hi there
coming from pm req a long time ago
since this is bubbled already i will just simply mod it, since i don't want to ruin qoot's bubble
what's wrong with editor
[General]
good luck for rank o/
coming from pm req a long time ago
since this is bubbled already i will just simply mod it, since i don't want to ruin qoot's bubble
[General]
- add 'second opening' to tags, it's the second opening right?
- also add 'eroge', 'visual novel', or maybe add the english ver too (Beyond the sky into the firmament) (preference) to tags
- Actually i want to recommend SV 1.4 here, but since qoot said nothing, i cancelled my intention
- 00:02:181 - isn't it better if you add ak here for following the loud piano and the pattern for the rest of this part (this part is almost same with 00:08:496)
- 00:28:707 (16) - same as below www
- 00:39:918 (28) - remove the finish here for consistency with other diff (and i think the other diff don't have it either)
- 00:44:970 (33) - ^
- 00:37:549 (25) - finish can be added to emphasize the music
- 01:05:339 (10) - can be changed to d because of lower vocal than 01:05:970 (11) -
- 01:25:549 add k for the same reason as above
- 00:11:023 (1) - it seems weird that only kantan has the spinner here.. probably change it with some notes?
- 00:23:023 (40,41,42,43) - isn't it better as kddk here? follows the vocal more i think
- 00:33:128 (59) - k here flows better
- 00:39:128 (73) - add finish here OR remove finish 00:44:181 (85) - both have the same density but different note lol (also applied for other diffs
- 00:53:654 (105,106,107,108,109,110) - no need for finish, since they don't appear on the other diff also. but what i want to suggest is that you added finish at 00:54:444 (107,108,109,110) - them because the drum sounds like crashing there (also applied for other diffs
- You may want to hear the music more closely to hear which music needs to be emphasized and which doesn't need
- 00:05:023 ~ 00:06:286 is empty yet it's so full at oni. adding some note here might be good. (but not too much, try balancing it with oni and futsuu too)
- 00:07:549 (21) - why not move this to 00:07:391 which follows the vocal more?
- 00:22:233 try adding a note here to follow the vocal. it's weird to leave it empty imo
- 00:37:865 add k here because futsuu has a note either. so to balance the spread, leaving this empty would be weird.
- 00:42:602 (146) - remove finish, since nothing can be emphasized (and it's weird
- 01:16:075 (289,290) - isn't it better to swap this? i think it follows the pitch more.
- 00:05:023 (21,25) - these can be removed since piano starts at 00:05:181 (22) - , and vocal changes at 00:05:812 (25) -
- 00:20:181 ~ 00:21:128 can be changed to something like this. follows the vocal better, and also can make a break here so the pattern isn't constantly same
- 00:39:760 (206,207,208) - change to kkd for following the vocal and better flow
- 00:41:181 (215) - sudden finish, it's weird i guess. not to mention that there's no finishes on the other diffs
- 01:28:391 (492,496) - same with 00:05:023 (21,25) -
- 01:34:075 (513,514) - remove them, drums start at 01:34:233 (515) - and part before them is completely empty
- 00:24:760 (110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - i kinda doubt that triplet, since actually they can be done with simpler way (muzu/refer to Juda's oni)
- 00:06:286 (7) - change to d for consistency with 00:01:233 (1) - they have same music also
- 01:02:654 (9) - can be removed since vocal isn't playing there ovo
- 01:29:654 (7) - same with 00:06:286 (7) -
- 01:34:075 (23,24) - can be removed since drum is playing at 01:34:233 (25) - and the part before it is silence
good luck for rank o/