M4M?:c
Easy
00:09:912 (1,2,1) - why not use some symmetry liks this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100751? requires very little re-arrangement and I think it looks a tad bit neater than your current arrangement
00:24:991 (2) - looks a bit sloppy with the blanket being off and the curve itself looking kinda jagged >< not sure if you REALLY want to keep this shape, because I don't think it really looks as visually appealing and clean
00:41:816 (1,2) - again, I feel like something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100768 looks nicer since these sliders now feel like they're 'connected' in a way, not just two sliders randomly placed next to each other
00:52:610 (2) - it kinda feels like this downbeat should be clickable :c vocals feel very strong
00:55:150 (2) - ^ I mean, I guess this is your call, I just feel as though this desevers more emphasize
01:16:102 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100782 something like this feels very nice :c
01:18:642 (3,4,1) - might want to tidy up the spacing a little
01:23:086 (2,3,1) - 1.06 DS here, not sure if this bothers you, just letting you know ;w;
Normal
00:02:292 (1) - isn't this missing a finish on the head?
00:24:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - rythm feels very 1/2 heavy for such a slow paced part :c It's not overmapped or anything, I just feel as though this'll be kinda stressful to play when the song doesnt really call for it
00:47:531 (3) - curve looks kinda jagged :c
00:57:372 (2) - try making this a circle? feels a tad bit nicer
01:19:594 (3,1) - obligatory nazi blanket
Hard
00:30:387 (1) - very minor and probably very subjective too, but having the red anchor on a point during the slider that helps emphasizing the vocals feells nice because the slider would do a great job of emphasizing the vocals ;w;
00:36:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - eh this is my personal opinion, but the difference between this and 00:31:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesn't feel significant enough to justify a change in spacing and SV so it feels a tad bit overdone
00:35:943 (6) - I feel like extending this by 1/2 and then using a single jump works better :c
00:44:673 (3,4) - I don't really think having these as close really has any benefits, it really only looks eh to me ><
01:09:753 (1,2,3,4,1) - again very subjective opinion thingy, but placing them like this feels a little underwhelming for what could possibly be the strongest part of the song. I mean
Hard to mod for me because it is very different from how I map :c
Insane
00:03:561 (1,2,3) - going to be picky here: 2 isn't exactly between 1 and 3, which kinda ruins the symmetry
00:04:831 (1) - this feels nicer to me when extended by 1/2
00:38:642 (3,2) - nazi stack :c
00:41:340 (4,1,2,3) - I feel like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100922 flows a tad bit nicer :c
00:45:943 (3,4,5) - tidy up the spacing a bit? properly isn't much of an issue, I just thought that you might as well have this as neat as possible
00:56:419 (3,5) - obligatory nazi stack
01:06:261 (3,4) - just sayin that compared to all of your other sliderjumps, which used oval flow, this drop doesn't flow as nicely to me >< not worth changing of course, it just kinda stood out to me as the only thing that felt slightly uncomfortable to play (compared to the rest of the map anyways)
01:20:705 (2,2) - nazi stack /me runs (actually this is probably due to autostack or w.e. this is called)
I tried :c
00:09:912 (1,2,1) - why not use some symmetry liks this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100751? requires very little re-arrangement and I think it looks a tad bit neater than your current arrangement
00:24:991 (2) - looks a bit sloppy with the blanket being off and the curve itself looking kinda jagged >< not sure if you REALLY want to keep this shape, because I don't think it really looks as visually appealing and clean
00:41:816 (1,2) - again, I feel like something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100768 looks nicer since these sliders now feel like they're 'connected' in a way, not just two sliders randomly placed next to each other
00:52:610 (2) - it kinda feels like this downbeat should be clickable :c vocals feel very strong
00:55:150 (2) - ^ I mean, I guess this is your call, I just feel as though this desevers more emphasize
01:16:102 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100782 something like this feels very nice :c
01:18:642 (3,4,1) - might want to tidy up the spacing a little
01:23:086 (2,3,1) - 1.06 DS here, not sure if this bothers you, just letting you know ;w;
Normal
00:02:292 (1) - isn't this missing a finish on the head?
00:24:038 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - rythm feels very 1/2 heavy for such a slow paced part :c It's not overmapped or anything, I just feel as though this'll be kinda stressful to play when the song doesnt really call for it
00:47:531 (3) - curve looks kinda jagged :c
00:57:372 (2) - try making this a circle? feels a tad bit nicer
01:19:594 (3,1) - obligatory nazi blanket
Hard
00:30:387 (1) - very minor and probably very subjective too, but having the red anchor on a point during the slider that helps emphasizing the vocals feells nice because the slider would do a great job of emphasizing the vocals ;w;
00:36:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - eh this is my personal opinion, but the difference between this and 00:31:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesn't feel significant enough to justify a change in spacing and SV so it feels a tad bit overdone
00:35:943 (6) - I feel like extending this by 1/2 and then using a single jump works better :c
00:44:673 (3,4) - I don't really think having these as close really has any benefits, it really only looks eh to me ><
01:09:753 (1,2,3,4,1) - again very subjective opinion thingy, but placing them like this feels a little underwhelming for what could possibly be the strongest part of the song. I mean
Hard to mod for me because it is very different from how I map :c
Insane
00:03:561 (1,2,3) - going to be picky here: 2 isn't exactly between 1 and 3, which kinda ruins the symmetry
00:04:831 (1) - this feels nicer to me when extended by 1/2
00:38:642 (3,2) - nazi stack :c
00:41:340 (4,1,2,3) - I feel like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3100922 flows a tad bit nicer :c
00:45:943 (3,4,5) - tidy up the spacing a bit? properly isn't much of an issue, I just thought that you might as well have this as neat as possible
00:56:419 (3,5) - obligatory nazi stack
01:06:261 (3,4) - just sayin that compared to all of your other sliderjumps, which used oval flow, this drop doesn't flow as nicely to me >< not worth changing of course, it just kinda stood out to me as the only thing that felt slightly uncomfortable to play (compared to the rest of the map anyways)
01:20:705 (2,2) - nazi stack /me runs (actually this is probably due to autostack or w.e. this is called)
I tried :c