Niko-nyan wrote:

hue geno's request as baka

only until Baka World Baka's world domination? :3

Inner Oni

00:56:505 - kdkkd looks better for me (kdddk a bit weird) I decided to follow Geno's advice because will be boring to have similar pattern as 00:58:053 (378,379,380,381,382) - is near

Muzukashii
00:23:214 - d k k d k d d k k (Geno's mod in here a bit harder but this one a bit easier) harder <3
01:16:246 - remove this slider and add k d d [url=pic]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2940805[/url] Idk because I like this slider D:

Futsuu
01:16:246 - remove this slider and add k d d [url=pic]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2940805[/url] same as Muzukashii
01:20:505 - d sure and I changed at 00:09:279 (19) - too for consistency

Kantan
01:16:053 - remove spinner and add k
01:17:795 - add d

No reply = fixed

note : that kantan need more improvement and more rest 4/1 because new player need more rest Ok u.u

Genocide wrote:

well yeah,

[Kantan]
00:04:827 (4,5,6) - remove finish, or delete (5), the sound is kinda overemphasis. I decided to delete 5
00:10:440 - delete and , 00:11:214 (12) - move this 1/2 backward. >.< I remenber the first time, mintong told me that 1/2 is confusing at Kantan but anyway, deleted
00:18:182 - delete this, give more break. I'm agree with more breaks but if I delete 00:18:182 - sounds weird
00:23:988 (27) - delete, 00:21:279 (22,23,24) - and this kinda hard for newbies and delete (27) would be more easier than previous. Fixed
00:41:408 (45) - delete? for consistency with 00:46:053 - imo. Fixed
00:53:021 (58) - unnecessary finish imo, remove finish would be nice. Fixed
00:56:117 (61) - ^ Fixed
01:03:085 (69) - delete. No, Consistency with 00:50:698 (57) -

[Futsuu]
let's delete some for better spread with kantan.
00:08:311 (16) - delete
00:11:408 (23) - delete , if you delete above for consistency.
00:23:214 (45) - delete, for 2/1 break.
00:35:214 (67) - remove finish, the higher pitch is 00:34:440 (65) - so you can remove it for better emphasis imo.
00:38:698 (74,82) - you can delete both for 3/2 break.
00:47:988 (92) - delete this becuase 00:48:375 (92,93,94) - is a gap sound i mean 00:48:666 (93) - on blue tick, so it will be more harder imo.
01:03:472 (126) - consistent with previous break.
01:15:472 (155) - delete for break Are you sure? I'm agree with breaks but if I need to delete some notes I'll delete 01:15:085 (155) -
and 01:15:859 - as kat for emphasis.
01:19:537 (161) - delete.
01:22:634 (168) - delete.

[Muzukashii]
for me this muzu is good already since i have mod this xD let me give some suggestion. hahaha :3
00:18:375 - emphasis background sound would be nice imo http://puu.sh/gWgTM/f98aae04b6.png Maybe I don't understand xD I'll ask you in game but keep for moment
00:44:698 (172) - delete, the sound is lack.
01:22:053 (314) - delete, imo the sound is more good without this don.

[Oni]
01:04:343 - add don or kat here, to give the reflect for 01:05:408 (363,364,365) -

this mapset is good already. but for kantan and futsuu try to find a mod for both, so i will recheck this again. i just want to make it sure about quality diffs lol

Genocide wrote:

seems fine o:

qoot8123 wrote:

Seems this set had been bubbled. Just give some opinion about this set : It was a surprise *-*/

Overall:

1) 00:12:763 - ~ 00:25:150 - is the most calm part, make the notes less dense on katan to inner oni. Sure~~


Kantan:

1) 00:49:924 (53,54,55,56) - kiai should be mapped like this , it is similar with futsuu and also can make the proper spread between calm part and climax. Is a good idea but I'll keep because I want to make an basic kantan, if I decide to change in your way the diff will be like a futsuu

2) overall is fine, just needs reduce some notes on calm part. Reduced~~

Futsuu :

1) calm part also needs overhaul. Sure, fixed~~

2) 00:00:376 (1,2,3) - this pattern should follow the upcoming rhythm like this Fixed~~

2) overall is also fine. *-*/

Muzu :

1) calm part also needs overhaul. and there are too much continuous pattern (00:12:763 - ~ 00:48:956 - ) Yay, fixed

2) doublet is not fit really much. No more doublet please xD

3) kiai is the best part in muzu. *-*/

Oni :

1) calm part also needs overhaul. Fixed~~

2) this oni should a bit easier. I'm not agree because is too easy now imo, When I want to play Taiko and I search "Oni" , is because I want to play a hard diff, Oni should be hard forever.


Inner Oni :

1) 00:40:634 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - should be more consistent with former part. orz, sorry xD, fixed~~

2) the note's density is way too high on calmer part. Fixed~~


This set still needs improvement, especially muzu~inner Noo xD Give me more advices if you think so please

1. 00:06:569 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is a bit offbeat too me, try this to make consistent with former pattern.
2. 00:11:988 (13) - move to 00:11:795 - to follow the accent.
3. 00:16:634 (17) - move to 00:18:182 - would be more fit the connection of 00:22:053 (21,22,23) -
4. 00:26:698 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - change to this, it would more fit the song
5. 00:32:892 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
6. 00:39:085 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - ^
7. 00:46:053 - add k here , to follow the song's accent
8. 00:47:988 (48,49) - reverse them ,the vocal's pitch on 00:47:988 - is almost same with 00:47:601 (47) -
9. 00:49:924 (51,52,53,54) - i suggest you use 1/1 on kiai to make better spread with other diff, like this
10. 00:53:021 (54,55,56,57) - ^
11. 00:56:117 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ^ (next part also needs change)
12. 01:18:569 - ~end, try to make consistency with first part

1. 00:16:246 (30) - move to 00:15:472 - or 00:14:698 - for consistent with later part.
2. 00:17:795 - add note, as you mapped on 00:23:601 (41,42,43) -
3. 00:32:892 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - try this would be better(reverse finish with 00:35:214 (62,64) - )
4. 00:37:924 (68) - and 00:41:021 (74) - remove. you put too many notes on unnecessary part.
5. 00:45:279 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - change to this, would be more fit the song
6. 00:59:601 (113) - move to 00:59:988 - and change to d, would be more fit the beat to me
7. 01:09:666 (136) -,01:11:988 (142) - remove , not really needed.

1. 00:04:634 (17) - remove this note, it can more emphasis the big note.
2. 00:15:859 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - this pattern could be more easier like this
3. 00:19:537 (63) - move to 00:20:311 - ,remove 00:21:085 (68) - and change 00:20:892 (67) - to d for consistency with former part.
4. 00:24:472 (80,81,82) - remove them, too dense
5. 00:29:214 (96,97) - remove and add d on 00:29:021 -
6. 00:30:763 (104,105) - it could be removed, but it is up to you :3
7. 00:36:859 (126) - remove,avoid triple on non-kiai part
8. 00:37:537 - ~00:43:730 - too hard, should be make it easier
9. 00:47:408 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - try this
10. 01:03:666 (238) - change to d
11. 01:14:117 (282) - remove, this note is not necessary
12. 01:01:343 (229) - add finish.

1. last spinner could be removed.
2. 00:15:859 - ~00:18:956 - try to make consistent with former pattern
3. 00:21:472 (91,92) - remove, here is calm
4. 00:22:053 (95) - change to d to follow vocal's pitch
5. 00:29:601 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - try to make consistent with former pattern
6. 00:51:569 (267,270) - remove and add k on 00:51:763 - , can emphasize the vocal better and change 00:51:472 - to d
7. 00:54:569 (285,286,287,288,289,290) - ^ e.g
8. 01:03:859 (343,344,345,346,347,348) - ^
9. 01:06:956 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - ^
10. 01:17:021 (426,427,428,429,430,431) - ^ only use 5-plet is enough
11. 01:00:569 (324) - could be removed.
12. 00:56:117 - ~00:58:440 - try to reference 00:49:924 - ~00:52:246 - the current pattern is not reflect the song well
13. 01:22:246 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - reduce some note as first part

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]

Notes

1. 00:06:569 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is a bit offbeat too me, try this to make consistent with former pattern.
2. 00:11:988 (13) - move to 00:11:795 - to follow the accent.
3. 00:16:634 (17) - move to 00:18:182 - would be more fit the connection of 00:22:053 (21,22,23) -
4. 00:26:698 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - change to this, it would more fit the song
5. 00:32:892 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38) - ^
6. 00:39:085 (39,40,41,42,43,44) - ^
7. 00:46:053 - add k here , to follow the song's accent
8. 00:47:988 (48,49) - reverse them ,the vocal's pitch on 00:47:988 - is almost same with 00:47:601 (47) -
9. 00:49:924 (51,52,53,54) - i suggest you use 1/1 on kiai to make better spread with other diff, like this
10. 00:53:021 (54,55,56,57) - ^
11. 00:56:117 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - ^ (next part also needs change)
12. 01:18:569 - ~end, try to make consistency with first part

[ Futsuu]

Notes

1. 00:16:246 (30) - move to 00:15:472 - or 00:14:698 - for consistent with later part.
2. 00:17:795 - add note, as you mapped on 00:23:601 (41,42,43) -
3. 00:32:892 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66) - try this would be better(reverse finish with 00:35:214 (62,64) - )
4. 00:37:924 (68) - and 00:41:021 (74) - remove. you put too many notes on unnecessary part.
5. 00:45:279 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - change to this, would be more fit the song
6. 00:59:601 (113) - move to 00:59:988 - and change to d, would be more fit the beat to me
7. 01:09:666 (136) -,01:11:988 (142) - remove , not really needed.

[ Muzukashii]

Notes

1. 00:04:634 (17) - remove this note, it can more emphasis the big note.
2. 00:15:859 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - this pattern could be more easier like this
3. 00:19:537 (63) - move to 00:20:311 - ,remove 00:21:085 (68) - and change 00:20:892 (67) - to d for consistency with former part.
4. 00:24:472 (80,81,82) - remove them, too dense
5. 00:29:214 (96,97) - remove and add d on 00:29:021 -
6. 00:30:763 (104,105) - it could be removed, but it is up to you :3
7. 00:36:859 (126) - remove,avoid triple on non-kiai part
8. 00:37:537 - ~00:43:730 - too hard, should be make it easier
9. 00:47:408 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - try this
10. 01:03:666 (238) - change to d
11. 01:14:117 (282) - remove, this note is not necessary
12. 01:01:343 (229) - add finish.

[ Oni]

Notes

1. last spinner could be removed.
2. 00:15:859 - ~00:18:956 - try to make consistent with former pattern
3. 00:21:472 (91,92) - remove, here is calm
4. 00:22:053 (95) - change to d to follow vocal's pitch
5. 00:29:601 (130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138) - try to make consistent with former pattern
6. 00:51:569 (267,270) - remove and add k on 00:51:763 - , can emphasize the vocal better and change 00:51:472 - to d
7. 00:54:569 (285,286,287,288,289,290) - ^ e.g
8. 01:03:859 (343,344,345,346,347,348) - ^
9. 01:06:956 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - ^
10. 01:17:021 (426,427,428,429,430,431) - ^ only use 5-plet is enough
11. 01:00:569 (324) - could be removed.
12. 00:56:117 - ~00:58:440 - try to reference 00:49:924 - ~00:52:246 - the current pattern is not reflect the song well
13. 01:22:246 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465) - reduce some note as first part

call me back, and i will restore the bubble.

qoot8123 wrote:

there is some unnecessary finish on muzu:

00:18:956 (56) - ,00:37:150 (119) - ,00:42:182 (136) - ,00:43:343 (141) -

and 00:21:666 (64) - this note also could be removed(muzu)

qoot8123 wrote:

Looks much better than before :3

re-Bubbled!

• [Kantan]

1. 00:09:666 (9) - consider adding finish here to make it consistent with 01:20:892 (3) - ?
2. 00:33:666 (30) - maybe d to reflect the drop in vocal pitch ? This could help emphasize the upcoming big kats at 00:34:440 (31,32,33) - as well.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:12:763 (25) - maybe D here for the stressed sound ? You used a big note in Kantan as well.
2. 00:52:246 (97) - consider changing this note to d ? This would fit the pitch drop nicely imo.
3. 00:55:150 (103,104) - In contrast to ^ , swapping these notes to d k would be better.
4. 00:58:440 (111) - same as 00:52:246 (97) -
5. 01:04:634 (125) - ^

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:472 (104,105) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could fit the decrease in vocal pitch well.
2. 00:37:537 (119) - maybe add finish as you did in lower difficulties ?
3. 00:40:053 (128,129) - these notes could be deleted for a 2/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is rather long from 00:22:053 to 00:48:956 -
4. 00:43:150 (139,140) - delete if you apply ^ for consistency.
5. 01:02:311 (214) - K would be better for pattern consistency as 00:49:924 (163) -
6. 01:21:859 (284) - maybe d as you did at 00:10:634 (34) - ?

• [Oni]

1. 00:14:892 (63) - k would be better for cohering with 00:17:988 (74) -
2. 00:27:472 (122) - consider changing this note to d ? This would result in a smoother flow imo.
3. 00:34:246 (161) - As the music is rather soft, d would probably sound better.
4. 00:36:569 (173,174,175,176) - consider using kdd k instead ? This could follow the music in a way better.
5. 01:18:182 (430,431) - you may swap these notes to make it consistent with 00:06:956 (26,27) -

• [Akemi's Oni]
  
  looks fine.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested. Yay, thanks Nardo sempai :3

• [Kantan]

1. 00:09:666 (9) - consider adding finish here to make it consistent with 01:20:892 (3) - ? Fixed
2. 00:33:666 (30) - maybe d to reflect the drop in vocal pitch ? This could help emphasize the upcoming big kats at 00:34:440 (31,32,33) - as well. Fixed

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:12:763 (25) - maybe D here for the stressed sound ? You used a big note in Kantan as well. changed to K consistency with Kantan
2. 00:52:246 (97) - consider changing this note to d ? This would fit the pitch drop nicely imo. Fixed
3. 00:55:150 (103,104) - In contrast to ^ , swapping these notes to d k would be better. Fixed
4. 00:58:440 (111) - same as 00:52:246 (97) - Fixed
5. 01:04:634 (125) - ^ Fixed

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:33:472 (104,105) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could fit the decrease in vocal pitch well. I'll keep this pattern because I want to add more emphasis on high vocal pitch at 00:33:666 (105) - and 00:34:053 (106) -
2. 00:37:537 (119) - maybe add finish as you did in lower difficulties ? Added and changed to D consistency with lower difficulties
3. 00:40:053 (128,129) - these notes could be deleted for a 2/1 break. Currently the pattern chain is rather long from 00:22:053 to 00:48:956 - Can I keep these notes? because I hear a sound that is followed nicely with kk
4. 00:43:150 (139,140) - delete if you apply ^ for consistency. Same reason ^
5. 01:02:311 (214) - K would be better for pattern consistency as 00:49:924 (163) - fixed
6. 01:21:859 (284) - maybe d as you did at 00:10:634 (34) - ? fixed

• [Oni]

1. 00:14:892 (63) - k would be better for cohering with 00:17:988 (74) - fixed
2. 00:27:472 (122) - consider changing this note to d ? This would result in a smoother flow imo. fixed
3. 00:34:246 (161) - As the music is rather soft, d would probably sound better. fixed
4. 00:36:569 (173,174,175,176) - consider using kdd k instead ? This could follow the music in a way better. fixed
5. 01:18:182 (430,431) - you may swap these notes to make it consistent with 00:06:956 (26,27) - fixed

• [Akemi's Oni]
  
  looks fine.

Call me back~ Oki :3

chaica wrote:

good~

Surono wrote:

lul look dem nice big blek. :^)
gratz i a

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Congratz -Sh1n1- for your first qualified mapset / °∆°\

Nwolf wrote:

Congratz! After this long time you definitely deserved it C:

AsakuraNe wrote:

\*v*/ CONGRAAATSS OTOUTO Omg 1 year of hard work O.O buuut in the end you deserved it~

If this gets diqualified, Your Onee-chan will kick ass >,< lmao QATs are warned, I don't wanna see blood xDD

guineaQ wrote:

wow when

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hey shini, felicidades bro Gracias *-*/ pero lo tenia que decir tarde o temprano

[Oni]
01:24:375 (463) - Unrankeable 1/4 con finish al final Naa, no es unrankeable, hay muchos con el mismo patron. xD me hicistes asustar

Es lo unico que vi nomas al checar la oni

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hey shini, felicidades bro pero lo tenia que decir tarde o temprano

[Oni]
01:24:375 (463) - Unrankeable 1/4 con finish al final

Es lo unico que vi nomas al checar la oni

Hanjamon wrote:

Neku okazaki wrote:

Hey shini, felicidades bro pero lo tenia que decir tarde o temprano

[Oni]
01:24:375 (463) - Unrankeable 1/4 con finish al final

Es lo unico que vi nomas al checar la oni

Desde cuando es unrankeable? nunca lo ha sido (incluso con la regla que habia antes) xD

Neku okazaki wrote:

A mi siempre me la hacen de pedo D: