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Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 23 de junio de 2015 at 01:24:31 p.m.

Artist: fripSide
Title: black bullet
Source: ブラック・ブレット
Tags: opening Akemi_Homura 黒の銃弾
BPM: 155
Filesize: 2486kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Akemi's Oni (3.76 stars, 469 notes)
  2. Futsuu (1.85 stars, 165 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.05 stars, 85 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.92 stars, 288 notes)
  5. Oni (3.7 stars, 463 notes)
Download: fripSide - black bullet
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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# 1

Kantan 100%
Futsuu 100%
Muzukashii 100%
Oni 100%
Akemi's Oni 100% by Akemi_Homura
Inner Oni

Special Thanks to all modders:

  1. eINess (For star)
  2. [I]MMoRTal[S]
  3. Kuo Kyoka (For usefull help)
  4. Akemi_Homura (and star)
  5. Charlotte (and star)
  6. xtrem3x
  7. Lost The Lights
  8. lZenxl Twice mod
  9. Nardoxyribonucleic
  10. rew0825
  11. Nofool
  12. qoot8123
  13. Sanjenin Nagi (and star)
  14. Genocide
  15. Aldwych
  16. Hanjamon
  17. mintong89
  18. TKS
  19. toara_fict (and star)
  20. game rock
  21. Genocide
  22. Niko-nyan
  23. Genocide
  24. qoot8123
  25. Nardoxyribonucleic
wasonz
random modding ~

Muzukashii
00:00:749 (3,4) - k d more better i think

01:22:232 (363,365) - k

Oni
00:00:749 (3,4) - k d again :D

00:46:039 (256,257,258,259,260) - kdddk

01:08:297 (393) - add d here , 01:14:878 (433) -

Inner Oni
00:37:523 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - kkddkdd

00:38:297 (230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - kddkkkddk

00:40:620 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254) - kkkddddk

00:47:007 (293) - add d here

00:46:813 (292) - change to K

00:55:329 (348) - change to K

01:02:297 (401,402,403,404,405,406,407) - kkddkkd

01:04:232 (417,418,419) - kkd

Good map :)
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

random modding ~

Muzukashii
00:00:749 (3,4) - k d more better i think fixed~~

01:22:232 (363,365) - k fixed~~

Oni
00:00:749 (3,4) - k d again :D fixed~~

00:46:039 (256,257,258,259,260) - kdddk fixed~~

01:08:297 (393) - add d here , 01:14:878 (433) - add d? no change

Inner Oni
00:37:523 (223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - kkddkdd fixed~~

00:38:297 (230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238) - kddkkkddk fixed~~

00:40:620 (246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254) - kkkddddk fixed~~

00:47:007 (293) - add d here fixed~~

00:46:813 (292) - change to K fixed~~

00:55:329 (348) - change to K fixed~~

01:02:297 (401,402,403,404,405,406,407) - kkddkkd fixed~~

01:04:232 (417,418,419) - kkd fixed~~

Good map :) Thank you
Thanks for mod *-*
Ujimatsu Chiya
GOGO !! > 3 <
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

K i b i y a - wrote:

GOGO !! > 3 <
Thank you very much!! >3<
Akasha-
the tittle should be:
black bullet
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

the tittle should be:
black bullet
I forget that :) thank you!!
Akemi_Homura
Hi~~! :3
Here is my mod.

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime: - [Futsuu] : 49523 - [Inner Oni] : 49523 - [Kantan] : 49523 - [Muzukashii] : 49523 - [Oni] : 49548
  2. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks 'uncheck all diff please.'
  3. Inconsistency in Source : *Kantan - の銃弾 ブラック・ブレット Black Bullet *Other diffs - の銃弾 ブラック・ブレット Black Bullet

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:54:555 (77) - I think k is better.(same pattern with 00:51:458 (72,73,74). for beginners)

  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:37:716 (83) - move to 00:38:491.
  2. 00:39:458 (88) - change to k.
  3. 00:40:620 (90) - change to k~?

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:523 (6,7) - swap this~! so make dkd.
  2. 00:06:942 - add d~?
  3. 00:10:039 - add d~
  4. 00:34:813 (144) - change to k. ddkdk.
  5. 00:53:587 (235,236) - swap this. make kdk.
  6. 01:24:361 (1) - Please remove this spin. and just add D.

  • [Oni]
  1. The stack leniency is set to 0.2, which is below the recommended leniency of 0.3
  2. 01:08:878 (395) - change to k
  3. 01:09:652 (399) - change to k~

  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:265 - remove finish
  2. 00:29:200 - add d here~

I'll upload my GD soon~ :3
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~~! :3
Here is my mod.

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

  • [General]
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime: - [Futsuu] : 49523 - [Inner Oni] : 49523 - [Kantan] : 49523 - [Muzukashii] : 49523 - [Oni] : 49548 omg fixed~~
  2. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks 'uncheck all diff please.' fixed~~
  3. Inconsistency in Source : *Kantan - の銃弾 ブラック・ブレット Black Bullet *Other diffs - の銃弾 ブラック・ブレット Black Bullet fixed~~


  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:54:555 (77) - I think k is better.(same pattern with 00:51:458 (72,73,74). for beginners) fixed~~


  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:37:716 (83) - move to 00:38:491. fixed~~
  2. 00:39:458 (88) - change to k. fixed~~
  3. 00:40:620 (90) - change to k~? fixed~~


  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:01:523 (6,7) - swap this~! so make dkd. fixed~~
  2. 00:06:942 - add d~? fixed~~
  3. 00:10:039 - add d~ fixed~~
  4. 00:34:813 (144) - change to k. ddkdk. fixed~~
  5. 00:53:587 (235,236) - swap this. make kdk. fixed~~
  6. 01:24:361 (1) - Please remove this spin. and just add D. fixed~~

  • [Oni]
  1. The stack leniency is set to 0.2, which is below the recommended leniency of 0.3
  2. 01:08:878 (395) - change to k fixed~~
  3. 01:09:652 (399) - change to k~ fixed~~

  • [Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:265 - remove finish fixed~~
  2. 00:29:200 - add d here~ fixed~~

I'll upload my GD soon~ :3 added Thank you very much
Thanks for mod *-* :3
Charlotte
Hi from M4M ^^!

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Source ブラック・ブレット

Kantan

OD4→OD3

01:01:523 (97) - chnage d
01:13:910 (118) - change d

Futsuu

00:48:749 (107) - move to 00:48:658 - change D
01:03:443 - add d
01:06:545 - add d
01:09:659 - add k
01:12:749 - add d
01:13:329 (170) - move to 01:13:417 -
01:13:523 (171) - delete
01:15:840 - add d

Muzukashii

00:15:458 (56) - change d
00:40:232 (175) - change d
00:47:781 (213) - change k
01:20:018 - add d
01:20:103 (357) - change d

Akemi's Oni

00:11:103 (48) - delete
00:55:329 (306) - change d
01:07:040 - add d
01:16:516 - add d
01:17:297 (445,446) - ctrl + G
01:23:587 (22) - change D
01:24:263 - add k

Oni

00:45:555 (253) - change d
01:07:617 - add d
01:07:813 (390,391,392,393) - delete
01:08:099 - add D
01:08:297 - add d
01:08:491 (392) - change k
01:08:684 (393) - delete
01:08:878 (393) - change d
01:12:942 (417) - change d
01:20:002 - add d
01:23:105 - add d

Inner Oni

00:09:845 (47) - delete
00:21:265 (113) - change d
00:54:071 (344) - change d
00:54:265 (346) - change k
01:24:071 (564) - change d

What is the acceleration without either the difficulty of Oni?
What OD5 Are you one of the difficulty of Oni?

It is a great overall ;)

Good luck :)
Akemi_Homura

Charlotte wrote:

Akemi's Oni

00:11:103 (48) - delete fixed~
00:55:329 (306) - change d I think It should be a k.. because vocal is same. so changed to kkddk for better play.
01:07:040 - add d fixed~
01:16:516 - add d fixed~
01:17:297 (445,446) - ctrl + G no change~ I think k beat is better now~ :3
01:23:587 (22) - change D fixed~
01:24:263 - add k fixed~
Thank you~ :D

http://puu.sh/9dfe8/57aaa65b9b.osu
xtrem3x
Via PM (M4M)

__________________________________________________________

Kantan:

00:05:007 - d
00:05:781 - k
00:12:749 - d
__________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

Good...
__________________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

Good...
__________________________________________________________

Akemi's Oni:

Good...
__________________________________________________________

Oni:

00:06:168 (23,24,25,26,27) - borra la 24 y 26, la 27 hazla finish

__________________________________________________________

Inner Oni:

00:06:168 (26,27) - agrega 3 d's entre ese espacio

__________________________________________________________
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from M4M ^^!

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Source ブラック・ブレット

Kantan

OD4→OD3 fixed

01:01:523 (97) - chnage d fixed
01:13:910 (118) - change d fixed

Futsuu

00:48:749 (107) - move to 00:48:658 - change D no change
01:03:443 - add d fixed
01:06:545 - add d fixed
01:09:659 - add k fixed
01:12:749 - add d fixed
01:13:329 (170) - move to 01:13:417 - no change
01:13:523 (171) - delete fixed
01:15:840 - add d fixed

Muzukashii

00:15:458 (56) - change d
00:40:232 (175) - change d
00:47:781 (213) - change k
01:20:018 - add d
01:20:103 (357) - change d

Oni

00:45:555 (253) - change d
01:07:617 - add d
01:07:813 (390,391,392,393) - delete
01:08:099 - add D
01:08:297 - add d
01:08:491 (392) - change k
01:08:684 (393) - delete
01:08:878 (393) - change d
01:12:942 (417) - change d
01:20:002 - add d
01:23:105 - add d

Inner Oni

00:09:845 (47) - delete
00:21:265 (113) - change d
00:54:071 (344) - change d
00:54:265 (346) - change k
01:24:071 (564) - change d
them all fixed

What is the acceleration without either the difficulty of Oni?
What OD5 Are you one of the difficulty of Oni?

It is a great overall ;)

Good luck :)
Thanks for mod and star *--*
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

xtrem3x wrote:

Via PM (M4M)

__________________________________________________________

Kantan:

00:05:007 - d lo agrege pero en 1/2 del Beat snap divisor
00:05:781 - k ^
00:12:749 - d no d pero si D
__________________________________________________________

Futsuu:

Good... :3
__________________________________________________________

Muzukashii:

Good... :3
__________________________________________________________

Akemi's Oni:

Good... :3
__________________________________________________________

Oni:

00:06:168 (23,24,25,26,27) - borra la 24 y 26, la 27 hazla finish si lo encontre

__________________________________________________________

Inner Oni:

00:06:168 (26,27) - agrega 3 d's entre ese espacio lo encontre pero no puse ddd puse dkk

__________________________________________________________
Thanks for mod bro
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Charlotte wrote:

Akemi's Oni

00:11:103 (48) - delete fixed~
00:55:329 (306) - change d I think It should be a k.. because vocal is same. so changed to kkddk for better play.
01:07:040 - add d fixed~
01:16:516 - add d fixed~
01:17:297 (445,446) - ctrl + G no change~ I think k beat is better now~ :3
01:23:587 (22) - change D fixed~
01:24:263 - add k fixed~
Thank you~ :D

http://puu.sh/9dfe8/57aaa65b9b.osu
Update~~ :)
Lost The Lights
Yo o/ Mod requested via pm.

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=suggestion

[General]
Hay un espacio muy grande entre las Onis y la Muzukashii, recomiendo hacer una de las Onis más fácil.
Remueve black bullet, fripSide, tu nombre y ブラック・ブレット de los tags, no son necesarios.

[Kantan]
00:07:329 (11,12,13) - Los pondría como k a los 3, pero si no te gusta, puedes probar k d k.
00:10:426 (16) - k y movería 00:10:813 (17,18,19,20) - a los ticks rojos, van a seguir mejor la música. btw borra este 00:12:361 (21) -
00:59:974 (99) - k, baja el ritmo, pero como antes pusiste un d queda mejor un k.
01:12:361 (120) - k ^
01:22:426 (137,138,139) - Muevelos un tick atrás, o sea, a los rojos.

Buen trabajo con esta diff :D

[Futsuu]
00:10:813 (25,26,27) - 1 tick más adelante, como en la kantan, pero remueve esta 00:11:974 (28) -
00:34:039 (75,76) - Esto debería ser k d, sigue mucho mejor la música y la vocal. Usa ctrl + g
01:03:458 (145) - k para consistencia con 00:57:265 (128) -
01:06:555 (154) - ^
01:08:491 (160,161,162,163) - Conviene dejar esto como los demás, o sea, d k d k
01:13:329 (174) - muevela a 01:13:523 -

Tambien un buen trabajo.

[Muzukashii]
00:20:684 (78) - Borra esa y mueve 00:20:878 (79) - a 00:20:781 -
00:26:007 (105) - No queda muy estético en una muzukashii muchos tripletes, recomiendo que borres esa nota y que 00:25:329 (101) - sea d
00:29:297 (120) - ^
00:36:168 (150) - d
00:37:523 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - el patrón es muy largo :s, además tiene el triplete y los dobletes, queda muy difícil para una muzukashii. btw 00:40:232 (173) - para k.
00:40:620 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^
00:43:716 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) - ^ Cada vez más largos lol
01:13:426 (320) - D para consistencia con 01:01:039 (268) -
01:15:071 (328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - Lo mismo que arriba.
01:18:555 (346,350) - Te recomiendo borrar estos dos, y 01:18:749 (347,348,349) - k d k
01:21:652 (360) - r

Bastante bien, pero tiene patrones bastantes largos que hacen que sea muy difícil para un muzukashii.

[Oni]
00:02:103 (8) - k
00:03:265 (13) - ^
00:45:265 (248,249,250,251,252) - ddkkd (?)
00:58:039 (326,327,328,329,330) - kkddk suena mejor
01:13:329 (418) - d y 01:13:523 (419) - k
01:21:265 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475) - d k d k d k d k d suena mejor.
01:23:007 (476,477,478) - kdd (?)

[Akemi's Oni]
Fine for me.

[Inner Oni]
Está bien para mí.

Welp, buen mapa. Hice lo que pude xD.
GL.
Topic Starter
-Sh1n1-

Lost The Lights wrote:

Yo o/ Mod requested via pm.

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=suggestion

[General]
Hay un espacio muy grande entre las Onis y la Muzukashii, recomiendo hacer una de las Onis más fácil.
Remueve black bullet, fripSide, tu nombre y ブラック・ブレット de los tags, no son necesarios.

[Kantan]
00:07:329 (11,12,13) - Los pondría como k a los 3, pero si no te gusta, puedes probar k d k. el k d k le quedo mejor
00:10:426 (16) - kno d estaba bien y movería 00:10:813 (17,18,19,20) - a los ticks rojos, van a seguir mejor la música. btw borra este 00:12:361 (21) - esto si le hice
00:59:974 (99) - k, baja el ritmo, pero como antes pusiste un d queda mejor un k. no porque ese beat todavia pertenece al al ritmo anterior y los tres kkk que vienen marcan otro ritmo
01:12:361 (120) - k ^ ^
01:22:426 (137,138,139) - Muevelos un tick atrás, o sea, a los rojos. okis

Buen trabajo con esta diff :D n.n gracias

[Futsuu]
00:10:813 (25,26,27) - 1 tick más adelante, como en la kantan, pero remueve esta 00:11:974 (28) - ohh Yeah :3
00:34:039 (75,76) - Esto debería ser k d, sigue mucho mejor la música y la vocal. Usa ctrl + g Nop, esta bien asi... talvez seria una buena idea pero tendria que cambiar los del costado porque quedaría muy estático.
01:03:458 (145) - k para consistencia con 00:57:265 (128) -
01:06:555 (154) - ^
01:08:491 (160,161,162,163) - Conviene dejar esto como los demás, o sea, d k d k Se a lo que te refieres pero seria todo muy repetitivo, con eso no te digo que ponga cosas al azar sin ritmo solo para variar, si no variar con ritmo y si le encuentro el ritmo.
01:13:329 (174) - muevela a 01:13:523 - Oki

Tambien un buen trabajo. n.n gracias denuevo

[Muzukashii]
00:20:684 (78) - Borra esa y mueve 00:20:878 (79) - a 00:20:781 - Oki
00:26:007 (105) - No queda muy estético en una muzukashii muchos tripletes, recomiendo que borres esa nota y que 00:25:329 (101) - sea d oki
00:29:297 (120) - ^ Si se que se ve feo muchos triples en una muzu pero este le queda bien
00:36:168 (150) - d No esta mal pero asi esta bien
00:37:523 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - el patrón es muy largo :s, además tiene el triplete y los dobletes, queda muy difícil para una muzukashii. btw 00:40:232 (173) - para k. el largo lo deje así porque iva bien con la canciónel k si lo cambie
00:40:620 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^ ya lo parti :c
00:43:716 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) - ^ Cada vez más largos lol ya lo parti :(
01:13:426 (320) - D para consistencia con 01:01:039 (268) - ups se me paso, gracias
01:15:071 (328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - Lo mismo que arriba. ala mitad xD
01:18:555 (346,350) - Te recomiendo borrar estos dos, y 01:18:749 (347,348,349) - k d k Oki
01:21:652 (360) - r Okidoki

Bastante bien, pero tiene patrones bastantes largos que hacen que sea muy difícil para un muzukashii. gracias y ya no tiene dichos patrones :3

[Oni]
00:02:103 (8) - k lo encontré
00:03:265 (13) - ^ achi ta bien :3
00:45:265 (248,249,250,251,252) - ddkkd (?) Oki
00:58:039 (326,327,328,329,330) - kkddk suena mejor Oki
01:13:329 (418) - d y 01:13:523 (419) - k Okidoki
01:21:265 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475) - d k d k d k d k d suena mejor. comparando entre los dos sonidos en velocidad de 50% el mio suena mejor
01:23:007 (476,477,478) - kdd (?) posteriormente hay una k y el ddd le va mejor

[Akemi's Oni]
Fine for me.

[Inner Oni]
Está bien para mí.

Welp, buen mapa. Hice lo que pude xD.
GL.
Gracias bro me ayudastes un montón
Evening
Aye mod from requesto!

Inner Oni | Oni | Akemi's Oni All HP : OD = 6 : 6 ?

[Inner Oni]

At this pattern here 00:07:910 (38,40,42,44) - You used kats on red lines, then you changed to white lines here 00:10:039 (50,52,55) - , which sounds rather weird, I suggest to invert the hitsounds of 00:10:039 (50,51,52,53,55) -
00:18:942 (99) - d > D | A finish here might be nice
00:43:523 (270) - Remove | You might want to have a break here to help the player recover a bit
01:02:297 (410,411) - kk > K - | You might want to emphasize this note so as to vary the notes a bit
01:05:297 (433,434) - Swap | I think a kat on the vocal at 01:05:394 - sounds nicer
01:13:329 (499,500,501) - Maybe follow the vocals here? | It creates a more unique rhythm

[Akemi's Oni]
00:05:974 (21) - K > D | This is so as to make the difference in the pitch map greater between 00:05:974 (21,22) -
00:22:039 (108) - d > k | So as to follow the kat rhythm here 00:20:491 (99,101,103,106) -
00:32:200 (166) - d > k | Keep the kat rhythm somewhat constant

[Oni]
00:06:361 (24) - Remove | This kat feels unnecessary imo
00:18:942 (88) - k > K | I think a finish here will sound nice
00:31:329 (159) - d > D | ^
00:52:232 (291,367) - These 2 notes are of the same pattern, I suggest to make them both finishes or just remove the finishes
00:59:781 (337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - This pattern overlaps 2 sections in the music, I suggest to change pattern for 01:00:361 (340,341,342,343) -
01:08:103 (388) - D > d | I don't think a finish here is needed
01:08:491 - Might want to add more notes in this section here
01:21:265 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475) - Invert colors | Might want to follow 01:18:168 (449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457) - since it's the same sound effect

[Muzu]
00:09:265 (32,33) - Dk > dK | A finisher on 33 sounds better imo
00:25:136 (101) - k > K | A finisher here?
00:30:168 (125) - d > k | A kat here so to balance the amount of kats
00:43:329 (189) - k > K | A finisher here also?
01:01:523 (269) - ^ | To follow 01:00:749 (266,267) -
01:22:426 (359) - k > d | This kat here sounds weird imo, it doesn't follow the vocals like the other kats around it

[Futsuu]
00:07:329 (16,17,18,19) - Follow the vocals here? 00:08:684 - Add another note here also
00:10:426 (24) - Follow the vocals here, it feels and sounds better imo
00:25:136 (58) - k > K | Might want to add a finisher here since it's isolated
00:48:749 (106) - Use 1/4 here, it follows the music better | I know it's hard for player to follow 1/4 for futsuu, but once they are familiar with the music, this note will feel out of place
01:02:297 (141) - d > D | A finisher here?
01:21:458 (193) - D > d | Remove the finisher here, it sounds out of place

[Kantan]
kantan looks fine imo, will give some suggestions

00:25:136 (42) - k > K | Finisher here?
00:46:813 (76) - D > d | I don't think a finisher here is needed
01:02:297 (103) - d > D | Finisher here


Nothing else, good luck owo/
Akemi_Homura
lZenxl

lZenxl wrote:

Aye mod from requesto!
[Akemi's Oni]
00:05:974 (21) - K > D | This is so as to make the difference in the pitch map greater between 00:05:974 (21,22) -
00:22:039 (108) - d > k | So as to follow the kat rhythm here 00:20:491 (99,101,103,106) -
00:32:200 (166) - d > k | Keep the kat rhythm somewhat constant

Thank you~ fixed them.

http://puu.sh/9ouC6/4ee853b225.osu

and I think source '黒の銃弾' is right not 'の銃弾'. please check that~ :3
Topic Starter
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"lZenxl"

lZenxl wrote:

Aye mod from requesto!

Inner Oni | Oni | Akemi's Oni All HP : OD = 6 : 6 ?

[Inner Oni]

At this pattern here 00:07:910 (38,40,42,44) - You used kats on red lines, then you changed to white lines here 00:10:039 (50,52,55) - , which sounds rather weird, I suggest to invert the hitsounds of 00:10:039 (50,51,52,53,55) -
00:18:942 (99) - d > D | A finish here might be nice
00:43:523 (270) - Remove | You might want to have a break here to help the player recover a bit
01:02:297 (410,411) - kk > K - | You might want to emphasize this note so as to vary the notes a bit
01:05:297 (433,434) - Swap | I think a kat on the vocal at 01:05:394 - sounds nicer
01:13:329 (499,500,501) - Maybe follow the vocals here? | It creates a more unique rhythm

[Oni]
00:06:361 (24) - Remove | This kat feels unnecessary imo
00:18:942 (88) - k > K | I think a finish here will sound nice
00:31:329 (159) - d > D | ^
00:52:232 (291,367) - These 2 notes are of the same pattern, I suggest to make them both finishes or just remove the finishes
00:59:781 (337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - This pattern overlaps 2 sections in the music, I suggest to change pattern for 01:00:361 (340,341,342,343) -
01:08:103 (388) - D > d | I don't think a finish here is needed
01:08:491 - Might want to add more notes in this section here
01:21:265 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475) - Invert colors | Might want to follow 01:18:168 (449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457) - since it's the same sound effect

[Muzu]
00:09:265 (32,33) - Dk > dK | A finisher on 33 sounds better imo
00:25:136 (101) - k > K | A finisher here?
00:30:168 (125) - d > k | A kat here so to balance the amount of kats
00:43:329 (189) - k > K | A finisher here also?
01:01:523 (269) - ^ | To follow 01:00:749 (266,267) -
01:22:426 (359) - k > d | This kat here sounds weird imo, it doesn't follow the vocals like the other kats around it

[Futsuu]
00:07:329 (16,17,18,19) - Follow the vocals here? 00:08:684 - Add another note here also
00:10:426 (24) - Follow the vocals here, it feels and sounds better imo
00:25:136 (58) - k > K | Might want to add a finisher here since it's isolated
00:48:749 (106) - Use 1/4 here, it follows the music better | I know it's hard for player to follow 1/4 for futsuu, but once they are familiar with the music, this note will feel out of place
01:02:297 (141) - d > D | A finisher here?
01:21:458 (193) - D > d | Remove the finisher here, it sounds out of place

[Kantan]
kantan looks fine imo, will give some suggestions

00:25:136 (42) - k > K | Finisher here?
00:46:813 (76) - D > d | I don't think a finisher here is needed
01:02:297 (103) - d > D | Finisher here


Nothing else, good luck owo/ All fixed~~

Thank you very much *---* :)

"Akemi_Homura"

Akemi_Homura wrote:

http://puu.sh/9ouC6/4ee853b225.osu update

and I think source '黒の銃弾' is right not 'の銃弾'. please check that~ :3 >.< fixed

Thanks > 3 < :)
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