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- is it just me ? but it feel like some drum is weird somehow like some feel too early , some feel too late around here 00:02:450 -
well if I listen only the the kick sound here I can say that offset 1,205 on 2nd red timing feel great imo
then I continue to listen till 3rd red timing point and again I notice some snare sound feel too early and some feel too late xDDDDD around here 00:44:356 -
for the 3rd red timing point 31,667 offset sound reasonable but I'm not sure cus I only focus on cymbal sound and some kick in kiai so I'm sure the guitar and some snare before the kiai still sound off a bit like only a little
- 00:06:419 (2) - stack this with 00:07:054 (4) - would make the flow here 00:06:101 (1,2,3) - nice imo , a jumps from slider here would make sense since (2) get some impact things that idk how to explain that can be worth jumping well actually I just gonna say jumps from slider like what you did here 00:07:371 (1,2) - , 00:08:641 (1,2) - feel good so I guess it can be apply here too 00:06:101 (1,2) -
- 00:11:180 (5,1) - pretty sure stacking would do a thing like emphasis or something here nice and better than spacing like that imo
- 00:41:816 (1) - maybe you can improve transition thing from this slider to next circle by move tail of this slider down a bit current one feel pretty awkward imo since I think when I playing I was expect the circle to be at below the slider here to get the nice transition but then it not so I need to move turn the cursor around to another side to catch the next note which result in weird awkward feeling
- 01:22:927 (4,5,6,7,1) - is there any reason that the spacing is increase here since I find that the song doesn't feel more intense or something here lolso increase spacing here kinda feel a bit weird imo
- 00:14:514 (3) - can move tail up a bit so you will get better transition here 00:14:514 (3,4) - imo
- 00:36:419 (5) - placing like this probably can make the flow here 00:36:419 (5,1) - better imo
- 00:41:340 (4) - uhh looks nearly offscreen here , can you move this up a bit ?
- 00:42:134 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - feel kinda like a bit diff spike here , ahh you can just change some circles here to sliders here I don't know why you still use circles only rhythm here just like magi diff well it not bad but I feel like this is the only difficult part of the map that like I mean really really difficult compare to others part so I aware about diff spike here a bit
- 00:00:864 - if you want to silence thing here why not just use 1/2 slider for this 00:00:547 (1) - instead :C , it feel weird when playing with silence thing there
- 00:18:958 (1,2) - try this rhythm ? sound better imo
- 00:22:133 (3,4,5) - not quite sure , the pattern play fine for me but idk if hard player can reconize this for 1/1 spacing ? since pretty much the pattern itself looks complex that need to understand a bit , you can make the pattern itself a bit easier to read imo like something like this
- 00:33:404 (6,1) - not really sure if you want blanket here or not , if you really aim for blanket here try make blanket a bit better
- 00:34:990 (3) - object end not snapped
- 00:01:023 (1,2) - transition is not really good here try move (2) to x420 y128 , would make the transition here better imo like what you did here 00:02:292 (1,2) -
- 00:17:688 - feel empty here , map this beat ? would make rhythm here sound better imo
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- 00:18:958 (1,2) - try this rhythm ? I think it cover the beat here better
- 00:24:038 (1,2,3,4) - hmm not really sure what you try to follow here kinda sound weird that skip some guitar sound like 00:24:831 - , 00:25:784 - well I will just suggest rhythm here
- 00:31:657 (1,2,3,4) - would be cool tho if you seperate them like what you did here 00:21:498 (1,2,3,4) - , it would make flow better too imo
- 00:34:515 - kinda feel weird that you skip this beat here , this would sound better imo
- 00:36:737 (1,2,3,4) - uhh similiar to what I said here 00:31:657 (1,2,3,4) -
- 00:39:277 (1) - and yea similiar to what I said here 00:34:515 -
- 00:48:642 (5) - you can move this note to around x288 y148 , would make flow here 00:48:165 (4,5,6) - better imo
- 00:57:054 (1,2,3) - I think rhythm doesn't need to be intense like this ,something like this should be enough now , mapping this beat 00:57:213 - just feel a bit redundant imo
- 01:05:943 (3,4) - I just feel like this 01:06:102 - beat doesn't really need to be mapped that much imo similiar to what I said here 00:57:054 (1,2,3) - well it's up to you tho if you fix this you might want to fix the others similiar rhythm too for consistency
- 01:22:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm here kinda feel a bit really intense than the others part here and it really create big gap between easy and normal here might as well nerf this a bit , that would fix the gap here imo , here my rhythm suggestion
- 01:24:991 (1,2) - WUT #spacing uhh are you sure this spacing is ok ? ( I mean it not 1/2 spacing look at the rhythm lololololol )
- 00:11:975 (2) - might be good to move this a bit to the right around x468 y120 so that make pattern a bit more clean imo since current one got something not really good here
- 00:25:943 (3) - you can move this to the right a bit around x324 y256 so flow here 00:24:991 (2,3,1) - can be a bit more beginners friendly
- 01:07:213 (1) - move this a bit to around x112 y284 ? so it would make flow here 01:06:578 (5,1,2) - a bit better imo , it's minor yeh but it work nice for beginners tho
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