitch is 00:34:440 (65) - so you can remove it for better emphasis imo.
00:38:698 (74,82) - you can delete both for 3/2 break.
00:47:988 (92) - delete this becuase 00:48:375 (92,93,94) - is a gap sound i mean 00:48:666 (93) - on blue tick, so it will be more harder imo.
01:03:472 (126) - consistent with previous break.
01:15:472 (155) - delete for break Are you sure? I'm agree with breaks but if I need to delete some notes I'll delete 01:15:085 (155) -
and 01:15:859 - as kat for emphasis.
01:19:537 (161) - delete.
01:22:634 (168) - delete.

[Muzukashii]
for me this muzu is good already since i have mod this xD let me give some suggestion. hahaha :3
00:18:375 - emphasis background sound would be nice imo http://puu.sh/gWgTM/f98aae04b6.png Maybe I don't understand xD I'll ask you in game but keep for moment
00:44:698 (172) - delete, the sound is lack.
01:22:053 (314) - delete, imo the sound is more good without this don.

[Oni]
01:04:343 - add don or kat here, to give the reflect for 01:05:408 (363,364,365) -

this mapset is good already. but for kantan and futsuu try to find a mod for both, so i will recheck this again. i just want to make it sure about quality diffs lol

Genocide wrote:

seems fine o:

qoot8123 wrote:

Seems this set had been bubbled. Just give some opinion about this set : It was a surprise *-*/

Overall:

1) 00:12:763 - ~ 00:25:150 - is the most calm part, make the notes less dense on katan to inner oni. Sure~~


Kantan:

1) 00:49:924 (53,54,55,56) - kiai should be mapped like this , it is similar with futsuu and also can make the proper spread between calm part and climax. Is a good idea but I'll keep because I want to make an basic kantan, if I decide to change in your way the diff will be like a futsuu

2) overall is fine, just needs reduce some notes on calm part. Reduced~~

Futsuu :

1) calm part also needs overhaul. Sure, fixed~~

2) 00:00:376 (1,2,3) - this pattern should follow the upcoming rhythm like this Fixed~~

2) overall is also fine. *-*/

Muzu :

1) calm part also needs overhaul. and there are too much continuous pattern (00:12:763 - ~ 00:48:956 - ) Yay, fixed

2) doublet is not fit really much. No more doublet please xD

3) kiai is the best part in muzu. *-*/

Oni :

1) calm part also needs overhaul. Fixed~~

2) this oni should a bit easier. I'm not agree because is too easy now imo, When I want to play Taiko and I search "Oni" , is because I want to play a hard diff, Oni should be hard forever.


Inner Oni :

1) 00:40:634 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - should be more consistent with former part. orz, sorry xD, fixed~~

2) the note's density is way too high on calmer part. Fixed~~


This set still needs improvement, especially muzu~inner Noo xD Give me more advices if you think so please

1. 00:06:569 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is a bit offbeat too me, try this to make consistent with former pattern.
2. 00:11:988 (13) - move to 00:11:795 - to follow the accent.
3. 00:16:634 (17) - move to 00:18:182 - would be more fit the connection of 00:22:053 (21,22,23) -
4. 00:26:698 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - change to this, it would more fit the song
5. 00:32:892 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
6. 00:39:085 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - ^
7. 00:46:053 - add k here , to follow the song's accent
8. 00:47:988 (48,49) - reverse them ,the vocal's pitch on 00:47:988 - is almost same with 00:47:601 (47) -
9. 00:49:924 (51,52,53,54) - i suggest you use 1/1 on kiai to make better spread with other diff, like this
10. 00:53:021 (54,55,56,57) - ^
11. 00:56:117 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ^ (next part also needs change)
12. 01:18:569 - ~end, try to make consistency with first part

1. 00:16:246 (30) - move to 00:15:472 - or 00:14:698 - for consistent with later part.
2. 00:17:795 - add note, as you mapped on 00:23:601 (41,42,43) -
3. 00:32:892 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - try this would be better(reverse finish with 00:35:214 (62,64) - )
4. 00:37:924 (68) - and 00:41:021 (74) - remove. you put too many notes on unnecessary part.
5. 00:45:279 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - change to this, would be more fit the song
6. 00:59:601 (113) - move to 00:59:988 - and change to d, would be more fit the beat to me
7. 01:09:666 (136) -,01:11:988 (142) - remove , not really needed.

1. 00:04:634 (17) - remove this note, it can more emphasis the big note.
2. 00:15:859 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - this pattern could be more easier like this
3. 00:19:537 (63) - move to 00:20:311 - ,remove 00:21:085 (68) - and change 00:20:892 (67) - to d for consistency with former part.
4. 00:24:472 (80,81,82) - remove them, too dense
5. 00:29:214 (96,97) - remove and add d on 00:29:021 -
6. 00:30:763 (104,105) - it could be removed, but it is up to you :3
7. 00:36:859 (126) - remove,avoid triple on non-kiai part
8. 00:37:537 - ~00:43:730 - too hard, should be make it easier
9. 00:47:408 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - try this
10. 01:03:666 (238) - change to d
11. 01:14:117 (282) - remove, this note is not necessary
12. 01:01:343 (229) - add finish.

1. last spinner could be removed.
2. 00:15:859 - ~00:18:956 - try to make consistent with former pattern
3. 00:21:472 (91,92) - remove, here is calm
4. 00:22:053 (95) - change to d to follow vocal's pitch
5. 00:29:601 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - try to make consistent with former pattern
6. 00:51:569 (267,270) - remove and add k on 00:51:763 - , can emphasize the vocal better and change 00:51:472 - to d
7. 00:54:569 (285,286,287,288,289,290) - ^ e.g
8. 01:03:859 (343,344,345,346,347,348) - ^
9. 01:06:956 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - ^
10. 01:17:021 (426,427,428,429,430,431) - ^ only use 5-plet is enough
11. 01:00:569 (324) - could be removed.
12. 00:56:117 - ~00:58:440 - try to reference 00:49:924 - ~00:52:246 - the current pattern is not reflect the song well
13. 01:22:246 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - reduce some note as first part

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]

Notes

1. 00:06:569 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is a bit offbeat too me, try this to make consistent with former pattern.
2. 00:11:988 (13) - move to 00:11:795 - to follow the accent.
3. 00:16:634 (17) - move to 00:18:182 - would be more fit the connection of 00:22:053 (21,22,23) -
4. 00:26:698 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - change to this, it would more fit the song
5. 00:32:892 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
6. 00:39:085 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - ^
7. 00:46:053 - add k here , to follow the song's accent
8. 00:47:988 (48,49) - reverse them ,the vocal's pitch on 00:47:988 - is almost same with 00:47:601 (47) -
9. 00:49:924 (51,52,53,54) - i suggest you use 1/1 on kiai to make better spread with other diff, like this
10. 00:53:021 (54,55,56,57) - ^
11. 00:56:117 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ^ (next part also needs change)
12. 01:18:569 - ~end, try to make consistency with first part

[ Futsuu]

Notes

1. 00:16:246 (30) - move to 00:15:472 - or 00:14:698 - for consistent with later part.
2. 00:17:795 - add note, as you mapped on 00:23:601 (41,42,43) -
3. 00:32:892 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - try this would be better(reverse finish with 00:35:214 (62,64) - )
4. 00:37:924 (68) - and 00:41:021 (74) - remove. you put too many notes on unnecessary part.
5. 00:45:279 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - change to this, would be more fit the song
6. 00:59:601 (113) - move to 00:59:988 - and change to d, would be more fit the beat to me
7. 01:09:666 (136) -,01:11:988 (142) - remove , not really needed.

[ Muzukashii]

Notes

1. 00:04:634 (17) - remove this note, it can more emphasis the big note.
2. 00:15:859 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - this pattern could be more easier like this
3. 00:19:537 (63) - move to 00:20:311 - ,remove 00:21:085 (68) - and change 00:20:892 (67) - to d for consistency with former part.
4. 00:24:472 (80,81,82) - remove them, too dense
5. 00:29:214 (96,97) - remove and add d on 00:29:021 -
6. 00:30:763 (104,105) - it could be removed, but it is up to you :3
7. 00:36:859 (126) - remove,avoid triple on non-kiai part
8. 00:37:537 - ~00:43:730 - too hard, should be make it easier
9. 00:47:408 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - try this
10. 01:03:666 (238) - change to d
11. 01:14:117 (282) - remove, this note is not necessary
12. 01:01:343 (229) - add finish.

[ Oni]

Notes

1. last spinner could be removed.
2. 00:15:859 - ~00:18:956 - try to make consistent with former pattern
3. 00:21:472 (91,92) - remove, here is calm
4. 00:22:053 (95) - change to d to follow vocal's pitch
5. 00:29:601 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - try to make consistent with former pattern
6. 00:51:569 (267,270) - remove and add k on 00:51:763 - , can emphasize the vocal better and change 00:51:472 - to d
7. 00:54:569 (285,286,287,288,289,290) - ^ e.g
8. 01:03:859 (343,344,345,346,347,348) - ^
9. 01:06:956 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - ^
10. 01:17:021 (426,427,428,429,430,431) - ^ only use 5-plet is enough
11. 01:00:569 (324) - could be removed.
12. 00:56:117 - ~00:58:440 - try to reference 00:49:924 - ~00:52:246 - the current pattern is not reflect the song well
13. 01:22:246 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - reduce some note as first part

call me back, and i will restore the bubble.

qoot8123 wrote:

there is some unnecessary finish on muzu:

00:18:956 (56) - ,00:37:150 (119) - ,00:42:182 (136) - ,00:43:343 (141) -

and 00:21:666 (64) - this note also could be removed(muzu)

qoot8123 wrote:

Looks much better than before :3

re-Bubbled!

• [Kantan]

1. 00:09:666 (9) - consider adding finish here to make it consistent with 01:20:892 (3) - ?
2. 00:33:666 (30) - maybe d to reflect the drop in vocal pitch ? This could help emphasize the upcoming big kats at 00:34:440 (31,32,33) - as well.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:12:763 (25) - maybe D here for the stressed sound ? You used a big note in Kantan as well.
2. 00:52:246 (97) - consider changing this note to d ? This would fit the pitch drop nicely imo.
3. 00:55:150 (103,104) - In contrast to ^ , swapping these notes to d k would be better.
4. 00:58:440 (111) - same as 00:52:246 (97) -
5. 01:04:634 (125) - ^

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:472 (104,105) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could fit the decrease in vocal pitch well.
2. 00:37:537 (119) - maybe add finish as you did in lower difficulties ?
3. 00:40:053 (128,129) - these notes could be deleted for a 2/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is rather long from 00:22:053 to 00:48:956 -
4. 00:43:150 (139,140) - delete if you apply ^ for consistency.
5. 01:02:311 (214) - K would be better for pattern consistency as 00:49:924 (163) -
6. 01:21:859 (284) - maybe d as you did at 00:10:634 (34) - ?

• [Oni]

1. 00:14:892 (63) - k would be better for cohering with 00:17:988 (74) -
2. 00:27:472 (122) - consider changing this note to d ? This would result in a smoother flow imo.
3. 00:34:246 (161) - As the music is rather soft, d would probably sound better.
4. 00:36:569 (173,174,175,176) - consider using kdd k instead ? This could follow the music in a way better.
5. 01:18:182 (430,431) - you may swap these notes to make it consistent with 00:06:956 (26,27) -

• [Akemi's Oni]
  
  looks fine.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested. Yay, thanks Nardo sempai :3

• [Kantan]

1. 00:09:666 (9) - consider adding finish here to make it consistent with 01:20:892 (3) - ? Fixed
2. 00:33:666 (30) - maybe d to reflect the drop in vocal pitch ? This could help emphasize the upcoming big kats at 00:34:440 (31,32,33) - as well. Fixed

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:12:763 (25) - maybe D here for the stressed sound ? You used a big note in Kantan as well. changed to K consistency with Kantan
2. 00:52:246 (97) - consider changing this note to d ? This would fit the pitch drop nicely imo. Fixed
3. 00:55:150 (103,104) - In contrast to ^ , swapping these notes to d k would be better. Fixed
4. 00:58:440 (111) - same as 00:52:246 (97) - Fixed
5. 01:04:634 (125) - ^ Fixed

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:472 (104,105) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could fit the decrease in vocal pitch well. I'll keep this pattern because I want to add more emphasis on high vocal pitch at 00:33:666 (105) - and 00:34:053 (106) -
2. 00:37:537 (119) - maybe add finish as you did in lower difficulties ? Added and changed to D consistency with lower difficulties
3. 00:40:053 (128,129) - these notes could be deleted for a 2/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is rather long from 00:22:053 to 00:48:956 - Can I keep these notes? because I hear a sound that is followed nicely with kk
4. 00:43:150 (139,140) - delete if you apply ^ for consistency. Same reason ^
5. 01:02:311 (214) - K would be better for pattern consistency as 00:49:924 (163) - fixed
6. 01:21:859 (284) - maybe d as you did at 00:10:634 (34) - ? fixed

• [Oni]

1. 00:14:892 (63) - k would be better for cohering with 00:17:988 (74) - fixed
2. 00:27:472 (122) - consider changing this note to d ? This would result in a smoother flow imo. fixed
3. 00:34:246 (161) - As the music is rather soft, d would probably sound better. fixed
4. 00:36:569 (173,174,175,176) - consider using kdd k instead ? This could follow the music in a way better. fixed
5. 01:18:182 (430,431) - you may swap these notes to make it consistent with 00:06:956 (26,27) - fixed

• [Akemi's Oni]
  
  looks fine.

Call me back~ Oki :3

chaica wrote:

good~

Surono wrote:

lul look dem nice big blek. :^)
gratz i a

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Congratz -Sh1n1- for your first qualified mapset / °∆°\

Nwolf wrote:

Congratz! After this long time you definitely deserved it C: