1. Easy (1.33 stars, 101 notes)
2. Hard (2.89 stars, 223 notes)
3. Insane (3.67 stars, 278 notes)
4. Normal (1.78 stars, 132 notes)

UltraRik wrote:

Hello from my queue!

Try something like this to fix the flow a bit

(just a suggestion, tho)

Actual mod

[Easy]
SV might be a bit much, 0.8 maybe? Done
Because your sliders move much faster than the spacing.
00:46:487 (1) - I hear the need for a pattern change in the music here. Rotate slider? Done, in another way
01:02:139 (2) - Would feel better curved to the other side Done, in another way...
01:05:617 (1) - More symethry pls :3 I like mine
01:27:356 - You could replace objects for a spinner ending if you like Done


[Normal]
SV 1.1 pls :3 Done
00:19:096 (3) - Regular short slider, I'd ignore the beat on 00:19:530 - Done, in another way
00:36:704 (7) - hmm.. want change but no suggestions Changed
00:48:226 (4) - ^ lol I don't know why should I change it :3
00:51:269 (3) - I would ignore this beat I think it's quite loud
00:53:443 (1) - Put left from previous one instead of down Done

I dislike the movement pauses you do after sliders in general.


[Hard]
I don't feel like doing this one lol lol


[Insane]
imo low bpm songs shouldn't have insanes

You could space the streams more, and maybe AR 8.5 ? I changed it to 8.4, and space the longest stream a little more

Nothing illegal in your insane, since it's an Insane.
But is it? 3.59 close enough

Overall, very well made map.
Yeah I hope this helps, good luck ^^

Kocari wrote:

Chào bạn, Tôi đến từ modding hàng đợi, chúng tôi là việt vì vậy tôi sẽ gõ tiếng việt, (Tôi sẽ có một riêng biệt bằng tiếng Anh trong trường hợp)

[Insane]

1. 00:01:270 (1) - làm mền này hơn (make this blanket more) Done
2. 00:03:661 (2) - như trên (same as above) Done
3. 00:04:096 (3,4,1) - Cung cấp cho không gian này nhiều hơn và làm cho mô hình như thế này, vì nó phù hợp và không kết tụ http://puu.sh/ifoQj/bfaa02afd1.jpg Done, but in another way
   (Give this more space and make pattern like this, since it fits and isn't clumped)
4. 00:09:530 (4) - Chảy ở đây là kỳ lạ, hãy thử ctrl + g (Flow here is strange, try ctrl+g) Done
5. 00:16:052 (6,7,8) - làm một cái gì đó như thế này, nó mang lại cho các combo mới ý thức về ý nghĩa http://puu.sh/ifp1w/27fff60641.jpg (do something like this, it gives the new combo a sense of meaning) Done
6. 00:37:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - làm thế nào về một mô hình như thế này, cung cấp cho một vòng quay mát mẻ http://puu.sh/ifp2s/493147ac1a.jpg (how about a pattern like this, gives a cool rotation) Fixed in other wise
7. 01:03:878 (5) - cho nó khoảng cách hơn (give it more spacing) Done
8. 01:16:704 (3) - Hãy làm việc này vì vậy nó không liên lạc với thanh trượt khác http://puu.sh/ifp9p/0840ee5687.jpg (Do this so it doesn't touch with other slider) Done
9. 01:22:574 (4) - Làm tương tự ở đây (Do the same here) Done

Tôi sẽ dừng lại ở đây bởi vì những khó khăn khác cần asthetics và một cảm giác nhịp điệu. Vui lòng sử dụng cách Snap sao tất cả cũng phù hợp với nhau thay vì thực sự gần gũi sau đó thật xa vì nó lẫn lộn các cầu thủ trung bình. Tôi hy vọng điều này sẽ giúp cho doanh nghiệp, như những khó khăn khác, tôi sẽ không có nhiều điều để nói. Cám ơn bạn thời gian của bạn (I will stop here because the other difficulties needs asthetics and a sense of rhythm. Please use Distance Snap so it all fits well with one another instead of really close then really far since it confuses the average player. I hope this will help for now, as the other difficulties I won't have much to say. Thanks for your time friend) Only for hard, the easy/normal is pretty good

Anxient wrote:

mod request
insane
00:37:139 (9) - 00:36:487 (7) - copy this slider into the position where 9 would be and do ctrl h + g. Done, in an other way
00:37:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - try putting some sort of pattern Done
00:38:443 (5,6) - blanket fix Done
00:39:096 (7,1) - ^ Done
01:07:356 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow into the next notes Done
01:16:487 (2,3,4) - bad overlap. please fix Done
01:21:269 (1,2) - sliderend blanket fix Done
01:21:922 (2,4) - overlap Done
01:26:487 (1) - this is a bad idea. change to some jump Changed to a circle move
01:27:682 (4) - delete, overmap Changed the stream

hard
00:13:443 (1) - dont SV change here. speedup better in 00:15:183 - Haha, it's my mistake, I don't want to change SV there at all =))
00:37:574 (4,5,6) - better triangle Triangle removed
00:38:878 (1,2,3,4) - better square Square removed
00:41:269 (8,9) - blanket Done
00:43:661 (2,3) - ^ Done
00:44:748 (1,2,3) - consistent DS Done
00:47:139 (1,2) - blanket could be a bit off Done
00:48:661 (2,3) - ^ Done
00:51:487 (4,5,6,7) - consistent DS Done
00:53:443 (1,2,3) - ^ Done
01:03:226 (3,4,1) - ^ Fixed in another way
01:05:183 (4,5) - blanket fix Done
01:07:139 - 01:07:356 - no need kiai spam here Done
01:20:835 (5,6) - blanket Done
01:22:791 (3,4) - better to try an blanket these Done
01:25:400 (2,3,4) - equal DS Done

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well some problems here and there. Keep in mind that DS is key when making a hard diff. try to make everything as consistent as possible. as per my policy, im only modding the top 2 hardest diffs. good luck!

[-Shoga-] wrote:

Hi hi, Lần đầu mod có gì thông cảm. À mà mình nói bằng tiếng anh cho dễ hiểu nhé. Tiếng Việt ăn nói lum thụm lắm. XD

Insance

• 00:10:835 (2,3,4) - Just the start of the song. Should reduce the distance between the note. Done
  00:31:269 (2,3,4) - Though not the start of the song anymore but since the rhythm is not that fast. Should use the same consideration as 00:10:835 (2,3,4) Done, but in another way
  00:38:443 (5) -May be change to x:296 y:268 since from 00:38:009 (3,4) should be symmetrical as 00:38:226 (4,5) Moved 00:38:226 (4) - instead
  01:24:748 (1) - Should consider bend the slider so that 01:25:183 (2) - can be press more ez. Done

Though this is insance and the map should be harder but the with this kind rhythm is hard to put more things into it. May be increase the AR and OD a little bit or increase it to 1000000000000 I think higher AR could make an emptiness on the 138 BPM diff, and higher OD could make an unbalance to the difficulty. BTW, this is what I've done right after using you mod:

SPOILER

hard

Unable to read AR 7 probably. This diff is a little difficult for 3 star song. I think it's clear, and the music is also clear that you can hear and keep high accuracy without reading AR

• 00:11:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try something different. Don't need lots of stack for a 3 star song. Try to make it easier to read. I like mine
  00:14:748 (3,4,1) - increase the gap so that it is readable It's farther than stack leniency does
  00:23:009 (2) - Reduce the jump from the previous slider. Done
  00:25:400 (3,4,5) - reduce the distance. Don't need that much of a gap since it is just a slow rhythm. It's a square, and maybe you're a bit confused to think I didn't reduce the distance
  00:26:487 (7) - Try turning the slider toward the end of the previous one. Don't do much trick pattern. Fixed in another way
  00:27:791 (2,3,4,5) - Should do a circular snap so that the wrist should be ezier to go with Done
  00:34:965 (3,4,5) - Try reduce the distance of the note. Done
  00:35:835 (5,6) - delete either 5 or 6. Don't need many stacks. beside hard level player may not be able to press that fast. My sugestion is deleting the second one which is 00:35:943 (6) Circle-circle-slider is one of the easiest pattern for 1/4 beat, it's harder than only slider-slider and kick sliders
  00:38:443 (1) - try to put the head of this slider to the end of the previous one. I like mine
  00:41:052 (5,6) - reduce the distance.Just a little
  00:46:269 (6,7,1) - prehaps reduce the stack. I like mine
  01:01:487 (3) - try to make it reable. Done
  01:02:791 (2,3) - The pointing of each slider is opposite. Perhaps somekind of change. I like it
  01:12:574 (2) - Try to move the slider down a bit so that it would be close to 01:12:356 (1) Done
  01:15:617 (3,4,5) - try to make it in a lieaner line. Perhap reduce the distance. Reduced the distance
  01:18:226 (2,3,4) - Make it closer since the distance is a bit far off. Done

In general, the song has lots of triple stacks, may try to reduce lots of hard-reading stacks for a 3 stars map. I wil try to fix them

normal

00:11:269 (4) - should add a slider after this to 00:13:443 (3) since the slider at the end is a bit too short I don't like this suggestion :3
What do u expect? I can't even read normal. XD <= Oh come on, why do you say that

I deserve 2 kudousu for this.

SPOILER

Don't believe this, it's just a joke

Hiyori wrote:

Hey there! from #modreq

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EASY:
Make all point centrosymmetric of the slidertick.I will, but not now. It's don't really need if you still want to fix the map


Your Easy diff is nicely done.
I'm inlove with the blankets. I have nothing to say. Haha

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NORMAL:
00:04:313 (4) - start New Combo I don't think I should spam color here
00:07:791 (2) - ^ same as above, start NC ^
00:11:269 (4) - ^ NC ^
00:30:400 (2) - ^ NC ^
00:36:704 (7) - ^ NC Done, but for 00:35:183 (4) -
00:30:400 (2,3) - this is fine but new players might not be able to read this one. One of my friend, 485pp, SS this diff on her first try =))
00:48:226 (4) - move this note a bit to the left maybe? Done, but in another way
01:24:748 (1,2,3) - awkward overlap. try to fix this. Done

==============================

Cute song, I really love it. Hope this mod helps. Goodluck with ur map!

ihewmatt wrote:

From #modreqs

Feel free to ignore. Nice Map Sorry for short mod. bc i got a school tomorrow.
[ Easy ]

00:14:313 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - Make this in one combo? Why?
00:35:183 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
00:38:661 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Done
00:59:965 (1) - same combo as this 01:00:400 (1) - or 00:59:965 (1,1,2,3,4) - Make this in one combo I like mine
01:23:009 (1,2,1) - Make this in one combo, or 01:26:487 (1) - click "Q" Done

[ Normal ]

00:35:183 (4) - NC Done
00:36:704 (7) - ^ or(Make this in one combo 00:36:704 (1,2,1) - ) Done
00:38:443 (1) - ^ Done
00:39:748 (1) - ^ Done
00:46:487 (5) - ^ or(Make this in one combo 00:43:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) Done
00:46:922 (1) - ^ I don't think it's necessary, but i'll fix in another way
00:49:748 (6,1,2,3) - Make this in one combo)I don't like it, maybe it's just for correcting AI Mod DS checking
01:06:922 (5,1,2,3) - ^I like mine
01:10:835 (1,2,1,2) - ^I think it need NC, follow the rhythm

noz1995 wrote:

You look quite like a new player, but your suggestion is really valuable. I need newbie opinions to know if my diff is too hard or not

LOL. Yeah I'm pretty new and thank god I've been of help. Haha

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue
[Insane]

SPOILER

00:04:748 (5) - bad flowing from (4), I think Changed 00:04:096 (3,4)
00:15:617 (5) - blanket Done
00:30:835 (1) - ^ I changed the direction of it
00:35:183 (2) - ^ ^
00:34:748 (6,4,5,6) - move to (360,144) for flowingDone
00:40:835 (5) - too far? suggestion: (268,108)(288,96)
00:43:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - draw it better, in a regular pentagon Done
00:48:226 (6) - blanket Done
01:09:096 (5) - ^ I don't like the blanket here
01:10:183 (7) - ^ Done
00:04:748 (5) - nc here My combo is following the voice, not instrumental
00:06:487 (2) - nc every 4 beat (means every big white tick) So how about the sliders end at big tick? This song is a little strange since big ticks don't have strong sound

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:16:704 (5,6) - too close Done
00:20:183 (5,6) - ^ Done
00:28:443 (5) - not well looking, I think Fixed a little
00:37:139 (3) - blanket with 00:36:052 (1) - Done
00:51:487 (4) - flowing and ds, suggestion (408,100) (400,92)
00:52:356 (6) - dsI don't think this is important, but I would follow you
00:52:791 (7) - ds^

jossieP wrote:

#TimingHelp

BPM: 138,000
Offset: 1285 (+15 on current) Hearing song with hitsound makes me think that you are wrong

And uhh... well you need hitsounds, I took the time to do this, take it as an example http://puu.sh/ijyUO/9d307a439e.rar Done, but I don't use Finish, Clap and Whistle. They are very annoying

jossieP wrote:

#TimingHelp

BPM: 138,000
Offset: 1285 (+15 on current) Hearing song with hitsound makes me think that you are wrong

And uhh... well you need hitsounds, I took the time to do this, take it as an example http://puu.sh/ijyUO/9d307a439e.rar Done, but I don't use Finish, Clap and Whistle. They are very annoying

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello~ m4m

[General]

http://puu.sh/im5bu/71915cdaec.png - this unrankable. delete the green section and put the sound in the timing section. change of sound in the Timing Section - possibly I don't think it's unrankable, since nothing in the Ranking Criteria says about that. For example, this is the timing of a new ranked map: ChouCho - Melt. And the Ranking Criteria says: "No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.", so I will do this mod only on my Easy and Normal diffs

[Easy]

00:13:447 (5,1) - spacing. you need to move the slider - as it requires spacings I don't know what to do, even when I turn off NC on 00:14:317 (1) and turn on the DS check in AI Mod.
00:49:969 (1,2) - ^ Done
00:59:969 (1) - remove new combo Done
01:03:882 (3) - nc Done
01:05:621 (1) - remove nc Done
01:07:360 (3) - nc Done
01:09:100 (1) - remove nc Done
01:10:839 (2) - nc Done
01:23:013 (1) - remove nc Done
01:26:926 (3) - clap Done

01:27:360 (1) - replaced by a slider Done
[Normal]

Add hitsound Will do after finish placing notes

00:05:621 (2,1) - spacing.as it requires spacings Don't know what to do
00:07:795 (2,1) - ^ Done
00:13:447 (3,1,1) - ^ Why? I like it
01:27:360 (1) - replaced by a slider Done

please correct all spacings. it's the same Normal... you generally use spacings? I got confused @_@ check the correctness of each object on the has spacings. ON Distance Snap! - then I can make another mod on Normal ~_~ I can fix things that listed in AI Mod DS check, I think it would give the exactly DS for things that is too close or too far by Distance Snap. Sometimes I use NC to make something change in the distance, such as 00:13:447 (3,1,1)

[Hard]

Add hitsound Will do after finish placing notes

00:41:273 (6,7) - spacing. Do the same distance as here 00:41:056 (5,6) Done
00:47:143 (1) - remove nc Done
00:49:969 (7) - nc Done
00:50:404 (1) - remove nc Done
00:51:491 (4) - nc Done
01:27:360 (9) - ^ Done

01:27:360 (1) - replaced by a spinner Done

[Insane]

Add hitsound Will do after finish placing notes

01:27:360 (1) - replaced by a spinner I don't think that I should remove the stream...
00:39:317 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/im6VB/b190503785.jpg
00:45:187 (4,5) - spacing Done

good luck o/

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

As for the Easy and Normal

These diffs should not be complicated. this means:

no streams, no jumps
strict adherence to the spacing you have chosen spacings 1 and ye shall keep this spacing throughout the diff.

Just do the following

Inc

and start correct spacings

[Easy]

here 00:13:447 (5,1) and here 00:52:360 (4,1)

[Normal]

here 00:01:274 (1,2,3) and 00:04:317 (4,1,2,1,2) - fix it
and here 00:08:230 (1,2,3) you understand? it is impossible.

the rest I will not write. you just need to arrange the objects as it requires with
if you fix it then your card will be perfect


ah, btw. [Hard] 01:28:230 (1) - delete spinner / because you deleted it in all the diffs

good luck

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Preview Time chuyển qua đây: 00:59:752 -
Nói thật thì preview ở 00:58:665 - rất là lạ
btw, shooted thêm 1 star, 12+ rồi nhé

good luck

edit: map cần hitsounds! ko thì là unrankable nên khuyến khích add hitsound

1. 00:01:274 to 00:11:491 - must be whistle
2. 00:11:708 to 00:13:230 - must be clap
3. normal hitsounds or soft clap --> drum
4. piano sound or even a vocal or violin --> whistle
5. cymbal --> finish
6. the lower sound of the drum --> drum hitsounds

1. Highly recommend you to use custom hitsound (find them if you want)

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto
2. lack of hitsounds
3. 00:11:708 (1,2,3,4) - add clap
4. 00:20:404 (4) - remove finish (there's no cymbal sound there)
5. 00:21:273 (6) - tail for clap
6. 00:25:621 (1) - remove finish
7. 00:30:839 (4) - ^
8. 00:32:578 (1) - ^
9. 00:40:839 (2,3) - remove those clap
10. 00:48:230 (2) - remove finish (head)
11. 00:51:491 (3,4) - use clap rather than finish
12. 01:13:013 (4) - remove finish
13. 01:27:360 (3) - same thing from normal. don't use slider for this. there's a note that you need to add
14. 01:28:230 - perfect one for slider

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto
2. 01:20:839 (1) - remove NC
3. 01:21:273 (1) - NC
4. 01:27:360 (3) - why slider? there's a note that you need to add
5. 01:28:230 - perfect one for slider

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto
2. 00:01:926 (2) - don't make it close. make it away
3. 00:03:665 (2) - ^
4. 00:11:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd prefer some of them into slider
5. 00:22:143 (1) - 304|312 (don't get this one mean? it means the X and Y)
6. 00:53:447 (1) - 300|304
7. 01:22:795 (3) - 148|216

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto

Backstep wrote:

Hi m4m as you want from Terra's Modding queue

SPOILER

Sorry for late

General

- Your BG I think it should be improve it imo

Here my BG it's up to you for use it or not :')

Or maybe try this image (low quality lol)

- Set AudioLeadIn: 1500 (change by open your "difficulties name.osu" with notepad, oh... don't forget every difficulties files.)
- As you said in pm, I'll make hitsound guide for you and you apply all your difficulties by yourself okay?

Hitsound

OK all hitsounds mod it's in here .osu file, just extract in your song folder and apply all your diffs.

Hitsound mod! (.rar files extract in your song folder.)

http://puu.sh/is0yX/dd40839813.rar

Hitsound code (if above link not work!!?)

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kimi no Iru Machi OP - Sentimental Love (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59752
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Sentimental Love (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:センチメンタルラブ (TV Size)
Artist:mimimemeMIMI
ArtistUnicode:みみめめMIMI
Creator:noz1995
Version:Backstep Hitsound Tester
Source:Kimi no Iru Machi
Tags:OP a town where you live 君のいる町 opening
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:319855

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.4
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Kimi_no_Iru_Machi_OVA.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Kimi no Iru Machi OP - Sentimental Love (TV Size).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1274,434.782608695652,4,2,0,35,1,0
1274,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,35,0,0
11708,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,20,0,0
12142,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,25,0,0
12577,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
13013,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,35,0,0
13447,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
15187,-100,4,2,0,65,0,0
21273,-100,4,2,0,25,0,0
22143,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,45,0,0
44752,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,55,0,0
53013,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,25,0,0
53230,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,55,0,0
53339,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,25,0,0
53447,-111.111111111111,4,2,0,35,0,0
60404,-95.2380952380952,4,2,0,65,0,1
73882,-95.2380952380952,4,2,0,65,0,0
74317,-95.2380952380952,4,2,0,65,0,1
88230,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,25,0,0
89100,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,0
Combo2 : 0,0,255
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 255,0,0
Combo5 : 0,255,255

[HitObjects]
372,288,1274,6,0,P|424:224|376:152,1,150.000005722046,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
278,210,1926,2,0,L|352:220,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
244,124,2360,2,0,L|170:114,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
64,88,2795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,88,3013,6,0,P|72:196|120:212,1,150.000005722046,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
166,191,3665,2,0,P|148:159|116:140,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
244,220,4100,2,0,P|263:252|294:271,1,75.0000028610231,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
316,200,4534,1,0,2:2:0:0:
344,104,4752,1,2,2:2:0:0:
344,104,5187,6,0,P|304:64|188:84,2,150.000005722046,2|2|2,2:2|2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
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372,272,80404,1,0,3:2:0:0:
372,272,80513,1,0,3:2:0:0:
372,272,80621,2,0,P|312:252|236:280,1,104.999996795654,0|2,3:2|1:2,2:2:0:0:
312,364,81056,1,0,2:2:0:0:
271,258,81273,6,0,P|144:232|168:144,1,209.999993591309,4|0,1:0|1:2,2:2:0:0:
260,120,81926,2,0,P|244:184|208:208,1,104.999996795654,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
152,112,82360,1,0,2:2:0:0:
284,44,82578,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,120,82795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,47,83013,6,0,P|353:70|336:144,2,157.499995193482,2|2|2,2:2|2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
380,256,83882,1,0,2:2:0:0:
380,256,83991,1,0,2:2:0:0:
380,256,84100,2,0,P|340:308|272:304,1,104.999996795654,2|0,2:2|1:2,2:2:0:0:
216,224,84534,1,2,2:2:0:0:
47,231,84752,6,0,P|67:283|111:307,1,104.999996795654,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
232,284,85187,1,0,1:2:0:0:
212,152,85404,2,0,P|184:88|40:84,1,209.999993591309,2|2,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:
47,231,86056,2,0,P|95:199|106:146,1,104.999996795654,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,241,86491,5,2,0:0:0:0:
286,268,86708,1,0,1:0:0:0:
348,158,86926,1,0,1:0:0:0:
264,65,87143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,116,87360,5,2,0:0:0:0:
154,167,87468,1,0,3:0:0:0:
198,187,87577,1,0,3:0:0:0:
247,170,87686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,152,87794,1,0,3:0:0:0:
349,153,87903,1,0,3:0:0:0:
383,190,88012,1,2,3:2:0:0:
380,241,88120,1,0,3:0:0:0:
340,264,88230,6,0,B|285:204|200:384|64:204,1,300.000011444092,2|0,2:2|2:2,2:2:0:0:

Good luck with this map! :3

-Hakurei- wrote:

since the hitsounds are not done yet for all diffs, i'll just do a hitsound hint for you here

[Hitsounds for all diffs]

1. 00:01:274 to 00:11:491 - must be whistle Done
2. 00:11:708 to 00:13:230 - must be clap Done
3. normal hitsounds or soft clap --> drum This may take long. I wil try to do in a few days :3
4. piano sound or even a vocal or violin --> whistle ^
5. cymbal --> finish ^
6. the lower sound of the drum --> drum hitsounds ^

[General]

1. Highly recommend you to use custom hitsound (find them if you want) I agree but maybe some day later

[Easy]

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto Done
2. lack of hitsounds
3. 00:11:708 (1,2,3,4) - add clap Done
4. 00:20:404 (4) - remove finish (there's no cymbal sound there) Done
5. 00:21:273 (6) - tail for clap Done
6. 00:25:621 (1) - remove finish Done
7. 00:30:839 (4) - ^ Done
8. 00:32:578 (1) - ^ Done
9. 00:40:839 (2,3) - remove those clap Done
10. 00:48:230 (2) - remove finish (head) Done
11. 00:51:491 (3,4) - use clap rather than finish Done
12. 01:13:013 (4) - remove finish Done
13. 01:27:360 (3) - same thing from normal. don't use slider for this. there's a note that you need to add Done
14. 01:28:230 - perfect one for slider Done

[Normal]

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto Done
2. 01:20:839 (1) - remove NC Done
3. 01:21:273 (1) - NC Done
4. 01:27:360 (3) - why slider? there's a note that you need to add Done
5. 01:28:230 - perfect one for slider Done

[Hard]

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto Done
2. 00:01:926 (2) - don't make it close. make it away Done
3. 00:03:665 (2) - ^ Done
4. 00:11:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd prefer some of them into slider I like the way they are more
5. 00:22:143 (1) - 304|312 (don't get this one mean? it means the X and Y) I don't like it and 00:21:273 (3) to be straight so I moved it to (304,288)
6. 00:53:447 (1) - 300|304 ^ (Moved 00:53:447 (1) to (300,304) and change 00:53:013 (5) a little
7. 01:22:795 (3) - 148|216 Done

[Insane]

1. What's the point using Sampleset and Additions into soft? Change them into Auto Done

GL!

• [General]

1. The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard seems a bit large. The reason is, you don't often use 1/2 track in Normal, by contrast in Hard, you sometimes use 1/4 track and have some random jump like 00:44:752 (1,2,3,4) - , especially the 1.9 SV (Insane is 2.0). I recommend you to increase the notes on 1/2 in Normal, decrese the use of 1/4 in Hard (better the sv)
   I won't be surprised if you get a dq or a pop cuz of spread
   [Easy]
   
2. 00:28:230 - The clap doesn't make sense. it's still piano sound at this timeline. remove it and add a whistle
3. 00:34:317 - the same as above
4. 01:17:360 - add whistle?
5. 01:20:839 (1) - move to x144 y76 to unify the ds
   
   [Normal]
   
6. 00:47:143 (1) - Why NC there?
7. 00:58:665 (1,1) - yep, in Normal, the space between the end of the spinner and the next note has to be 2 1/1 long (length of 3 white lines)
   if not, that's unrankable, cuz you don't give players enough time to recover after a spinner. My solution is, turn this spinner into a long slider, or just map something like 00:56:926 (1,2,3,4) -
8. 01:20:839 (5) - add whistle?
   
   [Hard]
   
9. 00:41:491 (7) - NC, the lyric is obvious
10. 00:54:100 (2,5) - move to x460 y152 for better flow
11. 00:58:665 (1,1,1,1) - just one color is fine, no need to use colorful nc when there is no sv change or something obviously special
    
    the Insane is fine to me

Good luck

Frey wrote:

Things seem fine to me, so just a quick mod

• [General]

1. The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard seems a bit large. The reason is, you don't often use 1/2 track in Normal, by contrast in Hard, you sometimes use 1/4 track and have some random jump like 00:44:752 (1,2,3,4) - , especially the 1.9 SV (Insane is 2.0). I recommend you to increase the notes on 1/2 in Normal, decrese the use of 1/4 in Hard (better the sv)
   I won't be surprised if you get a dq or a pop cuz of spread
   Oh yes, I think so.
   But for me, I think the Normal diff is ok, so I will try to make Hard diff easier
   [Easy]
   
2. 00:28:230 - The clap doesn't make sense. it's still piano sound at this timeline. remove it and add a whistle Done
3. 00:34:317 - the same as above Done
4. 01:17:360 - add whistle? Done
5. 01:20:839 (1) - move to x144 y76 to unify the ds Done
   
   [Normal]
   
6. 00:47:143 (1) - Why NC there? Ah, my mistake
7. 00:58:665 (1,1) - yep, in Normal, the space between the end of the spinner and the next note has to be 2 1/1 long (length of 3 white lines)
   if not, that's unrankable, cuz you don't give players enough time to recover after a spinner. My solution is, turn this spinner into a long slider, or just map something like 00:56:926 (1,2,3,4) - I fixed it in another way... Hope it's good
8. 01:20:839 (5) - add whistle? Done
   
   [Hard]
   
9. 00:41:491 (7) - NC, the lyric is obvious Done
10. 00:54:100 (2,5) - move to x460 y152 for better flow Moved 00:54:100 (2) only, and keep 00:55:187 (5)
11. 00:58:665 (1,1,1,1) - just one color is fine, no need to use colorful nc when there is no sv change or something obviously special Done
    
    the Insane is fine to me

Good luck