NewIpas
NewIpas wrote:
Hello~
[Lanturn's Easy]
- 00:08:200 (1) - Check spacing Should be fine. 4bpm won't make that much a difference in judgement.
- 00:11:782 (1) - Are you supposed to blanket these? If yes fix it Done.
- 00:19:841 (2,3) - I don't know If this Inappropriate or not but try to use simple pattern at this rhythm so newbies won't have a difficult time catching them . Ahh, I won't mention any same of this pattern :3 You know where they are This is incredibly easy to play for new players, especially when Normal is also using tons of 1/2s itself.
- I guess the strong beat like 00:25:662 - and 00:29:244 - must be filled to better emphasizing Eh. This is just following the vocals, and prevents confusion to newer players on what they are following. This is a pretty slow section, so I want to keep it this way rhythm wise.
- 00:47:602 (6) - Try to put new combo on it Yeah, forgot to when I updated last XD
- 00:48:498 (7,1) - Is the spacing like this were allowed? If yes tell me >< Just wondering if they're stacked, it will be more nicer but actually I don't know if that is allowed too There is a full measure (+1/2) between this and the next note. This is perfectly fine as the note doesn't even show up by the time you finish the (7)
- 01:03:498 (2) - Usage of hitnormal on this slider head, I guess, it feels awkward and almost made no sense . In my opinion, try to put any hitsound that can be help to emphasizing this vocal sound . I felt that hitclap seems to be fits xD yeah, added hitsound. me = lazy when copying guineaQ's hitsounds.
Mikii
Mikii wrote:
[Lanturn's Easy]
- 00:02:690 (2,3) I would Ctrl+G the 2 slider and make it a back and forth as well as getting rid of the 3 slider. This way, the placement looks more symmetrical and would get rid of what I would think is an awkward looking pair of sliders. + this rhythm would be much better for beginners They're actually quite fine. it's supposed to have resemblance to the first slider anyways.
- 00:18:498 (4) Adding a circle here wouldn't hurt It'd make the map spammy. IMO, and my feelings towards this, I'd rather not map here. The beat isn't anything worthy, lead-in vocals are silly to map. and such.
- 00:19:841 (2) Curving the slider more to the left like this looks better in term of symmetry Covers too much of the note. When making this and using the criticized 1/2 gap between these two. I'd like to keep this open and clean as possible so it's easy to see for players. They might get overwhelmed otherwise.
- 00:26:782 (1) I think extending the slider end to the white tick would give it more impact since the hitsounding is quite low so its safer to put this on a white tick. You do this at 00:29:692 (1) and it would fit this part much better This is for the not so correct term of polarity. The reason why I end this on the red is for the vocals. When the player feels the 'awkwardness' of this slider ending where it does, they'll naturally assume to follow where it ended off from, and that being the said vocals. When they get to 00:29:692 (1,2) - they'll understand what's going on and be able to play this as well.
- 00:57:453 (4) Make this slider more level? The angled off look doesn't fit for me This is fine. it connects the previous slider's angle
- 01:03:274 (2) Fill this tick with a HC. It needs to be filled because of the strong part of the vocal fixed with previous mod, used a drum whistle.
- 01:03:722 (3) I don't think this section should follow the vocals. Instead you should make this slider a 1/1 and start it on the large white tick. This works really well if you take my suggestion of adding a HC before Going to keep my rhythm here. with 1/1 spam being so boring, this adds some life into the song. It's pretty simple to follow as well since I'm using a 2/1 slider before, therefore kind of giving the idea that I'm not focused on the beat so much.
- 01:05:513 (1) Give this section more edge Circle placements aren't the best right now not really sure what you want me to do exactly, but I moved these around slightly I guess?
- 01:07:304 (4) Just a suggestion but I never like these types of slider when you can do a really good blanket here It's because I never use these kind of sliders that I wanted to give this a go. It also kinda gives a visual of the trumpets going up and then back down. I'd like to keep this.
- 01:10:886 (3,4,5) Try to space out this section to give it more freedom
eINess
eINess wrote:
[Lanturn's Easy]
lol so pro teach me
- 00:25:662 - how about add note? The drum sound is strong enough. Ignore seems a little awkward. The rhythm decrease here is intentional. I want to keep the map focused on the set rhythm it has, instead of added circles to pick up a beat that doesn't really follow what I'm doing.
- 00:29:244 - same above reason ^
koreapenguin
koreapenguin wrote:
Lanturn's Easy[/notice]
- 00:47:602 (1) - how about add newcombo here? for consistency and it would be easier to gain HP at beginner Diff imo, well it's seem doesn't need actually it up to you it does I forgot to add it in after changing the last mod lol.
- 01:03:498 (2) - it's nothing, how about add some sound on slider head? like "Drum" sampleset at least. hear so really have poor sound to me. added more life. Drum whistle.
- 00:57:453 (4) - same as ^ nahhh idk also it up to you I'm not sure if there was already a whistle or I added it randomly before getting to your mod. Either way, there is a whistle there now lol.
- 01:20:737 (2) - it's not be any problem, but seem still you can avoid make slider at deep place. lol. What's funny is that this is actually unrankable since it goes off screen. You saved me <3
Thanks for the mods everyone.
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