Hi, M4M
That should be it, contact me for any unclear point. Good luck!
General
Remove Kantai Collection in the tags since it's already in the source
All diffs should end at the same point, but this is just a guideline tho
All diffs should end at the same point, but this is just a guideline tho
Normal
Don't know if this is intentional or not, but try to make consecutive sliders like those: 00:15:401 (4,5,6) - with a more seamless succession:
00:17:441 - and 00:18:258 - Circles? They're upbeats, thus emphasized but there's nothing
00:23:156 (7) - How about about making the slider bend towards 6 instead? Then rotate 1, 2 and 3 a little to help with reading (7 should flow more towards 1 than 2 to prevent confusion):
00:41:523 (1) - I think this is just a mistake but ctrl+g, anyway the end tends too much towards 3 instead of 2, and can be very confusing to read for beginners
00:46:013 (2) - Same thing as earlier, bend it in the other direction to flow better towards 1
00:50:094 (2) - Clap
00:54:176 (3) - ^
00:54:992 (4) - ^
01:05:605 (6,2) - They're closer together than 6 and 1, confusing to read
01:09:890 (2,4) - ^
01:23:156 (2,4) - ^
01:24:584 (5,1) - ^
01:26:013 (2,4) - ^
01:47:237 (4,1) - Check stack
01:49:686 (3,5) - too close like earlier
01:53:156 (4,6) - ^
01:57:850 (5,1) - How about something like that to help with reading:
01:59:482 (4,6) - too close and check blanket
02:01:931 (2,4) - ^
02:43:156 (5,1) - Blankets? both sliders
02:45:605 (2,3) - Blanket?
02:49:278 (5,6) - Recheck blanket
02:55:401 (3,4) - ^
03:01:523 (4,5) - ^
03:03:564 (1,2) - 1 tends too much towards 2's end, confusing
03:08:462 (2,3) - Blanket
03:20:707 (2,3) - ^
03:27:237 (3,5) - too close
03:31:319 (5,7) - ^
03:33:768 (3) - Bend it to help flow with 4?
03:40:298 (3,5) - close
03:48:462 (6,1) - ^
03:50:911 (5,1,2) - Blankets?
03:58:666 (6,1) - Check blanket
00:17:441 - and 00:18:258 - Circles? They're upbeats, thus emphasized but there's nothing
00:23:156 (7) - How about about making the slider bend towards 6 instead? Then rotate 1, 2 and 3 a little to help with reading (7 should flow more towards 1 than 2 to prevent confusion):
00:41:523 (1) - I think this is just a mistake but ctrl+g, anyway the end tends too much towards 3 instead of 2, and can be very confusing to read for beginners
00:46:013 (2) - Same thing as earlier, bend it in the other direction to flow better towards 1
00:50:094 (2) - Clap
00:54:176 (3) - ^
00:54:992 (4) - ^
01:05:605 (6,2) - They're closer together than 6 and 1, confusing to read
01:09:890 (2,4) - ^
01:23:156 (2,4) - ^
01:24:584 (5,1) - ^
01:26:013 (2,4) - ^
01:47:237 (4,1) - Check stack
01:49:686 (3,5) - too close like earlier
01:53:156 (4,6) - ^
01:57:850 (5,1) - How about something like that to help with reading:
01:59:482 (4,6) - too close and check blanket
02:01:931 (2,4) - ^
02:43:156 (5,1) - Blankets? both sliders
02:45:605 (2,3) - Blanket?
02:49:278 (5,6) - Recheck blanket
02:55:401 (3,4) - ^
03:01:523 (4,5) - ^
03:03:564 (1,2) - 1 tends too much towards 2's end, confusing
03:08:462 (2,3) - Blanket
03:20:707 (2,3) - ^
03:27:237 (3,5) - too close
03:31:319 (5,7) - ^
03:33:768 (3) - Bend it to help flow with 4?
03:40:298 (3,5) - close
03:48:462 (6,1) - ^
03:50:911 (5,1,2) - Blankets?
03:58:666 (6,1) - Check blanket
Hard
00:09:278 (3,4,5) - Feel like they would be better 1/2 beat earlier, since the guitar suggests doing so, like how you did here: 00:12:339 (1,2,3) -
00:17:033 (1) - How about repeating it? It's too confusing to end on a blue tick like that, even if the song suggests it. You can also just put a circle on 00:17:441 - to make a little stream
00:24:992 (3,1) - recheck blanket
00:26:829 (1,2) - ^
01:38:462 (4,5,1) - Stream could look better
01:40:911 (2,1) - Check stack
01:46:013 (4,5) - Blanket
01:53:156 (1,2) - ^
01:53:156 (1,3) - Stack (deactivate grid snap to help with that)
01:58:258 (1,3) - ^
02:02:543 (3,1,2) - Blankets (both sliders)
02:23:360 (3,5) - Blanket
02:59:890 (4,1) - ^
00:17:033 (1) - How about repeating it? It's too confusing to end on a blue tick like that, even if the song suggests it. You can also just put a circle on 00:17:441 - to make a little stream
00:24:992 (3,1) - recheck blanket
00:26:829 (1,2) - ^
01:38:462 (4,5,1) - Stream could look better
01:40:911 (2,1) - Check stack
01:46:013 (4,5) - Blanket
01:53:156 (1,2) - ^
01:53:156 (1,3) - Stack (deactivate grid snap to help with that)
01:58:258 (1,3) - ^
02:02:543 (3,1,2) - Blankets (both sliders)
02:23:360 (3,5) - Blanket
02:59:890 (4,1) - ^
Catharsis
00:17:033 (1) - Same problem than hard
I think you could make this diff a lot more fluid and dynamic to play just by straightening streams like this one: 00:42:339 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
Also, remove second NC on streams like 02:56:217 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
01:27:850 (2) - ctrl+g for flow?
02:26:625 (4,5) - blanket?
02:30:503 (5,1) - stack
03:26:421 (1,3) - blanket
03:40:298 (5,6) - Stack under 5's end?
04:12:134 (1) - Too long I'm afraid, how about mapping until 04:13:358 - then putting the spinner?
I think you could make this diff a lot more fluid and dynamic to play just by straightening streams like this one: 00:42:339 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
Also, remove second NC on streams like 02:56:217 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
01:27:850 (2) - ctrl+g for flow?
02:26:625 (4,5) - blanket?
02:30:503 (5,1) - stack
03:26:421 (1,3) - blanket
03:40:298 (5,6) - Stack under 5's end?
04:12:134 (1) - Too long I'm afraid, how about mapping until 04:13:358 - then putting the spinner?
That should be it, contact me for any unclear point. Good luck!