Double post with an update. Talked to Ono about a few things and made a few changes to Kantan, Futsuu, and Muzukashii.
[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
[General]
Untick it oops done[Muzukashii]
00:23:238 (74) - K : better sound ? it's familiar sound with 00:23:753 - nahmove 00:52:210 - to 00:52:381 - and move 00:52:896 (162) - to 00:52:724 - :< there are some unique 1/2 sound
sorry but you prefer consistency :< would be very awkward lol
01:01:296 - d i think it fit more than k and this one has lower pitch this is barely noticeable, so nty
01:03:181 - have a break on here better BY move this note to 01:04:210 - I made a breaker a little later on
move the note on 01:09:353 - to 01:09:181 - then add d on 01:09:524 - and remove 01:09:696 (222) -nop[Oni]
00:29:067 - add k to make consist with 00:33:181 - these are completely different to each other
01:01:296 - same as muzukashii nop
01:23:238 - d better ? i feel there are too much k sound on here I think it's fine[Inner Oni]
00:21:524 - I like how it is currently
01:33:696 (701,705) - Ctrl+G and change 01:33:953 - to k : refer to 01:33:696 (701,705,708,711,714,716,720) - this would play a little awkwardly, so nty
01:46:381 (800) - d ? sound good to me nope, this gives emphasis on the ending
thank you!IMMoRTalS wrote:
[TK'S Inner Oni]
00:12:438 - this note can be Big note - it can't be. look at 00:06:953 -
00:19:124 - ^ - please respect the flow of the song.
00:24:610 - ^ - ^
01:15:610 - remove : this stream should be stop at 01:15:524 -
01:23:838 - remove : this stream should be stop at 01:23:838 -
01:26:581 - remove : this stream should be stop at 01:26:496 -
01:32:067 - remove : this stream should be stop at 01:31:981 - - i feel a long tone there. kinda long patterns but nothing wrong as an Inner Oni.
00:50:496 - remove finish better imo - too strong clap sound here.
01:40:210 - add finish you might forgot it :3 - the same as 00:12:438 -
Thanks!~Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.
- [Kantan]
done all
- 00:07:638 (7,8) - consider swapping these notes to k d ? This could follow the decreasing pitch in a way better.
- 00:13:124 (15,16) - same as ^
- 00:30:953 (34) - maybe k to follow the high-pitched music there ?
- 01:35:410 (115,116) - same as 00:07:638 (7,8) -
- 01:40:896 (124,125) - ^
- [Futsuu]
- 00:31:467 (58,64) - It seems that swapping these notes to d k could fit the drums well. going with the kicks that are present on the 2nd selected note.
- 00:55:638 (103) - I think this note could be deleted to create a 4/1 break for the calm part. done
- [Muzukashii]
- 00:07:981 (21,22,23,24) - maybe try kd kk to accompany the pitch changes of the music there ? done
- 00:13:467 (40,41,42,43) - same as ^ done
- 00:34:210 (112) - k would be nice as the drum sound is the same as 00:34:038 (111) - using the kick here as a d
- 01:35:924 (324) - similar to 00:07:981 (21,22,23,24) - , d would be better. done
- 01:41:238 (341,342,343,344) - same as 00:07:981 (21,22,23,24) - done
- [Oni]
- 00:08:153 (42) - consider changing this note to d for the pitch drop ? done
- 00:13:639 (75) - same as ^ done
- 00:34:210 (201) - same as Muzukashii same reason as above as well
- 00:42:953 (237,238) - swapping these notes to k d could follow the pitch drop nicely. going with the drums again
- 01:00:781 (324) - d would be better as it has the same pitch as 01:00:438 (323) - done
- 01:34:038 (532,533) - similar to 00:42:953 (237,238) - , k d would be better. not going with the pitches here
- 01:35:924 (542) - same as 00:08:153 (42) - done
- 01:41:410 (575) - ^ done
- [Inner Oni]
Call me back~
- 00:03:267 (22,23) - consider swapping these notes to kd to fit the higher-pitched music at 00:03:267 (22) - ? I like how this plays currently
- 00:08:153 (57) - same as Oni decided not to for the 2nd part of that section on 00:10:896 since that one is a lower pitch.
- 00:34:210 (257) - same as Muzukashii same as above
- 00:42:953 (311,312) - same as Oni same as above
- 01:41:410 (763) - similar to 00:08:153 (57) - , I think d would result in a better flow. not changing this one as well.
- 01:44:496 (784,785,786,787,788,789,790) - consider using kdkkddk as well for pattern consistency ? done
Updated~Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
- [TK'S Inner Oni]
- 00:22:381 (166) - I think d could reflect the decrease in the pitch of music nicely. from listening, I can tell that the pitch starts to decrease right after this, so no change
- 00:30:781 (226,227) - maybe d k to follow the increasing pitch there ? the pitch is right, it's just that the current placement has more of a powerful sound to it on 00:30:953 so it seems like a higher pitch, so no change
- 00:42:953 (312,313) - swapping these notes to k d could follow the pitch drop in a way better. going with the kick and clap here/
- 00:44:496 (320,321) - consider using dk here for a smoother flow ? this wouldn't change much to flow, infact it might make it harder.
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