Julie wrote:

[box=Here you go :3!! Hope I didn't took to much time ><]

[Kantan]

00:46:391 (34) - woops, should be here, since your trying to match the vocal and drum sound like here 00:44:971 (33) - and 00:39:918 (28,29) - . Probably moved on that stick accidently lol
OK This part I have been corrected in the previous MOD

00:50:812 (39) - maybe not map this part, this part of the song I find it pretty cool. Maybe leave this 00:50:812 (39) - empty like you did here between 00:48:918 - to 00:50:181 - and between 00:51:444 - to 00:52:707 - . ok~~

01:07:233 (13,14) - ctrl+g, since you been matching vocal pitch too :3 ok :3

01:11:654 (19) - ^ so k :3 ok~ >w<

[Futsuu]

00:09:760 - add d, since you mapped this 00:10:391 (15) - , like you did here 00:08:496 (13,14) - and here 00:11:023 (16,17) - . So really important piano sound O.O umm. ok~

00:18:602 (30) - d like you did here 00:14:812 (23,25,28) - :3 ok~~

00:22:865 (37) - not sure why is on red stick, not sure if is copy paste rhythmn of here 00:13:391 (20) - (that you match really loud drum which fit :3) and this one 00:20:339 (33) - (that you matched the vocal @.@). While this 00:22:865 (37) - the only sound I hear is a repeat sound of this 00:22:707 - , so is not really important, might be hard to play this note well xD. Consent~ ok!

00:38:812 (69) - remove finish, that part dont have loud instrument sound like these 2 notes 00:36:286 (64,66) - that you put K. The loud part is here 00:39:128 - ok~~

00:41:970 (76) - Not really an important drum sound for futsuu ><. Feel really empty when play that notice because of this sound 00:41:654 - and this 00:42:128 - ok~ moved!

00:43:865 (80) - same reason as 00:38:812 (69) - ok!

01:12:918 (34,35,36,37) - Uwahh only part in futsuu 1/4 4 notes in a row xD. 01:13:075 (35) - delete this one. ok! deleted!

01:29:338 (60) - move it 01:29:181 - , like your did here 01:31:075 (63) - ummm... No change. sorry ;w;

01:33:444 (67) - delete no new sound, there this really really minor piano sound but is weirdly snap before xD. Or there this one 01:33:602 - umm.. ok~~~

[Muzukashii]

00:26:970 (87) - move to 00:26:812 - , easier to play since this sound 00:26:970 - is the same as this 00:26:812 - .　　ok~~ moved!

01:12:602 (286) - d , starting to be too much dkdkdk, while can make this note 01:12:918 (288) - stand out more~ ok!

01:13:865 (292) - d, ^ ok!

01:20:181 (310) - D? for the vocal 01:19:233 (308,309) - and 01:20:181 (310,311) - ? Since you been matching vocal a lots ^^ ok~!

01:22:707 (320) - k, like you did here 01:22:233 (316) - ^^ ok!

01:29:022 (340) - hmm mistake? no new sound, should be here 01:29:181 - no? lol thanks! moved 01:29:181 -

[Oni]

00:13:707 - to 00:23:654 - You use all different pattern except for 00:13:707 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - . Judging from the song I hear that http://puu.sh/h9udE.jpg . And you didn't use this pattern on all your different pattern xD. How I hear it is simple, 00:13:865 - and 00:14:023 - are the same instrument note, 00:14:181 - and 00:14:339 - are the same instrument note, 00:14:496 - and 00:14:654 - are the same instrument note. Reason why the 1st one is louder, is because another instrument xD. But judging with the one your mapping, thats what I hear~
Consent changed d k k d d k k

00:28:233 (137,138,139,140,141) - ddkkk ? can hear from this part 00:28:391 - that is actually getting different ~ xD mm... 00:28:549 - only changed k~

00:32:812 - not sure why no note here? keep it consistent, have vocal + important drum sound xD. d, because you put k for this sound 00:32:654 - ok~~

00:32:970 (167,168,169) - ddk , 00:33:128 - this sound you usually put k is more loud then this 00:32:970 - umm.. No change ;w;

00:33:286 (170) - d, have more effect for this one 00:33:444 (171) - that is more loud :3 ok~~ :3

00:33:760 (172) - k, keep that sound consistent ok!

00:56:733 - add d here? still hear drum :3. Will be more different from 00:56:970 - to 00:57:760 - ok!

00:58:864 (326) - k, should be different from 00:58:391 (321,322,323) - ok!

01:03:681 - continue the drum sound from 01:03:444 (358,359,360) - . Also will make it different from 01:02:812 (353,354,355) - that you match for vocal. Consent. ok~~

01:19:549 (454,456,458,460) - remove finish on all these, shouldn't be that much impact, also can hear the difference with 01:19:233 (453,461) - OK This part I have been corrected in the previous MOD

01:27:601 (493,494) - ctrl+g for pitch ok!

01:34:391 (524) - k? for the drum sound? xD yes drom sound. changed k~~

Really freaking nice mapset + song! I'm suprise O.O!! Been a while didn't really mod taiko, and this one is impressive ! *star*

• 
  00:03:128 del
  01:15:918 del
  01:18:444 del
  01:26:654 del

• 
  00:13:707 ~ 00:18:444 here try to use dkkddkkd?
  
  01:03:523 -> 01:03:365
  01:15:918 (439,440,441,442,443) -> 01:16:075
  01:16:391 d
  01:18:444 (448,449,450,451,452,453) -> del
  01:18:602 and 01:18:760 d k
  (01:18:681 d ?)

• 
  Nice diff!!!! >w<

Nofool wrote:

Hi' as requested

the set looks pretty good,
more finisher could have been used in the Oni but i think it is alright.

[Kantan]
- 00:30:602 (18,19) - dk ? fits more the vocal/song. ok!
- 00:41:339 (29) - could be moved to - 00:41:181 - for the vocal since the part is airy (im not so sure what is best here). umm. ok~ changed.
- 00:46:391 (34) - ^. ok.

[Futsuu]
- 00:32:181 - add k here and delete - 00:32:496 (53) -, move - 00:35:023 (59) - to - 00:34:707 - and add d at - 00:35:339 - ? it focuses less on the vocal but the rythme created is pretty cool to play imo (x xx xxxx xx xxxx...). ok~ change!

[Muzukashii]
- 00:42:444 (144) - delete ? not needed + to emphasize the vocal. ok~!
- 00:59:496 (216) - delete ? not needed again. ok~!
- move - 01:26:654 (323) - to - 01:26:496 - ? like you did at - 00:03:128 -.
- 01:27:602 - you can also do ddkk k ddkk instead of dd k k ddk d here, similar to what you did at the beginning. ok~

[Oni]
- 00:16:865 (70) - d ? ok! change~
- 00:18:128 (77) - ^. ok!
- 00:53:496 (290) - this could work better as d too i think. ok!
- 01:03:444 (358,359) - delete them ? sounds better with a little break here. umm.. No change;w;
- 01:05:181 (270) - k ? vocal. ok!
- 01:06:760 (380) - delete ? emphasize the vocal. ok!
- 01:11:023 (413) - ^. ok!

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck' starred too hue

Thanks for your mod!!!!

mrdumpling64 wrote:

hello, here is the m4m as requested in forum PM.

**General**

you seem to have two image files (and one is 800x600). it's better to remove this one if it is not being used :3
remove "2nd OP" from the source? so the source is only "蒼の彼方のフォーリズム".

ok! thanks~!

**Kantan**

00:05:970 (5) - you should change this to kat so there is a difference to 00:07:233 (6) - since there are very subtle differences in the vocalist's pitch. ok! changed~
00:26:181 (13) - could add a finisher to this note. because it transitions to a part with more music and melody compared to the previous section. ok~!
00:39:918 (28) - add finisher, since several elements of percussion are heard here ok~!
00:41:339 (29) - poorly snapped, move to 00:41:181 :3 OK This part I have been corrected in the previous MOD!
00:44:971 (33) - this is similar to 00:39:918 (28) - so if you added a finisher there add it here too ok~!
00:46:391 (34) - same as (29), move to 00:46:233 Same as above~

**Futsuu**

00:05:970 (9,12) - Ctrl + G, the sounds would make more sense if these were actually switched. (and the first note would have consistency with kantan if you accepted the first kantan suggestion). ok. changed~
00:38:496 (67) - can change to kat, somewhat better lead in to the next part. ok~!
00:53:970 (101,102,103,105,106) - could add finishers to all or some of these, since it's close to the spinner and the music's intensity grows.
01:07:233 (21) - should be a kat since it's similar to 01:07:865 (22) - Consent! changed~~
01:09:128 (25) - add a finisher like you did at 00:59:023 (3) - ok!
01:17:654 (42) - change this to kat and keep finisher because it's same as 01:15:128 (39) - . (high-high-high, low-low-high) ummm.. ok~~!

**Muzukashii**

00:05:970 (17) - kat, same reasons as the easier diffs ok~~
00:42:602 (145) - add a finisher because the vocal is heavier here. ok!
00:42:918 (146,147,148) - change to ddk or dkk umm... No change. I do not think so ;w;
00:44:970 (152) - add finisher, because the music again has large emphasis on this note No change. If you add here, here (00:46:233 (156) - ) was also added felt good. But, I think this is a unreasonable placement. ;w;
01:17:654 (296) - same as Futsuu diff ok! change~!

**Oni**

00:28:707 (142) - add a finisher here Umm.. No change. sorry ;w;
01:09:602 (402,403,404) - it should be ddk, based on the vocals. ok~!
01:13:233 (430,431) - these should both be kat (especially (431) because that's the same as 01:12:918 (427) - ) ok!
01:16:154 (442) - delete this, there is no special sound, no need to make random 5 note combo just for fun ok~! changed!
01:17:654 (446) - same as easier diffs ok!
01:18:681 (451) - same as (442) ok~! >w<

good luck and starred :O

stu00608 wrote:

from PM mod req ~~~

[Muzukashii ]

• 
  00:03:128 del umm... No change. sry ;w;
  01:15:918 del ok!
  01:18:444 del ok!
  01:26:654 del Here's nothing ;w;

[Oni ]

• 
  00:13:707 ~ 00:18:444 here try to use dkkddkkd? OK This part I have been corrected in the previous MOD
  
  01:03:523 -> 01:03:365 ok! moved~
  01:15:918 (439,440,441,442,443) -> 01:16:075 Nooo...;w; This is not changed.
  01:16:391 d umm.. No change. There is no sound here ;w;
  01:18:444 (448,449,450,451,452,453) -> del
  01:18:602 and 01:18:760 d k
  (01:18:681 d ?) umm... No change sorry ;w;

nice song nice map~~ Good luck >w</

bank78952 wrote:

Ignore Kuds Because it's short mod ok!
Hi from PM request (you map is good XD)
[Oni]
00:05:812 (25) d umm.. No change ;w;
00:28:391 (139) k ok!
00:28:470 (140) k ok!
gl~

Thanks for short mod~!

mrdumpling64 wrote:

**JuDa's Oni**

00:50:812 (14,15,16,17,18) - if anything I think the location of this should be swapped with the location of 00:50:654 (13) - , based on how you mapped it to the vocals before. also change 00:50:654 to a kat as well (if you swap the locations)　 uum, changed to kat on 00:50:654.
01:04:786 (24) - may sound more proper if you moved to 01:04:628 keep, proper for vocal.
01:06:049 (31) - ^ keep, proper for vocal.

_MINATO_K wrote:

[Juda's Oni]00:53:260 - add k
00:53:970 の頂点に向かうまでの盛り上げが現状ではそれまでの5連より寂しいかなと思ったので
ボーカル取りのようなので置くとすればここかなと思いました。
no changeで、そもそも5連がバックの音込みで表現しているのと、add提案の前後の1/2のk自体がボーカル余韻のゴーストノーツ的な役割で置いているので、無理に3連を用いなくてもいいかな～と思いました.
.,
相変わらず突っ込みどころのないModder泣かせの譜面を作られますね・・・ 　Nice mapです！ arigatougozaimasu!><

_MINATO_K wrote:

From PM
割と完成されてる譜面なので内容薄いですが・・・
他のModderさんと食い違った場合は秤にかけてください。
了解です！

Oni

00:04:233 (17) - d ->k　　ok!
00:04:391 (18) - k ->d　　　ok!
ラストに合わせませんか？　またこの音取りの方が自然だと思いました。変えておきました！　thanks!

00:49:707 (268) - d -> k　　ok~!
00:50:654 (273) - d -> k　　これはNo changeで。　今のほうがしっくりくるので変えないほうが良いと思いました！
00:50:812 (274) - k -> d　　^
00:51:918 (280) - d -> k　　ok~!
00:52:233 (282) - d -> k　　ok!
割とフィーリング強めですが音に合わせてみました

00:53:023 (287) - 00:53:497 (291)
kとdですが統一したほうがいいかも　個人的にはkの方が好きです。
okです！　kで統一しました！
01:13:391 (432) - d -> k
1/2でdkdkだったのと曲調も上がっていると思ったので
ふむ、kのほうが良いと思ったので変更しました！
01:16:154 (443) - del
サビが3連メインで構成されていた上、直前がスカスカだったのでここでいきなり5連は浮く感じがします。
これは前のmodで修正済みです！　指摘ありがとう！

01:18:681 (451) - del
^
これも前回のmodで修正してあります！

では、がんばってください！

game rock wrote:

Hi, from PM.

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:09:760 - Change to d.　　　No change. 　I hear in the same way this 00:08:496 - & 00:09:760 -
00:13:391 - Change to K is better.　　ok!
00:21:128 - Change to k. ok!
00:26:181 - Change to d for the pattern in this part. ok!

[ Futsuu]

00:06:602 - Change to k? Already it's k　x.x
00:32:812 - Change to k for the rhythm.　　No change. Other dificulty is d
01:24:286 - Change to k.　^
01:31:075 - Change to d.　I think here there is the sound of the piano, so does not change.　sorry ;w;

[ Muzukashii]

00:20:654 - Add a d? umm.. No change.

[ Oni]

00:41:181 - Change to K? Is better. ok! change~

Nice Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

1. The volume on kiai is too large, try to use 70%(kantan~oni)

1. 00:15:444 (3) - move to 00:17:970 - , because 00:15:444 - is pretty calm, put don on 00:15:444 - is a bit noisy
2. 00:26:181 (13,16) - reverse the finish between these two notes, 00:26:181 - here doesn't have any significant sounds

1. 00:18:602 - ~ 00:28:707 - could add a little more notes on this part, but this part should less dense than 00:28:707 - ~kiai as you mapped on oni
2. 00:41:654 (76,77,78,79,80) - i feel this pattern is not really good as i expect,try this
3. 01:00:602 (7,8) - reverse them? i feel kd would more fit the song's pitch
4. 01:10:707 (29,30) - ^
5. 01:01:549 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - this pattern could be improved imo,the gap here with muzu is a bit large .try this
6. 01:13:233 - add note here? the gap with muzu is a bit huge

1. 00:59:023 (213) - add finish? kantan and futsu also did it

1. 00:59:023 (329) - same as muzu, add finish?
2. 01:09:128 - ^
3. 01:00:760 (341,342) - i think this part could add a 5-plet pattern like this,you can try this pattern.
4. 01:02:023 (349,350) - reverse them, i feel this vocal's accent is pretty close with 01:01:865 - and 01:02:181 -

1. 00:38:181 (11,12,13) - how about use kkd? to follow the snare
2. 00:57:760 (1) - listen the song carefully, this note could be k
3. 01:17:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm..how about try this? more fit the song imo

morijo- wrote:

遅くなってしまいました
かなり完成しているようなのでほとんど気になる点なかったです！

一応気になった点だけ報告します！(他のmodderさんと被ったり違うこと言ってたらごめんなさい)

Oni

00:53:023 (287) - d(? 　
00:53:497 (291) - d(?
※kkd d kkd d の方が叩きやすく響きが良いように感じました
なるほど！　これはたしかに納得しました！　変更しておきます！
01:00:128 (336) - delete(?
※00:59:181 - ここが無しなので無しでもよく感じました　　No change. ここを変えてしまうとサビの休符の部分の構成をすべて変えなくてはいけないような感じがしたので変えません。　申し訳ない；；

以上です！
手短で申し訳ないです

qoot8123 wrote:

[General]

1. The volume on kiai is too large, try to use 70%(kantan~oni) ok! :3 changed volume 70%

[ Kantan]

Notes

1. 00:15:444 (3) - move to 00:17:970 - , because 00:15:444 - is pretty calm, put don on 00:15:444 - is a bit noisy ok! changed~
2. 00:26:181 (13,16) - reverse the finish between these two notes, 00:26:181 - here doesn't have any significant sounds ok!

[ Futsuu]

General

set the sv to 1.4? i think 1.4 is enough. ok

Notes

1. 00:18:602 - ~ 00:28:707 - could add a little more notes on this part, but this part should less dense than 00:28:707 - ~kiai as you mapped on oni ok~ add 3 notes
2. 00:41:654 (76,77,78,79,80) - i feel this pattern is not really good as i expect,try this　　ok!
3. 01:00:602 (7,8) - reverse them? i feel kd would more fit the song's pitch ok~!
4. 01:10:707 (29,30) - ^
5. 01:01:549 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - this pattern could be improved imo,the gap here with muzu is a bit large .try this ok!
6. 01:13:233 - add note here? the gap with muzu is a bit huge ok~ added d~

[ Muzukashii]

Notes

1. 00:59:023 (213) - add finish? kantan and futsu also did it ok~! added finish.

[ Oni]

Notes

1. 00:59:023 (329) - same as muzu, add finish? 　ok~!
2. 01:09:128 - ^ change!
3. 01:00:760 (341,342) - i think this part could add a 5-plet pattern like this,you can try this pattern. ok~! change!
4. 01:02:023 (349,350) - reverse them, i feel this vocal's accent is pretty close with 01:01:865 - and 01:02:181 - Consent~ change!

spread is pretty good, call me back then

qoot8123 wrote:

[ JuDa's Onii]

Notes

1. 00:38:181 (11,12,13) - how about use kkd? to follow the snare sounds good !
2. 00:57:760 (1) - listen the song carefully, this note could be k no change. Music makes a weak . listened to that part, I guess don fits better ,linked with 00:56:496 (7) - D.
3. 01:17:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hmm..how about try this? more fit the song imo uum,,, vocal sounds good as your suggestion, but listened on drumpart ,01:18:049 (3,5) - sounds snare. I wont ignore these. T_T however this part still made a over power to me.from 01:18:602 (9) - , decreased the density.
   
   
   
   added by myself.
   00:33:523 (12) - kat. instead of 00:33:681 (14) - sounds snare.
   01:22:470 (5) - kat. make a little enhance for 01:23:023 (1,2) - .
   

spread is pretty good, call me back then

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• 01:23:181 - the end of the kiai is unsnapped in all diffs except Juda's Oni, please fix >.<

• nothing to suggest here

• 00:16:707 (27) - change to k for consistency with the pattern of 00:14:181 (22,23,24) - ? sounds good imo

• 00:58:075 (206,207) - i know will sound a bit empty but i think a break before the kiai will be good because more than 10 seconds without a 2/1 break in a muzu is bad.. also i don't want to see a DQ so, how about delete these notes?

• looks fine

• same, looks fine xD

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Blackhair~ here the mod you requested me long time ago.. i'm sorry for the late, i'll mod before qoot rechecks np! ok!Hanjamon~

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• 01:23:181 - the end of the kiai is unsnapped in all diffs except Juda's Oni, please fix >.< lol thanks! changed~!

[Kantan]

• nothing to suggest here >w<//

[Futsuu]

• 00:16:707 (27) - change to k for consistency with the pattern of 00:14:181 (22,23,24) - ? sounds good imo ok! change!

[Muzukashii]

• 00:58:075 (206,207) - i know will sound a bit empty but i think a break before the kiai will be good because more than 10 seconds without a 2/1 break in a muzu is bad.. also i don't want to see a DQ so, how about delete these notes? fmm... ok deleted 2notes~

[Oni]

• looks fine thanks >w<!!!////

I only suggested these two things, i don't see something wrong with these mapset, good luck! ^^

qoot8123 wrote:

recheck. no kd ok :3

General:

01:23:182 - unsnapped kiai time ok~ changed 01:23:181 -

Futsuu:

01:22:707 - add k to make the gap more close with muzu ok~ add k :3

Muzu:

01:34:391 (339) - remove the finish ? i feel this drum is not as strong as 01:34:707 - ok! delete big~



that's all from me.

qoot8123 wrote:

talked with mapper, and we fix some unsnaped green line, everything is fine now

Bubbled!

1. add 'second opening' to tags, it's the second opening right?
2. also add 'eroge', 'visual novel', or maybe add the english ver too (Beyond the sky into the firmament) (preference) to tags

1. Actually i want to recommend SV 1.4 here, but since qoot said nothing, i cancelled my intention
2. 00:02:181 - isn't it better if you add ak here for following the loud piano and the pattern for the rest of this part (this part is almost same with 00:08:496)
3. 00:28:707 (16) - same as below www
4. 00:39:918 (28) - remove the finish here for consistency with other diff (and i think the other diff don't have it either)
5. 00:44:970 (33) - ^
6. 00:37:549 (25) - finish can be added to emphasize the music
7. 01:05:339 (10) - can be changed to d because of lower vocal than 01:05:970 (11) -
8. 01:25:549 add k for the same reason as above
9. 00:11:023 (1) - it seems weird that only kantan has the spinner here.. probably change it with some notes?

1. 00:23:023 (40,41,42,43) - isn't it better as kddk here? follows the vocal more i think
2. 00:33:128 (59) - k here flows better
3. 00:39:128 (73) - add finish here OR remove finish 00:44:181 (85) - both have the same density but different note lol (also applied for other diffs
4. 00:53:654 (105,106,107,108,109,110) - no need for finish, since they don't appear on the other diff also. but what i want to suggest is that you added finish at 00:54:444 (107,108,109,110) - them because the drum sounds like crashing there (also applied for other diffs
5. You may want to hear the music more closely to hear which music needs to be emphasized and which doesn't need

1. 00:05:023 ~ 00:06:286 is empty yet it's so full at oni. adding some note here might be good. (but not too much, try balancing it with oni and futsuu too)
2. 00:07:549 (21) - why not move this to 00:07:391 which follows the vocal more?
3. 00:22:233 try adding a note here to follow the vocal. it's weird to leave it empty imo
4. 00:37:865 add k here because futsuu has a note either. so to balance the spread, leaving this empty would be weird.
5. 00:42:602 (146) - remove finish, since nothing can be emphasized (and it's weird
6. 01:16:075 (289,290) - isn't it better to swap this? i think it follows the pitch more.

1. 00:05:023 (21,25) - these can be removed since piano starts at 00:05:181 (22) - , and vocal changes at 00:05:812 (25) -
2. 00:20:181 ~ 00:21:128 can be changed to something like this. follows the vocal better, and also can make a break here so the pattern isn't constantly same
3. 00:39:760 (206,207,208) - change to kkd for following the vocal and better flow
4. 00:41:181 (215) - sudden finish, it's weird i guess. not to mention that there's no finishes on the other diffs
5. 01:28:391 (492,496) - same with 00:05:023 (21,25) -
6. 01:34:075 (513,514) - remove them, drums start at 01:34:233 (515) - and part before them is completely empty
7. 00:24:760 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - i kinda doubt that triplet, since actually they can be done with simpler way (muzu/refer to Juda's oni)

1. 00:06:286 (7) - change to d for consistency with 00:01:233 (1) - they have same music also
2. 01:02:654 (9) - can be removed since vocal isn't playing there ovo
3. 01:29:654 (7) - same with 00:06:286 (7) -
4. 01:34:075 (23,24) - can be removed since drum is playing at 01:34:233 (25) - and the part before it is silence

Senritsu wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]

1. 00:06:286 (7) - change to d for consistency with 00:01:233 (1) - they have same music also no change. around the 00:01:233 (1) - , it sounds a weak yet. But around the 00:06:286 -, it sounds up than formar.
2. 01:02:654 (9) - can be removed since vocal isn't playing there ovo no change. back sounds not stopped. if delete this, they felt the stopped Instrumental.
3. 01:29:654 (7) - same with 00:06:286 (7) - no change. consistent with 1st part.
4. 01:34:075 (23,24) - can be removed since drum is playing at 01:34:233 (25) - and the part before it is silence Snare Sounds. no change.

that's all
good luck for rank o/

Senritsu wrote:

hi there
coming from pm req a long time ago
since this is bubbled already i will just simply mod it, since i don't want to ruin qoot's bubble
what's wrong with editor

[General]

1. add 'second opening' to tags, it's the second opening right?
2. also add 'eroge', 'visual novel', or maybe add the english ver too (Beyond the sky into the firmament) (preference) to tags
   ok add tags (eroge, Visual novel, second opening,Beyond the sky into the firmament,preference)

[Kantan]

1. Actually i want to recommend SV 1.4 here, but since qoot said nothing, i cancelled my intention
2. 00:02:181 - isn't it better if you add ak here for following the loud piano and the pattern for the rest of this part (this part is almost same with 00:08:496) No change. I am here felt not need anything even though extend is sound.
3. 00:28:707 (16) - same as below www Same as ^
4. 00:39:918 (28) - remove the finish here for consistency with other diff (and i think the other diff don't have it either) No change. Because I sound feel big, I think that 00:39:918 (28) - placement to.
5. 00:44:970 (33) - ^ Same as ^
6. 00:37:549 (25) - finish can be added to emphasize the music No change. Instead, Futsuu finish of the 00:37:549 (69) - it was delete.
7. 01:05:339 (10) - can be changed to d because of lower vocal than 01:05:970 (11) - No change. I did not feel so.
8. 01:25:549 add k for the same reason as above
9. 00:11:023 (1) - it seems weird that only kantan has the spinner here.. probably change it with some notes?　　　Since sounded like of behind is growing, it does not change the spinner.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:23:023 (40,41,42,43) - isn't it better as kddk here? follows the vocal more i think　　No change. I did not sound like you think.
2. 00:33:128 (59) - k here flows better No change.
3. 00:39:128 (73) - add finish here OR remove finish 00:44:181 (85) - both have the same density but different note lol (also applied for other diffs ok~ 00:39:128 (73) - add Big~
4. 00:53:654 (105,106,107,108,109,110) - no need for finish, since they don't appear on the other diff also. but what i want to suggest is that you added finish at 00:54:444 (107,108,109,110) - them because the drum sounds like crashing there (also applied for other diffs
5. You may want to hear the music more closely to hear which music needs to be emphasized and which doesn't need
   umm... 00:53:654 (105) - remove finished. 00:53:970 (106,107,108,109,110) - No change. and 00:53:970 (41,42,43) - Kantan 3notes add big~

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:05:023 ~ 00:06:286 is empty yet it's so full at oni. adding some note here might be good. (but not too much, try balancing it with oni and futsuu too)　　No change. Here we put to match the vocals.
2. 00:07:549 (21) - why not move this to 00:07:391 which follows the vocal more?　　No change. Here is those were placed in accordance with the piano I feel well, natural.
3. 00:22:233 try adding a note here to follow the vocal. it's weird to leave it empty imo No change. Too stuffed Notes I think not good.
4. 00:37:865 add k here because futsuu has a note either. so to balance the spread, leaving this empty would be weird. No change. One before will feel that it is not needed because a Big note & and Futsuu notes delete
5. 00:42:602 (146) - remove finish, since nothing can be emphasized (and it's weird No change. I felt needed a Big note.
6. 01:16:075 (289,290) - isn't it better to swap this? i think it follows the pitch more. No change. Sound behind I feel low.

[Oni]

1. 00:05:023 (21,25) - these can be removed since piano starts at 00:05:181 (22) - , and vocal changes at 00:05:812 (25) - No change. Here it can not be delete ringing chime.
2. 00:20:181 ~ 00:21:128 can be changed to something like this. follows the vocal better, and also can make a break here so the pattern isn't constantly same　　No change. I do not think so.
3. 00:39:760 (206,207,208) - change to kkd for following the vocal and better flow No change. I will hear the ddk.
4. 00:41:181 (215) - sudden finish, it's weird i guess. not to mention that there's no finishes on the other diffs　　No change. Because here there is a large sound of cymbals.
5. 01:28:391 (492,496) - same with 00:05:023 (21,25) - Same as ^
6. 01:34:075 (513,514) - remove them, drums start at 01:34:233 (515) - and part before them is completely empty No change.The sound of the snare drum is heard from behind.
7. 00:24:760 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - i kinda doubt that triplet, since actually they can be done with simpler way (muzu/refer to Juda's oni) No change. I am want to match the vocal

that's all
good luck for rank o/

Thanks mod~!

qoot8123 wrote:

restore the bubble.

Julie wrote:

BN checked~! :3

re-check so no kudoo XD

irc for a better mp3 files fixed
Call me back to re-recheck after qoot re-bubble this, due to mp3 change, I'll need him to rebubble it xD.

[Kantan]

01:07:580 (11) - delete, keep this part empty like you did here 01:06:317 - , can feel more impact on this 01:08:212 (12) - :3

ok change~ :3

[Futsuu]

01:30:949 (63) - move to 01:30:791 - , piano sound more clear and louder, player might want to hit this sound before.　　ok~ :3

01:35:212 (70) - k, same piano sound as 01:35:370 (71) - OR delete to keep it consistent with 01:33:949 - and 01:34:106 - . ok! change k~

[Muzukashii]

00:15:317 - to 00:20:054 - lots dkdk, which is good because same rhythm and match the song , but these 00:16:106 (41,42) - , 00:17:370 (47,48) - , 00:18:633 (53,54) - and 00:19:896 (59,60) - have the same sound. fmm ok 00:17:370 (47,48,53,54) - Ctrl+G

01:30:948 (326) - same reason as Futsuu. Careful, the note is unsnap 1ms. ok move~

Have a few notes with 1 ms unsnap, snap them again in timing panel, since your map doesn't have any 1/6 .

:3

[Oni]

Have a few notes with 1 ms unsnap, snap them again in timing panel, since your map doesn't have any 1/6 .

The only difficulty that preview time is different from all the other difficulty. Snap it to 01:00:554 -. lol　I did not notice thank you Julie~ :3

Thanks Recheck and Mod~!

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